内容正文:
话题分析
谋篇布局
范文赏析
锦囊素材
Good Reading Habits
英语人教版九上Unit 3 Smart Learning
写作指导
话题分析
本课的写作话题是"介绍读书习惯",属于课标"人与自我"主题范畴,"生活与学习"主题群下"学习习惯与学习方法、个人兴趣与爱好"子主题。
写作核心要点常围绕日常读书的固定时段、偏好的书籍类型、读书时的常用小习惯、读书带给自己的收获与改变,以及长期坚持读书的小规划。
谋篇布局
【写作任务】
你校英文校刊正在举办以"Good Reading Habits"为主题的征文活动,邀请同学们分享自己的读书日常。请你结合自身情况,写一篇短文投稿。
谋篇布局
【写作构思】
审题立意
写作主题
围绕“Good Reading Habits”主题,结合自身读书经历,分享个人读书日常、读书收获及后续读书计划。
语篇类型
征文投稿类应用文
人称和时态
人称:第一人称 时态:以一般现在时为主,涉及未来计划时使用一般将来时
写作要点
要点1:介绍自己日常固定的读书时间,以及喜欢的书籍类型,比如睡前半小时读课外书,偏好历史类和故事类书籍。
要点2:阐述读书给自己带来的具体收获,比如拓宽知识面、提升写作能力,还能在心情烦躁时帮自己平复情绪。
要点3:说明接下来的读书小计划,比如下个月读完2本经典名著,每周和同学交流一次读书心得。
谋篇布局
【写作步骤】
1. 梳理要点:整理写作要点
2. 草拟正文:围绕要点组织英文语句
3. 调整内容:让行文连贯逻辑顺畅
4. 检查修改:通读修改错处润色全文
【三段式结构】
谋篇布局
开篇引入
点明主题,介绍日常固定的读书时间
主体阐述
说明阅读喜好及读书带来的多方面实际收获
要点:
1. 介绍自己偏好的书籍类型
2. 阐述读书对知识储备的提升作用
3. 说明读书对情绪调节的实际帮助
结尾升华
说明后续阅读计划,发出阅读倡议传递正向引导
要点:
1. 介绍接下来的具体读书安排
2. 分享个人关于培养阅读习惯的启发感悟
谋篇布局
谋篇布局
【三段式结构详解】
第一部分:开篇引入
功能:点明主题,介绍固定读书时间
核心要点1:开篇直接呼应征文主题,引出阅读习惯话题
例句:Reading is an important part of my daily life and I keep good reading habits.
核心要点2:说明自己固定的日常读书时间,符合初中生的作息特点
例句:I spend half an hour reading books quietly before going to bed every night.
谋篇布局
【三段式结构详解】
第二部分:主体阐述
功能:说明阅读喜好及相关收获
核心要点1:介绍自己偏好的书籍类型,结合初中生常见兴趣选择
例句:Of all the books, I like history books and short fairy stories best.
核心要点2:阐述读书对知识储备的提升作用,结合学习、生活中的实际收获
例句:I can learn about great events in the past and many amazing cultural traditions from books.
核心要点3:说明读书对情绪调节的实际帮助
例句:When I feel upset about study problems, reading funny stories can make me relaxed soon.
谋篇布局
【三段式结构详解】
第三部分:结尾升华
功能:说明后续计划,发出正向倡议
核心要点1:介绍接下来的具体读书安排,内容具体可落地
例句:I plan to finish reading two famous storybooks and take useful notes this term.
核心要点2:分享关于培养阅读习惯的感悟,呼吁大家一起阅读
例句:I hope more friends will start reading and enjoy the warm and wonderful time with books.
范文赏析
Reading is an important part of my daily life and I keep good reading habits. I spend half an hour reading books quietly before going to bed every night.
Of all the books, I like history books and short fairy stories best. I can learn about great things in the past and many wonderful cultural customs from books. These things help me a lot with my history class. When I feel sad about study problems, reading funny stories can make me relaxed soon.
I plan to finish reading two famous storybooks and take useful notes this term. I hope more friends will start reading and enjoy the warm and wonderful time with books.
锦囊素材
【高分技巧】
技巧1:结合真实细节显真情实感
避免空泛表述,加入贴合生活的具体读书场景、收获细节,更有感染力。比如写读书的作用:"When I feel sad about study problems, reading funny stories can make me relaxed soon." 真实不空洞。
技巧2:计划具体落地不笼统
写未来读书计划时避免模糊表述,列出可实现的具体小目标。比如写学期读书安排:"I plan to finish reading two famous storybooks and take useful notes this term." 具体可落地。
锦囊素材
【语言工具箱】
日常读书的固定时段与安排
1. I usually spend ... reading books after I finish my homework every day.
例:I usually spend forty minutes reading books after I finish my homework every day.
2. I always read ... for a short time before I go to bed each night.
例:I always read interesting storybooks for a short time before I go to bed each night.
3. On weekends, I often ... in the study with my family members.
例:On weekends, I often read for two hours in the study with my family members.
锦囊素材
【语言工具箱】
偏好的书籍类型与读书小习惯
1. I like reading ... best because they can bring me a lot of fun.
例:I like reading science books best because they can bring me a lot of fun.
2. When I read, I often ... to write down good sentences that I meet.
例:When I read, I often take a small notebook to write down good sentences that I meet.
3. I never ... when I am reading, so I can always learn more from books.
例:I never play with my mobile phone when I am reading, so I can always learn more from books.
锦囊素材
【语言工具箱】
读书的收获与未来阅读规划
1. Reading makes me ... and helps me know more about the world.
例:Reading makes me more confident and helps me know more about the world.
2. I plan to read ... this term to open up my mind.
例:I plan to read five great works this term to open up my mind.
3. I want to ... with my classmates to share our ideas about good books.
例:I want to start a reading club with my classmates to share our ideas about good books.
Goodbye!
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