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Unit 5 Power of Ideas
单元同步写作讲义
本单元教材写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”这一主题群,涉及子主题“科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新”。本单元的话题是“发明与创意”,围绕这一话题应主要介绍某项发明涵盖古代经典发明与现代新兴发明,包括发明者、发明时间、主要功能、对生活的影响或改进措施等。写作时,首先点明发明物的名称,接着详细介绍发明物的外观、功能和特点,最后介阐述发明给人们生活、社会发展带来的改变,感悟创新与思想的力量以及改进措施。时态以一般现在时或一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
【词汇积累】
词汇积累
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① invent v. 发明;创造
② invention n. 发明物;创造
③ inventor n. 发明者;发明家
④ create v. 创作;创新
⑤ creativity n. 创造力
⑥ innovate v. 革新;创新
⑦ innovation n. 创新;新发明 ⑧ function n. 功能;作用
⑨ convenient adj. 方便的 ⑩ influence n. & v. 影响
⑪ produce v. 生产;制造 ⑫ recycle v. 回收利用
⑬ technology n. 科技;技术 ⑭ electric adj. 电动的
⑮ improve v. 改进;改善 ⑯ develop v. 研发;发展
⑰ material n. 材料 ⑱ advantage n. 优点;优势
⑲ disadvantage n. 缺点;弊端 ⑳ creative adj. 有创意的
短语积累
① come up with creative ideas 想出创意点子 ② be invented by sb. 由某人发明
③ at the age of … 在…… 岁时 ④ cut down waste /pollution 减少废料 / 污染
⑤ save time and energy 省时省力 ⑥ make one’s life convenient 便利人们的生活
⑦ turn ideas into real products 将想法变为实物 ⑧ take many tries 经历多次尝试
⑨ environmental-friendly 环保的 ⑩ digital technology 数字科技
⑪ reusable materials 可循环材料 ⑫ make progress 取得进步
⑬ solve daily problems 解决日常难题 ⑭ have a great influence on 对…… 产生巨大影响
⑮ step by step 一步步地
【句式积累】
开头句
① In our daily life, thousands of great inventions bring us huge changes.
在日常生活中,无数伟大发明给我们带来巨大改变。
② Have you ever thought about how inventions change our way of living?
你是否思考过发明是如何改变我们生活方式的?
③ Today I’d like to introduce a creative invention to all of you.
今天我想向大家介绍一项富有创意的发明。
④ Creativity and inventions are the power pushing the world forward.
创意与发明是推动世界向前发展的动力。
⑤ Teenagers can also create small but useful inventions in daily life.
青少年也能在生活中创造小巧却实用的发明。
中间句
① This eco-friendly car was invented by a team of college students in 2024.
这款环保汽车是一组大学生在 2024 年研发的。
② Its main function is to absorb CO2 from air while driving to protect nature.
它的核心功能是行驶时吸收空气中的二氧化碳,保护自然环境。
③ The AI app can take photos of food and show its calories and nutrients quickly.
这款人工智能软件可拍摄食物,快速显示其卡路里与营养成分。
④ Nearly all inventors experienced lots of failures before their final success.
几乎所有发明家在取得成功前都经历了无数次失败。
⑤ It uses 3D printing and recycled plastic to reduce production waste.
它采用 3D 打印与回收塑料,减少生产过程中的废料。
⑥ This invention greatly simplifies our daily work and saves plenty of time.
这项发明极大简化了我们的日常工作,节省大量时间。
⑦ However, the invention still has weak points and needs to be improved.
但这项发明仍存在短板,还有待进一步优化改进。
⑧ The young inventor planned to take a gap year to perfect his product.
这位年轻发明者打算休学一年,完善自己的创意产品。
⑨ Social media makes this new invention widely popular among young people.
社交媒体让这项新发明迅速在年轻人中广为流行。
⑩ We can connect modern technology with daily needs to make better inventions.
我们可以结合现代科技与日常需求,创造更优质的发明。
结尾句
① Any creative idea can become a valuable invention if we keep practicing.
只要不断实践,任何创意都能变成有价值的发明。
② We should use inventions reasonably and make full use of their strengths.
我们应当合理使用各类发明,充分发挥它们的优势。
③ Constant innovation will keep making our life easier and better.
持续创新会不断让我们的生活变得更便捷、美好。
④ This invention tells me that great creation comes from hard work.
这项发明让我懂得,伟大的创造源于不懈的努力。
⑤ I will keep thinking creatively and hope to invent useful things in the future.
我会保持创新思考,希望未来能发明实用的物品。
介绍发明背景:
Paper was invented by Cai Lun in ancient China.
The Wright brothers invented the plane to solve the problem of flying.
It was invented in 1903, when people wanted to travel faster.
描述用途与原理:
It is used for sending messages around the world.
The plane works by using engines to lift it into the air.
3D printers are used to make many different things, like toys and even houses.
表达影响与评价:
Since the radio was invented, news has spread much faster.
The plane has made travel around the world much easier and faster.
This invention shows the power of creativity and ideas.
【名言积累】
1.Invention stems from need,and creation changes the world.发明源于需求,创造改变世界。
2.One of the greatest qualities of human beings is their creativity.人类最伟大的品质之一便是其创造力。
万能写作模板
段落
功能
核心内容
开头段引入
点明主题,引出发明
点明你要介绍的发明,简单介绍它的地位/重要性
中间段主体
分点描述,展现细节
①发明的背景/发明者;
②发明的用途/原理;
③它如何改变了人们的生活
结尾段升华
点明意义,抒发感悟
表达对这项发明的看法,或说明它带给你的启发
写作模板
模板 1:My Favourite Invention 发明说明文
My favourite invention is ____________. It is one of the most important creations in human history.
It was invented by ____________ in ____________. Many problems ____________ (meet) when people developed it. Materials like ____________ were used to make it. After lots of tests, it was finally finished.
This invention changes our life a lot. It helps people ____________ and makes the world smaller. I think more useful inventions will be created in the future.
模板 2:议论文《The Most Useful Invention》
I think ____________ is the most useful invention of all time. It was invented by ____________.
Before it appeared, people ____________. After it was created, information / travel ____________. Many other inventions were also developed because of it.
This invention connects people closely and pushes the world forward. It teaches us that creative ideas can change everything around us.
模板 3:介绍古代发明通用框架
____________ is a famous ancient Chinese invention. It was invented by ____________.
In early times, people used ____________ to write or travel, but they had many weaknesses. The inventor tried many ways and used new materials to make it. Clear steps were followed to finish the product.
Later, the skill was spread to the whole world. It results in fast development of culture and brings great progress to human society.
(Unit 5 Section B 3c )
审题指导
1. 文体:说明文
2. 人称:第三人称
3. 时态:一般过去时
教材写作品读
What do you think is the most useful invention ①of all
time?For me,it has to be the telephone.
The telephone was invented by Alexander Bell in 1876.It ②was supposed to help people talk to others far away. The first telephone was made of simple materials like wood and metal wires.
The inventor had difficulty in making voices travel clearly through the wire. After ③hundreds of tests,Bell finally succeeded.
This invention ④led to a big change in communication. It ⑤allowed people to connect with each other easily and quickly. The world was made much smaller by the telephone.
Today,the telephone has developed into mobile phones,and
it still ⑥has a big effect on how we live and work.
教材原句
①【Section A 3a】What do you think is the most useful invention of all time…?(of all time 有史以来的)
②【Section A 4b】It wasn’t supposed to make such a loud noise when…(be supposed to do sth.应当做某事)
③【Section A 1c】Hundreds of kinds of dishes can be made by Smart Cook.(hundreds of 许多,大量)
④【Section B 1b】When the use of…,it led to a rapid increase in the number of books.(lead to导致;造成)
⑤【Section A 4c】These bridges are animal-friendly and allow animals to pass under the tracks.(allow…to do sth.允许……做某事)
⑥【Section A 3a】It also had a big effect on music.(have an effect on sth.对某事有影响)
科学需要梦想,发明贵在创新。社会的发展和进步都需要依靠发明创造。假如你是一名发明家,你想要发明出什么物品呢? 请你以“I Want to Invent ____”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:
1.What is your invention?
2.What does it look like?
3.What’s it used for?
【基础版】
I Want to Invent a Smart Plant Helper
Can you imagine a world without healthy plants?To help with the gardening work,I am looking to invent a Smart Plant Helper.
It looks like a small,friendly robot that stands in the soil. It is made from recycled plastic and gets energy from the sun,so it’s environment-friendly and most people can afford it. If you are busy and can’t take care
of your plants,this robot can help you. It can water and feed the plants on time. It can also tell you what to do by sending messages to your phone. Then we can have healthier plants and gardening becomes easy and fun
for everyone.
I think this invention will bring the rapid development of farming and be widely used all over the world.
【提升版】
I Want to Invent a Smart Plant Helper
Can you imagine a world without healthy plants?To help with the gardening work,I am looking to invent a Smart Plant Helper.
It looks like a small,friendly robot that stands in the soil. It is made from used plastic and gets energy from the sun,so it’s environment-friendly and most people can afford it.If you are too busy to take care of your
plants,you can depend on this robot completely. It not only waters and feeds the plants on time,but also tells you exactly what to do by sending messages to your phone. As a result,we can have healthier plants and gardening becomes easy and fun for everyone.
It’s believed that this invention will be responsible for the rapid development of farming and be widely used all over the world.
对比维度
基础版
提升版
考点说明
核心句子 1
If you are busy and can’t take care of your plants, this robot can help you.
If you are too busy to take care of your plants, you can depend on this robot completely.
too…to… 太…… 而不能(八上重点句型);depend on 依靠,替换简单的 help
核心句子 2
It can water and feed the plants on time. It can also tell you what to do…
It not only waters and feeds the plants on time, but also tells you exactly what to do…
not only…but also…不仅… 而且…,合并两个简单句,句式升级;exactly 副词增强细节
逻辑过渡词
Then we can have healthier plants…
As a result, we can have healthier plants…
As a result(因此)属于高级过渡词,替代基础词 then,体现因果关系
结尾观点句
I think this invention will bring the rapid development of farming…
It’s believed that this invention will be responsible for the rapid development of farming…
It’s believed that 人们相信,高分被动句型,替换简单 I think;⚠注:be responsible for 此处为应试套用,地道表达可用 push forward
词汇
recycled plastic(可回收塑料)
used plastic(废旧塑料)
两者语法都正确,recycled plastic 更贴合环保主题
句式特点
大量简单句,句式单一
句型多样,复合句、并列结构丰富
初中英语作文提分关键:长短句结合
优点
要点齐全,句子简短,难度低,不容易写错
运用多个八年级高分句型,衔接流畅,文采更好
适合冲刺高分
不足
句子重复,连接词简单,作文平淡
句型多,书写时要留意主谓一致,更容易笔误
not only…but also 遵循就近原则
1.国家“十四五”规划全面提出“人工智能+”行动。假设你是李华,正参加校英语报举办的英语学习app创意设计比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一篇英语稿件,介绍你的设计方案。
注意:(1)须涵盖以上三个方面内容,其中要点提示供参考,也可自由发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80 — 100左右(已给出文章开头,不计入总词数)。
Dear editors,
I’d like to introduce my design for the new English learning app. __________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editors,
I’d like to introduce my design for the new English learning app. This app is mainly designed for middle school students to practice speaking, improve listening and learn new words, especially for those who feel shy to speak up in class.
You can talk with the friendly AI teacher anytime to practise your spoken English, and it will patiently correct your speaking mistakes and give you simple tips. You can also listen to English songs or play fun word games to learn new words in a relaxing way. I think it’s very helpful and interesting, and it makes English learning easy and enjoyable for every student.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:app 的用途、使用方式、个人评价
确定人称:第一人称(I/my),介绍app功能时用第三人称(it/this app)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:承接题目给出的开头句,引出app设计介绍
主体段:分两部分展开,先介绍app的用途与目标人群,再说明具体使用方式与功能
结尾段:总结对app的评价,点明设计的意义与价值
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:What is the app for?
目标人群:middle school students/English beginners/students who are afraid of speaking English/primary school students等
核心功能:practise speaking/improve listening/learn new words/improve pronunciation/practise grammar/develop reading skills等
设计初衷:especially for those who feel shy to speak up in class/make English learning easy/help students build speaking confidence等
要点二:How does it work?
口语练习场景:talk with the friendly AI teacher anytime/have daily conversations with AI/get instant feedback on spoken English等
纠错辅助功能:it will patiently correct your speaking mistakes and give you simple tips/point out grammar errors/provide sentence examples for correction等
词汇学习方式:listen to English songs or play fun word games/watch short English videos/take word quizzes/play matching games等
学习氛围效果:learn new words in a relaxing way/learn through interactive activities/study at your own pace等
要点三:What do you think of it?
整体评价:very helpful and interesting/useful/practical/fun/engaging等
学习效果:it makes English learning easy and enjoyable for every student/builds students’ confidence/improves learning efficiency/makes learning less stressful等
2.为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I Want to Invent _________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I Want to Invent _________
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【答案】
I want to invent a special pen
I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.
It looks like a normal pen. This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. It will also have a voice recording feature, so students can record lectures and listen to them later. The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry, making it perfect for use in classrooms, libraries, and at home.
I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性说明文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:特殊钢笔的外观、核心功能(词典翻译、录音)、便携性、使用场景及作用
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,聚焦发明的实用性和创新性
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,说明发明意图
主体段:分别介绍钢笔的外观、核心功能、便携性及适用场景
结尾段:总结钢笔的价值,强调其对学习体验的提升作用
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:钢笔的基础属性
外观描述:looks like a normal pen /similar to an ordinary pen /has a simple and classic design等
便携性描述:lightweight /easy to carry /convenient to take along /not heavy等
适用场景:classrooms /libraries/at home /study rooms /on the go等
要点二:钢笔的核心功能
功能一:词典与翻译功能
功能描述:built-in dictionary /translation function /look up words instantly /translate sentences quickly等
作用效果:saves time in looking up dictionaries /helps understand new words immediately /improves language learning efficiency等
功能二:录音功能
功能描述:voice recording feature /record lectures /listen to recordings later /audio recording function等
作用效果:helps review key knowledge /avoids missing important content in class /facilitates after-class review等
3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示,给她写一封信。
要点:
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车;
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶;
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意:
1.信的内容要详略得当,并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅;
2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信,围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况;
③提示:文章符合书信要求,包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明写信目的,即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明;
第二步,详细描述新发明(新型小汽车),包括发明者(虽未着重强调,提及 “invented by a great young man” )、动力来源(太阳能、电能 )、行驶场景(陆地、水中 )以及人们对其的喜爱;
第三步,结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明,让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.(so...that... 引导结果状语从句 )
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.(believe 后接宾语从句,从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 )
4.假如你发明的“飞行单车(flying bicycle)”在学校科技节中获奖,被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请你根据表格中的要点提示用英语介绍你的发明。
Looks
wheels; wings(翅膀)
Uses
ride on the ground; fly in the sky; take photos; …
Advantages
reduce traffic jams(交通堵塞); protect the environment by using solar power; . . .
要求:
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I'd like to introduce my new invention to you.
It is
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【答案】例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I'd like to introduce my new invention to you.
It is a flying bicycle. I think it's really a great invention. Here is my introduction to it. It has two wheels and a pair of wings. So we can either ride the bicycle on the ground when folding its wings or fly in the sky by it. Besides, we can take photos or communicate with others with it.
What's more, it can not only reduce traffic jams, but also help to protect the environment because it uses solar power as its energy.
As a helpful invention, I think it will be more and more popular in the future.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:属于说明文,围绕 “飞行单车(flying bicycle)” 这一发明展开,介绍其外观、功能、优势等,用于国际青少年科技展览的成果展示场景 。
②时态:以一般现在时为主,用于客观描述飞行单车的固有特征(外观、用途、优势);因是介绍现有发明,用一般现在时能稳定、清晰呈现发明属性 。
③提示:覆盖表格中外观(wheels、wings )、用途(地面骑行、空中飞行、拍照等 )、优势(缓解交通、环保 )所有要点,内容完整,通过合理连词衔接,行文逻辑顺畅 。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇借已给语句 “Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I'd like to introduce my new invention to you.” 直接引出发明 —— 飞行单车(flying bicycle),快速切入主题,让听众明确介绍对象 。
第二步,先描述外观:用 “It has two wheels and a pair of wings.” 简洁说明飞行单车的核心外观部件(车轮、翅膀 );再讲用途:借助 “either...or...” 结构(“ride the bicycle on the ground when folding its wings or fly in the sky by it” ),清晰呈现 “折叠翅膀地面骑行、展开翅膀空中飞行” 两种基础功能,又用 “Besides” 补充 “take photos or communicate with others” 等拓展用途,全面展现发明的使用场景 。
第三步,阐述优势:通过 “not only...but also...” 结构(“reduce traffic jams, but also help to protect the environment” ),突出 “缓解交通拥堵、利用太阳能环保” 两大核心优势,说明发明价值;最后用 “As a helpful invention, I think it will be more and more popular in the future.” 总结,展望发明的未来 popularity(受欢迎度 ),让介绍完整收尾 。
【亮点词汇】
①invention:意为 “发明” ,精准锚定主题,明确介绍对象的属性,是贯穿全文的核心名词 。
②either...or...:用于连接 “地面骑行” 和 “空中飞行” 两种不同使用场景,简洁呈现功能选择,让用途描述逻辑清晰、条理分明 。
③not only...but also...:连接发明的双重优势(缓解交通、环保 ),强调递进关系,突出发明的多元价值,强化表达力度 。
【高分句型】
①So we can either ride the bicycle on the ground when folding its wings or fly in the sky by it.
②What's more, it can not only reduce traffic jams, but also help to protect the environment because it uses solar power as its energy.
③As a helpful invention, I think it will be more and more popular in the future.
5.假设这周你们学校英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你在英语角向同学们介绍一下它的发展变化,并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示:
1. 发明时间——1973年;
2. 当时的手机——large, heavy ;
3. 现在的手机——take photos, listen to music, pay for things ;
4. 畅想
要求:
1. 语意连贯,语句通顺;
2. 不少于80词。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考例文:
Cell phones are becoming more and more important. Do you know the history of cell phones?
The first cell phone was invented in 1973. At that time, it was as large as a building brick and much heavier than the cell phone today. Now, cell phones have many uses. For example, we can use cell phones not only to talk to others, but also to take photos or listen to music. We can even pay by cell phones.
I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表达手机的重要性,引出手机发展史的话题;
第二步,介绍手机的发明时间,以及过去手机的外观和现在手机的功能;
第三步,书写结束语,表达对未来手机的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②at that time 在那时
③as...as 和……一样
④for example 例如
⑤not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑥take the place of 代替
[高分句型]
①Cell phones are becoming more and more important.(形容词比较级)
②I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.(that引导的宾语从句)
6.假定你是李辉,你校正在举办一年一度的科技节,你设计了一款机器人参赛。请你结合下面图示信息,用英文写一篇短文,介绍你的机器人。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100(文章标题已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:function(n.功能)
My robot
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
My robot
As the development of science and technology, robots are used widely in our life. This is my robot. I made it last week. Its name is Wonder. It has a round head, two small hands, a tiny body and two legs. Wonder is very attractive and colorful. What’s more, it has many functions. Firstly, it can help me to clean the house. Secondly, it can send me to school on time every day. Thirdly, it can make food for me. My robot is great and I am very proud of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍机器人在现代社会的普遍性,引出自己制作的机器人;
第二步,具体阐述机器人的制作时间,外貌及功能;
第三步,表达对机器人的喜爱和自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more此外
②on time按时
③be proud of以……自豪
[高分句型]
①As the development of science and technology, robots are used widely in our life.(一般现在时的被动语态)
②My robot is great and I am very proud of it.(and并列句)
7.发明改变了世界,改变了我们的生活。比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一篇短文。
要求:1. 短文必须包括图片中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
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Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. There are famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle. The TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world. We can also watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves.
The bicycle is very useful, too. We go to school or work by bike. It’s not so expensive that most of us can afford it. It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment. What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sport which is quite good for our health.
Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. If we meet problems when doing our homework, it will tell us how to solve them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:要求以“Inventions”为话题,结合图片内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明电视和自行车为人们提供了便利;
第二步,具体介绍自行车的优点和骑自行车的好处;
第三步,介绍自己想要的发明、用途和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②be good for有益于
③What’s more另外
[高分句型]
①The TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②If we meet problems when doing our homework, it will tell us how to solve them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8.发明改变世界。请参照下列表格中的提示,以“My Favorite Invention—the Internet”为题写一篇英语短文,字数80词左右。
发明时间
1969年
用途
1.上网查信息;2.发邮件;3.听音乐、玩游戏、购物等;
4.广泛应用于银行、学校、医院等工作场所;5.……
评价
1.方便了人们的生活;2.提供了更多的工作机会;
3.2020 年新冠疫情期间……;4.……
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
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My Favorite Invention—the Internet
Of all the inventions, my favorite is the Internet.
The Internet was invented in 1969s. It can be used to do many things. People can go online and search for information they need. They can send emails to each other instead of writing letters. People can also use the Internet to listen to music, play games, shop or do many other things. Nowadays, the Internet is widely used in banks, schools, companies, hospitals, and many other places. People can even see a doctor online at home, thanks to the Internet.
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life. It makes our lives more and more convenient. It also provides us with more job opportunities. It plays an important role in preventing and controlling the pandemic. It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet. As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:文章标题及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“用途”和“评价”中需要自己添加的要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接引出话题;
第二步,根据要点提示,依次举例说明互联网的各种用途,最后还得自行再补充说明一种用途;
第三步,根据要点提示,对互联网的出现作出评价,最后自行补充自己对互联网的看法,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
be used to do被用于做……
thanks to多亏……
more and more convenient越来越方便
play an important role in在……中起重要作用
provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语;what引导的宾语从句)
As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
9.班级英语辩论赛征文:The Most Useful Invention of All Time,请你写短文表达观点,要点:
点明你认为最有用的发明;
对比没有这项发明的生活,说明它的价值;
分析它带动了哪些其他发明、带来哪些社会进步。
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The Most Useful Invention of All Time
In my opinion, the radio is the most useful invention of all time. It was invented by Guglielmo Marconi in the 1890s.
Before the radio was invented, news travelled very slowly. Long-distance messages could not be sent quickly. In 1901, a radio message was sent across the Atlantic Ocean for the first time. After that, news can be spread all over the world in seconds. Besides, many other inventions were developed because of the radio, such as televisions. It also changed music: works of artists from different countries can be enjoyed by everyone easily.
The radio breaks the limit of distance and connects people closely. It shows how powerful creative ideas are. Without it, we would never get information so quickly. It is truly a life-changing invention for human beings.
[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
时态:混合时态。介绍发明者、发明前后对比用一般过去时;评价发明价值用一般现在时;结尾虚拟表达假设。
提示:文章标题及写作要点围绕 “收音机” 展开,按照提示要点依次阐述,不要遗漏发明背景、发明前后对比、带来的影响,评价部分可自主添加观点,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接提出观点:收音机是有史以来最有用的发明之一,介绍发明者与发明时间;
第二步,根据要点提示,对比收音机发明前后信息传递的差异,举例跨大西洋发报的史实,依次说明它在新闻传播、带动其他发明、音乐传播方面的影响;
第三步,根据要点提示,评价收音机的重大意义,自行补充个人看法,利用虚拟句式升华主旨,书写结语。
[亮点词汇] of all time 有史以来 in the 1890s 在 19 世纪 90 年代 for the first time 第一次 all over the world 全世界 in seconds 瞬间 because of 因为(后接名词 / 名词短语) break the limit of distance 打破距离限制 life-changing 改变生活的 human beings 人类
[高分句型] In my opinion, the radio is the most useful invention of all time.(直接表达观点,开篇点题) Before the radio was invented, news travelled very slowly.(before 引导时间状语从句;一般过去时被动语态) Without it, we would never get information so quickly.(without 引导虚拟条件句,作文高分句型) It shows how powerful creative ideas are.(how 引导宾语从句,感叹含义,升华主旨)
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Unit 5 Power of Ideas
单元同步写作讲义
本单元教材写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”这一主题群,涉及子主题“科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新”。本单元的话题是“发明与创意”,围绕这一话题应主要介绍某项发明涵盖古代经典发明与现代新兴发明,包括发明者、发明时间、主要功能、对生活的影响或改进措施等。写作时,首先点明发明物的名称,接着详细介绍发明物的外观、功能和特点,最后介阐述发明给人们生活、社会发展带来的改变,感悟创新与思想的力量以及改进措施。时态以一般现在时或一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
【词汇积累】
词汇积累
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① invent v. 发明;创造
② invention n. 发明物;创造
③ inventor n. 发明者;发明家
④ create v. 创作;创新
⑤ creativity n. 创造力
⑥ innovate v. 革新;创新
⑦ innovation n. 创新;新发明 ⑧ function n. 功能;作用
⑨ convenient adj. 方便的 ⑩ influence n. & v. 影响
⑪ produce v. 生产;制造 ⑫ recycle v. 回收利用
⑬ technology n. 科技;技术 ⑭ electric adj. 电动的
⑮ improve v. 改进;改善 ⑯ develop v. 研发;发展
⑰ material n. 材料 ⑱ advantage n. 优点;优势
⑲ disadvantage n. 缺点;弊端 ⑳ creative adj. 有创意的
短语积累
① come up with creative ideas 想出创意点子 ② be invented by sb. 由某人发明
③ at the age of … 在…… 岁时 ④ cut down waste /pollution 减少废料 / 污染
⑤ save time and energy 省时省力 ⑥ make one’s life convenient 便利人们的生活
⑦ turn ideas into real products 将想法变为实物 ⑧ take many tries 经历多次尝试
⑨ environmental-friendly 环保的 ⑩ digital technology 数字科技
⑪ reusable materials 可循环材料 ⑫ make progress 取得进步
⑬ solve daily problems 解决日常难题 ⑭ have a great influence on 对…… 产生巨大影响
⑮ step by step 一步步地
【句式积累】
开头句
① In our daily life, thousands of great inventions bring us huge changes.
在日常生活中,无数伟大发明给我们带来巨大改变。
② Have you ever thought about how inventions change our way of living?
你是否思考过发明是如何改变我们生活方式的?
③ Today I’d like to introduce a creative invention to all of you.
今天我想向大家介绍一项富有创意的发明。
④ Creativity and inventions are the power pushing the world forward.
创意与发明是推动世界向前发展的动力。
⑤ Teenagers can also create small but useful inventions in daily life.
青少年也能在生活中创造小巧却实用的发明。
中间句
① This eco-friendly car was invented by a team of college students in 2024.
这款环保汽车是一组大学生在 2024 年研发的。
② Its main function is to absorb CO2 from air while driving to protect nature.
它的核心功能是行驶时吸收空气中的二氧化碳,保护自然环境。
③ The AI app can take photos of food and show its calories and nutrients quickly.
这款人工智能软件可拍摄食物,快速显示其卡路里与营养成分。
④ Nearly all inventors experienced lots of failures before their final success.
几乎所有发明家在取得成功前都经历了无数次失败。
⑤ It uses 3D printing and recycled plastic to reduce production waste.
它采用 3D 打印与回收塑料,减少生产过程中的废料。
⑥ This invention greatly simplifies our daily work and saves plenty of time.
这项发明极大简化了我们的日常工作,节省大量时间。
⑦ However, the invention still has weak points and needs to be improved.
但这项发明仍存在短板,还有待进一步优化改进。
⑧ The young inventor planned to take a gap year to perfect his product.
这位年轻发明者打算休学一年,完善自己的创意产品。
⑨ Social media makes this new invention widely popular among young people.
社交媒体让这项新发明迅速在年轻人中广为流行。
⑩ We can connect modern technology with daily needs to make better inventions.
我们可以结合现代科技与日常需求,创造更优质的发明。
结尾句
① Any creative idea can become a valuable invention if we keep practicing.
只要不断实践,任何创意都能变成有价值的发明。
② We should use inventions reasonably and make full use of their strengths.
我们应当合理使用各类发明,充分发挥它们的优势。
③ Constant innovation will keep making our life easier and better.
持续创新会不断让我们的生活变得更便捷、美好。
④ This invention tells me that great creation comes from hard work.
这项发明让我懂得,伟大的创造源于不懈的努力。
⑤ I will keep thinking creatively and hope to invent useful things in the future.
我会保持创新思考,希望未来能发明实用的物品。
介绍发明背景:
Paper was invented by Cai Lun in ancient China.
The Wright brothers invented the plane to solve the problem of flying.
It was invented in 1903, when people wanted to travel faster.
描述用途与原理:
It is used for sending messages around the world.
The plane works by using engines to lift it into the air.
3D printers are used to make many different things, like toys and even houses.
表达影响与评价:
Since the radio was invented, news has spread much faster.
The plane has made travel around the world much easier and faster.
This invention shows the power of creativity and ideas.
【名言积累】
1.Invention stems from need,and creation changes the world.发明源于需求,创造改变世界。
2.One of the greatest qualities of human beings is their creativity.人类最伟大的品质之一便是其创造力。
万能写作模板
段落
功能
核心内容
开头段引入
点明主题,引出发明
点明你要介绍的发明,简单介绍它的地位/重要性
中间段主体
分点描述,展现细节
①发明的背景/发明者;
②发明的用途/原理;
③它如何改变了人们的生活
结尾段升华
点明意义,抒发感悟
表达对这项发明的看法,或说明它带给你的启发
写作模板
模板 1:My Favourite Invention 发明说明文
My favourite invention is ____________. It is one of the most important creations in human history.
It was invented by ____________ in ____________. Many problems ____________ (meet) when people developed it. Materials like ____________ were used to make it. After lots of tests, it was finally finished.
This invention changes our life a lot. It helps people ____________ and makes the world smaller. I think more useful inventions will be created in the future.
模板 2:议论文《The Most Useful Invention》
I think ____________ is the most useful invention of all time. It was invented by ____________.
Before it appeared, people ____________. After it was created, information / travel ____________. Many other inventions were also developed because of it.
This invention connects people closely and pushes the world forward. It teaches us that creative ideas can change everything around us.
模板 3:介绍古代发明通用框架
____________ is a famous ancient Chinese invention. It was invented by ____________.
In early times, people used ____________ to write or travel, but they had many weaknesses. The inventor tried many ways and used new materials to make it. Clear steps were followed to finish the product.
Later, the skill was spread to the whole world. It results in fast development of culture and brings great progress to human society.
(Unit 5 Section B 3c)
审题指导
1. 文体:说明文
2. 人称:第三人称
3. 时态:一般过去时
教材写作品读
What do you think is the most useful invention ①of all
time? For me, it has to be the telephone.
The telephone was invented by Alexander Bell in 1876. It ②was supposed to help people talk to others far away. The first telephone was made of simple materials like wood and metal wires.
The inventor had difficulty in making voices travel clearly through the wire. After ③hundreds of tests,Bell finally succeeded.
This invention ④led to a big change in communication. It ⑤allowed people to connect with each other easily and quickly. The world was made much smaller by the telephone.
Today,the telephone has developed into mobile phones,and
it still ⑥has a big effect on how we live and work.
教材原句
①【Section A 3a】What do you think is the most useful invention of all time…?(of all time 有史以来的)
②【Section A 4b】It wasn’t supposed to make such a loud noise when…(be supposed to do sth.应当做某事)
③【Section A 1c】Hundreds of kinds of dishes can be made by Smart Cook.(hundreds of 许多,大量)
④【Section B 1b】When the use of…,it led to a rapid increase in the number of books.(lead to导致;造成)
⑤【Section A 4c】These bridges are animal-friendly and allow animals to pass under the tracks.(allow…to do sth.允许……做某事)
⑥【Section A 3a】It also had a big effect on music.(have an effect on sth.对某事有影响)
科学需要梦想,发明贵在创新。社会的发展和进步都需要依靠发明创造。假如你是一名发明家,你想要发明出什么物品呢? 请你以“I Want to Invent ____”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:
1.What is your invention?
2.What does it look like?
3.What’s it used for?
【基础版】
I Want to Invent a Smart Plant Helper
Can you imagine a world without healthy plants?To help with the gardening work,I am looking to invent a Smart Plant Helper.
It looks like a small,friendly robot that stands in the soil. It is made from recycled plastic and gets energy from the sun,so it’s environment-friendly and most people can afford it. If you are busy and can’t take care
of your plants,this robot can help you. It can water and feed the plants on time. It can also tell you what to do by sending messages to your phone. Then we can have healthier plants and gardening becomes easy and fun
for everyone.
I think this invention will bring the rapid development of farming and be widely used all over the world.
【提升版】
I Want to Invent a Smart Plant Helper
Can you imagine a world without healthy plants?To help with the gardening work,I am looking to invent a Smart Plant Helper.
It looks like a small,friendly robot that stands in the soil. It is made from used plastic and gets energy from the sun,so it’s environment-friendly and most people can afford it.If you are too busy to take care of your
plants,you can depend on this robot completely. It not only waters and feeds the plants on time,but also tells you exactly what to do by sending messages to your phone. As a result,we can have healthier plants and gardening becomes easy and fun for everyone.
It’s believed that this invention will be responsible for the rapid development of farming and be widely used all over the world.
对比维度
基础版
提升版
考点说明
核心句子1
If you are busy and can’t take care of your plants, this robot can help you.
If you are too busy to take care of your plants, you can depend on this robot completely.
too…to… 太…… 而不能(八上重点句型);depend on 依靠,替换简单的 help
核心句子2
It can water and feed the plants on time. It can also tell you what to do…
It not only waters and feeds the plants on time, but also tells you exactly what to do…
not only…but also…不仅… 而且…,合并两个简单句,句式升级;exactly 副词增强细节
逻辑过渡词
Then we can have healthier plants…
As a result, we can have healthier plants…
As a result(因此)属于高级过渡词,替代基础词 then,体现因果关系
结尾观点句
I think this invention will bring the rapid development of farming…
It’s believed that this invention will be responsible for the rapid development of farming…
It’s believed that 人们相信,高分被动句型,替换简单 I think;⚠注:be responsible for 此处为应试套用,地道表达可用 push forward
词汇
recycled plastic(可回收塑料)
used plastic(废旧塑料)
两者语法都正确,recycled plastic 更贴合环保主题
句式特点
大量简单句,句式单一
句型多样,复合句、并列结构丰富
初中英语作文提分关键:长短句结合
优点
要点齐全,句子简短,难度低,不容易写错
运用多个八年级高分句型,衔接流畅,文采更好
适合冲刺高分
不足
句子重复,连接词简单,作文平淡
句型多,书写时要留意主谓一致,更容易笔误
not only…but also 遵循就近原则
1.国家“十四五”规划全面提出“人工智能+”行动。假设你是李华,正参加校英语报举办的英语学习app创意设计比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一篇英语稿件,介绍你的设计方案。
注意:(1)须涵盖以上三个方面内容,其中要点提示供参考,也可自由发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80 — 100左右(已给出文章开头,不计入总词数)。
Dear editors,
I’d like to introduce my design for the new English learning app. __________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你以“I Want to Invent _________”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。内容包括:
注意:(1)请先补全标题;
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数 80~100。
I Want to Invent _________
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3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示,给她写一封信。
要点:
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车;
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶;
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意:
1.信的内容要详略得当,并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅;
2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假如你发明的“飞行单车(flying bicycle)”在学校科技节中获奖,被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请你根据表格中的要点提示用英语介绍你的发明。
Looks
wheels; wings(翅膀)
Uses
ride on the ground; fly in the sky; take photos; …
Advantages
reduce traffic jams(交通堵塞); protect the environment by using solar power; . . .
要求:
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I'd like to introduce my new invention to you.
It is
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.假设这周你们学校英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你在英语角向同学们介绍一下它的发展变化,并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示:
1. 发明时间——1973年;
2. 当时的手机——large, heavy ;
3. 现在的手机——take photos, listen to music, pay for things ;
4. 畅想
要求:
1. 语意连贯,语句通顺;
2. 不少于80词。
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6.假定你是李辉,你校正在举办一年一度的科技节,你设计了一款机器人参赛。请你结合下面图示信息,用英文写一篇短文,介绍你的机器人。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100(文章标题已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:function(n.功能)
My robot
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7.发明改变了世界,改变了我们的生活。比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一篇短文。
要求:1. 短文必须包括图片中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
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8.发明改变世界。请参照下列表格中的提示,以“My Favorite Invention—the Internet”为题写一篇英语短文,字数80词左右。
发明时间
1969年
用途
1.上网查信息;2.发邮件;3.听音乐、玩游戏、购物等;
4.广泛应用于银行、学校、医院等工作场所;5.……
评价
1.方便了人们的生活;2.提供了更多的工作机会;
3.2020 年新冠疫情期间……;4.……
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
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9.班级英语辩论赛征文:The Most Useful Invention of All Time,请你写短文表达观点,要点:
点明你认为最有用的发明;
对比没有这项发明的生活,说明它的价值;
分析它带动了哪些其他发明、带来哪些社会进步。
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