考前押题05 第一节写作4大常考话题（期中专项训练）高一英语上学期译林版

函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 考前押题05第一节写作4大常考话题 话题图谱·导航总览 话题1学校生活（常考点） 话题2亲子关系（常考点） 话题3友谊（常考点） 话题4青少年身心健康（难点） 话题精练·靶向突破 解题技巧 ①审题干，抓关键：抓住主干内容（题干中的“刚性信息”）、明确写作体裁和要求： ②撷要点，巧拓展：根据“刚性信息”，拓展写作内容：依托题干“刚性信息”，从四个维度进行拓展： 立足交际场景，选用得体语言；补充实例细节，充实写作素材；理顺句间逻辑，强化行文条理；融入 真挚情感，引发读者共鸣。 ③拟稿修改誊上卡：拟写初稿、修改或润色，誊写上卡。 话题1学校生活（共3篇） Passage 1 (26-27高一·全国·初升高衔接)新学期伊始，你校英语广播站举办主题为“Back to School,Start a New Journey''的演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1.新学期的感悟： 2.个人学习与成长目标： 3.新学期态度与决心。 注意：词数80左右；行文连贯，格式规范，内容完整。 1/10 的学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 2 (25-26高一上：广西南宁·开学考试)假如你是高一新生李华，你的英国笔友Ptr给你发了一封邮件，询 问你暑假是如何度过的，并表示对你即将进入的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点给他写封回信。 内容包括：1.假期生活的简要描述： 2.高中学校给你的印象； 3.新学期的打算和规划。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 (25-26高一上：江苏苏州阶段检测)以“How to realize my potential!”为题，根据下列提示写一篇短文。 内容包括：1.作为一个高中生，我需要持续努力，以训练我的头脑、培养我的性格。 2/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 2.最重要的是，我在高中阶段度过的时光、付出的努力将为我叩开潜能的大门。 3.什么是潜能？如何充分发挥自己的潜能？（至少两点） 写作要求：1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to realize my potential 话题2亲子关系（共3篇） Passage 1 (25-26高一上·云南文山~期中)青春期中亲子关系日趋紧张，针对这个现象，你校校报计划进行专栏讨 论“如何建立良好的亲子关系”，请你给校报投稿。 内容包括：1.建立良好亲子关系的重要性； 2.给父母的建议： 3.给孩子的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to set up a good parent-child relationship 3/10 的学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 2 (25-26高一上·黑龙江牡丹江阶段检测)假设你是一名高中生，名字叫李华，你的美国笔友David来 信向你求助。他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信。 要点如下：1.建议他向妈妈道歉： 2.说明过多上网的危害： 3.列举一些健康的休闲方式。 注意：词数80左右 参考词汇：网瘾Internet addiction Passage 3 (25-26高一上：湖南长沙·期中)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Sarah来信提到，她因学习与娱乐时间的 安排问题常与父母产生分歧，导致家庭关系紧张，她深感苦恼。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。 内容包括：1.表达对她处境的理解； 4/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 2.提出解决矛盾的建议； 3.给予鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sarah, Yours, Li Hua 话题3友谊（共3篇） Passage 1 (25-26高一下·安徽阜阳·期末)你校正组织英语演讲比赛，请以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写一篇 演讲稿。 内容包括：1.友谊的重要性： 2.如何获得友谊。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Power of Friendship Good morning,everyone! 5/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage 2 (25-26高一上·云南玉溪·期中)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信说他和好朋友Jack因为一次误会 影响了他们之间的友谊，希望你能帮助他。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可适当添加细节，使行文流畅。 Passage 3 (25-26高一上四川宜宾·期中)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Buc写信向你询问如何维系友谊，你回 信分享你的观点。 内容包括：1.朋友之间需要信任： 2.共同的兴趣爱好能加深友谊； 3.你的个人感悟或经历。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 6/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Dear Bruce, I am glad to hear from you. Yours, LiHua 话题4青少年身心健康（共3篇） Passage 1 (25-26高一下·湖南长沙开学考试)假定你是学生会主席李华，你发现在社交媒体的影响下，许多青少 年对自己的外貌感到焦虑，甚至影响了学习和社交。请你作为代表在校英语报上写一份倡议书。 内容包括：1.描述问题现状： 2.给予具体建议； 3.发出倡议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, 7/10 的学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 (25-26高一上·江苏南京：阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的好友My对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼， 想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信。 内容包括：1.表示不赞同； 2.整容的弊端； 3.你对美的看法。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mary, Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 (25-26高一上·湖南湘潭·阶段检测)青少年的容貌焦虑已经影响到日常的生活和学习了，尤其是过度节 8/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 食减肥，对青少年的身体有许多危害。请你就青少年的这种行为展开写作。 内容包括：1.过度节食减肥的不良后果： 2.你的建议； 3.启示（内在美更重要）。 要求：词数100左右。适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 素养拓展·创新思辨 【<原创>新素材·涉及以上四大话题】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Pter来信，想了解中国高中生 如何处理成长中的一些问题。请你给他写封回信，回答他的有关问题。 内容包括：1.学校生活：在校积极参加各种活动，… 2.维护友谊：遇到同学的误解或同学间的冲突时，…： 3.亲子关系：面对与父母的分歧时，…： 4.身心健康：面对外貌焦虑时，…。 注意：词数100左右。开头句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter. You wrote to ask how we Chinese senior high school students deal with some problems in our growth.Here are some of our ways. 9/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours sincerely, Li Hua 10/10 考前押题05 第一节写作4大常考话题 话题1 学校生活（常考点） 话题2 亲子关系（常考点） 话题3 友谊（常考点） 话题4 青少年身心健康（难点） ①审题干，抓关键：抓住主干内容(题干中的“刚性信息”)、明确写作体裁和要求； ②撷要点，巧拓展：根据“刚性信息”，拓展写作内容：依托题干“刚性信息”，从四个维度进行拓展： 立足交际场景，选用得体语言；补充实例细节，充实写作素材；理顺句间逻辑，强化行文条理；融入 真挚情感，引发读者共鸣。 ③拟稿修改誊上卡：拟写初稿、修改或润色，誊写上卡。 话题1学校生活(共3篇) Passage 1 (26-27高一·全国·初升高衔接)新学期伊始，你校英语广播站举办主题为“Back to School, Start a New Journey”的演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. 新学期的感悟； 2. 个人学习与成长目标； 3. 新学期态度与决心。 注意：词数80左右；行文连贯，格式规范，内容完整。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Back to School, Start a New Journey Good morning, everyone. After a relaxing holiday, we return to campus full of energy and passion. A new term stands for a brand-new journey and countless chances to better ourselves. In this new semester, I have set clear goals. I will form good learning habits, listen attentively in class and review knowledge in a timely way. Besides, I plan to take part in more after-school activities to enrich my school experience. No pains, no gains. I will stay positive and hard-working to make steady progress every single day. Thank you! 【导语】要求考生以演讲稿的形式，围绕返校主题，分享新学期感悟、学习目标及积极向上的决心。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 热情：passion→enthusiasm 无数的：countless→innumerable 参加：take part in→participate in 稳定的：steady→constant 2. 句式拓展 原 句：A new term stands for a brand-new journey and countless chances to better ourselves. 拓展句：A new term stands for a brand-new journey, during which we will be presented with countless chances to better ourselves. 【高分句型】 1. Besides, I plan to take part in more after-school activities to enrich my school experience. (运用了不定式<to take part in>作宾语，不定式<to enrich my school experience>作目的状语) 2. I will stay positive and hard-working to make steady progress every single day.(运用了不定式作目的状语) Passage 2 (25-26高一上·广西南宁·开学考试)假如你是高一新生李华，你的英国笔友Peter给你发了一封邮件，询问你暑假是如何度过的，并表示对你即将进入的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点给他写封回信。 内容包括：1. 假期生活的简要描述； 2. 高中学校给你的印象； 3. 新学期的打算和规划。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear from you! This summer, I spent most of my time reading English novels and practicing basketball with friends. It was relaxing and meaningful.   When it comes to my senior high school, the first impression of it is unforgettable. The schoolyard is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment. Besides, all the teachers are friendly and I firmly believe we’ll make great progress with them teaching us. I’m excited about the new life here. For the new term, I plan to work hard on all subjects, especially English. I also want to join the basketball club to make more friends. Best wishes!   Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Peter写一封回信，简要描述自己的暑假生活、对高中学校的印象并介绍新学期的打算和规划。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 令人难忘的：unforgettable → memorable 此外：besides → in addition 兴奋的：excited → thrilled 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I also want to join the basketball club to make more friends. 拓展句：I also want to join the basketball club, which I think will help me make more friends. 【高分句型】 1. The schoolyard is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment. (运用了现在分词作状语) 2. Besides, all the teachers are friendly and I firmly believe we’ll make great progress with them teaching us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) Passage 3 (25-26高一上·江苏苏州·阶段检测)以“How to realize my potential!”为题，根据下列提示写一篇短文。 内容包括：1. 作为一个高中生，我需要持续努力，以训练我的头脑、培养我的性格。 2. 最重要的是，我在高中阶段度过的时光、付出的努力将为我叩开潜能的大门。 3. 什么是潜能？如何充分发挥自己的潜能？(至少两点) 写作要求：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to realize my potential __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to realize my potential As a senior high school student, I need to keep working hard. This can train my mind and develop my personality, which are both important for realizing potential. The time I spend and the efforts I make in high school will open the door to my potential. What is potential? It is the ability we have but haven’t fully used yet. How can we develop it fully? First, we should set small goals. When we finish each goal, we’ll gain confidence and get closer to our potential. Second, we must learn from mistakes. Every mistake tells us what we need to improve, which helps us grow better. Also, we should ask for help when we’re stuck. Teachers and classmates can give us advice that guides us to find our hidden abilities. If we keep doing these things, we’ll surely realize our full potential. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。文章围绕高中生如何实现自身潜能展开，阐述努力意义、潜能定义及发挥潜能的方法。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 培养：develop→foster 帮助：help→assist 告诉：tell→remind 获得：gain→acquire 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Every mistake tells us what we need to improve, which helps us grow better. 拓展句：It is every mistake that tells us what we need to improve, which helps us grow better. 【高分句型】 1. This can train my mind and develop my personality, which are both important for realizing potential. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. When we finish each goal, we’ll gain confidence and get closer to our potential. (运用了When引导的时间状语从句) 话题2亲子关系(共3篇) Passage 1 (25-26高一上·云南文山·期中)青春期中亲子关系日趋紧张，针对这个现象，你校校报计划进行专栏讨论“如何建立良好的亲子关系”，请你给校报投稿。 内容包括：1. 建立良好亲子关系的重要性； 2. 给父母的建议； 3. 给孩子的建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to set up a good parent-child relationship __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to set up a good parent-child relationship A good parent-child relationship, based on understanding and respect, is of great benefit to teenagers’ mental and physical health, allowing them to explore this world confidently and freely. Teenagers and parents can work together to set up a good parent-child relationship. The key to avoiding tensions and keeping the peace is regular and honest communication. For parents, it is advisable to treat children as independent individuals, listening to children’s ideas and encouraging them to think on their own rather than decide everything for them. Meanwhile, when teenagers disagree with parents and a conflict is on the way, take a minute to calm down and try to understand the situation from parents’ point of view. Please remember that everything will turn out all right in the end! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校报投稿，写一写“如何建立良好的亲子关系”。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 有益的：of benefit→beneficial 建立：set up→establish 鼓励：encourage→inspire 同时：meanwhile→at the same time 2. 句式拓展 原 句：A good parent-child relationship, based on understanding and respect, is of great benefit to teenagers’ mental and physical health, allowing them to explore this world confidently and freely. 拓展句：A good parent-child relationship, which is based on understanding and respect, is of great benefit to teenagers’ mental and physical health, allowing them to explore this world confidently and freely. 【高分句型】 1. A good parent-child relationship, based on understanding and respect, is of great benefit to teenagers’ mental and physical health, allowing them to explore this world confidently and freely.(运用了分词作状语) 2. Meanwhile, when teenagers disagree with parents and a conflict is on the way, take a minute to calm down and try to understand the situation from parents’ point of view.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) Passage 2 (25-26高一上·黑龙江牡丹江·阶段检测)假设你是一名高中生，名字叫李华，你的美国笔友 David 来信向你求助。他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信。 要点如下：1. 建议他向妈妈道歉； 2. 说明过多上网的危害； 3. 列举一些健康的休闲方式。 注意: 词数80左右 参考词汇：网瘾Internet addiction __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear David, I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction. In my opinion, you should apologize to your mother. Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world. As students, we should devote our energy to study. When available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games. Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友David写信，针对其因沉迷网络与母亲发生冲突一事给出建议，表达自己的看法。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 冲突：conflict → dispute 沉迷于：be addicted to → be crazy about 导致：result in → lead to 有益于健康：keep fit → stay healthy 2. 句式拓展 原 句：As students, we should devote our energy to study. 拓展句：Since we are students, we should devote our energy to study. 【高分句型】 1. Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily. (运用了only+状语置于句首的倒装句型) Passage 3 (25-26高一上·湖南长沙·期中)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Sarah来信提到，她因学习与娱乐时间的安排问题常与父母产生分歧，导致家庭关系紧张，她深感苦恼。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。 内容包括：1. 表达对她处境的理解； 2. 提出解决矛盾的建议； 3. 给予鼓励。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sarah, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sarah, Sorry to hear that you’re having trouble getting along with your parents lately. It’s totally normal to have disagreements with your parents about managing your study and leisure time. Here are a couple of suggestions that might help. First, have a calm talk with your parents. Instead of arguing angrily, choose a quiet moment to share your feelings. Tell them you understand their concern about your study, and also explain your need for proper relaxation. Also, a practical approach would be to create a well-balanced schedule together. By jointly planning out time for homework, hobbies, and rest, you can build mutual trust and ensure everyone is on the same page. I believe your parents love you deeply, and things will get better soon. I’m always here for you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Sarah写一封回信，表达对她处境的理解、提出解决矛盾的建议并给予鼓励。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 完全：totally→completely 而不是：instead of→rather than 担心：concern→worry 确保：ensure→guarantee 2. 句式拓展 原 句：By jointly planning out time for homework, hobbies, and rest, you can build mutual trust and ensure everyone is on the same page. 拓展句：If you can jointly plan out time for homework, hobbies, and rest, you will build mutual trust and ensure everyone is on the same page. 【高分句型】 1. Sorry to hear that you’re having trouble getting along with your parents lately.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 2. Here are a couple of suggestions that might help.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 话题3友谊(共3篇) Passage 1 (25-26高一下·安徽阜阳·期末)你校正组织英语演讲比赛，请以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. 友谊的重要性； 2. 如何获得友谊。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Power of Friendship Good morning, everyone! _________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Power of Friendship Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech is “The Power of Friendship”. It is universally acknowledged that friends are necessary to us. As far as I’m concerned, a good friend is my nearest relation. What should we do to make good friends? First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, so we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths. In addition, friends should treat each other with sincerity. As long as we sincerely treat every friend, our friends will also be true to us! I hold a strong belief that friends will make our life more colorful and wonderful. 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写演讲稿，阐述友谊的重要性，并给出获得友谊的具体方法。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 必要的：necessary → essential 促进：promote → advance/boost 优点：strengths → strong points 信念：belief → faith 2. 句式拓展 原 句：First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, so we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths. 拓展句：First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, and that’s why we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths. 【高分句型】 1. It is universally acknowledged that friends are necessary to us. (运用了it作形式主语，that从句引导真正的主语从句) 2. As long as we sincerely treat every friend, then our friends will also be true to us! (运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句) Passage 2 (25-26高一上·云南玉溪·期中)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信说他和好朋友Jack因为一次误会影响了他们之间的友谊，希望你能帮助他。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文流畅。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear about the misunderstanding between you and Jack. Friendship is precious, but conflicts sometimes happen. Here’s my advice to help you mend things. Open communication can be the key to clearing up the misunderstanding. Perhaps you can find a quiet moment to talk with Jack, where you can both express your feelings honestly while listening to each other’s perspectives. What’s more, rebuilding trust may take time and patience, but small, thoughtful actions often help. You may consider doing something kind for Jack, like helping him with a project or recalling a positive memory you share. I believe that with mutual effort, you and Jack can move past this misunderstanding. Please keep me updated. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给在友谊方面遇到困难的美国笔友Tom写一封回信，就如何解开他和好朋友Jack之间的误会，维持友谊提供具体的建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 宝贵的：precious→valuable, priceless 与……交谈：talk with→chat with 表达：express→convey, articulate 回忆：recall→recollect, think back to 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I’m sorry to hear about the misunderstanding between you and Jack. 拓展句：I’m sorry to hear that there was a misunderstanding between you and Jack. 【高分句型】 1. Perhaps you can find a quiet moment to talk with Jack, where you can both express your feelings honestly while listening to each other’s perspectives. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) 2. I believe that with mutual effort, you and Jack can move past this misunderstanding. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage 3 (25-26高一上·四川宜宾·期中)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Bruce写信向你询问如何维系友谊，你回信分享你的观点。 内容包括：1. 朋友之间需要信任； 2. 共同的兴趣爱好能加深友谊； 3. 你的个人感悟或经历。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Bruce, I am glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Bruce, I am glad to hear from you. You asked about how to maintain friendship, and I’d like to share my ideas. First, trust is the foundation of any true friendship. You must be honest with your friends, because a friendship that is built on lies will soon break. Second, shared hobbies help deepen your connection. I have a friend who loves reading as I do. We often exchange books and talk about stories, which makes our friendship stronger. In fact, friendship needs care from both sides. As long as you treat others sincerely, you’ll keep precious friendships. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，针对英国朋友Bruce关于如何维系友谊的询问，回信分享个人观点与经历。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 维持：maintain → preserve 基础：foundation → basis 诚实的：honest → truthful 真诚地：sincerely → genuinely 2. 句式拓展 原 句：You asked about how to maintain friendship, and I’d like to share my ideas. 拓展句：Since you asked about how you can maintain friendship, I’d like to share my ideas. 【高分句型】 1. You must be honest with your friends, because a friendship that is built on lies will soon break. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句、that引导的限制性定语从句) 2. We often exchange books and talk about stories, which makes our friendship stronger. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 话题4青少年身心健康(共3篇) Passage 1 (25-26高一下·湖南长沙·开学考试)假定你是学生会主席李华，你发现在社交媒体的影响下，许多青少年对自己的外貌感到焦虑，甚至影响了学习和社交。请你作为代表在校英语报上写一份倡议书。 内容包括：1. 描述问题现状； 2. 给予具体建议； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear fellow students, Nowadays, influenced by social media, many teenagers feel anxious about their appearance, which has even affected their studies and social life. Here are some tips for us. First, stop comparing yourself with filtered “perfect images” online. True beauty lies in inner qualities rather than looks. Besides, we can practice self-care activities such as exercise, meditation or spending time with loved ones to improve our self-esteem and reduce anxiety. Let’s accept ourselves as we are and pursue real inner beauty! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就许多青少年对自己的外貌感到焦虑，甚至影响了学习和社交的现象在校英语报上写一份倡议书。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 影响：affect → have an impact on 在于：lie in → consist in 减少：reduce → decrease 提升：improve → enhance 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Besides, we can practice self-care activities such as exercise, meditation or spending time with loved ones to improve our self-esteem and reduce anxiety. 拓展句：Besides, we can practice self-care activities such as exercise, meditation or spending time with loved ones so that we can improve our self-esteem and reduce anxiety. 【高分句型】 1. Nowadays, influenced by social media, many teenagers feel anxious about their appearance, which has even affected their studies and social life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. Besides, we can practice self-care activities such as exercise, meditation or spending time with loved ones to improve our self-esteem and reduce anxiety.(运用了动词不定式to improve作目的状语) Passage 2 (25-26高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信。 内容包括：1. 表示不赞同； 2. 整容的弊端； 3. 你对美的看法。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mary, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mary, Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. I strongly disapprove of having plastic surgery and the reasons are as follows. To begin with, people don’t always get satisfactory results from plastic surgery. What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life. Personally, it is not the appearance but the inner beauty that matters. You should learn to see the good things about yourself and remember you are unique. I sincerely hope you can love and have confidence in yourself. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的好友Mary对自己的容貌非常不自信，十分苦恼，想去做整容手术，给你来信询问你对整容的看法，请用英文给她写一封回信。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 首先：To begin with→ First of all 更糟糕的是：What’s worse → Worse still 个人看来：Personally→In one’s opinion 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. 拓展句：Because I know you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion. 【高分句型】 1. Knowing that you are upset about your appearance and have a desire for plastic surgery, I’m writing to share with you my opinion.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 2. What’s worse, plastic surgery can be so dangerous that patients may suffer endless pains after failed plastic surgery or even die during operations, which may stop them from returning to a normal life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 (25-26高一上·湖南湘潭·阶段检测)青少年的容貌焦虑已经影响到日常的生活和学习了，尤其是过度节食减肥，对青少年的身体有许多危害。请你就青少年的这种行为展开写作。 内容包括：1. 过度节食减肥的不良后果； 2. 你的建议； 3. 启示(内在美更重要)。 要求：词数100左右。适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The issue of appearance anxiety among teenagers has reached alarming levels, significantly impacting their daily lives and academics, particularly through extreme dieting for weight loss. Such behaviors pose numerous health risks. Firstly, excessive dieting can lead to malnutrition, weakened immune systems, and even disorders like anorexia or bulimia. Moreover, it disrupts the natural growth process, potentially causing irreversible damage to vital organs and bones. My advice to these teenagers is to adopt a balanced diet and take regular exercise. It’s crucial to cultivate a positive body image and understand that beauty is diverse and subjective. Ultimately, this phenomenon serves as a reminder that inner beauty holds far greater significance. Encouraging self-love, confidence, and personal growth fosters a healthier mindset and contributes to overall well-being. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文范畴的写作。要求考生写短文说明过度节食减肥的不良后果，给出建议以及启示内在美更重要。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 导致：lead to→contribute to 重要：crucial→vital 最后：ultimately→finally 建议：advice→suggestion 2. 句式拓展 原 句：My advice to these teenagers is to adopt a balanced diet and take regular exercise. 拓展句：It is recommended that teenagers adopt a balanced diet and take regular exercise. 【高分句型】 1. It’s crucial to cultivate a positive body image and understand that beauty is diverse and subjective. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 2. My advice to these teenagers is to adopt a balanced diet and regular exercise. (运用了不定式作表语) 【<原创>新素材·涉及以上四大话题】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信，想了解中国高中生如何处理成长中的一些问题。请你给他写封回信，回答他的有关问题。 内容包括：1. 学校生活：在校积极参加各种活动，……； 2. 维护友谊：遇到同学的误解或同学间的冲突时，……； 3. 亲子关系：面对与父母的分歧时，……； 4. 身心健康：面对外貌焦虑时，……。 注意：词数100左右。开头句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, You wrote to ask how we Chinese senior high school students deal with some problems in our growth. Here are some of our ways. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, You wrote to ask how we Chinese senior high school students deal with some problems in our growth. Here are some of our ways. At school, we take an active part in various activities to reduce stress, develop our abilities and realize our potential. As for friendship, whenever misunderstandings or conflicts come up between classmates, we choose to communicate patiently rather than argue. This helps us clear up disagreements and keep up our friendship. If we have different opinions from our parents, we try to put ourselves in their shoes and sort out problems patiently. Besides, faced with appearance anxiety, we focus on our inner qualities. We try to accept who we are and build up our confidence. Growing up means constantly dealing with troubles. We learn how to rise to them and keep a positive attitude. I hope my reply will be of help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文(书信类)写作。假定你是李华，英国笔友Peter来信，想要了解中国高中生如何处理成长中所遇到的难题，需要你写一封回信给他进行答复。写作时要围绕学校生活、朋友交往、亲子沟通与身心健康四个方面展开叙述；收尾分享成长感悟，希望回信能对Peter有所帮助。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 参加：take part in→participate in 出现：come up→arise 维护/维持：keep up→maintain 建立：build up→establish 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Besides, faced with appearance anxiety, we focus on our inner qualities. 拓展句：Besides, when we are faced with appearance anxiety, we focus on our inner qualities. 【高分句型】 1. As for friendship, whenever misunderstandings or conflicts come up between classmates, we choose to communicate patiently rather than argue. (运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句) 2. Besides, faced with appearance anxiety, we focus on our inner qualities. (运用了过去分词短语作状语) 2 / 24 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $