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以诗会友,邀聚江城
——武汉专版高三一轮邀请信复习讲义
一、考情透视与备考策略
(一)什么是邀请信
邀请信是就某项活动向对方发出正式邀请的应用文,核心是说清“邀请谁、做什么、何时何地、为什么邀请对方”。高考中收信人多为外教、专家或朋友,活动多与校园文化、学术交流相关,邀请外教/专家须用正式委婉语气。
(二)高考考情
2022年新高考全国Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷考查邀请信:校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”负责人李华邀请外教Caroline做一次访谈,要点含节目介绍和访谈时间话题。邀请信轮考概率高,常与“文化交流”“校园活动”“学术讲座”结合,活动信息完整和语气得体是两大得分关键。
(三)评分标准(第五档13—15分)
① 覆盖所有内容要点 ② 应用较多语法结构和词汇 ③ 小错误为使用复杂结构所致 ④ 衔接紧凑 ⑤ 完全达到写作目的
(四)考查重点与失分点
【考查重点】活动信息完整(时间地点内容)、邀请理由具体、语气正式委婉、格式规范。
【失分重灾区】只说“请来参加”不说细节;时间地点遗漏或不具体;对长辈/外教语气太随便(You should come);邀请理由空洞(because you are famous);活动内容一笔带过。
二、邀请信写作四步法
Step 1 审题
圈出活动名称、时间、地点、邀请对象身份、要点数量——一个都不能漏。邀请外教/专家用正式语气,邀请朋友可稍轻松。
Step 2 构思(三段式)
开头:说明邀请事由+活动基本信息 → 主体:活动具体内容+时间地点+邀请对方的理由 → 结尾:期待回复+联系方式
Step 3 行文
用强调句、过去分词作定语、倒装句提升语言档次;时间地点用介词短语紧凑表达。
Step 4 检查(四查)
查活动信息是否完整→查语气是否得体→查字数(70—100)→查格式(称呼落款)
三、核心词块库(30个·按邀请信功能分段)
(一)开篇:表明身份+发出邀请(10个)
【基础版·5个】
1. I am writing to invite you to... 我写信邀请你……
2. It would be our great honor if you could... 如能……将是我们莫大的荣幸
3. We are planning to hold... and would like to invite you. 我们计划举办……,想邀请你
4. I wonder if you would be interested in... 不知你是否对……感兴趣
5. You are warmly welcome to... 热烈欢迎你……
【升级版·5个】
6. As the organizer of..., I take great pleasure in inviting you to... 作为……的组织者,我非常高兴邀请你……
7. Would you be so kind as to honor us with your presence at...? 您能否莅临……?
8. Given your deep connection to Wuhan's literary scene, we would be thrilled if you could... 鉴于您与武汉文坛的深厚渊源,如能……我们将非常激动
9. On behalf of the Wuhan Youth Poetry Society, I cordially invite you to... 我谨代表武汉青年诗歌协会诚挚邀请您……
10. It is with both excitement and humility that I extend this invitation to... 我怀着激动与谦卑之情向您发出……的邀请
(二)正文:活动详情+邀请理由(10个)
【基础版·5个】
11. The event will take place at... on... 活动将于……在……举行
12. It will run from... to..., lasting about... 将于……到……进行,持续约……
13. During the event, we will... 活动期间我们将……
14. We would appreciate it if you could... 如能……我们将不胜感激
15. The reason for our invitation is that... 我们邀请您的原因是……
【升级版·5个】
16. The event, themed “...”, aims to bring together... 本次活动以“……”为主题,旨在汇聚……
17. Set against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower, the festival will feature... 在黄鹤楼的映衬下,诗歌节将包括……
18. What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that... 您的参与不可替代的原因是……
19. Not only will..., but participants will also... 不仅能……,参与者还能……
20. Your expertise in... would greatly enrich our discussion of... 您在……方面的专长将极大丰富我们对……的讨论
(三)结尾:期待回复+联系方式(10个)
【基础版·5个】
21. Please let me know if you can attend. 如能出席请告知
22. We are looking forward to your reply. 期待你的回复
23. I do hope you can make it. 真希望你能来
24. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. 如有问题请随时联系我
25. We can't wait to see you there! 我们迫不及待想在那里见到你!
【升级版·5个】
26. Should you be able to attend, please reach me at... by... 如能出席,请在……前通过……联系我
27. I would be grateful if you could confirm your availability at your earliest convenience. 如能尽早确认您是否方便,我将不胜感激
28. We would be absolutely delighted to have you join us. 有您参加我们将非常高兴
29. Please do not hesitate to let me know should you require further details. 如需更多详情请随时告知
30. Your presence would make this event truly memorable for all involved. 您的出席将让这次活动对所有参与者来说真正难忘
(四)易错警示
① 邀请外教/专家用正式委婉语气,别用You should come.太生硬;
② 时间地点必须写全且具体,只说next week会扣分;
③ 邀请理由要具体到对方的专长/作品与活动的关联,不能只说because you are famous;
④ on behalf of后接组织名称,不接人;
⑤ 邀请朋友可稍轻松,但邀请专家必须用Yours sincerely等正式落款。
四、核心句型库(10个·通用例句+武汉迁移+仿写)
句型1:As the organizer of..., I take great pleasure in inviting you to...(身份表明·正式开篇)
【通用】As the organizer of the school art festival, I take great pleasure in inviting you to be our guest speaker. 作为学校艺术节的组织者,我非常高兴邀请您担任我们的嘉宾演讲者。
【迁移】As the coordinator of the Wuhan International Poetry Festival, I take great pleasure in inviting you to read from your latest collection by the East Lake. 作为武汉国际诗歌节的协调人,我非常高兴邀请您在东湖边朗诵您的最新诗集。
[仿写] As the ______ (organize) of the English speech contest, I take great pleasure in inviting you to be our judge.
句型2:The event, themed “...”, aims to bring together...(同位语·活动介绍)
【通用】The event, themed “Green Future”, aims to bring together students passionate about environmental protection. 本次活动以“绿色未来”为主题,旨在汇聚热爱环保的学生。
【迁移】The event, themed “Poems Where the Rivers Meet”, aims to bring together poets from Wuhan and beyond to celebrate the city's literary heritage. 本次活动以“两江交汇处的诗篇”为主题,旨在汇聚武汉及外地诗人颂扬这座城市的文学遗产。
[仿写] The event, themed “______”, aims to ______ (bring) together students interested in Chinese culture.
句型3:Set against the backdrop of..., the event will feature...(场景融入·活动详情)
【通用】Set against the backdrop of the ancient castle, the concert will feature performances by local musicians. 在古堡的映衬下,音乐会将包括当地音乐家的表演。
【迁移】Set against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower at sunset, the poetry reading will feature works by Cui Hao and Li Bai, both of whom wrote about this very spot. 在夕阳下黄鹤楼的映衬下,诗歌朗诵将包括崔颢和李白的作品,他们都曾写过这个地方。
[仿写] Set against the backdrop of ______, the event will feature ______.
句型4:Given your..., we would be honored if you could...(原因状语·邀请理由)
【通用】Given your research on renewable energy, we would be honored if you could give the keynote speech. 鉴于您在可再生能源方面的研究,如能做主旨演讲我们深感荣幸。
【迁移】Given your translations of Tang dynasty poetry and your love for Wuhan, we would be honored if you could share how the city has shaped your understanding of Chinese literature. 鉴于您对唐诗的翻译和对武汉的热爱,如能分享这座城市如何塑造了您对中国文学的理解,我们深感荣幸。
[仿写] Given your ______ (expert) in modern art, we would be honored if you could join us.
句型5:What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that...(主语从句·邀请理由)
【通用】What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that you have mentored so many young writers in our community. 您的参与不可替代的原因是您指导了我们社区如此多的年轻作者。
【迁移】What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that your book “East Lake at Dawn” introduced Wuhan's beauty to readers across the English-speaking world. 您的参与不可替代的原因是您的著作《黎明的东湖》把武汉之美介绍给了英语世界的读者。
[仿写] What makes your ______ (involve) irreplaceable is that ______.
句型6:Not only will..., but participants will also...(倒装·活动意义)
【通用】Not only will the workshop improve our writing skills, but participants will also receive personalized feedback. 工作坊不仅能提高我们的写作技巧,参与者还能获得个性化反馈。
【迁移】Not only will the festival celebrate the power of words, but participants will also walk away with a deeper connection to Wuhan's 3,500-year history. 诗歌节不仅能颂扬文字的力量,参与者还将带着与武汉3500年历史更深的联系离开。
[仿写] Not only ______ (will) the activity enrich our campus life, but it will also build our confidence.
句型7:Would you be so kind as to...?(委婉正式·具体请求)
【通用】Would you be so kind as to deliver a 30-minute talk on your writing process? 您能否做一个30分钟关于您写作过程的演讲?
【迁移】Would you be so kind as to lead a 45-minute workshop on translating Chinese poetry, using the Yellow Crane Tower poems as our starting point? 您能否主持一个45分钟的中国诗歌翻译工作坊,以黄鹤楼诗歌为起点?
[仿写] Would you be so kind as ______ (give) us a lecture on Western poetry?
句型8:On behalf of..., I cordially invite you to...(代表邀请·正式开头)
【通用】On behalf of the Student Union, I cordially invite you to our annual graduation ceremony. 我谨代表学生会诚挚邀请您参加我们的年度毕业典礼。
【迁移】On behalf of the Wuhan No. 2 High School Literature Club, I cordially invite you to be our guest of honor at the annual “Spring Poetry Night” by the Yangtze River. 我谨代表武汉二中文学社诚挚邀请您担任一年一度长江边“春之诗夜”的贵宾。
[仿写] On behalf of our class, I cordially invite you ______ (attend) our New Year party.
句型9:Should you be able to attend, please reach me at... by...(倒装省略if·结尾)
【通用】Should you be able to attend, please reach me at the email below by next Friday. 如能出席,请在下周五前通过下方邮箱联系我。
【迁移】Should you be able to attend, please reach me at lihua@wh2hs.edu.cn by March 15th so we can arrange your transport from the airport. 如能出席,请在3月15日前通过lihua@wh2hs.edu.cn联系我,以便我们安排您从机场的接送。
[仿写] Should you ______ (be) able to come, please contact me at your earliest convenience.
句型10:Your presence would make this event truly memorable for...(恭维·结尾)
【通用】Your presence would make this event truly memorable for everyone in attendance. 您的出席将让这次活动对每个出席者来说真正难忘。
【迁移】Your presence would make this event truly memorable for our students, many of whom have read your translations of Wuhan-themed poems since junior high. 您的出席将让这次活动对我们的学生来说真正难忘,他们中许多人从初中起就读过您翻译的武汉主题诗歌。
[仿写] Your presence would make this event truly ______ (memory) for all of us.
五、小试牛刀·词句迁移训练
(一)词块填空
1. As the ______ (organize) of the festival, I take great pleasure in inviting you.
2. The event, ______ (theme) “Rivers and Poems”, aims to bring together poets.
3. ______ (set) against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower, the reading will feature classic poems.
4. Given your ______ (expert) in Tang poetry, we would be honored if you could speak.
5. What makes your ______ (involve) irreplaceable is that you know Wuhan so well.
6. Not only ______ (will) the festival celebrate poetry, but it will also promote cultural exchange.
7. Would you be so kind as ______ (lead) a workshop on translation?
8. On behalf of the school Literature Club, I ______ (cordial) invite you.
9. Should you be able to attend, please ______ (confirmation) by Friday.
10. Your ______ (present) would make this event truly memorable.
(二)活动信息补全(用所给句型将散乱信息整合成完整句子)
1. 用The event, themed “...”, aims to...:活动名称“江城诗会”,目的连接中外诗人
2. 用Set against the backdrop of..., the event will feature...:地点黄鹤楼,内容诗歌朗诵和传统音乐
3. 用Scheduled to take place at... on..., the event will...:时间4月20日下午3点,地点东湖绿道,持续2小时
4. 用Given your..., we would be honored if you could...:对方专长是中国现代诗歌,请求做主旨演讲
5. 用Should you be able to attend, please reach me at... by...:邮箱lihua@school.edu.cn,截止日期3月31日
(三)语气得体判断(判断以下句子是否适合邀请外教/专家,不合适的请修改)
1. You should come to our event.
2. It would be our great honor if you could join us.
3. Come on, it'll be fun!
4. We would be thrilled if you could grace us with your presence.
5. I want you to be there.
(四)单句翻译
1. 作为武汉国际诗歌节的协调人,我非常高兴邀请您在东湖边朗诵您的最新诗集。(As the organizer of...)
2. 本次活动以“两江交汇处的诗篇”为主题,旨在汇聚武汉及外地诗人。(themed)
3. 在夕阳下黄鹤楼的映衬下,诗歌朗诵将包括崔颢和李白的作品。(Set against the backdrop of...)
4. 您的参与不可替代的原因是您的著作把武汉之美介绍给了英语世界。(What makes...irreplaceable is that...)
5. 如能出席,请在3月15日前通过邮箱联系我以便安排接送。(Should you be able to attend...)
六、实战写作·分层训练
任务A(中等层)邀请外教参加校园诗歌节
【题目】
假定你是李华,你校英语社将举办“春日诗会”。请给外教Ms. Smith写邮件邀请她参加,内容包括:①活动时间地点(4月12日下午3点,学校报告厅)②活动内容(诗歌朗诵、学生原创作品分享、外教点评)③邀请她朗诵一首英文诗的理由。词数80左右。
【审题】
体裁:邀请信;称呼落款;时态:一般现在/将来时;要点:时间地点→活动内容→邀请理由→期待回复;语气:对外教用正式但不生硬
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Smith,
As the coordinator of our school's English Club, I take great pleasure in inviting you to our annual “Spring Poetry Night”, which will take place in the school lecture hall on April 12th, from 3 to 5 p.m.
The event, themed “Voices of Spring”, aims to bring together students who love poetry. During the evening, we will have recitations of classic English poems, a sharing session for original student work, and a guest commentary segment. We would be honored if you could read one of your favorite poems, because your expressive reading style and deep understanding of poetic rhythm would inspire our students to engage with literature more actively.
Should you be able to attend, please let me know by April 5th. We would be absolutely delighted to have you with us.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
任务B(高层)邀请诗人担任黄鹤楼诗歌节评委
【题目】
假定你是李华,武汉中学生文学联盟将举办“黄鹤楼杯”青少年诗歌大赛。请给著名诗人兼翻译家Mr. Taylor写邮件邀请他担任评委,内容包括:①比赛时间地点(5月18日上午9点,黄鹤楼公园诗苑)②比赛规模和内容(来自15所学校的60名选手,朗诵原创诗歌)③邀请他的理由(具体到他的作品与武汉的关联)。词数80左右。
【审题】
要点:比赛信息→规模内容→邀请理由;高分策略:身份表明开头+场景融入活动详情+主语从句说理由+倒装结尾;语气:对著名诗人用正式委婉
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Taylor,
On behalf of the Wuhan Secondary School Literature Alliance, I cordially invite you to serve as a judge for our “Yellow Crane Tower Cup” Youth Poetry Competition.
Set against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower itself, the contest will take place in the park's poetry garden on May 18th, from 9 a.m. to 12 p.m. Sixty contestants from 15 schools will recite original works inspired by Wuhan's rivers, bridges, and seasons. What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that your translation of Cui Hao's “Yellow Crane Tower” has been the textbook for many of our students, and your insights would help them see how local themes resonate globally.
Should you be able to attend, please reach me at lihua@whliterature.org by May 1st so we can arrange your visit. Your presence would make this event truly memorable for our young poets.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【亮点提炼·可迁移】
① As the coordinator/On behalf of...身份表明,正式得体;② Set against the backdrop of...场景融入,一句话含地点和氛围;③ What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that...主语从句说理由,具体到对方作品与武汉的关联;④ Should you be able to attend...倒装结尾,正式委婉;⑤ 活动信息(时间、地点、规模、内容)完整紧凑。
任务C(巩固练习)邀请朋友参加昙华林诗歌沙龙
【题目】
假定你是李华,你校英文社将在昙华林举办一场户外诗歌沙龙。请给你的英国朋友Chris写邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:①时间地点(本周六下午2点,昙华林老街咖啡馆外)②活动内容(读诗、分享创作、长江边散步)③需要他准备的东西(一首喜欢的诗)。词数80左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to invite you to an outdoor poetry salon our English Club is hosting this Saturday at Tan Hualin, the old artistic street near Wuchang.
We'll meet at 2 p.m. outside the café at the entrance, spend about an hour reading poems and sharing our own writing, then take a slow walk down to the Yangtze River to watch the sunset. It would be great if you could bring one poem you love—either in English or Chinese—and tell us briefly why it matters to you. No pressure to perform, just come and enjoy the afternoon.
Let me know if you can make it by Friday evening. Looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
【当堂写作】
中等层:用任务A的框架完成一篇邀请外教的邮件;高层:参考任务B,至少用3个高级表达完成一篇邀请专家的邮件。80词左右。
七、答案与解析
(一)句型仿写答案
句型1【答案】organizer 【解析】the后接名词,organizer组织者
句型2【答案】bring 【解析】aim to后接动词原形
句型3【答案】开放题,合理即可 【解析】Set against the backdrop of后接地点名词
句型4【答案】expertise 【解析】your后接名词,expertise专长
句型5【答案】involvement 【解析】your后接名词,involvement参与
句型6【答案】will 【解析】Not only句首部分倒装,助动词will提前
句型7【答案】to give 【解析】be so kind as to do sth.委婉请求
句型8【答案】to attend 【解析】invite sb. to do sth.
句型9【答案】be 【解析】Should you be...=If you should be...倒装省略if
句型10【答案】memorable 【解析】make sth.+adj.,memorable难忘的
(二)词块填空答案
1.【答案】organizer 【解析】the后接名词,organizer组织者
2.【答案】themed 【解析】过去分词作后置定语,表“以……为主题”
3.【答案】Set 【解析】过去分词作状语,表“以……为背景”,句首大写
4.【答案】expertise 【解析】your后接名词,expertise专长
5.【答案】involvement 【解析】your后接名词,involvement参与
6.【答案】will 【解析】Not only句首部分倒装,助动词提前
7.【答案】to lead 【解析】be so kind as to do sth.
8.【答案】cordially 【解析】副词修饰动词invite
9.【答案】confirm 【解析】祈使句用动词原形
10.【答案】presence 【解析】your后接名词,presence出席
(三)活动信息补全参考答案
1. The event, themed “Jiangcheng Poetry Gathering”, aims to bring together Chinese and foreign poets.
2. Set against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower, the event will feature poetry readings and traditional music.
3. Scheduled to take place at the East Lake Greenway at 3 p.m. on April 20th, the event will last about two hours.
4. Given your expertise in modern Chinese poetry, we would be honored if you could deliver a keynote speech.
5. Should you be able to attend, please reach me at lihua@school.edu.cn by March 31st.
(四)语气得体判断参考答案
1. 不合适,太生硬。改为:We would be honored if you could attend our event.
2. 合适。
3. 不合适,太随意,不适合邀请专家。改为:We would be delighted if you could join us.
4. 合适。
5. 不合适,太直接。改为:I would greatly appreciate your presence at our event.
(五)单句翻译参考答案
1. As the coordinator of the Wuhan International Poetry Festival, I take great pleasure in inviting you to read from your latest collection by the East Lake.
2. The event, themed “Poems Where the Rivers Meet”, aims to bring together poets from Wuhan and beyond.
3. Set against the backdrop of the Yellow Crane Tower at sunset, the poetry reading will feature works by Cui Hao and Li Bai.
4. What makes your involvement irreplaceable is that your book introduced Wuhan's beauty to readers across the English-speaking world.
5. Should you be able to attend, please reach me by email before March 15th so we can arrange your transport.
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