摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点,以邀请信为专题,对接高考对内容完整性、语言得体性及逻辑连贯性的考查要求。知识点按“热情开场—具体介绍—赞美期待”三步法架构,通过考点梳理(学生常见错误分析)、方法指导(积极词汇与高级句型应用)、真题训练(2022年新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷真题范文精讲)等环节,帮助学生构建邀请信写作的系统框架,突破表达生硬、内容空泛等难点。
资料特色在于创新性结构化写作策略与实战化训练设计,如通过“普通词与有温度词对比替换”活动提升语言能力,借助“框架填空+万能模板”培养思维品质,助力学生快速掌握高分表达。分层训练(从填空到独立写作)保障复习效果,为教师提供清晰教学路径,有效提升学生应考能力,精准把控复习节奏。
内容正文:
邀请信写作:让对方无法拒绝的温度
——以2022年新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷"邀请外教做访谈"为例
一、原题
假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
词数80左右。
二、动笔前想清楚
邀请信和建议信正好相反——建议信是给别人提意见,要委婉;邀请信是请别人帮忙,要热情。写得太冷淡,对方不想来;写得太夸张,又显得假。
学生常犯的错就三个:只说邀请不说为什么选你;节目介绍太泛,等于没说;时间话题写得太随意,不具体。
三、邀请信写好就三步
邀请信看着简单,写好就三步,每一步都不能少:
第一步:热情开场,说明来意
别绕弯子,第一句就说"我是谁,我邀请你做什么"。但要带温度,用I'm writing to invite you... It would be our honor if...
I'm Li Hua, who is in charge of... I'm writing to invite you to be our guest.
第二步:具体介绍,让对方清楚
节目是什么、什么时候播、聊什么话题,说具体。别写"涵盖各种话题",要写"每周五下午播出,主要聊校园生活和英语学习"。
Our program airs every Friday afternoon, focusing on campus life and English learning.
第三步:赞美对方,表达期待
这是最关键的一步——说清楚"为什么选你"。对方感受到被重视,才会愿意来。
As your classes are always lively and inspiring, you are exactly the person our students are eager to hear from.
最后加一句"如果时间不方便可以调整",显得体贴。
四、邀请信专用积极词
功能
词汇/短语
例句
表达荣幸
It would be our honor to...
It would be our honor to have you here.
表达期待
We are eager to... / Looking forward to...
We are eager to hear your stories.
赞美对方
lively, inspiring, knowledgeable, popular
Your classes are always lively and inspiring.
表达诚意
sincerely, genuinely, would be delighted
We would be delighted if you could join us.
时间灵活
If this time doesn't work, we can...
If this time doesn't work, we can arrange another.
五、范文(正好110词)
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua, who is in charge of the English broadcast program "Talk and Talk". I'm writing to invite you to be our guest in an upcoming interview.
Our program airs every Friday afternoon, focusing on campus life and English learning. It has become quite popular among students since it started. We would be honored if you could join us this Friday at 4 p.m. to talk about how to stay motivated when learning English. As your classes are always lively and inspiring, you are exactly the person our students are eager to hear from.
Please let me know if this time works for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【三步法对应】热情开场=I'm writing to invite you...;具体介绍=airs every Friday... focusing on... this Friday at 4 p.m.;赞美期待=As your classes are... you are exactly the person... eager to hear from.
六、这篇范文里值得学的
词:普通词换成有温度的词
普通表达
范文用的词
为什么好
I want to invite you
I'm writing to invite you to be our guest
be our guest比invite you更有诚意
the program is popular
It has become quite popular among students
用现在完成时,强调"越来越受欢迎"
you are good
you are exactly the person our students are eager to hear from
exactly和eager to hear from比good更真诚
tell me if you can come
Please let me know if this time works for you
works for you比can come更体贴
very interesting
lively and inspiring
两个形容词比一个very interesting更具体
句:三个高级结构背下来
① 定语从句:who is in charge of... 补充说明身份,比直接说I'm in charge of更自然
② 现在分词作伴随:focusing on campus life... = and it focuses on...
③ As引导原因状语从句:As your classes are always lively and inspiring = Because your classes...
七、让对方无法拒绝的三个技巧
邀请信写得好,对方看完就想答应。怎么做到?记住这三招:
第一招:说清楚"为什么选你"
别只说"我们邀请你",要说"因为你的课很有趣,学生都喜欢你,所以我们特别想邀请你"。对方感受到被重视,拒绝的话就不好意思说了。
As your classes are always lively and inspiring, you are exactly the person our students are eager to hear from.
第二招:说清楚"你能得到什么"
邀请不是只让对方付出,也要让对方知道这是有意义的。比如"学生们很期待听到你的故事""这是一个分享你的见解的好机会"。
It would be a great chance to share your insights with our students.
第三招:时间留余地
别把话说死,"就这个时间,你来不来"。要说"如果这个时间不方便,我们可以调整"。对方感到被尊重,反而更愿意配合。
If this time doesn't work for you, we can always arrange another slot.
八、框架填空:先自己填,再对照范文
题目:你校英语社团将举办英语演讲比赛,请给外教Mr. Smith写邮件邀请他担任评委。内容包括:1.比赛介绍;2.时间和地点。词数80左右。
先填框架:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, ______ (身份). I'm writing to invite you to ______ (邀请做什么).
The contest ______ (比赛介绍). It will be held ______ (时间地点). We would be honored if you could ______ (具体邀请). As ______ (为什么选你), you are exactly the person we need.
Please let me know if ______ (时间是否合适). Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, president of the English Club. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our upcoming English speech contest.
The contest, which focuses on environmental protection, will be held in the school hall next Friday at 2 p.m. We would be honored if you could share your expertise with our students. As you are widely respected for your inspiring lectures, you are exactly the person we need.
Please let me know if this time works for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
九、邀请信万能模板
适用:邀请老师、外教、嘉宾参加活动、比赛、访谈、讲座等。语气要热情、有诚意。
Dear ______,
I'm ______ (身份). I'm writing to invite you to ______ (邀请做什么).
______ (活动介绍). It will be held ______ (时间地点). We would be honored if you could ______ (具体邀请). As ______ (为什么选你), you are exactly the person ______ (我们需要/学生期待).
Please let me know if this time works for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I'm writing to invite you to...、We would be honored if...、you are exactly the person...、if this time works for you这几个结构是固定的,别换。横线处根据题目填。
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