内容正文:
考前押题10 书面表达3大常考话题15篇
(福建联考真题)
话题1 工作与职业
话题2 传统工艺
话题3 运动与健康
1.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)习近平总书记曾到清华大学考察时寄语广大青少年要“立大志、明大德、成大才、担大任”。你们学校英语社团正在开展以“My Dream Job”为主题的英文征文活动,请你认真阅读以下提示,并按要求用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现真实姓名和地名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。 (开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Everyone has his or her own dream job, and my dream job is...
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【答案】例文:
Everyone has his or her own dream job, and my dream job is to be a doctor.
When I was a child, I once saw a doctor save a sick old man. From then on, I dreamed of becoming a doctor. I want to help sick people and make them healthy and happy again. I also want to bring hope to their families.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard and learn science well. I will also read more books about medicine. Besides, I will do exercise every day to keep healthy. I believe my dream will come true one day if I never give up.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文 (介绍自己的理想职业),以一般现在时、一般将来时和一般过去时为主
明确要点:
你的理想工作是什么
你什么时候梦想成为……
你为什么想做这份工作
你将如何实现你的梦想
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得出现真实信息;开头已给出;词数80左右,不包含已给出部分
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出部分,引出理想职业
主体段:
第一层:说明理想职业是什么以及何时产生的
第二层:解释想从事这份工作的原因
结尾段:说明将如何实现梦想,并表达决心和期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:理想职业是什么及何时产生
可选职业:teacher/doctor/engineer/scientist/writer/lawyer/police officer/pilot/dancer/singer/artist/volunteer等
常用表达:I have dreamed of becoming a...since I was.../When I was...years old, I decided to be a.../I first became interested in...when...等
要点二:为什么想做这份工作
原因可选:help others/save lives/make people happy/be interested in.../be good at.../be inspired by.../be influenced by someone/bring joy to others/make a difference等
常用表达:
I want to do this job because.../The reason is that.../I am deeply interested in.../I want to help people who.../I hope to make a contribution to...等
要点三:如何实现梦想
To make my dream come true, I will.../I plan to study hard and.../First, I will...Second, I will.../I will keep learning and practicing.../I believe I can make it if I never give up.等
2.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测)假如你是张华,某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动,请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容,写一篇英语短文向报刊主编Amanda投稿。
参考词汇:help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on…
要求:
1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于80词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
My dream job is to be a doctor in the future. I want to do this job because it is great and meaningful. I hope to help sick people get well and live a happy life. I am a patient and caring person and I often help people when they are in need. I do well in science and I have learned some useful first-aid skills. I will study hard and keep reading books about medicine.
I believe my wonderful dream will come true one day.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信),一般现在时和一般将来时
明确要点:梦想职业、选择该职业的原因、自身具备的品质或能力、实现梦想的计划
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:1. 可选用参考词汇,也可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4. 词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,引出自己的梦想职业(题干已给出开头)
主体段:介绍梦想职业,说明选择理由、自身品质与能力
结尾段:讲述实现梦想的行动,表达对梦想成真的期盼
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:梦想职业
职业选择:doctor/teacher/police/artist/scientist/reporter等
理由描述:great and meaningful/help people/interesting/wonderful/useful/challenging等
要点二:个人品质与能力
品质词汇:patient, caring, hard‑working, brave, confident, active等
能力:do well in…/learn some skills/be good at…/have much knowledge等
要点三:实现梦想的办法
行动:study hard, keep on reading books, learn more knowledge, take more courses, practice more等
3.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)每个人都有梦想,你的梦想是什么呢?请用英语写一篇短文,谈论一下你的理想职业及你选择这份职业的原因,再谈谈你会为之付出怎样的努力。词数75左右。
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:a sense of achievement 成就感
I want to be a ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
I want to be a teacher. I choose this job because I love children and enjoy sharing knowledge. When I help others learn, I feel a strong sense of achievement. Also, teachers can make a difference in students’ lives.
To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard and read more books. I’ll also learn how to communicate with others patiently.
I believe if I keep trying, I can become a good teacher. I’ll never give up my dream.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时(说明理想和原因)和一般将来时(描述努力计划)
明确要点:理想职业(老师)、选择原因(喜欢孩子、享受分享知识、帮助他人学习有成就感、老师能改变学生生活)、努力计划(努力学习、多读书、学会耐心与人沟通)、信念(坚持就能成为好老师,永不放弃梦想)
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:需包含所有要点,词数75左右,不得出现真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
第一段:点明理想职业并说明选择原因
第二段:阐述为实现梦想将付出的努力
第三段:表达信念和决心
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:理想职业
职业:a teacher/a doctor/a nurse/a pilot等
要点二:选择原因
原因一:love children and enjoy sharing knowledge/enjoy working with young people and passing on what I know/want to help others/love the blue sky等
原因二:feel a strong sense of achievement/feel proud when helping others learn/bring health and hope to patients等
原因三:teachers can make a difference in students’ lives/teachers have a great influence on students/make our world better等
要点三:努力计划
计划一:study hard and read more books/work hard at school and gain more knowledge等
计划二:learn how to communicate with others patiently/develop good communication skills and patience等
要点四:信念与决心
信念:if I keep trying, I can become a good teacher/I believe hard work will lead to success等
决心:never give up my dream/keep working towards my goal等
4.(25-26八年级上·福建宁德·期中)作为青少年,我们应该树立强国有我的远大志向,勇担民族复兴的时代大任。一份理想的职业正是践行这份担当的舞台。假如你是李华,你班正在开展主题为My Dream Job的演讲活动,鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。词数80左右。写作提示:
What’s your dream job?
a vet
Why is it your dream job?
kind and helpful
love animals
What will you do to get your dream job?
study hard
learn more about animals
go to an animal medical school
参考短语:to make it come true, not easy to do, try my best
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to give a speech here. My dream job is to be a vet.
I’m kind and helpful. I love animals and I keep a pet dog at home. To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard at school. At the same time, I’ll read more books and learn more about animals. Also, I’ll go to an animal medical school to get more experience.
I know it’s not easy to be a vet, but I will try my best to make it happen.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英语演讲稿,以一般现在时、一般将来时为主
明确要点:理想职业为兽医、选择兽医的原因、实现梦想的具体做法
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:文中仅使用李华,不透露真实姓名、学校名称,词数80左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:打招呼自我介绍,点明自己的理想职业
主体段:先说明选择兽医作为职业理想的缘由,再罗列实现理想的各类做法
结尾段:表明追梦过程充满困难,但自己会全力以赴完成目标
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:理想职业
职业选择:a vet/My dream job is to be a vet.等
要点二:选择这份职业的原因
自身特质:kind and helpful/warm-hearted/I am kind and helpful, warm-hearted等
个人喜好:love animals/I love animals and I keep a pet dog at home等
要点三:实现梦想的行动
具体做法:study hard/I’ll study hard at school/learn more about animals/I’ll read more books and learn more about animals/go to an animal medical school/I’ll go to an animal medical school to get more experience/take part in animal volunteer activities/I’ll take part in animal volunteer activities in my free time等
5.(26-27八年级上·福建莆田·阶段检测)糖画是中国古老的民间艺术,有几百年历史。请以“My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的梦想职业。
内容要点:
1.为什么想成为一名糖画老师;
2.你打算怎样实现梦想;
3.你对未来的期待。
要求:
1.词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;
3.行文连贯,表达准确。
4.提示词:hundreds of years, reason, fall in love, learn, practise, teach, pass down
My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher
Sugar painting is a traditional Chinese folk art.
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【答案】
My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher Sugar painting is a traditional Chinese folk art. It has a history of hundreds of years. My dream job is to be a sugar painting teacher.
The reason is that I fell in love with it when I was young. It is not only beautiful but also delicious. It carries our wonderful Chinese culture. To achieve my dream, I plan to learn from masters and practise hard every day. I will also study art knowledge carefully.
In the future, I expect to teach more students. I hope I can pass down this great art to the world. I believe traditional culture will be popular again.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,一般现在时、一般将来时和一般过去时相结合
明确要点:为什么想成为糖画老师,打算怎样实现梦想,对未来的期待
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:引出糖画以及自己的梦想职业
主体段:说明喜欢糖画的缘由、讲述自己实现梦想的行动计划
结尾段:展望未来,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:为什么想成为糖画老师
喜爱缘由:not only beautiful but also delicious/sweet taste/rich cultural meaning等
要点二:打算怎样实现梦想
行动规划:learn from masters/visit folk artists on weekends/take art classes等
要点三:对未来的期待
未来打算:teach more students/hold shows for visitors/make sugar‑painting for kids等
6.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友肖恩对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语写一封邮件向肖恩介绍你最喜欢的中国民间艺术。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sean,
I hope you are doing well. I’m happy to share my favourite Chinese folk art with you—____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Sean,
I hope you are doing well. I’m happy to share my favourite Chinese folk art with you—Chinese New Year paintings.
Chinese people like putting New Year paintings up to celebrate the Spring Festival. In Chinese culture, we think these paintings can bring good luck. These paintings are my favourite because they are colorful and full of joy. On New Year’s Eve, I always help my parents put up New Year paintings at home. By learning this art, I not only learn more about Chinese culture but also improve my drawing skills.
I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一封电子邮件;
②时态:文章时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:向肖恩介绍你最喜欢的中国民间艺术,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候,说明自己最喜欢的中国民间艺术是年画,引出下文;
第二步,介绍年画对于中国文化的意义,以及自己和年画有关的经历,注意用词准确,行文流畅;
第三步,表达期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①good luck好运
②be full of充满
③put up张贴
[高分句型]
①In Chinese culture, we think these paintings can bring good luck.(宾语从句)
②By learning this art, I not only learn more about Chinese culture but also improve my drawing skills.(not only…but also…引导的并列结构)
7.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测) 假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Peter对中国的剪纸很感兴趣。请你根据下面表格的提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这项中国民间艺术。词数80左右。
参考词汇:wedding n. 婚礼;culture n. 文化
History
more than 1,500 years
Materials (材料) and Tools
paper and scissors
Shapes
flowers, animals
Uses
festival or wedding
Meanings
…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. Paper cutting is a very popular Chinese folk art.
It has a history of over 1,500 years. People use scissors and paper to create beautiful and amazing works. The most popular ones are in the shape of flowers, animals and human characters. People often use them at important times like festivals and weddings to express happiness and good wishes. Also, during the Spring Festival, people cut the character “Fu” and hang it upside down on their doors. It is a symbol of good luck.
I think paper cutting is a creative way to show classic Chinese culture. I hope more people around the world can enjoy this wonderful art.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
时态:时态为一般现在时;
提示:需包含表格中所有信息,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
1. 第一步:回应Peter对中国剪纸的兴趣,点明剪纸是流行的中国民间艺术;
2. 第二步:介绍剪纸的历史、制作工具材料、常见造型、使用场景及“福”字剪纸的寓意;
3. 第三步:表达对剪纸的看法,认为它是展现中国经典文化的创意方式,希望更多人欣赏这门艺术。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a symbol of good luck好运的象征
[高分句型]
I think paper cutting is a creative way to show classic Chinese culture. (宾语从句)
8.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)近年来,中国传统艺术已经受到了越来越多人的喜爱,为让更多外国友人了解中国传统艺术,校英语俱乐部开展以“My Favorite Form of Art”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种传统艺术。
写作提示:
1. What’s your favorite form of art?
2. How do you know it?
3. Why do you like it?
4. What’s your hope for it?
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范,90词左右;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名;
4. 禁止摘录试卷阅读部分。
My Favorite Form of Art
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【答案】
例文
My Favorite Form of Art
My favorite traditional art is paper-cutting. I first saw it in a cultural class at school. The teacher showed us how to cut paper into shapes like flowers and animals. I was amazed by its beauty.
I like paper-cutting because it is creative and requires patience. It also tells stories about Chinese culture. For example, red paper-cuts are often used during the Spring Festival to bring good luck.
I hope more people around the world can learn about this art. It is an important part of our culture and should be passed down to future generations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开门见山,说明最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步、介绍如何接触并喜欢上它(学校文化课),以及喜欢的原因;
第三步、表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①require patience需要耐心
②bring good luck带来好运
③pass down传承
[高分句型]
I like paper-cutting because it is creative and requires patience.(because引导原因状语从句)
9.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测)中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时,传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。假如你是李华,在众多的中国传统艺术中,你最喜欢剪纸。请以“Falling in Love with ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你喜欢的传统艺术。
写作要点:
1. What’s your favorite form of art?
2. Why do you like this form of art?
3. What’s your hope for the art?
注意:
1.包含以上信息,可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于80词,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Falling in Love with ________
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【答案】例文
Falling in Love with Paper-cut
My favorite traditional Chinese art is paper-cut. I fell in love with it at the age of 6. My grandmother introduced it to me. I fell in love with it immediately.
I love it for many reasons. First, it helps me be patient and careful. Second, it’s a good way to relax. I forget worries when I’m making it. Third, it keeps my mind active. I’m excited about creating magical paper-cut works. At first, I practiced by making simple things like flowers, but now I’m good at it.
I’m really into paper-cutting. And I hope more people will enjoy it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯,注意写作时需先补充完整题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢这种艺术的原因;
第三步,表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be into对……深感兴趣
③immediately立即
[高分句型]
①I forget worries when I’m making it. (when引导时间状语从句)
②At first, I practiced by making simple things like flowers, but now I’m good at it. (but连接的并列句)
10.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)中国传统文化承载着独特的民族智慧,其中民间手工艺尤为引人注目。假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Henry在邮件中提到对中国传统民间手工艺——糖画充满好奇,想了解它的相关情况。请你根据以下图表提示,用英文给他回一封电子邮件,介绍糖画的历史、呈现形式、文化意义,并表达你的期待。
Chinese Sugar Painting
History: date back to (追溯到) the Ming Dynasty
Form: both sugar and painting;
melted sugar (糖浆);
be made in different shapes like…
Meaning: a symbol of Chinese culture;
carry people’s love for life;
Hope:
…
注意:1. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How are you doing these days? I’m glad to hear you’re interested in the Chinese sugar painting. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
How are you doing these days? I’m glad to hear you’re interested in the Chinese sugar painting. Today, I’d like to share something about it with you.
Sugar painting is a form of traditional Chinese folk handwork. As its name suggests, it is a painting made of sugar. Dating back to the Ming Dynasty, it has a long history. Sugar painting is both sugar and painting, so people can not only watch it but also eat it. It is often made in different shapes like dragons and butterflies. As a symbol of Chinese culture, sugar painting is loved by people of all ages. It also carries Chinese people’s love for life.
I hope it will be passed down in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山表明将介绍中国的糖画;
第二步,从糖画的历史、形状、意义等方面具体介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②a symbol of……的象征
③pass down传承
[高分句型]
①Sugar painting is both sugar and painting, so people can not only watch it but also eat it. (not only…but also...结构)
②I hope it will be passed down in the future. (省略that的宾语从句)
11.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·期中)当今世界, 健康对人们越来越重要。同时, 人们也比以前更加关注健康问题了。假如你是李华, 你们学校准备举办一场关于健康生活的演讲比赛, 请你以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题, 根据以下图示, 写一篇演讲稿。80词左右。
注意事项:
1. 文中须包含所有的要点提示, 可适当发挥, 开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚, 表达通顺, 行文连贯, 书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
Ways to Keep Healthy
As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文:
Ways to Keep Healthy
As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
To start with, keep a balanced diet. We are supposed to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. What’s more, to build a strong body, we need to do exercise regularly every day. Besides, it’s necessary for us to get enough sleep. We should go to bed early and get up early. Last but not least, we had better stay positive. When we feel stressed, we should learn to relax.
In a word, small changes can make a big difference. Let’s take action to live a healthy lifestyle.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿(应用文),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:生活习惯;饮食习惯;锻炼方式;其他保持健康的方法
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:词数80左右(不含开头结尾);不出现真实姓名和校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段(已给):直接点明保持健康的重要性并引出下文的方法
主体段:分四点阐述保持健康的方法
结尾段:总结全文,表达遵循建议后的美好愿景
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:饮食习惯
To start with, keep a balanced diet./We are supposed to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food./First, eating habits are also important./We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.等
要点二:锻炼方式:
What’s more, to build a strong body, we need to do exercise regularly every day./Second, doing exercise is a good choice./We can do morning exercises or play ball games after class.等
要点三:生活习惯:
Besides, it’s necessary for us to get enough sleep./We should go to bed early and get up early./Third, we should have good living habits./It’s necessary to go to bed early and get up early every day.等
要点四:其他方法
Last but not least, we had better stay positive./When we feel stressed, we should learn to relax./Finally, keeping a happy mood is helpful too./We can talk with friends when we feel sad.等
要点五:美好愿景
In a word, small changes can make a big difference./Let’s take action to live a healthy lifestyle./If we follow these ways, we will be healthier and happier.等
12.(25-26八年级上·福建龙岩·期中)良好的生活习惯对青少年的健康成长至关重要,某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Habits”为题向中学生开展征文活动,请你根据以下表格提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿,词数70个左右。
My Healthy Habits
Eating habits
vegetables, fruit, junk food…
Sports
every day…
Sleeping habits
go to bed early
Other healthy habits
My Healthy Habits
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Healthy Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you.
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【答案】例文
My Healthy Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you.
First, I have healthy eating habits. I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit, and seldom eat junk food. I also drink much water and milk every day. Second, I do sports every day because sports can build up my body. Third, I get enough sleep. And I never stay up late. Lastly, I often share my feelings with others. It can help me feel better.
In short, I think these habits are great ways for me to stay healthy.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:发言稿,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:分享保持健康的日常习惯;饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪调节;结尾总结感悟
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:发言稿格式;恰当使用逻辑连接词;不出现真实个人信息;词数符合要求
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:引出话题,分享自己保持健康的日常习惯
主体段:用“First, Second, Third, Lastly”分层介绍饮食习惯、运动、睡眠、情绪疏导
结尾段:简短总结,点明好习惯有助于保持健康
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:引出话题
可用表达:I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you./Let me tell you about my healthy living habits./Here are some useful ways to keep healthy that I’d like to share with you.等
要点二:介绍各类健康习惯
可用表达:I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit, and seldom eat junk food./I also drink much water and milk every day./I do sports every day because sports can build up my body./I get enough sleep./And I never stay up late./I often share my feelings with others./It’s important to have breakfast every morning./Eating too much sweet food is bad for our teeth and health.等
要点三:总结感悟
可用表达:In short, these habits are great ways for me to stay healthy./Good habits help us keep healthy./It’s important for us to have healthy habits.等
13.(24-25八年级上·福建龙岩·期中)假如你是李华,你班将在下周英语活动课上开展以“Ways to Keep Healthy”主题的讨论。请你根据下面的思维导图,并结合自身经历,写一篇发言稿参与讨论。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。词汇:mood 情绪
Ways to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy, but how? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy, but how? Here are my suggestions.
First, eat a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Drink more boiled water and fewer drinks. Second, do exercise regularly, such as walking, playing ball games or swimming. Third, keep a good mood. Third, keep a good mood. Make more friends and relax when we’re stressed. Finally, go to bed early. It is good for our health.
If we follow these ways, we can be healthier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、结合自身经历,可以从饮食、运动和锻炼以及保持健康的心态等方面介绍如何保持健康;
第三步、总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced diet平衡饮食
②keep a good mood保持好心情
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①Make more friends and relax when we’re stressed.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we follow these ways, we can be healthier and happier.(if引导的条件状语从句)
14.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)今年是“体重管理年”,许多人都在通过各种方式管理自己的体重以保持健康。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图的提示,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何保持健康的。注意事项:1.必须包含所提示的信息并进行适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名;
4.开头已给出,词数80词左右,不计入总词。
How to Keep Healthy
This year is called the “Weight Management Year”. Nowadays, people pay more attention to health. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
This year is called the “Weight Management Year”. Nowadays, people pay more attention to health.
As we all know, it’s important for us to live a healthy lifestyle. But how can we do it? Here is my advice.
To start with, we should do sports to build a strong body. We had better exercise at least three times a week. Second, having a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy. For example, we can eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. Last, remember to stay positive no matter what happens.
In a word, if you can follow my advice, I’m sure you will live a healthy lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:需完整表达思维导图中“运动、均衡饮食、健康习惯”的内容,可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接开头,点明健康生活方式的重要性,并引出保持健康的建议;
第二步:分点阐述方法:先讲通过运动增强体质,再讲均衡饮食的具体做法,最后说明健康习惯(如保持积极心态);
第三步:总结全文,强调遵循建议能拥有健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
①live a healthy lifestyle过健康的生活方式
②balanced diet均衡饮食
③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①As we all know, it’s important for us to live a healthy lifestyle.(it's+形容词+for sb. to do结构)
②We had better exercise at least three times a week.(had better do sth.用于给出建议)
15.(25-26八年级上·福建·期中)如今,健康生活理念已深入人心。正如古罗马哲学家西塞罗所言:“运动是健康的源泉。”学校英语报正围绕运动是保持健康的重要方式这一话题征集稿件。请以“Let’s Do Sports for Health”为题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。词数90词左右。
提示:
1.运动的益处:例如强健身体、…… (至少补充一点);
2.运动注意事项:例如咨询医生、做好热身、……(至少补充两点);
3.呼吁大家积极参加运动。
要求:
1.结构清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.文章必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Do Sports for Health
Health is of great importance to everyone.
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【答案】
例文:
Let’s Do Sports for Health Health is of great importance to everyone. Doing sports is a key way to stay healthy. First, sports can help us build a strong body and reduce stress. For example, running makes our hearts stronger and swimming improves our flexibility.
However, we should pay attention to some tips when doing sports. It’s important to consult a doctor before starting a new sport, especially if you have health problems. Always warm up properly to prevent injuries. Also, choose sports that suit your age and fitness level, and avoid overexertion to stay safe.
Let’s get active and make sports a part of our daily life for better health!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:材料作文
时态:主要使用一般现在时,因为是在讨论一般事实和建议。
提示:作文覆盖了所有提示点:运动的益处、注意事项以及呼吁大家运动。
[写作步骤]
第一步:以给出的开头引入主题,强调健康的重要性。
第二步:正文部分先阐述运动的益处,包括强健身体和补充的一点(减轻压力),并用例子支持;然后写注意事项,包括咨询医生、做好热身,并补充两点(选择适合运动和避免过度运动)。
第三步:结尾呼吁大家积极参与运动,形成号召。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce stress 减轻压力
②improve flexibility 改善灵活性
③prevent injuries 预防伤害
[高分句型]
①It’s important to consult a doctor before starting a new sport, especially if you have health problems.(it作形式主语的固定句型和if引导的条件状语从句)
②Also, choose sports that suit your age and fitness level, and avoid overexertion to stay safe. (动词原形开头的祈使句和that引导的定语从句)
③Let’s get active and make sports a part of our daily life for better health!(Let引导的祈使句)
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考前押题10 书面表达3大常考话题15篇
(福建联考真题)
话题1 工作与职业
话题2 传统工艺
话题3 运动与健康
1.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)习近平总书记曾到清华大学考察时寄语广大青少年要“立大志、明大德、成大才、担大任”。你们学校英语社团正在开展以“My Dream Job”为主题的英文征文活动,请你认真阅读以下提示,并按要求用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现真实姓名和地名等信息;
4. 词数:80左右。 (开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Everyone has his or her own dream job, and my dream job is...
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2.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测)假如你是张华,某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动,请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容,写一篇英语短文向报刊主编Amanda投稿。
参考词汇:help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on…
要求:
1.可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于80词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
3.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)每个人都有梦想,你的梦想是什么呢?请用英语写一篇短文,谈论一下你的理想职业及你选择这份职业的原因,再谈谈你会为之付出怎样的努力。词数75左右。
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:a sense of achievement 成就感
I want to be a ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(25-26八年级上·福建宁德·期中)作为青少年,我们应该树立强国有我的远大志向,勇担民族复兴的时代大任。一份理想的职业正是践行这份担当的舞台。假如你是李华,你班正在开展主题为My Dream Job的演讲活动,鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。词数80左右。写作提示:
What’s your dream job?
a vet
Why is it your dream job?
kind and helpful
love animals
What will you do to get your dream job?
study hard
learn more about animals
go to an animal medical school
参考短语:to make it come true, not easy to do, try my best
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(26-27八年级上·福建莆田·阶段检测)糖画是中国古老的民间艺术,有几百年历史。请以“My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的梦想职业。
内容要点:
1.为什么想成为一名糖画老师;
2.你打算怎样实现梦想;
3.你对未来的期待。
要求:
1.词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;
3.行文连贯,表达准确。
4.提示词:hundreds of years, reason, fall in love, learn, practise, teach, pass down
My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher
Sugar painting is a traditional Chinese folk art.
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6.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友肖恩对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,用英语写一封邮件向肖恩介绍你最喜欢的中国民间艺术。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sean,
I hope you are doing well. I’m happy to share my favourite Chinese folk art with you—____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测) 假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Peter对中国的剪纸很感兴趣。请你根据下面表格的提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这项中国民间艺术。词数80左右。
参考词汇:wedding n. 婚礼;culture n. 文化
History
more than 1,500 years
Materials (材料) and Tools
paper and scissors
Shapes
flowers, animals
Uses
festival or wedding
Meanings
…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(25-26八年级上·福建福州·阶段检测)近年来,中国传统艺术已经受到了越来越多人的喜爱,为让更多外国友人了解中国传统艺术,校英语俱乐部开展以“My Favorite Form of Art”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种传统艺术。
写作提示:
1. What’s your favorite form of art?
2. How do you know it?
3. Why do you like it?
4. What’s your hope for it?
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范,90词左右;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名;
4. 禁止摘录试卷阅读部分。
My Favorite Form of Art
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9.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·阶段检测)中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时,传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。假如你是李华,在众多的中国传统艺术中,你最喜欢剪纸。请以“Falling in Love with ________”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你喜欢的传统艺术。
写作要点:
1. What’s your favorite form of art?
2. Why do you like this form of art?
3. What’s your hope for the art?
注意:
1.包含以上信息,可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于80词,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Falling in Love with ________
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10.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)中国传统文化承载着独特的民族智慧,其中民间手工艺尤为引人注目。假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Henry在邮件中提到对中国传统民间手工艺——糖画充满好奇,想了解它的相关情况。请你根据以下图表提示,用英文给他回一封电子邮件,介绍糖画的历史、呈现形式、文化意义,并表达你的期待。
Chinese Sugar Painting
History: date back to (追溯到) the Ming Dynasty
Form: both sugar and painting;
melted sugar (糖浆);
be made in different shapes like…
Meaning: a symbol of Chinese culture;
carry people’s love for life;
Hope:
…
注意:1. 词数100左右,首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Henry,
How are you doing these days? I’m glad to hear you’re interested in the Chinese sugar painting. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
11.(25-26八年级上·福建泉州·期中)当今世界, 健康对人们越来越重要。同时, 人们也比以前更加关注健康问题了。假如你是李华, 你们学校准备举办一场关于健康生活的演讲比赛, 请你以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题, 根据以下图示, 写一篇演讲稿。80词左右。
注意事项:
1. 文中须包含所有的要点提示, 可适当发挥, 开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚, 表达通顺, 行文连贯, 书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
Ways to Keep Healthy
As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening!
12.(25-26八年级上·福建龙岩·期中)良好的生活习惯对青少年的健康成长至关重要,某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Habits”为题向中学生开展征文活动,请你根据以下表格提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿,词数70个左右。
My Healthy Habits
Eating habits
vegetables, fruit, junk food…
Sports
every day…
Sleeping habits
go to bed early
Other healthy habits
My Healthy Habits
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Healthy Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you.
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13.(24-25八年级上·福建龙岩·期中)假如你是李华,你班将在下周英语活动课上开展以“Ways to Keep Healthy”主题的讨论。请你根据下面的思维导图,并结合自身经历,写一篇发言稿参与讨论。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。词汇:mood 情绪
Ways to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy, but how? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.(25-26八年级上·福建莆田·期中)今年是“体重管理年”,许多人都在通过各种方式管理自己的体重以保持健康。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图的提示,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你是如何保持健康的。注意事项:1.必须包含所提示的信息并进行适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名;
4.开头已给出,词数80词左右,不计入总词。
How to Keep Healthy
This year is called the “Weight Management Year”. Nowadays, people pay more attention to health. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(25-26八年级上·福建·期中)如今,健康生活理念已深入人心。正如古罗马哲学家西塞罗所言:“运动是健康的源泉。”学校英语报正围绕运动是保持健康的重要方式这一话题征集稿件。请以“Let’s Do Sports for Health”为题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。词数90词左右。
提示:
1.运动的益处:例如强健身体、…… (至少补充一点);
2.运动注意事项:例如咨询医生、做好热身、……(至少补充两点);
3.呼吁大家积极参加运动。
要求:
1.结构清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.文章必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Do Sports for Health
Health is of great importance to everyone.
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