Unit4 写作专项训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语九年级上册

译林版九年级英语（上册）Unit 4 Growing up 写作专项训练 写作任务 · 审题要点 · 写作框架 · 词汇短语 · 句式练习 · 高级句型 · 写作实战 班级：____________ 姓名：____________ 日期：____________ 一、写作任务（Writing Task） 成长路上，总有一些人或事深深影响着你。请以 “The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍对你影响最大的人。 ● 人物：介绍对你影响最大的人； ● 事例：用一件具体的事说明他/她如何影响你； ● 感悟：写出这件事带给你的改变。 要求：1) 110 词左右；2) 内容可适当发挥；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 二、审题要点（Analyzing the Prompt） ● 人称（Person）：介绍人物用 he / she，谈感受用 I。 ● 时态（Tense）：叙述往事用一般过去时，表达变化用现在完成时。 ● 文体（Genre）：记叙文（写人叙事），夹叙夹议。 ● 结构（Structure）：点题 → 叙事 → 感悟。 ● 要点（Content）：人物 + 具体事例 + 带给你的改变，三点齐全。 ● 语言（Language）：多用定语从句、时间状语从句，适当使用强调句。 三、写作框架（Writing Framework） 段落 要点内容 常用句型 / 提示 开头段 点明对你影响最大的人。 The person who has influenced me most is ... 主体段 用一两件具体的事，按时间顺序叙述。 Although ..., he ... . Whenever ..., he ... . 结尾段 写出它带给你的改变与感悟。 Because of him, I have become ... . I hope that ... . 四、词汇短语积累（Vocabulary） 1. 本单元课后重点词汇（含音标） 单词 音标 词性·释义 senior high /ˌsiːniə ˈhaɪ/ n. 高中 university /ˌjuːnɪˈvɜːsəti/ n. 大学 championship /ˈtʃæmpiənʃɪp/ n. 锦标赛，大赛 succeed /səkˈsiːd/ vi. 成功 scholarship /ˈskɒləʃɪp/ n. 奖学金 although /ɔːlˈðəʊ/ conj. 尽管，虽然 graduate /ˈɡrædʒueɪt/ vi. 毕业 force /fɔːs/ vt. 强迫，迫使 league /liːɡ/ n. 联盟，社团 remain /rɪˈmeɪn/ vi. 逗留；保持不变 achievement /əˈtʃiːvmənt/ n. 成就，成绩 prove /pruːv/ vt. 证明 career /kəˈrɪə(r)/ n. 生涯，职业 symbol /ˈsɪmbl/ n. 象征 victory /ˈvɪktəri/ n. 胜利 survive /səˈvaɪv/ v. 幸存，生存 admire /ədˈmaɪə(r)/ vt. 钦佩，羡慕 courage /ˈkʌrɪdʒ/ n. 勇气 unusual /ʌnˈjuːʒuəl/ adj. 不寻常的 research /rɪˈsɜːtʃ/ n. 研究；调查 2. 重点短语与搭配（课后 + 写作） 英文 中文 lose heart 泄气，灰心 change one's mind 改变主意 succeed in doing sth 成功地做某事 take notice of 注意，察觉 break out 爆发 go into hiding 躲藏起来 die of/from 死于 to one's surprise 令某人惊奇的是 a great deal (of) 大量，许多 as soon as 一……就 3. 练一练：用所给词的适当形式填空。 1. He never ____________ (lose) heart although he failed many times. 2. The scientist made great ____________ (achieve) in his research. 3. Shanghai is a ____________ (nation) city in China. 4. After he ____________ (graduate) from college, he became a teacher. 5. It is ____________ (usual) for him to be late, because he is always on time. 4. 练一练：把下列句子译成英语。 1. 对我影响最大的人是我的爷爷。 → ________________________________________________________ 2. 尽管他已经七十多岁了，但他仍然坚持学习新事物。 → ________________________________________________________ 3. 每当我在学习上遇到困难，我都会想起他。 → ________________________________________________________ 4. 正是他的勇气鼓励我勇敢地面对挑战。 → ________________________________________________________ 5. 因为他，我变得更勤奋、更自信了。 → ________________________________________________________ 五、句式练习（核心句式） 1. The person who has influenced me most is ... 对我影响最大的人是…… 2. Although he is over seventy, he still keeps learning. 尽管他七十多岁，仍坚持学习。 3. Whenever I meet a new word, I write it down. 每当遇到生词，我就记下来。 4. It is his courage that encourages me. 正是他的勇气鼓励了我。 5. Because of him, I have become more hard-working. 因为他，我变得更勤奋。 六、进阶高级句型练习（Advanced Patterns） 1. 定语从句：The person who has influenced me most is my grandmother. 2. 让步状语从句：Although he is old, he keeps learning. 3. 时间状语从句：Whenever I meet difficulties, I think of him. 4. 强调句：It is his courage that encourages me. 5. 非谓语动词：Being hard-working, he never gives up. 6. 宾语从句：I hope that I can be as brave as him. 练一练：按要求改写句子。 1. He is over seventy. He still keeps learning.（用 although 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 2. His courage encourages me.（用强调句改写） → ________________________________________________________ 3. I meet a new word. I write it down.（用 whenever 合并） → ________________________________________________________ 4. He is hard-working. He never gives up.（用非谓语动词改写） → ________________________________________________________ 5. I can be as brave as him. I hope.（用宾语从句合并） → ________________________________________________________ 七、写作实战（Writing） 小试牛刀：先补全下面的引导作文（每空一词或一短语），再用完整的句子写一篇短文。 ① 引导训练（填空） ____________ (对我影响最大的人) is my grandfather, who is over seventy years old. Although he is an old man, he still keeps ____________ (学习) new things. Two years ago, he began to learn English and use a smartphone. Whenever he meets a new word, he writes it down in his notebook ____________ (仔细地). It is his positive attitude that ____________ (鼓励) me to face every challenge bravely. What’s more, ____________ (勤劳的), he never gives up easily. Because of him, I have become more ____________ (勤奋的) and confident. I hope that I can be as brave and positive as him when I grow up. ② 独立写作 要求：110 词左右，要点齐全，适当运用高级句型。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案（Answer Key） （供教师使用，打印学生版时可删除本页） 四、词汇短语 · 词形填空 1. lost 2. achievements 3. national 4. graduated 5. unusual 四、词汇短语 · 汉译英 1. The person who has influenced me most is my grandfather. 2. Although he is over seventy, he still keeps learning new things. 3. Whenever I have trouble with my studies, I think of him. 4. It is his courage that encourages me to face challenges bravely. 5. Because of him, I have become more hard-working and confident. 六、进阶句型 · 改写 1. Although he is over seventy, he still keeps learning. 2. It is his courage that encourages me. 3. Whenever I meet a new word, I write it down. 4. Being hard-working, he never gives up. 5. I hope that I can be as brave as him. 七、写作实战 · 参考范文（约 110 词） The person who has influenced me most is my grandfather, who is over seventy years old. Although he is an old man, he still keeps learning new things. Two years ago, he began to learn English and use a smartphone. Whenever he meets a new word, he writes it down in his notebook carefully. It is his positive attitude that encourages me to face every challenge bravely. What’s more, being hard-working, he never gives up easily. Because of him, I have become more hard-working and confident. I hope that I can be as brave and positive as him when I grow up. 【高级句型】定语从句(who)、让步状语从句(Although)、时间状语从句(Whenever)、强调句(It is ... that ...)、非谓语动词(being ...)、宾语从句(I hope that ...) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $