Unit 5 Animal friends（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材冀教版七年级上册

Unit 5 Animal friends单元同步写作讲义 本单元主题属于新课标人与自然范畴，围绕动物朋友展开。 单元内容包含宠物、动物园动物、动物之间互助故事、保护野生动物，写作任务为介绍最喜欢的动物、描写动物外形习性、倡导爱护和保护动物。 写作目标：学生会使用描述动物外形、能力、习性的词汇；能够描述动物的样貌、食物、本领；理解动物间互助关系；写作可描写自己喜欢的宠物或野生动物，表达对动物的喜爱，树立爱护动物、保护动物的意识。单元核心语法为现在进行时，用于描述动物正在进行的动作。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 动物类 1.pet n. 宠物 2.animal n. 动物 3.tiger n. 老虎 4.panda n. 熊猫 5.rhino n. 犀牛 6.bird n. 鸟 7.dog n. 狗 8.cat n. 猫 外形描述类 1.strong adj. 强壮的 2.cute adj. 可爱的 3.big adj. 大的 4.small adj. 小的 5.long adj. 长的 6.black and white 黑白相间 7.look beautiful 看起来漂亮 8.have... 长有…… 习性与动作类 1.eat v. 吃 2.live v. 居住；生活 3.help v. 帮助 4.protect v. 保护 5.run v. 跑 6.jump v. 跳 7.play with 和…… 玩耍 8.keep a pet 饲养宠物 观点情感类 1.friendly adj. 友好的 2.useful adj. 有用的 3.important adj. 重要的 4.save v. 拯救 5.love v. 喜爱 6.in danger 处于危险中 7.our friend 我们的朋友 8.take care of 照顾 句式积累 开头句： 1.My favourite animal is the panda. 我最喜欢的动物是熊猫。 2.I want to tell you about my favourite animal friend. 我想跟你聊聊我最喜欢的动物朋友。 中间句： 1.It is black and white. It looks very cute. 它黑白相间，看起来很可爱。 2.Pandas live in China and they eat bamboo. 熊猫生活在中国，它们吃竹子。 3.The rhino and the egret help each other. 犀牛和白鹭互相帮助。 结尾句： 1.Animals are our good friends. We should protect them. 动物是我们的好朋友，我们应该保护它们。 2.I love animals and I will take good care of them. 我喜爱动物，我会好好照顾它们。 佳句仿写 佳句 1（开篇介绍动物句型・Lesson1） 教材原句：I’d like to have a pet. My favourite animal is a dog. 亮点：I’d like to… 表达愿望；My favourite animal is…动物作文万能开篇句型。 仿写练习：仿写句子，写出你最喜欢的动物是熊猫。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 2（外形描述核心句型・Lesson2） 教材原句：It has a big body and strong legs. 亮点：have 描述动物身体特征，描述动物外形高频句型。 仿写练习：仿写句子，描述熊猫长着圆圆的身体。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 3（动物互助高分句型・Lesson2） 教材原句：They help each other. They are good friends. 亮点：help each other互相帮助，描述动物之间合作，贴合单元故事主题。 仿写练习：仿写句子，鸟儿和犀牛互相帮助。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 4（保护动物升华句型・Lesson5） 教材原句：Some animals are in danger. We must save them. 亮点：in danger 处于危险中；must 表责任，适合短文结尾发出呼吁。 仿写练习：仿写句子，动物是我们的朋友，我们要保护它们。 ______________________________________________________________ 典例 你校英语报刊正在开展以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英文稿参赛。 提示要点： 1. 最喜欢的动物（熊猫） 2. 外形特征（黑白相间、可爱） 3. 生活习性（居住在中国、吃竹子、性格友好） 4. 现状与观点（濒临危险、需要保护） 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 4.词数70左右。 My Favourite Animal Among all kinds of animals,_________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确定文体：动物介绍记叙文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：最喜欢的动物、外形特征、生活习性、性格特点、动物现状与保护观点 确定人称：第一人称、第三人称结合 谋篇布局 第一步 总起句，点明自己最喜欢的动物，开门见山点题 第二步 根据提示，分层描写动物外形、居住环境、饮食和性格，补充动物现状 第三步 表达个人观点，呼吁保护动物，升华全文主题  佳作展示 My Favourite Animal Among all kinds of animals, I like pandas best. Pandas are very cute with black and white fur. They live in China and their favourite food is bamboo. They are quiet and friendly to people. However, some pandas are in danger now. I think we should try our best to protect them. Animals are our best friends. I love pandas and I hope they can live safely forever. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①among all kinds of 在所有……之中 ②be friendly to 对……友好 ③in danger 处于危险之中 ④try one’s best 尽某人最大努力 高分句型： ①Among all kinds of animals, I like pandas best. 亮点：状语前置高级结构，告别简单句，是喜好类作文万能标准开篇句。 ②They are quiet and friendly to people. 亮点：并列形容词连用，完美描写动物性格品质，句式工整、条理清晰。 ③I think we should try our best to protect them. 亮点：宾语从句+should建议句型，用于文末提建议、升华主旨，是保护话题核心高分句型。 （一） 假如你是动物园的工作人员，今天需要接待几名外国游客并给他们当导游。请以“The lion — Sammy”为题，根据下面的导图信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这头新来的狮子。 写作要求： 1．短文应包括导图中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3．词数70左右，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The lion — Sammy Hello, everyone! There is a great lion in our zoo.________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 假设你叫陈琳，你有一只宠物狗。请你根据提示内容，写一篇词数70左右的短文，介绍你的宠物狗。 Name: Beibei Age: 2 What it is like: smart, cute What it can do: walk on two legs, dance Favorite food: chicken, hamburgers Like: watching TV I have a pet dog.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 动物需要人类的守护，人类也渴望它们的陪伴。彼此依偎，温暖相伴，一如家人。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周，学校英语社团特举办以“动物与我”主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请按以下要求介绍一种你最熟悉的动物，并写写你与它友好相处的时光与真切感受。 要求： ①文中必须包含图中所有提纲内容的要点，可适当添加发挥； ②不得出现个人真实姓名和校名； ③词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The ________ and Me ★Introduce the animal: * name   * look   * food   * home ★Share your time together: * things you usually do together (feed, walk, play with, look after, wait for me ...) ★Show your feelings: * amazing, fantastic, helpful... * friends, helpers, heroes... The ________ and Me I’d like to introduce the animal I know best—the ________ and share our special time together. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 大自然里有各种各样神奇的动物，有些是人类的好朋友，有些是人类的好帮手，有些需要人类的帮助。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周，请参考右侧的学校展板，推选一种展示的动物，并为其撰写讲解稿。 要求： 1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校，60词左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并在此基础上适当发挥； 3. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my favourite animal on the display board. It’s the ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 龙岩梅花山中国虎园寒假英文科普志愿者 (volunteer) 招募工作已启动。请你以华南虎爱好者李华的身份，阅读招募告示，并根据通过DeepSeek查阅到的资料，写一封英文申请信，并向园长介绍你对华南虎的了解。 Volunteer WantedLongyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park is seeking (寻找) volunteers during the winter vacation. Are you a big fan of South China tigers? Can you speak fluent (流利的) English? Come and join us! And please write to us and tell us how much you know about South China tigers. Email Mr. Lin at SouthChinaTigerPark@163.com. Information from DeepSeek South China Tiger Look black stripes (条纹), … Home forests Ability run fast, jump high Reasons for being endangered (濒危) People’s activities: ·cut down trees ·kill them for fur 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 注意紧扣主题，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for (申请) the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua （六） 李华是一名来自重庆的初一学生，今年十二岁，家里经营着一家农家乐Fun Yard。他想要拍摄一个vlog介绍自己和Fun Yard的情况，以此在网上结识更多外国朋友，并邀请其前来游玩。他将在视频中呈现以下信息，请你帮他写一篇短文介绍其相关情况。 Personal information: Age: 12 Hobby: Basketball Family members: Father, mother, grandparents and a pet dog. Animals: Ducks, cows... Plants: Apple trees, tomatoes... Special dish (特色菜): Mapo tofu... 要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实信息。 Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua from Chongqing, China.___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 5 Animal friends单元同步写作讲义 本单元主题属于新课标人与自然范畴，围绕动物朋友展开。 单元内容包含宠物、动物园动物、动物之间互助故事、保护野生动物，写作任务为介绍最喜欢的动物、描写动物外形习性、倡导爱护和保护动物。 写作目标：学生会使用描述动物外形、能力、习性的词汇；能够描述动物的样貌、食物、本领；理解动物间互助关系；写作可描写自己喜欢的宠物或野生动物，表达对动物的喜爱，树立爱护动物、保护动物的意识。单元核心语法为现在进行时，用于描述动物正在进行的动作。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 动物类 1.pet n. 宠物 2.animal n. 动物 3.tiger n. 老虎 4.panda n. 熊猫 5.rhino n. 犀牛 6.bird n. 鸟 7.dog n. 狗 8.cat n. 猫 外形描述类 1.strong adj. 强壮的 2.cute adj. 可爱的 3.big adj. 大的 4.small adj. 小的 5.long adj. 长的 6.black and white 黑白相间 7.look beautiful 看起来漂亮 8.have... 长有…… 习性与动作类 1.eat v. 吃 2.live v. 居住；生活 3.help v. 帮助 4.protect v. 保护 5.run v. 跑 6.jump v. 跳 7.play with 和…… 玩耍 8.keep a pet 饲养宠物 观点情感类 1.friendly adj. 友好的 2.useful adj. 有用的 3.important adj. 重要的 4.save v. 拯救 5.love v. 喜爱 6.in danger 处于危险中 7.our friend 我们的朋友 8.take care of 照顾 句式积累 开头句： 1.My favourite animal is the panda. 我最喜欢的动物是熊猫。 2.I want to tell you about my favourite animal friend. 我想跟你聊聊我最喜欢的动物朋友。 中间句： 1.It is black and white. It looks very cute. 它黑白相间，看起来很可爱。 2.Pandas live in China and they eat bamboo. 熊猫生活在中国，它们吃竹子。 3.The rhino and the egret help each other. 犀牛和白鹭互相帮助。 结尾句： 1.Animals are our good friends. We should protect them. 动物是我们的好朋友，我们应该保护它们。 2.I love animals and I will take good care of them. 我喜爱动物，我会好好照顾它们。 佳句仿写 佳句 1（开篇介绍动物句型・Lesson1） 教材原句：I’d like to have a pet. My favourite animal is a dog. 亮点：I’d like to… 表达愿望；My favourite animal is…动物作文万能开篇句型。 仿写练习：仿写句子，写出你最喜欢的动物是熊猫。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 2（外形描述核心句型・Lesson2） 教材原句：It has a big body and strong legs. 亮点：have 描述动物身体特征，描述动物外形高频句型。 仿写练习：仿写句子，描述熊猫长着圆圆的身体。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 3（动物互助高分句型・Lesson2） 教材原句：They help each other. They are good friends. 亮点：help each other互相帮助，描述动物之间合作，贴合单元故事主题。 仿写练习：仿写句子，鸟儿和犀牛互相帮助。 ______________________________________________________________ 佳句 4（保护动物升华句型・Lesson5） 教材原句：Some animals are in danger. We must save them. 亮点：in danger 处于危险中；must 表责任，适合短文结尾发出呼吁。 仿写练习：仿写句子，动物是我们的朋友，我们要保护它们。 ______________________________________________________________ 仿写练习参考答案 1.I’d like to have a pet. My favourite animal is the panda. 2.It has a round body. 3.The bird and the rhino help each other. 4.Animals are our friends. We must protect them. 典例 你校英语报刊正在开展以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英文稿参赛。 提示要点： 1. 最喜欢的动物（熊猫） 2. 外形特征（黑白相间、可爱） 3. 生活习性（居住在中国、吃竹子、性格友好） 4. 现状与观点（濒临危险、需要保护） 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 4.词数70左右。 My Favourite Animal Among all kinds of animals,_________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确定文体：动物介绍记叙文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：最喜欢的动物、外形特征、生活习性、性格特点、动物现状与保护观点 确定人称：第一人称、第三人称结合 谋篇布局 第一步 总起句，点明自己最喜欢的动物，开门见山点题 第二步 根据提示，分层描写动物外形、居住环境、饮食和性格，补充动物现状 第三步 表达个人观点，呼吁保护动物，升华全文主题  佳作展示 My Favourite Animal Among all kinds of animals, I like pandas best. Pandas are very cute with black and white fur. They live in China and their favourite food is bamboo. They are quiet and friendly to people. However, some pandas are in danger now. I think we should try our best to protect them. Animals are our best friends. I love pandas and I hope they can live safely forever. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①among all kinds of 在所有……之中 ②be friendly to 对……友好 ③in danger 处于危险之中 ④try one’s best 尽某人最大努力 高分句型： ①Among all kinds of animals, I like pandas best. 亮点：状语前置高级结构，告别简单句，是喜好类作文万能标准开篇句。 ②They are quiet and friendly to people. 亮点：并列形容词连用，完美描写动物性格品质，句式工整、条理清晰。 ③I think we should try our best to protect them. 亮点：宾语从句+should建议句型，用于文末提建议、升华主旨，是保护话题核心高分句型。 （一） 假如你是动物园的工作人员，今天需要接待几名外国游客并给他们当导游。请以“The lion — Sammy”为题，根据下面的导图信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这头新来的狮子。 写作要求： 1．短文应包括导图中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3．词数70左右，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The lion — Sammy Hello, everyone! There is a great lion in our zoo.________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The lion—Sammy Hello, everyone! There is a great lion in our zoo. His name is Sammy. He is only 2 years old. He comes from Africa. He loves eating meat a lot. Some visitors think he is a little scary, but I think he is cute and really smart. He can play with balls and he always plays happily with other animals. He can also dance very well. I love him very much. Many people come to the zoo to make friends with him. They’re excited to see him. Would you like to be his friends? 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍狮子萨米的来源、能力以及喜欢它的原因 确定人称：第一人称I (动物园工作人员)，第三人称he (指代狮子萨米) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：介绍狮子的名字和来源地。 主体段：发挥想象，描述狮子的能力和日常活动。 结尾段：说明喜欢它的原因，收尾欢迎游客亲近它。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：狮子的基本信息 来源：Africa/South Africa/East Africa/African grasslands/the savanna等 名字：Sammy/Simba/Leo/Koda等 年龄：2 years old/1 year old/3 years old等 美食喜好：loves eating meat/mutton/chicken meat/rabbit meat等 要点二：狮子的能力和日常活动 能力：play with balls/dance very well/run fast/jump high/balance/perform等 日常活动：plays happily with other animals/rest/walk around/share toys等 要点三：喜欢狮子萨米的理由 理由：cute and really smart/make friends with him/excited to see him/lovely/warm-hearted等 （二） 假设你叫陈琳，你有一只宠物狗。请你根据提示内容，写一篇词数70左右的短文，介绍你的宠物狗。 Name: Beibei Age: 2 What it is like: smart, cute What it can do: walk on two legs, dance Favorite food: chicken, hamburgers Like: watching TV I have a pet dog.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I have a pet dog. Her name is Beibei. She is two years old. She is white and black. She is very smart and cute. She can walk on two legs. She can also dance. Her favorite food is chicken and hamburgers. She likes watching TV very much. Beibei is my best friend. I love her a lot! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：宠物狗的基本信息、性格、技能、喜欢的食物以及爱好 确定人称：第一人称I (陈琳视角)，宠物用代词she 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，介绍拥有宠物狗以及其名字、年龄。 主体段：分层描写宠物狗的外貌性格、技能本领、饮食喜好以及日常爱好，额外补充毛色细节，丰富内容。 结尾段：情感升华，表达自己对宠物狗的喜爱，点明亲密关系。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息、性格 基本信息：Beibei/two years old/white and black/fluffy/white all over/big round eyes/small size等 性格：very smart and cute/clever/lovely/friendly等 要点二：技能、饮食喜好以及爱好 技能：walk on two legs/dance/shake hands/roll over/jump high等 饮食喜好：chicken and hamburgers/beef/milk/fish/eggs等 爱好：likes watching TV/play balls/run in the park/sleep等 （三） 动物需要人类的守护，人类也渴望它们的陪伴。彼此依偎，温暖相伴，一如家人。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周，学校英语社团特举办以“动物与我”主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请按以下要求介绍一种你最熟悉的动物，并写写你与它友好相处的时光与真切感受。 要求： ①文中必须包含图中所有提纲内容的要点，可适当添加发挥； ②不得出现个人真实姓名和校名； ③词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The ________ and Me ★Introduce the animal: * name   * look   * food   * home ★Share your time together: * things you usually do together (feed, walk, play with, look after, wait for me ...) ★Show your feelings: * amazing, fantastic, helpful... * friends, helpers, heroes... The ________ and Me I’d like to introduce the animal I know best—the ________ and share our special time together. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Dog and Me    I’d like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together. My dog is named Lucky. He has brown fur and a wagging tail. His favorite food is meat, and his home is a small basket by my bed.Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home. Lucky is amazing. He is not just my pet, but also my best friend and helper. He makes my life full of joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：需包含动物介绍（名字、外貌、食物、住所）、相处时光（日常活动）和感受（情感与看法），词数80左右。 [写作步骤] 第一步：补全标题并完成开头句，简要介绍动物基本信息。 第二步：描述日常相处活动，使用具体动词。 第三步：表达对动物的情感并呼吁爱护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①fur毛发 ②play with与……玩 ③look after照顾 [高分句型] ①He always waits for me at the door when I come home.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ②He makes my life full of joy.（运用了形容词短语作宾语补足语） （四） 大自然里有各种各样神奇的动物，有些是人类的好朋友，有些是人类的好帮手，有些需要人类的帮助。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周，请参考右侧的学校展板，推选一种展示的动物，并为其撰写讲解稿。 要求： 1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校，60词左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并在此基础上适当发挥； 3. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my favourite animal on the display board. It’s the ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my favourite animal on the display board. It’s the dog. Dogs have soft, lovely fur and warm, bright eyes. They love eating meat and bones, and often live happily in people’s homes. They can run fast and are good at loyally guarding houses. They help people feel safe, and they also need our gentle care and love. I think dogs are truly fantastic and helpful. Let’s be friendly to them! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，点明最喜欢的动物； 第二步：详细描述动物的外貌、技能等内容； 第三步：书写结尾，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①soft柔软的 ②are good at擅长 ③safe安全的 ④be friendly to对……友好   [高分句型] ①They help people feel safe, and they also need our gentle care and love.(并列句) ② I think dogs are truly fantastic and helpful.(宾语从句) （五） 龙岩梅花山中国虎园寒假英文科普志愿者 (volunteer) 招募工作已启动。请你以华南虎爱好者李华的身份，阅读招募告示，并根据通过DeepSeek查阅到的资料，写一封英文申请信，并向园长介绍你对华南虎的了解。 Volunteer WantedLongyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park is seeking (寻找) volunteers during the winter vacation. Are you a big fan of South China tigers? Can you speak fluent (流利的) English? Come and join us! And please write to us and tell us how much you know about South China tigers. Email Mr. Lin at SouthChinaTigerPark@163.com. Information from DeepSeek South China Tiger Look black stripes (条纹), … Home forests Ability run fast, jump high Reasons for being endangered (濒危) People’s activities: ·cut down trees ·kill them for fur 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 注意紧扣主题，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for (申请) the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Lin, I’m writing to apply for the volunteer job at Longyan Meihuashan China Tiger Park. I love South China tigers very much. They have black stripes and long tails. They usually live in forests. They can run fast and jump high. But sadly, they are now in great danger because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. I can speak English fluently and share interesting facts about these tigers with visitors to let more people protect them. I’ll try my best to do well. I really want to help protect tigers. I will be very thankful if you give me this chance. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍华南虎的外貌特征、生活环境、能力以及濒危原因； 第二步，说明自己的个人能力； 第三步，表达想成为志愿者的强烈愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in great danger处于极大的危险之中 ②cut down砍伐 ③fluently流利地 [高分句型] But sadly, they are now in great danger because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur.（because引导的原因状语从句） （六） 李华是一名来自重庆的初一学生，今年十二岁，家里经营着一家农家乐Fun Yard。他想要拍摄一个vlog介绍自己和Fun Yard的情况，以此在网上结识更多外国朋友，并邀请其前来游玩。他将在视频中呈现以下信息，请你帮他写一篇短文介绍其相关情况。 Personal information: Age: 12 Hobby: Basketball Family members: Father, mother, grandparents and a pet dog. Animals: Ducks, cows... Plants: Apple trees, tomatoes... Special dish (特色菜): Mapo tofu... 要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实信息。 Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua from Chongqing, China.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua from Chongqing, China. I am 12 years old. I like playing basketball. There are five people in my family: my father, my mother, my grandparents, and me. We also have a lovely pet dog. My family runs a farmstay called Fun Yard. There are many animals here, such as ducks and cows. You can also see many kinds of plants, like apple trees and tomatoes. What’s more, we have special food like Mapo tofu. I am sure you will have a great time here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍个人信息； 第二步，介绍经营农家乐的情况； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①There are five people in my family: my father, my mother, my grandparents, and me.（there be句型） ②I am sure you will have a great time here.（宾语从句） $