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新目标九上 单元话题写作精讲讲义 Unit 3 Smart Learning How I Learn 新目标(Go for it!)九年级上 | 建议用时 90 分钟 | 学生版 本讲的学习目标 会写清“我为什么学习(或阅读)”,一句话说清它对我的意义。 会把自己平时的 2—3 个学习方法(或阅读习惯)写具体。 会用 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句,表达自己对学习的看法。 会讲清遇到过什么困难、是怎么解决的。 会从金句素材库里挑句子,改成写自己的学习经历。 能独立写出一篇“介绍我的学习方法(或阅读习惯)”的短文。 第 1 关 审题定位 约 5 分钟 先读题目 【典型例题】学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下面三个问题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。 三个问题:① Why do you read? ② What kind of books do you read? ③ What are your reading habits? 写作要求:① 根据所给提示,适当发挥;② 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;③ 词数 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 开头已给:I often read books in my free time. …… 动笔前先填这张表 先想清楚 我的答案 ① 用第几人称写? ② 用什么时态写? ③ 分几段,每段写什么? 我打算写的具体做法是(学习方法:记笔记/画思维导图/大声朗读/小组讨论;阅读习惯:什么时候读/读什么书/怎么记): ① ② 第 2 关 话题词块 约 10 分钟 下面是写“学习、阅读”类作文最常用的词块。写的时候随时翻回来看。 组 1 开头怎么起(说清学习/阅读对我的意义) 词块 释义 play an important part in 在……中起重要作用 open up a new world to me 为我打开一个新世界 be an active learner 做一个主动的学习者 learn by doing sth 通过做某事来学习 in general 总的来说;通常 组 2 具体做法怎么写(写清你的学习方法和阅读习惯) 词块 释义 take notes 记笔记 review key ideas 复习要点 use flashcards 用抽认卡 set learning goals 设定学习目标 create mind maps 画思维导图 work in groups 小组合作 take part in class discussions 参加课堂讨论 read aloud 大声朗读 look up words in a dictionary 查词典 step by step 循序渐进 build up 逐步积累 组 3 遇到困难怎么写 词块 释义 come across problems (偶然)遇到问题 find it difficult to do sth 觉得做某事很难 be afraid of making mistakes 害怕犯错 lose heart 灰心;泄气 learn from mistakes 从错误中学习 get guidance from a teacher 从老师那里获得指导 be positive when 在……的时候保持积极 组 4 收获和感受怎么收尾 词块 释义 make great progress 取得很大进步 make a big difference to 对……有很大影响 become more confident 变得更自信 develop a good habit of 养成……的好习惯 enjoy learning 享受学习 see learning as part of daily life 把学习看作日常生活的一部分 I believe that 我相信…… 过关练 看中文,写出英文词块 1. 做一个主动的学习者 2. 记笔记 3. 设定学习目标 4. 画思维导图 5. 大声朗读 6. 查词典 7. 循序渐进 8. 逐步积累 9. 遇到问题 10. 害怕犯错 11. 取得很大进步 12. 对……有很大影响 13. 养成……的好习惯 14. 把学习看作日常生活的一部分 第 3 关 句型升级 约 10 分钟 同一个意思,换个说法就是九年级的句子。这一单元的重点是宾语从句(I think / I believe / I wonder )。左边是简单句,右边是升级句。 组 A 开头句(用 I think / I believe 说出你的看法) 简单句(七年级写法) 升级句(九年级写法) English is important. I think so. I think (that) English plays an important part in our daily life. Reading is useful. I believe it. I believe (that) reading opens up a new world to me. 组 B 中间句(宾语从句 + 好搭配,把做法说清楚) 简单句(七年级写法) 升级句(九年级写法) We should practise every day. I think so. I think (that) the best way to learn English is to practise using it every day. Can you help me? I wonder. I wonder if you could help me with my spoken English. Do you read English books outside class? I want to know. I want to know whether you read English books outside class. 组 C 结尾句(写收获,也用宾语从句) 简单句(七年级写法) 升级句(九年级写法) I have made progress. I find it. I find (that) I have made great progress by learning step by step. Mistakes help us improve. I have learned it. I have learned (that) mistakes are chances for us to improve. 改写练习 照右边的写法,把句子改一改 1. 用 I think (that) 改写,注意从句要用陈述语序:Is reading important for learning? 2. 用 I wonder if / whether 改写:Can you help me with my spoken English? 3. 用 I find it + adj. + to do sth 改写:It is hard to remember new words. 4. 用 not only but also 改写:Reading improves my English. Reading also opens my mind. 5. 用 The more , the more 改写:If you practise more, you will learn better. 6. 用 I have learned (that) 改写:Mistakes are chances for us to improve. 金句素材库 写作时挑着用 下面这些句子比课文里的更讲究一些。不用全背,挑两三句记住,写的时候把里面的内容换成你自己的学习经历就行。 金句 中文意思 It is not how much we learn, but how we learn that really matters. 真正重要的不是学了多少,而是怎么学。 What I have learned is that mistakes are not failures, but chances to improve. 我明白的是:错误不是失败,而是进步的机会。 Never before have I realized how important it is to learn step by step. 我从未像现在这样意识到循序渐进有多重要。 Not only does reading open my mind, but it also makes my English better. 阅读不仅开阔了我的眼界,还提高了我的英语。 The more I practise, the more confident I become. 我练得越多,就越自信。 Looking back, I can hardly believe how much I have improved. 回头看,我几乎不敢相信自己进步了这么多。 My reading habit has made a big difference to the way I learn. 阅读习惯大大改变了我的学习方式。 It was my English teacher who told me that everyone can become a better learner. 正是英语老师告诉我,每个人都能成为更好的学习者。 Compared with the past, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes. 和过去比,我不再害怕犯错了。 Reading has opened up a new world to me and helped me see things differently. 阅读为我打开了一个新世界,让我看问题的方式都不一样了。 Instead of staying up late, I now review what I have learned before going to bed. 现在我不再熬夜,而是睡前复习当天所学。 It is these small habits that have made me a better learner. 正是这些小习惯让我成为更好的学习者。 Learning is not a race, but a journey that lasts a lifetime. 学习不是赛跑,而是一段持续一生的旅程。 I have come to understand that the more active we are, the more we learn. 我渐渐明白:越主动,学到的就越多。 写学习、阅读类作文时的三个提醒:① 不要只说“它很重要”,要说清“它对我有什么用”;② 写自己的习惯用一般现在时,讲一次具体经历用一般过去时;③ 用 I think / I believe / I find 加一个宾语从句,是这一单元最好用的加分句。 动手试试 挑 3 句,换成写你自己的学习经历 第 4 关 连接与扩展 约 12 分钟 前面备好了词和句,这一关解决两件事:把句子接起来,把一句话写长。 A. 连接词:把句子串起来 组 1 举例(把话说具体) 连接词 意思和用法 for example 例如(后面接一个完整的句子) such as 比如(后面接名词或短语) 组 2 补充(再来一句) 连接词 意思和用法 also 也 What's more 而且(放在句首,后面加逗号) Besides 此外 组 3 转折/对比 连接词 意思和用法 but 但是 however 然而(放在句首,后面加逗号) while 而(表前后对比) 组 4 因果(说明结果) 连接词 意思和用法 because 因为 so 所以 As a result 结果(放在句首,后面加逗号) That's why 这就是为什么 组 5 时间/顺序与总结 连接词 意思和用法 In the past 过去 These days 如今 now 现在 All in all 总的来说 过关练 从下面的词里选一个填空(每词只用一次) For example | What's more | However | As a result | In the past | These days | All in all | because 1. , I could hardly read a whole English story. 2. , I can finish an English story in one evening. 3. I read every day. , I read before going to bed and on the bus. 4. Reading helps my English. , it opens my mind. 5. I used to be afraid of making mistakes. , I now speak English more bravely. 6. I take notes carefully in class. , I have made great progress. 7. I enjoy reading it takes me to new worlds. 8. , reading has become part of my daily life. B. 内容扩展:把一句话写成一个段落 只写一句“我每天读英语”,显得单薄。学会在句子后面补“例子、结果、感受”,一段话就撑起来了。 方法 怎么做 示例 加例子 用 for example / such as 举一件具体的事 For example, we now have a new library. 说结果 用 so / As a result 说这件事带来的影响 As a result, we can read more comfortably. 加感受 用 I am glad that / It's amazing that 说自己的心情 I am glad that I get to read there every day. 对照看看(一句话 一段话) 短句:I like reading. 扩写:I like reading. For example, I read English stories for twenty minutes every night. As a result, my vocabulary has grown a lot. 短句:Taking notes is helpful. 扩写:Taking notes is helpful. When I review my notes before an exam, I can quickly find the key points. What's more, writing them down helps me remember them longer. 扩写练习 把短句写长(用上例子/结果/感受) 1. I have a good learning habit. (用 for example 举一个具体习惯) 2. Reading is important for my English. (用 as a result 说一个结果) 3. I used to be afraid of speaking English. (写一件具体的事,再加一句感受) 4. My teacher helps me a lot. (用 what's more 再补一条) 第 5 关 结构拆解 约 8 分钟 这类作文的三段怎么排 段落 要写的内容 每一段内部的顺序 第 1 段 为什么学/读 一句话点出它对你的意义,可用 play an important part in / open up a new world to me 第 2 段 我的具体做法 写 2—3 个做法:做什么 怎么做 有什么效果 第 3 段 收获与打算 说收获(make great progress / become more confident)+ 一句打算 可以写的内容:学习方法——记笔记、画思维导图、大声朗读、小组讨论、每天练习;阅读习惯——什么时候读、读什么书、怎么记笔记;遇到的困难——记不住单词、不敢开口、看不懂长句。 先把提纲填出来,再动笔 提纲 我来填 ① 学习(或阅读)对我的意义 ② 我平时的 2—3 个具体做法 ③ 我遇到的困难,以及怎么解决的 ④ 我的收获和打算 第 6 关 半成品写作 约 8 分钟 把下面的句子补全(用第 2、3、4 关的词块和句型) 1. , reading plays an important part in my life. (在我看来) 2. I read English stories every day . (因为它能帮我记住更多新单词) 3. I used to , but now I can read a whole story. (读几行就放弃) 4. , I take notes and look up new words. (每读完一本英语故事书) 5. Although I come across many problems, . (我从不灰心) 6. By learning step by step, . (我取得了很大进步) 7. I believe that . (阅读会一直陪着我成长) 第 7 关 独立成文 约 30 分钟 这一关不给提纲,两道题都来自 2025 年的中考真题,看看你能写成什么样。 动笔前扫一眼(写完自己回来对) 开头一句话说清学习(或阅读)对我的意义。 中间写 2—3 个具体做法,不要只说“It is good”。 用上 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句。 至少用 3 个连接词:For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all。 结尾写出我的收获或打算。 词数写到 100—120 词。 【真题 2025 四川雅安中考】“读万卷书,行万里路。”阅读已成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语社即将举办以热爱阅读为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示,以 Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life 为题写一篇短文,分享你对阅读的看法,并提出建议。 内容要点:① 阅读给你和同学们带来了什么好处(如:开阔视野);② 同学们在阅读中还存在什么问题(如:一些人不愿意阅读,一些人没时间阅读);③ 针对存在的问题,提出你的建议(至少 2 条)。 提示词:open up one's mind 写作要求:① 词数 80—100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;② 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;③ 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 我的作文(一) 【真题 2025 北京中考】假设你是李华,你校正在开展“书香校园”活动,英语社团公众号打算做一期以 Dream Library 为主题的推送,为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言,提出你的设想,并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。 提示词语:recommend, new, experience, explore, interest 内容提示: What is your dream library like? How can students benefit from your idea? 开头已给:I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. …… 结尾已给:I hope my dream will come true. Thanks. 我的作文(二) 自评表 写完自己勾一遍 写作前先看,写完后逐条勾 检查项 做到了吗 我写清了“我为什么学习(或阅读)”,说清了它对我的意义 我写了 2—3 个具体的学习方法(或阅读习惯),不是只写“It is good” 写自己的习惯用了一般现在时,讲一次具体经历用了一般过去时 我用上了 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句 我用上了第 2 关里至少 5 个词块 我用上了第 3 关里至少 2 个升级句型 我用了 For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all 这类连接词(至少 3 个) 结尾写出了我的收获或打算 词数在 100—120 词之间,书写清楚 — — 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $
新目标九上 · 单元话题写作精讲讲义 · Unit 3
Smart Learning · How I Learn
新目标(Go for it!)九年级上 | 建议用时 90 分钟 | 教师版
本讲的学习目标
● 会写清“我为什么学习(或阅读)”,一句话说清它对我的意义。
● 会把自己平时的 2—3 个学习方法(或阅读习惯)写具体。
● 会用 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句,表达自己对学习的看法。
● 会讲清遇到过什么困难、是怎么解决的。
● 会从金句素材库里挑句子,改成写自己的学习经历。
● 能独立写出一篇“介绍我的学习方法(或阅读习惯)”的短文。
■ 这份讲义怎么带(只出现在本版)
关卡
建议时长
第 1 关 · 审题定位
约 5 分钟
第 2 关 · 话题词块
约 10 分钟
第 3 关 · 句型升级
约 10 分钟
金句素材库
约 5 分钟
第 4 关 · 连接与扩展
约 12 分钟
第 5 关 · 结构拆解
约 8 分钟
第 6 关 · 半成品写作
约 8 分钟
第 7 关 · 独立成文(两道真题)
约 30 分钟
自评与讲评
约 5 分钟
带法:每一步都先让学生自己动手,再对答案。第 6 关以后不要直接给范文,先让学生写完。
用题说明:第 1 关是典型例题(“畅享阅读”征文,围绕 why / what kind / reading habits 三个问题,可当堂示范);第 7 关两道真题分别取自 2025 四川雅安中考(Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life)和 2025 北京中考(Dream Library),留给学生独立完成。动笔时统一按 100—120 词要求。
第 1 关 · 审题定位 约 5 分钟
■ 先读题目
【典型例题】学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下面三个问题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
三个问题:① Why do you read? ② What kind of books do you read? ③ What are your reading habits?
写作要求:① 根据所给提示,适当发挥;② 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;③ 词数 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
开头已给:I often read books in my free time. ……
■ 动笔前先填这张表
先想清楚
参考答案
① 用第几人称写?
写自己的学习或阅读情况,用第一人称 I
② 用什么时态写?
写平时的习惯用一般现在时;讲一次具体经历用一般过去时
③ 分几段,每段写什么?
3 段:为什么学(读)→ 我的具体做法 → 我的收获和打算
我打算写的具体做法是(学习方法:记笔记/画思维导图/大声朗读/小组讨论;阅读习惯:什么时候读/读什么书/怎么记):
①
②
第 2 关 · 话题词块 约 10 分钟
下面是写“学习、阅读”类作文最常用的词块。写的时候随时翻回来看。
◆ 组 1 · 开头怎么起(说清学习/阅读对我的意义)
词块
释义
play an important part in ...
在……中起重要作用
open up a new world to me
为我打开一个新世界
be an active learner
做一个主动的学习者
learn by doing sth
通过做某事来学习
in general
总的来说;通常
◆ 组 2 · 具体做法怎么写(写清你的学习方法和阅读习惯)
词块
释义
take notes
记笔记
review key ideas
复习要点
use flashcards
用抽认卡
set learning goals
设定学习目标
create mind maps
画思维导图
work in groups
小组合作
take part in class discussions
参加课堂讨论
read aloud
大声朗读
look up words in a dictionary
查词典
step by step
循序渐进
build up
逐步积累
◆ 组 3 · 遇到困难怎么写
词块
释义
come across problems
(偶然)遇到问题
find it difficult to do sth
觉得做某事很难
be afraid of making mistakes
害怕犯错
lose heart
灰心;泄气
learn from mistakes
从错误中学习
get guidance from a teacher
从老师那里获得指导
be positive when ...
在……的时候保持积极
◆ 组 4 · 收获和感受怎么收尾
词块
释义
make great progress
取得很大进步
make a big difference to ...
对……有很大影响
become more confident
变得更自信
develop a good habit of ...
养成……的好习惯
enjoy learning
享受学习
see learning as part of daily life
把学习看作日常生活的一部分
I believe that ...
我相信……
■ 过关练 · 看中文,写出英文词块
1. 做一个主动的学习者 be an active learner
2. 记笔记 take notes
3. 设定学习目标 set learning goals
4. 画思维导图 create mind maps
5. 大声朗读 read aloud
6. 查词典 look up words in a dictionary
7. 循序渐进 step by step
8. 逐步积累 build up
9. 遇到问题 come across problems
10. 害怕犯错 be afraid of making mistakes
11. 取得很大进步 make great progress
12. 对……有很大影响 make a big difference to ...
13. 养成……的好习惯 develop a good habit of ...
14. 把学习看作日常生活的一部分 see learning as part of daily life
第 3 关 · 句型升级 约 10 分钟
同一个意思,换个说法就是九年级的句子。这一单元的重点是宾语从句(I think / I believe / I wonder ...)。左边是简单句,右边是升级句。
◆ 组 A · 开头句(用 I think / I believe 说出你的看法)
简单句(七年级写法)
升级句(九年级写法)
English is important. I think so.
I think (that) English plays an important part in our daily life.
Reading is useful. I believe it.
I believe (that) reading opens up a new world to me.
◆ 组 B · 中间句(宾语从句 + 好搭配,把做法说清楚)
简单句(七年级写法)
升级句(九年级写法)
We should practise every day. I think so.
I think (that) the best way to learn English is to practise using it every day.
Can you help me? I wonder.
I wonder if you could help me with my spoken English.
Do you read English books outside class? I want to know.
I want to know whether you read English books outside class.
◆ 组 C · 结尾句(写收获,也用宾语从句)
简单句(七年级写法)
升级句(九年级写法)
I have made progress. I find it.
I find (that) I have made great progress by learning step by step.
Mistakes help us improve. I have learned it.
I have learned (that) mistakes are chances for us to improve.
■ 改写练习 · 照右边的写法,把句子改一改
1. 用 I think (that) 改写,注意从句要用陈述语序:Is reading important for learning?
【答案】I think (that) reading is important for learning.
2. 用 I wonder if / whether 改写:Can you help me with my spoken English?
【答案】I wonder if you can help me with my spoken English.
3. 用 I find it + adj. + to do sth 改写:It is hard to remember new words.
【答案】I find it hard to remember new words.
4. 用 not only ... but also ... 改写:Reading improves my English. Reading also opens my mind.
【答案】Reading not only improves my English but also opens my mind.
5. 用 The more ..., the more ... 改写:If you practise more, you will learn better.
【答案】The more you practise, the better you learn.
6. 用 I have learned (that) 改写:Mistakes are chances for us to improve.
【答案】I have learned (that) mistakes are chances for us to improve.
金句素材库 写作时挑着用
下面这些句子比课文里的更讲究一些。不用全背,挑两三句记住,写的时候把里面的内容换成你自己的学习经历就行。
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中文意思
It is not how much we learn, but how we learn that really matters.
真正重要的不是学了多少,而是怎么学。
What I have learned is that mistakes are not failures, but chances to improve.
我明白的是:错误不是失败,而是进步的机会。
Never before have I realized how important it is to learn step by step.
我从未像现在这样意识到循序渐进有多重要。
Not only does reading open my mind, but it also makes my English better.
阅读不仅开阔了我的眼界,还提高了我的英语。
The more I practise, the more confident I become.
我练得越多,就越自信。
Looking back, I can hardly believe how much I have improved.
回头看,我几乎不敢相信自己进步了这么多。
My reading habit has made a big difference to the way I learn.
阅读习惯大大改变了我的学习方式。
It was my English teacher who told me that everyone can become a better learner.
正是英语老师告诉我,每个人都能成为更好的学习者。
Compared with the past, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes.
和过去比,我不再害怕犯错了。
Reading has opened up a new world to me and helped me see things differently.
阅读为我打开了一个新世界,让我看问题的方式都不一样了。
Instead of staying up late, I now review what I have learned before going to bed.
现在我不再熬夜,而是睡前复习当天所学。
It is these small habits that have made me a better learner.
正是这些小习惯让我成为更好的学习者。
Learning is not a race, but a journey that lasts a lifetime.
学习不是赛跑,而是一段持续一生的旅程。
I have come to understand that the more active we are, the more we learn.
我渐渐明白:越主动,学到的就越多。
写学习、阅读类作文时的三个提醒:① 不要只说“它很重要”,要说清“它对我有什么用”;② 写自己的习惯用一般现在时,讲一次具体经历用一般过去时;③ 用 I think / I believe / I find 加一个宾语从句,是这一单元最好用的加分句。
■ 动手试试 · 挑 3 句,换成写你自己的学习经历
【参考改写】It is these small habits that have made me a better learner. → It is reading every day that has made me better at English. / The more I practise, the more confident I become. → The more I speak English, the more confident I become.
第 4 关 · 连接与扩展 约 12 分钟
前面备好了词和句,这一关解决两件事:把句子接起来,把一句话写长。
■ A. 连接词:把句子串起来
◆ 组 1 · 举例(把话说具体)
连接词
意思和用法
for example
例如(后面接一个完整的句子)
such as
比如(后面接名词或短语)
◆ 组 2 · 补充(再来一句)
连接词
意思和用法
also
也
What's more
而且(放在句首,后面加逗号)
Besides
此外
◆ 组 3 · 转折/对比
连接词
意思和用法
but
但是
however
然而(放在句首,后面加逗号)
while
而(表前后对比)
◆ 组 4 · 因果(说明结果)
连接词
意思和用法
because
因为
so
所以
As a result
结果(放在句首,后面加逗号)
That's why
这就是为什么
◆ 组 5 · 时间/顺序与总结
连接词
意思和用法
In the past
过去
These days
如今
now
现在
All in all
总的来说
■ 过关练 · 从下面的词里选一个填空(每词只用一次)
For example | What's more | However | As a result | In the past | These days | All in all | because
1. In the past, I could hardly read a whole English story.
2. These days, I can finish an English story in one evening.
3. I read every day. For example, I read before going to bed and on the bus.
4. Reading helps my English. What's more, it opens my mind.
5. I used to be afraid of making mistakes. However, I now speak English more bravely.
6. I take notes carefully in class. As a result, I have made great progress.
7. I enjoy reading because it takes me to new worlds.
8. All in all, reading has become part of my daily life.
■ B. 内容扩展:把一句话写成一个段落
只写一句“我每天读英语”,显得单薄。学会在句子后面补“例子、结果、感受”,一段话就撑起来了。
方法
怎么做
示例
加例子
用 for example / such as 举一件具体的事
For example, we now have a new library.
说结果
用 so / As a result 说这件事带来的影响
As a result, we can read more comfortably.
加感受
用 I am glad that / It's amazing that 说自己的心情
I am glad that I get to read there every day.
◆ 对照看看(一句话 → 一段话)
短句:I like reading.
扩写:I like reading. For example, I read English stories for twenty minutes every night. As a result, my vocabulary has grown a lot.
短句:Taking notes is helpful.
扩写:Taking notes is helpful. When I review my notes before an exam, I can quickly find the key points. What's more, writing them down helps me remember them longer.
■ 扩写练习 · 把短句写长(用上例子/结果/感受)
1. I have a good learning habit. (用 for example 举一个具体习惯)
【参考】I have a good learning habit. For example, I set a small goal every week and review my notes on Sunday.
2. Reading is important for my English. (用 as a result 说一个结果)
【参考】Reading is important for my English. I read English stories every day. As a result, my vocabulary has grown and my writing is better.
3. I used to be afraid of speaking English. (写一件具体的事,再加一句感受)
【参考】I used to be afraid of speaking English. In class, I never raised my hand. Now I am glad that I have become much braver.
4. My teacher helps me a lot. (用 what's more 再补一条)
【参考】My teacher helps me a lot. She explains difficult points patiently. What's more, she encourages me not to lose heart when I fail.
第 5 关 · 结构拆解 约 8 分钟
■ 这类作文的三段怎么排
段落
要写的内容
每一段内部的顺序
第 1 段
为什么学/读
一句话点出它对你的意义,可用 play an important part in / open up a new world to me
第 2 段
我的具体做法
写 2—3 个做法:做什么 → 怎么做 → 有什么效果
第 3 段
收获与打算
说收获(make great progress / become more confident)+ 一句打算
可以写的内容:学习方法——记笔记、画思维导图、大声朗读、小组讨论、每天练习;阅读习惯——什么时候读、读什么书、怎么记笔记;遇到的困难——记不住单词、不敢开口、看不懂长句。
■ 先把提纲填出来,再动笔
提纲
我来填
① 学习(或阅读)对我的意义
② 我平时的 2—3 个具体做法
③ 我遇到的困难,以及怎么解决的
④ 我的收获和打算
第 6 关 · 半成品写作 约 8 分钟
■ 把下面的句子补全(用第 2、3、4 关的词块和句型)
1. To me, reading plays an important part in my life.
(在我看来)
2. I read English stories every day because it helps me remember more new words.
(因为它能帮我记住更多新单词)
3. I used to give up after a few lines, but now I can read a whole story.
(读几行就放弃)
4. Every time I finish an English storybook, I take notes and look up new words.
(每读完一本英语故事书)
5. Although I come across many problems, I never lose heart.
(我从不灰心)
6. By learning step by step, I have made great progress.
(我取得了很大进步)
7. I believe that reading will always be with me as I grow up.
(阅读会一直陪着我成长)
第 7 关 · 独立成文 约 30 分钟
这一关不给提纲,两道题都来自 2025 年的中考真题,看看你能写成什么样。
■ 动笔前扫一眼(写完自己回来对)
□ 开头一句话说清学习(或阅读)对我的意义。
□ 中间写 2—3 个具体做法,不要只说“It is good”。
□ 用上 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句。
□ 至少用 3 个连接词:For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all。
□ 结尾写出我的收获或打算。
□ 词数写到 100—120 词。
【真题 · 2025 四川雅安中考】“读万卷书,行万里路。”阅读已成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语社即将举办以热爱阅读为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示,以 Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life 为题写一篇短文,分享你对阅读的看法,并提出建议。
内容要点:① 阅读给你和同学们带来了什么好处(如:开阔视野);② 同学们在阅读中还存在什么问题(如:一些人不愿意阅读,一些人没时间阅读);③ 针对存在的问题,提出你的建议(至少 2 条)。
提示词:open up one's mind
写作要求:① 词数 80—100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;② 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;③ 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
■ 我的作文(一)
【真题 · 2025 北京中考】假设你是李华,你校正在开展“书香校园”活动,英语社团公众号打算做一期以 Dream Library 为主题的推送,为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言,提出你的设想,并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。
提示词语:recommend, new, experience, explore, interest
内容提示:· What is your dream library like? · How can students benefit from your idea?
开头已给:I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. …… 结尾已给:I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
■ 我的作文(二)
附录 A · 参考范文与亮点标注 讲评时使用
下面这篇是课本 Unit 3 的范文(Chen Lei 的阅读帖),示范“这个习惯从哪儿来 → 读什么 → 怎么读 → 收获”的写法。第 1 关和第 7 关的三道题,结构都可以照搬。
◆ 第一段 · 这个习惯是从哪儿来的
My love of books comes from my mother. Because of her, our home is full of books on different subjects. When I was a child, my mother used to sit me on her knee, tell me stories, and teach me how to read.
◆ 第二段 · 读什么(写清书的变化)
Soon, I was reading by myself. Over time, I found children's books no longer kept me interested. So I started reading other books, newspapers, and magazines. I especially enjoyed popular science books and books about the lives of famous people.
◆ 第三段 · 平时怎么读(写清习惯和方式)
After dinner, I would just pick a book from the shelf to read in my room. Reading opened up new worlds and allowed me to discover new things for myself. In general, I prefer print books, but sometimes I read e-books. I think that reading is great fun.
◆ 第四段 · 阅读给我带来了什么(收获)
Now that I am older, I can always find time to read in the school library. I believe that reading has helped me a lot with my schoolwork and made me more confident about my future.
自评表 · 写完自己勾一遍 写作前先看,写完后逐条勾
检查项
做到了吗
我写清了“我为什么学习(或阅读)”,说清了它对我的意义
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我写了 2—3 个具体的学习方法(或阅读习惯),不是只写“It is good”
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写自己的习惯用了一般现在时,讲一次具体经历用了一般过去时
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我用上了 I think / I believe / I find + 宾语从句
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我用上了第 2 关里至少 5 个词块
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我用上了第 3 关里至少 2 个升级句型
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我用了 For example / What's more / As a result / However / All in all 这类连接词(至少 3 个)
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结尾写出了我的收获或打算
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词数在 100—120 词之间,书写清楚
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