高考英语写作微技能·续写描写（一）动作与情感 专练-2027届高考英语一轮复习专项

高考英语写作微技能 · 续写描写（一）动作与情感 （依据《2025 全品高考第二轮专题 英语 特色专项》写作板块改写） 这本小册子里，我们不写整篇作文，只抠句子。每课练一个管用的句式：看公式和例句，动手翻译几句，再把平淡句升级一下，最后在新情境里自己写一句。答案在书末，先盖住自己做。 技能1 动作链描写：连续动词 + 副词 别再 he was happy / she was sad 了，用一串动词把动作演出来。 公式：主语 + 动词1 + 宾语, 动词2 + 副词, 动词3…（按时间顺序写动作） "Dad! Dad!" the boy shouted, rushing towards his father. The two of them embraced each other tightly, tears rolling down their cheeks. “爸爸！爸爸！”男孩激动地叫喊着，冲向父亲。两个人紧紧地拥抱在一起，泪水顺着脸颊滑落。 I held the bird up and let it go. The bird circled above our heads, as if to express its thanks. 我把鸟举起来放了它。那只鸟在我们头顶盘旋，似乎在表示感谢。 翻一翻 1. 他推开门，快步走进房间，把信递给了我。 2. 她深吸一口气，抬起手，轻轻敲了敲门。 3. 老人慢慢地站起来，拿起伞，走进了雨里。 升级一下 1. 改写：He was happy. He ran to his mother. 2. 改写：She was nervous. She opened the envelope. 技能2 心理描写：realize / It occurred to me… / a lump in one's throat 人物心里在想什么？It occurred to me... / My heart sank... 把内心戏写出来。 公式：It occurred to sb that… / sb realized that… / have a lump in one's throat / one's heart sank / beat faster It occurred to him that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens. 他突然想到一个人无论发生什么事情都应该坚持他的梦想。 Having a lump in my throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined not to judge people by their looks. 喉咙哽塞，我更大声地拍手，下定决心不再以貌取人。 动手译 1. 我突然意识到我忘记带钥匙了。 2. 她意识到自己说错了话，脸一下子红了。 3. 看到那个小男孩摔倒，我的心一下子沉了下去。 改一改 1. 改写：I thought. “Maybe I should try again.” 2. 改写：I was very moved. I could not say a word. 技能3 情感反应句：wild with joy / to one's relief / heartbroken Wild with joy / to one's relief——几个短语就能把情绪顶出来。 公式：To one's relief / joy / disappointment, … / sb be wild with joy / be heartbroken / burst into tears Tim was wild with joy at the news. 听到这个消息，蒂姆欣喜若狂。 To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. 令我们欣慰的是，斯奎特很快就变得健康又强壮。 翻一翻 1. 让我松了一口气，我考过了。 2. 听到这个好消息，他高兴得跳了起来。 3. 看到奶奶生病，她非常难过。 升级一下 1. 改写：I was very happy. I jumped up. 2. 改写：The storm stopped. We felt relieved. 技能4 环境烘托句：wind / clouds / sunlight / river 心情好不好，让天气和风景替你说。 公式：环境名词 + 动词 + 副词（dark clouds rolled in / the wind howled / sunlight poured in…） Dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in. It looked like rain. Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings, making it impossible to see anything. 乌云突然涌了上来，看来要下雨了。大雨笼罩了四周，什么也看不见。 As I walked into the bright sunshine, I couldn't help but think about the art camp. 走进明媚的阳光里，我忍不住想起那个艺术营。 动手译 1. 夜幕降临，路灯一盏盏亮了起来。 2. 风越刮越大，树叶在风中沙沙作响。 3. 阳光透过窗户洒进房间，温暖了整个屋子。 改一改 1. 改写：It was cold. I was afraid. 2. 改写：It was a nice day. We went out for a walk. 参考答案 技能1 动作链描写：连续动词 + 副词 翻译 1. He pushed the door open, walked quickly into the room and handed me the letter. 2. She took a deep breath, raised her hand and knocked gently on the door. 3. The old man rose slowly, picked up his umbrella and walked out into the rain. 升级 1. He leapt to his feet, ran to his mother and gave her a big hug. 2. She hesitated for a moment, then slowly opened the envelope. 技能2 心理描写：realize / It occurred to me… / a lump in one's throat 翻译 1. It suddenly occurred to me that I had forgotten to bring my key. 2. She realized she had said something wrong, and her face turned red at once. 3. My heart sank the moment I saw the little boy fall down. 升级 1. It occurred to me that maybe I should try again. 2. Deeply moved, I had a lump in my throat and could not say a word. 技能3 情感反应句：wild with joy / to one's relief / heartbroken 翻译 1. To my relief, I passed the exam. 2. Hearing the good news, he was wild with joy. 3. Seeing her grandma ill, she felt heartbroken. 升级 1. I was wild with joy and jumped to my feet. 2. To our relief, the storm stopped. 技能4 环境烘托句：wind / clouds / sunlight / river 翻译 1. As night fell, the street lights came on one after another. 2. The wind grew stronger, and the leaves rustled in the trees. 3. Sunlight poured through the window, warming the whole room. 升级 1. A cold wind howled outside, and I huddled in my bed, trembling. 2. The sun shone brightly and a gentle breeze blew, so we went out for a walk. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $