第二次月考高分冲刺Unit3-4 话题作文分层训练 2026-2027学年新人教八年级英语上册

第二次月考高分冲刺Unit3-4 话题作文分层训练 人教版（2026）八年级上册　Unit 3 Same or Different?　Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals　Model Essays（分层范文 20 篇） 第一部分　Unit 3 Same or Different? 写作训练 基础篇 第 1 篇　A Letter to My Cousin About My New Deskmate 【题目要求】你换了新班级已经一个月了。表姐 Zhou Min 发来消息，想知道你在新班里的座位情况。请你用英语给她写一封回信，介绍你的新同桌。请以“A Letter to My Cousin About My New Deskmate”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①说明你换到了哪个班、新同桌的名字； ②用比较结构写一写你们在外貌或性格上的不同； ③写出你们互相帮助的一件小事； ④谈谈你对“同桌不同也能合得来”的看法。 【范文】 Dear Zhou Min, How is your new school in Nanjing? I have news for you. I moved to Class 6 last month, and my deskmate is Wu Yichen. He is a head taller than me, but he is not as loud as I am. He loves maths and can solve a hard problem in ten minutes. I am better at English, so we often help each other. Last Friday he explained a maths question to me, and I checked his English homework. Our characters are quite different, but in my opinion, different deskmates can still be good partners. Write back soon. Yours, Chen Lu 【亮点词句】 1. a head taller than me（比我高一个头） 2. not as loud as I am（不像我这么大声） 3. solve a hard problem（解出一道难题） 4. in my opinion（依我看） 5. Write back soon.（期待你的回信。） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清班级与同桌姓名、两人不同、互相帮助的小事、个人看法，四条要点齐全； ②语言：正确使用 a head taller than、not as … as、better at 等比较结构，并用上 solve、character、opinion 等本单元词； ③结构：书信格式完整，正文按“报信—对比—事例—看法”推进； ④卷面：人名与专有名词首字母大写，标点规范，书写整洁。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 比较级 + 程度补语 He is a head taller than me. ___ is a head taller than ___. 否定式同级比较（不如……） he is not as loud as I am ___ is not as ___ as ___. so 引出结果 I am better at English, so we often help each other. I am better at ___, so we often ___. 第 2 篇　Our Class Personality Survey 【题目要求】上周英语课上，你做了一次“我们班的性格”小调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，向班级英语角投稿。请以“Our Class Personality Survey”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①说明调查的时间、对象与人数； ②用数据写出调查结果； ③用比较结构对比班上两位同学的差异； ④写出你的发现或结论。 【范文】 Last week I did a small survey about our personalities in Class 6. Forty-two students answered my three questions, and the result was interesting. Seventeen of us are more outgoing than the others, and twenty of us are quieter. The other five students were not sure. Li Ke is the most outgoing boy in our class, and he talks with everyone. Xu An is much shyer, but she draws better than anyone else here. In fact, our class is like a big family: the quiet ones listen carefully, and the loud ones speak first. Different personalities make our class more colourful, and I think we need both kinds of people. 【亮点词句】 1. do a small survey（做一个小调查） 2. more outgoing than the others（比其他同学更外向） 3. the most outgoing boy（最外向的男生） 4. draw better than anyone else（画得比谁都好） 5. make … more colourful（使……更丰富多彩） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清调查的时间、人数与结果，并有两位同学的对比和一句结论； ②语言：正确使用 more outgoing than、the most outgoing、better than anyone else 等比较与最高级结构； ③结构：先报告数据、再举例、最后表态，用 and、but、In fact 衔接； ④卷面：数字写法统一，书写工整，无涂改。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 数据 + 比较级 Seventeen of us are more outgoing than the others. ___ of us are more ___ than the others. but 转折对比两人 Xu An is much shyer, but she draws better than anyone else here. ___ is much ___er, but she ___s better than anyone else here. In fact 引出结论 In fact, our class is like a big family. In fact, our ___ is like a big ___. 第 3 篇　A Quiet Passer and a Loud Shooter 【题目要求】你是校篮球队的队员 Lu Kai。请你写一篇短文介绍你和搭档 Zhuang Hao，向校刊运动栏目投稿。请以“A Quiet Passer and a Loud Shooter”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①介绍你们两人的场上位置与外形； ②用比较结构写你们性格与球技上的不同； ③描述一场你们配合取胜的比赛； ④写出你对“搭档互补”的看法。 【范文】 I am Lu Kai, a player of our school basketball team. My partner is Zhuang Hao. He is taller and heavier than me, and he shoots more accurately than anyone else in our team. I am a quiet passer, and he is a loud shooter. Before every game, he shouts and I keep calm. Last month we played against Class 8. In the last minute, he ran to the basket, and I passed the ball to him. He scored, and we won by two points. A quiet passer and a loud shooter can make a very good pair. 【亮点词句】 1. shoot more accurately than anyone else（投篮比谁都准） 2. a quiet passer and a loud shooter（安静的组织者与张扬的投手） 3. win by two points（以两分取胜） 4. keep calm（保持冷静） 5. make a good pair（成为好搭档） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清位置与外形、性格球技的不同、配合取胜的过程与自己的看法； ②语言：正确使用 taller and heavier than、more accurately than anyone else 等比较结构； ③结构：介绍—对比—记叙—议论，用 Before、In the last minute 标时间； ④卷面：人名与班级名首字母大写，书写整洁，标点正确。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 比较级 + than anyone else in He shoots more accurately than anyone else in our team. ___ ___s more ___ly than anyone else in our ___. and 并列连续动作 he ran to the basket, and I passed the ball to him he ___ to the ___, and I ___ed the ___ to him 并列主语 + can make A quiet passer and a loud shooter can make a very good pair. A ___ ___ and a ___ ___ can make a very good ___. 第 4 篇　Why I Chose Luo Ting as My Talk Partner 【题目要求】英语节要举办双人对话秀，老师让你们自己找搭档。请你写一篇短文，说明你为什么选择 Luo Ting 做搭档。请以“Why I Chose Luo Ting as My Talk Partner”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①写出活动的名称与要求； ②说明你选择她的两个理由； ③用比较结构写出你们的互补之处； ④写出你对这次合作的期待。 【范文】 Our English Festival will be on 18 December, and every student needs a partner for a ten-minute talk show. I chose Luo Ting, and here are my reasons. First, she speaks English more clearly than most of us, and she is never afraid of making mistakes. Second, she is patient. I am not as patient as she is, and I always want to finish a task quickly. We are different, but we are a good team: she helps me with my pronunciation, and I help her with new words. I expect our show to be the most interesting one this year. 【亮点词句】 1. speak English more clearly than most of us（英语说得比我们多数人清楚） 2. be afraid of making mistakes（害怕出错） 3. not as patient as she is（不如她有耐心） 4. help sb with sth（在某方面帮助某人） 5. expect … to be（期待……成为） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清活动名称与要求、两个理由、互补之处与期待； ②语言：正确使用 more clearly than most of us、not as patient as 等结构，并用上 patient、expect 等词； ③结构：用 First、Second 列举理由，末段落到期待，层次分明； ④卷面：日期表达与大小写正确，书写工整。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 more + 副词 + than most of us she speaks English more clearly than most of us ___ speaks English more ___ly than most of us not as … as 写自身不足 I am not as patient as she is. I am not as ___ as ___. expect … to be 表期待 I expect our show to be the most interesting one this year. I expect our ___ to be the most ___ one this year. 第 5 篇　Two Weeks with Our Exchange Student 【题目要求】上个月，学校的交换生 Anton 在你班听课两周。请你写一篇短文，向英语报投稿，介绍这两周的情况。请以“Two Weeks with Our Exchange Student”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①介绍交换生的名字、年龄与来处； ②写出一两处你发现的相同点或不同点； ③写出一件你帮助他或他帮助你的小事； ④写出你的感受。 【范文】 For two weeks our class had an exchange student. His name is Anton, and he is fourteen. He comes from a small town near Moscow. At first he was quieter than the other boys, and he ate his lunch alone. So I sat beside him and showed him around our school. He found our school uniform very funny, but he liked our dumplings best. He was much taller than any of us, so he sat in the last row. On the last day he gave me a small box of chocolates and called me his first Chinese friend. Differences never kept us apart. 【亮点词句】 1. an exchange student（一名交换生） 2. quieter than the other boys（比其他男生更安静） 3. show sb around（带某人参观） 4. much taller than any of us（比我们任何人都高得多） 5. keep us apart（使我们疏远） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清交换生的姓名、年龄与来处，两处异同、一件小事与自己的感受； ②语言：正确使用 quieter than、much taller than any of us 等比较结构，并用上 exchange、alone 等本单元词； ③结构：按时间顺序记叙，用 At first、So、On the last day 推进； ④卷面：人名与地名首字母大写，书写整洁，标点正确。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 At first 表起初状态 + 比较级 At first he was quieter than the other boys. At first ___ was ___er than the other ___. so 引出结果 He was much taller than any of us, so he sat in the last row. ___ was much ___er than any of us, so he ___. 否定句收尾概括 Differences never kept us apart. ___ never kept us ___. 提升篇 第 6 篇　The Mirror and Me 【题目要求】学校走廊尽头有一面大镜子。请以此为题写一篇短文，讲述你与这面镜子的故事，向校广播站投稿。请以“The Mirror and Me”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①描写这面镜子的位置和你过去照镜子时的心情； ②写出你曾拿自己与别人比较的内容； ③写出促使你改变的那件事； ④写出你现在对“美”与“差异”的看法。 【范文】 There is a long mirror at the end of our school hall. Two years ago I hated walking past it. I compared my short hair and round face with the tall, slim girls in my class, and I felt worse and worse. Then one afternoon my aunt came to my school. She stood behind me in front of the mirror and told me that my smile was my best part. From that day on I stopped comparing myself with others. Now I walk past the mirror and smile at it. Being different is not a problem. We do not need to look like anyone else; we only need to respect ourselves. 【亮点词句】 1. compare A with B（把 A 与 B 作比较） 2. worse and worse（越来越糟） 3. in front of the mirror（在镜子前面） 4. stop doing sth（停止做某事） 5. respect ourselves（尊重自己） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清镜子位置、过去的心情、比较的内容、转变的契机与现在的看法； ②语言：正确使用 compared … with、worse and worse 等比较结构，并用上 mirror、appearance 类词与 respect； ③结构：过去与现在对比，用 Two years ago、Then、Now 标记时间； ④卷面：书写工整，段落分明，标点规范。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 比较级 + and + 比较级 表“越来越” I felt worse and worse. I felt ___er and ___er. From that day on + 一般过去时 From that day on I stopped comparing myself with others. From that day on I stopped ___ing ___ with ___. not need to do 表不必 We do not need to look like anyone else. We do not need to ___ like anyone else. 第 7 篇　Our Wall Newspaper Won First Prize 【题目要求】上个月学校举行墙报比赛，你们小组负责布置教室后面的一块板。请你写一篇短文，记录这次比赛。请以“Our Wall Newspaper Won First Prize”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代比赛的时间、要求与你们小组的人数； ②写出组内各人的不同长处与分工； ③写出比赛结果； ④写出你的收获。 【范文】 Last month our school held a wall newspaper competition. Each group had to finish a two-metre board in five days, and our group had four members. We were all different. Xu Ran is the most humorous one, so she drew the funny cartoons. He Jia writes the neatest Chinese characters in our class. Wang Bo is strong, and he carried the heavy boxes of paper. I am the slowest, but I am careful with numbers, so I checked the date and the title again and again. On Friday our board won the first prize. Working with different people taught me more than any textbook. 【亮点词句】 1. hold a competition（举办比赛） 2. the most humorous one（最幽默的那一个） 3. the neatest Chinese characters（最工整的汉字） 4. be careful with numbers（对数字很仔细） 5. win the first prize（获得一等奖） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清比赛时间与要求、各人长处与分工、结果与收获，要点齐全； ②语言：正确使用 the most humorous、the neatest、more than any textbook 等比较与最高级结构，并用上 prize、character、humorous 等词； ③结构：交代—分工—结果—收获四层推进，用 so、but 连接； ④卷面：人名首字母大写，书写整洁，标点正确。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 the most + 形容词 + one，so 引出结果 Xu Ran is the most humorous one, so she drew the funny cartoons. ___ is the most ___ one, so she/he ___. 最高级 + in our class He Jia writes the neatest Chinese characters in our class. ___ writes the ___est ___ in our class. 比较级收尾说道理 Working with different people taught me more than any textbook. Working with ___ taught me more than any ___. 第 8 篇　My First Solo on the School Stage 【题目要求】学校艺术节上，你第一次独自表演长笛。请你写一篇短文，记录这次经历。请以“My First Solo on the School Stage”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①写出你练习长笛的时间与感受； ②描写你上台前后的心情； ③写出表演的结果与观众的反应； ④写出这次经历带给你的变化。 【范文】 I have played the flute, a small wooden instrument, for two and a half years, but I never played alone before. Last Friday our school had an art festival. When my name was called, my hands were colder than ice and my legs felt weak. I walked to the centre of the stage and took a deep breath. Then I began to play a short piece about spring. The notes were not as clear as they are in my room, but I did not stop. When I finished, the whole hall clapped, and my teacher said it was my best performance. Now I am more confident than before, and I know that practice really helps. 【亮点词句】 1. play the flute（吹长笛） 2. colder than ice（比冰还凉） 3. take a deep breath（深吸一口气） 4. not as clear as（不如……清楚） 5. more confident than before（比以前更自信） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清练习经历、上台前后的心情、结果与变化，层次完整； ②语言：正确使用 colder than、not as clear as、more confident than before，并用上 flute、performance、confident 等本单元词； ③结构：按时间顺序记叙，用 When、Then、Now 推进，末句点题； ④卷面：书写工整，词数达标，标点与大小写规范。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 never … before 表从未有过的经历 I never played alone before. I never ___ ___ before. not as … as 写实际差距 The notes were not as clear as they are in my room. The ___ were not as ___ as they are in my ___. 比较级 + than before 收尾 Now I am more confident than before. Now I am more ___ than before. 第 9 篇　A Step-Count Survey in Our Class 【题目要求】体育课上，老师让你们记录一周里每天的步数。请你根据记录写一篇短文，汇报这次活动。请以“A Step-Count Survey in Our Class”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①说明活动的时间与记录方法； ②用数据写出全班一周的平均步数； ③用比较结构写出你与同桌的差别； ④写出你的发现。 【范文】 Last week our PE teacher asked us to count our steps. We wore a small meter on our arms and wrote down the numbers every evening. In our class of forty-two students, the average was about eight thousand steps a day, and the longest walk reached nineteen thousand steps. My deskmate Jiang Fan walks to school every day, so she takes more steps than I do. I go to school by bus, and my number is usually smaller. One fact surprised me: on Sunday most of us walked less than two thousand steps. It seems that we need more exercise at weekends. 【亮点词句】 1. count our steps（数步数） 2. the average was about …（平均约为……） 3. reach nineteen thousand steps（达到一万九千步） 4. take more steps than I do（比我走得多） 5. one fact surprised me（有一个事实让我吃惊） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清活动时间与方法、平均数据、与同桌的差别及个人发现； ②语言：正确使用 more steps than I do、less than、smaller 等比较表达，并用上 average、reach、fact 等本单元词； ③结构：方法—数据—对比—发现，用 so、It seems that 衔接； ④卷面：数字表达规范，书写工整，标点正确。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 平均数据的表达 the average was about eight thousand steps a day the average was about ___ a day more … than I do（do 替代前文动词） she takes more steps than I do ___ ___s more ___ than I do less than + 数量表“少于” on Sunday most of us walked less than two thousand steps on ___ most of us ___ less than ___ ___ 第 10 篇　What I Learned from a Direct Newcomer 【题目要求】这个学期，说话很直接的新同学 Zhou Yiran 转到了你班。请你写一篇短文，讲述你从他身上学到的东西。请以“What I Learned from a Direct Newcomer”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①介绍这位新同学以及他说话直接的特点； ②写出你和其他同学一开始的感受； ③写出一件让你改变看法的事； ④写出你从他身上学到的东西。 【范文】 Zhou Yiran came to our class in September. He is the most straightforward boy I know. On his first day he told me that my English pronunciation was not clear, and I felt unhappy. Most of us are not as direct as he is, and we seldom say such things face to face. Two weeks later, however, he helped me practise the same sound again and again, and my reading became much better. Then I understood that his frank words came from an honest heart, not from unkindness. Now I like his way. A true friend sometimes tells you the truth on the first day. 【亮点词句】 1. the most straightforward boy I know（我认识的最直率的男孩） 2. not as direct as he is（不像他那么直接） 3. face to face（面对面地） 4. come from an honest heart（出于一颗诚实的心） 5. tell you the truth（对你说实话） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清新同学的直接特点、大家的感受、转变的事件与学到的道理； ②语言：正确使用 the most straightforward、not as direct as 等结构，并用上 direct、straightforward、honest、situation 类词； ③结构：介绍—感受—举例—感悟，用 however、Then、Now 推进； ④卷面：人名首字母大写，书写整洁，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 the most + 形容词 + 名词 + I know He is the most straightforward boy I know. ___ is the most ___ ___ I know. not as … as 表差异 Most of us are not as direct as he is. Most of us are not as ___ as he is. come from A, not from B 表来源与否定 his frank words came from an honest heart, not from unkindness his ___ words came from ___, not from ___ 第二部分　Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 写作训练 基础篇 第 11 篇　The Flowers and Bees on Our Balcony 【题目要求】你家阳台上种了许多花，今年夏天来的蜜蜂特别多。请你写一篇短文，介绍你的观察。请以“The Flowers and Bees on Our Balcony”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①写出阳台的位置与你家种的花； ②描写蜜蜂来采蜜的过程； ③用数据写出一只蜜蜂每天的工作量； ④写出你的感受。 【范文】 My mother and I grow flowers on our balcony. This summer we had more than ten pots of sunflowers and roses there. On warm mornings, tiny bees visit our flowers one by one and carry pollen on their legs. They also store sweet honey in their honeycombs, and the honey is useful to us. I read that a worker bee visits about one thousand flowers a day, and this pollination gives us more fruit and more seeds. Without them, many plants would have nothing to eat. Now I open the window for them and never drive them away. They are the busiest little workers on our balcony. 【亮点词句】 1. more than ten pots of（十多盆） 2. carry pollen（携带花粉） 3. store honey in the honeycomb（在蜂巢里储蜜） 4. about one thousand flowers a day（每天约一千朵花） 5. drive them away（把它们赶走） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清阳台上的花、蜜蜂采蜜的过程、具体数据与个人感受； ②语言：正确使用 more than、the busiest 等表达，并用上 pollen、pollination、honey、honeycomb、tiny、useful 等本单元词； ③结构：介绍—观察—数据—感受，用 Without 转到呼吁； ④卷面：书写工整，标点规范，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 more than + 数量 we had more than ten pots of sunflowers and roses there we had more than ___ of ___ there Without … 表否定条件 Without them, many plants would have nothing to eat. Without ___, many ___ would have nothing to ___. the + 最高级 + 名词 + 地点 They are the busiest little workers on our balcony. They are the ___est little ___ on our ___. 第 12 篇　A Morning as a Zoo Volunteer 【题目要求】上个月你参加了市动物园的志愿活动。请你写一篇短文，记录这个上午。请以“A Morning as a Zoo Volunteer”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代活动的时间、地点与你的任务； ②描写你与游客或动物的互动； ③用数据写出你了解到的信息； ④写出你的感受。 【范文】 On 5 October I spent a whole morning at the city zoo as a volunteer. My job was to stand beside the elephant house and tell visitors something useful about the animals. I got there at half past eight, before the gate opened. A keeper told me that an adult elephant can eat about one hundred and fifty kilos of food a day, and it drinks as much as a small bathtub of water. That made everyone open their eyes wide. I also showed a group of children how to fold a paper elephant. At noon my legs hurt, but I was the happiest volunteer there. Taking care of animals is not easy, but it is really important. 【亮点词句】 1. as a volunteer（作为志愿者） 2. spend a whole morning（花了一整个上午） 3. eat about one hundred and fifty kilos of food（吃约一百五十千克食物） 4. as much as a small bathtub of water（多达一小浴缸水） 5. fold a paper elephant（折一只纸大象） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清活动时间地点与任务、互动过程、数据与感受，要点齐全； ②语言：正确使用 as much as 同级比较，并用上 useful、fold、importance 类词（important）等本单元词； ③结构：按时间顺序记叙，用 before、Also、At noon 推进，末句点题； ④卷面：日期与数字表达规范，书写工整。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 as much as 同级比较（量） it drinks as much as a small bathtub of water it drinks as much as ___ before 引导时间状语 I got there at half past eight, before the gate opened. I got there at ___, before ___. the + 最高级 + 名词 + 地点 I was the happiest volunteer there. I was the ___est ___ there. 第 13 篇　The Osmanthus Tree in My Grandmother's Yard 【题目要求】你奶奶家院子里有一棵老桂花树。请你写一篇短文，向校刊自然笔记栏目投稿。请以“The Osmanthus Tree in My Grandmother's Yard”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①描写这棵树的位置与外形； ②写出它在九十月的香气与人们的生活； ③写出树下的小生命； ④写出这棵树对你的意义。 【范文】 In my grandmother's yard there is an old osmanthus tree. Its trunk is as thick as a young boy's arm, and its crown covers half of the yard. Every September the small yellow flowers open, and the whole village smells sweet. My grandmother picks the flowers and makes osmanthus cakes with them. In the afternoon, a line of ants travels up the trunk, and some butterflies dance around the leaves. When I was little, I thought a tree was just a tree. Now I see that it is a busy little world, and it is also the symbol of my grandmother's home. 【亮点词句】 1. as thick as a young boy’s arm（有男孩手臂那么粗） 2. the whole village smells sweet（满村都是甜香） 3. pick the flowers（采摘花朵） 4. a line of ants（一列蚂蚁） 5. the symbol of（……的象征） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清树的位置外形、香气与生活、树下的小生命、对你的意义； ②语言：正确使用 as thick as 同级比较，并用上 ant、symbol、popular 类词； ③结构：写景—生活—细节—感悟，用 Every、Now 推进； ④卷面：名词所有格与大小写正确，书写整洁。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 as + 原级 + as 表外形 Its trunk is as thick as a young boy's arm. Its ___ is as ___ as ___. 系动词 + 形容词描述气味 the whole village smells sweet the whole ___ smells ___ be the symbol of 表象征 it is also the symbol of my grandmother's home it is also the symbol of ___ 第 14 篇　One Hundred Paper Cranes for Our Teacher 【题目要求】教师节前，你和同学一起折了一百只纸鹤送给班主任。请你写一篇短文，记录这次活动。请以“One Hundred Paper Cranes for Our Teacher”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代活动的原因、时间与参加的人； ②写出你们怎样折纸鹤； ③写出老师收到礼物时的反应； ④写出你的感受。 【范文】 Before Teachers' Day, eight of us decided to fold one hundred paper cranes for our head teacher, Miss Fang. We bought five packs of paper in four colours and worked in the classroom every lunch break. At first my cranes looked the worst of all, but Liu Xin taught me patiently, and after three days I could fold a tidy one in two minutes. On 9 September we put the cranes into a big glass box and gave it to Miss Fang. She was completely surprised, and her eyes became wet. In Chinese culture the crane is a symbol of long life and good luck. I hope our small gift can bring her happiness every day. 【亮点词句】 1. fold paper cranes（折纸鹤） 2. every lunch break（每天午休） 3. look the worst of all（是所有里最差的） 4. be completely surprised（完全吃了一惊） 5. a symbol of long life and good luck（长寿与好运的象征） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清活动原因与参加者、折纸过程、老师反应与自己的感受； ②语言：正确使用 looked the worst of all 等最高级表达，并用上 fold、completely、symbol、happiness 等本单元词； ③结构：起因—做法—反应—感受，用 At first、but、after 表时间推进； ④卷面：节日名称与数字书写规范，标点正确。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 the + 最高级 + of all my cranes looked the worst of all my ___ looked the ___est of all could + 动词原形表能力 after three days I could fold a tidy one in two minutes after ___ I could fold a tidy one in ___ minutes be a symbol of 表象征 the crane is a symbol of long life and good luck ___ is a symbol of ___ 第 15 篇　Our Insect Hotel Behind the Classroom 【题目要求】今年春天，你们班在教室后面搭了一个“昆虫旅馆”。请你写一篇短文介绍它。请以“Our Insect Hotel Behind the Classroom”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代昆虫旅馆的位置、材料与搭建时间； ②写出哪些小生物住了进去； ③说明它对生态环境的作用； ④写出你和同学的下一步计划。 【范文】 Last March our class built an insect hotel behind our classroom. We used old wood, dry grass and empty bamboo tubes, and the whole box is about one metre long. Soon it became popular with many tiny guests. Mason bees put their eggs in the tubes, ladybirds sleep between the grass, and ants carry food along the wood. Our biology teacher tells us that these small animals keep the school ecosystem healthy, because they help flowers and control bad insects. Next month we plan to build a second one and write a short guide for young students. Every small animal has a role in the schoolyard, and a small box can be a lively home. 【亮点词句】 1. an insect hotel（一个昆虫旅馆） 2. about one metre long（约一米长） 3. become popular with（受到……欢迎） 4. put their eggs in the tubes（把卵产在竹管里） 5. keep the ecosystem healthy（维持生态系统的健康） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清位置材料与时间、住进来的小生物、对生态的作用与下一步计划； ②语言：正确使用比较与数量表达，并用上 popular、tiny、ecosystem、ant、action 类词； ③结构：搭建—住客—作用—计划，用 Soon、because、Next month 衔接； ④卷面：长度与数量表达规范，书写工整。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 become popular with it became popular with many tiny guests ___ became popular with ___ 三个分句并列列举 Mason bees put their eggs in the tubes, ladybirds sleep between the grass, and ants carry food along the wood. A ___, B ___, and C ___. about + 长度 the whole box is about one metre long the whole ___ is about one ___ long 提升篇 第 16 篇　The Mushroom Hunt That Taught Me to Be Careful 【题目要求】秋天雨后，你跟随爷爷去后山采蘑菇。请你写一篇短文，记录这次经历。请以“The Mushroom Hunt That Taught Me to Be Careful”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代时间、地点与同行的人； ②描写山中的景色与你采到的蘑菇； ③写出爷爷教你的辨别方法； ④写出这次经历给你的启示。 【范文】 On a wet October morning, my grandfather and I went up the hill behind our village to pick mushrooms. The air was fresh, and the ground was softer than a carpet. We found seven mushrooms in an hour, and the biggest one was as wide as my hand. When I saw a bright red one and reached for it, my grandfather stopped me at once. He told me that a beautiful mushroom can be the most dangerous one in the forest, and that we must check every mushroom carefully before we cook it. In the end we took home only four. Colour never tells the truth, so we must be careful. 【亮点词句】 1. pick mushrooms（采蘑菇） 2. softer than a carpet（比地毯还软） 3. as wide as my hand（有我的手那么宽） 4. reach for it（伸手去拿） 5. the most dangerous one（最危险的那一个） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清时间地点与同行人、山中景色与收获、辨别方法与启示； ②语言：正确使用 softer than、as wide as、the most dangerous 等比较与最高级结构，并用上 mushroom、reach、importance 类词； ③结构：记叙＋说明，用 When、In the end 推进，末句作结； ④卷面：书写工整，标点规范，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 比较级 + than 表触感 the ground was softer than a carpet the ___ was ___er than a ___ as + 原级 + as 表尺寸 the biggest one was as wide as my hand the ___est one was as ___ as my ___ the most + 形容词 + one in a beautiful mushroom can be the most dangerous one in the forest a ___ can be the most ___ one in the ___ 第 17 篇　A Poster About the Arctic Ocean 【题目要求】学校科学周要求每班做一张海报，你班选定的主题是北冰洋。请你写一篇短文，介绍这张海报的内容。请以“A Poster About the Arctic Ocean”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代海报的主题、制作时间与小组人数； ②写出海报上的主要事实与数据； ③写出北极动物面临的困难； ④写出你班想告诉大家的话。 【范文】 Our science week was in the first week of November. Six of us made a poster about the Arctic Ocean and showed it in the school hall. On the poster, we drew a white bear, two seals and a map of the ice. We also wrote down some numbers. Forty years ago the ice there was thicker than it is today, and now it is about twenty per cent smaller. As a result, many animals can no longer find enough food, and they have to swim much farther than before. At the bottom of our poster we wrote one sentence: the coldest ocean needs our warmest action. We hope every visitor will stop and think about our planet. 【亮点词句】 1. the Arctic Ocean（北冰洋） 2. forty years ago（四十年前） 3. about twenty per cent smaller（小了约百分之二十） 4. no longer find enough food（再也找不到足够的食物） 5. swim much farther than before（游得比以前远得多） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清主题与制作情况、海报事实数据、动物困境与倡议句； ②语言：正确使用 thicker than、twenty per cent smaller、farther than before 等比较结构，并用上 ocean、per cent、protect、planet 等本单元词； ③结构：说明在前、呼吁在后，用 As a result、At the bottom 衔接； ④卷面：the Arctic Ocean 等专有名词首字母大写，书写工整。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 比较级 + than it is + 时间 now it is about twenty per cent smaller now it is about ___ per cent ___er 时间对比（过去与现在） Forty years ago the ice there was thicker than it is today. ___ years ago the ___ there was ___er than it is today. no longer + 动词 many animals can no longer find enough food many ___ can no longer ___ ___ 第 18 篇　The Day We Did Not Agree 【题目要求】上周小组做海报时，你和好朋友 He Miao 在分工上意见不同。请你写一篇短文，讲述这件事。请以“The Day We Did Not Agree”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代任务的内容与你们的分歧； ②描写当时的场面与你的心情； ③写出你们怎样沟通并解决问题； ④写出你对“意见不同”的看法。 【范文】 Last Wednesday our group had to finish an English poster about wild animals in two days. He Miao wanted to draw a big picture, but I wanted to write words. We did not agree at all, and we stood there without speaking for ten minutes. I was really disappointed, because we are good friends. Then I took a deep breath and said that we could do both: she could draw small pictures on the left, and I could write the words on the right. She thought for a moment and nodded. On Friday our poster was the most popular in the class. A disagreement is not the end of a friendship. We just need to communicate and listen. 【亮点词句】 1. have to finish … in two days（必须在两天内完成） 2. not agree at all（完全不同意） 3. be really disappointed（非常失望） 4. take a deep breath（深吸一口气） 5. the most popular one in the class（班里最受欢迎的一张） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清任务与分歧、场面与心情、解决办法与个人看法，要点齐全； ②语言：正确使用 the most popular one 等最高级表达，并用上 agree、disappointed、communicate、popular 等本单元词； ③结构：问题—办法—结果—感悟，用 Then、On Friday 推进； ④卷面：人名首字母大写，书写工整，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 not … at all 强调否定 We did not agree at all. We did not ___ at all. because 引导原因状语从句 I was really disappointed, because we are good friends. I was really ___, because ___. the most + 形容词 + in our poster was the most popular in the class our ___ was the most ___ in the ___ 第 19 篇　Can Plants Talk to Each Other? 【题目要求】科学课上，老师讲到植物之间也会“交流”。请你根据课堂内容写一篇短文，向校科学栏目投稿。请以“Can Plants Talk to Each Other?”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①写出植物交流的方式； ②举一个课堂上学到的例子； ③说明这种能力对植物生存的作用； ④写出你的感想。 【范文】 Can plants talk to each other? Yes, but they do not use words. Scientists find that plants send messages through their roots and through the air. When a pea plant is hurt by an insect, it makes a special smell, and the plants around it begin to prepare for the danger. Some acacia trees even call ants for help: the ants live in the tree and drive the insects away. This kind of connection keeps the ecosystem of the forest healthy. In my eyes, a quiet garden is not quiet at all. Every leaf and every root is busy communicating, and we human beings are only beginning to understand them. 【亮点词句】 1. talk to each other（彼此交流） 2. through their roots and through the air（通过根系和空气） 3. prepare for the danger（为危险做准备） 4. call ants for help（向蚂蚁求助） 5. be busy communicating（忙于交流） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清交流方式、课堂例子、生存作用与个人感想； ②语言：正确使用比较与说明句式，并用上 communicate、connection、pea、ant、tiny 等本单元词； ③结构：设问—举例—说明—感想，用 When、In my eyes 衔接； ④卷面：书写工整，标点规范，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 through … and through … 表方式 plants send messages through their roots and through the air ___ send messages through ___ and through ___ When 从句 + 一般现在时 When a pea plant is hurt by an insect, it makes a special smell. When ___, it ___s a special ___ begin to do 表开始 we human beings are only beginning to understand them we human beings are only beginning to ___ ___ 第 20 篇　A Second-hand Book Sale for Our Planet 【题目要求】世界地球日，你们班在学校操场办了一场二手书义卖。请你写一篇短文，记录这次活动。请以“A Second-hand Book Sale for Our Planet”为题，写一篇 80—120 词的英语短文。 写作要点：①交代活动的时间、地点与目的； ②写出活动中的数据； ③写出钱的用途与减少的浪费； ④写出你的感受与下一步行动。 【范文】 On 22 April, World Earth Day, our class held a second-hand book sale on the playground. We asked every family to bring books they no longer read. In three hours we sold 312 books and got 680 yuan. The money will buy twenty young trees for the hill behind our school. Our teacher told us that one ton of paper needs about seventeen trees, so every old book we reuse saves something from the forest. Nobody in our class was disappointed that day, and everyone was busy and full of happiness. I have already chosen four books for the next sale. Small actions can really protect our planet. 【亮点词句】 1. a second-hand book sale（二手书义卖） 2. books they no longer read（他们不再读的书） 3. one ton of paper needs about seventeen trees（一吨纸需要约十七棵树） 4. save something from the forest（从森林里省下一些东西） 5. full of happiness（满怀幸福） 【给分点】 ①内容：写清时间地点与目的、具体数据、钱的用途与自己的感受； ②语言：正确使用数据表达与 so 结果句，并用上 ton、disappointed、happiness、protect、action、planet 等本单元词； ③结构：起因—数据—用途—感受，用 In three hours、so 衔接； ④卷面：日期与数字书写规范，标点正确，词数达标。 【句式仿写】 句式 范文中的原句 仿写骨架 数据的过去时表达 In three hours we sold 312 books and got 680 yuan. In ___ we sold ___ and got ___ will + 动词原形表打算 The money will buy twenty young trees for the hill behind our school. The money will ___ ___ for ___ so 引导结果 one ton of paper needs about seventeen trees, so every old book we reuse saves something from the forest one ___ needs about ___, so every ___ we reuse saves something from the ___ 人教版（2026）八年级英语上册　第二次月考高分冲刺Units3-4　第 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $