Unit1高分重点练作文范文10篇 2026-2027学年人教九年级英语上册

Unit1高分重点练作文范文 人教版（2026）九年级上册　Unit 1 The Changing World　基础 5 篇 + 提升 5 篇 基础篇 第 1 篇　My Neighbourhood Has Changed 【题目要求】你所在的街区这几年变化很大：旧路面翻修了，路边多了小公园，买东西也不用再跑远路。请向校报投稿，写一篇短文讲讲这些变化，并说说你的感受。 写作要点：①路与绿化有什么变化、新增了哪些便民设施；②现在的生活方便在哪里；③你的感受与祝愿。 【写作训练】 任务 1　补全句子　用下面的词块补全句子（注意形式变化，并用剩下的词块自己写一句）： 词块：in the past / be convenient for / take place / be proud of 1. Great changes have __________________ in our neighbourhood over the last five years. 2. Shopping is much easier now, because the new shop is __________________ everyone. 任务 2　要点扩写　把下面的中文要点扩写成完整的英文句子。 ① 过去：路面窄，没有路灯；② 现在：路边有树，也有小公园；③ 感受：我为这些变化自豪。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　连句成文　以 My Neighbourhood Has Changed 为题成文。第一人称；一般过去时＋现在完成时；80—120 词。提纲：点题 → 过去与现在对比 → 感受与祝愿。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 My neighbourhood has changed a lot over the last five years. A few years ago, the roads were dirty and narrow, and there was only one small shop. Now they are wider and much cleaner, with trees and flowers on both sides. A new convenience store opened last year, so shopping is easier and more convenient for us. Several old houses have become small businesses, and my neighbours support each other more than before. I am proud of all these changes. 【亮点表达】take place（发生）；in the past（在过去）；be proud of（自豪）；be convenient for（方便） 【给分点】满分 10 分　内容 4 分：要点齐全；语言 4 分：时态正确；结构 2 分：首尾完整。（范文实数 81 词） 第 2 篇　How We Travel Now（回复邮件） 【题目要求】你的英国笔友 Sam 来信，询问你家出行方式的变化。请根据提示给他写一封回信。 写作要点：①过去家人怎样出行；②现在怎样出行；③这种变化带来的好处。 【写作训练】 任务 1　补全句子　用下面的词块补全句子（注意形式变化，并用剩下的词块自己写一句）： 词块：used to do sth. / be fast and convenient / greatly improve / save time / railway line 1. Ten years ago, my parents __________________ ride bikes to work. 2. The new subway line is __________________, so we get to school in twenty minutes. 任务 2　要点扩写　把下面的中文要点扩写成完整的英文句子，注意书信语气。 ① 过去：坐慢公交，路上要一个多小时；② 现在：坐地铁，只要二十分钟；③ 好处：省时间，也能多陪家人。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　连句成文　以回信形式成文。书信格式；一般过去时＋used to do sth.；80—120 词。提纲：问候 → 今昔出行对比 → 好处与愿望。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Dear Sam, You asked how my family travel now. Ten years ago, my parents used to ride bikes or take a slow bus, and my father needed over an hour to get to work. Now things are different. A new railway line opened last year, and it has greatly changed our mornings. My parents take the subway now. It is fast and convenient, and the trip takes only twenty minutes. The government has also added more buses, and wider bike paths have been built. Travelling is completely different now, and getting to work is much easier than before. The city says more lines are coming. I hope you can visit us one day. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点表达】used to do sth.（过去常常做某事）；railway line（铁路线）；greatly improve（大大改善）；get to work easily（轻松上班）；save time（节省时间） 【给分点】满分 10 分　内容 4 分：要点齐全、书信格式正确；语言 4 分：used to do sth. 等句式准确；结构 2 分：行文连贯。（范文实数 116 词） 第 3 篇　Grandpa Learns Something New 【题目要求】社区里最近新开了一家“数字生活课堂”，很多老人来学习使用智能手机。请你根据下面的要点，写一篇短文投稿。 写作要点：①爷爷过去不会做什么；②你是怎样帮助他的；③他现在的变化与你的感受。 【写作训练】 任务 1　补全句子　用下面的词块补全句子（注意形式变化，并用剩下的词块自己写一句）： 词块：digital tools / at first / give up / step by step / be proud of oneself 1. __________________ he found the phone hard to use, but he did not __________________. 2. My grandpa learns __________________; now he can pay with his phone. 3. He says he __________________ for not giving up. 任务 2　要点扩写　把下面的中文要点扩写成完整的英文句子。 ① 从前：爷爷连开机都不会；② 过程：我教他拍照、用手机付钱；③ 现在：他常用手机，还教邻居。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　连句成文　以 Grandpa Learns Something New 为题成文。第一人称；一般过去时＋现在完成时；80—120 词。提纲：遇到的困难 → 学习过程 → 结果与看法。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Last summer, my grandfather got a new smartphone. At first, he could not use it at all. He used to say, “This is too hard for me.” I decided to help him. Every evening, I taught him one small thing, like how to take a photo or send a message. It was not easy, but he never gave up. After two weeks, he could make video calls by himself. Now Grandpa uses his phone easily and conveniently. He often shows other villagers how to use it, and he has become their digital leader. My parents support him. I am proud of him. This experience taught me that our society is changing, but we are never too old to learn. 【亮点表达】digital tools（数字工具）；at first（起初）；give up（放弃）；step by step（一步一步地）；be proud of oneself（为自己感到自豪） 【给分点】满分 10 分　内容 4 分：要点齐全、主题明确；语言 4 分：digital tools 等词块使用正确；结构 2 分：层次清楚、语句通顺。（范文实数 119 词） 第 4 篇　A Greener School 【题目要求】校报“绿色校园”专栏向全校同学征稿。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文，谈谈本校的环保行动。 写作要点：①学校的环保做法（至少两条）；②这些做法带来了什么变化；③你的呼吁。 【写作训练】 任务 1　补全句子　用下面的词块补全句子（注意形式变化，并用剩下的词块自己写一句）： 词块：be widely used / take part in / do something for the earth / keep ... green 1. Paper bags __________________ in our school canteen now. 2. Every student should __________________ the activity. 3. Our class plans to __________________ the earth. 任务 2　要点扩写　把下面的中文要点扩写成完整的英文句子。 ① 现象：每天有很多废纸和塑料瓶；② 做法：把废纸收集起来送去回收；③ 希望：更多同学加入，让校园更绿。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　连句成文　以 A Greener School 为题成文。第一人称复数；一般现在时＋现在完成时；80—120 词。提纲：现象 → 做法 → 呼吁。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Our school has started a green plan. We sort our rubbish into different boxes and put them in convenient places. We also turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Last spring, we planted young trees and put better soil around them. These small actions have brought real changes. The school is greatly cleaner, and it now produces much less waste. Bottles and paper are widely reused, so nothing is wasted. I think everyone should support the plan. If each of us does a little, we can easily make our school and our city better places to live. 【亮点表达】be widely used（被广泛使用）；easily and conveniently（轻松便捷地）；take part in（参加）；do something for the earth（为地球做些事）；keep our school green（让校园常绿） 【给分点】满分 10 分　内容 4 分：要点齐全、切题；语言 4 分：被动语态与词块使用正确；结构 2 分：层次分明、首尾呼应。（范文实数 99 词） 第 5 篇　The Best Change in My Life 【题目要求】下周英语社团活动要请同学上台分享，主题是“我身上发生的一次改变”。请写一篇短文，讲清这次改变是怎么发生的，以及它带给你的感受。 写作要点：①你身上发生的一个变化；②这个变化是怎样发生的；③你的感受。 【写作训练】 任务 1　补全句子　用下面的词块补全句子（注意形式变化，并用剩下的词块自己写一句）： 词块：be afraid of doing sth. / read aloud / little by little / become more confident / so far 1. At first I __________________ English in class. 2. My teacher asked me to __________________ for ten minutes every morning. 3. __________________ I have __________________. 任务 2　要点扩写　把下面的中文要点扩写成完整的英文句子。 ① 过去：我不敢在课堂上说英语；② 过程：老师让我每天朗读十分钟；③ 现在：我已经能自信地表达。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　连句成文　以 The Best Change in My Life 为题成文。第一人称；一般过去时常＋现在完成时；80—120 词。提纲：从前的困难 → 改变过程 → 现在的我。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 The best change in my life is that I have become braver. Two years ago, I was afraid of speaking English in class. My face turned red, and I could not speak. Then my teacher handed me a notebook. She asked me to write down one sentence every day and read it aloud. I also joined a discussion group with three classmates, and I kept a digital notebook on my phone to record new words. Our group leader gave us a small plan, and we supported each other. Now I can answer questions easily in class with a smile. This change has greatly improved my English, and I am much more confident. Small steps can lead to big changes. 【亮点表达】be afraid of doing sth.（害怕做某事）；read aloud（大声朗读）；little by little（一点一点地）；become more confident（变得更自信）；so far（到目前为止） 【给分点】满分 10 分　内容 4 分：要点齐全、感情真实；语言 4 分：词块与现在完成时使用正确；结构 2 分：按时间展开、衔接自然。（范文实数 119 词） 提升篇 第 6 篇　Changes Around Us: Good or Bad? 【题目要求】英语课上，同学们就“身边的变化是好事还是坏事”展开讨论。请结合下面的提示谈谈你的观点。 写作要点：①变化带来的好处；②变化也可能带来问题；③你的看法。 【写作训练】 任务 1　句子升格 原句：Change makes our life easier.　改写： ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 2　思路梳理　用英文写出三个关键句（不必成文，只写提纲句）： ① 变化带来的好处（举一个例子）；② 变化可能带来的问题；③ 你的看法。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　直接成文　以 Changes Around Us: Good or Bad? 为题成文。议论文；一般现在时；80—120 词。结构：观点 → 正反理由 → 结论。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Change is everywhere in our life. New roads, new phones and new ways of shopping have made our life much easier. For example, we can buy train tickets online in a minute, which is very convenient. However, change can also bring problems. Digital tools are widely used, but some old people feel lost when everything is online, and some old streets lose their warm feeling. If a society only looks at speed, we may forget the people around us. In my opinion, change itself is neither good nor bad. What matters is how we deal with it. The government should support the old, and we should welcome new things while taking care of those left behind. 【亮点表达】in my opinion（依我看）；What is more（而且）；change one’s mind（改变某人的想法）；look on the bright side（看到好的一面）；play an important part in（在……中起重要作用）；make the right choice（做出正确的选择） 【给分点】满分 15 分　内容 6 分：观点明确、正反理由各一条；语言 5 分：比较结构与词块使用正确；结构 4 分：观点、理由、结论完整。（范文实数 116 词） 第 7 篇　A Letter to the Mayor 【题目要求】你所在的城市正在改善交通与环境。请给市长写一封英文信，提出你的建议。 写作要点：①指出目前存在的问题；②提出至少两条建议；③你的期待。 【写作训练】 任务 1　句子升格 原句：There are too many cars in our town.　改写： ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 2　思路梳理　用英文写出三个关键句（不必成文，只写提纲句）： ① 问题（上下学路上车多、灰尘大）；② 建议（增设公交线或自行车道）；③ 希望的结果。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　直接成文　以 A Letter to the Mayor 为题成文。书信格式；一般现在时＋should；80—120 词。结构：说明问题 → 提出建议 → 表达希望。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Dear Mayor, I am a junior high school student. I love our city, and I hope it will become better. However, I have noticed some problems. In the morning, the roads near our school are often crowded, and the air is dirty. I have two suggestions. First, more buses and a new railway line should be added, so that fewer people will drive. Second, the city could build wider green paths for cyclists and walkers. This is convenient and good for our health. I believe that if the government and everyone in our society work together, our city will be greener and more beautiful. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点表达】write to sb. about sth.（就某事给某人写信）；suggest doing sth.（建议做某事）；be good for our health（对我们的健康有益）；the number of（……的数量）；as a result（结果） 【给分点】满分 15 分　内容 6 分：要点齐全、书信格式规范；语言 5 分：建议句式与词块使用正确；结构 4 分：语气礼貌、条理清楚。（范文实数 113 词） 第 8 篇　Growing Up with a Changing Town 【题目要求】学校英文报“我与家乡”栏目正在征稿。请写一篇短文，讲述你与家乡一起成长的故事。 写作要点：①家乡过去的样子；②这些年发生的变化；③你的感受与愿望。 【写作训练】 任务 1　句子升格 原句：Our town has changed a lot.　改写： ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 2　思路梳理　用英文写出三个关键句（不必成文，只写提纲句）： ① 十年前的家乡；② 现在的变化（住房、交通、环境任选两点）；③ 我的成长感悟。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　直接成文　以 Growing Up with a Changing Town 为题成文。第一人称；一般过去时＋现在完成时；80—120 词；按时间线推进。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 I have lived in this town all my life and watched it grow. When I was little, there used to be only one narrow street, and my father took me to the market on his old bike. Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place. A wider road runs through the town now, and a new library stands where an empty field used to be. Many families have moved into new flats, and the old houses near the market have gone. Shopping is much easier than before. Sometimes I miss the quiet days of our old village. But change brings new chances. I hope my hometown and I can both become better together. 【亮点表达】grow up（长大）；there used to be（过去有）；over the past ten years（在过去的十年里）；move into a new flat（搬进新公寓）；be filled with（充满） 【给分点】满分 15 分　内容 6 分：要点齐全、时间线清楚；语言 5 分：there used to be 等句式正确；结构 4 分：今昔对比、感悟自然。（范文实数 115 词） 第 9 篇　My Changing Hometown（演讲稿） 【题目要求】下周学校英语节有演讲环节，主题定为“家乡的新样子”。请准备一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈家乡的变化、这些变化带来的影响，并写出你的情感与呼吁。 写作要点：①家乡的变化（至少两个方面）；②变化带来的影响；③你的情感与呼吁。 【写作训练】 任务 1　句子升格 原句：Our village is better now.　改写： ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 2　思路梳理　用英文写出三个关键句（不必成文，只写提纲句）： ① 家乡最大的变化；② 变化的原因（政府、科技或村民）；③ 对未来的期待。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　直接成文　以 My Changing Hometown 为题写演讲稿。有称呼与呼告；一般现在时＋现在完成时；80—120 词。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Hello, dear teachers and classmates! My topic today is my changing hometown. Ten years ago, my hometown was a quiet village. The roads were sandy, and most people worked on farms, growing corn and rice on poor soil. Now it has changed greatly. Clean buses and trains run along the new railway, and farmers sell their products online. The government has helped us build a better life, and our hills are green again. These changes have brought us a lot, but they have also taught us something important. We should develop, but never forget our traditions. I love my hometown. I will study hard and do something for it in the future. Thank you! 【亮点表达】talk about sth.（谈论某事）；grow corn（种玉米）；sandy soil（沙质土壤）；make our hills green（让我们的山变绿） 【给分点】满分 15 分　内容 6 分：要点齐全、有演讲语气；语言 5 分：词块与现在完成时使用正确；结构 4 分：称呼呼告得当、收尾有力。（范文实数 114 词） 第 10 篇　Small Actions, Big Changes 【题目要求】省下一度电、少用一只塑料袋，这些小事看着不起眼，却可能带来大改变。请参加校报征文，用你做过的一件环保小事说明这一点，并发出你的倡议。 写作要点：①小行动如何带来大变化（举例说明）；②为什么很多人忽视小行动；③你的呼吁。 【写作训练】 任务 1　句子升格 原句：We should protect the environment.　改写： ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 2　思路梳理　用英文写出三个关键句（不必成文，只写提纲句）： ① 我做过的一件环保小事；② 它带来的改变；③ 我的倡议。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 任务 3　直接成文　以 Small Actions, Big Changes 为题成文。第一人称；一般过去时＋一般现在时；80—120 词；首尾呼应。 ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 【范文】 Many people think only big plans can change the world. In fact, small actions often make a big difference. Take my family as an example. Last year, we had a family discussion and decided to sort our rubbish and carry cloth bags when shopping. These actions seemed small at first, but our habits changed completely. In six months, we produced far less waste, and plastic bags were widely reused in our building. Now it is easy and convenient for us to live a green life. Why do many people ignore small actions? They think one person can do nothing. But if every family in our society joins in, the change will be huge. So let us start today. 【亮点表达】from then on（从那时起）；one by one（一个接一个）；one small step at a time（一次一小步）；it is + adj. + to do sth.（做某事是……的）；in a word（总之） 【给分点】满分 15 分　内容 6 分：要点齐全、倡议明确；语言 5 分：词块与时态使用正确；结构 4 分：首尾呼应、层次清楚。（范文实数 118 词） 人教版（2026）九年级上册　Unit 1　作文范文 10 篇　第 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $