专题10 写作（期中专项训练）六年级英语上学期（外研版三起·新教材）

期中专项训练·外研版三起六上 专题10 写作 解题小技巧 写作练习 内容导航 解题小技巧 英语写作答题分为审题划要点、搭建框架、书写检查三步。 ①仔细审题，圈出全部要求。看清题目、时态、字数、必用单词、要点清单。旅行、节日类短文多用一般过去时；健康建议、日常习惯用一般现在时。把题目要求的关键词、要点全部标记，保证不遗漏信息。 ②先搭简单提纲，再动笔写。按照 “开头 — 中间细节 — 结尾感受” 的顺序写。开头交代背景；中间写动作、事件；结尾写感受、评价。优先使用自己熟练的句型，少用长难句。遇到提示词，一定要全部用上；可以用 And/Then 衔接句子，让行文更流畅。 ③写完通读检查。重点核查：时态统一、动词变形、人称、名词单复数；检查句首大写、句末标点，注意单词拼写。控制字数，不要过少也不要过度拓展。书写工整，保持卷面干净。遇到不会写的单词，换成简单同义单词，不要空着。平时积累话题句型，背诵范文里的万能句式。 （一） 合理使用零花钱有助于我们养成良好的消费习惯。请根据表格，以My Pocket Money Plan为题，按照思维导图提示，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 内容不少于40个单词； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。 My Pocket Money Plan _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （二） 你平时是如何使用零花钱的?请根据提示以 “My Money Choices” 为题写一篇短文。 要求：1. 内容不少于 5 句; 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。 提示问题： 1. What do you spend your pocket money on? 2. Do you save any pocket money? 3. Do you share your pocket money? How? My Money Choices _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假设你叫李明，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对中国传统文化的看法。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。 提示： 1. 你最喜欢中国的哪个传统节日 (如春节、中秋节、端午节等)； 2. 你为什么喜欢它 (至少给出两个理由)； 3. 邀请Tom来中国体验这个节日。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 2. 词数：60词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked me about Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming （四） 题目：My opinion on birthday gifts 要求： 1. 不少于6句话； 2. 必须用到单词：opinion, better, important, gift, than； 3. 写出你的观点，分2-3条理由支撑你的看法。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （五） 智能手机的发展对我们的生活产生了什么影响？是对我们的帮助多，还是负面影响多？同学们展开了激烈的讨论。假如你是Amy，请发表对智能手机的看法，并说明原因。 提示： (1) What things can you do with a smartphone? (2) Do you have any small problems with smartphones? (3) Is it easier to talk with friends because of smartphones? (4) Do smartphones make your family life better? (5) What can you do to let smartphones help you more? 要求：词数50左右；语句通顺，意思明确，正确运用所学英语表达。 Smartphones—Helpful or Harmful? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （六） 校园报正在征集最美自然公园的征文。请根据表格提示，介绍一下西溪国家湿地公园。 要求：使用最高级；语句通顺，逻辑合理，写作规范；不少于5句话。 Xixi National Wetland Park _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （七） 假设你叫李华，去年暑假你和父母去了九寨沟 (Jiuzhaigou) 旅游。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍你的旅行经历。 提示： 1. 九寨沟在哪里？ 2. 你看到了什么？（湖泊、瀑布、森林等） 3. 你的感受如何？ 要求：语句通顺，书写规范，可适当发挥。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假设你上周和家人去郊外的森林公园游玩，请以“A Wonderful Day in the Forest”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。 要求： 1. 简单描述森林的景色特点。 2. 记录1-2项你在森林里的活动。 3. 写出你这次出行的心情和收获。 4. 语句通顺，可以用到句型There are...；I can see...；I felt...等。 A Wonderful Day in the Forest _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文及解析 （一） 范文： I usually get 20 yuan as pocket money from my parents every week. I try to use it well. First, I spend 5 yuan on school things, like new erasers or notebooks. They are important for my school life. Then, I save 12 yuan in my saving pot. When I save enough, I want to buy a science book. I never use my money to buy lots of sweet snacks, because they are bad for my teeth. Sometimes I give 3 yuan to help poor kids. Using pocket money well helps me learn to save. It’s a good habit for me. 【解析】 题干解读：人称 用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：pocket money零花钱；spend…on…花费…… 在……；save储蓄；saving pot存钱罐；snacks零食；be bad for对……有害 参考句型：I spend ... on ...；I save ... in ...；I never use ... to ... （二） 范文： My Money Choices I get some pocket money every week. First, I usually spend some money on things I need, like notebooks and pens for my studies. Sometimes I also buy small snacks after class. I do save some pocket money, too. I put 10 yuan into my saving pot each week. I plan to use the saved money to buy a storybook. I also like to share my pocket money. When there are charity activities at school, I will take out some money to help children in poor areas. It makes me happy to know my money can help others. 【解析】题干解读：该题目时态是一般现在时，人称是第一人称。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：pocket money零花钱，spend…on…花费……在……，save储蓄，saving pot存钱罐，snacks零食，be bad for对……有害 参考句型：I spend...on ...；I save...in ...；I never use...to..；Using...well helps me... （三） 范文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked me about Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, the Spring Festival is the most important and interesting festival in China. I like it for two reasons. First, family members get together and have a big dinner. We talk and laugh happily. Second, children can get red packets with lucky money. It’s exciting! I hope you can come to China next Spring Festival. You will have a wonderful time with my family. Yours, Li Ming 【解析】题干解读：注意时态用一般现在时。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：receive收到，traditional传统的，In my opinion依我之见，important重要的，interesting有趣的，reasons理由，have a big dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，happily开心地，red packets红包，wonderful精彩的 参考句型：I’m glad...；I like/hope...；First...Second...；I hope you can...；You will... （四） 范文： My opinion on birthday gifts I want to share my opinion on birthday gifts. I think small gifts are better than expensive ones. First, love is more important than money. A hand-drawn card is warm and special. Second, expensive gifts may make people feel stressed. Small gifts are light and fun. Third, we can share gifts with our classmates, and it makes our friendship stronger. In a word, I believe simple gifts show our true love much better. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目用第一人称，时态是一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：share分享，expensive昂贵的，special特殊的，stressed有压力的，friendship友谊 参考句型：I want to…；I think…；I believe… （五） 范文： Smartphones—Helpful or Harmful? Smartphones are useful but they also have some problems. I can look up new words and chat with friends on my phone. It is easy for me to talk with friends far away. I often play games on my phone and forget to read books. My family even uses phones at dinner and they don’t talk. We must make rules and use smartphones well. 【解析】1.题干解读：注意文章为一般现在时态。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：look up new words查新单词，chat with friends和朋友聊天，play games玩游戏，read books读书，make rules制定规则 参考句型：Smartphones are...；I can...；It is easy for me to...；I often ... and...；We must... （六） 范文： Xixi National Wetland Park   Xixi National Wetland Park is in Hangzhou, Zhejiang. This park is over 11 square kilometres in size. And it’s one of the oldest urban wetlands in China—its history is more than 1,000 years! There are many fun things to do here. You can take wooden boat rides on the water, and you can also take photos by the old bridge. I think Xixi National Wetland Park is one of the best natural parks in our country. 【解析】题干解读：主要用第三人称，时态为一般现在时。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：wetland park湿地公园，square kilometres平方公里，in size面积，urban wetlands城市湿地，more than超过，fun things有趣的事情，take wooden boat rides乘坐木船，on the water在水上，take photos拍照，by the old bridge在老桥旁，natural parks自然公园 参考句型：This park is...；It’s one of...；Its history is...；You can...；I think... （七） 范文： Last summer holiday, I went to Jiuzhaigou with my parents. Jiuzhaigou is in Sichuan Province. It is one of the most beautiful places in China. When we got there, I was amazed by the colourful lakes. The water was so clear that I could see the bottom. Some lakes were blue, some were green, and some were even yellow. They looked like beautiful gems in the mountains. We also saw many waterfalls. The water ran down from the high mountains and made a loud sound. It was so exciting! There were tall trees everywhere. The air was fresh and clean. I took many photos with my parents. We had a wonderful time there. I love Jiuzhaigou. It is really a wonder of nature. I hope more people can visit it and enjoy its beauty. We should also protect this beautiful place. 【解析】题干解读：注意时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：in Sichuan Province在四川省，amazed大为惊奇的，clear清澈的，waterfalls瀑布，ran down倾泻而下，exciting令人激动的，wonderful精彩的。 参考句型：Last summer holiday, I...；Jiuzhaigou is...；It is...；When we got there, I...；The water was...；Some lakes were...；They looked like...；We also...；The water...；It was...；The air was...；I took...；We had...；I love...；I hope...；We should... （八） 范文： A Wonderful Day in the Forest Last week, I went to a forest park with my family. There were many tall green trees and sweet wild flowers. I could see little birds flying in the sky. We picked up colorful leaves and had a small picnic. I felt so relaxed. This trip let me find the quiet beauty of nature. 【解析】题干解读：人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：wonderful day美好的一天，forest park森林公园，tall green trees高大的绿树，wild flowers野花，colourful leaves五颜六色的树叶，have a picnic野餐。 参考句型：There were...；I could see...；I felt... 答案第1页，共2页 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $