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专题09 书面表达(话题+材料+书信+看图)
(一)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第九中学·期中)你校英语俱乐部面向全体同学发起征文,评选“幸福之家”。假如你是Lisa,请根据以下要点以“I Love My Family”为题,介绍一下你和你的幸福家庭。
要点:1. personal (个人) information (name, age, hobby…)
2. family members’ information (appearance外貌、personality性格、hobby爱好…)
3. What do you think of your family?
要求:1. 包含以上内容提示,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,行文连贯,语法正确;
3. 书写认真规范,字数60左右。
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
(25-26七上·河北保定第十七中学·期中)新学期已过去两个多月,你早已融入初中校园,熟悉了新的老师、同学和校园生活。现在班级将开展“我的初中初体验”主题分享活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向老师和同学们更深入地介绍自己,让大家对你有更全面的了解。
内容提示:1. What do you look like?
2. What do you like to do at school and after school?
3. How do you like your middle school life? (teachers, classmates, classes, activities, …)
写作要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实人名,校名和地名;
3. 词数:60左右。
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(三)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第二中学·期中)假如你是李华,家里经营着“绿树农场”。节假日期间为了吸引外国游客前来参观,你帮助父母推出了一个线上VR浏览项目,并希望为该项目配上英文讲解词。请你根据图片,用英文介绍农场。
要求:
1.包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2.50词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Welcome to Green Tree Farm! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We hope you can come and have fun!
(一)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄外国语学校·期中)一个幸福的家庭,离不开温暖的家人相伴与温馨的房间布置。我校“星火社团”将举办以“我爱我家”为主题的征文活动,请你以Li Hua的身份用英语撰写一篇短文投稿,介绍你与你的家庭。文章需包含:你和家人的基本信息(如年龄、职业、兴趣爱好等),以及你房间内的主要物品(如书桌、绿植等),传递对家庭的热爱之情。
提示问题:
(1)What’s your name and how old are you?
(2)How many people are there in your family? Who are they?
(3)What are your family members’ hobbies?
(4)What do you have in your room?
要求:
1.包含所有要点,可适当拓展;
2.短文中不得出现真实的班名和人名;
3.词数60-80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. Let me tell you something about my family and me.
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(二)
(2026·河北邢台第五中学·期中)英国网友Jack在网上发布了一个交友的帖子。假如你是李林,请你阅读他的帖子后写一篇英文帖子进行回复。
I’m Jack. I’m from the UK. And I’m 13 years old. I love sports. I’d like to make friends with you. How old are you? What do you like? And can you tell me about your family?
注意:
(1)帖子需对Jack的问题进行回复,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
(3)50词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi, Jack. My name is Li Lin.
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(三)
(25-26七上·河北张家口桥东区·期中)时间过得真快,转眼你进入初中已经两个多月了。假如你是李华,请根据以下问题简要介绍你的好朋友。
1)What does he/ she look like?
2)What is his/ her favorite subject?
3)What do you often do together?
要求:1)词数:60左右;2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;3)内容可适当发挥。
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(四)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第十七中学·期中)请根据图片,以Yaming’s Family为题,介绍Yaming的家庭情况。
提示:
1. 发挥想象力,合理补充Yaming的情况,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
Yaming’s Family
Yaming has a happy family.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄长安区第二十三中学·期中)假设你是付星,你的英国笔友 Vicky给你写信,想了解你的初一生活、学习情况。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一封回信。
内容:
(1) Your best friend or favourite teacher (name, age, appearance, personality and hobby)
(2) The places at school (classroom, library, sports field...)
要求:
(1)回信须包含以上两点,可适当发挥。词数不低于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Vicky,
I’m so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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(一)
(25-26七上·河北省石家庄市新华区第三十八中学·期中)假如你叫李华,你的家庭将要接待一名来自英国的留学生Tom,请根据以下提示,简单介绍一下自己的家人和为他准备的房间,可以适当发挥。
Name
Li Hua
Age
13
Telephone Number
12345678910
Family Members
父亲(医生),母亲(老师)
简述家人的职业、性格和喜好。
The room for Tom
干净整洁,桌子挨着窗户,床在桌子对面。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括提示信息,可适当增加细节。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数60词左右,开头结尾已写好,不计入总词数
Hello, I am Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第二十七中学·期中)假如你是李明,初中生活已经开始两个月了,请根据以下提示给你的笔友Peter写一封信,分享你的初中生活。
提示:
1.介绍自己的一位新朋友(name, age, hobby, favorite food) ;
2.请结合照片描述新朋友的书桌及物品摆放。
要求:
1.内容根据所给的信息可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。
3.不少于 70词。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to introduce my new life to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
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专题09 书面表达(话题+材料+书信+看图)
(一)
【答案】例文
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m Lisa, a 14-year-old student. I enjoy reading and drawing. There are four people in my family. My father is tall and kind. He likes cooking. My mother has long hair and she is very patient. She loves gardening. My little brother is lively and funny. We often play together. I think my family is full of love and happiness. We share laughter every day. I love my family very much.
(二)
【答案】例文
Hello everyone! I’m a tall girl with long hair and glasses. At school, I enjoy reading books and playing basketball with my friends. After school, I often draw pictures or help my parents. I think my middle school life is wonderful because my teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. We have interesting classes and fun activities. I really love my new school!
(三)
【答案】例文:
Welcome to Green Tree Farm! It’s a big farm. The grass is so green. You can see many kinds of animals. Look at the geese. We have thirteen geese and they are swimming in the river. We also have seven ducks on the farm. There are five apple trees, some carrots and tomatoes.
Do you see our house? It’s beautiful.
We hope you can come and have fun.
(一)
【答案】 Hello, everyone. Let me tell you something about my family and me. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. There are three people in my family—my parents and me. My father is a teacher who enjoys reading books. My mother loves cooking delicious food for us. In my room, there is a big desk by the window where I study every day. I also have a green plant on it, which makes the room fresh. I really love my warm family.
(二)
【答案】例文
Hi, Jack. My name is Li Lin. I’m 14 and I’m from China. I love drawing. I have a happy family. My mother is① 40. She’s beautiful and kind. She likes gardening. My father is② 43. He is tall. And he likes sports too. My brother is 10 years old. He’s clever. He likes hiking. We love each other.
(三)
【答案】例文:
My best friend is Lucy. She has long black hair and big eyes. Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it’s interesting and useful. We often study together after school. We also help each other with study. Sometimes we play basketball on the playground. It’s really fun. I’m happy to have such a good friend.
(四)
【答案】例文
Yaming’s Family
Yaming has a happy family. There are four people in his family: his father, his mother, his sister and him.
Yaming’s father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and helps many sick people. His mother is a kind teacher. She often reads books to her students. Yaming’s sister is① 14. She likes playing the piano very much. Yaming is a student in Grade② 7. He loves reading storybooks and playing basketball with his classmates. On weekends, his family often has dinner together. They talk about interesting things in their days.
Yaming has a warm family. He loves his family so much!
(五)
【答案】范文:
Dear Vicky,
I’m so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
My best friend is Wang Lei. He is 13 years old, with short black hair and a bright smile. He is very helpful and often explains math problems to me. In his free time, he likes playing basketball.
Our school has many great places. The classrooms are clean and bright. The library is quiet with lots of interesting books. I often go there to read. The sports field is my favorite place. After class, I always play football there with my friends.
I really enjoy my school life.
Yours,
Fu Xing
(一)
【答案】例文:
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m 13 years old and my telephone number is 12345678910. There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He is kind and likes reading. My mother is a teacher. She is friendly and enjoys cooking. The room for you is clean and tidy. The desk is beside the window, and the bed is opposite the desk.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to introduce my new life to you.
I have a new friend. His name is Lin Tao. He’s 13 years old. He likes reading books. He likes dumplings best. He thinks they are so delicious.
Look at his desk in the photo! On the desk, there are some books and a pencil box. A pen and an eraser are on the desk too. His desk is very tidy, and he always keeps it clean.
I like my new school life a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming
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专题09 书面表达(话题+材料+书信+看图)
(一)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第九中学·期中)你校英语俱乐部面向全体同学发起征文,评选“幸福之家”。假如你是Lisa,请根据以下要点以“I Love My Family”为题,介绍一下你和你的幸福家庭。
要点:1. personal (个人) information (name, age, hobby…)
2. family members’ information (appearance外貌、personality性格、hobby爱好…)
3. What do you think of your family?
要求:1. 包含以上内容提示,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,行文连贯,语法正确;
3. 书写认真规范,字数60左右。
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m Lisa, a 14-year-old student. I enjoy reading and drawing. There are four people in my family. My father is tall and kind. He likes cooking. My mother has long hair and she is very patient. She loves gardening. My little brother is lively and funny. We often play together. I think my family is full of love and happiness. We share laughter every day. I love my family very much.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:需涵盖个人基本信息、家庭成员外貌/性格/爱好,并表达对家庭的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头自我介绍(姓名、年龄、爱好),直接切入主题;
第二步,分述家庭成员的外貌、性格和爱好,用简单句串联信息;
第三步,总结对家庭的感受,强调幸福与温暖,呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①patient耐心的
②lively活泼的
③share laughter分享欢笑
[高分句型]
①My father is tall and kind. He likes cooking.(运用了并列形容词和简单句描述外貌与爱好)
②My mother has long hair and she is very patient.(运用了并列连词and连接外貌与性格特征)
③I think my family is full of love and happiness.(运用了宾语从句表达观点,强调家庭氛围)
(二)
(25-26七上·河北保定第十七中学·期中)新学期已过去两个多月,你早已融入初中校园,熟悉了新的老师、同学和校园生活。现在班级将开展“我的初中初体验”主题分享活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向老师和同学们更深入地介绍自己,让大家对你有更全面的了解。
内容提示:1. What do you look like?
2. What do you like to do at school and after school?
3. How do you like your middle school life? (teachers, classmates, classes, activities, …)
写作要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实人名,校名和地名;
3. 词数:60左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello everyone! I’m a tall girl with long hair and glasses. At school, I enjoy reading books and playing basketball with my friends. After school, I often draw pictures or help my parents. I think my middle school life is wonderful because my teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. We have interesting classes and fun activities. I really love my new school!
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时态”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,注意字母大小写和标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,描述外貌特征;
第二步:介绍校内和校外喜欢的活动;
第三步:表达对学校生活的整体感受。
[亮点词汇]
①long hair长头发
②enjoy reading books喜欢读书
③draw pictures画画
④fun activities有趣的活动
[高分句型]
I think my middle school life is wonderful because my teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly.(原因状语从句)
(三)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第二中学·期中)假如你是李华,家里经营着“绿树农场”。节假日期间为了吸引外国游客前来参观,你帮助父母推出了一个线上VR浏览项目,并希望为该项目配上英文讲解词。请你根据图片,用英文介绍农场。
要求:
1.包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2.50词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Welcome to Green Tree Farm! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We hope you can come and have fun!
【答案】例文:
Welcome to Green Tree Farm! It’s a big farm. The grass is so green. You can see many kinds of animals. Look at the geese. We have thirteen geese and they are swimming in the river. We also have seven ducks on the farm. There are five apple trees, some carrots and tomatoes.
Do you see our house? It’s beautiful.
We hope you can come and have fun.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:为“一般现在时”;
③提示:作文要求按所给图片,写一篇英文讲解词来介绍该农场,注意用词,避免出现语法错误和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,直入主题,介绍农场,包括其环境、农场里的动物和植物等;
第二步,简单介绍农场里的建筑物;
第三步,表达期望(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
① many kinds of 许多种类的
② look at 看
③ swim in the river 在河里游泳
[高分句型]
① There are five apple trees, some carrots and tomatoes. (there be句式)
(一)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄外国语学校·期中)一个幸福的家庭,离不开温暖的家人相伴与温馨的房间布置。我校“星火社团”将举办以“我爱我家”为主题的征文活动,请你以Li Hua的身份用英语撰写一篇短文投稿,介绍你与你的家庭。文章需包含:你和家人的基本信息(如年龄、职业、兴趣爱好等),以及你房间内的主要物品(如书桌、绿植等),传递对家庭的热爱之情。
提示问题:
(1)What’s your name and how old are you?
(2)How many people are there in your family? Who are they?
(3)What are your family members’ hobbies?
(4)What do you have in your room?
要求:
1.包含所有要点,可适当拓展;
2.短文中不得出现真实的班名和人名;
3.词数60-80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. Let me tell you something about my family and me.
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【答案】 Hello, everyone. Let me tell you something about my family and me. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. There are three people in my family—my parents and me. My father is a teacher who enjoys reading books. My mother loves cooking delicious food for us. In my room, there is a big desk by the window where I study every day. I also have a green plant on it, which makes the room fresh. I really love my warm family.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题 + 介绍自身基础信息;
第二步,介绍自己的家庭情况和爱好;
第三步,表达对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①reading books读书
②cooking delicious food做美食
③warm family温暖的家庭
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family—my parents and me.(运用there be句型介绍家庭构成,简洁明了)
②In my room, there is a big desk by the window where I study every day.(where引导定语从句)
(二)
(2026·河北邢台第五中学·期中)英国网友Jack在网上发布了一个交友的帖子。假如你是李林,请你阅读他的帖子后写一篇英文帖子进行回复。
I’m Jack. I’m from the UK. And I’m 13 years old. I love sports. I’d like to make friends with you. How old are you? What do you like? And can you tell me about your family?
注意:
(1)帖子需对Jack的问题进行回复,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
(3)50词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi, Jack. My name is Li Lin.
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【答案】例文
Hi, Jack. My name is Li Lin. I’m 14 and I’m from China. I love drawing. I have a happy family. My mother is① 40. She’s beautiful and kind. She likes gardening. My father is② 43. He is tall. And he likes sports too. My brother is 10 years old. He’s clever. He likes hiking. We love each other.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:需回复Jack关于年龄、爱好、家庭的问题。
[写作步骤]
第一步:明确要求。清晰写作任务为回复Jack的交友帖,需覆盖年龄、个人爱好、家庭情况三大核心内容,确保语言风格友好、内容紧扣主题;
第二步:构思内容。确定自身年龄,选取一个爱好(如绘画、运动等),梳理家庭结构及成员特点(如父母职业、爱好),使内容丰富且有逻辑;
第三步:组织语言。按照“自我介绍→个人爱好→家庭情况”的顺序撰写,检查语法正确性、词数合理性,确保无真实信息泄露,最终形成通顺自然的回复帖。
[亮点词汇]
①be from... 来自……
②beautiful and kind 美丽且善良
③each other 彼此
[高分句型]
I’m 14 and I’m from China.(and连接两个并列句)
(三)
(25-26七上·河北张家口桥东区·期中)时间过得真快,转眼你进入初中已经两个多月了。假如你是李华,请根据以下问题简要介绍你的好朋友。
1)What does he/ she look like?
2)What is his/ her favorite subject?
3)What do you often do together?
要求:1)词数:60左右;2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;3)内容可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文:
My best friend is Lucy. She has long black hair and big eyes. Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it’s interesting and useful. We often study together after school. We also help each other with study. Sometimes we play basketball on the playground. It’s really fun. I’m happy to have such a good friend.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要介绍朋友的外貌、最爱科目和共同活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山介绍朋友基本信息(姓名);
第二步:分别回答三个问题(外貌→学科→活动);
第三步:简单总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①long black hair长黑发
②favorite subject最喜爱的科目
③play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it’s interesting and useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I’m happy to have such a good friend. (不定式作原因状语)
(四)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第十七中学·期中)请根据图片,以Yaming’s Family为题,介绍Yaming的家庭情况。
提示:
1. 发挥想象力,合理补充Yaming的情况,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
Yaming’s Family
Yaming has a happy family.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Yaming’s Family
Yaming has a happy family. There are four people in his family: his father, his mother, his sister and him.
Yaming’s father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and helps many sick people. His mother is a kind teacher. She often reads books to her students. Yaming’s sister is① 14. She likes playing the piano very much. Yaming is a student in Grade② 7. He loves reading storybooks and playing basketball with his classmates. On weekends, his family often has dinner together. They talk about interesting things in their days.
Yaming has a warm family. He loves his family so much!
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:介绍Yaming的家庭情况,需合理补充Yaming的信息,不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,让读者快速了解Yaming的家庭基本情况;
第二步:逐一描述每个家庭成员的身份、职业和日常活动;
第三步:结尾总结,强调家庭的温暖,表达Yaming对家庭的爱。
[亮点词汇]
① happy幸福的
② sick生病的
③ interesting有趣的
④ warm温暖的
[高分句型]
① There are four people in his family: his father, his mother, his sister and him. (运用了there be句型,用于介绍“某地/某群体有……”)
(五)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄长安区第二十三中学·期中)假设你是付星,你的英国笔友 Vicky给你写信,想了解你的初一生活、学习情况。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一封回信。
内容:
(1) Your best friend or favourite teacher (name, age, appearance, personality and hobby)
(2) The places at school (classroom, library, sports field...)
要求:
(1)回信须包含以上两点,可适当发挥。词数不低于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Vicky,
I’m so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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【答案】范文:
Dear Vicky,
I’m so happy to be a middle school student. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
My best friend is Wang Lei. He is 13 years old, with short black hair and a bright smile. He is very helpful and often explains math problems to me. In his free time, he likes playing basketball.
Our school has many great places. The classrooms are clean and bright. The library is quiet with lots of interesting books. I often go there to read. The sports field is my favorite place. After class, I always play football there with my friends.
I really enjoy my school life.
Yours,
Fu Xing
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:需介绍好友或老师的基本信息,并描述校园场所。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍好友的姓名、年龄、外貌、性格和爱好;
第二步,描述学校的教室、图书馆、操场等场所及活动;
第三步,表达对学校生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①bright smile灿烂的笑容
②helpful乐于助人的
③sports field运动场
[高分句型]
①He is very helpful and often explains math problems to me. (并列结构描述人物特点)
②The sports field is my favorite place. (简单句表达个人偏好)
(一)
(25-26七上·河北省石家庄市新华区第三十八中学·期中)假如你叫李华,你的家庭将要接待一名来自英国的留学生Tom,请根据以下提示,简单介绍一下自己的家人和为他准备的房间,可以适当发挥。
Name
Li Hua
Age
13
Telephone Number
12345678910
Family Members
父亲(医生),母亲(老师)
简述家人的职业、性格和喜好。
The room for Tom
干净整洁,桌子挨着窗户,床在桌子对面。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括提示信息,可适当增加细节。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数60词左右,开头结尾已写好,不计入总词数
Hello, I am Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m 13 years old and my telephone number is 12345678910. There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He is kind and likes reading. My mother is a teacher. She is friendly and enjoys cooking. The room for you is clean and tidy. The desk is beside the window, and the bed is opposite the desk.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:包含表格中的提示信息,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给开头,简要介绍自己的姓名、年龄和电话号码;
第二步、分别介绍自己父亲和母亲的职业以及性格和喜好;
第三步、介绍为汤姆准备的房间状况及物品位置。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly友好的
②clean and tidy干净整洁
[高分句型]
①He is kind and likes reading. (and表并列)
②She is friendly and enjoys cooking. (and表并列)
③The desk is beside the window, and the bed is opposite the desk. (并列句和方位介词结构)
(二)
(25-26七上·河北石家庄第二十七中学·期中)假如你是李明,初中生活已经开始两个月了,请根据以下提示给你的笔友Peter写一封信,分享你的初中生活。
提示:
1.介绍自己的一位新朋友(name, age, hobby, favorite food) ;
2.请结合照片描述新朋友的书桌及物品摆放。
要求:
1.内容根据所给的信息可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。
3.不少于 70词。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to introduce my new life to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to introduce my new life to you.
I have a new friend. His name is Lin Tao. He’s 13 years old. He likes reading books. He likes dumplings best. He thinks they are so delicious.
Look at his desk in the photo! On the desk, there are some books and a pencil box. A pen and an eraser are on the desk too. His desk is very tidy, and he always keeps it clean.
I like my new school life a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,描述好友的基本信息和他的书桌及物品摆放;
第三步,评价自己的初中生活。
[亮点词汇]
①look at看
②there are有
[高分句型]
①His desk is very tidy, and he always keeps it clean.(and连接的并列句)
②On the desk, there are some books and a pencil box. (there be句型)
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