Unit 2Section B 3a-3d课件2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

Inspiring People UNIT 2 Section B 3a-3d Writing www.21cnjy.com 21世纪教育网，让备课更有效 让教学更有效 01 学习理解 读懂网络帖子语篇，获取墨子的生平、思想 主张以及作者评价等，完成思维导图； 02 应用实践 借助思维导图梳理文本信息框架，运用本课相关词汇句型复述墨子相关内容；感悟墨子思想的时代价值，加深对中华传统思想文化的理解 03 迁移创新 参照范例搜集一位励志人物信息，完成一篇网络帖子的仿写输出 Learning objectives Who is he? What does he do? What do you know about him? Look and say 、 Background 墨子（约公元前468—前376），名翟，春秋末战国初期人，籍贯为宋国或鲁国，是著名思想家、教育家、科学家、军事家，墨家学派创始人。 - 身份：出身平民，做过工匠，擅长木工，传说发明风筝。​ - 核心主张： 1. 兼爱：对所有人同等友爱，不分亲疏；​ 2. 非攻：反对战争，各国不要互相攻打。 他成就斐然，在几何、物理、光学领域多有探索，最早记录小孔成像、镜面成像等科学原理；其“墨守”防御军事思想，与《孙子兵法》互补。 - 影响：战国战乱不断，百姓受苦。墨子一生四处奔走，努力停止战争，追求天下和平。​两千多年过去，他“和平、博爱”的思想依然启迪后人。‌‌‌‌ 2016年我国首颗量子科学卫星定名“墨子号”，2018年设立国际顶级墨子量子奖，其思想至今仍与当代科技深度融合。 Mozi Presentation What type of the passage is it? A. An e-mail B. An online post C. A story An online post An online post is a short passage shared on websites or social media to express ideas. Online Post 含义：特指发在互联网平台（论坛、社交软件、网页）的短文，不是纸质文章、课本课文。 特点： 篇幅简短；既有客观人物介绍（事实），又有作者个人观点、感悟； 面向普通网友阅读，语言通俗易懂，结尾会联系当下发表看法 Read and answer 1.How many paragraphs are there? 2. What’s the post about? Underline the topic sentence. 3 4 1 2 Four paragraphs. Tip:The topic sentence usually appears at the beginning to introduce the whole text's topic. The most inspiring person for the writer. Read and answer 3a Read an online post. Who does the writer admire? Why? Who does the writer admire? Why does the writer admire him? Mozi His great identity His trying for peace His thought His influence 1 2 3 4 1 To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Mozi (about 468-376 BCE). It is said that Mozi was a soldier, good at woodwork, and was the inventor of the kite. But in fact, above all, he was a great thinker. 2 Mozi lived during the Warring States Period. Back then, many kingdoms were fighting against each other. In these wars, the common people were always hurt. To Mozi, this had to stop, so he spent his lifetime trying to bring peace. Underline the language points. one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数 最……的……之一 It is said that... 据说……；有人说……其中it是形式主语，that引导的从句是真正的主语。 最重要的是 战国时期 在那时 互相交战 spend one’s lifetime doing sth花费一生时间做某事 3 His idea of love was one reason that Mozi wanted peace. It was important to him that everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else, whether they were family, friends, or strangers. He also believed states should avoid attacking one another. 4 Though Mozi lived more than 2,000 years ago, his ideas live on. I think he is still a great inspiration to many people. Now, more than ever, people around the world need to hear the message of love and peace, and work together to build a community of a shared future for mankind. ...的一个原因 对于他来说...很重要 对某人展现善意和关怀 whether... or... 不管……还是…… 引导让步状语从句。 avoid doing sth 避免做某事 继续存在 对某人极大的鼓舞 携手共同做... 人类命运共同体 1. Mozi lived during the Warring States Period. period n. 意为“时期；一段时间”，常用搭配： (1)a period of time 一段时间/ 时期 (2)in the period of 在……期间 (3)long period 长期 (4)short period 短期 That is the happiest period in my life.那是我一生中最快乐的时期。 Language Points 2. Everyone should show the same kindness and care. kindness n. 善良kind(adj. 善良的)+ -ness(名词后缀) 反义词为unkindness。 show kindness 表示善意 return kindness 回报善意 with kindness 友善地 out of kindness 出于善意 -ness 为名词后缀，……的性质(或状态、特点) ill → illness 疾病 shy → shyness 羞怯 sad → sadness 悲痛 happy → happiness 幸福；快乐 3. , whether they were family, friends, or strangers. (1) 引导宾语从句，有时可与if 互换 (2) 引导主语从句，不可用if 替代。 (3) 引导表语从句 (4) whether to do 例：She asked whether we liked the movie. 她问我们是否喜欢这部电影。 I will go whether it rains or not. 无论是否下雨，我都会去。 Inspiration 3b Complete the chart using the information from the post. Mozi, a great thinker Life Belief Lived in China during the _____________ Period Believed __________________________ __________________________________and__________________________________________ His ideas ________ People need to _________________ _____________ Warring States that everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else that states should avoid attacking live on hear the message of love and peace one another Structure Analysis Introduction: who Mozi is and what he is known for Background: when and where he lived Core ideas: what he believed and did Conclusion: why his ideas still matter today Though Mozi lived more than 2,000 years ago, his ideas live on. I think he is still a great inspiration to many people. Now, more than ever, people around the world need to hear the message of love and peace, and work together to build a community of a shared future for mankind. His idea of love was one reason that Mozi wanted peace. It was important to him that everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else, whether they were family, friends, or strangers. He also believed states should avoid attacking one another. To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Mozi (about 468-376 BCE). It is said that Mozi was a soldier, good at woodwork, and was the inventor of the kite. But in fact, above all, he was a great thinker. Mozi lived during the Warring States Period. Back then, many kingdoms were fighting against each other. In these wars, the common people were always hurt. To Mozi, this had to stop, so he spent his lifetime trying to bring peace. Pre-writing Who does the writer admire? the person’s life the person’s belief Why is the person inspiring? To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is... He was a great thinker who... He believed that... Though he lived... his ideas live on. He is still a great inspiration to... 提取范文的核心句型: Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. Beginning Body Ending Role models make us ... And the person I admire most is ... 开头：引出话题 中间：介绍该人物的基本信息与具体事迹 基本信息：He/She was once ... 具体事迹：When he/she ..., he/she made up his/her mind to ... He/She spent his/her whole life ... His/Her work helped ... He/She succeeded in ... What’s more, he/she ... 结尾：分享从该人物身上学到的精神 It was great of ... to ... I will learn from him/her and try my best to ... Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. 写作结构 Beginning 对我来说，中国历史上最鼓舞人心的人物之一是袁隆平。 他是一位科学家，一生都在研究水稻。 3a 原文: 仿写： To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Yuan Longping. He was a scientist who spent his whole life studying rice. Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. 3a 原文: Life 早年立志 袁隆平生于1930年。 那时，很多人吃不饱饭。 他看到人们挨饿，心里非常难过。 他对自己说：我一定要让所有人远离饥饿。 仿写： Yuan Longping was born in 1930. Back then, many people didn’t have enough food. He saw people go hungry and felt very sad. He said to himself: “I must help all people stay away from hunger.” Body Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. Achievements 核心成就 3a 原文: 1973年，袁隆平成功培育出杂交水稻，让无数人看到了吃饱饭的希望。 他还培养了大批科研人才，让更多人投身这项伟大的事业。 如今，杂交水稻已在世界各地生根发芽has taken root，帮助无数家庭远离饥饿。 仿写： In 1973, Yuan Longping successfully developed hybrid rice. It gave countless people hope of having enough food. he trained many young scientists to join this great cause. Today, hybrid rice has taken root in many parts of the world, helping millions of families stay away from hunger. Body Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. Achievements 核心成就 3a 原文: 他曾说，自己一生有两个梦：一个是禾下乘凉梦，一个是杂交水稻覆盖全球梦。直到生命最后一刻，他仍在追寻这两个梦。 仿写： He once said that he had two dreams in his life: one was to rest under the rice, and the other was to see hybrid rice cover the world. He never stopped chasing these dreams until the very end of his life. Body Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. Inspiration 精神永存 3a 原文: 虽然袁隆平于2021年离开了我们，但他的杂交水稻仍在生长。 他仍然是许多人心中的榜样。 他告诉我们：一个人，一粒种子，也可以改变世界。 仿写： Though Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, his hybrid rice is still growing. He is still a great inspiration to many people. He teaches us that one person, with one seed, can change the world. Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. Useful linking words 1. 开篇引入人物:To me, In my opinion, It is said that 2. 介绍时代背景:Back then, During that time, At that moment 3. 转折对比:But in fact, above all, Though, However 4. 阐述原因、目的:So, One reason that, To do sth 5. 补充观点、递进:Also, Besides, What’s more 6. 总结升华、抒发感悟:Now, More than ever, I think, All in all 、 Checklist 评价表 Items 评价项目 Standard Scores 标准分值 Scores 得分 内容完整性 内容完整覆盖：人物身份与称号、生平经历与初心、科研过程与成果/荣誉、当代精神影响与启示，所有要点无遗漏。 6 结构与逻辑 结构清晰，逻辑连贯： ① 开头点题介绍人物； ② 中间按时间顺序讲经历与贡献； ③ 结尾升华主题谈影响，过渡自然。 2 语言表达 用词准确，句型丰富，固定搭配使用正确，无语法错误。 5 书写规范 词数达标（80-100 词），单词拼写、标点符号、大小写均规范，无明显书写错误。 2 Checklist Presentation 3d Use your notes to write a post about the person you find inspiring. To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Yuan Longping. He was a scientist who spent his whole life studying rice. Yuan Longping was born in 1930. Back then, many people didn’t have enough food. He saw people go hungry and felt very sad. He said to himself: “I must help all people stay away from hunger.” In 1973, Yuan Longping successfully developed hybrid rice, giving countless people hope of having enough food. He trained many young scientists to join this great cause. Today, hybrid rice has taken root in many parts of the world, helping millions of families stay away from hunger. He once said that he had two dreams in his life: one was to rest under the rice, and the other was to see hybrid rice cover the world. He never stopped chasing these dreams until the very end of his life. Though Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, his hybrid rice is still growing. He is still a great inspiration to many people. He teaches us that one person, with one seed, can change the world. The Inspiring Rice scientist The person I admire most is Yuan Longping, a great scientist who was known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. It was great of him to develop a new kind of rice and help reduce hunger. Yuan was born in 1930, but it’s a pity that he passed away on 22 May 2021 in Changsha. At a young age, Yuan Longping saw many people go hungry. He made up his mind to grow more rice to feed the world. Post-writing For many years, he worked in the field day and night, testing different kinds of rice plants. Finally, he developed hybrid rice, which greatly increased rice production and helped millions of people out of hunger. In September 2019, he was awarded the Medal of the Republic. Though he passed away in 2021, his spirit lives on. I think he is still a great inspiration to young people today. He inspires us to value science and hard work. His story tells us that with hard work and a kind heart, we can make the world a better place. Listen and read the post in 3a. Polish your article about the inspiring person you admire. Collect one more interesting facts about your admirable person, and be ready to share it in the next class. Homework $