Unit 5 Into the Wild 野生动物科普说明文（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语外研版必修第一册

Unit 5 Into the Wild｜野生动物科普写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 人与自然·野生动物保护 科普说明文 80词左右 介绍野生动物习性现状，唤起读者保护意识 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 引入、特征说明、成因或影响、总结 搭出完整说明结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 定义、举例、列数据的说明句式 把说明对象写清楚、写准确 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整说明短文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜濒危动物现状 人与自然·动物 习性说明与现状呈现 练习2｜栖息地的影响 人与自然·人与动植物 因果分析与建议表达 练习3｜保护区的故事 人与自然·环境保护 功能介绍与成果呈现 练习4｜气候与迁徙 人与自然·气候变化及影响 过程说明与呼吁收束 练习5｜走近动物学家 人与自然·自然科学 职业介绍与启发表达 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 5 Into the Wild 野生动物科普说明文（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Into the Wild；野生动物、生态保护与自然探索 应用文体裁： 野生动物科普说明文 写作任务： 以科普说明文介绍一种野生动物的现状、习性或人与自然的关系，用准确的语言普及动物知识，唤起保护意识。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 引出要介绍的动物，点明说明对象与总体印象。 主体（3—4句） 按逻辑顺序说明动物的外形、习性、现状或面临的威胁，可引用数据。 结尾（1—2句） 总结说明内容，点明保护意义或发出呼吁。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 migration 迁徙 说明迁徙习性 migrate 移栖，迁徙 描写动物移动规律 creature 生物，动物 泛指野生动物 survive 活下来，幸存 说明生存状态 destroy 破坏，毁掉 描述栖息地威胁 chemical 化学品 说明污染来源 effect 影响，结果 分析环境变化后果 measure 量，测量 描述科考研究 determine 确定 说明研究方法 eventually 终于，最终 描写研究结论 solution 解决方法 引出保护对策 amazing 惊人的，了不起的 表达赞叹语气 breathtaking 令人惊叹的 描写自然场景 seek 寻找，寻求 描写动物觅食习性 capture 记录，捕捉 描写科研与摄影 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 a variety of 多种多样的 描写物种多样性 per cent 百分比 引用数据说明 year after year 年复一年 描写迁徙规律 face the risk of 面临……的风险 说明生存威胁 play an important part in 在……中起重要作用 点明生态意义 after all 毕竟，终究 结尾升华呼吁 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. Every autumn, these birds fly south, and their ________(迁徙) covers thousands of kilometres. 2. Many wild ________(生物) cannot ________(幸存) without a safe home. 3. Human activities may ________(破坏) the places where animals live. 4. Scientists ________(测量) and ________(确定) the routes of migrating butterflies. 5. Planting more trees is a good ________(解决方法) to protect wild animals. 句子翻译 1. 这些鸟儿每年迁徙到温暖的南方去过冬。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙是大自然中最惊人的旅程之一。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 如果我们继续破坏森林，许多动物将面临灭绝的危险。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 科学家们最终找到了蝴蝶过冬的准确位置。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 保护野生动物是我们每个人的责任。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. Among all the wild creatures in nature, the monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing. 2. Every year, an incredible journey takes place in the natural world. 3. Have you ever wondered why animals travel such long distances? 中间句 1. Each autumn, the butterflies migrate to the south, where the weather is warm. 2. Sadly, their population has crashed by ninety per cent in recent years. 3. The biggest reason is that humans have destroyed many of the places where these creatures live. 4. Scientists measure their routes and finally determine where they go. 结尾句 1. Now it is time for us to seek a solution before it is too late. 2. Only when we protect their homes can these amazing creatures survive. 3. Nature gives us so much, and after all, protecting animals means protecting ourselves. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） _______ is one of the most amazing creatures in nature. Every year, it _______， where _______. However, _______ has become a serious problem, and its number has dropped by _______ per cent. Scientists are trying to _______. It is time for us to protect _______ before it is too late. 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） In the natural world, _______, a creature that _______, has long amazed people with its _______. Each year, the journey begins in autumn, when _______. They fly to the south, where they can _______. Sadly, because humans have destroyed _______， their population has crashed by _______ per cent. Luckily, scientists have determined _______, and people are seeking solutions to _______. Nature is amazing, and after all, the earth is a home that we share with wild animals. Protecting them is protecting ourselves. 六、典例精练 你校英文报正在开展"神奇动物在哪里"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙及其生存现状，并呼吁大家保护野生动物。 写作要点： 1. 简介黑脉金斑蝶及其迁徙习性。 2. 说明其生存现状与面临威胁。 3. 呼吁大家采取行动保护野生动物。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Amazing Journey of the Monarch Butterfly ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、拓展练习 练习1：介绍一种濒危野生动物的生存现状与习性（人与自然-动物） 你校英文报正在开展"神奇动物在哪里"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一种你熟悉的濒危野生动物的生存现状与生活习性。 写作要点： 1. 简介这种动物及其生活习性。 2. 说明它当前的生存现状与威胁。 3. 表达你对保护这一动物的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Save the Eagles Before They Disappear ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2：说明人类活动对野生动物栖息地的影响（人与自然-人与动植物） 你校英文报正在开展"人与自然"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，说明人类活动对野生动物栖息地的影响。 写作要点： 1. 简述野生动物对栖息地的依赖。 2. 说明人类活动如何影响栖息地。 3. 提出你对减少这类影响的建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 When Homes Disappear: Humans and Wildlife ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3：介绍野生动物保护区的功能与运作方式（人与自然-环境保护） 你校英文报正在开展"保护区的故事"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍野生动物保护区的功能与运作方式。 写作要点： 1. 简介什么是野生动物保护区。 2. 说明保护区如何运作、保护动物。 3. 表达你对保护区成果的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Safe Home for Wild Animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4：说明气候变化对候鸟迁徙的影响（人与自然-气候变化及影响） 你校英文报正在开展"气候与生命"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，说明气候变化对候鸟迁徙的影响。 写作要点： 1. 简介候鸟迁徙的规律。 2. 说明气候变化如何影响迁徙。 3. 呼吁大家关注并采取行动。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 When the Birds Change Their Routes ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5：介绍动物学家研究野生动物的工作方式（人与自然-自然科学） 你校英文报正在开展"走近科学家"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍动物学家研究野生动物的工作方式。 写作要点： 1. 简介动物学家的日常工作内容。 2. 说明他们研究动物的具体方式。 3. 表达你从他们身上获得的启发。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Scientists Who Speak for the Wild ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 说明结构清楚，对象引入、习性现状说明与呼吁收束安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 说明对象明确，事实与数据具体可信，呼吁自然有力。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和 where/when 引导的定语从句，说明语言准确客观。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 书写清楚，拼写、大小写和标点规范。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Into the Wild｜野生动物科普写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 人与自然·野生动物保护 科普说明文 80词左右 介绍野生动物习性现状，唤起读者保护意识 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 引入、特征说明、成因或影响、总结 搭出完整说明结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 定义、举例、列数据的说明句式 把说明对象写清楚、写准确 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整说明短文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜濒危动物现状 人与自然·动物 习性说明与现状呈现 练习2｜栖息地的影响 人与自然·人与动植物 因果分析与建议表达 练习3｜保护区的故事 人与自然·环境保护 功能介绍与成果呈现 练习4｜气候与迁徙 人与自然·气候变化及影响 过程说明与呼吁收束 练习5｜走近动物学家 人与自然·自然科学 职业介绍与启发表达 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 5 Into the Wild 野生动物科普说明文（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Into the Wild；野生动物、生态保护与自然探索 应用文体裁： 野生动物科普说明文 写作任务： 以科普说明文介绍一种野生动物的现状、习性或人与自然的关系，用准确的语言普及动物知识，唤起保护意识。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 引出要介绍的动物，点明说明对象与总体印象。 主体（3—4句） 按逻辑顺序说明动物的外形、习性、现状或面临的威胁，可引用数据。 结尾（1—2句） 总结说明内容，点明保护意义或发出呼吁。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 migration 迁徙 说明迁徙习性 migrate 移栖，迁徙 描写动物移动规律 creature 生物，动物 泛指野生动物 survive 活下来，幸存 说明生存状态 destroy 破坏，毁掉 描述栖息地威胁 chemical 化学品 说明污染来源 effect 影响，结果 分析环境变化后果 measure 量，测量 描述科考研究 determine 确定 说明研究方法 eventually 终于，最终 描写研究结论 solution 解决方法 引出保护对策 amazing 惊人的，了不起的 表达赞叹语气 breathtaking 令人惊叹的 描写自然场景 seek 寻找，寻求 描写动物觅食习性 capture 记录，捕捉 描写科研与摄影 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 a variety of 多种多样的 描写物种多样性 per cent 百分比 引用数据说明 year after year 年复一年 描写迁徙规律 face the risk of 面临……的风险 说明生存威胁 play an important part in 在……中起重要作用 点明生态意义 after all 毕竟，终究 结尾升华呼吁 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. Every autumn, these birds fly south, and their ________(迁徙) covers thousands of kilometres. 2. Many wild ________(生物) cannot ________(幸存) without a safe home. 3. Human activities may ________(破坏) the places where animals live. 4. Scientists ________(测量) and ________(确定) the routes of migrating butterflies. 5. Planting more trees is a good ________(解决方法) to protect wild animals. 【答案】 1. migration 【解析】their 后接名词，migration 表示"迁徙"。 2. creatures / survive 【解析】Many 后接可数名词复数，creature 表示"生物"；cannot 后接动词原形 survive。 3. destroy 【解析】may 后接动词原形，destroy 表示"破坏，毁掉"。 4. measure / determine 【解析】并列谓语用原形，measure 表示"测量"，determine 表示"确定"。 5. solution 【解析】a good 后接名词，solution 表示"解决方法"。 句子翻译 1. 这些鸟儿每年迁徙到温暖的南方去过冬。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙是大自然中最惊人的旅程之一。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 如果我们继续破坏森林，许多动物将面临灭绝的危险。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 科学家们最终找到了蝴蝶过冬的准确位置。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 保护野生动物是我们每个人的责任。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. These birds migrate to the warm south for the winter every year. 【解析】migrate to 表示"迁徙到"，every year 作时间状语。 2. The migration of the monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing journeys in nature. 【解析】one of the most amazing journeys 用最高级句式。 3. If we keep destroying the forests, many animals will face the risk of dying out. 【解析】if 引导条件状语从句，keep doing 表示"持续做某事"。 4. The scientists eventually determined the exact position where the butterflies spent the winter. 【解析】where 引导定语从句修饰 position，体现本单元目标语法。 5. It is the duty of every one of us to protect wild animals. 【解析】It is...to do 句型点明责任。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. Among all the wild creatures in nature, the monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing. 2. Every year, an incredible journey takes place in the natural world. 3. Have you ever wondered why animals travel such long distances? 中间句 1. Each autumn, the butterflies migrate to the south, where the weather is warm. 2. Sadly, their population has crashed by ninety per cent in recent years. 3. The biggest reason is that humans have destroyed many of the places where these creatures live. 4. Scientists measure their routes and finally determine where they go. 结尾句 1. Now it is time for us to seek a solution before it is too late. 2. Only when we protect their homes can these amazing creatures survive. 3. Nature gives us so much, and after all, protecting animals means protecting ourselves. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） _______ is one of the most amazing creatures in nature. Every year, it _______， where _______. However, _______ has become a serious problem, and its number has dropped by _______ per cent. Scientists are trying to _______. It is time for us to protect _______ before it is too late. 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） In the natural world, _______, a creature that _______, has long amazed people with its _______. Each year, the journey begins in autumn, when _______. They fly to the south, where they can _______. Sadly, because humans have destroyed _______， their population has crashed by _______ per cent. Luckily, scientists have determined _______, and people are seeking solutions to _______. Nature is amazing, and after all, the earth is a home that we share with wild animals. Protecting them is protecting ourselves. 六、典例精练 你校英文报正在开展"神奇动物在哪里"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙及其生存现状，并呼吁大家保护野生动物。 写作要点： 1. 简介黑脉金斑蝶及其迁徙习性。 2. 说明其生存现状与面临威胁。 3. 呼吁大家采取行动保护野生动物。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Amazing Journey of the Monarch Butterfly ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是野生动物科普说明文，题干已给标题，无称呼、无落款。对象是英文报读者，目的在于科普动物知识并唤起保护意识。说明客观事实以一般现在时为主，描述已发生的变化可用现在完成时；语气客观准确又不失热情。布局为引出对象、说明习性现状、呼吁保护。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 引出动物 The monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing creatures. 最高级句式引出说明对象。 说明习性 Every autumn, they migrate to the south, where the weather is warm. where 引导定语从句说明地点。 说明现状 Their number has crashed by ninety per cent. 现在完成时+数据增强说服力。 呼吁保护 It is time for us to seek a solution. It is time to do 句式收束。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 They fly south in autumn. Autumn is the season when these butterflies begin their journey. Winter is the time when the birds arrive. when 引导定语从句强调时间。 The weather there is warm. They fly to the south, where the weather stays warm. They return to the forest, where food is easy to find. where 引导定语从句说明地点。 Their number dropped. Their number has crashed by ninety per cent in recent years. The number of eagles has fallen by half since 2010. 现在完成时+数据表达。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 amazing breathtaking 描写自然奇观 a lot of a variety of 描写物种多样 go to migrate to 说明迁徙方向 in danger face the risk of dying out 说明生存威胁 protect seek solutions to save 呼应科研保护 a wonderful journey a breathtaking journey 描写迁徙奇观的感染力 follow the same routes stick to their ancient routes 描写迁徙本能的古老恒定 destroyed many places destroyed much of their natural habitat 描述栖息地的破坏 harmful chemicals harmful chemicals that kill their food plants 描述污染的具体危害 survive live on in the wild 描述野外生存状态 参考范文 基础版范文 The Amazing Journey of the Monarch Butterfly The monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing creatures in nature. Every autumn, these butterflies migrate thousands of kilometres to the south, where the weather is warm. This is a wonderful journey. Year after year, they follow the same routes. Sadly, their number has crashed by ninety per cent, because humans have destroyed many of the places where they live and used harmful chemicals. Now it is time to act. Only when we protect their homes can these amazing creatures survive. 提高版范文 The Amazing Journey of the Monarch Butterfly The monarch butterfly is one of the most amazing creatures in nature. Every autumn, these butterflies migrate thousands of kilometres to the south, where the weather is warm. This is a breathtaking journey. Year after year, they stick to their ancient routes. Sadly, their number has crashed by ninety per cent, because humans have destroyed much of their natural habitat and used harmful chemicals that kill their food plants. Now it is time to act. Only when we protect their homes can these amazing creatures live on in the wild. 七、拓展练习 练习1：介绍一种濒危野生动物的生存现状与习性（人与自然-动物） 你校英文报正在开展"神奇动物在哪里"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一种你熟悉的濒危野生动物的生存现状与生活习性。 写作要点： 1. 简介这种动物及其生活习性。 2. 说明它当前的生存现状与威胁。 3. 表达你对保护这一动物的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Save the Eagles Before They Disappear ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：科普说明文，题干已给标题，介绍濒危动物现状与习性。 2. 要点：简介习性；说明现状威胁；表达保护看法。 3. 结构：对象引入；现状说明；看法收束。 4. 表达：使用 creature、survive、face the risk of、per cent 和 a variety of。 基础版范文 Save the Eagles Before They Disappear The eagle is one of the most powerful birds in the sky. Eagles build their nests on high cliffs, where they can watch over the valleys. They hunt a variety of small animals and fly far to seek food. Sadly, eagles now face the risk of dying out, because their homes are being destroyed and the rivers where they hunt are becoming dirty. Let us protect these amazing creatures before it is too late. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 very powerful perfectly designed hunters 突出猛禽的捕猎天赋 a variety of a wide variety of 强化物种多样表达 becoming dirty being polluted by harmful chemicals 点明污染的具体来源 never see lose forever 升级失去的沉痛语气 protect them bring them back from the edge 生动表达拯救行动 提高版范文 Save the Eagles Before They Disappear The eagle is one of the most perfectly designed hunters in the sky. Eagles build their nests on high cliffs, where they can watch over the valleys below. They hunt a wide variety of small animals and fly hundreds of kilometres to seek food. Sadly, eagles now face the risk of dying out, because their homes are being destroyed and the rivers where they hunt are being polluted by harmful chemicals. If we do not act now, we may lose forever these amazing creatures. Let us bring them back from the edge before it is too late. 练习2：说明人类活动对野生动物栖息地的影响（人与自然-人与动植物） 你校英文报正在开展"人与自然"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，说明人类活动对野生动物栖息地的影响。 写作要点： 1. 简述野生动物对栖息地的依赖。 2. 说明人类活动如何影响栖息地。 3. 提出你对减少这类影响的建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 When Homes Disappear: Humans and Wildlife ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：科普说明文，题干已给标题，说明人类活动对栖息地的影响。 2. 要点：简述依赖；说明影响；提出建议。 3. 结构：依赖引入；影响说明；建议收束。 4. 表达：使用 habitat、destroy、effect、chemical 和 solution。 基础版范文 When Homes Disappear: Humans and Wildlife Wild animals depend deeply on their homes, which provide food, water and safe places to raise their young. However, human activities are changing these homes fast. Forests are cut down and rivers are polluted by harmful chemicals from factories. The effect is serious: many creatures lose their homes and cannot survive. Some animals have already disappeared forever. We must find solutions before more homes disappear. Building nature reserves and cutting pollution are good starts. Remember, saving their homes means saving our own future. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 depend deeply on rely completely on 强化依赖的程度 are changing fast are shrinking year after year 以动态画面呈现萎缩 lose their homes are driven away from their natural habitats 点明被迫离开的过程 disappeared forever vanished without a trace 升级消失的沉重语气 good starts a promising start 提升展望的积极质感 提高版范文 When Homes Disappear: Humans and Wildlife Wild animals rely completely on their homes, which provide food, water and safe places to raise their young. However, human activities are changing these homes fast. Forests are cut down, and rivers are shrinking year after year as factories pour harmful chemicals into them. The effect is serious: many creatures are driven away from their natural habitats and cannot survive. Some animals have already vanished without a trace. We must find solutions before more homes disappear. Building nature reserves and cutting pollution are a promising start. Remember, saving their homes means saving our own future. 练习3：介绍野生动物保护区的功能与运作方式（人与自然-环境保护） 你校英文报正在开展"保护区的故事"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍野生动物保护区的功能与运作方式。 写作要点： 1. 简介什么是野生动物保护区。 2. 说明保护区如何运作、保护动物。 3. 表达你对保护区成果的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Safe Home for Wild Animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：科普说明文，题干已给标题，介绍保护区的功能与运作。 2. 要点：简介概念；说明运作方式；表达看法。 3. 结构：概念引入；运作说明；看法收束。 4. 表达：使用 nature reserve、measure、recover、eventually 和 solution。 基础版范文 A Safe Home for Wild Animals A nature reserve is a special area where wild animals can live safely without fear. In the reserve, scientists measure the animals' health, record their numbers and study their habits. Workers stop people from hunting and plant trees to rebuild their homes. Slowly, the animals recover, and some rare creatures have eventually returned to the areas where they once lived. Nature reserves offer a real solution to protecting wildlife. I believe more animals will survive and live freely in these safe homes. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 live safely live in peace 突出安然无扰的状态 study their habits keep a close watch on their every move 体现科考的细致入微 stop people from hunting fight against hunting day and night 强化守护的坚持感 slowly recover gradually make an amazing comeback 生动呈现种群的复苏 live freely roam freely across the valleys 以画面感升级自由表达 提高版范文 A Safe Home for Wild Animals A nature reserve is a special area where wild animals can live in peace without fear. In the reserve, scientists measure the animals' health, record their numbers and keep a close watch on their every move. Workers fight against hunting day and night and plant trees to rebuild their homes. Slowly, the animals gradually make an amazing comeback, and some rare creatures have eventually returned to the areas where they once lived. Nature reserves offer a real solution to protecting wildlife. I believe more animals will survive and roam freely across the valleys in these safe homes. 练习4：说明气候变化对候鸟迁徙的影响（人与自然-气候变化及影响） 你校英文报正在开展"气候与生命"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，说明气候变化对候鸟迁徙的影响。 写作要点： 1. 简介候鸟迁徙的规律。 2. 说明气候变化如何影响迁徙。 3. 呼吁大家关注并采取行动。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 When the Birds Change Their Routes ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：科普说明文，题干已给标题，说明气候变化对迁徙的影响。 2. 要点：简介规律；说明影响；呼吁行动。 3. 结构：规律引入；影响说明；呼吁收束。 4. 表达：使用 migration、migrate、annual、climate 和 face the risk of。 基础版范文 When the Birds Change Their Routes Every year, migratory birds travel thousands of kilometres between their summer and winter homes. This annual journey is one of the great wonders of nature. However, climate change is quietly changing their routes. The places where they used to rest are becoming warmer and drier, so many birds now arrive too late to find food. Some even give up their migration. Let us act now to protect the skies where these birds travel. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a great wonder a breathtaking wonder of nature 升华自然奇观的赞美 quietly changing silently rewriting 以拟人手法强化改变 become warmer and drier grow hotter and drier than ever 突出变化之剧烈 give up their migration abandon the journey halfway 生动呈现迁徙中断 act now act without delay 强化呼吁的紧迫感 提高版范文 When the Birds Change Their Routes Every year, migratory birds travel thousands of kilometres between their summer and winter homes. This annual journey is one of the breathtaking wonders of nature. However, climate change is silently rewriting their routes. The places where they used to rest grow hotter and drier than ever, so many birds now arrive too late to find food. Some even abandon the journey halfway. Climate change affects every creature on the earth. Let us act without delay to protect the skies where these birds travel. 练习5：介绍动物学家研究野生动物的工作方式（人与自然-自然科学） 你校英文报正在开展"走近科学家"主题科普征文。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍动物学家研究野生动物的工作方式。 写作要点： 1. 简介动物学家的日常工作内容。 2. 说明他们研究动物的具体方式。 3. 表达你从他们身上获得的启发。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Scientists Who Speak for the Wild ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：科普说明文，题干已给标题，介绍动物学家的研究方式。 2. 要点：简介工作内容；说明研究方式；表达启发。 3. 结构：人物引入；方式说明；启发收束。 4. 表达：使用 professor、measure、determine、capture 和 brave the elements。 基础版范文 The Scientists Who Speak for the Wild Animal scientists spend their days studying wild animals in nature. They brave the elements to follow animals in forests and mountains. They measure the animals' weight, record their calls and determine the routes where they travel. Some scientists spend years in the wild, and they finally capture amazing moments that most of us have never seen. Their work helps us understand nature better. Their love for wild creatures also inspires me to explore the unknown world bravely. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 spend their days studying devote their lives to studying 突出科研的毕生投入 follow animals track animals through dense forests 体现野外追踪的艰辛 record their calls record every call they make 强调观察的细致入微 amazing moments breathtaking moments on camera 升级影像记录的表达 inspires me lights the fire of curiosity in me 生动表达求知热情 提高版范文 The Scientists Who Speak for the Wild Animal scientists devote their lives to studying wild animals in nature. They brave the elements to track animals through dense forests. They measure the animals' weight, record every call they make and determine the routes where they travel. Some scientists spend years in the wild, and they finally capture breathtaking moments on camera that most of us have never seen. Their work helps us understand nature better. Their love for wild creatures also lights the fire of curiosity in me to explore the unknown world bravely. 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 说明结构清楚，对象引入、习性现状说明与呼吁收束安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 说明对象明确，事实与数据具体可信，呼吁自然有力。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和 where/when 引导的定语从句，说明语言准确客观。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 书写清楚，拼写、大小写和标点规范。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $