Unit 5 Into the wild 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第一册 Unit5 Into the wild写作精讲 Writing an animal fact file(写动物档案) Unit 5 Into the wild 写作任务：Writing an animal fact file(写动物档案) 审题 1 话题：选择一种野生动物，从外形、栖息地、饮食、生活习性、保护状况等方面介绍该动 物， 呈现一份清晰、准确的动物档案。 2 体裁：说明文（动物档案/fact file) 3人称：以第三人称(it/they)为主 4 时态：一般现在时（描述客观事实） 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： ,明确动物名称（学名或常见名） ,描述外貌特征(size,color,.body parts) 〉说明栖息地与分布 ,介绍饮食与生活习性 ,提及保护现状（是否濒危、面临威胁等） 二、文章结构 1开头段：引出动物名称+所属类别（哺乳类/鸟类等）+一句总括性介绍（如“t is one of the most...animals in the world.") 2 主体段：分2-3个方面展开 >①外貌与体型(height,weight,fur,special features) >②栖息地与分布区域(where it lives,climate,environment) >③食性与习性(what it eats,hunting/grazing habits,social behavior) 3结尾段：保护状况（如endangered,conservation efforts)或简单总结其独 特性 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 species n.物种 habitat n.栖息地 feature n.特征 diet n.饮食 behavior n.行为 endangered adj.濒危的 conservation n.保护 mammal n.哺乳动物 predator n.捕食者 prey n.猎物 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be native to... 原产于 be found in... 分布于… feed on... 以…为食 be known for... 因.而闻名 短语 释义 play an important role in... 在.…中起重要作用 be under threat 受到威胁 in recent years 近年来 take measures to protect... 采取措施保护… 3.基础造句 1 The giant panda is native to the bamboo forests of central China. 大熊猫原产于中国中部的竹林。 2 It has a thick white coat with black patches around its eyes and on its legs. 它有一身厚厚的白色皮毛，眼睛周围和腿部有黑色班块。 The tiger mainly feeds on large mammals such as deer and wild boar. 老虎主要以鹿、野猪等大型哺乳动物为食。 4Sadly,many species are now endangered because of habitat loss and hunting. 遗憾的是，许多物种因栖息地丧失和捕猎而濒危。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 livebe native to inhabit 普通eat→feed on/survive on 普通 important vital crucial of great significance 普通 dangerous(endangered at risk of extinction 普通 helpcontribute to play a key role in 加分句型 1非谓语作状语 Weighing up to 150 kg,the polar bear is one of the largest land carnivores. 重达150公斤，北极熊是最大的陆地食肉动物之一。 2定语从句 The African elephant,which has large ears and a long trunk,lives in grasslands and forests. 非洲象有大耳朵和长鼻子，生活在草原和森林中。 3with复合结构 With its thick fur and strong limbs,the brown bear can survive in cold climates. 凭借厚厚的皮毛和强壮的四肢，棕熊能在寒冷气候中生存。 4倒装句（强调保护措施） Only by protecting their habitats can we ensure the survival of these magnificent creatures. 只有通过保护它们的栖息地，我们扌能确保这些壮丽生物的生存。 5Itis+ad.+that从句 It is alarming that the number of snow leopards has dropped sharply in recent decades. 今人担忧的是，雪豹的数量在近几十年急剧下降。 五、写作模板(100-120词) Animal:[Animal Name] The [Animal Namel is a [mammal bird reptilel that lives in [habitat/region].It is well-known for its [distinctive feature(s)1. In terms of appearance,lit has they havel Isize,color,special body partsl. [It/Theyl weigh(s)about Inumber]kilograms and [height/lengthl. The [animall is found in [location(s)]and prefers [type of environmentl. [It/Theyl feed(s)mainly on [diet]and [behave in a certain wayl,such as [habit/behavior example]. Sadly,this species is now [endangered vulnerablel due to [threats,e.g. habitat loss /huntingl.Conservation efforts are being made to protect it.It is our responsibility to help this amazing animal survive. 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：请根据以下信息写一份关于东北虎(Siberian tiger）的动物档案。 提示信息 >分布于俄罗斯远东、中国东北 >体型最大的老虎，体长可达3米，体重约300公斤 ,毛色橙黄带黑色条纹，腹部白色 >食肉，以野猪、鹿为食 >单独活动，夜行性 >濒危物种，现存不足500只，主要受盗猎和栖息地丧失威胁 范文： The Siberian Tiger The Siberian tiger,also known as the Amur tiger,is the largest tiger species in the world.It is native to the forests of far eastern Russia and northeastern China. In appearance,it has a thick orange coat with black stripes and a white belly.An adult male can reach up to 3 meters in length and weigh about 300 kilograms. These tigers are powerful hunters with strong legs and sharp teeth. Siberian tigers are solitary and mainly active at night.They feed on large animals such as wild boar and deer.Because they need a large territory to hunt,the loss of forests has become a serious threat. Sadly,fewer than 500 Siberian tigers remain in the wild today.Their survival is mainly endangered by poaching and habitat destruction.Conservation programs have been set up to protect them,but more efforts are needed to ensure their future. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一∶介绍非洲象 Dear friend, I'm writing to share a fascinating fact file about the African elephant-the largest land animal on Earth. 1.Appearance:It has huge ears shaped like Africa,long tusks and a trunk used for breathing,drinking and grabbing food. 2.Habitat:African elephants live in savannas and forests across Africa,often near water sources. 3.Diet:They are herbivores,feeding on grass,leaves,bark and fruits-they can eat up to 150 kg of food daily! 4.Behaviour:They live in family groups led by an old female,communicate through low sounds and show strong emotions. I think these gentle giants are truly amazing.Hope you enjoy learning about them. Yours, Li Ming (词数：118) 范文二：介绍考拉 Dear Tom, I've recently read an interesting fact file about koalas,and I'd like to share it with you. 1.Appearance:Koalas have thick grey fur,large round ears,and a black nose.They look cute but have sharp claws for climbing. 2.Habitat:They live in eucalyptus forests along the eastern coast of Australia. 3.Diet:Koalas are picky eaters -they feed almost only on eucalyptus leaves,which are poisonous to most animals. 4.Behaviour:They sleep up to 20 hours a day to save energy,and move slowly at night.Mothers carry their babies on their backs. Koalas are unique but endangered.Protecting their homes is important. Best wishes, Jack (词数：117)