Unit 3 Family Matters 家庭故事记叙文（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语外研版必修第一册

Unit 3 Family Matters｜家庭故事写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 人与自我·家庭亲情沟通 家庭故事记叙文 80词左右 记叙家庭暖心往事，抒发亲情感悟 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头、发展、高潮、结尾 搭出完整叙事结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 描述人物、交代信息的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整记叙文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜温馨周末时光 人与自我·家庭生活 过程描写与感受表达 练习2｜分歧后的理解 人与自我·亲子沟通 矛盾化解与感悟 练习3｜祖辈的关爱 人与自我·祖辈亲情 往事描写与感恩表达 练习4｜家庭会议 人与自我·家庭责任 事件记叙与收获 练习5｜困难中的陪伴 人与自我·亲情力量 细节描写与情感升华 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 3 Family Matters 家庭故事记叙文（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Family Matters；家庭亲情、代际沟通与家庭记忆 应用文体裁： 家庭故事记叙文 写作任务： 以记叙文记录一件家人之间发生的暖心往事，描写具体经过，抒发亲情感悟，留存家庭温暖记忆。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明故事发生的时间与背景，引出这段家庭往事。 主体（3—4句） 按时间顺序记叙事情经过，描写人物言行与暖心细节。 结尾（1—2句） 抒发感悟，点明亲情的力量，收束全文。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 character 人物，角色 描写故事人物 chat 闲谈，聊天 描写家人交流 career 职业，事业 描述父母辛劳 respect 尊敬，敬重 表达敬爱之情 ignore 忽视，不理 描写矛盾误会 professional 职业的，专业的 描述父母工作 talent 天赋，才能 描述家人支持 generation 一代（人） 点明代际主题 gap 差距，差别 描述代沟 memory 记忆，回忆 点明回忆主题 regularly 经常 描写日常陪伴 responsible 负有责任的 描写家人担当 aim 力求达到 描述努力目标 observe 庆祝 描写家庭节日 apologise 道歉 描写和解过程 admire 钦佩，赞美 表达敬佩之情 judge 认为，判断 描述心态转变 settle 和解 描写矛盾化解 impact 作用，影响 描述深远影响 strength 强烈程度 描述情感力量 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 focus on 集中于 描述用心陪伴 a range of 一系列 描述暖心举动 despite 尽管 引出让步情境 throughout 自始至终 描述始终陪伴 at that moment 在那一刻 点明转折瞬间 look back on 回顾 结尾引出感悟 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. My grandfather often tells me stories about his ________(职业) as a young doctor. 2. We should ________(尊敬) our parents and listen to their advice. 3. The warm ________(记忆) of that winter evening will stay with me forever. 4. After the quarrel, my father ________(道歉) to me first, which moved me a lot. 5. Parents' love has a deep ________(影响) on our growth. 【答案】 1. career 【解析】his 后接名词，career 表示"职业，事业"。 2. respect 【解析】should 后接动词原形，respect 表示"尊敬，敬重"。 3. memory 【解析】The warm 后接名词，memory 表示"记忆，回忆"。 4. apologised 【解析】叙述过去发生的事，apologise 用一般过去时。 5. impact 【解析】a deep 后接名词，impact 表示"作用，影响"。 句子翻译 1. 那个周末和父母一起做饭的时光让我至今难忘。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 起初我们之间有分歧，但后来我们坐下来好好聊了聊。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 尽管工作繁忙，父亲总是抽时间陪伴我。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 妈妈的鼓励给了我面对困难的力量。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 回顾那段往事，我深深体会到家的温暖。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. The weekend when I cooked with my parents is still unforgettable to me. 【解析】when 引导定语从句修饰 the weekend，一般现在时表达至今感受。 2. At first there was a gap between us, but later we sat down and had a good chat. 【解析】but 连接转折，have a good chat 表示"好好聊了聊"。 3. Although he is busy with work, my father always finds time to stay with me. 【解析】although 引导让步状语从句，find time to do 表示"抽时间做某事"。 4. Mother's encouragement gave me the strength to face difficulties. 【解析】give sb. the strength to do 表示"给某人做某事的力量"。 5. Looking back on that experience, I deeply feel the warmth of my family. 【解析】现在分词短语作状语，look back on 表示"回顾"。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. Whenever I look back on my family life, one warm memory always comes to my mind. 2. It was a cold winter evening when my family gave me the warmest surprise. 3. Among all my family memories, the story of that weekend is the most touching. 中间句 1. That evening, my parents put down their work and cooked my favourite dishes together. 2. At first we had different opinions, but neither of us wanted to hurt the other. 3. My father apologised first, and we settled the problem with a long chat. 4. Despite the generation gap, my grandparents always try to understand me. 结尾句 1. At that moment, I realised how lucky I was to have such a caring family. 2. Family love, quiet but powerful, gives me the strength to move on. 3. This warm memory will stay in my heart throughout my life. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） It was _______ when the warmest story of my family happened. At first, _______. Then, _______. To my surprise, _______. We finally _______. At that moment, I realised _______. This memory will stay with me forever. 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） Whenever I look back on my family life, one warm memory always warms my heart. It happened _______， when _______. At first, _______， which made me feel _______. However, instead of ignoring my feelings, my parents _______. What touched me most was that _______. Finally, we _______， and the gap between us quietly disappeared. Looking back on that day, I now understand that _______. Family love may be quiet, but it is the strength that carries me through everything. 六、典例精练 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集"家庭故事"主题征文。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一件你和家人之间发生的暖心往事，并谈谈你的感悟。 写作要点： 1. 交代事情发生的时间与背景。 2. 记叙事情的经过与暖心细节。 3. 抒发你对亲情的感悟。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Warm Memory of My Family ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是家庭故事记叙文，题干已给标题，无称呼、无落款。对象是英文报读者，目的在于分享暖心往事与感悟。记叙过去的事以一般过去时为主，抒发感悟可用一般现在时；语气真挚温暖，细节具体动人。布局为时间背景、经过描写、感悟收束。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 交代背景 It was a cold evening when the story happened. when 引导定语从句交代时间。 描写经过 My parents put down their work and stayed with me. 并列谓语描写连续动作。 写出细节 Mother's warm smile melted away all my worries. 一般过去时描写暖心瞬间。 抒发感悟 Family love gives me the strength to face everything. 一般现在时表达恒常感悟。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 The story happened on a winter evening. It was a freezing winter evening when the story happened. It was a sunny morning when we set out. 强调句式突出时间背景。 My mother encouraged me. What touched me most was that my mother encouraged me quietly. What moved me deeply was that she stayed up all night. 主语从句聚焦暖心细节。 I felt warm. A stream of warmth flowed into my heart. A sense of pride rose in my heart. 比喻描写内心感受。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 warm heart-warming 描写暖心往事 remember look back on 回顾家庭往事 talk have a heart-to-heart chat 描写深入交流 understand see into my heart 描写家人理解 love quiet but powerful love 升华亲情表达 very sad heart-broken 描述情绪的低落强烈 noticed something wrong read the sadness in my eyes 描写母亲的细心敏锐 a long chat a heart-to-heart chat 描写交流的深入真挚 encouraged me cheered me on 描写鼓励的温暖支持 felt the warmth a stream of warmth flowed into my heart 描写内心感受的涌现 参考范文 基础版范文 A Warm Memory of My Family Last winter, I failed an important exam and felt very sad. I was afraid to tell my parents about it. That evening, my mother noticed something wrong and had a long chat with me. Instead of being angry, my father encouraged me and helped me find my problems. We made a study plan together, and they promised to help me regularly. At that moment, I felt the warmth of my family. Their love gives me the strength to face every difficulty. 提高版范文 A Warm Memory of My Family Last winter, I failed an important exam and came home heart-broken, afraid to tell my parents about it. That evening, my mother quietly read the sadness in my eyes and had a heart-to-heart chat with me. Instead of scolding me, my father cheered me on and helped me find my problems. We made a study plan together, and they promised to stand by me regularly. At that moment, a stream of warmth flowed into my heart. Their love, quiet but powerful, gives me the strength to face every difficulty. 七、拓展练习 练习1：记叙一次与家人共度的温馨周末时光（人与自我-家庭生活） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你与家人共度的温馨周末时光。 写作要点： 1. 交代周末的时间与活动安排。 2. 记叙与家人共度的具体过程与细节。 3. 表达这次经历带给你的感受。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Perfect Weekend with My Family ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：记叙文，题干已给标题，记叙温馨周末时光。 2. 要点：交代时间活动；描写共度过程；表达感受。 3. 结构：时间背景；过程描写；感受收束。 4. 表达：使用 chat、observe、regularly、focus on 和 a range of。 基础版范文 A Perfect Weekend with My Family My family and I spent a whole day together in the countryside one weekend last autumn. In the morning, we had a picnic by the lake, chatting and laughing happily. In the afternoon, we flew kites on the grass and my father taught me how to make it fly higher. In the evening, we cooked dinner together and observed the beautiful sunset. It was a perfect weekend. I felt the happiness of being with my family. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a whole day a whole carefree day 突出周末的轻松感 chatting and laughing chatting and laughing merrily 强化欢乐氛围描写 taught me patiently guided me with great patience 提升耐心描写质感 beautiful sunset breathtaking sunset 升华景色描写层次 the happiness the simple happiness 点明幸福的纯粹 提高版范文 A Perfect Weekend with My Family My family and I spent a whole carefree day together in the countryside one weekend last autumn. In the morning, we had a picnic by the lake, chatting and laughing merrily. In the afternoon, we flew kites on the grass, and my father guided me with great patience until my kite danced highest in the sky. In the evening, we cooked dinner together and observed the breathtaking sunset. It was a perfect weekend, and I came to understand the simple happiness of being with my family. 练习2：记叙一次与父母产生分歧后互相理解的经历（人与自我-亲子沟通） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你与父母产生分歧后互相理解的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代分歧产生的原因与经过。 2. 描写双方从争执到理解的过程。 3. 表达你对亲子沟通的感悟。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Understanding Each Other ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：记叙文，题干已给标题，记叙分歧后互相理解的经历。 2. 要点：交代分歧起因；描写和解过程；表达沟通感悟。 3. 结构：分歧引入；和解描写；感悟收束。 4. 表达：使用 ignore、gap、apologise、settle 和 judge。 基础版范文 Understanding Each Other It all began one month ago, when my parents and I had a big argument about how I spent my weekends. I wanted to relax after a busy week, but they judged that I was wasting my time. We ignored each other for two days, which made both sides sad. Finally, my father apologised first and we settled the problem with a long chat. Now I understand that communication matters. When we open our hearts, the gap between us will disappear. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a big argument a heated quarrel 强化争执的激烈程度 wasting my time throwing my time away 提升批评话语的质感 ignored each other a cold silence hung between us 以环境描写烘托僵局 apologised first took the first step to break the ice 突出主动和解的勇气 will disappear will melt away naturally 升华隔阂消融的描写 提高版范文 Understanding Each Other It all began one month ago, when my parents and I had a heated quarrel about how I spent my weekends. I just wanted to relax after a busy week, but they believed I was throwing my time away. For two days, a cold silence hung between us, which hurt both sides. Finally, my father took the first step to break the ice, and we settled everything with a heart-to-heart chat. Now I understand that communication matters more than anything. When we open our hearts, the gap between us will melt away naturally. 练习3：记叙祖辈对自己成长影响的暖心往事（人与自我-祖辈亲情） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙祖辈对你成长产生影响的暖心往事。 写作要点： 1. 点明祖辈对你的影响体现在哪些方面。 2. 记叙一件具体的暖心往事。 3. 表达你对祖辈的感激与敬爱。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Grandfather's Quiet Love ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：记叙文，题干已给标题，记叙祖父的暖心往事。 2. 要点：点明影响；记叙具体往事；表达感激敬爱。 3. 结构：人物引入；往事描写；情感收束。 4. 表达：使用 respect、admire、memory、despite 和 throughout。 基础版范文 My Grandfather's Quiet Love My grandfather is the person who influences me most in my family. Despite his old age, he gets up early and takes a walk regularly. When I was small, he told me stories about his career and taught me to be honest and responsible. One winter morning, he walked a long way in the snow just to bring me my forgotten homework. I admire and respect him deeply. His quiet love stays with me throughout my life. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 influences me most shapes who I am 升华影响的深远意义 Despite his old age Despite his grey hair and slow steps 以细节代替直白陈述 told me stories shared stories of his youth 提升讲述的温情质感 a long way in the snow miles through the heavy snow 强化寒冬送作业的艰辛 quiet love quiet but deep love 丰富亲情表达层次 提高版范文 My Grandfather's Quiet Love My grandfather is the person who shapes who I am in my family. Despite his grey hair and slow steps, he gets up early and takes a walk regularly. When I was small, he shared stories of his youth and taught me to be honest and responsible. One winter morning, he walked miles through the heavy snow just to bring me my forgotten homework. I admire and respect him deeply. His quiet but deep love stays with me throughout my life. 练习4：记叙一次家庭会议解决家务分工问题的经历（人与自我-家庭责任） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你的家庭通过家庭会议解决家务分工问题的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代家务分工问题产生的背景。 2. 记叙家庭会议讨论与解决的过程。 3. 表达这次经历带给你的收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Family Meeting That Changed Us ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：记叙文，题干已给标题，记叙家庭会议解决问题的经历。 2. 要点：交代问题背景；描写会议过程；表达收获。 3. 结构：问题引入；会议描写；收获收束。 4. 表达：使用 character、responsible、aim、strength 和 settle for。 基础版范文 A Family Meeting That Changed Us Last term, housework became a big problem in my family, because everyone was too busy. One Sunday evening, my mother held a family meeting. At the meeting, everyone voiced their opinions and we aimed at a fair plan. Finally, we divided the housework according to our free time, and each of us became responsible for our own tasks. Since then, our home has become warmer. I have learned that sharing duties makes a family stronger. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 a big problem a growing headache 生动描述问题的累积 held a family meeting called a family meeting 突出母亲的主动担当 voiced their opinions spoke out their true thoughts 强化坦诚交流的氛围 a fair plan a plan that suited everyone 点明方案的周全 makes a family stronger binds a family closer together 升华分担的意义 提高版范文 A Family Meeting That Changed Us Last term, housework became a growing headache in my family, because everyone was too busy with their own lives. One Sunday evening, my mother called a family meeting. Everyone spoke out their true thoughts, and we finally worked out a plan that suited everyone. From then on, each of us took charge of our own tasks willingly. Since then, our home has become warmer, and I have learned that sharing duties binds a family closer together. 练习5：记叙家人陪伴自己度过困难时刻的经历（人与自我-亲情力量） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙家人陪伴你度过困难时刻的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代你遇到的困难时刻。 2. 描写家人陪伴与支持的具体细节。 3. 表达你的感悟与感恩之情。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 With You by My Side ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 1. 审题：记叙文，题干已给标题，记叙家人陪伴渡过难关的经历。 2. 要点：交代困难；描写陪伴细节；表达感恩感悟。 3. 结构：困难引入；陪伴描写；感恩收束。 4. 表达：使用 throughout、impact、focus on、look back on 和 at that moment。 基础版范文 With You by My Side Being ill in hospital for two weeks was one of the hardest times of my life. I felt lonely and scared. However, my parents took turns to look after me day and night. My mother read my favourite books to me, and my father cooked delicious meals for me. They always focused on my feelings and cheered me up whenever I was sad. At that moment, I felt the impact of family love. I will always be thankful for having them by my side. 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 lonely and scared lost and frightened 丰富无助情绪的层次 took turns to look after took turns keeping me company 突出陪伴的温情 read my favourite books read my favourite stories in a soft voice 以声音细节强化温情 cheered me up lifted my spirits 提升鼓励的表达质感 the impact of family love the power of family love 升华亲情的力量表达 提高版范文 With You by My Side Being ill in hospital for two weeks was one of the hardest times of my life, and I felt lost and frightened. However, my parents took turns keeping me company day and night. My mother read my favourite stories in a soft voice, and my father cooked delicious meals for me. They always focused on my feelings and lifted my spirits whenever I was low. At that moment, I felt the power of family love. I will always be thankful for having them by my side. 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 记叙结构清楚，时间背景、经过描写与感悟收束安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 故事具体动人，暖心细节真实，感悟自然贴切。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和目标句式，叙事时态运用准确，表达流畅。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 书写清楚，拼写、大小写和标点规范。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Family Matters｜家庭故事写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 人与自我·家庭亲情沟通 家庭故事记叙文 80词左右 记叙家庭暖心往事，抒发亲情感悟 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 开头、发展、高潮、结尾 搭出完整叙事结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 描述人物、交代信息的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整记叙文 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜温馨周末时光 人与自我·家庭生活 过程描写与感受表达 练习2｜分歧后的理解 人与自我·亲子沟通 矛盾化解与感悟 练习3｜祖辈的关爱 人与自我·祖辈亲情 往事描写与感恩表达 练习4｜家庭会议 人与自我·家庭责任 事件记叙与收获 练习5｜困难中的陪伴 人与自我·亲情力量 细节描写与情感升华 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 定任务 → 明信息 → 学描写 → 写成篇 → 完成练习 → 修改提升 Unit 3 Family Matters 家庭故事记叙文（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Family Matters；家庭亲情、代际沟通与家庭记忆 应用文体裁： 家庭故事记叙文 写作任务： 以记叙文记录一件家人之间发生的暖心往事，描写具体经过，抒发亲情感悟，留存家庭温暖记忆。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明故事发生的时间与背景，引出这段家庭往事。 主体（3—4句） 按时间顺序记叙事情经过，描写人物言行与暖心细节。 结尾（1—2句） 抒发感悟，点明亲情的力量，收束全文。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 character 人物，角色 描写故事人物 chat 闲谈，聊天 描写家人交流 career 职业，事业 描述父母辛劳 respect 尊敬，敬重 表达敬爱之情 ignore 忽视，不理 描写矛盾误会 professional 职业的，专业的 描述父母工作 talent 天赋，才能 描述家人支持 generation 一代（人） 点明代际主题 gap 差距，差别 描述代沟 memory 记忆，回忆 点明回忆主题 regularly 经常 描写日常陪伴 responsible 负有责任的 描写家人担当 aim 力求达到 描述努力目标 observe 庆祝 描写家庭节日 apologise 道歉 描写和解过程 admire 钦佩，赞美 表达敬佩之情 judge 认为，判断 描述心态转变 settle 和解 描写矛盾化解 impact 作用，影响 描述深远影响 strength 强烈程度 描述情感力量 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 focus on 集中于 描述用心陪伴 a range of 一系列 描述暖心举动 despite 尽管 引出让步情境 throughout 自始至终 描述始终陪伴 at that moment 在那一刻 点明转折瞬间 look back on 回顾 结尾引出感悟 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. My grandfather often tells me stories about his ________(职业) as a young doctor. 2. We should ________(尊敬) our parents and listen to their advice. 3. The warm ________(记忆) of that winter evening will stay with me forever. 4. After the quarrel, my father ________(道歉) to me first, which moved me a lot. 5. Parents' love has a deep ________(影响) on our growth. 句子翻译 1. 那个周末和父母一起做饭的时光让我至今难忘。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 起初我们之间有分歧，但后来我们坐下来好好聊了聊。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 尽管工作繁忙，父亲总是抽时间陪伴我。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 妈妈的鼓励给了我面对困难的力量。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 回顾那段往事，我深深体会到家的温暖。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. Whenever I look back on my family life, one warm memory always comes to my mind. 2. It was a cold winter evening when my family gave me the warmest surprise. 3. Among all my family memories, the story of that weekend is the most touching. 中间句 1. That evening, my parents put down their work and cooked my favourite dishes together. 2. At first we had different opinions, but neither of us wanted to hurt the other. 3. My father apologised first, and we settled the problem with a long chat. 4. Despite the generation gap, my grandparents always try to understand me. 结尾句 1. At that moment, I realised how lucky I was to have such a caring family. 2. Family love, quiet but powerful, gives me the strength to move on. 3. This warm memory will stay in my heart throughout my life. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 _______（标题） It was _______ when the warmest story of my family happened. At first, _______. Then, _______. To my surprise, _______. We finally _______. At that moment, I realised _______. This memory will stay with me forever. 模板2：分层高分版 _______（标题） Whenever I look back on my family life, one warm memory always warms my heart. It happened _______， when _______. At first, _______， which made me feel _______. However, instead of ignoring my feelings, my parents _______. What touched me most was that _______. Finally, we _______， and the gap between us quietly disappeared. Looking back on that day, I now understand that _______. Family love may be quiet, but it is the strength that carries me through everything. 六、典例精练 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集"家庭故事"主题征文。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一件你和家人之间发生的暖心往事，并谈谈你的感悟。 写作要点： 1. 交代事情发生的时间与背景。 2. 记叙事情的经过与暖心细节。 3. 抒发你对亲情的感悟。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Warm Memory of My Family ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、拓展练习 练习1：记叙一次与家人共度的温馨周末时光（人与自我-家庭生活） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你与家人共度的温馨周末时光。 写作要点： 1. 交代周末的时间与活动安排。 2. 记叙与家人共度的具体过程与细节。 3. 表达这次经历带给你的感受。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Perfect Weekend with My Family ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习2：记叙一次与父母产生分歧后互相理解的经历（人与自我-亲子沟通） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你与父母产生分歧后互相理解的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代分歧产生的原因与经过。 2. 描写双方从争执到理解的过程。 3. 表达你对亲子沟通的感悟。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Understanding Each Other ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习3：记叙祖辈对自己成长影响的暖心往事（人与自我-祖辈亲情） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙祖辈对你成长产生影响的暖心往事。 写作要点： 1. 点明祖辈对你的影响体现在哪些方面。 2. 记叙一件具体的暖心往事。 3. 表达你对祖辈的感激与敬爱。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Grandfather's Quiet Love ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习4：记叙一次家庭会议解决家务分工问题的经历（人与自我-家庭责任） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙一次你的家庭通过家庭会议解决家务分工问题的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代家务分工问题产生的背景。 2. 记叙家庭会议讨论与解决的过程。 3. 表达这次经历带给你的收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 A Family Meeting That Changed Us ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 练习5：记叙家人陪伴自己度过困难时刻的经历（人与自我-亲情力量） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集家庭故事。请用英语写一篇短文，记叙家人陪伴你度过困难时刻的经历。 写作要点： 1. 交代你遇到的困难时刻。 2. 描写家人陪伴与支持的具体细节。 3. 表达你的感悟与感恩之情。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 With You by My Side ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 记叙结构清楚，时间背景、经过描写与感悟收束安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 故事具体动人，暖心细节真实，感悟自然贴切。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和目标句式，叙事时态运用准确，表达流畅。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 书写清楚，拼写、大小写和标点规范。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $