UNIT 5 Part 6 Writing(同步精练)（PPT同步课件）-【学而思】2026-2027学年高二英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版）

UNIT 5　EDUCATION Part 6　Writing 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 看图写作 写作题目 　　如今,随着智能手机等电子设备的普及,人们沉迷于手机等电子设备而忽略了和他人的沟通交流。 请根据下图写一篇英语短文,内容要点如下: 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 1.描述图画内容; 2.针对图画内容加以分析; 3.针对该现象提出自己的看法或建议。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.__________ adj.生动的,逼真的 2._________________ adj.热衷的 3.____________ adj.显然的,明显的 4.__________ vt.表明;意味着 5._____________ n.倾向 6._____________ vt.约束,限制 7._____________ adj.宝贵的 8._____________________________非常重要 　be of great significance     　precious     　restrict     　tendency     　imply     　obvious     　enthusiastic     　vivid     第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一段:描述图画内容 (1)_______ ______ ______ ________ ________ _______ ________ ____________(从生动的图画中可以看 出), a big family get together to have a splendid dinner. (2)At the table, the young ______ _____________ _________ ____________(热衷于玩) with their electronic devices, _______________ _______(不顾) the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment. 第二段:针对图画内容加以分析 (3)The picture implies that electronic devices________ _______ ______ ________ _______ ______ __________(对我们的生活有不好的影响). 　lives     　our     　influence　　on     　have　　a　　bad     　of     　regardless     　playing     　about     　enthusiastic     　are     　picture     　vivid     　the     　from     　seen     　be     　can     　As     第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 (4)Young addicts _______ ______ __________ _______ _________(倾向于表现出) poor academic perfor- mance, which adds to the elders' worry. 第三段:针对该现象提出自己的看法或建议 (5)As far as I'm concerned, _____ _____ ______ _______ ________________ _______ ________(很重要的 是限制) the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members. (6)It _____________ _______(有助于)a harmonious family atmosphere. 2.句式升级 (7)用动词-ing形式作状语改写句(4)。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ 　Young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to the elders' worry.     　to     　contributes     　restrict     　to     　great　　significance     　of     　is     　it     　show     　to     　tendency     　a     　have     第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 (8)把句(5)和句(6)合并成含有非限制性定语从句的主从复合句。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ family atmosphere.     value precious face-to-face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious 　As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 连句成篇 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 关于看图写作的增分佳句 开头:根据画面,予以描述 1.This is an interesting but thought-provoking picture.这是一幅有趣但是引人深思的 图画。 2.From the picture we can see that...从图画中我们可以看到…… 3.As is vividly shown in the picture...正如图画中生动显示的那样…… 写作积累 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 主体:分析现象,找出原因 1.There are two main reasons. On the one hand...On the other hand...有两个主要原因。一方面……另一方面…… 2.There are three reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with...What's more...Last but not least...产生这个现象有三个原因。首先……其次……最后但 同样重要的是…… 结尾:总结问题,提出建议 1.We ought to/should...我们应该…… 2.It is suggested/advised that...建议…… 3.In consequence/Consequently/As a result...因此…… 4.In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize/All in all...简而言之/概括起来说/总之/总的来说…… 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 实战演练 　　请根据下面的图片写一篇短文,内容包括: 1.描述漫画内容及其寓意; 2.发表你的观点。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 　　As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing.　　　　　　　     　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　　　　   　　　　　　　　  第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 One possible version: _______________________________________________________________ However, once there is no support, the tree breaks off. In fact, it reflects a common phenomenon—many parents take care of their children too much. 　　In our daily life, some parents often take unnecessary action, which will contribute to an undesirable re- sult in the long run. Children need not only support and care but also challenges of difficulties and experi- ences of hardships. Too much care is not beneficial to their growth and development.Consequently, it is suggested that parents should give children more space to deal with their own things independently as they grow up. As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 五年高考真题练 阅读理解   [2023全国甲,C] 　　I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder's Sophie's World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book. It spoke to me and brought me into a world of philosophy(哲学). 　　That love for philosophy lasted until I got to college. Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Baudrillard, or Confucius better than you—and then try to ex- plain them. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 Eric Weiner's The Socrates Express:In Search of Life Lessons from Dead Philosophers reawakened my love for philosophy. It is not an explanation, but an invitation to think and experience philosophy. 　　Weiner starts each chapter with a scene on a train ride between cities and then frames each philosopher' s work in the context(背景) of one thing they can help us do better. The end result is a read in which we learn to wonder like Socrates, see like Thoreau, listen like Schopenhauer, and have no regrets like Nietzsche. This, more than a book about understanding philosophy, is a book about learning to use philosophy to im- prove a life. 　　He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experi- ences, and he does so with plenty of humor. Weiner enters into conversation with some of the most impor- tant philosophers in history, and he becomes part of that crowd in the process by decoding(解读) their mes- sages and adding his own interpretation. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and grad- ually pulls them in deeper thoughts on desire, loneliness, and aging. The invitation is clear: Weiner wants you to pick up a coffee or tea and sit down with this book. I encourage you to take his offer. It's worth your time, even if time is something we don't have a lot of. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 篇章结构图   1.Who opened the door to philosophy for the author? A.Foucault.　　B.Eric Weiner.　　C.Jostein Gaarder.　　D.A college teacher. 2.Why does the author list great philosophers in paragraph 4? A.To compare Weiner with them.　　B.To give examples of great works. C.To praise their writing skills.　　D.To help readers understand Weiner's book. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 3.What does the author like about The Socrates Express? A.Its views on history are well-presented.　　B.Its ideas can be applied to daily life. C.It includes comments from readers.　　D.It leaves an open ending. 4.What does the author think of Weiner's book? A.Objective and plain.　　B.Daring and ambitious. C.Serious and hard to follow.　　D.Humorous and straightforward. 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 高考词汇站　派生词汇 1.awaken v.(使)醒来,唤起→_____________v.唤起;再次引发(感情、回忆等) 2.explain v.解释→________________n.解释 3.invite v.邀请→_______________n.邀请 4.appeal v.有吸引力,引起兴趣→______________adj.有吸引力的,令人感兴趣的 5.interpret v.解释,说明→___________________n.理解,解释,说明 6.simple adj.简单的→_______________n.简单,简明 7.lonely adj.孤独的,寂寞的→_______________n.孤独,寂寞 熟词生义 8.frame v._________________ 9.work n.___________ 10.sharp adj.________ 　犀利的     　著作         (以某种方式)表达     　loneliness     　simplicity     　interpretation     　appealing     　invitation     　explanation     　reawaken     第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 语篇解读    本文是一则书评。文章从作者的读书经历入手,简单介绍了Eric Weiner的《苏格拉底快车: 从死去的哲学家那里寻找人生教训》一书的主要内容以及作者对这本书的评价。 长难句 原句　Nothing kills the love for philosophy faster than people who think they understand Foucault, Bau- drillard, or Confucius better than you—and then try to explain them. 分析　“Nothing...faster than...”为副词比较级的否定形式,用来表示最高级。who引导定语从句,修饰 先行词people。 译文　有些人自认为比你更了解福柯、博德里亚或孔子,他们还试图解释这些哲学家,没有什么比他们 能更快地扼杀对哲学的热爱了。 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 【篇章结构图】    1.improve    2.exercise    3.thoughts 1.C　细节理解题。根据第一段中“I was about 13 when an uncle gave me a copy of Jostein Gaarder' s Sophie's World. It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book.(在我13岁左右的时候,一个叔叔给了我一本Jostein Gaarder的《苏菲的世界》。书里充满了 对我来说很新鲜的想法,所以我整个夏天都在不断翻看那本书。)”可知,是Jostein Gaarder的书让作者 喜欢上了哲学。Foucault是第二段中提到的一个哲学家,为本文的次要细节。Eric Weiner是作者在本文 中主要介绍的那本书的作者,是重新唤醒作者对哲学的热爱的人。文中没有提到一位大学老师。 2.D　推理判断题。第四段最后一句是作者对这本书的作用的高度评价,列举这些哲学家主要是 为了帮助读者理解这本书带来的收获。 3.B　细节理解题。根据第三段中“but an invitation to think and experience philosophy(而是邀请你 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 去思考和体验哲学)”、第四段中“and then frames each philosopher's work in the context of one thing they can help us do better(然后把每个哲学家的著作放在他们能帮助我们做得更好的一件事的背景 下)”以及第五段中“He makes philosophical thought an appealing exercise that improves the quality of our experiences(他使哲学思考成为一种有吸引力的练习,这种练习可以提高我们体验的质量)”可知, 《苏格拉底快车》这本书让人们学会把哲学思想用于生活实践,作者多次提到这一点,说明这是作者喜 欢这本书的地方。 4.D　推理判断题。根据第五段第一句中“with plenty of humor”和最后一段中“The Socrates Express is a fun, sharp book that draws readers in with its apparent simplicity and...(《苏格拉底快车》是 一本有趣、犀利的书,以其明显的简单和……吸引读者)”可知,作者认为Weiner的书有趣、犀利、简 单易懂。 第1讲　描述运动的基本概念 $