Unit 1 Period 4 Writing（Word教参）-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第二册同步教参（人教版）

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(关于科学精神的文章) 世界的发展离不开科学，科学赋予我们多彩的生活。在大家歌颂科学家们的丰功伟绩时，也应重视他们在成功道路上付出的种种艰辛。请你以爱迪生(Edison)为例写一篇短文，谈谈这种科学精神。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．proof n.　　　　　　 证据；证明 2．multiple adj. 多种多样的 3．suspect vt.& vi. 怀疑；疑有；不信任 4．blame vt. 责怪；指责 5．link vt. 把……连接起来；相关联 6．thanks to 幸亏；由于 7．outstanding adj. 优秀的；杰出的 8．gifted adj. 有天赋的；天资聪慧的 [第一段]　简要介绍科学家 1．爱迪生是一位杰出且有天赋的发明家。 Edison was an outstanding and gifted inventor． 2．他对这个世界如此好奇，以至于什么事都要问。(so...that...) He was so curious about the world that he always asked questions about everything． 3．爱迪生如此致力于发明东西，甚至被人怀疑不正常并受到指责。(so...that...) Edison was so devoted to inventing things that he was even suspected of being abnormal and was blamed by people． [第二段]　讲述科学家的主要经历、贡献及其品质 4．在他的一生中，他创造了许多发明，其中大部分与人们的日常生活有关。 In his lifetime, he made multiple inventions, and most of them were linked to people's daily lives． 5．他一生都在实验室里度过，在那里他做了一个又一个实验。(where引导定语从句) He spent his whole life in the laboratory, where he did one experiment after another. 6．他好像从不惧怕失败。(It seemed that...) It seemed that he was never afraid of failure. 7．电灯这一伟大发明就是一个很好的证明。 The great invention of electric light was a good proof. 8．正是由于他的发明，人们的生活才变得如此便捷。 It was thanks to his inventions that people's lives became so convenient. [第三段]　客观评价 9．在我看来，他不屈不挠的精神和毅力非常值得学习。 As far as I'm concerned, his indomitable spirit and perseverance are well worth learning． 10．用同位语改写句1并合并句2 Edison, an outstanding and gifted inventor, was so curious about the world that he always asked questions about everything. 11．用定语从句改写句4 In his lifetime, he made multiple inventions, most of which were linked to people's daily lives. 　衔接成篇 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ One possible version： Edison, an outstanding and gifted inventor, was so curious about the world that he always asked questions about everything. Edison was so devoted to inventing things that he was even suspected of being abnormal and was blamed by people. In his lifetime, he made multiple inventions, most of which were linked to people's daily lives. He spent his whole life in the laboratory, where he did one experiment after another. It seemed that he was never afraid of failure. The great invention of electric light was a good proof. It was thanks to his inventions that people's lives became so convenient. As far as I'm concerned, his indomitable spirit and perseverance are well worth learning. 牛顿是世界著名的科学家，关于他的故事有很多。请你根据他煮鸡蛋的故事，以“A Story of Newton”为题写一篇短文，并据此发表一下自己对科学精神的看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ One possible version： A Story of Newton Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists. So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life. Once, a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out, asking Newton to cook the eggs himself. However, when the servant came back, what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot. From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist, not only should we be knowledgeable, but we should also focus on what we are doing. 第一段简要介绍科学家 1.As we all know, he/she is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.　众所周知，他/她是中国21世纪最著名的医学科学家之一。 2.He/She studied at a key local high school and graduated from Tsinghua University. 他/她在当地的一所重点高中学习，毕业于清华大学。 3.Marie Curie was born in Warsaw, Poland, in 1867 and later moved to Paris to pursue higher education, where she earned two master's degrees in physics and mathematics. 玛丽·居里于1867 年出生于波兰华沙，后来移居巴黎深造，在那里她获得了物理学和数学两个硕士学位。 4.Jane Goodall, born in London, England, in 1934, did not receive a university degree until her 20s, when she studied ethology at the University of Cambridge. 珍·古道尔于1934 年出生于英国伦敦，直到 20 多岁才获得大学学位，当时她在剑桥大学攻读动物行为学专业。 第二段 讲述科学家的主要经历、贡献及其品质 1.He/She got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research. 因为在科学研究中发挥了重要作用，他/她在1998年获奖。 2.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚定的人，我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 3.Albert Einstein's innovative thinking enabled him to put forward the theory of relativity, which revolutionized human understanding of space, time and mass. 　阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦凭借创新思维提出相对论，彻底改变了人类对空间、时间和质量的认知。 4.With great perseverance, Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice and saved millions from hunger, embodying his lifelong devotion to solving food crises. 袁隆平凭借极大的毅力培育出杂交水稻，拯救了数百万饥民，彰显出他毕生致力于解决粮食危机的奉献精神。 第三段 客观评价 1.Such is Zhong Nanshan, a great man who has made great achievements in the field of medicine. 这就是钟南山，一个在医学领域取得了巨大成就的伟大的人。 2.In my opinion，what made them great scientists is their scientific spirits，such as devotion, diligence, determination and so on. 在我看来，成就伟大科学家的是他们的科学精神，如专心、勤奋、决心等。 3.His contributions to molecular biology have significantly advanced the field. 他对分子生物学的贡献极大地推动了该领域的发展。 4.There is no doubt that positive attitudes and values are bound to make a great difference to everyone.　毫无疑问，积极的态度和价值观必将对每个人产生重大影响。 5.It is because of the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made such outstanding achievements.　正是因为科学精神，这些伟大的科学家才取得了如此杰出的成就。 写作二　场景微续写(克服挫折) ——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 [人物描写]　frustrated，contradictory，household，patriotic，assistant，leadership，outstanding，gifted，astronomer　 [环境描写]　severe, raw, pure, shadow, rainbow [动作描写]　infect, subscribe to, suspect, blame, handle, link, decrease, transform, cast, break out, defend, in charge of, come down with 佳句积累 [人物描写]　1.He was determined to find out why. 2.For this reason, Snow is considered the father of modern epidemiology. 3.Born in Shanghai in 1911，Qian attended schools in Beijing and then entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study Railway Mechanical Engineering. 4.Besides being brilliant, he was brave, though sometimes careless in what he said or did. [情感描写]　1.It seemed that the woman liked the water from the pump so much that she had it delivered to her house every day. 2.Nevertheless, Qian did not let that discourage him from taking on the challenge. 3.On 31 October 2009, the whole country was saddened by Qian's death. [排比]　He was willing to say what others were afraid to say, and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about. ——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　汤姆是一位年轻的发明家，他的脑海中总是充满了创意想法。然而，最近他感到极度沮丧，甚至考虑放弃自己最新的项目。那是一款旨在帮忙做家务的机器人助手，其测试结果却出人意料地相互矛盾。有时，它表现极为出色，能整理房间，甚至还能做简单的饭菜。但有时，它会突然发出奇怪的声响，行动也变得怪异。 是汤姆的老师注意到了他的苦恼，这位老师负责学校的发明俱乐部。他怀疑机器人的编程可能存在严重问题。经过数天的努力，在老师耐心指导的鼓励下，汤姆终于在代码中找到了隐藏的漏洞。经过一些调整，机器人助手完美地运行起来，汤姆的沮丧化作了喜悦。 Tom was a young inventor, 1.with his mind always brimming with creative ideas (with复合结构). However, recently 2.so frustrated did he feel that he even considered giving up on his latest project (so...that...；倒装). It was a robot assistant 3.designed to help with household chores (过去分词短语作定语), 4.its test results being surprisingly contradictory (独立主格结构). Sometimes it worked brilliantly, 5.tidying up the room and even making simple meals [现在分词(短语)作状语]. But at other times, it would break out into strange noises and move erratically. 6．It was Tom's teacher, who was in charge of the school's invention club, that noticed his distress (强调句型；定语从句). He suspected there might be a severe issue with the robot's programming. After days of hard work, Tom, 7.with his teacher's patient guidance encouraging him (with复合结构), finally found the hidden bug in the code. With a few adjustments, the robot assistant worked perfectly, and Tom's frustration turned into joy. 短语必记 1.suffer a setback　　　　遭受挫折 2.meet with difficulties 遇到困难 3.run into trouble 遇到麻烦 4.take a beating 遭受打击；受到挫折 5.hit the wall 遇到障碍；精疲力竭 6.fall on hard times 陷入困境 必背金句 1.With unyielding perseverance, she kept experimenting day and night until she finally cracked the tough technical problem. 凭借不屈不挠的毅力，她日夜坚持试验，最终攻克了这个棘手的技术难题。 2.Despite hitting the wall countless times in environmental protection campaigns, his lifelong devotion to environmental protection never faded, inspiring thousands of people to join the green development cause and overcome the setbacks together.　尽管在环保行动中无数次陷入瓶颈，他毕生的奉献从未消减，激励着成千上万的人投入绿色发展事业，共同战胜挫折。 3.No matter how many times she failed, her perseverance never wavered, and she eventually achieved her dream of becoming a doctor. 无论失败多少次，她的毅力从未动摇，她最终实现了成为一名医生的梦想。 4.Those who succeed in great things all share one common trait: extraordinary perseverance in the face of setbacks. 成就伟业的人都有一个共同特质：面对挫折时拥有超乎常人的毅力。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $