专题02 书面表达（期中真题汇编，天津专用）九年级英语上学期

专题02 书面表达 1．（25-26九年级上·天津·期中）每年假期，越来越多的人们走出家门，外出旅游。但与此同时，我们更应该注意自己的言行举止，做到文明旅游。请你就此话题写一篇短文，号召全体同学文明出游。 要点： (1)在车站或机场，排队等候； (2)公共场合不大声喧哗； (3)禁止乱写乱画，带走垃圾并扔进垃圾桶 (dustbin)； (4)遵守规则，如果不允许拍照，就不要拍照； (5)如果做到这些，我相信…… 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名； (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚； (4)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) As more and more people would like to travel on holiday, we hope everyone can show good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 As more and more people would like to travel on holiday, we hope everyone can show good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us. First, we should wait in line at stations or airports. Second, we need to keep quiet in public places and never speak loudly. Third, we must not draw or write on walls or other surfaces, and always remember to take our rubbish away and throw it into the dustbin. Also, we should follow the rules—if taking photos is not allowed, we won’t take any. If we do these, I believe we will have a pleasant trip and leave a good impression on people we meet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需包含排队等候、不大声喧哗、不乱写乱画、遵守规则等要点，结尾给出积极展望，词数约80词。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接已给的开头句，号召同学文明出游； 第二步：用连接词，将要点分条清晰表达； 第三步：总结并展望，呼应文明旅游的主题。 [亮点词汇] ① wait in line排队等候 ② keep quiet保持安静 ③ leave a good impression留下好印象 [高分句型] ①  If we do these, I believe we will have a pleasant trip and leave a good impression on people we meet. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 2．（25-26九年级上·天津津南·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门，用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜， 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到，放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……（补充一点） 参考词汇：electricity电 要求： （1）词数：80—100个。 （2）短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, we need to be careful. First of all, remember to lock the door when we go out and when we are at home. Pay attention to safety when using fire and electricity. Second, we need to learn how to cook simple meals. We need to drink more water and eat fresh vegetables and fruit. We also need to get up on time and can’t be late for school. After school, we need to finish our homework first. When a stranger knocks on the door, we cannot open it. By following these tips, we can stay safe. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：用一般现在时； ③提示：阐述独自在家时的注意事项，需要遵照所给要求，要点涵盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，概括独自在家时的整体原则； 第二步，分条陈述需要注意的具体事项； 第三步，总结观点，得出结论。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to注意 ②get up起床 ③be late for迟到 [高分句型] ①First of all, remember to lock the door when we go out and when we are at home.（时间状语从句） 3．（24-25九年级上·天津北辰·期中）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结束十一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。 (1)10月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。 (2)早上7:30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。 (3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。 (4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。 (5)我的旅游感受…… 参考词汇： 京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway 王府井大街 Wangfujing Street 故宫 the Palace Museum 北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的题目已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Trip to Beijing ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Trip to Beijing On October 1st, it was sunny. My family and I started a two-day trip to Beijing. At 7:30 am, we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway. The ride took half an hour. In the morning, we visited the Palace Museum. I learned a lot about history and bought gifts for my friends. Early the next morning, we climbed the Great Wall. It’s so great that it’s one of the famous wonders of the world. In the afternoon, we went to Wangfujing Street in the city center and tried delicious Peking Roast Duck. I felt excited during this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直奔主题，结合内容提示，介绍国庆假期去北京旅游了，包括时间、天气状况、和谁一起、交通方式以及旅游时长； 第二步，详述该旅程的活动； 第三步，分享旅游感受。 [亮点词汇] ① learn a lot about... 学到很多关于…… ② buy sth. for sb. 为某人买某物 ③ climb the Great Wall 登长城 [高分句型] ① It’s so great that it’s one of the famous wonders of the world. (so...that引导的结果状语从句) 4．（25-26九年级上·天津东丽·期中）假如你在读了笔友Jack的博客文章I’m Not a Child Anymore后，想在他的评论栏分享自己的故事。请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1. 以前瘦小，现在长得和父亲一样高，并且学会了照顾他人； 2. 有一天回家发现父母不在，你为他们做好了饭；父母回来后，你才知道妈妈病了；晚上你给妈妈端来洗脚水；这是你第一次意识到自己不再是一个孩子了。 要求： 1. 不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，无明显语法错误，可适当发挥。 I have changed a lot during the past few years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: I have changed a lot during the past few years. I was short before. But now, I am as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to look after others. It was a Tuesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. When they saw the meal, they felt very happy. At night I brought hot water for my mother to wash her feet. My mother was pleased with it. It was the first time that I realised I was not a child anymore. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时态”、“一般过去时态”和“一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：呼应开头句，描述外貌变化和能力提升； 第二步：详细叙述自己的故事； 第三步：总结感悟，点明主题。 [亮点词汇] ①as tall as和……一样高 ②look after照顾 ③was pleased with对……感到高兴 ④the first time第一次 [高分句型] ①The most important thing is that I have learned to look after others. （表语从句） ②When they saw the meal, they felt very happy.（时间状语从句） 5．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）假如你是李华，你给你的好友Betty写一封邮件，讲述你作为毕业班学生的生活。 要点如下： （1）每天早早到校，上课认真听讲，按时完成作业。 （2）与同学相处融洽，有问题向老师寻求帮助。 （3）上周，父母出差不在家，订闹钟叫醒自己，确保上学不迟到。 （4）当父母回来时，虽然只为父母做了一顿简餐，但他们感到很高兴。 （5）初中最后一年，计划是…… 要求； （1）词数：80〜100个。 （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Betty, How are you? I’d like to tell you something about my life in Grade Nine. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Betty, How are you? I’d like to tell you something about my life in Grade Nine. As a student in the graduating class, I’m very busy. Every day, I arrive at school early, listen carefully in class, and finish homework on time. I get along well with my classmates, and if I have problems, I ask teachers for help. Last week, my parents were on a business trip, so I set an alarm to wake myself up and wasn’t late for school. When they came back, I cooked a simple meal for them, and they felt very happy. This is our final year in junior high. I plan to study hard for the entrance exam. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，描述自己的生活； 第三步，分享自己的计划。 [亮点词汇] ①arrive at到达 ②on time准时 [高分句型] ①I get along well with my classmates, and if I have problems, I ask teachers for help.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②When they came back, I cooked a simple meal for them, and they felt very happy.（时间状语从句） 6．（25-26九年级上·天津河北·期中）假如你是李华，你在校园网站的英文论坛上看到Kevin发帖求助，他的化学学习遇到困难，课上听不懂老师讲的新知识，现在他很害怕上化学课。请你根据Kevin的困惑，用英语给他回帖，提出你的建议。 (1) 不要害怕，要自信，找到合适的学习方法很重要。 (2) 试着找到水平相同的同学彼此鼓励，一起进步。 (3) 考虑向老师求助，课后和老师交谈，请教问题。 (4) 学习花费很长时间，要对自己有耐心，给自己时间去改变。 (5) 你希望……。 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Hi, Kevin. I understand your problem, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文： Hi, Kevin. I understand your problem, but you don’t need to worry about it too much. First, don’t be afraid and be confident. Finding a proper learning method is very important. You can try to find classmates at the same level to encourage each other and make progress together. It’s also a good idea to ask your teacher for help. You can talk to your teacher after class and ask questions. Remember, learning takes a long time, so be patient with yourself and give yourself time to change. I hope you can overcome the difficulty and enjoy chemistry class soon. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，特别注意不要遗漏需要自行补充的内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，安慰对方不要过于担心； 第二步，针对对方存在的问题，提出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语，希望对方能很快克服所遇到的困难。 [亮点词汇] ①worry about担心 ②a learning method一种学习方法 ③each other互相 [高分句型] ①First, don’t be afraid and be confident.（祈使句否定形式） ②I hope you can overcome the difficulty and enjoy chemistry class soon.（hope后接省略引导词that的宾语从句） 7．（25-26九年级上·天津河西·期中）假如你是校报编辑Emma，近日收到学生Michael的来信。在信中他提出了目前困扰他的两个难题：朋友少，感觉孤单；英语单词难记，学习英语困难。请你根据内容提示给他写一封回信，在信中描述他的难题并提出你的建议和理由： （1）参加学校社团，结识更多朋友； （2）阅读英语故事和新闻，在运用中学单词； （3）其他建议，并陈述理由。 要求： 1. 词数80-100。 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：club社团； practical实用的 Dear Michael, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Good luck with everything. Yours, Emma 【答案】 例文 Dear Michael, I understand your concerns about feeling lonely and struggling with English vocabulary. Here are some suggestions that might help. Firstly, joining school clubs is a great way to meet new people who share your interests, making it easier to form friendships. Secondly, try reading English stories and news. This not only exposes you to practical vocabulary but also helps you learn words in context, making them more memorable. Additionally, consider using flashcards or apps for vocabulary practice, as they offer interactive and fun ways to learn. I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Good luck with everything. Yours, Emma 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需针对Michael提出的两个难题给出相应建议，不能遗漏“信息提示”中的建议要点，同时适当添加理由等细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I understand your concerns about feeling lonely and struggling with English vocabulary.”直接回应Michael在信中提出的两个难题，引出下文要给出的建议内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从三个方面给出建议：一是参加学校社团，二是阅读英语故事和新闻，三是其他建议； 第三步，书写结语。用“I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Good luck with everything.”表达希望建议对Michael有用并送上祝福，与开头呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①join参加 ②share one’s interests与某人有共同兴趣 ③form friendships建立友谊 ④expose sb. to sth.使某人接触到某物 ⑤in context在语境中 [高分句型] ①Firstly, joining school clubs is a great way to meet new people who share your interests, making it easier to form friendships.（现在分词短语作结果状语） ②This not only exposes you to practical vocabulary but also helps you learn words in context, making them more memorable.（“not only…but also…”连接两个并列的谓语结构） 8．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）假如你是学校的英语校报的编辑李华，校报收到了同学Tony的来信，他提出了自己所面临的问题，请你根据以下内容给Tony回信，说明Tony的问题并给他一些建议。 1. Tony朋友少，感到很孤独。 2. 你建议他参加学校的俱乐部，结识更多朋友。 3. Tony学习英语有困难，觉得单词难记。 4. 你建议他多读英语故事、新闻，通过使用学习单词。 5. Tony身体不太好，(补充一两条建议) 6. 当遇到困难时…… 字数80-100词 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter, you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter, you said that you feel lonely because you have few friends. Why not join some school clubs? This can help you make more friends. You also find it hard to remember English words. I suggest reading English stories or news to improve your vocabulary through use. For your health, try doing sports like running or playing basketball to stay healthy. Remember, when you face difficulties, talk to your teachers or parents. They can always help you. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.          Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：针对Tony的三个问题提出建议，并补充健康及困难时的应对方式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：复述Tony的问题（朋友少、英语单词难记、身体不佳）； 第二步：针对每个问题给出具体建议（参加俱乐部、读英语材料、运动）； 第三步：补充鼓励性话语和困难时的求助方式。 [亮点词汇] ①get used to 适应 ②make friends 交朋友 ③stay healthy 保持健康 [高分句型] ①Why not join some school clubs?（Why not提建议） ②I suggest reading English stories or news to improve your vocabulary through use.（动名词作宾语的结构） ③Remember, when you face difficulties, talk to your teachers or parents.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9．（25-26九年级上·天津东丽·期中）假如你是李华，你父母上周出差，因此你独自在家一周，请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件，和他分享你上周的生活。 内容要点： (1) 这是你第一次独自在家，起初有点儿兴奋。 (2) 每天照顾自己，按时起床，吃完早餐，骑车上学。 (3) 放学到家，先写作业，然后收拾房间、照顾宠物 (pet)。 (4) 父母回家后，他们感到…… 要求： (1) 词数：80~100词。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Peter,     How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you.     Last week, my parents were on a business trip, so I stayed at home alone. It was my first time staying home alone, and I felt excited at first. Every day, I took care of myself: I got up on time, had breakfast, and rode my bike to school. After school, I finished my homework first, then tidied my room and looked after my pet cat.     When my parents came back, they were surprised and proud—they said I’d become more independent! Yours,      Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：包含了“首次独自在家的心情、日常自我照料、课后安排、父母的反馈” 等所有要点，细节自然且突出“独立成长”的核心。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明写作意图：向笔友分享自己独自在家的特别一周； 第二步，按时间线描述日常：先说明独自在家的初体验，再介绍每日作息与课后安排； 第三步，收尾补充父母的反应。 [亮点词汇] ①on a business trip出差 ②take care of照料 ③look after照顾 [高分句型] ①When my parents came back, they were surprised and proud—they said I’d become more independent! (when引导时间状语从句) 10．（25-26九年级上·天津·期中）假如你是李华，请给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你国庆节的所见所闻。 1. 你和你的父母一起去了河南旅游。 2. 你们乘坐火车，花费了大约四个小时到达； 3. 你们参观了河南博物院，了解了当地的历史和文化； 4. 第二天你们去了云台山，它是很棒的自然奇观； 5. 第三天你们去了龙门石窟，它是人造奇观，有一千多年的历史； 6. 你认为…… 参考词汇：河南博物院Henan Museum；云台山Yuntai Mountain；龙门石窟Longmen Grottoes 要求： 1. 词数：80—100个； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. On National Day, I went to… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. On National Day, I went to Henan with my parents. We took the train there, which took about four hours. First, we visited Henan Museum. There, we learned a lot about Henan’s long history and rich culture. The next day, we went to Yuntai Mountain. It’s an amazing natural wonder with green mountains. On the third day, we visited Longmen Grottoes. This man-made wonder has a history of over 1,000 years, and the stone carvings are really wonderful. I think this trip was unforgettable. It not only let me enjoy beautiful views but also helped me know more about Chinese culture. Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为 “一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇问候，点明核心意图——向David分享国庆节的旅行经历； 第二步，按时间顺序，依次说明旅行目的地、交通方式及三天的游览行程 (河南博物院、云台山、龙门石窟)； 第三步，总结旅行感受，强调旅行的双重意义 (欣赏美景、了解中国文化)； 第四步，发起互动邀请，表达对David回复的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不但……而且…… ②on the third day在第三天 [高分句型] ①We took the train there, which took about four hours. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②I think this trip was unforgettable. (宾语从句) 11．（25-26九年级上·天津西青·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom是一名中学生，他最近学习压力比较大。请你写一封邮件给他提建议，帮助他改善学习状态。要点如下： 1.学会放松，每天运动或培养一项兴趣爱好； 2.合理管理时间，保证充足睡眠； 3.制定学习计划，积极参与课堂； 4.遇到困难时寻求他人帮助。 5.你认为…… 注意：①词数：80-100词，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②短文需包括所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your study.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your study. It is common for students to have problems while learning. Here are some suggestions to help you. Firstly, try to relax by doing sports or developing a hobby every day. Besides, manage your time wisely and make sure to get enough sleep. What’s more, make a study plan and take an active part in class. If you meet difficulties, don’t hesitate to ask teachers or classmates for help. Finally, remember that a positive attitude is also important. I believe you will feel better soon! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点需涵盖所有建议内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写信目的并表达理解与安慰； 第二步，分条列举具体学习建议； 第三步，表达鼓励与祝愿。 【亮点词汇】 ①have trouble with在……方面有困难 ②manage your time wisely明智地管理时间 ③take an active part in积极参与 【高分句型】 ① It is common for students to have problems while learning.（it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语） ②If you meet difficulties, don’t hesitate to ask teachers or classmates for help.（if引导条件状语从句） 12．（25-26九年级上·天津和平·期中）处于青春期的少年，常与父母互不理解，沟通缺失，代沟渐深。身为初三学子，该如何思考与父母和睦共处之道？请根据以下提示，以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”为题，写一篇短文。 1. 学习压力大，父母不理解时，多与父母交流沟通。 2. 有不同观点，也要尊重父母，理解父母的担忧。 3. 除了努力学习，尽可能为家庭多做一些事，例如扫地，擦玻璃和收拾好个人物品。 4. 创造和父母在一起的机会，包括一起旅游。 5. 我相信…… 参考词汇：压力stress  个人物品personal items 写作要求： (1) 词数：80词左右。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents As teenagers, we often stop talking with our parents and feel misunderstood, so the generation gap (代沟) grows. How can we get on well with our parents? Here is my advice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 As teenagers, we often stop talking with our parents and feel misunderstood, so the generation gap (代沟) grows. How can we get on well with our parents? Here is my advice. First, when we are under stress and feel misunderstood, we should talk with our parents more often. Second, even if we have different opinions, we must respect them and understand their worries. Besides studying hard, we can also help with housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows and tidying our personal items. Finally, we should create chances to stay with our parents, such as travelling together. I believe that if we follow these steps, we will get on better with our parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕青少年如何与父母融洽相处展开，给出了多方面具体建议，旨在帮助缩小代沟、改善亲子关系。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明青少年常因与父母交流减少、感觉被误解而产生代沟，引出如何与父母好好相处的话题及给出建议的目的； 第二步，详细给出四条具体建议，分别是压力大或感觉被误解时多和父母交流、尊重父母不同意见并理解其担忧、除努力学习外帮忙做家务、创造与父母相处的机会； 第三步，总结表明遵循这些建议就能与父母相处得更好。 [亮点词汇] ①generation gap代沟 ②under stress处于压力之下 ③misunderstood被误解的 ④get on well with与……相处融洽 [高分句型] I believe that if we follow these steps, we will get on better with our parents. (that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 13．（25-26九年级上·天津河东·期中）请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Special Experience of Li Hua”为题，为校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。 (1) 去年暑假，李华和她的朋友去天津科学技术馆参观。 (2) 他们看见许多有趣的东西，还可以操作某些装置。 (3) 讲解员为他们讲解科学知识，让他们对科学更感兴趣。 (4) 你认为…… 参考词汇：天津科学技术馆 Tianjin Science Museum 讲解员 guide 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday, Li Hua, a classmate of mine, had a special experience. She went to the Tianjin Science Museum with her friends. There, they saw many interesting things and could even operate some devices. It was really exciting! A guide explained scientific knowledge to them, making them more interested in science. Li Hua said she learned a lot and felt science was everywhere in our lives. I think this experience not only broadened her horizons but also inspired her to explore more about science. It was truly a meaningful and unforgettable trip for her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中李华去天津科学技术馆的经历要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“李华的一次特殊经历”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“李华和她的朋友去天津科学技术馆参观、看见许多有趣的东西、操作某些装置、讲解员为他们讲解科学知识”几个方面重点介绍李华的特殊经历； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我认为这次经历对李华的意义”的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①a classmate of mine我的一个同学 ②operate some devices操作一些设备 ③explain sth to sb向某人解释某事 [高分句型] ①A guide explained scientific knowledge to them, making them more interested in science.（现在分词作结果状语） ②I think this experience not only broadened her horizons but also inspired her to explore more about science.（not only...but also...句型） 14．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）明天是学校博物馆之旅的日子。请根据以下中文提示，完成一篇不少于80词左右的英文短文。开头已给出，不计入词数。 1. 我们在博物馆二楼集合。博物馆里禁止喧哗。 2. 博物馆的规则和学校的不同。 3. 有些区域挂着“禁止进入”的牌子，别跨越绳子。 4. 不要照相，否则就是违规并给自己带来麻烦。 5. 在观察物理实验时，请集中精力听讲。 6. 你认为在博物馆里还有什么重要的注意事项，描述一项，并说明原因。 7. 大家都盼望着这次有趣的参观活动。你认为…… 要求：（1）词数不少于80词；（2）要点齐全，行文连贯。 It is going to be our school trip to the museum tomorrow. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 It is going to be our school trip to the museum tomorrow. We will gather on the second floor. Remember to keep quiet because it is a rule in the museum. The rules here are different from those at school. Some areas have “No Entry” signs, and we must not cross the ropes. Taking photos is against the rules and may cause trouble. During the physics experiments, we should focus on listening to the explanations. Additionally, I think it is important not to touch the exhibits because they are very valuable and easy to break. Everyone is looking forward to this interesting trip. I believe we will learn a lot and have a great time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给的开头，衔接明日活动； 第二步，按顺序介绍活动的内容以及注意事项，如集合点、安静要求、禁止区域、拍照限制、听讲要求； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①keep quiet保持安静 ②against the rules违规 ③focus on专注于 [高分句型] Additionally, I think it is important not to touch the exhibits because they are very valuable and easy to break.（because引导的原因状语从句） 15．（25-26九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“共和国勋章”获得者黄旭华。 (1) 黄旭华于1926年出生在广东省。 (2) 19岁那年，他考入上海交通大学造船专业学习。 (3) 从1958年起，为了工作他隐姓埋名，三十年未与父母见面。 (4) 他默默无闻地为国家研制核潜艇。 (5) 你认为…… 要求： (1) 词数：80—100。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇： 上海交通大学 Shanghai Jiao Tong University   造船专业 shipbuilding 隐姓埋名 hide one’s identity   默默无闻 without fame 核潜艇 nuclear submarine My hero The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】 例文： The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic. He was born in Guangdong in 1926. At the age of 19, he entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study shipbuilding. From 1958, he hid his identity for work and didn’t meet his parents for 30 years. He worked without fame to develop nuclear submarines for our country. I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country. His sacrifice and hard work encourage me to study harder and help others. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：讲稿 ② 时态：一般过去时（叙述经历）、一般现在时（表达观点） ③ 提示：需涵盖所有要点，适当发挥个人观点，词数80—100。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍黄旭华的基本信息（出生、学习经历）。 第二步：描述他的奉献精神（隐姓埋名、研制核潜艇）。 第三步：表达个人观点（为什么他是英雄，对自己的影响）。 [亮点词汇] ① devote奉献 ② sacrifice牺牲 ③ encourage鼓励 [高分句型] ① He worked without fame to develop nuclear submarines for our country.（运用不定式作目的状语） ② I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country.（运用because引导原因状语从句） 16．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. In class, you can take an active part in the group work about your lessons and be brave to express your ideas. Besides, you can let your classmates know about your hobbies and advantages by joining in different kinds of school club activities, sports meetings as well as singing competitions. At last, stay calm and communicate on time if there are any problems. I’m sure you will be included in their circle of your new classmates soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给笔友一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细给出自己的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take an active part in积极参加 ②know about了解 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. (宾语从句，时间状语从句) 17．（25-26九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.     For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.       I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：介绍一位我们身边的榜样，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍张健的职业，年龄，爱好，引出下文； 第二步，具体描述张健警官在假日的生活和工作，注意遵照所给提示，细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，表达自己对于张健警官的感情，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①dedicate 奉献 ②on one occasion 有一次 ③remind…of… 让某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays.（原因状语从句） ②Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman.（让步状语从句） 18．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。点明事情发生的时间。（开头已给出） 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，结合参考词汇，描述事情发生的经过。 第三步，书写结语。表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 ② come in 进来 ③ get angry 生气 ④ in the future 将来 [高分句型] ① When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry.（when引导时间状语从句） ② She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well.（that引导宾语从句） 19．（25-26九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college. I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给出； 第二步，介绍张桂梅的出生信息、职业生涯和成就； 第三步，最后表达表达出对她的敬佩。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁时 ②pass away过世 ③dedicated to致力于 [高分句型] ①After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school.（时间状语从句；定语从句） ②I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.（宾语从句） 20．（25-26九年级上·天津北辰·期中）上个月，在幸福小区发生了一件令人感动的事情。请以“What a Moving Story!”为题，写一篇英语短文，简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下： (1)快递员给老人送快递； (2)老人身体不舒服，不能下楼取快递，快递员主动送到家里； (3)收到快递后，老人请快递员帮忙移动餐桌； (4)快递员不小心打破了餐桌玻璃，拿出50元钱赔偿； (5)老人拒绝接受，并请快递员吃水果，表示感谢。 (6)你的想法…… 参考词汇：快递员courier 快递package 要求： (1)词数：80～100个； (2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 What a Moving Story! A moving story happened in Xingfu Neighbourhood last month. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 What a Moving Story! A moving story happened in Xingfu Neighbourhood last month. One day, a courier came to send a package to an old man. The old man didn’t feel well and couldn’t go downstairs, so the courier took the package to his home. After receiving it, the old man asked the courier to help move the dining table. Unluckily, the courier broke the glass by accident and offered 50 yuan for it. But the old man refused the money. Instead, he gave the courier some fruit to thank him for his kindness. I think the story shows the warmth between people. Small acts of kindness can make the world better. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，感想部分可用一般现在时 明确要点：必须覆盖送快递、上门帮忙、意外赔偿、老人感谢、个人感想6个环节 确定人称：第三人称 (叙述故事时)、第一人称 (感想时) 注意事项：80~100词，开头和题目不计入词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出故事背景 主体段：按顺序叙述事件经过，展现双方善意 结尾段：点明主旨，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：快递送达 核心表达：a courier came to send a package to an old man等 要点二：上门送件 核心表达：didn’t feel well/couldn’t go downstairs/took the package to his home等 要点三：请求帮忙 核心表达：after receiving it/asked the courier to help move the dining table等 要点四：意外赔偿 核心表达：broke the glass by accident/offered 50 yuan for it等 要点五：拒收致谢 核心表达：refused the money/gave the courier some fruit to thank him for his kindness等 要点六：感想升华 核心表达：shows the warmth between people/small acts of kindness/make the world better等 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题02 书面表达 1．（25-26九年级上·天津·期中）每年假期，越来越多的人们走出家门，外出旅游。但与此同时，我们更应该注意自己的言行举止，做到文明旅游。请你就此话题写一篇短文，号召全体同学文明出游。 要点： (1)在车站或机场，排队等候； (2)公共场合不大声喧哗； (3)禁止乱写乱画，带走垃圾并扔进垃圾桶 (dustbin)； (4)遵守规则，如果不允许拍照，就不要拍照； (5)如果做到这些，我相信…… 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名； (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚； (4)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) As more and more people would like to travel on holiday, we hope everyone can show good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26九年级上·天津津南·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门，用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜， 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到，放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……（补充一点） 参考词汇：electricity电 要求： （1）词数：80—100个。 （2）短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25九年级上·天津北辰·期中）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结束十一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。 (1)10月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。 (2)早上7:30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。 (3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。 (4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。 (5)我的旅游感受…… 参考词汇： 京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway 王府井大街 Wangfujing Street 故宫 the Palace Museum 北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck 要求： (1)词数：80～100个。 (2)短文的题目已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Trip to Beijing ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26九年级上·天津东丽·期中）假如你在读了笔友Jack的博客文章I’m Not a Child Anymore后，想在他的评论栏分享自己的故事。请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1. 以前瘦小，现在长得和父亲一样高，并且学会了照顾他人； 2. 有一天回家发现父母不在，你为他们做好了饭；父母回来后，你才知道妈妈病了；晚上你给妈妈端来洗脚水；这是你第一次意识到自己不再是一个孩子了。 要求： 1. 不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，无明显语法错误，可适当发挥。 I have changed a lot during the past few years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）假如你是李华，你给你的好友Betty写一封邮件，讲述你作为毕业班学生的生活。 要点如下： （1）每天早早到校，上课认真听讲，按时完成作业。 （2）与同学相处融洽，有问题向老师寻求帮助。 （3）上周，父母出差不在家，订闹钟叫醒自己，确保上学不迟到。 （4）当父母回来时，虽然只为父母做了一顿简餐，但他们感到很高兴。 （5）初中最后一年，计划是…… 要求； （1）词数：80〜100个。 （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Betty, How are you? I’d like to tell you something about my life in Grade Nine. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 6．（25-26九年级上·天津河北·期中）假如你是李华，你在校园网站的英文论坛上看到Kevin发帖求助，他的化学学习遇到困难，课上听不懂老师讲的新知识，现在他很害怕上化学课。请你根据Kevin的困惑，用英语给他回帖，提出你的建议。 (1) 不要害怕，要自信，找到合适的学习方法很重要。 (2) 试着找到水平相同的同学彼此鼓励，一起进步。 (3) 考虑向老师求助，课后和老师交谈，请教问题。 (4) 学习花费很长时间，要对自己有耐心，给自己时间去改变。 (5) 你希望……。 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Hi, Kevin. I understand your problem, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 7．（25-26九年级上·天津河西·期中）假如你是校报编辑Emma，近日收到学生Michael的来信。在信中他提出了目前困扰他的两个难题：朋友少，感觉孤单；英语单词难记，学习英语困难。请你根据内容提示给他写一封回信，在信中描述他的难题并提出你的建议和理由： （1）参加学校社团，结识更多朋友； （2）阅读英语故事和新闻，在运用中学单词； （3）其他建议，并陈述理由。 要求： 1. 词数80-100。 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：club社团； practical实用的 Dear Michael, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Good luck with everything. Yours, Emma 8．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）假如你是学校的英语校报的编辑李华，校报收到了同学Tony的来信，他提出了自己所面临的问题，请你根据以下内容给Tony回信，说明Tony的问题并给他一些建议。 1. Tony朋友少，感到很孤独。 2. 你建议他参加学校的俱乐部，结识更多朋友。 3. Tony学习英语有困难，觉得单词难记。 4. 你建议他多读英语故事、新闻，通过使用学习单词。 5. Tony身体不太好，(补充一两条建议) 6. 当遇到困难时…… 字数80-100词 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter, you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, Li Hua 9．（25-26九年级上·天津东丽·期中）假如你是李华，你父母上周出差，因此你独自在家一周，请给你的英国笔友Peter写封电子邮件，和他分享你上周的生活。 内容要点： (1) 这是你第一次独自在家，起初有点儿兴奋。 (2) 每天照顾自己，按时起床，吃完早餐，骑车上学。 (3) 放学到家，先写作业，然后收拾房间、照顾宠物 (pet)。 (4) 父母回家后，他们感到…… 要求： (1) 词数：80~100词。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（25-26九年级上·天津·期中）假如你是李华，请给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你国庆节的所见所闻。 1. 你和你的父母一起去了河南旅游。 2. 你们乘坐火车，花费了大约四个小时到达； 3. 你们参观了河南博物院，了解了当地的历史和文化； 4. 第二天你们去了云台山，它是很棒的自然奇观； 5. 第三天你们去了龙门石窟，它是人造奇观，有一千多年的历史； 6. 你认为…… 参考词汇：河南博物院Henan Museum；云台山Yuntai Mountain；龙门石窟Longmen Grottoes 要求： 1. 词数：80—100个； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. On National Day, I went to… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 11．（25-26九年级上·天津西青·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom是一名中学生，他最近学习压力比较大。请你写一封邮件给他提建议，帮助他改善学习状态。要点如下： 1.学会放松，每天运动或培养一项兴趣爱好； 2.合理管理时间，保证充足睡眠； 3.制定学习计划，积极参与课堂； 4.遇到困难时寻求他人帮助。 5.你认为…… 注意：①词数：80-100词，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②短文需包括所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your study.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．（25-26九年级上·天津和平·期中）处于青春期的少年，常与父母互不理解，沟通缺失，代沟渐深。身为初三学子，该如何思考与父母和睦共处之道？请根据以下提示，以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”为题，写一篇短文。 1. 学习压力大，父母不理解时，多与父母交流沟通。 2. 有不同观点，也要尊重父母，理解父母的担忧。 3. 除了努力学习，尽可能为家庭多做一些事，例如扫地，擦玻璃和收拾好个人物品。 4. 创造和父母在一起的机会，包括一起旅游。 5. 我相信…… 参考词汇：压力stress  个人物品personal items 写作要求： (1) 词数：80词左右。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents As teenagers, we often stop talking with our parents and feel misunderstood, so the generation gap (代沟) grows. How can we get on well with our parents? Here is my advice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（25-26九年级上·天津河东·期中）请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Special Experience of Li Hua”为题，为校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。 (1) 去年暑假，李华和她的朋友去天津科学技术馆参观。 (2) 他们看见许多有趣的东西，还可以操作某些装置。 (3) 讲解员为他们讲解科学知识，让他们对科学更感兴趣。 (4) 你认为…… 参考词汇：天津科学技术馆 Tianjin Science Museum 讲解员 guide 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（25-26九年级上·天津滨海新区·期中）明天是学校博物馆之旅的日子。请根据以下中文提示，完成一篇不少于80词左右的英文短文。开头已给出，不计入词数。 1. 我们在博物馆二楼集合。博物馆里禁止喧哗。 2. 博物馆的规则和学校的不同。 3. 有些区域挂着“禁止进入”的牌子，别跨越绳子。 4. 不要照相，否则就是违规并给自己带来麻烦。 5. 在观察物理实验时，请集中精力听讲。 6. 你认为在博物馆里还有什么重要的注意事项，描述一项，并说明原因。 7. 大家都盼望着这次有趣的参观活动。你认为…… 要求：（1）词数不少于80词；（2）要点齐全，行文连贯。 It is going to be our school trip to the museum tomorrow. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（25-26九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“共和国勋章”获得者黄旭华。 (1) 黄旭华于1926年出生在广东省。 (2) 19岁那年，他考入上海交通大学造船专业学习。 (3) 从1958年起，为了工作他隐姓埋名，三十年未与父母见面。 (4) 他默默无闻地为国家研制核潜艇。 (5) 你认为…… 要求： (1) 词数：80—100。 (2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇： 上海交通大学 Shanghai Jiao Tong University   造船专业 shipbuilding 隐姓埋名 hide one’s identity   默默无闻 without fame 核潜艇 nuclear submarine My hero The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 16．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 17．（25-26九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（25-26九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 20．（25-26九年级上·天津北辰·期中）上个月，在幸福小区发生了一件令人感动的事情。请以“What a Moving Story!”为题，写一篇英语短文，简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下： (1)快递员给老人送快递； (2)老人身体不舒服，不能下楼取快递，快递员主动送到家里； (3)收到快递后，老人请快递员帮忙移动餐桌； (4)快递员不小心打破了餐桌玻璃，拿出50元钱赔偿； (5)老人拒绝接受，并请快递员吃水果，表示感谢。 (6)你的想法…… 参考词汇：快递员courier 快递package 要求： (1)词数：80～100个； (2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 What a Moving Story! A moving story happened in Xingfu Neighbourhood last month. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题02 书面表达 参考答案 1． 例文 As more and more people would like to travel on holiday, we hope everyone can show good manners during the trip. Here is some advice for all of us. First, we should wait in line at stations or airports. Second, we need to keep quiet in public places and never speak loudly. Third, we must not draw or write on walls or other surfaces, and always remember to take our rubbish away and throw it into the dustbin. Also, we should follow the rules—if taking photos is not allowed, we won’t take any. If we do these, I believe we will have a pleasant trip and leave a good impression on people we meet. 2． 例文 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, we need to be careful. First of all, remember to lock the door when we go out and when we are at home. Pay attention to safety when using fire and electricity. Second, we need to learn how to cook simple meals. We need to drink more water and eat fresh vegetables and fruit. We also need to get up on time and can’t be late for school. After school, we need to finish our homework first. When a stranger knocks on the door, we cannot open it. By following these tips, we can stay safe. 3．例文： A Trip to Beijing On October 1st, it was sunny. My family and I started a two-day trip to Beijing. At 7:30 am, we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway. The ride took half an hour. In the morning, we visited the Palace Museum. I learned a lot about history and bought gifts for my friends. Early the next morning, we climbed the Great Wall. It’s so great that it’s one of the famous wonders of the world. In the afternoon, we went to Wangfujing Street in the city center and tried delicious Peking Roast Duck. I felt excited during this trip. 4．例文: I have changed a lot during the past few years. I was short before. But now, I am as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to look after others. It was a Tuesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. When they saw the meal, they felt very happy. At night I brought hot water for my mother to wash her feet. My mother was pleased with it. It was the first time that I realised I was not a child anymore. 5． 例文 Dear Betty, How are you? I’d like to tell you something about my life in Grade Nine. As a student in the graduating class, I’m very busy. Every day, I arrive at school early, listen carefully in class, and finish homework on time. I get along well with my classmates, and if I have problems, I ask teachers for help. Last week, my parents were on a business trip, so I set an alarm to wake myself up and wasn’t late for school. When they came back, I cooked a simple meal for them, and they felt very happy. This is our final year in junior high. I plan to study hard for the entrance exam. Yours, Li Hua 6．例文： Hi, Kevin. I understand your problem, but you don’t need to worry about it too much. First, don’t be afraid and be confident. Finding a proper learning method is very important. You can try to find classmates at the same level to encourage each other and make progress together. It’s also a good idea to ask your teacher for help. You can talk to your teacher after class and ask questions. Remember, learning takes a long time, so be patient with yourself and give yourself time to change. I hope you can overcome the difficulty and enjoy chemistry class soon. Li Hua 7． 例文 Dear Michael, I understand your concerns about feeling lonely and struggling with English vocabulary. Here are some suggestions that might help. Firstly, joining school clubs is a great way to meet new people who share your interests, making it easier to form friendships. Secondly, try reading English stories and news. This not only exposes you to practical vocabulary but also helps you learn words in context, making them more memorable. Additionally, consider using flashcards or apps for vocabulary practice, as they offer interactive and fun ways to learn. I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Good luck with everything. Yours, Emma 8． 例文： Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter, you said that you feel lonely because you have few friends. Why not join some school clubs? This can help you make more friends. You also find it hard to remember English words. I suggest reading English stories or news to improve your vocabulary through use. For your health, try doing sports like running or playing basketball to stay healthy. Remember, when you face difficulties, talk to your teachers or parents. They can always help you. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.          Yours, Li Hua 9． 例文： Dear Peter,     How is everything going? I’m writing to share a special week with you.     Last week, my parents were on a business trip, so I stayed at home alone. It was my first time staying home alone, and I felt excited at first. Every day, I took care of myself: I got up on time, had breakfast, and rode my bike to school. After school, I finished my homework first, then tidied my room and looked after my pet cat.     When my parents came back, they were surprised and proud—they said I’d become more independent! Yours,      Li Hua 10．例文： Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. On National Day, I went to Henan with my parents. We took the train there, which took about four hours. First, we visited Henan Museum. There, we learned a lot about Henan’s long history and rich culture. The next day, we went to Yuntai Mountain. It’s an amazing natural wonder with green mountains. On the third day, we visited Longmen Grottoes. This man-made wonder has a history of over 1,000 years, and the stone carvings are really wonderful. I think this trip was unforgettable. It not only let me enjoy beautiful views but also helped me know more about Chinese culture. Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 11．Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your study. It is common for students to have problems while learning. Here are some suggestions to help you. Firstly, try to relax by doing sports or developing a hobby every day. Besides, manage your time wisely and make sure to get enough sleep. What’s more, make a study plan and take an active part in class. If you meet difficulties, don’t hesitate to ask teachers or classmates for help. Finally, remember that a positive attitude is also important. I believe you will feel better soon! Yours, Li Hua 12． 例文 As teenagers, we often stop talking with our parents and feel misunderstood, so the generation gap (代沟) grows. How can we get on well with our parents? Here is my advice. First, when we are under stress and feel misunderstood, we should talk with our parents more often. Second, even if we have different opinions, we must respect them and understand their worries. Besides studying hard, we can also help with housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning windows and tidying our personal items. Finally, we should create chances to stay with our parents, such as travelling together. I believe that if we follow these steps, we will get on better with our parents. 13． 例文： A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday, Li Hua, a classmate of mine, had a special experience. She went to the Tianjin Science Museum with her friends. There, they saw many interesting things and could even operate some devices. It was really exciting! A guide explained scientific knowledge to them, making them more interested in science. Li Hua said she learned a lot and felt science was everywhere in our lives. I think this experience not only broadened her horizons but also inspired her to explore more about science. It was truly a meaningful and unforgettable trip for her. 14． 例文 It is going to be our school trip to the museum tomorrow. We will gather on the second floor. Remember to keep quiet because it is a rule in the museum. The rules here are different from those at school. Some areas have “No Entry” signs, and we must not cross the ropes. Taking photos is against the rules and may cause trouble. During the physics experiments, we should focus on listening to the explanations. Additionally, I think it is important not to touch the exhibits because they are very valuable and easy to break. Everyone is looking forward to this interesting trip. I believe we will learn a lot and have a great time. 15． 例文： The hero in my heart is Huang Xuhua, a winner of the Medal of the Republic. He was born in Guangdong in 1926. At the age of 19, he entered Shanghai Jiao Tong University to study shipbuilding. From 1958, he hid his identity for work and didn’t meet his parents for 30 years. He worked without fame to develop nuclear submarines for our country. I think he is a great hero because he devoted his whole life to science and our country. His sacrifice and hard work encourage me to study harder and help others. Thank you for listening! 16．例文 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. In class, you can take an active part in the group work about your lessons and be brave to express your ideas. Besides, you can let your classmates know about your hobbies and advantages by joining in different kinds of school club activities, sports meetings as well as singing competitions. At last, stay calm and communicate on time if there are any problems. I’m sure you will be included in their circle of your new classmates soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 17．例文     Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.     For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.       I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. 18．例文 Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future. 19．例文 My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college. I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives. Thank you for listening! 20．例文 What a Moving Story! A moving story happened in Xingfu Neighbourhood last month. One day, a courier came to send a package to an old man. The old man didn’t feel well and couldn’t go downstairs, so the courier took the package to his home. After receiving it, the old man asked the courier to help move the dining table. Unluckily, the courier broke the glass by accident and offered 50 yuan for it. But the old man refused the money. Instead, he gave the courier some fruit to thank him for his kindness. I think the story shows the warmth between people. Small acts of kindness can make the world better. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $