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专题02 书面表达
1.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)我校英语公众号要推出一期主题为“How I’ve Changed!”的专题推送。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你初中两年的变化及感悟。
内容提示:●How have you changed?
●What have you got from it?
提示词语:used to, encourage, advice, progress
要求:
(1)词数80—100,必须包含上面要点内容。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名,校名。
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)每年6月5日是世界环境日,假如你校英语社团计划举办英语演讲比赛,倡导同学们坚持“绿色出行”。请你根据下面要点提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。词数80左右。
Why should we go out in green ways?
healthy...
What green ways can we choose?
walk,
public transportation
...
How do the ways change us?
...
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,可适当发挥;
(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)不得使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear students,
In order to protect our earth and live a healthy life, we should choose some green ways to go out.
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3.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)进入初中三年以来,我们被不同的人影响着、改变着,请选择一位影响你或改变你的人,写一写她/他给你带来的变化。
提示:(1) What is your change? (2) Who has made you change?
(3) How did she/ he make you change? (4) What do you think of the change?
要求:(1)短文须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I have changed a lot in the past three years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(25-26九年级上·河北保定·期中)同学们都知道安全的重要性,在生活中危险无处不在,你知道如何确保自己的安全吗?请结合自己的实际生活,写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你的看法。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
提示:
(1)家庭安全(electricity, fire...)
(2)校园安全(hallway, stairs...)
(3)户外安全(traffic, swim...)
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life.
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5.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件,想知道你的英语学习情况。请给他回一封邮件,和他分享你的英语学习故事。
提示:(1)Your favorite or most commonly used English learning method;
(2)Share a successful experience or a difficulty you met in English learning.
注意:(1)邮件要包含提示中的内容,可适当拓展。
(2)不得出现真实的个人信息。
(3)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my English study with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(25-26九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中)一次同学聚会上,你见到以前的朋友Mike,他的变化很大。请根据表格内容写一篇短文描述Mike的变化。
In the past
Now
Appearance
short; straight hair
tall; curly hair
Personality
shy
outgoing
Hobby
football
singing
…
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文中必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Last week, I saw Mike at a party.
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7.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)请以“How to live a good life”为题,从以下几个方面谈谈你的看法:
1)保持身体健康
2)校内外注意安全
3)向成功人士学习
4)养成阅读的习惯
注意:1)短文需包括提示中所有的要点,可适当发挥。
2)文章不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to live a good life
As a student, it is important to live a good life. Here are my suggestions.
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Let’s try our best to live a good life.
8.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)在两年多的初中学习生活中,一定有难忘的经历使你有了成长和改变。学校英文报现在正在开展征稿活动,请你根据以下内容提示写一篇投稿作品。
内容提示:(1) How have you changed?
(2) What’s the most important experience that changed you?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上两方面的内容。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 80词左右。
Since I entered middle school, I’ve improved more in my school life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed.
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9.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假定英语课上你们正在就“自我成长”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴李华的自我成长表现记录(Growth Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个方面的自我成长表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
Growth Record
Questions
Yes
No
Did you exercise every day?
√
Did you finish your homework on time?
√
Did you get on well with your classmates?
√
Did you help your parents at home?
√
Did you behave (表现) politely in public?
√
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Well done, Li Hua! You exercised every day and
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10.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你是韩梅,远在英国的笔友Linda给你写信了!信中,Linda向你了解中国有什么著名小吃。请根据表格提示给Linda回信。
民间小吃
糖葫芦
原料
山楂(haw),有些地方的糖葫芦用草莓、葡萄、甚至小苹果等制成
历史渊源
据说,宋代(the Song Dynasty)一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病,因此流传了下来
象征
幸福和团圆(reunion)
要求:需包含所有要点,可适当发挥。词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to tanghulu.
Yours,
Han Mei
11.(25-26九年级上·河北保定·期中)假定你是校广播站的小记者,近期学校开展了交通安全宣传活动,老师让你分享交通安全知识与自己的感受。请根据以下提示写一篇英文广播稿。
What you should do:-follow traffic rules
-look both ways before crossing the street
-…
Your feelings:
-important
-…
注意:
(1)短文须包括记录中所有信息(可合理补充两处内容),可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m your reporter from the school radio station. Recently, our school held a traffic safety campaign, and I want to share some key tips with you.
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That’s all for today. Thanks for listening!
12.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)假如你是李明,你的英国笔友John对中国传统文化很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件,介绍一两个中国的传统节日,如春节(Spring Festival)、中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival)等。
要求:1.所给词不计入总词数;
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about
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Yours,
Li Ming
13.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假设你校英语报社正在举办题为“My Ways to Learn English”的征文活动,请结合你自身的学习经历,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你认为最有效的英语学习方法。
提示:
1.学习英语的重要性或你最初遇到的困难。
2.详细介绍2-3种你认为最有效的学习方法及其原因。
3.发表你的观点并鼓励同学们。
要求:
1.词数:80词左右。
2.内容连贯,结构清晰,语句通顺。
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
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14.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)假如你学校正在举行“安全骑行”主题宣传活动。请你结合下面的案例和自身实际,写一篇短文谈谈你的心得体会。案例如下:
An Accident Report
Time: 11:50 a. m. Date: September 15th, 2025
Place: On the road before the school gate
Accident: A car hit a student cyclist (骑自行车的人). The student’s right arm was badly hurt.
He had to stay in hospital for a week.
注意:(1)短文须包括案例中所有信息,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右。
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15.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina,收到Li Wei同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
要求:
1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:optimistic (乐观的);high-fat food;the more..., the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. And I have some suggestions for you.
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Yours,
Rina
16.(25-26九年级上·河北邢台·期中)请根据下列表格的提示,写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文。
内容要点:
过去
现在
1. 旧房
1. 高楼
2. 河水肮脏
2. 河水清澈
3. 步行、骑自行车上班
3. 乘公交车、小汽车上班
4. 道路狭窄
4. 环形路宽阔
5. 居住条件差
5. 居住环境舒适
注意:
(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;
(2)词数80个左右。
Changes in My Hometown
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17.(25-26九年级上·河北衡水·期中)无规矩不成方圆。规则虽然看起来会束缚我们,但是实际上它们可以帮助我们养成良好的习惯。假如你叫李华,请你以“The Rule that Influences Me Most”为题,写一篇英文短文,介绍一下对你影响最大的规则。
提示:
(1)Who made this rule?
(2)What is the rule about?
(3)How does the rule influence you?
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右。
The Rule that Influences Me Most
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18.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你是李华,最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。
Hi, Li Hua,
I am going on business to your city next month.
There will be a Tea Fair in your city. Could you please tell me something about Chinese tea?Where is it planted? How is it produced? Now it’s getting more and more popular to drink tea in Western countries. Could you tell me why people like tea so much?
Thanks for your help!
Andrew
注意:(1)文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Andrew,
It’s great to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about Chinese tea. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
19.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Eric的邮件进行回复。
TO
LiPing@ mail.com
SUBJECT
Feeling sad and asking for help
Hi Li Ping,
I feel sad because of my grades. I need your help. I also want to know about traditional Chinese things. Could you give me some advice? Thanks very much.
Yours,
Eric
注意:1.短文须包括要点,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数80左右。
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20.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)假如你叫李华,你校英文网Change专栏正面向学生征稿,题目为How I Have Changed!请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文描述你的变化,然后向该专栏投稿。
注意:(1)短文须包括所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How I Have Changed!
I have changed a lot in the last few years.
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21.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)我们每个人生活中都会遇到一些我们喜欢的书,请以 My Favourite Book 为题写一篇文章:
提示:
1. Say something about your favourite part in the book.
2. What do you learn from it?
要求:
1. 包含提示所有内容,可适当发挥。
2. 不得出现真实人名、校名等。
3. 字数在80词左右。
My Favourite Book
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22.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)最近,我们对某中学1,000名学生进行了一次问卷调查,了解他们对未来梦想职业的选择情况。请你根据以下图示内容及写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1. 描述图示调查结果;
2. 阐述你的梦想职业及原因;
3. 简述你将如何去实现梦想。
注意:(1)文中须包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:30%:30 percent of…
Recently, a survey of 1,000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
23.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举办主题为“Good Habits for a Healthy Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
提示要点:1.健康饮食的益处及建议 2.体育锻炼的益处及建议 3.良好作息的益处及建议。
要求:(1)所写内容包含所有要点,且适当发挥;
(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
Good Habits for a Healthy Life
It’s very important for us to develop good habits to keep healthy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
24.(25-26九年级上·河北张家口·期中)AI已经被我们广泛地使用,同时也引起了大家对AI的深度思考。现在学校正在组织主题为“AI in our life”的征文活动,请你根据下面的提示,结合自己的体验,写一篇英语短文来分享你的看法。
提示:
1) What changes does AI bring to us?
2) What challenges does AI bring to us?
3) What should we do to make good use of AI as middle school students?
要求:
1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2)文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
3)词数80个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
AI in our life
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our life.
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25.(25-26九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中)王梅的外国朋友Tom发来邮件向王梅寻求帮助,下面是Tom给王梅发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复。
My Chinese is very poor. Learning Chinese is too difficult for me. Can you tell me how to memorize words? How can I improve my pronunciation and writing? Please give me some advice.
1. 回复邮件回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。
2. 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese.
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I hope these can help you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
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专题02 书面表达
参考答案
1.例文
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years.
I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing.
The most important change in my school life is that I have made much progress in English learning. I used to be poor at English. But my English teacher encouraged me and gave me useful advice. With her help, now I am good at English, and I often get good grades on my English exams, too.
I have changed so much. I believe I can become better and better.
2.范文:
Dear students,
In order to protect our earth and live a healthy life, we should choose some green ways to go out.
Firstly, if the place where we go is not far, don’t drive a car but walk there. It can make us healthy and relaxed. Secondly, use public transportation as much as possible, which can help cut down air pollution. What’s more, riding a bike is a good way. Shared bikes are very common in our city and we can save a lot of money.
Every student should take an active part in protecting the environment. Let’s take action now! Our world will become more and more beautiful.
3.范文:
I have changed a lot in the past three years.
I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public. However, my English teacher, Ms. Li, helped me change. She encouraged me to answer questions in class and encouraged me to take part in English activities. With her help, I became outgoing and confident. Now I enjoy talking with others. I think this change is wonderful because it helps me make more friends and study better.
I will never forget her help and keep her words in my heart forever.
4.
范文
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life. So we must learn to keep safe.
At home, we should be careful with electricity and fire. We mustn’t play with matches or touch electrical appliances with wet hands. At school, don’t run in the hallway or on the stairs. We should walk slowly and carefully to avoid falling. When we go outside, we must follow traffic rules. Don’t swim alone in the river or lake. Always stay with adults.
Safety is very important. Let’s learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
5.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my English study with you. I find that listening to English songs is the most enjoyable way for me to learn. It helps me improve my pronunciation and learn new words naturally.
The most unforgettable experience for me was winning the first prize in an English speech contest last year. It was a big challenge, but it made me more confident. I hope that I can have a chance to visit your country one day so that I can practice my spoken English with native speakers.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.例文
Last week, I saw Mike at the party. He has changed a lot.
Mike used to be short. He used to have straight hair. Now he is a tall boy and has curly hair. He used to be shy. He had few friends. Now he is more outgoing than before. He has made many friends. He used to like playing football, but now he enjoys singing and reading books. He used to be late for school. He didn’t like English. Luckily, his English teacher is very patient. With the teacher’s help, he is better at English now.
7.例文
As a student, it is important to live a good life. Here are my suggestions.
First, we should keep healthy by exercising regularly, getting enough sleep, and eating a balanced diet every day. Second, always pay attention to safety both inside and outside school, such as following traffic rules and avoiding dangerous places. Third, it’s wise to learn from successful people, as their experiences which are like a treasure for our personal growth and good examples can guide us toward our goals. Finally, develop a reading habit to enrich our minds, gain new knowledge, and broaden our horizons.
Let’s try our best to live a good life.
8.One possible version:
Since I entered middle school, I’ve improved more in my school life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed. I used to be very shy and afraid to speak in public. But now, I’ve become more outgoing and confident.
The most important experience that changed me was joining the school English speech contest last year. At first, I was nervous and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me a lot. I practiced every day after school. Finally, I won the third prize.
This experience made me realize that I can do well if I try my best. I’m really glad to have such a wonderful change.
9.One possible version:
Well done, Li Hua! You exercised every day and got on well with your classmates. That shows you’ve made great progress in self-improvement. What’s more, you behaved politely in public, showing good manners.
But you still have two parts to improve. You didn’t finish your homework on time or help your parents with housework at home.
I advise you to plan your daily time well to catch the homework deadline, and try doing small housework like folding clothes on weekends to share your parents’ work.
10.例文
Dear Linda,
You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country.
As you know, China has many special snacks, and tanghulu is one of the most well-known ones. It is mainly made of haws on a stick with candy coating. Today people also make it with strawberries, grapes or small apples. Tanghulu has a long history. It’s said that in the Song Dynasty, an emperor’s wife recovered from illness after eating tanghulu, so this snack has been passed down to today. Tasty and healthy, it stands for happiness and reunion, loved by people across the country.
Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to tanghulu.
Yours,
Han Mei
11.
例文
Hello, everyone! I’m your reporter from the school radio station. Recently, our school held a traffic safety campaign, and I want to share some key tips with you.
First, we should always follow traffic rules carefully. When crossing the street, remember to look both ways to ensure safety. Also, never play on the road or ride bikes too fast. If we drive, we must never run red lights. Traffic safety is very important for everyone. It not only keeps us safe but also protects our precious lives. We must take it seriously. Let’s take action together to build a safer environment for all.
That’s all for today. Thanks for listening!
12.
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese traditional festivals.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. All family members get together to have a big dinner and eat delicious dumplings. We also set off fireworks\. Kids always get lucky money from elders. Another popular festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. On that night, families admire the bright full moon and taste mooncakes. The mooncakes stand for family reunion. These wonderful festivals carry our special culture and warm love for family.
I hope you can come to China and experience them someday.
Yours,
Li Ming
13.
例文
English is widely used around the whole modern world for international communication. At first, I was weak in daily spoken English. Now I have some good practical ways.
Firstly, watching English movies helps me understand foreign culture and daily local lifestyles. Secondly, reading books makes me learn new useful words quickly. Finally, talking patiently with friendly teachers builds my confidence.
I think practice makes perfect. I hope everyone can find suitable learning ways and enjoy learning. Let’s work hard to master English together!
14.范文:
On September 15th, 2025, a car hit a student cyclist at 11:50 a.m. on the road before the school gate. The boy’s right arm was badly hurt, and he had to stay in hospital for a week. I learn safety comes first.
I always do something to prevent myself from such accidents. First, I always wear a helmet and follow traffic rules while riding. Second, I never use my phone or listen to music while riding. Small habits make a big difference.
Let’s be always careful and enjoy safe riding every day!
15.
例文:
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. And I have some suggestions for you.
First of all, you should be confident and optimistic. Don't care about what others think of you. Believe in yourself and smile every day. Secondly, it's important to have a healthy diet. You'd better refuse high-fat food. Instead, you should eat more vegetables and fruit. Thirdly, taking proper exercise is necessary. You can do sports often, such as running and swimming. The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
16.
Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there were old houses and the river was dirty. People went to work on foot or by bike. The roads were narrow and living conditions were poor.
Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The river is clear. People take buses or cars to work. The ring roads are wide. We live in a comfortable environment.
I love my hometown because it is becoming better and better. I hope it will be more beautiful in the future.
17.例文:
The Rule that Influences Me Most
The rule that influences me most is made by my parents—I should read at least one book each week.
I used to be a boy who was only interested in playing games. In order to protect my eyes, my parents made this rule for me. At first, I was asked to make a list of the books that I wanted to read. Gradually, I started to stay away from games and fell in love with reading.
Thanks to the rule, I have read many books and learned much knowledge.
18.例文
Dear Andrew,
It’s great to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about Chinese tea.
Chinese tea has thousands of years of history. It’s mostly planted on hills in southern parts of China. Workers pick tender tea leaves by hand and send them to factories to finish all producing steps. It becomes popular in Western countries mainly because drinking tea is healthy and it can make people feel relaxed after long busy days.
I’m excited about the coming Tea Fair and I can wait to meet you there to share more tea culture with you next month.
Li Hua
19.
例文:
Hi Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel sad about your grades. Don’t worry too much. Here is some advice for you. First, you should listen carefully in class and take notes. Second, doing more exercise helps you relax.
As for traditional Chinese things, I like paper cutting best. It stands for good luck and beauty. You can try making some simple ones by yourself in your free time. It is really fun and meaningful.
I hope you will feel better soon. Write to me again if you have more problems.
Yours,
Li Ping
20.例文
How I Have Changed!
I have changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to be short and weak, but now I’m tall and strong. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I dare to make a speech in public. In the past, I didn’t like sports and stayed up late. My hobbies were just playing games. I found some subjects difficult. But now, I go to bed early and exercise every day. I’ve started reading books and playing basketball. I study harder and enjoy solving problems.
These changes make me happy and healthy. I’ll keep trying to be better!
21.例文:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is The Little Prince. The part I like best is when the fox tells the little prince, “It is only with the heart that one can see rightly.” This sentence touches me deeply. From the book, I learn that love and friendship are the most important things in life. We should care for others and be responsible. The book also teaches me to keep a childlike heart. I will never forget this wonderful story.
22.例文
Recently, a survey of 1,000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school. According to the results, 45% of them want to become doctors, while 30% wish to be teachers. 15% plan to work in offices, and the remaining 10% choose other jobs.
As for me, I want to be a doctor. It’s the doctors’ duty to treat people who are ill and save their lives. What’s more, doctors are highly respected. At present, I’ll try my best to study well and help others when necessary. I’m sure I’ll achieve my dream as long as I keep on working hard.
23.例文:
Good Habits for a Healthy Life
It’s very important for us to develop good habits to keep healthy. To live a healthy life, we need to develop good habits.
First, eating healthily is necessary. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, doing exercise regularly helps us stay strong. For example, we can run or play basketball for half an hour every day. Third, having enough sleep is also important. Going to bed early and getting up early makes us energetic.
In my opinion, we should stick to these good habits. Let’s take action now for a healthier future!
24.
例文:
AI in our life As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our life. AI brings us many changes. It makes learning more fun, and even tells us interesting stories.
However, AI also brings challenges. Some students may rely too much on AI and stop thinking by themselves. Also, not all information from AI is true. As middle school students, we should use AI wisely. We can ask AI for help, but we must still think independently. Besides, it’s important to check the information from AI.
In short, AI is helpful if we use it wisely.
25.
例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese. For memorizing words, I suggest using flashcards and learning them with example sentences. Try to review the words every day.
To improve pronunciation, listening to Chinese songs or watching cartoons is helpful. Just try to repeat after the speakers. For writing, keeping a short diary in Chinese every day is a good idea. Start with simple sentences.
Remember, don’t give up. Practice a little every day and you will get better!
I hope these can help you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
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专题02 书面表达
1.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)我校英语公众号要推出一期主题为“How I’ve Changed!”的专题推送。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你初中两年的变化及感悟。
内容提示:●How have you changed?
●What have you got from it?
提示词语:used to, encourage, advice, progress
要求:
(1)词数80—100,必须包含上面要点内容。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名,校名。
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the past two years.
I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing.
The most important change in my school life is that I have made much progress in English learning. I used to be poor at English. But my English teacher encouraged me and gave me useful advice. With her help, now I am good at English, and I often get good grades on my English exams, too.
I have changed so much. I believe I can become better and better.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文
明确要点:自身两年的变化、从中获得的感悟
确定人称:第一人称 (I)
注意事项:需包含全部提示词used to, encourage, advice, progress,开头已给出,词数80-100,不能出现真实人名、校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,感叹时光,引出自身变化
主体段:分两部分介绍外貌性格变化、学习上的变化
结尾段:总结变化,表达感悟
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自身变化
外貌性格描述:I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class/I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing等
学习变化:I used to be poor at English/I have made much progress in English learning等
他人帮助:But my English teacher encouraged me and gave me useful advice/My teacher’s encouragement and advice helped me a lot等
要点二:收获感悟
现状成果:With her help, now I am good at English, and I often get good grades on my English exams, too/I become confident in English now等
感悟表达:I believe I can become better and better/As long as I keep trying, I will make more progress等
要点三:收尾总结
总结表达:I have changed so much/Great changes have taken place in me等
2.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)每年6月5日是世界环境日,假如你校英语社团计划举办英语演讲比赛,倡导同学们坚持“绿色出行”。请你根据下面要点提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。词数80左右。
Why should we go out in green ways?
healthy...
What green ways can we choose?
walk,
public transportation
...
How do the ways change us?
...
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,可适当发挥;
(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)不得使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear students,
In order to protect our earth and live a healthy life, we should choose some green ways to go out.
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【答案】范文:
Dear students,
In order to protect our earth and live a healthy life, we should choose some green ways to go out.
Firstly, if the place where we go is not far, don’t drive a car but walk there. It can make us healthy and relaxed. Secondly, use public transportation as much as possible, which can help cut down air pollution. What’s more, riding a bike is a good way. Shared bikes are very common in our city and we can save a lot of money.
Every student should take an active part in protecting the environment. Let’s take action now! Our world will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,主要使用一般现在时,号召倡议用祈使句
明确要点:绿色出行的原因、具体的绿色出行方式、带来的积极改变与益处、发出行动倡议
确定人称:第一人称复数(we/our/us)为主
注意事项:开头已给出,不计入总词数;词数80词左右;不得出现真实姓名和校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,点明演讲主题,引出绿色出行的理念及原因
主体段:分层次阐述具体的绿色出行方式及其在身心健康、经济花销与环境保护方面带来的改变
结尾段:发出倡议,号召同学们积极参与环保,展望更加美好的世界
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:绿色出行的原因
出行原因:protect our earth/live a healthy life/make us healthy and relaxed/keep fit/build a better environment等
要点二:具体的绿色出行方式
出行选择:walk there/use public transportation as much as possible/riding a bike/shared bikes/take the bus or subway/walk to school等
要点三:带来的改变与号召
积极改变:cut down air pollution/save a lot of money/reduce traffic jams/save energy/live a low-carbon life等
呼吁行动:take an active part in protecting the environment/Let’s take action now/Our world will become more and more beautiful/make a difference to our earth等
3.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)进入初中三年以来,我们被不同的人影响着、改变着,请选择一位影响你或改变你的人,写一写她/他给你带来的变化。
提示:(1) What is your change? (2) Who has made you change?
(3) How did she/ he make you change? (4) What do you think of the change?
要求:(1)短文须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I have changed a lot in the past three years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
I have changed a lot in the past three years.
I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public. However, my English teacher, Ms. Li, helped me change. She encouraged me to answer questions in class and encouraged me to take part in English activities. With her help, I became outgoing and confident. Now I enjoy talking with others. I think this change is wonderful because it helps me make more friends and study better.
I will never forget her help and keep her words in my heart forever.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,一般现在时和一般过去时相结合
明确要点:你的变化是什么;谁让你改变;她/他怎么让你改变;你对这种改变的看法
确定人称:第一人称为主(I/me)
注意事项:紧扣主题,包括所有提示信息,文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开篇直接点明,初中三年以来自己发生了很大变化
主体段:介绍影响或改变自己的人,依次交代改变自己的人、自己的变化、对方帮助自己的方式,以及自己对改变的看法
结尾段:表达内心的感激之情,会一直铭记她对自己的帮助
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍影响或改变自己的人
介绍人物:my English teacher, Ms. Li/my head teacher/my deskmate/my mum等
要点二:写自己前后的变化
改变前:used to be shy/afraid of speaking in public/used to be nervous when talking with strangers/didn’t dare to share my ideas等
改变后:became outgoing and confident/ enjoy talking with others/brave enough to give speeches等
要点三:帮助自己的方式
帮助方式:encouraged me to answer questions in class/encouraged me to take part in English activities/praised me for my small progress等
要点四:谈谈自己对这次改变的看法
个人看法:this change is wonderful/helps me make more friends and study better/makes me grow a lot/it is a valuable experience in my life等
4.(25-26九年级上·河北保定·期中)同学们都知道安全的重要性,在生活中危险无处不在,你知道如何确保自己的安全吗?请结合自己的实际生活,写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你的看法。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
提示:
(1)家庭安全(electricity, fire...)
(2)校园安全(hallway, stairs...)
(3)户外安全(traffic, swim...)
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
范文
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life. So we must learn to keep safe.
At home, we should be careful with electricity and fire. We mustn’t play with matches or touch electrical appliances with wet hands. At school, don’t run in the hallway or on the stairs. We should walk slowly and carefully to avoid falling. When we go outside, we must follow traffic rules. Don’t swim alone in the river or lake. Always stay with adults.
Safety is very important. Let’s learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文(谈论如何确保安全)
时态:一般现在时(提出建议和描述事实)
明确要点:
①家庭安全(用电、防火);
②校园安全(走廊、楼梯);
③户外安全(交通、游泳)。
确定人称:以第一人称“We”叙述。
注意事项:词数约80词,不出现真实信息,条理清晰,行文连贯。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段(已给出):引出话题——生活中危险无处不在。
主体段:分三个方面提出安全建议——①家庭安全;②校园安全;③户外安全。
结尾段:总结安全的重要性,呼吁学会保护自己。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一(家庭安全):
be careful with electricity and fire/don’t play with matches/don’t touch electrical appliances with wet hands/never leave the stove on/turn off lights before leaving home/keep children away from hot water等
要点二(校园安全):
don‘t run in the hallway or on the stairs/walk slowly and carefully/don’t push others on the stairs/keep to the right when walking/avoid playing near windows等
要点三(户外安全):
follow traffic rules/don’t swim alone/stay with adults/look both ways before crossing the road/wear a helmet when riding a bike/never go swimming without an adult等
5.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件,想知道你的英语学习情况。请给他回一封邮件,和他分享你的英语学习故事。
提示:(1)Your favorite or most commonly used English learning method;
(2)Share a successful experience or a difficulty you met in English learning.
注意:(1)邮件要包含提示中的内容,可适当拓展。
(2)不得出现真实的个人信息。
(3)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my English study with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share my English study with you. I find that listening to English songs is the most enjoyable way for me to learn. It helps me improve my pronunciation and learn new words naturally.
The most unforgettable experience for me was winning the first prize in an English speech contest last year. It was a big challenge, but it made me more confident. I hope that I can have a chance to visit your country one day so that I can practice my spoken English with native speakers.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
明确要点:写信分享自己的英语学习方法;说明听英文歌的学习优势;讲述去年英语演讲比赛夺冠的难忘经历与收获;希望有机会去对方国家和本地人练习口语;期待回信
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:书信格式规范,叙事 + 观点结合,语句简洁贴合初中水平,无真实校名地名,词数符合要求
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明写信目的,介绍自己最喜欢的英语学习方式及作用
主体段:回忆英语演讲比赛获奖经历,说明这次经历带来的改变;表达出国练习口语的心愿
结尾段:书信常规结束语,期待对方回信
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开篇分享英语学习
开篇:share my English study/listening to English songs/improve my pronunciation/learn new words naturally/take notes/watch English movies
要点二:难忘学习经历
经历:winning the first prize in an English speech contest/a big challenge/made me more confident/communicate with a foreign friend in English/became interested
要点三:心愿
愿望:visit your country/practice my spoken English with native speakers/take a trip/make new friends
要点四:邮件结尾
期望:looking forward to your reply/write to me soon/hope you can come
6.(25-26九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中)一次同学聚会上,你见到以前的朋友Mike,他的变化很大。请根据表格内容写一篇短文描述Mike的变化。
In the past
Now
Appearance
short; straight hair
tall; curly hair
Personality
shy
outgoing
Hobby
football
singing
…
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文中必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Last week, I saw Mike at a party.
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【答案】例文
Last week, I saw Mike at the party. He has changed a lot.
Mike used to be short. He used to have straight hair. Now he is a tall boy and has curly hair. He used to be shy. He had few friends. Now he is more outgoing than before. He has made many friends. He used to like playing football, but now he enjoys singing and reading books. He used to be late for school. He didn’t like English. Luckily, his English teacher is very patient. With the teacher’s help, he is better at English now.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,一般现在时和一般过去时
明确要点:围绕Mike的外形、性格、爱好和学习变化这四个要点展开。
确定人称:第三人称
注意事项:词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数,不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称:
[第二步:构思布局]
两段式结构:
开头段:开头交代聚会碰到Mike,发现对方变化很大,为下文详细描述变化作出铺垫;
主体段:从外形、性格和爱好等方面对比Mike的变化。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:外形变化
过去:Mike used to be short. He used to have straight hair./ Mike, who used to be short, had straight hair in the past./ In the past, Mike was short with straight hair.等
现在:Now he is a tall boy and has curly hair./ Now he is a tall boy with curly hair./ Compared with before, he grows tall and his hair turns curly.等
要点二:性格变化
过去:He used to be shy. He had few friends./He used to be so shy that he had few friends./In the past, he was shy and hardly made any friends.等
现在:Now he is more outgoing than before. He has made many friends./Now he is more outgoing than before and has made lots of friends./ At present, he is much more outgoing than in the past and has gained a great many friends.等
要点三:爱好变化
过去和现在对比: He used to like playing football, but now he enjoys singing and reading books./ Unlike before when he loved playing football, he now prefers singing and reading./ Once a football fan, he now enjoys singing and reading.等
要点四:学习变化
过去:He used to be late for school. He didn’t like English. / In the past, he was often late for school and hated English./He not only used to arrive late for school, but also had no interest in English.等
现在:With the teacher’s help, he is better at English now./ Thanks to the teacher's help, he has made greater progress in English./ Because the teacher helped him, he is better at English now.等
7.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)请以“How to live a good life”为题,从以下几个方面谈谈你的看法:
1)保持身体健康
2)校内外注意安全
3)向成功人士学习
4)养成阅读的习惯
注意:1)短文需包括提示中所有的要点,可适当发挥。
2)文章不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to live a good life
As a student, it is important to live a good life. Here are my suggestions.
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Let’s try our best to live a good life.
【答案】例文
As a student, it is important to live a good life. Here are my suggestions.
First, we should keep healthy by exercising regularly, getting enough sleep, and eating a balanced diet every day. Second, always pay attention to safety both inside and outside school, such as following traffic rules and avoiding dangerous places. Third, it’s wise to learn from successful people, as their experiences which are like a treasure for our personal growth and good examples can guide us toward our goals. Finally, develop a reading habit to enrich our minds, gain new knowledge, and broaden our horizons.
Let’s try our best to live a good life.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体: 议论文,主体时态为一般现在时。
明确要点: 提出保持健康的建议;强调注意安全的重要性;建议向成功人士学习;提倡养成阅读习惯。
确定人称: 第一人称复数(We)或第二人称(You/Imperative mood)。
注意事项: 逻辑连接词的使用(First, Second, Third, Finally),控制词数,不得透露真实信息。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:
引入话题,说明作为学生过美好生活的重要性,引出下文建议。
主体段: 分层次阐述四点具体建议(健康、安全、榜样、阅读)。
结尾段: 总结全文,发出号召,呼应主题。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:保持身体健康
核心表达:
keep healthy/exercise regularly/build up one’s body/get enough sleep/eat a balanced diet/ensure a good night’s sleep等。
要点二:注意人身安全
核心表达:
pay attention to safety /raise safety awareness/ follow traffic rules /cross the road carefully/ avoid dangerous places/keep off risky spots/ inside and outside school/both on and off campus等。
要点三:向榜样学习
核心表达:
learn from successful people/take inspiration from outstanding individuals/ good examples/positive role models/ guide us toward our goals/experiences 等。
要点四:培养阅读习惯
核心表达:
develop a reading habit/cultivate a passion for reading/enrich our minds/gain new knowledge/broaden our horizons/open up new worlds for us等。
8.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)在两年多的初中学习生活中,一定有难忘的经历使你有了成长和改变。学校英文报现在正在开展征稿活动,请你根据以下内容提示写一篇投稿作品。
内容提示:(1) How have you changed?
(2) What’s the most important experience that changed you?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上两方面的内容。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 80词左右。
Since I entered middle school, I’ve improved more in my school life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed.
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【答案】One possible version:
Since I entered middle school, I’ve improved more in my school life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed. I used to be very shy and afraid to speak in public. But now, I’ve become more outgoing and confident.
The most important experience that changed me was joining the school English speech contest last year. At first, I was nervous and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me a lot. I practiced every day after school. Finally, I won the third prize.
This experience made me realize that I can do well if I try my best. I’m really glad to have such a wonderful change.
【详解】[第一步 审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,时态以一般过去时(叙述改变经历)、一般现在时(陈述当前改变)为主;
明确要点:① 介绍自身的成长改变 ② 讲述改变自己的最重要的经历;
确定人称:第一人称;
注意事项:不得出现真实人名、校名,词数要求80词左右。
[第二步 构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:承接题干给出的开篇,引出分享自身改变的主题;
主体段:先点明自己的前后变化,再具体叙述那段改变自己的核心经历;
结尾段:总结经历带来的感悟,收尾点题。
[第三步 要点展开]
要点一:介绍自身改变
I used to be very shy and afraid to speak in public. But now, I’ve become more outgoing and confident/I used to hide myself and dare not express my ideas in front of others/I am willing to show myself and take part in more activities now等
要点二:叙述改变自己的核心经历
The most important experience that changed me was joining the school English speech contest last year. At first, I was nervous and wanted to give up. But my teacher encouraged me a lot. I practiced every day after school. Finally, I won the third prize./The unforgettable experience that pushed me to grow was/I practiced my pronunciation again and again after class. / My teacher’s encouragement gave me the courage to keep going等
要点三:经历带来的成长感悟
This experience made me realize that I can do well if I try my best. I’m really glad to have such a wonderful change/I’ve learned that nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it./This experience helped me become a better version of myself等
9.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假定英语课上你们正在就“自我成长”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴李华的自我成长表现记录(Growth Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个方面的自我成长表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
Growth Record
Questions
Yes
No
Did you exercise every day?
√
Did you finish your homework on time?
√
Did you get on well with your classmates?
√
Did you help your parents at home?
√
Did you behave (表现) politely in public?
√
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Well done, Li Hua! You exercised every day and
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【答案】One possible version:
Well done, Li Hua! You exercised every day and got on well with your classmates. That shows you’ve made great progress in self-improvement. What’s more, you behaved politely in public, showing good manners.
But you still have two parts to improve. You didn’t finish your homework on time or help your parents with housework at home.
I advise you to plan your daily time well to catch the homework deadline, and try doing small housework like folding clothes on weekends to share your parents’ work.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:总结五个方面的成长表现(锻炼、作业、同学关系、家务、礼貌)并评价;针对两个不足方面(需改进的方面)提出建议
确定人称:第二人称(You/your)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名;词数80左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:肯定优点,总结积极表现
主体段:指出不足,具体说明未做到的方面
结尾段:提出建议,鼓励改进
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:总结优点
表现描述:exercised every day/got on well with classmates/behaved politely in public/It is great that you keep fit by exercising daily等
正面评价:shows good health habits/friendly and polite/has good manners/leaves a good impression on others等
要点二:指出不足与建议
不足之处:didn’t finish homework on time/didn’t help parents at home
改进建议:make a study plan to manage time better/share housework to show love to family/make a timetable to finish your homework on time等
鼓励话语:Hope you can make progress/Keep trying等
10.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你是韩梅,远在英国的笔友Linda给你写信了!信中,Linda向你了解中国有什么著名小吃。请根据表格提示给Linda回信。
民间小吃
糖葫芦
原料
山楂(haw),有些地方的糖葫芦用草莓、葡萄、甚至小苹果等制成
历史渊源
据说,宋代(the Song Dynasty)一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病,因此流传了下来
象征
幸福和团圆(reunion)
要求:需包含所有要点,可适当发挥。词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to tanghulu.
Yours,
Han Mei
【答案】例文
Dear Linda,
You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country.
As you know, China has many special snacks, and tanghulu is one of the most well-known ones. It is mainly made of haws on a stick with candy coating. Today people also make it with strawberries, grapes or small apples. Tanghulu has a long history. It’s said that in the Song Dynasty, an emperor’s wife recovered from illness after eating tanghulu, so this snack has been passed down to today. Tasty and healthy, it stands for happiness and reunion, loved by people across the country.
Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to tanghulu.
Yours,
Han Mei
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信),以一般现在时为主,穿插一般过去时(历史渊源)
明确要点:点明民间小吃“糖葫芦”;从三个方面介绍糖葫芦:原料、历史渊源和象征意义
确定人称:第三人称为主
注意事项:需包含所有要点;词数80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:给定开头,引入主题
主体段:点明民间小吃“糖葫芦”;从三个方面介绍糖葫芦:原料、历史渊源和象征意义(表格要点提示)
结尾段: 给定结尾,邀请品尝
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明民间小吃“糖葫芦”
Tanghulu/a well-known folk snack/a famous traditional folk snack of China/a classic street food loved by all ages等
要点二:介绍糖葫芦
原料:mainly made of haws/with candy coating/be covered with crispy sugar shell/coated with melted sugar/on a thin stick/strawberries/grapes/mini apples/oranges等
历史渊源:It’s said that/A story goes that/in the Song Dynasty/date back to the Song Dynasty/an emperor’s wife recovered from illness after eating tanghulu/cure an emperor’s wife’s illness/this snack has been passed down to today/get passed down from generation to generation等
象征意义:stand for happiness and family reunion/carry the meaning of warm reunion and good luck/a symbol of good luck and togetherness等
11.(25-26九年级上·河北保定·期中)假定你是校广播站的小记者,近期学校开展了交通安全宣传活动,老师让你分享交通安全知识与自己的感受。请根据以下提示写一篇英文广播稿。
What you should do:-follow traffic rules
-look both ways before crossing the street
-…
Your feelings:
-important
-…
注意:
(1)短文须包括记录中所有信息(可合理补充两处内容),可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m your reporter from the school radio station. Recently, our school held a traffic safety campaign, and I want to share some key tips with you.
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That’s all for today. Thanks for listening!
【答案】
例文
Hello, everyone! I’m your reporter from the school radio station. Recently, our school held a traffic safety campaign, and I want to share some key tips with you.
First, we should always follow traffic rules carefully. When crossing the street, remember to look both ways to ensure safety. Also, never play on the road or ride bikes too fast. If we drive, we must never run red lights. Traffic safety is very important for everyone. It not only keeps us safe but also protects our precious lives. We must take it seriously. Let’s take action together to build a safer environment for all.
That’s all for today. Thanks for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:校园广播发言稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:学校开展交通安全活动,分享交通安全出行要点,倡导重视交通安全、共建安全环境
确定人称:第一人称(I/we/our)、第二人称(you/your)
注意事项:语言简洁口语化,贴合校园广播场景,逻辑清晰、积极正向,开头已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:自我介绍,引出校园交通安全主题活动,点明分享核心内容
主体段:详细列举各类交通安全出行规则,阐述交通安全的重要意义
结尾段:发出倡议,呼吁大家共同行动,总结收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:遵守交通规则
出行规范:follow traffic rules/look both ways/stay away from moving cars/avoid using mobile phones/obey road regulations/watch out for vehicles/put down electronic devices/keep away from roads等
禁止行为:play on the road/ride bikes too fast/run red lights/speed up while riding/jaywalk/break traffic laws等
要点二:交通安全意义与倡议
价值作用:keep safe/protect precious lives/take it seriously/ensure personal safety/guard life health/attach importance to safety等
行动倡议:take action/build a safer environment/work together/create safe traffic surroundings/maintain road safety等
12.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)假如你是李明,你的英国笔友John对中国传统文化很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件,介绍一两个中国的传统节日,如春节(Spring Festival)、中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival)等。
要求:1.所给词不计入总词数;
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese traditional festivals.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. All family members get together to have a big dinner and eat delicious dumplings. We also set off fireworks\. Kids always get lucky money from elders. Another popular festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. On that night, families admire the bright full moon and taste mooncakes. The mooncakes stand for family reunion. These wonderful festivals carry our special culture and warm love for family.
I hope you can come to China and experience them someday.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件说明文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:向笔友介绍中国传统节日;介绍春节地位、团圆聚餐、吃饺子、放烟花、收压岁钱;介绍中秋赏月、吃月饼,寓意团圆;节日承载传统文化;邀请对方来华体验
确定人称:第一人称I/we
注意事项:介绍春节、中秋两大传统节日,词数符合要求,无真实个人信息,邮件格式完整
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开篇告知将要介绍中国传统节日
主体段:分别详细介绍春节习俗与中秋习俗,点明节日背后的文化内涵
结尾段:发出邀请,欢迎对方来中国感受节日
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:春节相关内容
节日名称:the Spring Festival/the Lantern Festival/the Dragon Boat Festival等
核心习俗:all family members get together to have a big dinner and eat delicious dumplings/set off fireworks/kids get lucky money from elders/watch the Spring Gala/put up spring couplets等
文化意义:the most important festival in China/a time for new beginnings/bonding with family等
要点二:中秋节相关内容
节日名称:the Mid-Autumn Festival/the Double Ninth Festival/the Qingming Festival等
核心习俗:families admire the bright full moon and taste mooncakes/share fruit together/tell folk stories about Chang'e等
文化寓意:mooncakes stand for family reunion/carry our warm love for family/pass down our special culture等
13.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假设你校英语报社正在举办题为“My Ways to Learn English”的征文活动,请结合你自身的学习经历,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你认为最有效的英语学习方法。
提示:
1.学习英语的重要性或你最初遇到的困难。
2.详细介绍2-3种你认为最有效的学习方法及其原因。
3.发表你的观点并鼓励同学们。
要求:
1.词数:80词左右。
2.内容连贯,结构清晰,语句通顺。
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
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【答案】
例文
English is widely used around the whole modern world for international communication. At first, I was weak in daily spoken English. Now I have some good practical ways.
Firstly, watching English movies helps me understand foreign culture and daily local lifestyles. Secondly, reading books makes me learn new useful words quickly. Finally, talking patiently with friendly teachers builds my confidence.
I think practice makes perfect. I hope everyone can find suitable learning ways and enjoy learning. Let’s work hard to master English together!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:征文类说明文,时态穿插一般过去时、一般现在时
明确要点:点明英语学习的重要性以及自身初期学习难点;介绍2-3种有效的英语学习方法并阐释对应的缘由;抒发个人学习看法,向同学们发出倡议
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,词数把控在80词上下,行文做到衔接自然、语句通顺
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明英语的重要地位,交代自己早先口语薄弱的困境,引出自己摸索出实用学习方法
主体段:借助Firstly/Secondly/Finally分层罗列三种英语学习方法,逐一说明每种方法带来的学习益处
结尾段:阐述自身学习感悟,祝愿同学找到适配方法,号召同学们学好英语
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:学习背景与初始困难
重要性:widely used around the whole modern world/for international communication/widely used in business and travelling等
过往困境:was weak in daily spoken English/was afraid to speak English in public/forgot English words easily等
引出过渡:have some good practical ways/found several useful learning tips later等
要点二:有效的英语学习方法
方法1:观看英文影片
举措:watching English movies/watching short English video clips等
成效:helps me understand foreign culture and daily local lifestyles/improves my listening skills/trains my pronunciation等
方法2:开展英文阅读
举措:reading books/reading English magazines and news passages等
成效:makes me learn new useful words quickly/improves my reading speed/enriches my expressions等
方法3:主动和老师交流
举措:talking patiently with friendly teachers/having face-to-face discussions after class等
成效:builds my confidence/fixes my speaking mistakes/gets proper learning advice等
要点三:结尾观点与倡议
观点:practice makes perfect/consistent daily practice matters a lot等
倡议:find suitable learning ways and enjoy learning/work hard to master English together/take small steps every day/make progress little by little等
14.(25-26九年级上·河北沧州·期中)假如你学校正在举行“安全骑行”主题宣传活动。请你结合下面的案例和自身实际,写一篇短文谈谈你的心得体会。案例如下:
An Accident Report
Time: 11:50 a. m. Date: September 15th, 2025
Place: On the road before the school gate
Accident: A car hit a student cyclist (骑自行车的人). The student’s right arm was badly hurt.
He had to stay in hospital for a week.
注意:(1)短文须包括案例中所有信息,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
On September 15th, 2025, a car hit a student cyclist at 11:50 a.m. on the road before the school gate. The boy’s right arm was badly hurt, and he had to stay in hospital for a week. I learn safety comes first.
I always do something to prevent myself from such accidents. First, I always wear a helmet and follow traffic rules while riding. Second, I never use my phone or listen to music while riding. Small habits make a big difference.
Let’s be always careful and enjoy safe riding every day!
【详解】写作步骤:
第一步:审题立意
确定文体:议论文,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点: 以事故事例引出中心论点安全第一,分两点介绍预防骑行事故的具体行为,总结并呼吁大家小心、安全骑行。
确定人称:第一人称、第三人称(I、the boy)
注意事项:词数在80个左右,文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名
第二步:构思布局
三段式结构:
开头段:以事故事例引出中心论点安全第一
主体段:介绍预防骑行事故的具体行为
结尾段:呼吁大家小心、安全骑行
第三步:要点展开
要点一:事故后果:injuries from the accident、harm caused by the accident、lead to bad consequences
要点二:预防骑行事故:Strictly follow all traffic rules.、Never look at mobile phones or listen to music while cycling.、Slow down when passing school gates and crossroads.
要点三:发出呼吁:Let’s ride bikes safely every day!、We must keep safe when riding bikes.、Safety always comes first while cycling.
15.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina,收到Li Wei同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
要求:
1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:optimistic (乐观的);high-fat food;the more..., the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. And I have some suggestions for you.
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Yours,
Rina
【答案】
例文:
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. And I have some suggestions for you.
First of all, you should be confident and optimistic. Don't care about what others think of you. Believe in yourself and smile every day. Secondly, it's important to have a healthy diet. You'd better refuse high-fat food. Instead, you should eat more vegetables and fruit. Thirdly, taking proper exercise is necessary. You can do sports often, such as running and swimming. The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英文建议类书信,编辑Rina给Li Wei回信,全文以一般现在时提建议,语气温和安慰
确定人称:第一人称Rina,针对Li Wei肥胖被嘲笑的烦恼,分三大板块给出建议,必须使用参考词汇:optimistic, high-fat food, the more…, the healthier…
写作要点:
自信乐观:①不要在意别人看法;②相信自己、保持微笑
合理饮食:①拒绝高脂肪食物;②多吃蔬菜水果
适当运动:①经常锻炼身体;②跑步、游泳等多种运动,用上固定句型 the more…, the healthier…
注意事项:词数80词左右;给定开头不计入总词数;全部要点完整覆盖,可适度补充;禁止真实姓名、校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式书信结构
开头段:总起,引出下文三条建议
主体段:用First of all/Secondly/Thirdly分层,依次写完自信心态、健康饮食、适度运动三大板块,每条板块两条要点全部写全,嵌入所有指定参考词汇
结尾段:表达希望建议能帮到对方,完成书信收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自信乐观
核心表达:First of all, you should be confident and optimistic. Don’t care about what others think of you. Believe in yourself and smile every day.
拓展词汇:stay positive/ignore others’ laugh/be proud of yourself等
要点二:合理饮食
核心表达:Secondly, it’s important to have a healthy diet. You’d better refuse high-fat food. Instead, you should eat more vegetables and fruit.
拓展词汇:balanced diet/stay away from junk food/fresh fruit and vegetables等
要点三:适当运动
核心表达:Thirdly, taking proper exercise is necessary. You can do sports often, such as running and swimming. The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
拓展词汇:take regular exercise/outdoor sports/keep fit等
结尾安慰句
核心表达:I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
拓展词汇:make a difference/solve your trouble/feel better soon等
16.(25-26九年级上·河北邢台·期中)请根据下列表格的提示,写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文。
内容要点:
过去
现在
1. 旧房
1. 高楼
2. 河水肮脏
2. 河水清澈
3. 步行、骑自行车上班
3. 乘公交车、小汽车上班
4. 道路狭窄
4. 环形路宽阔
5. 居住条件差
5. 居住环境舒适
注意:
(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;
(2)词数80个左右。
Changes in My Hometown
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【答案】
Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there were old houses and the river was dirty. People went to work on foot or by bike. The roads were narrow and living conditions were poor.
Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The river is clear. People take buses or cars to work. The ring roads are wide. We live in a comfortable environment.
I love my hometown because it is becoming better and better. I hope it will be more beautiful in the future.
【详解】【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:材料作文Changes in My Hometown
明确要点:对照表格完成今昔对比,覆盖住房、河水、出行方式、道路、居住条件5项内容;词数80词左右,不得出现真实地名、人名、校名。
确定人称:第一人称。
【第二步:构思布局】
开头:总起,点明家乡发生了巨大变化。
主体:先描写过去老旧、环境较差的生活样貌,再描写如今高楼林立、生态宜居、出行便捷的新面貌。
结尾:抒发对家乡的喜爱与美好期许。
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:过去的家乡
old houses/dirty river/go to work on foot or by bike/narrow roads/poor living conditions/in the past
要点二:如今的家乡
tall buildings/clear river/take buses or drive cars to work/wide ring roads/comfortable living environment/now/become better and better
17.(25-26九年级上·河北衡水·期中)无规矩不成方圆。规则虽然看起来会束缚我们,但是实际上它们可以帮助我们养成良好的习惯。假如你叫李华,请你以“The Rule that Influences Me Most”为题,写一篇英文短文,介绍一下对你影响最大的规则。
提示:
(1)Who made this rule?
(2)What is the rule about?
(3)How does the rule influence you?
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右。
The Rule that Influences Me Most
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【答案】例文:
The Rule that Influences Me Most
The rule that influences me most is made by my parents—I should read at least one book each week.
I used to be a boy who was only interested in playing games. In order to protect my eyes, my parents made this rule for me. At first, I was asked to make a list of the books that I wanted to read. Gradually, I started to stay away from games and fell in love with reading.
Thanks to the rule, I have read many books and learned much knowledge.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,一般过去时为主
明确要点:围绕影响自己最深的规则这一个要点展开。
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)
注意事项:词数80左右,不得出现真实校名、人名和地名。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开头开门见山,明确对自己影响最深的规则,为下文详细解释作出铺垫;
主体段:以自己为例,详细解释规则对自己的影响;
结尾段:总结全文,规则给自己带来的感受。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:影响自己最深的规则
具体规则内容:The rule that influences me most is made by my parents—I should read at least one book each week./ The rule my parents set for me has the biggest influence on me: I have to read no less than one book every week./ My parents made a rule that affects me greatly—I must read at least one book weekly.等
制定规则前的状态:I used to be a boy who was only interested in playing games./ As a little boy, I used to take interest in nothing but playing games./ there was a time when I was only interested in.../ take interest in nothing but...
制定规则的原因:In order to protect my eyes, my parents made this rule for me./ To keep my eyes safe, my parents made the rule for me./ Aiming to safeguard my eyes, my parents made this family rule for me.等
初始的状态: At first, I was asked to make a list of the books that I wanted to read. / Initially, I was required to make a list of books I intended to finish reading./ At the very beginning, my parents asked me to sort out a list of my expected reading materials.等
后期的改变:Gradually, I started to stay away from games and fell in love with reading./ Over time, I gave up my obsession with games and grew passionate about reading./ Step by step, I kept away from games and loved reading more and more.等
感受:Thanks to the rule, I have read many books and learned much knowledge. / Because of this rule, I’ve read plenty of books and gained lots of knowledge./ Thanks to / Because of / Owing to / With the help of many books = plenty of books / numerous books / a wide range of books learned much knowledge / gained lots of knowledge / acquired abundant knowledge / accumulate rich knowledge
18.(25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你是李华,最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。
Hi, Li Hua,
I am going on business to your city next month.
There will be a Tea Fair in your city. Could you please tell me something about Chinese tea?Where is it planted? How is it produced? Now it’s getting more and more popular to drink tea in Western countries. Could you tell me why people like tea so much?
Thanks for your help!
Andrew
注意:(1)文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Andrew,
It’s great to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about Chinese tea. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Andrew,
It’s great to hear from you. I would like to tell you something about Chinese tea.
Chinese tea has thousands of years of history. It’s mostly planted on hills in southern parts of China. Workers pick tender tea leaves by hand and send them to factories to finish all producing steps. It becomes popular in Western countries mainly because drinking tea is healthy and it can make people feel relaxed after long busy days.
I’m excited about the coming Tea Fair and I can wait to meet you there to share more tea culture with you next month.
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,说明文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍茶叶种植地点、制作流程、海外流行的原因,回应对方下月来本市参加茶博会的提问
确定人称:第一人称I/my,收信人使用第二人称you
注意事项:书信格式完整,不得透露真实姓名、校名与地名;词数80词左右,给定开头、结尾不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:题目已给出固定开篇,承接来信,引出中国茶相关介绍
主体段:依次说明茶叶种植区域、采摘加工生产过程、海外广受喜爱的缘由
结尾段:热情邀约对方茶博会见面品茶,收尾邮件
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:茶叶种植相关
历史背景:thousands of years of history/long ancient history等
种植区域:southern parts of China/southern provinces等
种植地形:on hills/mountain slopes等
茶叶原料:tender tea leave/fresh tea buds等
要点二:茶叶生产制作流程
采摘方式:pick by hand/hand-pluck等
转运流程:send to factories/transport to workshops等
加工工序:finish all producing steps/complete processing work等
要点三:西方盛行饮茶的原因
健康优势:healthy/good for physical fitness等
舒缓作用:make people feel relaxed/ease tiredness等
适用场景:after long busy days/after heavy work等
要点四:茶博会相关邀约
出行目的:go on business/take a business trip等
展会活动:the coming Tea Fair/tea exhibition等
见面安排:meet you there/share tea culture together等
19.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Eric的邮件进行回复。
TO
LiPing@ mail.com
SUBJECT
Feeling sad and asking for help
Hi Li Ping,
I feel sad because of my grades. I need your help. I also want to know about traditional Chinese things. Could you give me some advice? Thanks very much.
Yours,
Eric
注意:1.短文须包括要点,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数80左右。
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【答案】
例文:
Hi Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel sad about your grades. Don’t worry too much. Here is some advice for you. First, you should listen carefully in class and take notes. Second, doing more exercise helps you relax.
As for traditional Chinese things, I like paper cutting best. It stands for good luck and beauty. You can try making some simple ones by yourself in your free time. It is really fun and meaningful.
I hope you will feel better soon. Write to me again if you have more problems.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,一般现在时为主
明确要点:①安慰Eric+给出学习、心态方面建议;②介绍中国传统事物,给出相关建议
确定人称:第一人称和第二人称
注意事项:无真实地名、校名、人名;词数80左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:礼貌回应邮件,表达同情,并给出建议
主体段:介绍中国传统文化、并给出体验建议
结尾段:送上祝福,邀请再次来信
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:安慰+学习心态建议
安慰:I’m sorry to hear that you feel sad about your grades. Don’t worry too much./Don’t be too hard on yourself. It’s normal to get bad grades sometimes.等
学习建议:listen carefully in class/take notes/ask teachers for help after class/review lessons every day等
心态建议:do exercise/listen to light music/talk with friends/do sports等
要点二:中国传统事物
事物:paper cutting/Chinese tea/Chinese clay art/Beijing Opera等
寓意:stands for good luck and beauty/stands for peace and friendship/shows our beautiful life/tells old Chinese stories等
活动:make simple cuttings in free time/learn to make tea and taste it slowly/shape cute little figures by hand/watch short videos to enjoy special costumes and voices等
20.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)假如你叫李华,你校英文网Change专栏正面向学生征稿,题目为How I Have Changed!请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文描述你的变化,然后向该专栏投稿。
注意:(1)短文须包括所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How I Have Changed!
I have changed a lot in the last few years.
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【答案】例文
How I Have Changed!
I have changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to be short and weak, but now I’m tall and strong. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I dare to make a speech in public. In the past, I didn’t like sports and stayed up late. My hobbies were just playing games. I found some subjects difficult. But now, I go to bed early and exercise every day. I’ve started reading books and playing basketball. I study harder and enjoy solving problems.
These changes make me happy and healthy. I’ll keep trying to be better!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(校刊征文短文)
明确要点:从外貌 (appearance)、性格 (personality)、习惯 (habits)、爱好 (hobbies)、学习变化五个方面描述自身变化;涵盖思维导图全部板块,可适度拓展
确定人称:第一人称 (I)
注意事项:包含思维导图全部提示信息,可适当发挥;不出现真实人名、校名、地名;词数80词左右,开头已给出不计入总词数,语言贴合初中英语难度
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:已给出,总起点明自己近几年变化很大
主体段:依次对比描写外貌、性格、作息习惯、爱好、学习方面过去与现在的不同
结尾段:总结这些变化带来的好处,表达持续进步的决心
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开头总起(承接已给开头)
总起句:I have changed a lot in the last few years./Great changes have taken place in me during these years.
要点二:外貌 (appearance) 变化对比
过去描述:I used to be short and weak/I was short and thin in the past等
现在描述:but now I’m tall and strong/Now I grow taller and stronger等
要点三:性格 (personality) 变化对比
过去描述:I used to be shy and quiet/I was quiet and afraid of talking in public等
现在描述:but now I dare to make a speech in public/Now I’m outgoing and brave enough to speak in front of others等
要点四:习惯 (habits) 变化对比
过去描述:In the past, I didn’t like sports and stayed up late/I used to stay up late and seldom did exercise等
现在描述:But now, I go to bed early and exercise every day/Now I keep early hours and take exercise every single day等
要点五:爱好 (hobbies) 变化对比
过去描述:My hobbies were just playing games/I only loved playing computer games before等
现在描述:I’ve started reading books and playing basketball/Now I fall in love with reading and playing basketball等
要点六:学习 (拓展板块) 变化对比
过去描述:I found some subjects difficult/I thought many lessons were hard to learn等
现在描述:I study harder and enjoy solving problems/I work harder and enjoy working out difficult problems now等
要点七:结尾总结感悟
感受表达:These changes make me happy and healthy/All these changes make me happier and healthier等
展望表达:I’ll keep trying to be better!/I will keep improving myself in the future等
21.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)我们每个人生活中都会遇到一些我们喜欢的书,请以 My Favourite Book 为题写一篇文章:
提示:
1. Say something about your favourite part in the book.
2. What do you learn from it?
要求:
1. 包含提示所有内容,可适当发挥。
2. 不得出现真实人名、校名等。
3. 字数在80词左右。
My Favourite Book
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【答案】例文:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is The Little Prince. The part I like best is when the fox tells the little prince, “It is only with the heart that one can see rightly.” This sentence touches me deeply. From the book, I learn that love and friendship are the most important things in life. We should care for others and be responsible. The book also teaches me to keep a childlike heart. I will never forget this wonderful story.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文。
②时态:一般现在时为主。
③提示:需介绍最喜欢的书、书中最喜欢的部分以及从中学到的东西。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山点明最喜欢的书名(如The Little Prince);
第二步:用1-2句话描述最喜欢的部分,并简单说明感受;
第三步:用2-3句话阐述从书中学到的道理或启示,适当发挥。
[亮点词汇]
①touch…deeply深深触动
②care for关爱
③keep a childlike heart保持童心
[高分句型]
①The part I like best is when the fox tells the little prince... (when引导的表语从句)
②From the book, I learn that love and friendship are the most important things in life. (that引导的宾语从句)
22.(25-26九年级上·河北邯郸·期中)最近,我们对某中学1,000名学生进行了一次问卷调查,了解他们对未来梦想职业的选择情况。请你根据以下图示内容及写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1. 描述图示调查结果;
2. 阐述你的梦想职业及原因;
3. 简述你将如何去实现梦想。
注意:(1)文中须包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:30%:30 percent of…
Recently, a survey of 1,000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Recently, a survey of 1,000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school. According to the results, 45% of them want to become doctors, while 30% wish to be teachers. 15% plan to work in offices, and the remaining 10% choose other jobs.
As for me, I want to be a doctor. It’s the doctors’ duty to treat people who are ill and save their lives. What’s more, doctors are highly respected. At present, I’ll try my best to study well and help others when necessary. I’m sure I’ll achieve my dream as long as I keep on working hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示要点及图示信息进行写作,可适当发挥,注意表述完整,行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍图示调查结果;
第二步,介绍自己梦想的职业及原因;
第三步,介绍自己将如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①according to根据
②help others帮助他人
③keep on继续
[高分句型]
①It’s the doctors’ duty to treat people who are ill and save their lives. (who引导定语从句)
②I’m sure I’ll achieve my dream as long as I keep on working hard. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
23.(25-26九年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假如你是李华,你校英语社团将举办主题为“Good Habits for a Healthy Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
提示要点:1.健康饮食的益处及建议 2.体育锻炼的益处及建议 3.良好作息的益处及建议。
要求:(1)所写内容包含所有要点,且适当发挥;
(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。
Good Habits for a Healthy Life
It’s very important for us to develop good habits to keep healthy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Good Habits for a Healthy Life
It’s very important for us to develop good habits to keep healthy. To live a healthy life, we need to develop good habits.
First, eating healthily is necessary. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, doing exercise regularly helps us stay strong. For example, we can run or play basketball for half an hour every day. Third, having enough sleep is also important. Going to bed early and getting up early makes us energetic.
In my opinion, we should stick to these good habits. Let’s take action now for a healthier future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕健康饮食、体育锻炼、良好作息三大要点,分别说明益处并给出具体建议,结尾总结呼吁。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍健康饮食的益处及建议。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍体育锻炼和良好作息的益处及建议。
第三步,书写结语,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②instead of而不是
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food.(and并列连词)
②Going to bed early and getting up early makes us energetic.(动名词作主语)
24.(25-26九年级上·河北张家口·期中)AI已经被我们广泛地使用,同时也引起了大家对AI的深度思考。现在学校正在组织主题为“AI in our life”的征文活动,请你根据下面的提示,结合自己的体验,写一篇英语短文来分享你的看法。
提示:
1) What changes does AI bring to us?
2) What challenges does AI bring to us?
3) What should we do to make good use of AI as middle school students?
要求:
1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2)文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
3)词数80个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
AI in our life
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our life.
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【答案】
例文:
AI in our life As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our life. AI brings us many changes. It makes learning more fun, and even tells us interesting stories.
However, AI also brings challenges. Some students may rely too much on AI and stop thinking by themselves. Also, not all information from AI is true. As middle school students, we should use AI wisely. We can ask AI for help, but we must still think independently. Besides, it’s important to check the information from AI.
In short, AI is helpful if we use it wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:运用一般现在时;
③提示:材料所给的提示内容需完整表达,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
1. 第一步:说明AI的积极变化;
2. 第二步:说明AI带来的挑战,并就如何使用AI给出建议;
3. 第三步:结尾总结:如果我们明智地使用人工智能,它会很有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①rely on依赖
②stop doing sth.停止做某事
③independently独立地
④helpful有帮助的
[高分句型]
① Besides, it’s important to check the information from AI. (it作形式主语,to do不定式是真正的主语)
② In short, AI is helpful if we use it wisely. (if引导条件状语从句)
25.(25-26九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中)王梅的外国朋友Tom发来邮件向王梅寻求帮助,下面是Tom给王梅发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复。
My Chinese is very poor. Learning Chinese is too difficult for me. Can you tell me how to memorize words? How can I improve my pronunciation and writing? Please give me some advice.
1. 回复邮件回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。
2. 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese.
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I hope these can help you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【答案】
例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese. For memorizing words, I suggest using flashcards and learning them with example sentences. Try to review the words every day.
To improve pronunciation, listening to Chinese songs or watching cartoons is helpful. Just try to repeat after the speakers. For writing, keeping a short diary in Chinese every day is a good idea. Start with simple sentences.
Remember, don’t give up. Practice a little every day and you will get better!
I hope these can help you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生针对邮件中的两个问题(如何记单词、如何提高发音和写作)分别提出了建议,并适当增加了鼓励性内容。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图。直接对Tom遇到的汉语学习困难表示遗憾,并引出回复。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点分两部分给出建议:记忆单词的方法和提高发音与写作的途径。
第三步,书写结语。给予鼓励并表达希望建议能对他有所帮助的愿望。
【亮点词汇】① suggest doing sth. 建议做某事
② try to do sth. 尝试做某事
【高分句型】① To improve pronunciation, listening to Chinese songs or watching cartoons is helpful. (动词不定式表目的;动名词作主语)
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