专题11 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）高一英语上学期

专题11 书面表达 （一） （25-26高一上·上海曹杨第二中学·期中）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea of each paragraph in one complete sentence. The problem of packaging 1. A large source of rubbish is packaging material. It often makes up more than 30 per cent of the total. Most packaging material ends up in a landfill after it is thrown away. Though necessary, landfills take up valuable space, often stink, and can leak harmful substances into the soil. Landfills not included, the production of packaging material itself is a major source of air and water pollution. 2. People are now trying to solve the problems caused by packaging materials. In 2001, Germany took the lead by requiring companies to recycle the packaging used for their goods. To do this, the companies set up recycling bins in every neighbourhood. Consumers now separate their rubbish into three categories metal, plastic and paper cartons. They then put it into the appropriate bin. The rubbish sorted, it is transported to a recycling company for processing. 3. The programme worked well at first. However, the amount of rubbish has begun to increase again. One reason for this is that many consumers no longer reduce waste because they think the problem is solved. It seems that to properly deal with the problem of rubbish, everyone must remain alert and do their part. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26高一上·上海大学附属嘉定高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，今年暑假，朋友Jim邀请你和家人去他所在的城市罗马旅游，罗马的风景和美食令你印象深刻。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信： (1)对他的热情款待表达自己的感谢之情； (2)简要描述此趟旅程的所见所闻并谈谈你对出国旅游的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （一） （25-26高一上·上海师范大学附属嘉定高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。入学至今，你经历了充满汗水的军训、活力四射的运动会等活动，也渐渐适应了高中忙碌的学习节奏。现在给你的朋友写一封信，分享你升入高中后的生活与感悟。具体要求如下： 1.重点描写一个具体的场景； 2.表达对该场景的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26高一上·上海华东政法大学附属松江高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English paragraph in no less than 80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华。你的初中好友吴磊来信，问及你进入高中后感受到的和初中最大的不同之处。请你撰写信件的主体段落（不少于80词），要点如下： 1）你感受到的高中与初中最大的不同之处； 2）你打算如何做（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （25-26高一上·上海第四中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 高中生涯的序幕已然拉开，初入校园的适应期里，有新奇的探索，也有成长的滋味。现面向全体高一同学征集学校公众号博文稿件，请你结合自身经历，分享高中适应过程中的真实故事与感悟，可以从校园环境、课程挑战、社团趣事、人际交往等方面，选取1-2个维度重点展开，让更多同学在你的文字里找到共鸣。(文中不得出现考生信息) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （一） （25-26高一上·上海闵行中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你校英语报正在开展英语写作比赛，主题为“A small mistake”，你计划参加。写一篇文章，内容须包括： 1.具体描述你曾经犯过的一个小错误； 2.这一错误对你的影响或给你的教训。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26高一上·上海浦东新区·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明。十月以来，为提升学生体质健康水平，你们学校组织全校学生在早锻炼后，男生做30个俯卧撑（push-ups），女生做3分钟平板支撑（planks）。但有同学反映运动强度过大，身体不适。现学校委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。 要求： 1. 提出问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题11 书面表达 （一） 【答案】1. Packaging material, a major source of waste, mostly ends up in harmful landfills, and its production also pollutes air and water. 2. Companies in Germany are required to place neighborhood recycling bins so that consumers can sort rubbish into metal, plastic and paper cartons for later processing in the recycling facility. 3. Despite the program’s initial success, rubbish amount has risen again since consumers stopped reducing waste, showing everyone still needs to stay alert. （二） 【答案】Dear Jim, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your warm hospitality during our trip to Rome this summer. Rome is truly a fascinating city. The moment we stepped onto the land, we were captivated by the ancient architecture like the Colosseum. Its grandeur and historical significance left us in awe. And the delicious Italian cuisine, especially the pasta and pizza, was an absolute treat to our taste buds. This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. It enriches our understanding of the world and makes us more open-minded. Once again, thank you for making our visit to Rome so memorable. I hope you have the opportunity to visit us in China someday, and I’ll be more than happy to play the host. Best regards, Li Hua （一） 【答案】Dear friend, I’ve had quite an eventful time since entering high school at Qiming Middle School. One unforgettable scene was during the military training. The sun was blazing like a huge fireball in the sky. We stood in neat rows on the playground, sweat streaming down our faces. Our instructor, who was strict but fair, shouted commands loudly. We followed his orders, marching and turning in unison. When we finally got a short break, we all plopped down on the ground, exhausted but also feeling a sense of achievement. I felt that this experience, which seemed tough at first, taught me the importance of perseverance. It made me realize that as long as I keep going, no difficulty is insurable. I also understood that teamwork is vital because what we achieved was a result of everyone’s efforts. Write back soon and tell me about your life! Yours, Li Ming （二） 【答案】The biggest difference between high school and junior high is the greater academic pressure and more independent learning. Unlike junior high, where teachers guided us closely, we now have more after-class tasks and need to arrange study plans on our own. Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, allowing us to explore our interests freely. To adapt well, I plan to make a detailed weekly study schedule to balance different subjects. I also intend to join the debate club to improve my critical thinking and communication skills. Additionally, I’ll ask teachers and classmates for help promptly when encountering difficulties, ensuring I keep up with the learning pace. （三） 【答案】‌Adapting to a New School Life Entering senior high school, I was amazed by the modern school facilities and the spacious campus. The library has a wide variety of books, and the labs are well-equipped. However, the academic pressure was tough. The courses were more difficult than in junior high, and I struggled to keep up at first. I felt nervous about making new friends and fitting in. To adapt, I made a study plan and actively participated in class discussions. I also joined the school band, which helped me make friends. Slowly, I got used to the new rhythm. This adaptation period has taught me to be more independent and confident. I believe with time, my high school life will be even better. （一） 【答案】A Small Mistake Last semester, I made a small but unforgettable mistake. Our class planned a charity sale, and I volunteered to bring boxes of stationery. Excited about the event, I rushed out in the morning and accidentally grabbed my little sister’s art supplies instead of the donated stationery. When I arrived at school, I found colorful markers and sketchbooks instead of notebooks and pens, leaving our group scrambling to adjust. This mistake taught me two valuable lessons. First, haste truly makes waste — taking two minutes to double-check would have avoided the trouble. Second, it showed me the importance of accountability. I apologized to my classmates and quickly fetched the correct items, which helped us pull off the sale successfully. Now, I always remind myself to stay calm and verify details, no matter how trivial the task seems. （二） 【答案】One possible version: Dear Student Union, I am writing to provide some feedback on the morning exercise routine that has been implemented in our school since October. There have been some concerns regarding the intensity of exercise. Many students have reported feeling physically uncomfortable. This strenuous routine may be too demanding for some students, especially those who are not accustomed to such intense exercise. In light of these concerns, I would like to propose some suggestions. Firstly, the school can vary the types to cater to different fitness levels. This could include alternatives to push-ups and planks such as jogging, stretching, or other less intense sports. Secondly, students can be allowed to choose their preferred sports within a given range. These modifications would not only address the physical discomfort experienced by some students but also promote a more inclusive and enjoyable exercise routine for all. I hope these suggestions will be considered. Yours sincerely, Li Ming / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题11 书面表达 （一） （25-26高一上·上海曹杨第二中学·期中）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea of each paragraph in one complete sentence. The problem of packaging 1. A large source of rubbish is packaging material. It often makes up more than 30 per cent of the total. Most packaging material ends up in a landfill after it is thrown away. Though necessary, landfills take up valuable space, often stink, and can leak harmful substances into the soil. Landfills not included, the production of packaging material itself is a major source of air and water pollution. 2. People are now trying to solve the problems caused by packaging materials. In 2001, Germany took the lead by requiring companies to recycle the packaging used for their goods. To do this, the companies set up recycling bins in every neighbourhood. Consumers now separate their rubbish into three categories metal, plastic and paper cartons. They then put it into the appropriate bin. The rubbish sorted, it is transported to a recycling company for processing. 3. The programme worked well at first. However, the amount of rubbish has begun to increase again. One reason for this is that many consumers no longer reduce waste because they think the problem is solved. It seems that to properly deal with the problem of rubbish, everyone must remain alert and do their part. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1. Packaging material, a major source of waste, mostly ends up in harmful landfills, and its production also pollutes air and water. 2. Companies in Germany are required to place neighborhood recycling bins so that consumers can sort rubbish into metal, plastic and paper cartons for later processing in the recycling facility. 3. Despite the program’s initial success, rubbish amount has risen again since consumers stopped reducing waste, showing everyone still needs to stay alert. 【解析】【导语】 这是一篇说明文，主要介绍包装材料带来的垃圾污染问题、德国的解决措施及该措施的效果与启示。 (1)题解析： 主旨大意题。根据第一段“A large source of rubbish is packaging material. It often makes up more than 30 per cent of the total. Most packaging material ends up in a landfill after it is thrown away. Though necessary, landfills take up valuable space, often stink, and can leak harmful substances into the soil. Landfills not included, the production of packaging material itself is a major source of air and water pollution.(垃圾的一个主要来源是包装材料。它通常占总量的30%以上。大多数包装材料在被丢弃后最终会进入垃圾填埋场。尽管垃圾填埋场是必要的，但它会占用宝贵的空间，常常发臭，还可能向土壤中泄漏有害物质。除了垃圾填埋场，包装材料的生产本身也是空气和水污染的主要来源)”可知，答案需涵盖包装材料是主要垃圾来源、多进入有害垃圾填埋场及生产过程污染环境这些核心信息。故答案为Packaging material, a major source of waste, mostly ends up in harmful landfills, and its production also pollutes air and water. (2)题解析： 主旨大意题。根据第二段“In 2001, Germany took the lead by requiring companies to recycle the packaging used for their goods. To do this, the companies set up recycling bins in every neighbourhood. Consumers now separate their rubbish into three categories-metal, plastic and paper cartons. They then put it into the appropriate bin. The rubbish sorted, it is transported to a recycling company for processing.(2001年，德国率先要求企业对其产品使用的包装进行回收。为了做到这一点，企业在每个社区都设置了回收箱。消费者现在将垃圾分为三类——金属、塑料和纸盒。然后他们把垃圾放进相应的箱子里。垃圾分拣后，会被运到回收公司进行处理)”可知，答案需体现德国企业被要求设回收箱、消费者分类投放及垃圾后续回收处理这些关键内容。故答案为Companies in Germany are required to place neighborhood recycling bins so that consumers can sort rubbish into metal, plastic and paper cartons for later processing in the recycling facility. (3)题解析： 主旨大意题。根据第三段“The programme worked well at first. However, the amount of rubbish has begun to increase again. One reason for this is that many consumers no longer reduce waste because they think the problem is solved. It seems that to properly deal with the problem of rubbish, everyone must remain alert and do their part.(该计划起初效果很好。然而，垃圾数量又开始增加了。其中一个原因是，许多消费者认为问题已经解决，不再减少垃圾产生。看来，要妥善处理垃圾问题，每个人都必须保持警惕，尽自己的一份力)”可知，答案需包含计划初期成功、垃圾量复增及原因和启示这些核心要点，即：尽管该计划取得了初步成功，但自消费者停止减少浪费以来，垃圾量再次上升，这表明每个人都需要保持警惕。故答案为Despite the program’s initial success, rubbish amount has risen again since consumers stopped reducing waste, showing everyone still needs to stay alert. （二） （25-26高一上·上海大学附属嘉定高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，今年暑假，朋友Jim邀请你和家人去他所在的城市罗马旅游，罗马的风景和美食令你印象深刻。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信： (1)对他的热情款待表达自己的感谢之情； (2)简要描述此趟旅程的所见所闻并谈谈你对出国旅游的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your warm hospitality during our trip to Rome this summer. Rome is truly a fascinating city. The moment we stepped onto the land, we were captivated by the ancient architecture like the Colosseum. Its grandeur and historical significance left us in awe. And the delicious Italian cuisine, especially the pasta and pizza, was an absolute treat to our taste buds. This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. It enriches our understanding of the world and makes us more open-minded. Once again, thank you for making our visit to Rome so memorable. I hope you have the opportunity to visit us in China someday, and I’ll be more than happy to play the host. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份给朋友Jim写一封信，感谢他邀请自己和家人去罗马旅游并热情款待，同时描述旅程见闻以及表达对出国旅游的看法。 【解析】 1. 词汇积累 款待：hospitality → entertainment 迷人的：fascinating → charming 使着迷：captivate → fascinate 拓宽：broaden → widen 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad. It not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. 拓展句：This trip has made me realize the great value of traveling abroad, which not only broadens our horizons but also allows us to experience different cultures firsthand. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】The moment we stepped onto the land, we were captivated by the ancient architecture like the Colosseum.（运用the moment引导时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】I hope you have the opportunity to visit us in China someday, and I’ll be more than happy to play the host.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句） （一） （25-26高一上·上海师范大学附属嘉定高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。入学至今，你经历了充满汗水的军训、活力四射的运动会等活动，也渐渐适应了高中忙碌的学习节奏。现在给你的朋友写一封信，分享你升入高中后的生活与感悟。具体要求如下： 1.重点描写一个具体的场景； 2.表达对该场景的感受。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear friend, I’ve had quite an eventful time since entering high school at Qiming Middle School. One unforgettable scene was during the military training. The sun was blazing like a huge fireball in the sky. We stood in neat rows on the playground, sweat streaming down our faces. Our instructor, who was strict but fair, shouted commands loudly. We followed his orders, marching and turning in unison. When we finally got a short break, we all plopped down on the ground, exhausted but also feeling a sense of achievement. I felt that this experience, which seemed tough at first, taught me the importance of perseverance. It made me realize that as long as I keep going, no difficulty is insurable. I also understood that teamwork is vital because what we achieved was a result of everyone’s efforts. Write back soon and tell me about your life! Yours, Li Ming 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以启明中学高一学生李明的身份给朋友写信，分享升入高中后的生活，重点描写一个具体场景并表达感受。 【解析】 1.词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable → memorable 炽热的：blazing→ burning 疲惫不堪： exhausted→ worn out 成就： achievement→ fulfillment 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The sun was blazing like a huge fireball in the sky. 拓展句：The sun, which was like a huge fireball, was blazing in the sky. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Our instructor, who was strict but fair, shouted commands loudly.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When we finally got a short break, we all plopped down on the ground, exhausted but also feeling a sense of achievement.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句） （二） （25-26高一上·上海华东政法大学附属松江高级中学·期中）Directions: Write an English paragraph in no less than 80 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李华。你的初中好友吴磊来信，问及你进入高中后感受到的和初中最大的不同之处。请你撰写信件的主体段落（不少于80词），要点如下： 1）你感受到的高中与初中最大的不同之处； 2）你打算如何做（至少两点）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The biggest difference between high school and junior high is the greater academic pressure and more independent learning. Unlike junior high, where teachers guided us closely, we now have more after-class tasks and need to arrange study plans on our own. Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, allowing us to explore our interests freely. To adapt well, I plan to make a detailed weekly study schedule to balance different subjects. I also intend to join the debate club to improve my critical thinking and communication skills. Additionally, I’ll ask teachers and classmates for help promptly when encountering difficulties, ensuring I keep up with the learning pace. 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学高一学生李华的身份，给初中好友吴磊撰写信件主体段落，回应其对高中与初中最大不同之处的询问，内容需涵盖具体差异及自身适应的至少两点计划。 【解析】 1. 词汇积累 多样的：diverse → various 详细的：detailed →thorough 提高：improve →enhance 面临：encounter →confront 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, allowing us to explore our interests freely. 拓展句：Also, there are more diverse courses and clubs, which allow us to explore our interests freely. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Unlike junior high, where teachers guided us closely, we now have more after-class tasks and need to arrange study plans on our own.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为junior high） 【高分句型2】Additionally, I’ll ask teachers and classmates for help promptly when encountering difficulties, ensuring I keep up with the learning pace.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构，现在分词短语ensuring...作状语和省略that的宾语从句） （三） （25-26高一上·上海第四中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 高中生涯的序幕已然拉开，初入校园的适应期里，有新奇的探索，也有成长的滋味。现面向全体高一同学征集学校公众号博文稿件，请你结合自身经历，分享高中适应过程中的真实故事与感悟，可以从校园环境、课程挑战、社团趣事、人际交往等方面，选取1-2个维度重点展开，让更多同学在你的文字里找到共鸣。(文中不得出现考生信息) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】‌Adapting to a New School Life Entering senior high school, I was amazed by the modern school facilities and the spacious campus. The library has a wide variety of books, and the labs are well-equipped. However, the academic pressure was tough. The courses were more difficult than in junior high, and I struggled to keep up at first. I felt nervous about making new friends and fitting in. To adapt, I made a study plan and actively participated in class discussions. I also joined the school band, which helped me make friends. Slowly, I got used to the new rhythm. This adaptation period has taught me to be more independent and confident. I believe with time, my high school life will be even better. 【导语】 这是一篇开放性写作，要求考生介绍自己的高中经历过的真实故事。考生要注意题目要求的写作范围，选取1-2个维度展开。 【解析】 1. 词汇积累： ①惊讶的：amazed→astonished, astounded ②宽敞的：spacious→roomy, expansive ③压力：pressure→stress, strain ④适应：adapt→adjust, acclimatize 2. 句式拓展： 定语从句变非谓语结构 原句：I also joined the school band, which helped me make friends. 拓展句：I also joined the school band, helping me make friends. 【点睛】 【高级句型1】Entering senior high school, I was amazed by the modern school facilities and the spacious campus. (现在分词Entering作状语) 【高级句型2】I believe with time, my high school life will be even better. (省略that的宾语从句) （一） （25-26高一上·上海闵行中学·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你校英语报正在开展英语写作比赛，主题为“A small mistake”，你计划参加。写一篇文章，内容须包括： 1.具体描述你曾经犯过的一个小错误； 2.这一错误对你的影响或给你的教训。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A Small Mistake Last semester, I made a small but unforgettable mistake. Our class planned a charity sale, and I volunteered to bring boxes of stationery. Excited about the event, I rushed out in the morning and accidentally grabbed my little sister’s art supplies instead of the donated stationery. When I arrived at school, I found colorful markers and sketchbooks instead of notebooks and pens, leaving our group scrambling to adjust. This mistake taught me two valuable lessons. First, haste truly makes waste — taking two minutes to double-check would have avoided the trouble. Second, it showed me the importance of accountability. I apologized to my classmates and quickly fetched the correct items, which helped us pull off the sale successfully. Now, I always remind myself to stay calm and verify details, no matter how trivial the task seems. 【导语】 本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生以“A small mistake”为题写一篇文章，参加英语写作比赛。 【解析】 1.词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 兴奋的：excited→thrilled 而不是：instead of→rather than 帮助：help→assist 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last semester, I made a small but unforgettable mistake. 拓展句：Last semester, I made a mistake, which is small but unforgettable. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] When I arrived at school, I found colorful markers and sketchbooks instead of notebooks and pens, leaving our group scrambling to adjust.（运用了when引导时间状语从句，现在分词短语作状语） [高分句型2] I apologized to my classmates and quickly fetched the correct items, which helped us pull off the sale successfully.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） （二） （25-26高一上·上海浦东新区·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明。十月以来，为提升学生体质健康水平，你们学校组织全校学生在早锻炼后，男生做30个俯卧撑（push-ups），女生做3分钟平板支撑（planks）。但有同学反映运动强度过大，身体不适。现学校委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。 要求： 1. 提出问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Student Union, I am writing to provide some feedback on the morning exercise routine that has been implemented in our school since October. There have been some concerns regarding the intensity of exercise. Many students have reported feeling physically uncomfortable. This strenuous routine may be too demanding for some students, especially those who are not accustomed to such intense exercise. In light of these concerns, I would like to propose some suggestions. Firstly, the school can vary the types to cater to different fitness levels. This could include alternatives to push-ups and planks such as jogging, stretching, or other less intense sports. Secondly, students can be allowed to choose their preferred sports within a given range. These modifications would not only address the physical discomfort experienced by some students but also promote a more inclusive and enjoyable exercise routine for all. I hope these suggestions will be considered. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生给学生会写封邮件，反馈对学校组织的早锻炼的意见，需说明目前存在的问题，提出改进的建议，并提供支撑建议的理由。 【解析】 1. 词汇积累 实施：implement→carry out 适应：be accustomed to→get used to, adapt to 鉴于：in light of→considering, in view of 选择：choose→pick, opt for 解决：address→tackle 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：There have been some concerns regarding the intensity of exercise. 拓展句：When it comes to the intensity of exercise, there have been some concerns. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] I am writing to provide some feedback on the morning exercise routine that has been implemented in our school since October. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This strenuous routine may be too demanding for some students, especially those who are not accustomed to such intense exercise. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $