06 Unit 6 Period Six Writing Workshop & Other parts（Word讲义）-【满分思维】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册学生用书（北师大版）

Period Six　　Writing Workshop & Other parts summary　n.概要;摘要;总结 (教材P62) You are going to write a summary of the text “The Superhero Behind Superman”. 你要写一篇关于课文“《超人》背后的超级英雄”的概要。 (1)in summary=to make a summary 　　　　　　　　　　总的说来;归纳起来(常用作插入语) make a summary of… 对……做个总结 (2)summarize v. 总结;概括 【活学活用】 (1)单句填空 ①Basically, the article can 　　　　　　　　　　(summarize) in three sentences.  ②　　　　　 summary, this was a disappointing performance.  (2)写作金句 Please send a member from your group to 　　　　　　　　　　　your discussion.  请从您的小组中派一名成员对你们的讨论进行总结。 Writing a summary写概要 【写作指导】 四项基本要求 1.写概要时,一定要使用第三人称。 2.写概要时,一定不可以加入自己的观点。 3.写概要时,一定不可以对原文内容加以评论。 4.写概要时,一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。 六条基本原则 1.读懂原文是关键 在写概要之前,一定要认真阅读文章,确保理解文章的主旨、文章的结构、各段的段意。在阅读文章的时候,要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概要写作的基础和核心。 2.以自然段为概括的基础 以自然段为概括的基础会帮助我们不遗漏信息,也能帮助我们判断主要信息。当然,以自然段为概括的基础并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点,有时几个自然段说明一个要点,也有时一个自然段包含数个要点。 3.细节信息不需要过于详细 细节性的信息,如列举数字、举例、过渡句等信息不必一一列出。 4.核心词不必替换 核心词是文章的心脏,一般不宜换成其他词。 5.写作时句式多样化 概要写作书面化程度比较高,因此可以酌情选择使用从句、非谓语等结构,但句子结构不可过长,也不要使用太过复杂的句子结构。 6.使用多种句式转换 如:主动与被动的互换、反向转换(主语和宾语互换)、从句和非谓语动词的转换等。 【常用词汇】 概要写作常用关联词 1.顺序 概括要点时,可以使用表示顺序的连接词,这样可以使文章脉络更清楚。 first, second, third首先、第二、第三 firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally首先、第二、第三、最后 to begin with, then, furthermore, finally首先、然后、此外、最后 to start with, next, finally首先、然后、最后 first of all, besides, last but not least首先、此外、最后但同样重要的是 most important of all, moreover, finally最重要的是、再者、最后 2.并列 as well as也; not only…but (also)不仅……还……; including/included包括 3.对比 on the one hand…on the other hand…一方面……另一方面……; for one thing…for another一方面……另一方面……; on the contrary与此相反; nevertheless然而; compared to与……相比; in contrast to与……形成对比 4.递进 even甚至; besides除了……之外(还); what’s more还有; so…that…如此……以至于……; moreover并且; furthermore此外; in addition另外; worse still=what’s worse=to make matters worse更糟糕的是 5.例证 that is to say也就是说; namely即; as a matter of fact/in fact事实上; for example/for instance例如 6.强调 especially特别; indeed确实; at least至少; at most最多; not at all根本不; or rather更确切地说; particularly特别地 7.因果 thanks to多亏了; as a result结果; because of/as a result of/on account of/due to/owing to因为; for this reason由于这个原因 8.总结 in short总之; generally speaking一般来说; in my opinion/view在我看来; briefly/in brief总之; as far as I’m concerned在我看来; as you know正如你所知道的; as is known to all众所周知; to sum up=to summarize=in summary/to conclude总之 【典例鉴赏】 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 It’s the first day of school and you have to find the perfect clothes to make a good impression. Luckily for me, I don’t have this problem: my private school requires I wear a uniform. Some may think this is not a good idea, but I think it is very positive. In school,one of the most important things is your style. The more you have, the more popular you will probably be. With uniforms, there’s no discrimination (歧视) because of what you’re wearing. Everyone is united under the same style. Clothing often reflects who you are. In most schools,there are groups of students who dress alike. You may even avoid a particular person because of what they are wearing. Uniforms require students to get to know each other by finding out who they really are. There are many styles of clothing, some appropriate (合适的) for school and others not. Peers and the media pressure us to dress and look a certain way. Some clothing contains logos (标志) promoting drugs, alcohol or even violence. Since some students want to fit in and be cool, they tend to wear this type of clothing. In most school systems, however, it is not allowed. Uniforms help remove these problems. All students look similar. They all fit in. There are no distractions (使人分心的事物). Uniforms allow students to concentrate on learning instead of what they are wearing. Money also plays a big part in the clothing we wear. Not all styles are affordable. Some students may even feel pressured to steal to get the right clothing. Although uniforms are initially expensive, they can be worn for years, making them cost less than regular clothes. I believe uniforms help unite us in a common goal:to do well in school. They are a symbol of our unity. They make it clear to everyone that we are more than just our clothes:we are all individuals. 第一步　思路点拨 第二步　遣词造句 ●Ⅰ 核心词汇 1.　　　　　　　　　　　 穿校服  2.　　　　　　　　　 集中注意力  3.　　　　　　　　　　　　 一大笔钱  4.　　　　　　　　　 提醒……  5.　　　　　　　　　 而不是  ●Ⅱ 连词成句 1.在我看来,穿校服有很多好处。 As far as I’m concerned, 　　　　　　　　　　　has many benefits.  2.穿校服不但可以帮助消除歧视,还可以展示学生的本性。 Wearing school uniforms 　　　　　　　　　　(to) get rid of discrimination, but 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.  3.校服有利于学生避免一些不合适的服装风格,并帮助他们专注于学习而不是时尚。 School uniforms benefit students by avoiding some inappropriate clothing styles, and help them 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.  4.校服很耐穿,能为学生节约一大笔钱。 School uniforms withstand wear and tear, so they can 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　for students.  5.校服还能提醒学生他们在学校里的共同目标。 School uniforms also 　　　　　　　　　　　their common goal in school.  ●Ⅲ 句式升级 1.用“be of+名词”结构改写句1     2.用“not only…, but also…”的倒装句式改写句2       3.用动词-ing形式短语作结果状语改写句4     【连贯成文】       【活学活用】 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Of the thousands of different kinds of animals that exist in the world, man has learned to make friends with an enormous number. Some are pets, and offer him companionship; some give protection; and some do hard work which man cannot do for himself. Dogs, which serve man in all three capacities, are found in various species in all countries of the world. The husky can live in the cold polar regions, and the Saluki is at home in the hottest parts of Central Africa. The people of certain countries are dependent on the camel for their very lives. In the West Indies, the little donkey, strong and sure-footed, carrying heavy loads even in mountainous places, is a familiar sight. Trained and tamed for many generations, domestic (驯养的) animals are not accustomed to wandering in search of food and shelter. They look to their masters to provide for their needs, and as long as these are supplied, they are content to do what their masters require. All domestic animals need proper food. It must be suitable for them, enough in quantity, fresh and clean. Some people feed a pet dog or cat on odds and ends of table scraps (吃剩的东西), and then wonder why the animal seems tired and dull. The quantity of food depends on the size of the animal and the amount of exercise it takes. Overfeeding is as bad as underfeeding. Containers for food and water must be washed regularly if the animal is to maintain good health. Even well-cared-for animals may sometimes fall ill. If this happens, the wise master seeks the best advice he can get. All sorts of medicines and treatments are available for sick animals, and in some countries, organisations exist to provide them free or at a cheap price. Useful, friendly, hard-working animals deserve to have some time and money spent on their health.       学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Period Six　　Writing Workshop & Other parts 【语言知识梳理】 词汇点睛 (1)①be summarized　②In　(2)make a summary of 【单元主题表达】 ●Ⅰ 1.wear school uniforms　2.focus on　3.a large sum of money 4.remind…of…　5.instead of ●Ⅱ 1.wearing school uniforms 2.can not only help; it can also show the true nature of students 3.focus on learning instead of fashion 4.save a large sum of money 5.remind students of ●Ⅲ 1.As far as I’m concerned, wearing school uniforms is of great benefit. 2.Not only can wearing school uniforms help (to) get rid of discrimination, but it can also show the true nature of students. 3.School uniforms withstand wear and tear, (thus) saving a large sum of money for students. 【连贯成文】 As far as I’m concerned, wearing school uniforms is of great benefit. (要点1) To start with, not only can wearing school uniforms help (to) get rid of discrimination, but it can also show the true nature of students. (要点2) In addition, school uniforms benefit students by avoiding some inappropriate clothing styles, and help them focus on learning instead of fashion. (要点3) Last but not least, school uniforms withstand wear and tear, (thus) saving a large sum of money for students. They also remind students of their common goal in school. (要点4) 【活学活用】 One possible version: A great many animals in the world have become man’s friends, keeping him company, protecting him and doing hard work for him. (要点1) Domestic animals aren’t used to seeking accommodation themselves and will do whatever their masters expect only if their needs are satisfied. (要点2) To keep them healthy, humans need to feed them on enough, fresh and clean food. (要点3) Animals becoming sick can get proper treatments, and their great qualities are well worthy of humans’ devotion and care. (要点4) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $