10 Unit 5 渐进写作微技能：优秀句子的表达技巧——定语从句的写作（1）（2）（课件PPT）-【满分思维】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册配套课件（北师大版）

渐进写作微技能:优秀句子的表达技巧 ——定语从句的写作(1)(2) 1 定语从句在句中作定语,修饰名词或代词,被修饰的名词或代词即 为先行词。定语从句通常出现在先行词之后,由关系词(关系代词或关 系副词)引出。在非限制性定语从句中,常用逗号将先行词和定语从句 分开,非限制性定语从句对先行词起补充说明的作用。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 2 ►写作中常用的几种定语从句 1.关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的定语从句是写 作的一大重点,尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文 中屡见不鲜。如: She heard a terrible noise, which brought her heart into her mouth. 她听到一声巨大的声响，这使得她的心提到了嗓子眼儿。 As mentioned in your letter, lack of sleep affects your studies. 正如你在信中提到的，睡眠不足影响你的学习。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 3 2.关系副词引导的定语从句 关系副词引导的定语从句是指由when, where, why引导的定语从句。 如: Our class is carrying out an activity where you can share your opinions about how to manage time properly. 我们班正在开展一项活动，在活动中你可以分享你关于如何正确管 理时间的意见。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 4 3.“介词+which/whom”引导的定语从句。如: It is a meaningful activity, from which we have benefited a lot. 这是一项有意义的活动，我们从中受益良多。 My classmates offered timely help when I was in trouble, for which I was grateful. 我陷入困境时，同学们及时伸出援手，对此我心怀感激。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 5 Ⅰ完成句子(每小题3分，满分18分) 1.The best gift _________________(我曾经收到的) is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, _________________________ (她给我带来它) when she returned from her holiday in the USA. I've ever received which she brought to me 2.We are eager to watch some English movies, _______________ ____________________(这能开阔我们的眼界). which can broaden our horizons 3.__________________(众所周知), there are different kinds of sports, but swimming is my favourite. As is known to all 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 6 4.As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, _________________________(这锻炼了我的身体). which builds up my body 5.In our class there are 50 students, _________________________ ___________________________(其中将近三十人赞成这个提议). of whom nearly 30 are in favour of/for this proposal 6.The past month was a wonderful time, _____________________ _____________________________________________________ (在此期间我交了许多朋友并且学到了许多关于美国文化的知识). during which I made many friends and learned a lot about American culture 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 渐进写作微技能 7 Ⅱ根据汉语提示完成下面的语篇(注意定语从句的用法)(每小题3分， 满分15分) Hello, everyone! It's a great pleasure for me to share my English learning experience with you. 1.___________________(正如谚语所说), “Interest is the best teacher.” 2._____________________________________(所以我做的 最重要的事情) is to get myself interested in English. I get to know how to study and try my best to build up my vocabulary, As the saying goes So the most important thing that I do 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 渐进写作微技能 8 3._______________________________________________________ (这很重要) in understanding all 4.__________________________ (我所读或听的). That is the reason 5._________________________ _______________________________(我为什么每天都会花一些时间 记重点单词). In a word, if you want to improve your English in high school, you should do lots of practice. Thanks for your listening. that I read or listen to why I spend some time memorizing key words every day 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 which is of great importance/which is very important 渐进写作微技能 1.定语从句是写作中常用的高级句型之一,考生在应用文写作和读后 续写中尝试灵活运用定语从句不仅能够丰富作文的语言和句式，为 作文增添亮点和采分点，而且能够彰显出作者较高的语言素养,无形 中增加了印象得分。 2.简单句升级为定语从句的方法 在写作时我们可采用“三步法”写出定语从句。 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 渐进写作微技能 10 【示例】 第一步:写出两个简单句。 ①The film was really good. ②I saw it last night. 第二步:在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇:the film。 第三步:用句②充当定语从句,the film为先行词,指物,句②中的代词it 指代the film,且在句子中作宾语,故用which或that作引导词或省略引 导词。 The film (which/that) I saw last night was really good. 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 渐进写作微技能 11 Ⅲ用定语从句翻译句子(每小题3分，满分15分) 1.这是我祖母以前住过的屋子。 This is the room ___________________________________________. in which/where my grandmother used to live 2.我们昨天晚上看的电影非常令人鼓舞。 The film ______________________________________________. (that/which) we saw last night was very inspiring 3.这是我们应该记住的一些实用的窍门。 These are some practical tips _______________________________ _____. (that/which) we should keep in mind 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 渐进写作微技能 12 4.他们没有取笑我,这让我没有那么尴尬和沮丧。 They didn't make fun of me, ________________________________ __________. which made me less embarrassed and upset 5.她是一名知识渊博的博主,从她那儿我们可以学到很多。 She is a blogger of much knowledge ________________________ __________. from whom we can learn a lot 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 渐进写作微技能 13 Ⅳ 根据汉语提示完成下面的语篇(注意定语从句的用法)(每小题3分， 满分30分) I have a family 1._______________________________ (不大但温暖). In my family there are three people 2.___________ __________________________(他们是我父亲、我母亲和我). My father is a young man 3.____________________________ _________(在医院工作很努力). He likes playing football, 4.___________________(这是他的爱好). He also likes to read novels 5.________________________________________(由著名作家写的). which/that is not big, but warm who are my father, my mother and I who/that works very hard in a hospital which is his hobby which/that were written by famous writers 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 渐进写作微技能 14 My mother is a young woman who works in the same middle school 6._____________(和我学习所在的). She teaches maths in our school which is the best in our city. She likes watching TV plays which are acted by famous stars, such as Chen Daoming, Li Xuejian and so on. She often goes to the park 7.________________________(离我们家近的), 8._____________ _________________________(那里的花儿五颜六色). I am a boy who studies in a middle school. I am very clever. as I study in which is near our home where/in which flowers are colourful 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 渐进写作微技能 And I like the NBA Games programme 9.___________________ __________________________________________(在这个节目里著 名的球员熟练地打篮球). This is my family, 10._________________________(既温暖又 幸福). in which/where the famous players play the basketball skilfully which is warm and happy 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 渐进写作微技能 $