11 Unit 4 读后续写微技能：解读文本,梳理脉络（课件PPT）-【满分思维】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册配套课件（北师大版）

读后续写微技能:解读文本,梳理脉络 1 读后续写题型是基础英语考查进入“重阅读,强输出,讲思维”时代 的标志。读后续写是在阅读的基础上,以自己的思维方式,“输出”一篇 和原文在语言、情节、基调、主题等方面一致的文章,其中最基础也 最重要的一步就是——解读文本,梳理脉络。所谓“解读”,既不是词汇、 语法、翻译全面兼顾的精读,也不是只理解文章主旨大意的速读,而是 要以梳理脉络为目标的“跳读”。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 2 续写的原文部分基本都是以记叙文形式出现的一个不太完整的 故事。考生要在有限的时间内,准确找出故事发生的时间(when)、地 点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和进展(how),并在此 基础上理清故事的发展脉络,领悟文章的主题。 主题是文章的灵魂,贯穿文章始末,对情节的发展有指向性。深刻 准确领悟文章的主题可以帮助考生构思续写部分的大致框架,推断故 事结局的基调,从而保证原文和续写内容的高度一致性! 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 【试题分析】 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成 一篇完整的短文。 My husband and I got to experience a total stranger's kindness and generosity first-hand during a 10-day trip across the High Atlas Mountains and the Sahara Desert. On our second-to-last day in Morocco, we happily took a trip to Essaouira, an old and beautiful seaside town on the Atlantic coast. During the journey there, we stopped at an 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 4 Argan cooperative, where we got to taste some Argan oil and honey. After that, we headed for where we stayed. We arrived at our small guesthouse in Essaouira at around dinnertime, and on our way to a local restaurant, my husband started to feel unwell. He went back to our guesthouse while I had dinner with some friends. When I got back to our guesthouse after dinner, I found my husband sitting on the bathroom floor, and looking very pale. He had been sick about six times in an hour. 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 He spent the rest of the night in the bathroom, getting very familiar with the house's pipe. Our main suspect was the Argan honey—it probably didn't agree with him. At about 4 am, my husband finally managed to leave the bathroom and crawl into bed. He was very weak and dehydrated (脱水的), so I went down to the reception to buy a bottle of water. When I got to the lobby (门厅), I found a young man behind the desk, who didn't look older than 18, and explained to him that my husband was sick and that I needed to buy some bottled water for him. 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 Our house was very small and basic and didn't have a restaurant or cafe. The young man informed me that they didn't sell any drinks at the house, so I asked him where the nearest shop was. I looked out of the window and my heart started to race. I didn't fancy risking going into the unfamiliar streets of the Medina in the dark, all by myself. In fact, I was afraid of it. 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 注意: 续写词数应为150个左右。 Paragraph 1: Instead of giving me directions to the nearest shop, the young man asked me to wait for him there. _________________ Paragraph 2: I handed him a 50-dirham note (about 5 EUR) for the water. ______________________________________________________________ 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 8 【解读文本】 解读文本要根据记叙文的六要素来确定何时(when)、何地 (where)、何人(who)、为何(why)、发生了何事(what),最后如何(how) 解决的。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 9 when on our second-to-last day (during a 10-day trip) in Morocco where in Morocco (across the High Atlas Mountains and the Sahara Desert) who my husband and I, a young man what We got to experience a total stranger's kindness and generosity first-hand why My husband was sick and I needed to buy some bottled water for him but they didn't sell any drinks at the house how ? 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 10 【分析文章】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和她的丈夫在为期10天的穿 越高阿特拉斯山脉和撒哈拉沙漠的旅行中, 丈夫生病脱水,作者需要 去买水却不敢在黑暗的陌生街道行走。后来一位陌生的年轻人帮助 了她,并且不需要任何报酬。这让作者亲身体验了一个完全陌生的人 的善良和慷慨。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 11 【梳理脉络】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“那个年轻人没有告诉我怎么去最近的商店, 而是让我在那里等他。”可知,第一段可描写这个陌生的年轻人帮作者 去买水。 ②由第二段首句内容“我递给他一张50迪拉姆(约合5欧元)的钞票作 为买水的钱。”可知,第二段可描写作者想感谢那位年轻人,但他拒绝了。 2.续写线索:陌生的年轻人帮忙买水—支付水费—年轻人拒绝—感悟。 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 12 【参考答案】 Instead of giving me directions to the nearest shop, the young man asked me to wait for him there. He popped outside and 1.______________________________(很快消失在黑暗中). I was wondering what he would do when he appeared in about 15 minutes 2.______________(气喘吁吁地), 3.______________________ ________(拿着一大瓶水). He gave me the bottle and asked me to give my husband some water as soon as possible. You couldn't imagine 4.__________________________________________ _______________________(当我在门口看到他时我如释重负). disappeared in the dark quickly out of breath carrying a large bottle of water the relief that washed over me when I saw him in the doorway 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 13 I handed him a 50-dirham note (about 5 EUR) for the water. But he wouldn't accept any money for it despite my insistence. I had been up all night 5._________________________ ________(担心着我的丈夫), but the last thing I wanted to do was walk through unfamiliar streets in the dark. The young man helped me 6.___________________________________(没有指望任 何回报). I was so grateful for the kindness from a total stranger on a helpless night. worrying about my husband without expecting anything in return 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 读后续写微技能 14 $