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专题11 应用文写作
(一)
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing? Our class is going to hold a class meeting themed “Success” recently. I’m writing to share some details with you and invite you to take part in it.
The class meeting will be held on this Friday afternoon at 3 p.m. in our classroom, which is located on the second floor of the main building. Our agenda includes a brief introduction to different definitions of success, followed by group discussions where we will share personal stories and insights on how to achieve success. To make it more engaging, we also have prepared a short speech by our esteemed teacher, Mrs. Wang, on the essence of success.
We would appreciate it very much if you could join in the meeting and express your ideas. Please let me know if you can make it so we can save you a seat.
Looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade Two at Hongxing High School. I am writing to invite you to participate in an environmental education activity with the theme “Only One Earth,” which will be held in our school next Friday.
The activity includes a lecture on environmental protection, a workshop on recycling, and a tree-planting event. The aim is to raise our awareness of environmental issues and encourage us to take action to protect our planet. I believe that this event, which offers a great chance to learn and communicate, will be of great benefit to you.
I would be delighted if you could join us. Please let me know if you are interested.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities. These include a lecture on plastic pollution, a workshop on how to reuse plastics, and a clean-up campaign. I have been assigned to help organize the clean-up campaign. We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find. I’m really looking forward to this opportunity.
I hope you can also participate in similar activities in your area to help protect our planet.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a senior two student from Hongxing Middle School. Next Saturday, our school will organize a volunteer activity named “Beautifying the Homeland” in the community. The activity will start at 9:00 a.m. and last about 4 hours. We’ll plant flowers, clean up the community, and decorate some public areas.
I sincerely invite you to join us. It’s a great opportunity to contribute to the community and have a meaningful experience. I believe you’ll enjoy it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m so excited to hear about your school trip to Beijing! I highly recommend choosing the “Beijing Central Axis” walking tour.
This route offers a wonderful journey through China’s rich history and traditional architecture, stretching from the Bell Tower all the way to Tiananmen Square. Walking along the axis, you’ll experience the grandeur of ancient Chinese urban planning and culture firsthand.
While 798 ArtDist is modern and creative, the Central Axis better showcases Beijing’s identity as a historic capital. It’s both educational and inspiring — perfect for international students.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I understand your current situation as I’ve been there too. Once, I was so absorbed in mobile games and short videos that my grades dropped and my eyesight worsened.
To overcome this, I set specific times for using my phone and stuck to them strictly. Also, I replaced phone time with physical activities and reading. These changes gradually helped me regain control.
Why not give it a try? Set boundaries and find healthier hobbies. I believe you can do it!
Best,
Li Hua
(八)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m absolutely thrilled to accept your invitation to visit a park in Beijing this weekend. I highly recommend Ditan Park, an ideal destination that blends history and autumn beauty perfectly.
As an ancient imperial altar, it boasts a 300-meter golden ginkgo avenue. The leaves flutter gently in the breeze, creating a magical view. We can wander leisurely, take photos for memory and chat at ease while enjoying the peaceful surroundings and traditional pavilions. It’ll be a relaxing and unforgettable time.
Eagerly looking forward to sharing this wonderful experience with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to have helped you with your survey. The results show that about 40% of my classmates think social media has a positive impact on interpersonal communication, as it makes it easier to keep in touch with friends and family. About 70% believe it has a negative effect, as it may lead to less face-to-face communication. As for me, I think social media has more positive effects. It allows us to connect with people from all over the world and share our experiences. However, we should also be aware of its drawbacks and use it properly.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in outstanding figures in contemporary China. I’d like to introduce Zhong Nanshan to you.
Zhong is a renowned respiratory expert. During the COVID-19 pandemic, he, at an advanced age, fearlessly rushed to the front-line. His professional advice and calm leadership were crucial in controlling the spread of the virus, saving countless lives. His dedication and self-sacrifice have deeply influenced me. They inspire me to strive for excellence in my studies and be ready to contribute to society when needed.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Jim,
Long time no see. How’s everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity called “Green Campus”. I would like to invite you to participate in this activity.
On the morning of the activity, we will invite some experts to give lectures on environmental protection. In the afternoon, we will plant trees and clean the campus to put our ideas into practice.
I am very interested in this activity and I believe that you will also like it. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Smart Cardboard Car” contest! The tech festival lasted three days, with the cardboard car contest as the highlight on the final day. The rule was simple: use only cardboard and eco-friendly glue to build a car that can carry one person and move smoothly for 20 meters.
Our success mainly comes from two things. First, we divided tasks clearly — some designed the structure, others tested its stability. Second, we turned to our physics teacher for advice on balancing weight and reducing friction. That’s how we stood out!
I’ll send you some photos later. Feel free to ask more questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】Dear Professor Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Two of our school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to give a lecture titled “How to Learn English Efficiently”.
The lecture will be given in our school lecture hall next Friday afternoon. The main purpose of it is to help students learn practical English learning strategies, as many of us still struggle with inefficient methods. We hope the lecture can cover three key parts: how to learn English effectively, how to increase interest in English learning, and how to develop self-directed learning skills. The lecture is expected to last about 90 minutes.
We would be extremely grateful if you could accept our invitation. Please let us know if you have any schedule conflicts.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(六)
【答案】Dear Ms Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to be a judge for our upcoming English speech contest themed “The Secrets of Success”.
The contest will take place in the school hall at 2 pm next Friday. More than 20 students from all grades will participate, sharing unique perspectives on success. As a judge, you’ll evaluate contestants based on speech content, language accuracy and delivery skills. We’d be honored if you could give a 3-minute concluding speech — sharing your valuable insights on success and practical suggestions for the students would be highly appreciated.
We truly hope you can join us. Please let us know your decision at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in the debate held by our Students’ Union. The topic “Whether middle school students can use AI to finish homework” sparked a heated discussion.
The pro side argued AI saves time for difficult tasks, helping us focus on weak points. It also broadens our thinking by offering diverse solutions. However, the con side held that AI makes us lazy, reducing independent thinking. Over-reliance might even harm our problem-solving ability.
In my view, AI is a tool. We can use it to check answers or get hints, but shouldn’t rely on it entirely. It’s vital to balance AI assistance with our own efforts.
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well! I’m writing to invite you to attend the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held by our school — an event I’m sure you’ll love as a fan of different cultures.
The fair will take place from 9:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m. next Saturday in our school’s gymnasium. There will be a variety of wonderful activities. You can watch artisans show paper-cutting and calligraphy skills, try on traditional Hanfu and take photos, or taste classic snacks like rice cakes and sugar paintings. What’s more, there will be a tea ceremony performance and a Guzheng music show, which will let you feel the charm of traditional Chinese art up close.
I know you’ve always been curious about Chinese culture, and this fair is a perfect chance to experience it in person. You can not only see and touch these cultural treasures but also interact with other students who share the same interest. I’d be happy to be your guide and explain the stories behind each activity to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(九)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your classmates. It’s never easy when misunderstandings occur. But don’t worry, I’m here for you.
I have some suggestions. Try having an open and honest conversation with your classmates. Explain how you’re feeling and listen to their points as well. It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm. If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help. They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
I hope this helps. Just remember that conflicts are totally normal, but with a little patience and understanding, you are sure to work through it. Take care.
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m excited to tell you that our school is hosting a Science and Technology Festival next month. It will take place from the 15th to the 17th, featuring various activities like robot shows, science experiments, and lectures by experts.
I sincerely invite you to join us. It’s a great opportunity to experience the charm of science and technology firsthand. You’ll have a chance to interact with students and teachers, and even participate in some hands-on activities.
Don’t miss this chance! I’m looking forward to your reply and hope to see you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
(十一)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share my favorite figure with you — Yuan Longping, a renowned Chinese scientist.
Known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”, he devoted his life to developing high-yield rice. His research helped feed billions of people worldwide, easing food shortages. What impresses me most is his perseverance and selflessness, as he kept working in fields even in old age.
Yuan is a role model who teaches me to pursue goals with dedication. I truly admire him for his great contributions to humanity.
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, president of the School English Drama Club. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to our Club Culture Festival, which will be held next Friday from 2:00 to 5:00 PM on the school playground.
This grand event will gather over 20 clubs, with each presenting unique activities like cultural performances, hands-on workshops and creative exhibitions. Our drama club will stage two short classic English plays, followed by an interactive workshop — students can practice famous lines, learn basic acting techniques and even try improvisation. Your professional insights and guidance would be incredibly valuable to us, and we’re eager to hear your feedback on our performances.
We’d be thrilled to have you join this wonderful cultural feast. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re visiting Beijing! I highly recommend the Summer Palace. It’s a UNESCO World Heritage Site and one of China’s most beautiful imperial gardens.
The park features Kunming Lake, Longevity Hill, and traditional pavilions, offering stunning views. Built in the Qing Dynasty, it reflects classical Chinese architecture and royal culture. You can boat on the lake or walk along the Long Corridor, which is 728 meters with painted artworks!
Don’t miss the Marble Boat and Seventeen-Arch Bridge! It’s perfect for a half-day trip. I’m sure you will have a happy trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear you’re joining the “Campus Upgrade Tips” contest. I’d like to suggest setting up outdoor shared study corners on campus—they’re practical and popular.
You could place weather-proof desks, chairs and solar-powered charging ports in quiet lawn areas or near libraries. Add some potted plants for a nicer atmosphere. This way, students can study outdoors while enjoying fresh air, which helps relieve stress from indoor classes. It also encourages social interaction among peers who share the space.
This idea is easy to implement and meets students’ daily needs. Hope it helps you win the contest!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you asked about the celebrity I admire most — Tu Youyou, a renowned Chinese scientist.
Born in 1930, she has devoted over 60 years to medical research, focusing on combining traditional Chinese medicine with modern science. In 2015, she became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
What impresses me most is her perseverance and selflessness. For decades, she worked day and night in simple labs, overcoming equipment shortages and failures to find a malaria cure. Finally, she discovered artemisinin, which has saved over 6 million lives in Africa and Asia. Even in her 90s, she guides young researchers. Her story inspires me to keep going when facing challenges.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re preparing for a debate on whether group work is an essential part of classroom teaching. My stance is firmly in favor of group work, and here are my reasons.
Firstly, group work fosters collaboration skills, which are vital in today’s interconnected world. Through working together, students learn to communicate effectively, share ideas, and resolve conflicts. Secondly, it enhances critical thinking and problem-solving abilities. Different perspectives within a group can lead to more creative and comprehensive solutions to problems. Lastly, group work promotes a sense of belonging and reduces anxiety, as students feel supported by their peers.
In conclusion, group work is not only beneficial but also necessary for a well-rounded education. I hope my points are helpful to your debate preparation.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】 Campus Kindness Star
I’m Li Hua, a student from Hongxing High School. In my eyes, Zhang Wei is the campus kindness star.
Whenever classmates are in trouble, Zhang Wei is always the first to offer a hand. Last term, a new student struggled with math. Zhang Wei spent an hour every day explaining concepts until the student caught up. He also initiated a “Kindness Corner” where students can donate books and stationery to those in need.
His actions have deeply influenced me. I now actively participate in volunteer activities and always try to help others. Zhang Wei’s kindness shows that small acts can make a big difference.
(六)
【答案】Dear Chris,
I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you. Since you’re an enthusiast about reading, I believe you will be of great interest in this meaningful activity named BookCrossing.
BookCrossing is the practice of leaving a book in a public place to be picked up and read by others, who then do likewise. For one thing, the BookCrossing can motivate us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons. For another, it provides a good chance to make friends with like-minded people.
Our BookCrossing starts this Monday and will last for a week. When the time comes, you’ll be surprised to find terrific books at any places on campus. Of course, if you are in, you are supposed to share several books that are valuable and beneficial. To help others get a general knowledge of your book, your thoughtful introduction and helpful comments are warmly welcomed.
What are you waiting for? I’m looking forward to your participation and you are bound to love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题11应用文写作
基础必练
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京怀柔·期中)假设你是红星中学高二(1)班班长李华,学校正开展以“成功”为主题
的主题班会,你班想邀请国际部交换生Cris来参加班会,请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.班会时间和地点:
2.内容和活动安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京丰台·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校将于下周五举办以“只有一个地
球”为主题的环保教育活动。请你用英文写一封电子邮件,邀请你校交换生Jm参加此活动。
内容包括:1.发出邀请:2.介绍活动安排和目的
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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(三)
(25-26高二上·北京平谷中学.期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet
vs.Plastics”,你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件,询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复,
内容包括:
1.活动内容:
2.你的任务。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京铁路第二中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。下周六你校将在社区组织开展
“美化家园”的志愿者活动。请给你校交换生J写一封邮件,邀请他参加活动,内容包括:
1.活动相关信息:
2.发出参加邀请。
注意:1.词数不少于80:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim
Yours,
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(五)
(25-26高二上·北京顺义牛栏山第一中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在
策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式:
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右:
(2)开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第五中学期中)你的英国朋友Ji所在的国际学校下周五组织学生在北京旅行,有两
条线路可以选择:“中轴线徒步”或者“798艺术区游览”。J来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,
内容包括:
1.你建议的线路:
2.你的理由;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:北京中轴线Beijing Central Axis
798艺术区
798 ArtDist
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Yours,
LiHua
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(七)
(25-26高二上·北京第十五中学.期中)假如你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国好友J最近迷恋上了
用手机打游戏,看短视频,无法自拔,给你写信求助,请你回信。
内容包括:
1.对他的现状表示理解;
2.你也有类似的经历,手机如何影响了你的学习和健康:
2.提出建议,帮助对方改掉“手机控”(phone addict)的习惯。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(25-26高二上·北京汇文中学教育集团-度·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华,秋意正浓,你的英国
交换生好友Ji发来邮件,想在周末邀你共游北京的公园。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1接受邀请:
2.建议的目的地及原因。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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进阶提升
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京北京师范大学第二附属中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近日,你的英国
好友Jim正在进行一项关于“社交媒体对人际交往整体影响”的调研,你协助他对你班同学开展了调查,
结果如下面所示。请用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1描述调查结果;
2.说明你自己的选择并解释理由。
社交媒体对人际交往的整体影响
(人数百分比)
80
65
60
40
35
20
0
积极
消极
注意:词数100左右
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京第十一中学顺义学校·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jm在给
你的邮件中提到他对中国当代各领域的杰出人物产生了浓厚兴趣,并请你介绍一位你十分敬佩的中国当代
人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的主要贡献:
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3.该人物对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高二上·北京陈经纶中学期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你们学校下个月将举办以“绿色
校园”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他一起参加。内容包括:
1.系列活动的安排和内容:
2.你打算参加的活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京八一学校·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国好友J在朋友圈看到你
们班在主题为“智造纸箱车”的科技节比赛中表现精彩,并取得优异成绩,对此他非常感兴趣,来信询问
相关信息,请用英文给他回信,内容包括:
1.介绍科技节的活动安排和比赛规则:
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2.分析取得优异成绩的原因。
提示词:智造纸箱车Smart Cardboard Car
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
(五)
(25-26高二上·北京顺义·期中)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,你所在学校拟在下周开一个“如何高
效地学习英语”的讲座。请你根据以下要点给Jim教授写一封信,邀请他给学生做这次讲座。内容包括:
1.讲座时间地点及目的:
2.讲座内容。
参考词汇:策略strategy
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Professor Jim.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第三十五中学·期中)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次主题为
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“The Secrets of Success'的英语演讲比赛(speech contest),请你给学校外籍教师Smith女士写一封邀请邮件,
邀请她来担任评委并询问是否可以做一个3分钟总结发言(concluding speech)。邮件内容包括:
1.简单介绍演讲比赛的情况(时间、地点、比赛主题、参赛选手等):
2.评委的主要工作职责:
3.建议她总结陈词的内容。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Smith.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(25-26高二上·北京第五十五中学期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。近期,你校学生会组织了一场
辩论赛,主题为“中学生是否可以借助AI完成作业”。你的英国笔友Jim从学校网站看到了相关信息,对
此很感兴趣,来信询问辩论赛的开展情况。请你用英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.正反双方的观点及理由:
2.你的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
8/15
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让教与学更高效
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(25-26高二上·北京大兴·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校将举办一场主题为“中国传统文化
体验”的展览活动(Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。请给你的英国交换生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀
请他她参加。邮件内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点:
2.活动的主要内容;
3.邀请他/她参与的原因。
注意:
1.词数不少于100词:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
(九)
(25-26高二上·北京师范大学附属中学-11月·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim
给你发来邮件,提及因为误解,他和同学产生了不愉快。请用英文给Jim回复邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解
2.你的建议:
Dear Jim,
9/15
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www.zxxk.com
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Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(25-26高二上·北京怀柔·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友
Jm写一封邮件,向他介绍活动情况并邀请他参加这次活动,内容包括:
1.介绍科技节的相关信息(时间,活动内容等);
2.邀请对方来参加。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
(十一)
(25-26高二上·北京师范大学燕化附属中学期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友J写
信询问你最喜爱的一位人物,请你回信,内容包括:
1、简单介绍该人物。
2、喜欢这个人物的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
10/15
函学科网
www.zxxk.com
让教与学更高效
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
(25-26高二上·北京中国人民大学附属中学~·期中)假设你是红星中学某社团社长李华。下周你校将举办
“社团文化节”(Club Culture Festival),请你用英文给外教Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加该活动,
内容包括:
1.介绍整体活动信息:
2.推荐你社当天的活动。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展培优
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京广渠门中学·期中)写作:你的朋友Jm要来北京游览,请你推荐一个值得游览的公园
请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一个公园;
2.说明推荐理由。
11/15
函学科网
www.zxxk.com
让教与学更高效
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京清华大学附属中学朝阳学校,期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jm打算参加其学校
举办的“Campus Upgrade Tips"'校园环境优化创意征集大赛,来信寻求你的建议。请你用英文给Jim写一封
回信,建议一项具体方案,内容要点包括:
1.说明优化做法:
2.说明理由。
注意:
词数不少于80词。
(三)
12115
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(25-26高二上·北京昌平.期中)假如你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国朋友Ji想了解你最钦佩的一
位名人。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.该人物的介绍;
2.你钦佩的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京海淀.期中)假设你是北大附中高二学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim近来正在为一场关于
“小组合作是否是课堂教学的必要部分”的辩论赛作准备,他来信询问你对于这一辩题的立场,请用英文
给他回信,内容包括:
1.陈述你的立场;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
13/15
函学科网
www.zxxk.com
让教与学更高效
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(25-26高二上·北京延庆·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。看到Teens Senior英文报面向高中生征
集Campus..Star为题目的文章,如sports,ats,innovation,.perseverance,kindness,.你非常感兴趣。请用英
文写一篇征文,介绍你心目中的校园之星,内容包括:
1.介绍你心目中的校园之星和他(她)的事迹;
2.他(她)对你的影响。
注意:
1.补全题目。
2.词数100左右。
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第八十中学-11月·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办
“图书漂流”(BookCrossing)活动一一将自己喜欢的图书放在学校任意公共场所,感兴趣的同学读完后
将书放回原处,让其继续漂流。请你给交换生Cis写一封邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括:
1.活动意义:
2.具体安排:
3.发出邀请。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.适当增减细节,使文章连贯:
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
14/15
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Yours,
Li Hua
15/15
专题11 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京怀柔·期中)假设你是红星中学高二(1)班班长李华,学校正开展以“成功”为主题的主题班会,你班想邀请国际部交换生Chris来参加班会,请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 班会时间和地点;
2. 内容和活动安排。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing? Our class is going to hold a class meeting themed “Success” recently. I’m writing to share some details with you and invite you to take part in it.
The class meeting will be held on this Friday afternoon at 3 p.m. in our classroom, which is located on the second floor of the main building. Our agenda includes a brief introduction to different definitions of success, followed by group discussions where we will share personal stories and insights on how to achieve success. To make it more engaging, we also have prepared a short speech by our esteemed teacher, Mrs. Wang, on the essence of success.
We would appreciate it very much if you could join in the meeting and express your ideas. Please let me know if you can make it so we can save you a seat.
Looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Chris写信邀请他来参加班会。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
不同的:different→diverse
获得:achieve→obtain
想法:idea→thought
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our class is going to hold a class meeting themed “Success” recently.
拓展句:Our class is going to hold a class meeting whose theme is “Success” recently.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The class meeting will be held on this Friday afternoon at 3 p.m. in our classroom, which is located on the second floor of the main building.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Please let me know if you can make it so we can save you a seat.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京丰台·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校将于下周五举办以“只有一个地球”为主题的环保教育活动。请你用英文写一封电子邮件,邀请你校交换生Jim参加此活动。
内容包括: 1. 发出邀请;2. 介绍活动安排和目的
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade Two at Hongxing High School. I am writing to invite you to participate in an environmental education activity with the theme “Only One Earth,” which will be held in our school next Friday.
The activity includes a lecture on environmental protection, a workshop on recycling, and a tree-planting event. The aim is to raise our awareness of environmental issues and encourage us to take action to protect our planet. I believe that this event, which offers a great chance to learn and communicate, will be of great benefit to you.
I would be delighted if you could join us. Please let me know if you are interested.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以红星中学高二学生李华的身份,用英文写一封电子邮件,邀请交换生Jim参加学校下周五举办的以“只有一个地球”为主题的环保教育活动,并介绍活动安排和目的。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
参与:participate in → partake in
主题:theme → subject
目标:aim → objective
提高:raise → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity includes a lecture on environmental protection, a workshop on recycling, and a tree-planting event.
拓展句:The activity has three sections, which include a lecture on environmental protection, a workshop on recycling, and a tree-planting event.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am writing to invite you to participate in an environmental education activity with the theme “Only One Earth,” which will be held in our school next week.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would be delighted if you could join us.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高二上·北京平谷中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”,你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件,询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的任务。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities. These include a lecture on plastic pollution, a workshop on how to reuse plastics, and a clean-up campaign. I have been assigned to help organize the clean-up campaign. We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find. I’m really looking forward to this opportunity.
I hope you can also participate in similar activities in your area to help protect our planet.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就你的笔友Jim发来邮件,询问你校在今年世界地球日将举办以“Planet vs. Plastics”为主题的活动一事,用英文给他回复,介绍此项活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴:be glad to→ be thrilled to
集中精力于:focus on → concentrate on
一系列的:a series of→ a sequence of
帮助:help→ assist
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
拓展句:It gives me immense pleasure to inform you about the forthcoming event scheduled at our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find(运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京铁路第二中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。下周六你校将在社区组织开展“美化家园”的志愿者活动。请给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加活动,内容包括:
1. 活动相关信息;
2. 发出参加邀请。
注意:1. 词数不少于80;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a senior two student from Hongxing Middle School. Next Saturday, our school will organize a volunteer activity named “Beautifying the Homeland” in the community. The activity will start at 9:00 a.m. and last about 4 hours. We’ll plant flowers, clean up the community, and decorate some public areas.
I sincerely invite you to join us. It’s a great opportunity to contribute to the community and have a meaningful experience. I believe you’ll enjoy it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加“美化家园”的志愿者活动,应首先提供活动的相关信息,再发出邀请。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
开始:start→begin, commence
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely/honestly
机会:opportunity→chance
有意义的:meaningful→rewarding
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The activity will start at 9:00 a.m. and last about 4 hours.
拓展句:The activity, starting at 9:00 a.m., will last about 4 hours.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Next Saturday, our school will organize a volunteer activity named “Beautifying the Homeland” in the community. (运用了过去分词named作后置定语)
[高分句型2] It’s a great opportunity to contribute to the community and have a meaningful experience. (运用了it作形式主语、不定式to contribute…作真正的主语)
(五)
(25-26高二上·北京顺义牛栏山第一中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
提供:offer→provide
开展:carry out→conduct
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句:Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第五中学·期中)你的英国朋友Jim所在的国际学校下周五组织学生在北京旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“中轴线徒步”或者“798艺术区游览”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:北京中轴线 Beijing Central Axis
798艺术区 798 ArtDist
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m so excited to hear about your school trip to Beijing! I highly recommend choosing the “Beijing Central Axis” walking tour.
This route offers a wonderful journey through China’s rich history and traditional architecture, stretching from the Bell Tower all the way to Tiananmen Square. Walking along the axis, you’ll experience the grandeur of ancient Chinese urban planning and culture firsthand.
While 798 ArtDist is modern and creative, the Central Axis better showcases Beijing’s identity as a historic capital. It’s both educational and inspiring — perfect for international students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Jim回信,针对其学校北京旅行的两条线路“中轴线徒步”或“798艺术区游览”给出建议,并说明理由。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
丰富的:rich→abundant
宏伟:grandeur→magnificence
展示:showcase→display
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This route offers a wonderful journey through China’s rich history and traditional architecture, stretching from the Bell Tower all the way to Tiananmen Square.
拓展句:This route, which stretches from the Bell Tower all the way to Tiananmen Square, offers a wonderful journey through China’s rich history and traditional architecture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Walking along the axis, you’ll experience the grandeur of ancient Chinese urban planning and culture firsthand.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】While 798 ArtDist is modern and creative, the Central Axis better showcases Beijing’s identity as a historic capital.(运用while引导的让步状语从句)
(七)
(25-26高二上·北京第十五中学·期中)假如你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国好友Jim最近迷恋上了用手机打游戏,看短视频,无法自拔,给你写信求助,请你回信。
内容包括:
1. 对他的现状表示理解;
2. 你也有类似的经历,手机如何影响了你的学习和健康;
2. 提出建议,帮助对方改掉“手机控”(phone addict)的习惯。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I understand your current situation as I’ve been there too. Once, I was so absorbed in mobile games and short videos that my grades dropped and my eyesight worsened.
To overcome this, I set specific times for using my phone and stuck to them strictly. Also, I replaced phone time with physical activities and reading. These changes gradually helped me regain control.
Why not give it a try? Set boundaries and find healthier hobbies. I believe you can do it!
Best,
Li Hua
【导语】
这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。要求考生提出建议,帮助你的英国好友Jim改掉“手机控”的习惯。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
情况:situation→circumstance
沉迷于:be absorb in→be addict to
下降:drop→decline
设定:set→establish
2. 句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句:To overcome this, I set specific times for using my phone and stuck to them strictly.
拓展句:In order to overcome this issue, I established specific time slots for using my phone, which I adhered to rigorously.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I understand your current situation as I’ve been there too.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Once, I was so absorbed in mobile games and short videos that my grades dropped and my eyesight worsened.(运用了that引导的结果状语从句)
(八)
(25-26高二上·北京汇文中学教育集团-度·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华,秋意正浓,你的英国交换生好友Jim发来邮件,想在周末邀你共游北京的公园。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.接受邀请;
2.建议的目的地及原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m absolutely thrilled to accept your invitation to visit a park in Beijing this weekend. I highly recommend Ditan Park, an ideal destination that blends history and autumn beauty perfectly.
As an ancient imperial altar, it boasts a 300-meter golden ginkgo avenue. The leaves flutter gently in the breeze, creating a magical view. We can wander leisurely, take photos for memory and chat at ease while enjoying the peaceful surroundings and traditional pavilions. It’ll be a relaxing and unforgettable time.
Eagerly looking forward to sharing this wonderful experience with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就英国交换生Jim想在周末邀请共游北京的公园一事写出回信,包括接受邀请和建议的目的地及原因。
【解析】
词汇积累
推荐:recommend → advocate
融合:blend → integrate
漫步:wander → stroll
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m absolutely thrilled to accept your invitation to visit a park in Beijing this weekend.
拓展句:Regarding your invitation to visit a park in Beijing this weekend, I’m utterly overjoyed to accept it.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I highly recommend Ditan Park, an ideal destination that blends history and autumn beauty perfectly. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The leaves flutter gently in the breeze, creating a magical view. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京北京师范大学第二附属中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近日,你的英国好友 Jim正在进行一项关于“社交媒体对人际交往整体影响”的调研,你协助他对你班同学开展了调查,结果如下面所示。请用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.描述调查结果;
2.说明你自己的选择并解释理由。
注意:词数100左右
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to have helped you with your survey. The results show that about 40% of my classmates think social media has a positive impact on interpersonal communication, as it makes it easier to keep in touch with friends and family. About 70% believe it has a negative effect, as it may lead to less face-to-face communication. As for me, I think social media has more positive effects. It allows us to connect with people from all over the world and share our experiences. However, we should also be aware of its drawbacks and use it properly.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向英国好友Jim描述关于“社交媒体对人际交往整体影响”的调查结果,并说明自己的选择及理由。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
影响:impact → influence/effect
保持联系:keep in touch with → stay in touch with/connect with
意识到:be aware of → realize/recognize
缺点:drawback → disadvantage/shortcoming
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m glad to have helped you with your survey.
拓展句:I’m glad that I have helped you with your survey.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The results show that about 40% of my classmates think social media has a positive impact on interpersonal communication, as it makes it easier to keep in touch with friends and family. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句和从属连词as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] About 70% believe it has a negative effect, as it may lead to less face-to-face communication. (运用了从属连词as引导原因状语从句)
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京第十一中学顺义学校·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国当代各领域的杰出人物产生了浓厚兴趣,并请你介绍一位你十分敬佩的中国当代人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的主要贡献;
3.该人物对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in outstanding figures in contemporary China. I’d like to introduce Zhong Nanshan to you.
Zhong is a renowned respiratory expert. During the COVID-19 pandemic, he, at an advanced age, fearlessly rushed to the front-line. His professional advice and calm leadership were crucial in controlling the spread of the virus, saving countless lives. His dedication and self-sacrifice have deeply influenced me. They inspire me to strive for excellence in my studies and be ready to contribute to society when needed.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信,向他介绍一位自己十分敬佩的中国当代人物。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ show interest in
著名的:renowned→ famous
关键的:crucial→ critical
影响:influence→ affect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the COVID-19 pandemic, he, at an advanced age, fearlessly rushed to the front-line.
拓展句:During the COVID-19 pandemic, he, who was at an advanced age, fearlessly rushed to the front - line.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m delighted to know you’re interested in outstanding figures in contemporary China.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】They inspire me to strive for excellence in my studies and be ready to contribute to society when needed.(运用了并列谓语和状语从句的省略)
(三)
(25-26高二上·北京陈经纶中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你们学校下个月将举办以“绿色校园”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他一起参加。内容包括:
1.系列活动的安排和内容;
2.你打算参加的活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Long time no see. How’s everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity called “Green Campus”. I would like to invite you to participate in this activity.
On the morning of the activity, we will invite some experts to give lectures on environmental protection. In the afternoon, we will plant trees and clean the campus to put our ideas into practice.
I am very interested in this activity and I believe that you will also like it. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加“绿色校园”活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
喜欢:like→be fond of
参加:participate in→take part in
专家:expert→specialist
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity called “Green Ecological Campus”.
拓展句:Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity, which is called “Green Ecological Campus”.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am very interested in this activity and I believe that you will also like it.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京八一学校·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国好友Jim在朋友圈看到你们班在主题为“智造纸箱车”的科技节比赛中表现精彩,并取得优异成绩,对此他非常感兴趣,来信询问相关信息,请用英文给他回信,内容包括:
1.介绍科技节的活动安排和比赛规则;
2.分析取得优异成绩的原因。
提示词:智造纸箱车 Smart Cardboard Car
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Smart Cardboard Car” contest! The tech festival lasted three days, with the cardboard car contest as the highlight on the final day. The rule was simple: use only cardboard and eco-friendly glue to build a car that can carry one person and move smoothly for 20 meters.
Our success mainly comes from two things. First, we divided tasks clearly — some designed the structure, others tested its stability. Second, we turned to our physics teacher for advice on balancing weight and reducing friction. That’s how we stood out!
I’ll send you some photos later. Feel free to ask more questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写信,介绍科技节的活动安排和比赛规则并分析取得优异成绩的原因。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
对……感兴趣:be interested in→be keen on
突出:stand out→stick out
清晰地:clearly→distinctly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, we turned to our physics teacher for advice on balancing weight and reducing friction.
拓展句:Second, it was our physics teacher that we turned to for advice on balancing weight and reducing friction.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
The rule was simple: use only cardboard and eco-friendly glue to build a car that can carry one person and move smoothly for 20 meters.(运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Second, we turned to our physics teacher for advice on balancing weight and reducing friction.(运用了动名词短语作宾语)
(五)
(25-26高二上·北京顺义·期中)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,你所在学校拟在下周开一个“如何高效地学习英语”的讲座。请你根据以下要点给Jim教授写一封信,邀请他给学生做这次讲座。内容包括:
1.讲座时间地点及目的;
2.讲座内容。
参考词汇:策略strategy
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Professor Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Professor Jim,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Two of our school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to give a lecture titled “How to Learn English Efficiently”.
The lecture will be given in our school lecture hall next Friday afternoon. The main purpose of it is to help students learn practical English learning strategies, as many of us still struggle with inefficient methods. We hope the lecture can cover three key parts: how to learn English effectively, how to increase interest in English learning, and how to develop self-directed learning skills. The lecture is expected to last about 90 minutes.
We would be extremely grateful if you could accept our invitation. Please let us know if you have any schedule conflicts.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席的身份给Jim教授写一封信,邀请他给学生做关于“如何高效地学习英语”的讲座,并说明讲座的时间地点、目的和内容。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely/earnestly
代表:on behalf of → represent
实用的:practical → useful
关键的:key → crucial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On behalf of my school, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to give a lecture titled “How to Learn English Efficiently”.
拓展句:On behalf of my school, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to give a lecture which is titled “How to Learn English Efficiently”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The main purpose of it is to help students learn practical English learning strategies, as many of us still struggle with inefficient methods.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】We hope the lecture can cover three key parts: how to learn English effectively, how to increase interest in English learning, and how to develop self-directed learning skills.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句)
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第三十五中学·期中)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次主题为“The Secrets of Success”的英语演讲比赛(speech contest),请你给学校外籍教师Smith女士写一封邀请邮件,邀请她来担任评委并询问是否可以做一个3分钟总结发言(concluding speech)。邮件内容包括:
1. 简单介绍演讲比赛的情况(时间、地点、比赛主题、参赛选手等);
2. 评委的主要工作职责;
3. 建议她总结陈词的内容。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to be a judge for our upcoming English speech contest themed “The Secrets of Success”.
The contest will take place in the school hall at 2 pm next Friday. More than 20 students from all grades will participate, sharing unique perspectives on success. As a judge, you’ll evaluate contestants based on speech content, language accuracy and delivery skills. We’d be honored if you could give a 3-minute concluding speech — sharing your valuable insights on success and practical suggestions for the students would be highly appreciated.
We truly hope you can join us. Please let us know your decision at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校外籍教师Smith女士写一封邀请邮件,邀请她来担任主题为“The Secrets of Success”英语演讲比赛的评委并询问是否可以做一个3分钟总结发言。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
真诚地:sincerely→ earnestly
观点:perspective→view
评估:evaluate→assess
珍贵的:valuable→precious
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to sincerely invite you to be a judge for our upcoming English speech contest themed “The Secrets of Success”.
拓展句:I’m writing to sincerely invite you to be a judge for our upcoming English speech contest, whose theme is “The Secrets of Success”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】More than 20 students from all grades will participate, sharing unique perspectives on success. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】We truly hope you can join us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(七)
(25-26高二上·北京第五十五中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。近期,你校学生会组织了一场辩论赛,主题为“中学生是否可以借助AI完成作业”。你的英国笔友Jim从学校网站看到了相关信息,对此很感兴趣,来信询问辩论赛的开展情况。请你用英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.正反双方的观点及理由;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in the debate held by our Students’ Union. The topic “Whether middle school students can use AI to finish homework” sparked a heated discussion.
The pro side argued AI saves time for difficult tasks, helping us focus on weak points. It also broadens our thinking by offering diverse solutions. However, the con side held that AI makes us lazy, reducing independent thinking. Over-reliance might even harm our problem-solving ability.
In my view, AI is a tool. We can use it to check answers or get hints, but shouldn’t rely on it entirely. It’s vital to balance AI assistance with our own efforts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信,介绍辩论赛的相关情况。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
帮助:help→assist
集中精力于:focus on→concentrate on
依赖:rely on→depend on
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I’m glad you’re interested in the debate held by our Students’ Union.
拓展句:I’m glad you’re interested in the debate that was held by our Students’ Union.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I’m glad you’re interested in the debate held by our Students’ Union.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
The pro side argued AI saves time for difficult tasks, helping us focus on weak points.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
(八)
(25-26高二上·北京大兴·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校将举办一场主题为“中国传统文化体验”的展览活动(Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。请给你的英国交换生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他/她参加。邮件内容包括:
1. 活动的时间、地点;
2. 活动的主要内容;
3. 邀请他/她参与的原因。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100词;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well! I’m writing to invite you to attend the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held by our school — an event I’m sure you’ll love as a fan of different cultures.
The fair will take place from 9:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m. next Saturday in our school’s gymnasium. There will be a variety of wonderful activities. You can watch artisans show paper-cutting and calligraphy skills, try on traditional Hanfu and take photos, or taste classic snacks like rice cakes and sugar paintings. What’s more, there will be a tea ceremony performance and a Guzheng music show, which will let you feel the charm of traditional Chinese art up close.
I know you’ve always been curious about Chinese culture, and this fair is a perfect chance to experience it in person. You can not only see and touch these cultural treasures but also interact with other students who share the same interest. I’d be happy to be your guide and explain the stories behind each activity to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国交换生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他/她参加你校将举办的一场主题为“中国传统文化体验”的展览活动(Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
爱好者:fan → enthusiast
各种各样的:a variety of → a wide range of
极好的:wonderful → marvelous
解释:explain → illustrate
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:You can not only see and touch these cultural treasures but also interact with other students who share the same interest.
拓展句:Not only can you see and touch these cultural treasures but also interact with other students who share the same interest.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to attend the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair held by our school — an event I’m sure you’ll love as a fan of different cultures.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】What’s more, there will be a tea ceremony performance and a Guzheng music show, which will let you feel the charm of traditional Chinese art up close.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(九)
(25-26高二上·北京师范大学附属中学-11月·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim给你发来邮件,提及因为误解,他和同学产生了不愉快。请用英文给Jim回复邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.你的建议;
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your classmates. It’s never easy when misunderstandings occur. But don’t worry, I’m here for you.
I have some suggestions. Try having an open and honest conversation with your classmates. Explain how you’re feeling and listen to their points as well. It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm. If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help. They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
I hope this helps. Just remember that conflicts are totally normal, but with a little patience and understanding, you are sure to work through it. Take care.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim回信,就他和同学因为误解而产生的不愉快问题表示理解并提出建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
解释:explain→account for
意识到:realize→be aware of
害怕的:afraid→scared
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.
拓展句: They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how you can handle the situation.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your classmates.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(十)
(25-26高二上·北京怀柔·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件,向他介绍活动情况并邀请他参加这次活动,内容包括:
1. 介绍科技节的相关信息(时间,活动内容等);
2. 邀请对方来参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m excited to tell you that our school is hosting a Science and Technology Festival next month. It will take place from the 15th to the 17th, featuring various activities like robot shows, science experiments, and lectures by experts.
I sincerely invite you to join us. It’s a great opportunity to experience the charm of science and technology firsthand. You’ll have a chance to interact with students and teachers, and even participate in some hands-on activities.
Don’t miss this chance! I’m looking forward to your reply and hope to see you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向英国朋友Jim介绍学校科技节的相关信息,并邀请他参加。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累:
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
以……为特征:feature → characterize
专家:expert → specialist
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:You’ll have a chance to interact with students and teachers, and even participate in some hands-on activities.
拓展句:You’ll have a chance where you can interact with students and teachers, and even participate in some hands-on activities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m excited to tell you that our school is hosting a Science and Technology Festival next month.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It will take place from the 15th to the 17th, featuring various activities like robot shows, science experiments, and lectures by experts.(运用了现在分词featuring作状语)
(十一)
(25-26高二上·北京师范大学燕化附属中学·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim写信询问你最喜爱的一位人物,请你回信,内容包括:
1、简单介绍该人物。
2、喜欢这个人物的理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share my favorite figure with you — Yuan Longping, a renowned Chinese scientist.
Known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”, he devoted his life to developing high-yield rice. His research helped feed billions of people worldwide, easing food shortages. What impresses me most is his perseverance and selflessness, as he kept working in fields even in old age.
Yuan is a role model who teaches me to pursue goals with dedication. I truly admire him for his great contributions to humanity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华身份给英国朋友Jim回信,介绍自己最喜爱的人物,包括人物简介和喜欢的理由。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
著名的:renowned → famous/well-known
致力于:devote → dedicate/commit
缓解,减轻:ease → relieve
珍贵的:valuable → precious
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m glad to share my favorite figure with you — Yuan Longping, a renowned Chinese scientist.
拓展句:I’m glad to share my favorite figure with you — Yuan Longping, who is a renowned Chinese scientist.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What impresses me most is his perseverance and selflessness, as he kept working in fields even in old age.(运用了what引导的主语从句和as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Yuan is a role model who teaches me to pursue goals with dedication.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
(十二)
(25-26高二上·北京中国人民大学附属中学~·期中)假设你是红星中学某社团社长李华。下周你校将举办“社团文化节” (Club Culture Festival),请你用英文给外教Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加该活动,内容包括:
1. 介绍整体活动信息;
2. 推荐你社当天的活动。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, president of the School English Drama Club. I’m writing to sincerely invite you to our Club Culture Festival, which will be held next Friday from 2:00 to 5:00 PM on the school playground.
This grand event will gather over 20 clubs, with each presenting unique activities like cultural performances, hands-on workshops and creative exhibitions. Our drama club will stage two short classic English plays, followed by an interactive workshop — students can practice famous lines, learn basic acting techniques and even try improvisation. Your professional insights and guidance would be incredibly valuable to us, and we’re eager to hear your feedback on our performances.
We’d be thrilled to have you join this wonderful cultural feast. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加学校将举办“社团文化节” (Club Culture Festival)。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
真诚地:sincerely →earnestly
创新的:creative →innovative
著名的:famous →well-known
激动的:thrilled →excited
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, president of the School English Drama Club.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is the president of the School English Drama Club.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to sincerely invite you to our Club Culture Festival, which will be held next Friday from 2:00 to 5:00 PM on the school playground.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This grand event will gather over 20 clubs, with each presenting unique activities like cultural performances, hands-on workshops and creative exhibitions. (运用了with的复合结构)
(一)
(25-26高二上·北京广渠门中学·期中)写作:你的朋友 Jim 要来北京游览,请你推荐一个值得游览的公园。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个公园;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re visiting Beijing! I highly recommend the Summer Palace. It’s a UNESCO World Heritage Site and one of China’s most beautiful imperial gardens.
The park features Kunming Lake, Longevity Hill, and traditional pavilions, offering stunning views. Built in the Qing Dynasty, it reflects classical Chinese architecture and royal culture. You can boat on the lake or walk along the Long Corridor, which is 728 meters with painted artworks!
Don’t miss the Marble Boat and Seventeen-Arch Bridge! It’s perfect for a half-day trip. I’m sure you will have a happy trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友 Jim 写一封电子邮件,向他推荐北京一个值得游览的公园。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→delighted
令人震惊的:stunning→breathtaking
反映:reflect→mirror
完美的:perfect→impeccable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Built in the Qing Dynasty, it reflects classical Chinese architecture and royal culture.
拓展句:The Summer Palace, which was built in the Qing Dynasty, reflects classical Chinese architecture and royal culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Built in the Qing Dynasty, it reflects classical Chinese architecture and royal culture. (运用了非谓语动词过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】You can boat on the lake or walk along the Long Corridor, which is 728 meters with painted artworks! (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高二上·北京清华大学附属中学朝阳学校·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jim打算参加其学校举办的“Campus Upgrade Tips”校园环境优化创意征集大赛,来信寻求你的建议。请你用英文给Jim写一封回信,建议一项具体方案,内容要点包括:
1. 说明优化做法;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
词数不少于80词。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear you’re joining the “Campus Upgrade Tips” contest. I’d like to suggest setting up outdoor shared study corners on campus—they’re practical and popular.
You could place weather-proof desks, chairs and solar-powered charging ports in quiet lawn areas or near libraries. Add some potted plants for a nicer atmosphere. This way, students can study outdoors while enjoying fresh air, which helps relieve stress from indoor classes. It also encourages social interaction among peers who share the space.
This idea is easy to implement and meets students’ daily needs. Hope it helps you win the contest!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Jim写一封回信,就他参加学校主题为“Campus Upgrade Tips”的校园环境优化创意征集大赛提供一项具体方案。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
建立:set up→establish
减轻:relieve→ease/reduce
实施:implement→carry out
高兴的:glad→delighted/overjoyed
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:This idea is easy to implement and meets students’ daily needs.
拓展句:Not only is this idea easy to implement but it also meets students’ daily needs.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 I’m glad to hear you’re joining the “Campus Upgrade Tips” contest. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 This way, students can study outdoors while enjoying fresh air, which helps relieve stress from indoor classes.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】 It also encourages social interaction among peers who share the space.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高二上·北京昌平·期中)假如你是红星中学高二学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim想了解你最钦佩的一位名人。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 该人物的介绍;
2. 你钦佩的理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad you asked about the celebrity I admire most — Tu Youyou, a renowned Chinese scientist.
Born in 1930, she has devoted over 60 years to medical research, focusing on combining traditional Chinese medicine with modern science. In 2015, she became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
What impresses me most is her perseverance and selflessness. For decades, she worked day and night in simple labs, overcoming equipment shortages and failures to find a malaria cure. Finally, she discovered artemisinin, which has saved over 6 million lives in Africa and Asia. Even in her 90s, she guides young researchers. Her story inspires me to keep going when facing challenges.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华身份写邮件,向外国朋友介绍自己最钦佩的名人及其原因。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
奉献:devote → dedicate
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
结合:combine → integrate
毅力:perseverance → persistence
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Born in 1930, she has devoted over 60 years to medical research, focusing on combining traditional Chinese medicine with modern science.
拓展句:Born in 1930, she has devoted over 60 years to medical research, which focuses on combining traditional Chinese medicine with modern science.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】What impresses me most is her perseverance and selflessness.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Finally, she discovered artemisinin, which has saved over 6 million lives in Africa and Asia.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高二上·北京海淀·期中)假设你是北大附中高二学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim近来正在为一场关于“小组合作是否是课堂教学的必要部分”的辩论赛作准备,他来信询问你对于这一辩题的立场,请用英文给他回信,内容包括:
1.陈述你的立场;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re preparing for a debate on whether group work is an essential part of classroom teaching. My stance is firmly in favor of group work, and here are my reasons.
Firstly, group work fosters collaboration skills, which are vital in today’s interconnected world. Through working together, students learn to communicate effectively, share ideas, and resolve conflicts. Secondly, it enhances critical thinking and problem-solving abilities. Different perspectives within a group can lead to more creative and comprehensive solutions to problems. Lastly, group work promotes a sense of belonging and reduces anxiety, as students feel supported by their peers.
In conclusion, group work is not only beneficial but also necessary for a well-rounded education. I hope my points are helpful to your debate preparation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信,针对“小组合作是否是课堂教学的必要部分”这一辩题陈述自己的立场并说明理由。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→ exhilarated
增强:enhance → boost
观点:perspective→insight
不可或缺的:essential → indispensable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, it enhances critical thinking and problem-solving abilities.
拓展句:Secondly, it enhances critical thinking and problem-solving abilities, which are extremely essential for students.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to hear that you’re preparing for a debate on whether group work is an essential part of classroom teaching. (运用了that引导宾语从句以及whether引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, group work fosters collaboration skills, which are vital in today’s interconnected world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(五)
(25-26高二上·北京延庆·期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。看到Teens Senior英文报面向高中生征集Campus ... Star为题目的文章,如sports, arts, innovation, perseverance, kindness, .... 你非常感兴趣。请用英文写一篇征文,介绍你心目中的校园之星,内容包括:
1. 介绍你心目中的校园之星和他(她)的事迹;
2. 他(她)对你的影响。
注意:
1.补全题目。
2.词数100左右。
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【答案】 Campus Kindness Star
I’m Li Hua, a student from Hongxing High School. In my eyes, Zhang Wei is the campus kindness star.
Whenever classmates are in trouble, Zhang Wei is always the first to offer a hand. Last term, a new student struggled with math. Zhang Wei spent an hour every day explaining concepts until the student caught up. He also initiated a “Kindness Corner” where students can donate books and stationery to those in need.
His actions have deeply influenced me. I now actively participate in volunteer activities and always try to help others. Zhang Wei’s kindness shows that small acts can make a big difference.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以红星中学高二学生李华的身份,为《Teens Senior》英文报撰写一篇征文,题为“Campus ... Star”,介绍自己心目中的校园之星,内容需涵盖校园之星的事迹及其对自身的影响。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
伸出援手:offer a hand → lend a helping hand
跟上进度:catch up → keep pace
发起;创办:initiate → launch
产生重大影响:make a big difference → have a profound impact
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Whenever classmates are in trouble, Zhang Wei is always the first to offer a hand.
拓展句:Whenever classmates encounter difficulties, Zhang Wei is always the first who is willing to lend a helping hand.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】He also initiated a “Kindness Corner” where students can donate books and stationery to those in need. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Zhang Wei’s kindness shows that small acts can make a big difference. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(六)
(25-26高二上·北京第八十中学-11月·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办“图书漂流”(BookCrossing)活动——将自己喜欢的图书放在学校任意公共场所,感兴趣的同学读完后将书放回原处,让其继续漂流。请你给交换生Chris写一封邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动意义;
2. 具体安排;
3. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增减细节,使文章连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you. Since you’re an enthusiast about reading, I believe you will be of great interest in this meaningful activity named BookCrossing.
BookCrossing is the practice of leaving a book in a public place to be picked up and read by others, who then do likewise. For one thing, the BookCrossing can motivate us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons. For another, it provides a good chance to make friends with like-minded people.
Our BookCrossing starts this Monday and will last for a week. When the time comes, you’ll be surprised to find terrific books at any places on campus. Of course, if you are in, you are supposed to share several books that are valuable and beneficial. To help others get a general knowledge of your book, your thoughtful introduction and helpful comments are warmly welcomed.
What are you waiting for? I’m looking forward to your participation and you are bound to love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Chris写一封邮件,邀请他参加你们学校下个月将要举办的“图书漂流”(BookCrossing)活动。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍活动意义;
2. 介绍具体安排;
3. 发出活动邀请。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
can’t wait to do sth.; share sth. with sb.; pick up; broaden one’s horizons; be surprised to do sth.; be supposed to do sth.; look forward to; be bound to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. Since you’re an enthusiast about reading, I believe you will be of great interest in this meaningful activity named BookCrossing.
2. BookCrossing is the practice of leaving a book in a public place to be picked up and read by others, who then do likewise.
3. Our BookCrossing starts this Monday and will last for a week.
4. Of course, if you are in, you are supposed to share several books that are valuable and beneficial.
5. I’m looking forward to your participation and you are bound to love it.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:and
2.表因果关系:since
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. BookCrossing is the practice of leaving a book in a public place to be picked up and read by others, who then do likewise. (由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. When the time comes, you’ll be surprised to find terrific books at any places on campus. (由when引导的时间状语从句)
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