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读后续写万能模板·技法专项(动作描写链条 02)(背诵版) 2027届高三英语二轮复习专项 奔跑 · 球类 · 厨房 · 修理 · 骑行 · 搬运 · 照料 · 收拾 · 救援|适用:新高考I卷读后续写(150词左右) 第一部分 奔跑|从起步到停下 写跑不写速度,写节奏与身体的变化。 He pushed off the wall and was running before his feet caught up. 他蹬开墙就跑了出去,脚还没跟上脑子。 My legs were heavy for the first fifty metres, and then they were not. 前五十米腿是沉的,之后就不沉了。 She ran with her arms low, the way long-distance runners do. 她跑起来手臂压得低,是长跑运动员的样子。 His breathing found a rhythm and held it. 他的呼吸找到了节奏,就稳住了。 I could hear my own steps, and then only the wind. 我先听见自己的脚步声,后来就只剩风声了。 She glanced back once, and then stopped looking back altogether. 她回头看了一眼,之后索性不回头了。 The last corner took everything I had left. 最后一个弯道把我剩下的力气全用光了。 He slowed down, not because he was tired, but because he had arrived. 他慢下来,不是因为累,是因为到了。 I bent over with my hands on my knees and waited to be able to speak. 我双手撑膝弯下身,等着能说出话来。 When I straightened up, the crowd was still there, and so was he. 等我直起身,人群还在,他也还在。 第二部分 球类|配合与失误 球的走向比人的表情更能说明局面。 He bounced the ball twice, sighted the hoop, and let it go. 他拍了两下球,瞄了篮筐,出手。 The ball hit the rim, turned on it, and rolled out. 球砸在篮筐上,转了一圈,滚了出去。 She feinted left, went right, and left her marker standing. 她向左一晃,走右路,把盯她的人留在原地。 I passed the ball without looking, trusting he would be there. 我没看就传球,信他一定在那儿。 The whistle went, and every player on the field froze mid-stride. 哨声响了,场上每个人都定在跨步的一瞬。 He caught the ball one-handed, and the noise of the court changed. 他单手接住球,球场的噪声一下子变了。 My shot went wide, and I turned away before I saw where it landed. 我射偏了,没看它落到哪儿就转过了身。 She put her hand on my shoulder and told me to take the next one. 她把手搭在我肩上,让我下一个球继续投。 We walked off the court with our shirts stuck to our backs. 我们走下场,球衣全黏在背上。 The scoreboard went dark first, and then the lights did. 记分牌先暗了,然后灯才暗。 第三部分 厨房|手边的活计 厨房动作的价值在于“熟练”与“不熟练”的对比。 She cracked the eggs one-handed without looking down. 她单手打蛋,眼睛都不用看。 The knife came down in even strokes, quick and unhurried. 刀落得均匀,快却不慌。 I burned the first pancake and hid it under the others. 第一张饼煎糊了,我把它压在别的饼底下。 Steam fogged my glasses, and I had to work by touch. 蒸汽糊住了我的眼镜,我只好凭手感做。 He tasted it, added a pinch of salt, and tasted it again. 他尝了一口,加了点盐,又尝一口。 The pot boiled over, and neither of us moved to stop it. 锅溢了出来,我们谁也没动。 She wiped her hands on the towel and came to sit with me. 她在毛巾上擦了手,过来和我一起坐下。 I stirred the soup slowly, only to have something to do. 我慢慢搅着汤,只是想手里有点事做。 The rice was done, and the table was still not laid. 饭好了,桌子还空着。 We ate standing up, out of the pan, and it was the best meal that week. 我们站着吃,直接从锅里夹,那是那一周最好的一顿。 第四部分 修理|拆开与装回 修理动作写得越慢,读者越觉得这人可靠。 He laid the parts out in the order he had taken them off. 他把零件按拆下来的顺序摆开。 I turned the screw the wrong way first, and felt it bite. 我先把螺丝拧反了,感觉到它卡住了。 She held the torch in her teeth while both hands worked. 她用牙咬着手电,两只手都腾出来干活。 The spring shot across the floor and disappeared under the shelf. 弹簧飞过地板,钻到架子底下不见了。 He wiped the contact clean and put it back exactly as it was. 他把触点擦净,原样装了回去。 I tested it twice before I dared to close the casing. 我试了两次,才敢合上外壳。 It clicked, hesitated, and then started. 它响了一声,顿了一下,然后启动了。 Her hands were black with grease, and she was smiling. 她满手机油,却在笑。 We put the tools back in the box one piece at a time. 我们把工具一件一件放回箱子里。 For the rest of the evening it hummed quietly in the corner. 那一晚剩下的时间,它在角落里轻轻地响着。 第五部分 骑行|轮子上的动作 骑行写的是平衡,不是速度。 I pushed the pedals down hard and felt the chain take hold. 我用力踩下踏板,感觉到链条吃住了劲。 She wobbled once, put a foot down, and started again. 她晃了一下,脚撑地,又重新起步。 The wind came at me from the side and pushed the front wheel away. 侧风打过来,把前轮推偏了。 He leaned into the corner until his knee nearly touched the road. 他压弯压到膝盖几乎擦到路面。 I changed gear too late and lost the hill. 我换挡太晚,那段坡没上去。 We rode two abreast until the road narrowed. 我们并排骑,直到路变窄了。 My chain came off, and I fixed it with black hands on the verge. 链条掉了,我在路边弄了一手黑。 The brakes squealed, and we both laughed at the sound. 刹车吱吱响,我们俩都被这声音逗笑了。 She freewheeled the last stretch with her hands off the bars. 最后一段她撒把溜着走。 We left the bikes against the wall and did not lock them. 我们把车靠在墙上,连锁都没上。 第六部分 搬运|借力与吃力 搬运动作要写出“重量去了哪里”。 He bent his knees, took the weight on his thighs, and stood up with it. 他屈膝,用大腿吃住重量,带着箱子站起来。 We counted to three, and only one of us lifted on three. 我们数到三,只有一个人真的在三的时候抬。 The box was lighter than it looked, and I nearly fell backwards. 箱子比看上去轻,我差点向后仰过去。 She took one end, and I took the other, and the sofa moved. 她抬一头,我抬一头,沙发动了。 We turned it on its side to get it through the doorway. 我们把它侧过来才抬过门框。 My grip was going, and I said so out loud. 我快抓不住了,就直接喊了出来。 He set it down a second before I dropped it. 我脱手前一秒,他把它放下了。 We stopped in the middle of the stairs to breathe. 我们在楼梯中间停下喘气。 The mark of the box was still on my arm the next morning. 第二天早上我胳膊上还有箱子的印子。 It went through the window, and then it was in the room where it belonged. 它从窗户进去,然后就到了它该在的那间屋里。 第七部分 照料|看护与陪伴 照料动作的力量来自“轻”和“慢”。 She changed the dressing without waking him once. 她换药的时候一次都没把他弄醒。 I held the cup to his lips and tilted it a little at a time. 我把杯子凑到他嘴边,一点一点地倾。 He put his hand on the dog’s head and left it there. 他把手放在狗头上,一直没拿开。 We took turns so that somebody was always awake. 我们轮流守,总有人是醒着的。 She wiped his forehead with the back of her hand. 她用手背替他擦了擦额头。 I pulled the blanket up over his shoulder and stepped back. 我把毯子掖到他肩上,退开一步。 He would not eat, so I sat down and ate with him. 他不肯吃,我就坐下来陪他吃。 The old man held my sleeve and would not let go. 老人抓着我的袖子,不肯松。 Her breathing evened out, and I stopped counting. 她的呼吸匀了,我也就不再数了。 In the morning he was sitting up, and asking about the weather. 早上他坐了起来,还问起了天气。 第八部分 收拾|整理与清扫 收拾动作是最自然的“交代后事”,用来收束情节。 She folded the chairs and stacked them against the wall. 她把椅子折起来,靠着墙摞好。 I swept the whole yard and did not find what I was looking for. 我把整个院子扫了一遍,也没找到我要找的东西。 He picked up every piece of paper, even the small ones. 他把每一片纸都捡了起来,连碎的都不放过。 We emptied the drawers onto the bed and sat down among them. 我们把抽屉倒在床上,坐在那堆东西中间。 She put the lid on the box and pressed it down with both hands. 她盖上箱盖,两只手压下去。 I threw away the broken ones and kept the rest. 我把坏的扔了,剩下的留着。 He washed the cups and left them upside down on the cloth. 他洗了杯子,倒扣在布上。 By the time we finished, it was too dark to see the floor. 等我们弄完,天已经黑得看不见地板了。 The room looked as if nobody had ever lived in it. 那间屋子看上去像从没有人住过。 Then she closed the door, and we did not go back in. 然后她关上门,我们再没进去过。 第九部分 链条示范|场景整段成文 每个场景各一段,可与 01 的部位句自由拼接。 I pushed off the wall and was running before my feet caught up. The first fifty metres were heavy going, and then my legs found a rhythm and stopped arguing. At the corner I glanced back once and saw the others still at the gate, smaller than they had been. After that I did not look back at all. When I finally slowed down, it was not because I was tired. The bus was still there, with its doors open and its engine running. 我蹬开墙就跑了出去,脚还没跟上脑子。前五十米很沉,之后腿找到了节奏,不再和我较劲。到拐角时我回头看了一眼,那几个人还在大门口,比刚才小了一圈。那之后我就再没回头。等我终于慢下来,不是因为累——车还在,门开着,发动机还响着。 He bounced the ball twice, sighted the hoop, and let it go. The ball hit the rim, turned on it, and rolled out. For a second nobody on the court said anything; then someone behind me laughed, and it was not unkind. I turned away before I saw where the ball had landed. A hand came down on my shoulder, and it was hers. Take the next one, she said. I took the ball back, and this time I did not think about anything at all. 他拍了两下球,瞄了篮筐,出手。球砸在篮筐上,转了一圈,滚了出去。有那么一秒场上一片安静;然后我身后有人笑了,并不刻薄。我没看球落到哪儿就转过了身。一只手落在我肩上,是她的。下一个球接着投,她说。我把球接回来,这一次什么都没想。 She cracked the eggs one-handed without looking down and slid them into the pan. I was supposed to be helping, so I stood at the sink and did the dishes slowly, handing her each bowl as it was done. Steam fogged my glasses, and I had to work by touch. When the pan was empty she turned the heat off, wiped her hands on the towel, and came to sit with me at the small table. Neither of us ate much. It was still the best meal that week. 她单手打蛋,眼都不用看,倒进锅里。我本该是来帮忙的,于是站在水池边慢慢洗碗,洗完一只就递给她一只。蒸汽糊住了我的眼镜,我只好凭手感做。锅空了以后,她关了火,在毛巾上擦了手,过来和我一起坐在小桌边。两个人都没吃多少。那仍然是那一周最好的一顿。 He laid the parts out in the order he had taken them off, then went through them one more time. The spring shot across the floor and disappeared under the shelf, and we both got down on the ground to look for it. He found it with his cheek against the tiles. After that he wiped the contact clean and put everything back exactly as it was, and tested it twice before he dared to close the casing. It clicked, hesitated, and then started. For the rest of the evening it hummed quietly in the corner. 他把零件按拆下来的顺序摆开,然后又数了一遍。弹簧飞过地板,钻到架子底下不见了,我们俩都趴到地上找。他贴着地砖才把它找到。之后他把触点擦净,原样装回,试了两次,才敢合上外壳。它响了一声,顿了一下,然后启动了。那一晚剩下的时间,它在角落里轻轻地响着。 We took one end each and lifted on three, though only one of us lifted on three. The sofa came off the floor, turned in the air, and started to go through the doorway. My grip was going, and I said so out loud, and he set it down a second before I dropped it. We stood on the stairs in the dark and breathed. Then we turned it on its side and went at it again. It went through the window in the end, and then it was in the room where it belonged. 我们各抬一头,数到三一起抬,可有一个人是在三的时候才真抬。沙发离了地,在空中转了个向,开始往门框里进。我快抓不住了,就直接喊了出来,我脱手前一秒,他把它放下了。我们俩站在黑着灯的楼梯上喘气。然后把它侧过来,再来一次。最后它从窗户进去,到了它该在的那间屋里。 She changed the dressing without waking him once, working with small careful movements that seemed to take no time at all. I held the cup to his lips and tilted it a little at a time. Later the old man caught my sleeve and would not let go, so I stayed where I was and let him hold it. We took turns through the night so that somebody was always awake. In the morning he was sitting up, and asking about the weather. 她换药的时候一次都没把他弄醒,动作又小又稳,像是毫不费力。我把杯子凑到他嘴边,一点一点地倾。后来老人抓住了我的袖子不放,我就原地待着让他抓。那一夜我们轮流守着,总有人是醒着的。早上他坐了起来,还问起了天气。 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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