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[答案 P17]
本单元的话题是“超越地球”。通过本单元课文,同学们可以了解地球之外的太空世界,以及近年来中国在太空开发领域所取得的成就。写作任务要求同学们描述自己的航天梦想,并在行文中灵活运用将来时的被动语态。探讨这一话题,有助于我们深入了解科技发展,增强航天科学素养,
激发强国梦想与探索精神。
主题范畴:人与社会
主题群:梦想与探索精神
子主题:展开丰富的想象,追求梦想,以勇气激励自我
[开头句]
1.杨立伟是我的偶像,他激励我成长。(idol; inspire)
Yang Liwei is my idol who inspires me to grow up.
2.长大后我想要成为像他一样的中国航天员。(be a Chinese astronaut like him)
I want to be a Chinese astronaut like him when I grow up.
3.总有一天我可以穿着太空服在太空行走。(do a spacewalk)
I can do a spacewalk in a spacesuit some day.
[中间句]
1.小的时候我就对太空感兴趣。(be interested in)
When I was very young, I was interested in space.
2.目前,我持续关注电视或网络上关于空间站的新闻。
At present, I keep watching the news about the space station on TV or the internet.
3.我会保持健康并且努力学习科学,使身心都变得强大。(become strong both…and…)
I will keep fit and study hard at science and become strong both in mind and body.
[结尾句]
1.我希望一个更好的科研站在月球上被建立起来。(will be built)
I hope a better research station will be built on the moon.
2.我相信我的梦想总有一天能实现。(will be achieved/realized)
I believe that my dream will be achieved/realized one day.
3.我能够为祖国航天航空工业做贡献。(make a contribution to)
I can make a contribution to the aerospace industry.
[佳句积累]
1.The drive to explore and discover is what makes us human.探索与发现,乃人类天性。
2.The more we explore, the more we realize how little we know.探索愈深,方知未知愈广。
3.He who blazes a new trail is a pioneer, not a follower.拓路者为先驱,循迹者乃追随者。
2025年10月31日23时44分,搭载神舟二十一号载人飞船的长征二号F遥二十一运载火箭在酒泉卫星发射中心点火发射,张陆、武飞、张洪章三名航天员顺利进入中国空间站,两名航天员乘组完成中国航天史上第7次“太空会师”。
假如你的梦想也是当一名航天员,想为国家的航天航空事业做贡献,请你根据以下提示,以“My aerospace dream”为题写一篇英语短文。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:中国航天员taikonaut;航天航空工业aerospace industry;做贡献make contributions to(doing)sth
My aerospace dream
My aerospace dream
My dream is to become a taikonaut. When I grow up,① I hope to wear a spacesuit and do a spacewalk someday.
When I was very young,② I was interested in space and different kinds of planets. I visited space museums with my parents. At present③, I keep watching the news about the spaceships and the space station on TV or the internet. I also read some books and magazines about space.
Besides④, I will keep fit and study hard at science and become strong both in mind and body.
I hope a better research station will be built⑤ on the moon and other planets. I believe that my dream will be achieved⑥ one day, and I can make contributions to the aerospace industry.
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点明主题(想成为航天员)。主体用一般过去时介绍梦想的缘由,然后用一般现在时介绍目前的努力情况,结尾用一般将来时表达希望。要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
①②运用时间状语从句(When I grow up;When I was very young)说明过去的兴趣与将来的梦想。
③④At present、Besides过渡词句运用得当,使语句之间衔接自然。
⑤⑥一般将来时的被动语态(will be built;will be achieved)运用得恰到好处,体现了本单元知识要点“学以致用”的原则。
近期,九年级学生在参加了主题为“航天点亮梦想”的研学活动后,对航天员的工作有了更深的了解,想为中国航天事业做贡献的梦想也更加坚定。假设你也有一个太空梦,请根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My aerospace dream
I have a big dream. I want to be an aerospace doctor when I grow up in the future.
Astronauts' work is dangerous and they need to keep healthy. I hope to help them. I'm working hard now. I exercise to keep fit every day. I will become strong in not only mind but also body. I make up my mind to study hard, especially science and medicine. I have confidence in getting everything ready for it.
I believe my dream will be achieved one day. I look forward to seeing more Chinese astronauts explore the universe safely and contribute to China's space program.
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