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专题12 应用文写作
(一)
【答案】Dear Peter,
I know you’re upset and I understand how you feel.
It’s kind of you to stick to your principle, and what you did is right because copying homework won’t help your friend learn. Here are some suggestions. First, you can send him a short message to explain why you refused, telling him that you care about his study and want to help him with difficult problems. Second, if he’s still upset, you can invite him to a coffee and talk face to face, which might make things clearer.
I hope you two can make up soon and your friendship will become stronger.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear exchange students,
I hope this message finds you well! Representing the Student Union, I’m excited to invite you to join our newly launched Peer Support Program as mentors.
As mentors, you’ll guide younger students — especially new international peers — by sharing your experiences, helping them adjust to school life, and offering academic or emotional support through weekly check-ins or group activities. Your unique perspective as exchange students makes you ideal for this role!
We believe your involvement will make a real difference in building a more welcoming and supportive campus community. Please sign up by Friday if you’re interested — we’d be thrilled to have you on board!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well and often catch colds, which makes you miss many classes. It’s completely understandable to feel worried about the upcoming exams, but health should always be your priority.
I would like to offer a few suggestions. First and foremost, maintaining a balanced diet, ensuring sufficient sleep and taking regular exercise are essential for building up your body. Additionally, of equal importance is a positive attitude, which will enable you to rise to the challenges. Last but not least, it is a good idea to turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help.
I do hope the above advice will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your recovery and success in the exams!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】Dear Sam,
Sorry to learn about your issues with your friend. It’s normal to still feel awkward after making up with a friend. But the important thing is that you both chose to make peace — that’s already a big step forward.
If you truly value the friendship, it’s fine to take the initiative. Small actions, such as inviting your friend to hang out or sharing something funny, can help rebuild trust. These moments can slowly bring back the feeling of normalcy you used to have. At the same time, give your friend space if they seem quiet or distant. Sometimes people just need time to process what happened.
I believe you and your friend will get back to harmony soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】Dear Melody,
I’m sorry to hear about the disagreement with your parents.
It’s understandable that they are concerned about your studies. However, pursuing music, something you love, is equally important for your personal growth. I suggest you have an open dialogue with your parents, explaining your passion for music and how it balances your life. Maybe you can agree on a schedule that satisfies both your musical interests and academic responsibilities.
I hope you find a harmonious solution and continue to enjoy music.
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear you’re confused about making friends online or offline. My advice is to try both, but focus more on offline friendships.
Offline friends let you have face-to-face interactions. You can share real moments together, like playing sports or chatting over coffee, which helps build deep and trusted bonds. Online friendships, though, are great for meeting people with similar hobbies from all over the world, expanding your horizons.
Just stay cautious online and take time to know people. Hope this helps!
Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling lonely in the new school — starting over is never easy, and it’s totally normal to miss our old days.
To make new friends, try joining clubs you love or offering help to classmates in need. Smiling and starting small talk about hobbies or lessons can also break the ice.
Our friendship means the world to me, and distance can’t change that. I’m counting down the days until your holiday visit — we’ll catch up over our favorite snacks and relive happy memories!
Cheer up, you’re kind and easy to get along with. Everything will get better soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Henry,
I understand your concern about making new friends online. In my opinion, it can be a great way to meet people from different places and cultures. However, we should also be careful.
Here are some suggestions. First, don’t share too much personal information with strangers. Second, be cautious when someone asks for money or other things. Third, try to verify the identity of the person you are communicating with. Finally, if you feel uncomfortable or suspicious, stop communicating immediately.
Hope these tips help you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear about the tension in your group project. This might happen if members feel ignored. For example, perhaps decisions were made without discussing everyone’s ideas first, or tasks were assigned individually, making others feel excluded.
To improve this, I suggest you actively listen to your group members’ opinions and show you value them. Also, call a meeting to discuss the project plan and task assignments together, making sure everyone agrees. Good communication and teamwork are key!
Hope this helps and things get better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】Dear Eric,
I know you’re worried about your English learning. I strongly recommend you join the English club I’m in.
In this club, you can find a language-friendly environment. We often hold various activities like English speech contests and movie-watching events. These not only boost your language skills but also expose you to different cultures. Moreover, club members are always ready to help each other, creating a positive and motivating atmosphere for English learning.
I believe it will be a great place for you to improve your English.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】Dear James,
I am awfully sorry to hear that since entering high school, the pressure of study and psychology has been increasing. Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
To begin with, keep a balance between study and rest. You should take regular exercise to keep fit and energetic. Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort. Most importantly, you should make a good study schedule and stick to it, which can make you devote yourself to studies and realize your potential.
I hope my suggestions will be of help and I’m sure you will have a happy high school life!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua.
(六)
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in making friends in new school. Here are some tips to help you. First of all, why not ask people their likes and dislikes? If you do this, you’ll find classmates with the same interests. Besides, I advise you should join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas and then you can know different people and let them see you are friendly. Last but not least, it would be a good idea if you could smile as often as you can. As we all know, smile can help break the ice. I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Hope to hear of your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题12 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏锡山高中学·期中)假定你是李华,你美国朋友Peter来信说,他因拒绝让好友抄作业与对方闹僵,两人多日不说话。他既烦恼又不知如何处理,特向你求助。请你写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表达理解与安慰;
2.给出具体的建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80字左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I know you’re upset and I understand how you feel.
It’s kind of you to stick to your principle, and what you did is right because copying homework won’t help your friend learn. Here are some suggestions. First, you can send him a short message to explain why you refused, telling him that you care about his study and want to help him with difficult problems. Second, if he’s still upset, you can invite him to a coffee and talk face to face, which might make things clearer.
I hope you two can make up soon and your friendship will become stronger.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter写一封回信,针对他因拒绝让好友抄作业而与对方闹僵,不知如何处理的问题,表达理解安慰、给出建议并表达祝愿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
沮丧的:upset → frustrated
原则:principle → rule
拒绝:refuse → decline
关心:care about → concern oneself with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It’s kind of you to stick to your principle, and what you did is right because copying homework won’t help your friend learn.
拓展句:It’s kind of you who stick to your principle, and what you did is right because copying homework won’t help your friend learn.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It’s kind of you to stick to your principle, and what you did is right because copying homework won’t help your friend learn.(运用了what引导的主语从句、because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】First, you can send him a short message to explain why you refused, telling him that you care about his study and want to help him with difficult problems. (运用了why引导的宾语从句、that引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏海安高级中学·期中)假设你是校学生会主席李华,你校将成立一个“朋辈辅导”小组(Peer Support Program)。请给高年级交流生写一封邮件,邀请他们加入该小组担任辅导员(mentor)。
内容包括:1. 发出邀请;2. 辅导员职责;3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear exchange students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear exchange students,
I hope this message finds you well! Representing the Student Union, I’m excited to invite you to join our newly launched Peer Support Program as mentors.
As mentors, you’ll guide younger students — especially new international peers — by sharing your experiences, helping them adjust to school life, and offering academic or emotional support through weekly check-ins or group activities. Your unique perspective as exchange students makes you ideal for this role!
We believe your involvement will make a real difference in building a more welcoming and supportive campus community. Please sign up by Friday if you’re interested — we’d be thrilled to have you on board!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校学生会主席李华的身份给高年级交流生写一封邮件,邀请他们加入学校新成立的“朋辈辅导”小组担任辅导员,需明确发出邀请、说明辅导员职责并表达期待。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
适应:adjust to → adapt to
独特的:unique → distinctive
参与:involvement → participation
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:We believe your involvement will make a real difference in building a more welcoming and supportive campus community.
拓展句:We hold the belief that your involvement will make a real difference in building a more welcoming and supportive campus community.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Representing the Student Union, I’m excited to invite you to join our newly launched Peer Support Program as mentors.(运用了现在分词Representing作状语)
【高分句型2】We believe your involvement will make a real difference in building a more welcoming and supportive campus community.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京航空航天大学苏州附中·期中)假定你是李华,你的好友Tom最近身体较差总是感冒,经常缺课。他写信告诉你他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给Tom写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well and often catch colds, which makes you miss many classes. It’s completely understandable to feel worried about the upcoming exams, but health should always be your priority.
I would like to offer a few suggestions. First and foremost, maintaining a balanced diet, ensuring sufficient sleep and taking regular exercise are essential for building up your body. Additionally, of equal importance is a positive attitude, which will enable you to rise to the challenges. Last but not least, it is a good idea to turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help.
I do hope the above advice will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your recovery and success in the exams!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生安慰因身体差缺课而担心考试的好友 Tom,并给他提出改善身体状况的建议,最后送上祝愿。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
可以理解的:understandable → acceptable
即将到来的:upcoming → forthcoming
确保:ensure → guarantee
充足的:sufficient → adequate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last but not least, it is a good idea to turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help.
拓展句:Last but not least, it is a good idea that you can turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well and often catch colds, which makes you miss many classes. (运用了that引导宾语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, of equal importance is a positive attitude, which will enable you to rise to the challenges. (运用了完全倒装、which引导非限制性定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·江苏扬州中学·期中)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Sam给你发来邮件说:最近和挚友吵架后和好了,但总觉得彼此间仍有些隔阂。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解和安慰;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
Sorry to learn about your issues with your friend. It’s normal to still feel awkward after making up with a friend. But the important thing is that you both chose to make peace — that’s already a big step forward.
If you truly value the friendship, it’s fine to take the initiative. Small actions, such as inviting your friend to hang out or sharing something funny, can help rebuild trust. These moments can slowly bring back the feeling of normalcy you used to have. At the same time, give your friend space if they seem quiet or distant. Sometimes people just need time to process what happened.
I believe you and your friend will get back to harmony soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就英国笔友Sam和挚友吵架和好后,但总觉得彼此间仍有些隔阂这事给他写一封邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
尴尬的:awkward→embarrassed
重要的:important→crucial
珍视:value→treasure
(使)恢复:rebuild→restore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s normal to still feel awkward after making up with a friend.
拓展句:It’s normal that you still feel awkward after you have made up with a friend.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】But the important thing is that you both chose to make peace — that’s already a big step forward.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Sometimes people just need time to process what happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
(五)
(25-26高一上·江苏盐城五校联考·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Melody给你发来一封邮件,说她最近因为加入音乐俱乐部与父母产生了矛盾。Melody对音乐非常感兴趣,但父母认为她应该把时间更多地用在学习上,这让她感到困扰。请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Melody,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Melody,
I’m sorry to hear about the disagreement with your parents.
It’s understandable that they are concerned about your studies. However, pursuing music, something you love, is equally important for your personal growth. I suggest you have an open dialogue with your parents, explaining your passion for music and how it balances your life. Maybe you can agree on a schedule that satisfies both your musical interests and academic responsibilities.
I hope you find a harmonious solution and continue to enjoy music.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Melody回复邮件,就她参加音乐俱乐部与父母产生锚段的事情表达理解、安慰,并提供建议和祝愿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
可以理解的:understandable→comprehensive
担心的:concerned→worried
建议:suggest→advise
时间表:schedule→timetable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I suggest you have an open dialogue with your parents, explaining your passion for music and how it balances your life.
拓展句: I suggest you have an open dialogue with your parents through which you can explain your passion for music and how it balances your life.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 It’s understandable that they are concerned about your studies.(运用了that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】 Maybe you can agree on a schedule that satisfies both your musical interests and academic responsibilities. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
(六)
(25-26高一上·江苏徐州一中·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对于是在线上还是线下交朋友感到非常困惑,请给他写封email,内容包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear you’re confused about making friends online or offline. My advice is to try both, but focus more on offline friendships.
Offline friends let you have face-to-face interactions. You can share real moments together, like playing sports or chatting over coffee, which helps build deep and trusted bonds. Online friendships, though, are great for meeting people with similar hobbies from all over the world, expanding your horizons.
Just stay cautious online and take time to know people. Hope this helps!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件,为其解决“线上还是线下交朋友”的困惑,内容需包含具体建议及对应的理由。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
困惑的:confused → puzzled
交流、互动:interaction → communication
建立:build → develop
拓宽:expand → broaden
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My advice is to try both, but focus more on offline friendships.
拓展句:My advice is that you try both, but focus more on offline friendships.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You can share real moments together, like playing sports or chatting over coffee, which helps build deep and trusted bonds.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰前面整个句子)
【高分句型2】Online friendships, though, are great for meeting people with similar hobbies from all over the world, expanding your horizons.(运用了现在分词短语“expanding your horizons”作状语)
(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京一中·期中)假设你是李华,你的好朋友张明刚刚转入另一所城市的新学校。他/她最近给你写信,提到在新环境中感到有些孤独和难以适应,并且非常怀念你们在一起的时光。请你以张明的朋友的身份,给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表达你对他的理解与安慰。
2.给他一些关于如何在新学校结交新朋友的建议。
3.表达你对你们友谊的珍视,并邀请他假期回来相聚。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右;
请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Zhang Ming,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling lonely in the new school — starting over is never easy, and it’s totally normal to miss our old days.
To make new friends, try joining clubs you love or offering help to classmates in need. Smiling and starting small talk about hobbies or lessons can also break the ice.
Our friendship means the world to me, and distance can’t change that. I’m counting down the days until your holiday visit — we’ll catch up over our favorite snacks and relive happy memories!
Cheer up, you’re kind and easy to get along with. Everything will get better soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以张明的朋友的身份,给张明写一封回信,表达对他的理解与安慰、给他一些关于如何在新学校结交新朋友的建议以及你对你们友谊的珍视,并邀请他假期回来相聚。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
喜爱:love→be fond of
完全:totally→completely
提供:offer→provide
叙旧:catch up over→chat over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make new friends, try joining clubs you love or offering help to classmates in need.
拓展句:To make new friends, try joining clubs you love or offering help to classmates who are in trouble.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To make new friends, try joining clubs you love or offering help to classmates in need.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】 I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling lonely in the new school — starting over is never easy, and it’s totally normal to miss our old days.(运用省略that的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏苏州实验中学·期中)你的英国朋友Henry最近想在网络上结交新朋友,但他对此有些担忧,于是给你发邮件征求意见。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 对网上交友的看法;2. 具体建议。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Henry,
I understand your concern about making new friends online. In my opinion, it can be a great way to meet people from different places and cultures. However, we should also be careful.
Here are some suggestions. First, don’t share too much personal information with strangers. Second, be cautious when someone asks for money or other things. Third, try to verify the identity of the person you are communicating with. Finally, if you feel uncomfortable or suspicious, stop communicating immediately.
Hope these tips help you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Henry回复邮件,表达对网上交友的看法并给出具体建议。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
担忧:concern → worry/anxiety
谨慎:cautious → careful/prudent
核实:verify → confirm/check
立即:immediately → instantly/right away
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, it can be a great way to meet people from different places and cultures.
拓展句:As far as I am concerned, it can be a great way to meet people who come from different places and cultures.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Third, try to verify the identity of the person you are communicating with. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, if you feel uncomfortable or suspicious, stop communicating immediately. (运用了从属连词if引导的条件状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江苏无锡天一中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David来信告诉你,因为和班级小组活动的组员关系紧张,他感到很困扰。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 分析可能的原因(如忽视他人意见、独自决定任务分配等);
2. 提出相应的建议(至少两点)。
注意:(1)词数为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear about the tension in your group project. This might happen if members feel ignored. For example, perhaps decisions were made without discussing everyone’s ideas first, or tasks were assigned individually, making others feel excluded.
To improve this, I suggest you actively listen to your group members’ opinions and show you value them. Also, call a meeting to discuss the project plan and task assignments together, making sure everyone agrees. Good communication and teamwork are key!
Hope this helps and things get better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给David写一封建议信,分析可能的原因以及提出相应的建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
紧张:tension→stress
忽视:ignore→overlook
建议:suggest→advise
确保:make sure→ensure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To improve this, I suggest you actively listen to your group members’ opinions and show you value them.
拓展句:I suggest you actively listen to your group members’ opinions and show you value them, which can improve this.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】This might happen if members feel ignored.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】To improve this, I suggest you actively listen to your group members’ opinions and show you value them.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
(四)
(25-26高一上·江苏南通中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的同学Eric正在为自己英语学习的事犯愁,请你推荐你所在的英语俱乐部给他。
内容包括:
1. 推荐加入:
2. 推荐原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I know you’re worried about your English learning. I strongly recommend you join the English club I’m in.
In this club, you can find a language-friendly environment. We often hold various activities like English speech contests and movie-watching events. These not only boost your language skills but also expose you to different cultures. Moreover, club members are always ready to help each other, creating a positive and motivating atmosphere for English learning.
I believe it will be a great place for you to improve your English.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。考生的同学Eric正在为自己英语学习的事犯愁,请你推荐你所在的英语俱乐部给他。
【解析】
1.词汇积累:
担忧的:worried→concerned
举办:hold→organize/host
提升:boost→improve/enhance
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展:
同义句(改倒装句)
原句:These not only boost your language skills but also expose you to different cultures.
拓展句:Not only do these activities boost your language skills but they also expose you to different cultures.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】 These not only boost your language skills but also expose you to different cultures.(运用了not only... but also... 结构)
【高分句型 2】 Moreover, club members are always ready to help each other, creating a positive and motivating atmosphere for English learning.(运用现在分词作结状语)
(五)
(25-26高一上·江苏苏州中学·期中)假如你是某高中生李华,你的朋友James来信说,进入高中以来,学习和心理压力日益加大,请你用英文给他写一封回信:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。(建议不少于2条);
注意:
1. 词数在80左右;
2. 必须涵盖要点;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词汇。
Dear James,
I am awfully sorry to hear that
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Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I am awfully sorry to hear that since entering high school, the pressure of study and psychology has been increasing. Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
To begin with, keep a balance between study and rest. You should take regular exercise to keep fit and energetic. Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort. Most importantly, you should make a good study schedule and stick to it, which can make you devote yourself to studies and realize your potential.
I hope my suggestions will be of help and I’m sure you will have a happy high school life!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给进入高中以来,学习和心理压力日益加大朋友James写封回信,对他的情况表示理解并给予安慰,同时给他提出建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion →advice
此外:besides →additionally
应该:should →be supposed to
有帮助:be of help →be helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
拓展句:Here are some suggestions for you, which will help you relieve stress.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正主语以及“介词+whom”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Most importantly, you should make a good study schedule and stick to it, which can make you devote yourself to studies and realize your potential.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(六)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京大学附中·期中)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Mary因搬家换了一所新学校,因不知如何结交新朋友而感到苦恼。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1.表示理解与同情;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已给出;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in making friends in new school. Here are some tips to help you. First of all, why not ask people their likes and dislikes? If you do this, you’ll find classmates with the same interests. Besides, I advise you should join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas and then you can know different people and let them see you are friendly. Last but not least, it would be a good idea if you could smile as often as you can. As we all know, smile can help break the ice. I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Hope to hear of your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求给朋友提出建议,帮助她在新学校结交朋友。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
困难:difficulty→trouble
此外:besides → what’s more
建议:advise→suggest
有用的:useful→ valuable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I advise you should join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas and then you can know different people and let them see you are friendly.
拓展句:I advise you should join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas so that you can know different people and let them see you are friendly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in making friends in new school.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As we all know, smile can help break the ice. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
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(25-26高一上·江苏锡山高中学.期中)假定你是李华,你美国朋友Peter来信说,他因拒绝让好友抄作业
与对方闹僵,两人多日不说话。他既烦恼又不知如何处理,特向你求助。请你写一封回信。内容包括:
1表达理解与安慰:
2.给出具体的建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80字左右:
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏海安高级中学期中)假设你是校学生会主席李华,你校将成立一个“朋辈辅导”小组
(Peer Support Program)。请给高年级交流生写一封邮件,邀请他们加入该小组担任辅导员(mentor)。
内容包括:1.发出邀请;2.辅导员职责;3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(25-26高一上·江苏南京航空航天大学苏州附中·期中)假定你是李华,你的好友Tom最近身体较差总是
感冒,经常缺课。他写信告诉你他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给To写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示安慰:
2.提出建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高一上·江苏扬州中学期中)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Sam给你发来邮件说:最近和挚友吵架
后和好了,但总觉得彼此间仍有些隔阂。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰:
2.提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(五)
(25-26高一上·江苏盐城五校联考·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Melody给你发来一封邮件,说她
最近因为加入音乐俱乐部与父母产生了矛盾。Melody对音乐非常感兴趣,但父母认为她应该把时间更多地
用在学习上,这让她感到困扰。请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰:
2.提出建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Melody,
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(25-26高一上·江苏徐州一中.期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mke对于是在线上还是线下交朋友感
到非常困惑,请给他写封email,内容包括:
1.你的建议:
2.你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京一中·期中)假设你是李华,你的好朋友张明刚刚转入另一所城市的新学校。他
她最近给你写信,提到在新环境中感到有些孤独和难以适应,并且非常怀念你们在一起的时光。请你以张
明的朋友的身份,给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1表达你对他的理解与安慰。
2给他一些关于如何在新学校结交新朋友的建议。
3表达你对你们友谊的珍视,并邀请他假期回来相聚。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右:
请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Zhang Ming,
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高一上·江苏苏州实验中学.期中)你的英国朋友Hey最近想在网络上结交新朋友,但他对此有些
担忧,于是给你发邮件征求意见。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1.对网上交友的看法:2.具体建议
注意:1.词数80词左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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(25-26高一上·江苏无锡天一中学.期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Davⅵd来信告诉你,因为和班级小
组活动的组员关系紧张,他感到很困扰。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包括:
1.分析可能的原因(如忽视他人意见、独自决定任务分配等);
2.提出相应的建议(至少两点)。
注意:(1)词数为80个左右:
(2)可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高一上·江苏南通中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的同学Ec正在为自己英语学习的事犯愁,请你推
荐你所在的英语俱乐部给他。
内容包括:
1.推荐加入:
2.推荐原因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
Best regards,
LiHua
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(25-26高一上·江苏苏州中学.期中)假如你是某高中生李华,你的朋友James来信说,进入高中以来,学
习和心理压力日益加大,请你用英文给他写一封回信:
1.表示理解并给予安慰:
2.提出建议并说明理由。(建议不少于2条):
注意:
1.词数在80左右:
2.必须涵盖要点:
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词汇。
Dear James,
I am awfully sorry to hear that
Your sincerely,
LiHua
(六)
(25-26高一上·江苏南京大学附中·期中)假如你是李华,你的好朋友May因搬家换了一所新学校,因不
知如何结交新朋友而感到苦恼。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。
1.表示理解与同情:
2.提出建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已给出:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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