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专题09 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高一上·河南天立教育·期中)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Jack 将要来中国当高中交换生,发邮件向你询问适合课间进行的运动,请你回复邮件。内容包括:
1. 推荐一项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节;以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
You asked about break-time sports, and I think skipping rope is perfect. It only needs a rope, which is easy to carry. Many of my classmates skip during breaks because it doesn’t need much space. You can skip alone or with friends, which makes break time more enjoyable.
The reason why I recommend it is that it’s good for your health and saves time. It can make your body active quickly after class, and you don’t need to spend a long time preparing for it. I’m sure that if you try skipping rope, you’ll love it and have a great time during breaks.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给新西兰朋友Jack写邮件,介绍一项适合课间进行的运动并说明推荐理由,以助其在中国高中交换生期间丰富课间活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
完美的:perfect→ideal
需要:need→require
愉快的:enjoyable→pleasant
活跃的:active→energetic
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:It only needs a rope, which is easy to carry.
拓展句:Since it only needs a rope, it is easy to carry.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It only needs a rope, which is easy to carry.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The reason why I recommend it is that it’s good for your health and saves time.(运用了why引导的定语从句、that引导的表语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·河南·期中)假定你是李华,你的朋友Jack写信告诉你,他最近沉迷于观看手机短视频,导致耽搁了学业,有些焦虑。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1) 表示理解;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I understand how addictive short videos can be. It’s really hard to stop once you start watching them. But as you know, schoolwork is important too. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, try to set a time limit for watching videos. Maybe you can allow yourself only one hour each day. This way, you can still enjoy the fun without spending too much time on it. Second, find other activities to fill your time. For example, you can read a book or go for a walk. These activities can help you relax and also give you a break from the screen.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给Jack写信,就他最近沉迷于观看手机短视频,导致耽搁了学业,有些焦虑的情况提出建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
重要的:important→significant/vital
建议:suggestion→proposal
帮助……:help→be of help for...
填满:fill→stuff
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:These activities can help you relax and also give you a break from the screen.
拓展句:Not only can these activities help you relax but also they can give you a break from the screen.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I understand how addictive short videos can be. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】But as you know, schoolwork is important too.(运用了as引导的定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·河南阳市华龙区濮阳市第一高级中学·期中)假定你是李华,下学期要到英国留学,准备寄宿在Tom家,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍自己的情况;
2. 询问对方的要求。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student who will study in the UK next term. I’m truly excited to live with your family and I’m a friendly, tidy person who enjoys cooking simple Chinese dishes— maybe I can share them with you sometime!
I wonder if you have any special requirements I should know about. For example, are there rules about meal times or using common areas? Also, do I need to prepare any daily items? If there’s anything I need to pay attention to, please let me know in advance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生下学期要到英国留学,准备寄宿在Tom家,请考生给他写封邮件,介绍自己的情况并询问寄宿要求。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
特别的:special→particular
提前:in advance→ahead of time
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For example, are there rules about meal times or using common areas?
拓展句:For example, are there rules which are concerned with meal times or using common areas?
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student who will study in the UK next term. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I wonder if you have any special requirements I should know about.(运用了if引导的宾语从句,和省略关系代词的定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·河南汤阴县第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,你校最近举行了冬季运动会,其中一些运动项目给你留下了深刻印象。你打算写信告诉你的笔友麦克,分享这次运动会体验和收获。
1. 运动会时间地点。
2. 选一个体育项目进行详细描写。
3. 你的收获和感受。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。提示:100 metre race 百米赛跑 relay接力赛
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【答案】
Dear Mike,
The Winter Sports Meeting, was held in our school’s track and field ground, which impressed me. I’m glad to share it with you.
In the sports meeting, lasting three days during from last Friday to last Sunday, there are all kinds of traditional events, during which three boys from my class and I took part in the 4 x100 m relay race. Because l was very nervous, I fell down when I took the stick from another boy. At that moment I wanted to give up. But hearing all the audience still cheering loudly for me, I stood up quickly and tried my best to catch up with others. Finally, we won the second. How excited I was then! I really understood the key to success is to never give up.
We were pleased to have such activities and it made us fully realize the importance of team spirit and persistence. Could you tell me what your sports meeting is like?
Yours ,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校最近举行了冬季运动会,其中一些运动项目给你留下了深刻印象。写信给你的笔友麦克,分享运动会体验和收获。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
举行:hold→take place
参加:take part in→participate in
竭尽全力:try one’s best to do→exert all one’s energies
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:But hearing all the audience still cheering loudly for me, I stood up quickly and tried my best to catch up with others.
拓展句:But when I heard all the audience still cheering loudly for me, I stood up quickly and tried my best to catch up with others.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The Winter Sports Meeting, was held in our school’s track and field ground, which impressed me.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】But hearing all the audience still cheering loudly for me, I stood up quickly and tried my best to catch up with others.(运用了现在分成作状语)
(一)
(25-26高一上·河南实验中学·期中)假定你是李华,上周六你班组织了一次市图书馆义工活动。请你给热衷志愿工作的留学生Daniel写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动的目的和过程;
2. 你的感悟。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
Knowing you are passionate about volunteer activities, I’m writing to tell you one.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Knowing you are passionate about volunteer activities, I’m writing to tell you one.
To promote a love of reading among students, our class organized a volunteer activity at the city library last Saturday. We arrived at the library at 9:00 am and spent the morning sorting books, cleaning shelves, and assisting librarians with their tasks. Besides, we also helped younger students find books that interested them. It was a busy but fulfilling day.
Through this activity, I learned the importance of teamwork and the joy of helping others. How proud I feel to have contributed to making our city library a better place for everyone.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一封介绍信,要求考生以李华的身份给热衷志愿工作的留学生Daniel写信,介绍班级组织的市图书馆义工活动的目的、过程以及自己的感悟。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
忙的:busy→occupied
组织:organize→ coordinate
帮助:help→ assist
重要性:importance→ significance
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Besides, we also helped younger students find books that interested them.
拓展句:Furthermore, we facilitated younger students in discovering books that piqued their curiosity.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To promote a love of reading among students, our class organized a volunteer activity at the city library last Saturday.(使用了非谓语动词短语做目的状语)
【高分句型2】Besides, we also helped younger students find books that interested them.(使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)
(二)
(2026·河南新未来大联考·期中)假定你是李华,你的好友Tom成功申请到两所心仪的夏令营,分别是”户外活动”夏令营和”汉语学习”夏令营。他只能选择其中一个,所以为此感到焦虑,并特意发邮件向你征求意见。请你用英语给Tom写一封建议信,内容包括:
1.对他的处境表示理解;
2.给出选择夏令营的具体建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I totally understand your anxiety when having to choose between the two of your favourite summer camps. I’d like to give you some suggestions.
Here are some small suggestions. First, think about your hobbies. If you love sports, pick the camp with more outdoor activities like hiking. Second, ask yourself which camp helps your study more. For example, if you want to improve Chinese, the one with Chinese classes is better.
No matter what you choose, it will be a great experience. Don’t worry too much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Tom写一封建议信,对他的处境表示理解并给出选择夏令营的具体建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
完全:totally→completely
选择:choose→select
例如:for example→for instance
担心:worry→be concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some small suggestions.
拓展句:Here are some small suggestions that might help.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If you love sports, pick the camp with more outdoor activities like hiking.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】No matter what you choose, it will be a great experience.(运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·河南郑州第一中学·期中)假设你是李华,上周重阳节 (Double Ninth Festival) ,你们班组织了去敬老院 (Nursing home) 的志愿活动。请根据以下提示,写篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点及参与者;
2. 活动过程;
3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
A Fun Double Ninth Visit to the Nursing Home
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【答案】A possible version
A Fun Double Ninth Visit to the Nursing Home
On the recent Double Ninth Festival, my whole class volunteered at the nearby nursing home, which left a deep impression on me.
Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups. Some chatted with the elders, listening to their stories about the past. Some helped clean their rooms, while others put on a short performance of folk songs and poems. Seeing their bright smiles when we chatted, I felt warm in my heart.
I truly enjoyed the activity. The elders need not only material support but also emotional care. It also reminded me to cherish the time with my own grandparents. Such meaningful experiences are truly priceless.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于重阳节去敬老院进行志愿者活动的短文向校英文报投稿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
珍惜:cherish→value
有意义的:meaningful→significant
灿烂的:bright→radiant
无价的:priceless→invaluable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups.
拓展句:The moment we arrived, we were divided into small groups.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】On the recent Double Ninth Festival, my whole class volunteered at the nearby nursing home, which left a deep impression on me.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Seeing their bright smiles when we chatted, I felt warm in my heart.(运用了现在分词作状语和when引导的时间状语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·河南叶县高中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Chris所在学校的“Music Club”和“Sports Club”正在招募新成员,他想选择其中一个参加,请你给些建议,给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 说明理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文一:Music Club
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear about the recruitment of your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club.” Having compared both options, I would recommend you join the Music Club without hesitation.
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its wide range of benefits. First, music, functioning as a lifelong companion, not only enriches your mind but also effectively reduces stress, which is invaluable during intense school periods. Second, actively participating in group performances will allow you to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. Moreover, exploring diverse types of music can deepen your appreciation for cultures worldwide.
I am confident that joining the Music Club will be a decision bringing you both profound joy and continuous personal growth.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
范文二:Sports Club
Dear Chris,
It’s exciting to hear about the recruitment at your school. After considering your energetic personality, I’d recommend the Sports Club.
My suggestion is based on several benefits. Engaging in regular physical activity will undoubtedly help you maintain fitness and serve as an effective outlet for academic stress. Moreover, team sports provide excellent opportunities to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. The discipline required in sports often translates into better focus in studies too.
I’m confident that the Sports Club would bring you both fun and valuable life skills.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就英国好友Chris所在学校的“Music Club”和“Sports Club”招募新成员一事,给他提供参加哪一个俱乐部的建议并说明理由。
【解析】
以范文一为例
1. 词汇积累
建议:recommend → suggest
参加:participate in → take part in
压力:stress → pressure
多样的:diverse → various
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, exploring diverse types of music can deepen your appreciation for cultures worldwide.
拓展句:Moreover, if you explore diverse types of music, you will deepen your appreciation for cultures worldwide.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its wide range of benefits. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, actively participating in group performances will allow you to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. (运用了动名词作主语)
(五)
(25-26高一上·河南郑州第十九中学模拟试卷一·期中)假定你是李华,你的外国网友Joe的家乡遭遇了洪涝灾害。请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点包括:
(1)给予安慰和鼓励;
(2)提供帮助。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Joe,
I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
I know that you are physically hurt. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can fully recover soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am always by your side. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给家乡遭遇洪涝灾害的外国网友Joe写一封电子邮件,给予安慰和鼓励。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
袭击:strike→hit
提供:offer→afford
支援:backup→support
完全地:fully→entirely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
拓展句:The reason why I’m writing is that I want to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(六)
(25-26高一上·河南郑州第十九中学模拟试卷二·期中)假如你是李华,前几天你和父母一起去了北京旅游。请你给你的美国朋友Mark写一封信介绍一下这次旅游。要点如下:
1. 参观了许多景点,如:故宫、长城、鸟巢、水立方;
2. 简要介绍其中两处景点。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the Palace Museum故宫;the Bird’s Nest鸟巢;the Water Cube水立方
Dear Mark,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
How is everything going? I will tell you something about the trip to Beijing I went on with my parents. We visited the Palace Museum, the Great Wall, the Bird’s Nest, the Water Cube, and so on.
What attracted me most were the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City with many treasures in it. As a famous wonder of the world, the Great Wall is made of countless stones and bricks, each of which is very big and heavy.
I do hope you can come to China and see some of the places of interest one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于书信。要求考生给美国朋友Mark写一封信,介绍和父母去北京旅游的经历,包括参观的景点并简要介绍其中两处景点。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
奇迹:wonder → marvel
吸引:attract → draw/appeal to
著名的:famous → noted
无数的:countless → innumerable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City with many treasures in it.
拓展句:The Palace Museum, which is also known as the Forbidden City, has a large number of treasures within it.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What attracted me most were the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] As a famous wonder of the world, the Great Wall is made of countless stones and bricks, each of which is very big and heavy. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I do hope you can come to China and see some of the places of interest one day. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·河南方城县第一高中学-10月·期中)假定你是李华,你校新来的外教 Mrs. Smith 对中国传统菜肴很感兴趣。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一个饭店;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese traditional dishes and I’d like to recommend “Lao Beijing Restaurant” to you.
It’s famous for authentic Beijing cuisine like Peking Duck and Braised Pork Belly. The ingredients are fresh, and the chefs follow traditional cooking methods to keep the original flavor. Besides, the restaurant has a cozy Chinese-style decoration, which lets you enjoy the food while feeling the Chinese culture. It’s not far from our school, so it’s convenient for you to get there.
Hope you’ll like it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校新来的外教 Mrs.Smith 对中国传统菜肴很感兴趣这一情况,给她写封邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
因……而出名:be famous for→ be known for
此外:besides→ what’s more
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ be keen on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s famous for authentic Beijing cuisine like Peking Duck and Braised Pork Belly.
拓展句:It’s a restaurant that is famous for authentic Beijing cuisine like Peking Duck and Braised Pork Belly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Besides, the restaurant has a cozy Chinese-style decoration, which lets you enjoy the food while feeling the Chinese culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese traditional dishes and I’d like to recommend “Lao Beijing Restaurant” to you.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·河南南阳第一中学校-12月·期中)假如你加入了你们学校的辩论队,本期辩题是“Will Ebooks Replace Printed Books?”,请你以正方立场写一份开场陈词。内容包括:
1. 你们辩队的论点;2. 你们辩队的论据。
参考词汇:the pros and cons 支持与反对;事物的利弊
Distinguished guests and referees, dear debaters,
Good morning! On behalf of the pros team, I’d like to state our standpoint:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you very much!
【答案】例文
Distinguished guests and referees, dear debaters,
Good morning! On behalf of the pros team, I’d like to state our standpoint: Ebooks will take the place of printed books due to its remarkable advantages over printed ones. Our detailed reasons are as follows.
As is universally acknowledged, ebooks have taken the world by storm for its incomparable convenience and incredible efficiency, providing a platform where book addicts can enjoy reading anytime, anywhere with just a smartphone or tablet. Additionally, it’s ebooks that offer us instant access to a diversity of books without the concern of storage. Equally worth mentioning is its search function which greatly facilitates our reading and enables us to quickly find the information we need.
In conclusion, while printed books hold mental value, it is unavoidable that ebooks will become the preferred choice for reading, revolutionizing the way we appreciate literature.
Thank you very much!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为“Will Ebooks Replace Printed Books?”的辩论以正方立场写一份开场陈词。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
取代:take the place of→replace
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary
欣赏:appreciate→admire
多样性:diversity→variety
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:E-books will take the place of printed books due to its remarkable advantages over printed ones.
拓展句:E-books will take the place of printed books because they have remarkable advantages over printed ones.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In conclusion, while printed books hold mental value, it is unavoidable that ebooks will become the preferred choice for reading, revolutionizing the way we appreciate literature.(运用了while引导让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Equally worth mentioning is its search function which greatly facilitates our reading and enables us to quickly find the information we need.(运用了which引导定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·河南豫北民办高中·期中)假如你是李华, Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且从三个方面和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。
1.对学校的印象2. 对老师同学的感觉3. 对新生活的决心。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going?
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I miss you very much after you left China, so I'm writing to tell you something about school life.
My school is very large and beautiful and I feel the new school life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. Now I can get along well with my new classmates, with whose help I adjust to the new life quickly. I have decided to try my best to learn from them and devote myself to my study. I believe I can make great progress in the new semester.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【解析】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封书信:假如你是李华, Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且从三个方面和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受:1.对学校的印象2. 对老师同学的感觉3. 对新生活的决心。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如;impression(印象),miss(想念),exciting(令人兴奋的),challenge(挑战),kind(善良的), classmate(同学)及semester(学期)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be full of(充满),get along well with(与……相处融洽),adjust to (适应于),devote oneself to(致力于),make progress(取得进步),try one’s best to do(尽最大努力做某事)以及hear from(收到……的来信),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Now I can get along well with my new classmates, with whose help I adjust to the new life quickly.”,宾语从句“I believe I can make great progress in the new semester.”,状语从句和非谓语动词“I miss you very much after you left China, so I'm writing to tell you something about school life.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
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(一)
【答案】
Dear Jack,
You asked about break-time sports, and I think skipping rope is perfect. It only needs a rope, which is easy to carry. Many of my classmates skip during breaks because it doesn’t need much space. You can skip alone or with friends, which makes break time more enjoyable.
The reason why I recommend it is that it’s good for your health and saves time. It can make your body active quickly after class, and you don’t need to spend a long time preparing for it. I’m sure that if you try skipping rope, you’ll love it and have a great time during breaks.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I understand how addictive short videos can be. It’s really hard to stop once you start watching them. But as you know, schoolwork is important too. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, try to set a time limit for watching videos. Maybe you can allow yourself only one hour each day. This way, you can still enjoy the fun without spending too much time on it. Second, find other activities to fill your time. For example, you can read a book or go for a walk. These activities can help you relax and also give you a break from the screen.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student who will study in the UK next term. I’m truly excited to live with your family and I’m a friendly, tidy person who enjoys cooking simple Chinese dishes— maybe I can share them with you sometime!
I wonder if you have any special requirements I should know about. For example, are there rules about meal times or using common areas? Also, do I need to prepare any daily items? If there’s anything I need to pay attention to, please let me know in advance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】
Dear Mike,
The Winter Sports Meeting, was held in our school’s track and field ground, which impressed me. I’m glad to share it with you.
In the sports meeting, lasting three days during from last Friday to last Sunday, there are all kinds of traditional events, during which three boys from my class and I took part in the 4 x100 m relay race. Because l was very nervous, I fell down when I took the stick from another boy. At that moment I wanted to give up. But hearing all the audience still cheering loudly for me, I stood up quickly and tried my best to catch up with others. Finally, we won the second. How excited I was then! I really understood the key to success is to never give up.
We were pleased to have such activities and it made us fully realize the importance of team spirit and persistence. Could you tell me what your sports meeting is like?
Yours ,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Knowing you are passionate about volunteer activities, I’m writing to tell you one.
To promote a love of reading among students, our class organized a volunteer activity at the city library last Saturday. We arrived at the library at 9:00 am and spent the morning sorting books, cleaning shelves, and assisting librarians with their tasks. Besides, we also helped younger students find books that interested them. It was a busy but fulfilling day.
Through this activity, I learned the importance of teamwork and the joy of helping others. How proud I feel to have contributed to making our city library a better place for everyone.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I totally understand your anxiety when having to choose between the two of your favourite summer camps. I’d like to give you some suggestions.
Here are some small suggestions. First, think about your hobbies. If you love sports, pick the camp with more outdoor activities like hiking. Second, ask yourself which camp helps your study more. For example, if you want to improve Chinese, the one with Chinese classes is better.
No matter what you choose, it will be a great experience. Don’t worry too much.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】A possible version
A Fun Double Ninth Visit to the Nursing Home
On the recent Double Ninth Festival, my whole class volunteered at the nearby nursing home, which left a deep impression on me.
Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups. Some chatted with the elders, listening to their stories about the past. Some helped clean their rooms, while others put on a short performance of folk songs and poems. Seeing their bright smiles when we chatted, I felt warm in my heart.
I truly enjoyed the activity. The elders need not only material support but also emotional care. It also reminded me to cherish the time with my own grandparents. Such meaningful experiences are truly priceless.
(四)
【答案】范文一:Music Club
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear about the recruitment of your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club.” Having compared both options, I would recommend you join the Music Club without hesitation.
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its wide range of benefits. First, music, functioning as a lifelong companion, not only enriches your mind but also effectively reduces stress, which is invaluable during intense school periods. Second, actively participating in group performances will allow you to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. Moreover, exploring diverse types of music can deepen your appreciation for cultures worldwide.
I am confident that joining the Music Club will be a decision bringing you both profound joy and continuous personal growth.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
范文二:Sports Club
Dear Chris,
It’s exciting to hear about the recruitment at your school. After considering your energetic personality, I’d recommend the Sports Club.
My suggestion is based on several benefits. Engaging in regular physical activity will undoubtedly help you maintain fitness and serve as an effective outlet for academic stress. Moreover, team sports provide excellent opportunities to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. The discipline required in sports often translates into better focus in studies too.
I’m confident that the Sports Club would bring you both fun and valuable life skills.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(五)
【答案】
Dear Joe,
I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
I know that you are physically hurt. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can fully recover soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am always by your side. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(六)
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
How is everything going? I will tell you something about the trip to Beijing I went on with my parents. We visited the Palace Museum, the Great Wall, the Bird’s Nest, the Water Cube, and so on.
What attracted me most were the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City with many treasures in it. As a famous wonder of the world, the Great Wall is made of countless stones and bricks, each of which is very big and heavy.
I do hope you can come to China and see some of the places of interest one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese traditional dishes and I’d like to recommend “Lao Beijing Restaurant” to you.
It’s famous for authentic Beijing cuisine like Peking Duck and Braised Pork Belly. The ingredients are fresh, and the chefs follow traditional cooking methods to keep the original flavor. Besides, the restaurant has a cozy Chinese-style decoration, which lets you enjoy the food while feeling the Chinese culture. It’s not far from our school, so it’s convenient for you to get there.
Hope you’ll like it!
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】例文
Distinguished guests and referees, dear debaters,
Good morning! On behalf of the pros team, I’d like to state our standpoint: Ebooks will take the place of printed books due to its remarkable advantages over printed ones. Our detailed reasons are as follows.
As is universally acknowledged, ebooks have taken the world by storm for its incomparable convenience and incredible efficiency, providing a platform where book addicts can enjoy reading anytime, anywhere with just a smartphone or tablet. Additionally, it’s ebooks that offer us instant access to a diversity of books without the concern of storage. Equally worth mentioning is its search function which greatly facilitates our reading and enables us to quickly find the information we need.
In conclusion, while printed books hold mental value, it is unavoidable that ebooks will become the preferred choice for reading, revolutionizing the way we appreciate literature.
Thank you very much!
(三)
【答案】
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I miss you very much after you left China, so I'm writing to tell you something about school life.
My school is very large and beautiful and I feel the new school life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. Now I can get along well with my new classmates, with whose help I adjust to the new life quickly. I have decided to try my best to learn from them and devote myself to my study. I believe I can make great progress in the new semester.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
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(一)
(25-26高一上·河南天立教育·期中)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Jack将要来中国当高中交换生,发
邮件向你询问适合课间进行的运动,请你回复邮件。内容包括:
1.推荐一项运动:
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节;以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高一上·河南·期中)假定你是李华,你的朋友Jck写信告诉你,他最近沉迷于观看手机短视频,导
致耽搁了学业,有些焦虑。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)表示理解:
(2)提出建议。
注意:
1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(25-26高一上·河南阳市华龙区濮阳市第一高级中学·期中)假定你是李华,下学期要到英国留学,准备寄
宿在Tom家,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍自己的情况:
2.询问对方的要求。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom.
Yours,
LiHua
(四)
(25-26高一上·河南汤阴县第一中学·期中)假如你是李华,你校最近举行了冬季运动会,其中一些运动项
目给你留下了深刻印象。你打算写信告诉你的笔友麦克,分享这次运动会体验和收获。
1.运动会时间地点。
2.选一个体育项目进行详细描写。
3.你的收获和感受。
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1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。提示:l00 metre race百米赛跑relay接力赛
进阶提升}
(一)
(25-26高一上·河南实验中学·期中)假定你是李华,上周六你班组织了一次市图书馆义工活动。请你给热
衷志愿工作的留学生Daniel写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动的目的和过程;
2.你的感悟。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
Knowing you are passionate about volunteer activities,I'm writing to tell you one.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2026河南新未来大联考·期中)假定你是李华,你的好友Tom成功申请到两所心仪的夏令营,分别是”
户外活动”夏令营和”汉语学习”夏令营。他只能选择其中一个,所以为此感到焦虑,并特意发邮件向你
征求意见。请你用英语给Tom写一封建议信,内容包括:
1.对他的处境表示理解;
2.给出选择夏令营的具体建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高一上·河南郑州第一中学·期中)假设你是李华,上周重阳节Double Ninth Festival),你们班组
织了去敬老院Nursing home)的志愿活动。请根据以下提示,写篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点及参与者:
2.活动过程:
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
A Fun Double Ninth Visit to the Nursing Home
(四)
(25-26高一上·河南叶县高中学.期中)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Cris所在学校的“Music Club'和
“Sports Club'正在招募新成员,他想选择其中一个参加,请你给些建议,给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的建议:
2.说明理由。
注意:1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(②)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(25-26高一上·河南郑州第十九中学模拟试卷一…期中)假定你是李华,你的外国网友Jo的家乡遭遇了洪
涝灾害。请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点包括:
(1)给予安慰和鼓励:
(2)提供帮助。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(六)
(25-26高一上·河南郑州第十九中学模拟试卷二·期中)假如你是李华,前几天你和父母一起去了北京旅游。
请你给你的美国朋友Mak写一封信介绍一下这次旅游。要点如下:
1.参观了许多景点,如:故宫、长城、鸟巢、水立方:
2.简要介绍其中两处景点。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the Palace Museum故宫;the Bird's Nest鸟巢;the Water Cube水立方
Dear Mark,
How is everything going?
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(一)
(25-26高一上·河南方城县第一高中学-10月·期中)假定你是李华,你校新来的外教Ms.Smith对中国传
统菜肴很感兴趣。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一个饭店:
2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mrs.Smith,
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高一上·河南南阳第一中学校-12月·期中)假如你加入了你们学校的辩论队,本期辩题是“W1
books Replace Printed Books?',请你以正方立场写一份开场陈词。内容包括:
1.你们辩队的论点;2.你们辩队的论据。
参考词汇:the pros and cons支持与反对;事物的利弊
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Distinguished guests and referees,dear debaters,
Good morning!On behalf of the pros team,I'd like to state our standpoint:
Thank you very much!
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(25-26高一上·河南豫北民办高中·期中)假如你是李华,Jane是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,
并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且从三个方面和她谈了你对高一新生活
的感受。
1对学校的印象2.对老师同学的感觉3.对新生活的决心。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jane,
How's everything going?
Yours,
Lihua
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