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专题13 书面表达
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨光华中学校·期中)在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在生活中,你一定遇到了你愿意与之交往的好朋友。我校公众号开展以朋友为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示:
(1) Who is your best friend?
(2) What are the differences between you and your best friend?
(3) What do you think of friendship?
要求:
(1)必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥,80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
(2)必须使用比较级。
(3)不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
My best friend is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨萧红中学校·期中)假如你是林涛,你的美国好友Peter写信向你询问你和你的朋友是否相似,请你给他回信说说你和你的朋友,并祝福他结交到好朋友。
写作要点:
1. What is a true friend?
2. Are you similar to or different from your friends?
3. Can you share an experience between your friend and you?
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 词数:不少于80。
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第四子联盟·期中)我们班将举行主题为“认识自己,夸夸自己”的活动。虽然我们每一个人都不是十全十美的, 但是每一个人的身上都有许多闪光点,让我们今天一起找回我们的自信!请你按照下面表格内容的要点,以Lily的身份写一篇发言稿。
认识自己
1. 自我介绍:姓名,性格;
2. 甜蜜的家:父亲,母亲;
夸夸自己
1. 父母关爱:交谈;家务;
2. 爱好广泛:旅游→开阔眼界;喜欢熊猫→……;锻炼→……;
3. 朋友对比:学习;助人。
作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数120个左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! Here I’ll share something about myself.
My name is Lily and ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is me—a healthy, loving and helpful girl. That’s all. Thank you for listening to me.
(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第三子联盟·期中)每个人都是这个世界上独一无二的存在。假如你是李海,你们学校要举行一次以“My Good Friend”为题的英语征文大赛。请你根据下表提示和要求写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你和你的好朋友张涵有哪些相似和不同之处吧!提示:
不同点
相似点
Zhang Han
1.比我高得多,更外向;
2.更擅长唱歌和跳舞;
3.喜欢看电影。
1.留着黑色短发;
2.喜欢运动;
3.学习努力,各门功课都很好;
4.喜欢阅读,通常周末一起去图书馆……
Li Hai
1.喜欢上网;
2.喜欢旅游。
要求:
1.语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.不少于80词。
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(五)
(25-26八上·黑龙江大庆三十六中学·期中)伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒年少时目睹他人因高价截肢而陷入困境,这促使他投身研发。经过多年努力,他最终用3D打印技术造出轻便平价的机械手臂。请根据下面的提示,来介绍他的这项发明。字数90字左右,文中不得出现真实姓名。
发明的契机
早期使用的机械臂昂贵 ($80, 000) 且笨重
研发过程
用塑料块、鱼线等材料制作,16岁生日获得3D打印机
发明成果
成功造出轻便 (0.5kg)、价格低廉$500,能随脑信号活动的3D打印机械臂
发明的影响
无私分享:免费在网上公开设计,让更多人受益
总结意义: perseverance (坚持)的力量……
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them.
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(六)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第六十九中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank想了解你最好的朋友王飞的一些情况,请你结合以下表格中的信息,给Frank回一封电子邮件,并且告诉他你们成为好朋友的原因。
My best friend’s name
Wang Fei
Our differences
more outgoing than me
less hardworking than me
Our similarities
enjoy doing sports
be good at English
Why we can be best friends
…
写作要求:1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整,语言精炼,表达准确,条理清晰;
4. 词数100词左右。
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第四十七中学·期中)假如你是李想,你校将在英语周举办征文比赛,主题是“An Amazing Plant”,请根据以下信息,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1. Which plant makes you interested?
2. What’s amazing about the plant? (appearance, character, habits)
3. Show its importance in people’s daily life.
写作要求:1.不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.至少80词。
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(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨德强学校·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter给你写信和你分享了最近在班会中探讨的有关结交朋友的话题,并询问你朋友的一些情况。请根据以下信息给他写一封回信,并谈谈你关于结交朋友的观点。
1. What’s your friend like?
2. Do you have any differences or similarities?
3. What’s your opinion about friends with differences or similarities?
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
Long time no see!
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Yours
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第十七中学校·期中)假如你是八年级学生李平,你的英国笔友David来信告诉你他刚刚在数学竞赛中获得一等奖并询问你的近况。请你给他写一封回信向他祝贺,并根据以下表格信息介绍一下自己的变化和最近的生活。
Changes
Stronger, more outgoing
Recent life and study
Help parents with some chores
Make a new friend who has similar hobbies
Sometimes go to parks to see animals and plants
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整,语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.字数不少于80 词。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ping
(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江绥化北林区第八中学校-11月·期中)假如你是李华,上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请根据下面表格提示写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。
要求:
1. 词数:80词左右。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Location (地点)
in the center of Shaanxi Province
Size
9,983 square kilometers
History
more than 6000 years
Places of interest
The Terracotta Army, Bell Tower...
Climate (气候)
four different seasons
Things to eat
noodles, dumplings...
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(五)
(25-26八上·黑龙江龙东地区·期中)现代科技飞速发展,各种高科技产品尤其是电脑为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。请以“Computer”为题,并根据下面的内容要点,写一篇短文。
内容包括:
(1) 电脑是最伟大的发明之一。
(2) 第一台电脑在1946年诞生于美国。它体积庞大且价格昂贵,只允许在银行和一些政府机关使用。
(3) 现在,电脑越来越小,且价格越来越便宜。它被广泛地运用于人们的日常生活中。
要求:
(1) 围绕主题展开写作,包含所给出的全部信息,可适当发挥。
(2) 词数: 80~100词左右。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Computer
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(六)
(25-26八上·黑龙江绥化第九中学·期中)你的美国朋友Ben想了解中国的传统节日。请选择一个你最喜欢的节日并写信告诉他。开头部分已写好,请根据问题完成剩余部分,写一篇70—80词的短文。
(1)When is the festival?
(2)What do you usually do at the festival?
(3)What special food do you eat?
(4)Why do you like it best?
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China.
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Yours,
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(七)
(25-26八上·黑龙江齐齐哈尔克东县第三中学·期中)劳动开创未来,奋斗成就梦想。学校校刊正在开展以“I learned a lot from doing housework”为题的征文活动。请你结合下面图示信息,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
Understand parents
Doing the housework
Make me more independent
Learn some useful skills
写作要求:1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
I learned a lot from doing housework
Doing housework is important to students because it teaches us living skills and can make us better.
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That’s all. Thank you!
(八)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨五区·期中)寒假就要到了,不少同学开始计划自己的寒假生活。请你根据下表的提示信息,以“My Plans for the Winter Holiday”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的寒假计划。
My Plans for the Winter Holiday
study
sports
new hobbies
…
doing my homework/
reading books…
running/
playing basketball…
play the guitar/
drawing…
…
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表述连贯,书写工整;
2. 根据表格内所给提示,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:70词左右 (短文开头和结尾部分已给出,且不计入总词数)。
My Plans for the Winter Holiday
This term comes to an end and the winter holiday is coming. I’m making plans for it.
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I believe I will have a meaningful winter holiday.
(九)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第五子联盟·期中)假如你是Nancy,你的笔友Ella想了解你和你的家庭成员,请你根据要求给她写一封邮件,介绍你和你的家人。
Nancy
比Helen学习努力,每天打扫房间。
Mother: Mary
家里面最漂亮的人,每天做家务。
Father: Bob
喜欢植物和动物,总是帮助妈妈做饭。
Sister: Helen
比Nancy高很多,更外向,每天整理自己床铺。
Brother: Matt
和Nancy一样,对同学友好,每天遛两次狗。
要求:1.包括表格中所有内容,语句通畅,条理清晰;
2.不少于80词,开头已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Ella,
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Yours,
Nancy
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨风华中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的学校英语俱乐部要举行英语交流会,请你以“My Friends”为主题,根据以下提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。介绍你与朋友们的相似或不同之处,并谈谈你对交友的看法。
要点提示:
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Hello everyone!
I’m Li Hua. I am glad to join in the English Club activity. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江大兴安岭地区·期中)中共中央、国务院印发的《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》指出:把劳动教育纳入人才培养全过程。家务劳动是劳动教育的一个重要方面,请你写一篇关于家务劳动的文章。内容包括:
1. 你印象深刻的一次家务劳动。
2. 通过这次经历,你认为做家务有哪些好处,至少2点。
3. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
4. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第一子联盟·期中)假设图中是你的双胞胎朋友Lucy和Lily,请根据图片适当发挥想象,运用比较级、最高级等已学内容介绍一下你的这两位朋友,并谈谈你对“Should friends be similar or different?”的看法。
要求:
1. 至少80词;
2. 文中不能出现真实班级姓名。
参考词汇:straight hair 直发;curly hair 卷发
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(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第一一三中学校·期中)假如你是李华,你班本周召开班会,主题为The most Popular Person around Me。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇发言稿,推荐你心中的合适人选。
内容包括:
基本信息
Who is it?
(1)姓名:Linda
(2)外貌:……
推选理由
Why choose her?
(1)个性:如,勤奋…等
(2)优势:擅长…
对我的引领
What role does she play in my growth?
……
要求:1.字迹工整,语言精炼、准确,条理清晰;
2.可适度添加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.不少于80词,开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数;
4.不得使用真实校名和学生姓名。
Hello, everybody! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
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专题13 书面表达
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨光华中学校·期中)在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在生活中,你一定遇到了你愿意与之交往的好朋友。我校公众号开展以朋友为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示:
(1) Who is your best friend?
(2) What are the differences between you and your best friend?
(3) What do you think of friendship?
要求:
(1)必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥,80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
(2)必须使用比较级。
(3)不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
My best friend is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My best friend is Lucy. We have many things in common. She is as tall as me. We are both friendly, but we also have some differences. I have short hair, but Lucy’s hair is longer than mine. I am the most outgoing person in our class, but Lucy is quieter and more serious. I like playing tennis and swimming. Lucy is patient and she likes reading. My favorite TV program is the sitcom, because it is interesting and relaxing. Lucy likes watching sports shows because she thinks they’re exciting.
I think friends should always care about and support each other.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,表达自己的好朋友是Lucy;
第二步:详细介绍自己与Lucy之间的不同之处;
第三步:书写结尾,表达对友谊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①have...in common有共同之处
②as tall as和……一样高
③the most outgoing最外向的
④interesting and relaxing有趣且放松的
⑤each other互相
[高分句型]
①My favorite TV program is the sitcom, because it is interesting and relaxing. (原因状语从句)
②I think friends should always care about and support each other.(宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨萧红中学校·期中)假如你是林涛,你的美国好友Peter写信向你询问你和你的朋友是否相似,请你给他回信说说你和你的朋友,并祝福他结交到好朋友。
写作要点:
1. What is a true friend?
2. Are you similar to or different from your friends?
3. Can you share an experience between your friend and you?
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 词数:不少于80。
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter. I think a true friend should be honest and helpful. My best friend Li Hua and I share the same interests, but we are different in some ways. I like reading while he enjoys sports. Last month, he helped me repair my bike when it was broken. He is always there when I need help. I am lucky to have him as a friend because he makes me laugh and always supports me.
I hope you can also make good friends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据要点提示写作,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当发挥,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头问候并直接回应来信目的,简要说明对真正朋友的看法;
第二步,介绍自己和好朋友的相似或不同之处,并分享一次难忘的经历;
第三步,结尾表达对Peter的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①honest诚实的
②helpful乐于助人的
③in some ways在某些方面
[高分句型]
①I think a true friend should be honest and helpful.(think后接省略引导词that的宾语从句)
②Last month, he helped me repair my bike when it was broken.(when引导时间状语从句)
(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第四子联盟·期中)我们班将举行主题为“认识自己,夸夸自己”的活动。虽然我们每一个人都不是十全十美的, 但是每一个人的身上都有许多闪光点,让我们今天一起找回我们的自信!请你按照下面表格内容的要点,以Lily的身份写一篇发言稿。
认识自己
1. 自我介绍:姓名,性格;
2. 甜蜜的家:父亲,母亲;
夸夸自己
1. 父母关爱:交谈;家务;
2. 爱好广泛:旅游→开阔眼界;喜欢熊猫→……;锻炼→……;
3. 朋友对比:学习;助人。
作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数120个左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! Here I’ll share something about myself.
My name is Lily and ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is me—a healthy, loving and helpful girl. That’s all. Thank you for listening to me.
【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! Here I’ll share something about myself.
My name is Lily and I’m a friendly and hard-working girl. I live in a sweet family with my parents. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They not only care about my studies but also often talk with me like friends. I am proud of myself: First, I help Mom wash dishes and clean rooms at home. Second, I have many hobbies. Traveling helps me broaden my horizons, loving pandas teaches me to protect animals, and exercising keeps me healthy and energetic. Third, compared with my friends, I study harder and always help others with math problems. I believe these qualities will help me grow into a better person. I hope to make more friends and improve myself.
This is me—a healthy, loving and helpful girl. That’s all. Thank you for listening to me.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍你的姓名、性格及家庭基本情况;
第二步,描述各方面的优点;
第三步,总结并感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①They not only care about my studies but also often talk with me like friends.(使用了not only...but also....结构)
②I believe these qualities will help me grow into a better person.(宾语从句)
(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第三子联盟·期中)每个人都是这个世界上独一无二的存在。假如你是李海,你们学校要举行一次以“My Good Friend”为题的英语征文大赛。请你根据下表提示和要求写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你和你的好朋友张涵有哪些相似和不同之处吧!提示:
不同点
相似点
Zhang Han
1.比我高得多,更外向;
2.更擅长唱歌和跳舞;
3.喜欢看电影。
1.留着黑色短发;
2.喜欢运动;
3.学习努力,各门功课都很好;
4.喜欢阅读,通常周末一起去图书馆……
Li Hai
1.喜欢上网;
2.喜欢旅游。
要求:
1.语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
My Good Friend
I am Li Hai. I want to talk about my good friend Zhang Han. We are similar in some ways, but also different.
Zhang Han is much taller and more outgoing than me. He is better at singing and dancing. He also loves watching movies. However, I like surfing the Internet and traveling.
We both have short black hair. We like sports and study hard. All our subjects are excellent. We also enjoy reading. We often go to the library together on weekends.
Zhang Han is a great friend. We help each other and have fun together. I think friendship is important!
【解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头自我介绍并点明主题,说明朋友的基本关系;
第二步:分段描述不同点(身高、性格、爱好等)和相似点(外貌、学习、活动等),用对比词连接;
第三步:结尾总结友谊的重要性,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①be better at更擅长
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③each other彼此
④have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
I think friendship is important!(宾语从句)
(五)
(25-26八上·黑龙江大庆三十六中学·期中)伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒年少时目睹他人因高价截肢而陷入困境,这促使他投身研发。经过多年努力,他最终用3D打印技术造出轻便平价的机械手臂。请根据下面的提示,来介绍他的这项发明。字数90字左右,文中不得出现真实姓名。
发明的契机
早期使用的机械臂昂贵 ($80, 000) 且笨重
研发过程
用塑料块、鱼线等材料制作,16岁生日获得3D打印机
发明成果
成功造出轻便 (0.5kg)、价格低廉$500,能随脑信号活动的3D打印机械臂
发明的影响
无私分享:免费在网上公开设计,让更多人受益
总结意义: perseverance (坚持)的力量……
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them.
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【答案】例文
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them. Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research. Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals. He selflessly shared the designs online for free, helping many. His story truly shows the power of perseverance.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括发明的契机、研发过程、发明成果、发明的影响和总结意义,考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点,如发明成果和影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过“Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.”一句,借用“看到人们因昂贵的假肢而挣扎”这一契机来引出重点介绍的内容,即伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒的研发过程和发明成果;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“研发过程”和“发明成果”几个方面重点介绍这一发明的具体情况,同时提及了发明的影响;
第三步,书写结语。通过“His story truly shows the power of perseverance.”一句表达了对伊斯顿·沙拉佩勒坚持精神的赞扬,总结了这一发明的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①motivated by受……的激励
②struggle with与……斗争
③lightweight轻便的
④selflessly无私地
[高分句型]
①Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research.(过去分词短语作状语)
②Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals.(现在分词短语作状语)
(六)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第六十九中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank想了解你最好的朋友王飞的一些情况,请你结合以下表格中的信息,给Frank回一封电子邮件,并且告诉他你们成为好朋友的原因。
My best friend’s name
Wang Fei
Our differences
more outgoing than me
less hardworking than me
Our similarities
enjoy doing sports
be good at English
Why we can be best friends
…
写作要求:1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整,语言精炼,表达准确,条理清晰;
4. 词数100词左右。
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to tell you about my best friend Wang Fei. We have some differences. He is more outgoing than me, but I am more hardworking. But we also have a lot in common. We both enjoy doing sports and are good at English.
We became best friends not only because of our shared interests, but also because he is always kind and helpful. When I feel shy, he encourages me. When he needs help with homework, I explain things to him. We support each other. That’s why we get along so well.
I hope you can meet him one day. He is really a great friend!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山回应Frank的请求,介绍两人的差异及共同点;
第二步,介绍两人成为朋友的原因;
第三步,表达对朋友的评价和未来见面的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③get along well相处融洽
[高分句型]
①He is more outgoing than me, but I am more hardworking. (运用比较级结构)
②When he needs help with homework, I explain things to him. (when引导的时间状语从句)
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第四十七中学·期中)假如你是李想,你校将在英语周举办征文比赛,主题是“An Amazing Plant”,请根据以下信息,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1. Which plant makes you interested?
2. What’s amazing about the plant? (appearance, character, habits)
3. Show its importance in people’s daily life.
写作要求:1.不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.至少80词。
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【答案】例文
An Amazing Plant—Bamboo
The plant that interests me most is bamboo. It looks tall and green with hollow stems. What amazes me is that it grows incredibly fast and stays green all year round.
Bamboo is very important in daily life. Its stems are used to build houses and make furniture. People also eat its young shoots. Moreover, it helps protect the environment by preventing soil erosion.
In short, bamboo is not only amazing but also incredibly useful. We should learn from its spirit of staying strong in all seasons.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:需涵盖植物种类、特征(外观/习性)及日常生活重要性,避免真实校名,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引入主题,直接点明最感兴趣的植物,简要描述其外观;
第二步:描述特征与习性,突出竹子的生长速度和四季常青的特性;
第三步:说明日常生活重要性,从建筑、饮食、环保三方面举例,最后总结其价值。
[亮点词汇]
①incredibly fast极其迅速
②all year round全年
③prevent soil erosion防止水土流失
[高分句型]
What amazes me is that it grows incredibly fast and stays green all year round.(主语从句和表语从句)
(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨德强学校·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter给你写信和你分享了最近在班会中探讨的有关结交朋友的话题,并询问你朋友的一些情况。请根据以下信息给他写一封回信,并谈谈你关于结交朋友的观点。
1. What’s your friend like?
2. Do you have any differences or similarities?
3. What’s your opinion about friends with differences or similarities?
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
Long time no see!
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I’m glad to hear about your class meeting.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is very friendly and patient, always ready to listen when I feel down. We both enjoy playing basketball and watching sci-fi movies, which brings us a lot of joy. However, I like reading while he prefers drawing. Although we have differences, we respect each other.
In my opinion, friends with similarities can have fun together, while differences help us learn new things. True friendship is about understanding and supporting each other.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:是“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开头问候并回应Peter的来信;
第二步、描述朋友特点、自己与朋友之间的异同点;
第三步、总结交友看法。
[亮点词汇]
①feel down情绪低落
②respect each other互相尊重
③have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
We both enjoy playing basketball and watching sci-fi movies, which brings us a lot of joy. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第十七中学校·期中)假如你是八年级学生李平,你的英国笔友David来信告诉你他刚刚在数学竞赛中获得一等奖并询问你的近况。请你给他写一封回信向他祝贺,并根据以下表格信息介绍一下自己的变化和最近的生活。
Changes
Stronger, more outgoing
Recent life and study
Help parents with some chores
Make a new friend who has similar hobbies
Sometimes go to parks to see animals and plants
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整,语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.字数不少于80 词。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m happy to hear that you won the first prize in the math competition!
I’ve changed a lot recently. I’ve become stronger and more outgoing than before. I often help my parents with chores like sweeping the floor and cooking meals. Besides, I made a new friend who loves drawing as well. We often share ideas together. Sometimes, I go to parks to see beautiful plants and lovely animals. It helps me relax.
I hope everything goes well with you. Please write back soon!
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山表达对对方获奖的祝贺,并自然引出自我近况的介绍;
第二步:从身体、性格、家庭生活、交友及休闲活动等多方面具体描述自身变化;
第三步:以表达祝愿和期待回信结尾,呼应开头,保持书信格式完整。
[亮点词汇]
①share ideas分享想法
②besides此外
[高分句型]
①I made a new friend who loves drawing as well. (who引导的定语从句)
(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江绥化北林区第八中学校-11月·期中)假如你是李华,上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请根据下面表格提示写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。
要求:
1. 词数:80词左右。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Location (地点)
in the center of Shaanxi Province
Size
9,983 square kilometers
History
more than 6000 years
Places of interest
The Terracotta Army, Bell Tower...
Climate (气候)
four different seasons
Things to eat
noodles, dumplings...
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【答案】参考范文
Last week, I visited Xi’an with my parents.
It is a city in the center of Shaanxi Province, covering 9,983 square kilometers. With a long history of over 6,000 years, Xi’an has many famous places of interest, such as the Terracotta Army and the Bell Tower. The city has four different seasons, and the climate is comfortable. We also enjoyed delicious local food like noodles and dumplings.
I really enjoyed the trip!
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时(叙述旅行经历)和一般现在时(描述城市特点)
③提示:根据表格中的地点、面积、历史、景点、气候和美食信息进行写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头简单引入旅行经历;
第二步,分段介绍西安的地理位置、面积、历史、景点、气候和美食;
第三步,结尾表达对旅行的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①cover覆盖
②places of interest名胜古迹
③such as比如
[高分句型]
①It is a city in the center of Shaanxi Province, covering 9,983 square kilometers.(现在分词作状语)
②With a long history of over 6,000 years, Xi’an has many famous places of interest, such as the Terracotta Army and the Bell Tower.(运用了“with”引导的介词短语作状语 )
(五)
(25-26八上·黑龙江龙东地区·期中)现代科技飞速发展,各种高科技产品尤其是电脑为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。请以“Computer”为题,并根据下面的内容要点,写一篇短文。
内容包括:
(1) 电脑是最伟大的发明之一。
(2) 第一台电脑在1946年诞生于美国。它体积庞大且价格昂贵,只允许在银行和一些政府机关使用。
(3) 现在,电脑越来越小,且价格越来越便宜。它被广泛地运用于人们的日常生活中。
要求:
(1) 围绕主题展开写作,包含所给出的全部信息,可适当发挥。
(2) 词数: 80~100词左右。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Computer
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【答案】例文
Computer
The computer is one of the greatest inventions. The first computer was invented in America in 1946. It was very big and the price was very high. It was only used in banks and government organisations. Now, the computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower. It is widely used in people’s daily life. It is used for helping us to work and study. People can use it to chat online, search for information, watch movies, shop online and so on. It has become one of the most necessary things in our life.
Thank you for listening.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时与一般现在时;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应围绕“电脑”这一主题展开写作,包含所给出的全部信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直接点明“电脑是最伟大的发明之一”这一核心要点;
第二步,介绍第一台电脑的诞生时间、地点、体积、价格及使用范围的限制,并对比描述电脑变小变便宜的特点,并举例说明其在日常生活中的广泛应用;
第三步,结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②search for搜寻
③shop online网购
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①The computer is one of the greatest inventions.(运用了最高级句型)
②Now, the computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower.(运用了比较级句型)
(六)
(25-26八上·黑龙江绥化第九中学·期中)你的美国朋友Ben想了解中国的传统节日。请选择一个你最喜欢的节日并写信告诉他。开头部分已写好,请根据问题完成剩余部分,写一篇70—80词的短文。
(1)When is the festival?
(2)What do you usually do at the festival?
(3)What special food do you eat?
(4)Why do you like it best?
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China.
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Yours,
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【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China. I will tell you how I spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month of the Chinese lunar calendar. On this day, I spend time with my family at home. As always, my mom and I make mooncakes together. I like to make mooncakes of different shapes, such as round and fish-shaped. At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. My grandma usually tells us the story of Chang’e. It is really a wonderful day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的节日,可适当发挥,注意要点齐全,并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,表达很高兴分享自己是如何度过中秋节的;
第二步,具体介绍自己是如何度过中秋节的,包括时间、活动、食物及感受;
第三步,书写结语,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as always一如既往
②such as例如
③get together团聚
[高分句型]
①At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. (after引导时间状语从句)
②I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
(七)
(25-26八上·黑龙江齐齐哈尔克东县第三中学·期中)劳动开创未来,奋斗成就梦想。学校校刊正在开展以“I learned a lot from doing housework”为题的征文活动。请你结合下面图示信息,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
Understand parents
Doing the housework
Make me more independent
Learn some useful skills
写作要求:1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
I learned a lot from doing housework
Doing housework is important to students because it teaches us living skills and can make us better.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
I learned a lot from doing housework
Doing housework is important to students because it teaches us living skills and can make us better.
First, housework helps me understand how hard my parents work for our family. When I wash clothes or mop the floor, I realize it takes time and energy. Next, housework helps me become more independent. For example, I can cook simple meals and clean my room. Finally, I learn many useful skills, such as organizing things well. In this way, I can help my parents and feel proud.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据文章已给出的开头,引出主题;
第二步,分三点阐述做家务的好处;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②such as例如
③living skills生活技能
[高分句型]
①Doing housework is important to students because it teaches us living skills and can make us better.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I wash clothes or mop the floor, I realize it takes time and energy.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(八)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨五区·期中)寒假就要到了,不少同学开始计划自己的寒假生活。请你根据下表的提示信息,以“My Plans for the Winter Holiday”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的寒假计划。
My Plans for the Winter Holiday
study
sports
new hobbies
…
doing my homework/
reading books…
running/
playing basketball…
play the guitar/
drawing…
…
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表述连贯,书写工整;
2. 根据表格内所给提示,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:70词左右 (短文开头和结尾部分已给出,且不计入总词数)。
My Plans for the Winter Holiday
This term comes to an end and the winter holiday is coming. I’m making plans for it.
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I believe I will have a meaningful winter holiday.
【答案】例文
My Plans for the Winter Holiday
This term comes to an end and the winter holiday is coming. I’m making plans for it.
I plan to finish my homework first. I’ll spend an hour reading every night. I think I can learn a lot from books. Second, I’ll do sports every day to keep healthy. I’ll run with my brother every morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. Third, I plan to try a new hobby, such as playing the guitar. And I’ll help my parents do the dishes. I’m happy to do something for them.
I believe I will have a meaningful winter holiday.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要使用“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据表格中的提示信息,考生需描述寒假的学习、运动和新爱好等计划,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明寒假即将到来,正在制定计划;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点描述寒假的学习、运动和新爱好等具体计划;
第三步,书写结语。表达对寒假生活的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③keep healthy保持健康
④try a new hobby尝试新爱好
⑤be happy to do sth.乐意做某事
[高分句型]
I think I can learn a lot from books. (宾语从句)
(九)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第五子联盟·期中)假如你是Nancy,你的笔友Ella想了解你和你的家庭成员,请你根据要求给她写一封邮件,介绍你和你的家人。
Nancy
比Helen学习努力,每天打扫房间。
Mother: Mary
家里面最漂亮的人,每天做家务。
Father: Bob
喜欢植物和动物,总是帮助妈妈做饭。
Sister: Helen
比Nancy高很多,更外向,每天整理自己床铺。
Brother: Matt
和Nancy一样,对同学友好,每天遛两次狗。
要求:1.包括表格中所有内容,语句通畅,条理清晰;
2.不少于80词,开头已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Ella,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Nancy
【答案】例文
Dear Ella,
I’m happy to tell you about my family. There are five people in my family: my parents, my sister Helen, my brother Matt and me.
I study harder than Helen, and I clean my room every day. My mother Mary is the most beautiful in our family. She does housework every day. My father Bob loves plants and animals. He always helps my mother cook. Helen is much taller and more outgoing than me. She makes her bed every day. Matt is as friendly to classmates as I am. He walks the dog twice a day.
We are a happy family. I hope you can visit us one day!
Yours,
Nancy
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己和家人的信息,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头问候并引入主题;
第二步,按表格顺序介绍自己和家人的信息;
第三步,结尾总结并表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①do housework做家务
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
③as...as和……一样
[高分句型]
①I study harder than Helen, and I clean my room every day. (and连接的并列句)
②I hope you can visit us one day! (宾语从句)
(一)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨风华中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的学校英语俱乐部要举行英语交流会,请你以“My Friends”为主题,根据以下提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。介绍你与朋友们的相似或不同之处,并谈谈你对交友的看法。
要点提示:
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Hello everyone!
I’m Li Hua. I am glad to join in the English Club activity. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Hello everyone!
I’m Li Hua. I am glad to join in the English Club activity. Today, I want to share something about my friends Tom, Lisa and myself.
Tom is straightforward and loves traveling. We often plan trips to new places during our free time. Lisa is quiet and enjoys reading books about animals and plants, which makes her very knowledgeable. As for me, I’m outgoing and like playing sports. Though we have different personalities and hobbies, we get along really well.
I think true friends should help each other and share both happiness and sadness. It’s always wonderful to have good friends in our lives.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍两个朋友与自己的性格与爱好;
第三步,表达自己对交友的看法并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①straightforward坦率的
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③get along well相处融洽
④help each other相互帮助
[高分句型]
①Lisa is quiet and enjoys reading books about animals and plants, which makes her very knowledgeable. (并列句+非限制性定语从句)
②Though we have different personalities and hobbies, we get along really well. (让步状语从句)
③I think true friends should help each other and share both happiness and sadness. (宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26八上·黑龙江大兴安岭地区·期中)中共中央、国务院印发的《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》指出:把劳动教育纳入人才培养全过程。家务劳动是劳动教育的一个重要方面,请你写一篇关于家务劳动的文章。内容包括:
1. 你印象深刻的一次家务劳动。
2. 通过这次经历,你认为做家务有哪些好处,至少2点。
3. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
4. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
Last weekend, I cleaned my own room thoroughly. It was quite dusty! I spent an hour dusting the shelves, sweeping the floor, and organizing my books and clothes.
From this experience, I learned two important benefits of doing housework. First, it helps me learn responsibility. Taking care of my own space is my duty. Second, it makes me more independent. I can manage these tasks by myself now, without always asking my parents for help.
Doing housework is not just cleaning; it teaches me valuable skills for life.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时(描述经历)和一般现在时(说明好处);
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山描述印象最深的家务劳动,简要说明过程。
第二步:介绍家务劳动的好处,分两点说明。
第三步:总结观点,强调家务劳动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①cleaning 打扫
②valuable 珍贵的
③responsibility 责任感
[高分句型]
①I spent an hour dusting the shelves, sweeping the floor, and organizing my books and clothes.(运用了spend time doing结构)
②I can manage these tasks by myself now, without always asking my parents for help.(动名词作宾语)
(三)
(25-26八上·黑龙江牡丹江初中课改联盟第一子联盟·期中)假设图中是你的双胞胎朋友Lucy和Lily,请根据图片适当发挥想象,运用比较级、最高级等已学内容介绍一下你的这两位朋友,并谈谈你对“Should friends be similar or different?”的看法。
要求:
1. 至少80词;
2. 文中不能出现真实班级姓名。
参考词汇:straight hair 直发;curly hair 卷发
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【答案】例文
I have two wonderful friends, Lucy and Lily. They are twins, but they are different in many ways. Lucy is more outgoing than Lily. She has curly hair and loves playing basketball. Lily has straight hair and enjoys reading. She is the quieter one and is the best student in my class. Lucy is taller and stronger, but Lily is more careful and patient. In my opinion, friends should be different because they can learn from each other’s strengths and weaknesses. This makes friendship deeper and more exciting. After all, having friends with different personalities is really fun.
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:是“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图片以及题干进行写作,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、引出双胞胎朋友 Lucy和Lily,点明写作主题;
第二步、从外貌、性格、爱好等方面介绍Lucy和Lily的差异;
第三步、最后对“朋友相似还是不同”这一问题表达观点。
[亮点词汇]
①different in many ways在很多方面都不同
②In my opinion在我看来
③After all毕竟
[高分句型]
In my opinion, friends should be different because they can learn from each other’s strengths and weaknesses.(because引导原因状语从句)
(四)
(25-26八上·黑龙江哈尔滨第一一三中学校·期中)假如你是李华,你班本周召开班会,主题为The most Popular Person around Me。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇发言稿,推荐你心中的合适人选。
内容包括:
基本信息
Who is it?
(1)姓名:Linda
(2)外貌:……
推选理由
Why choose her?
(1)个性:如,勤奋…等
(2)优势:擅长…
对我的引领
What role does she play in my growth?
……
要求:1.字迹工整,语言精炼、准确,条理清晰;
2.可适度添加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.不少于80词,开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数;
4.不得使用真实校名和学生姓名。
Hello, everybody! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文:
Hello, everybody!
I’d like to recommend Linda as the most popular person around me. She is a tall girl with long black hair and always wears a bright smile.
Linda is not only hard-working but also kind to everyone. She is good at English and often helps classmates with their studies. For example, she patiently explains difficult grammar rules to us after class.
She plays an important role in my growth. When I failed an exam last term, she encouraged me and shared her learning methods. Now I have made great progress because of her help. She is a true role model for me.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍推荐对象的基本信息,然后说明推选理由以及对你的引领。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth愿意做某事
②wear a bright smile面带灿烂的笑容
③be good at擅长
④play an important role起着重要作用
[高分句型]
①When I failed an exam last term, she encouraged me and shared her learning methods.(when引导的时间状语从句)
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专题13 书面表达
(一)
【答案】例文:
My best friend is Lucy. We have many things in common. She is as tall as me. We are both friendly, but we also have some differences. I have short hair, but Lucy’s hair is longer than mine. I am the most outgoing person in our class, but Lucy is quieter and more serious. I like playing tennis and swimming. Lucy is patient and she likes reading. My favorite TV program is the sitcom, because it is interesting and relaxing. Lucy likes watching sports shows because she thinks they’re exciting.
I think friends should always care about and support each other.
(二)
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter. I think a true friend should be honest and helpful. My best friend Li Hua and I share the same interests, but we are different in some ways. I like reading while he enjoys sports. Last month, he helped me repair my bike when it was broken. He is always there when I need help. I am lucky to have him as a friend because he makes me laugh and always supports me.
I hope you can also make good friends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
(三)
【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! Here I’ll share something about myself.
My name is Lily and I’m a friendly and hard-working girl. I live in a sweet family with my parents. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They not only care about my studies but also often talk with me like friends. I am proud of myself: First, I help Mom wash dishes and clean rooms at home. Second, I have many hobbies. Traveling helps me broaden my horizons, loving pandas teaches me to protect animals, and exercising keeps me healthy and energetic. Third, compared with my friends, I study harder and always help others with math problems. I believe these qualities will help me grow into a better person. I hope to make more friends and improve myself.
This is me—a healthy, loving and helpful girl. That’s all. Thank you for listening to me.
(四)
【答案】例文
My Good Friend
I am Li Hai. I want to talk about my good friend Zhang Han. We are similar in some ways, but also different.
Zhang Han is much taller and more outgoing than me. He is better at singing and dancing. He also loves watching movies. However, I like surfing the Internet and traveling.
We both have short black hair. We like sports and study hard. All our subjects are excellent. We also enjoy reading. We often go to the library together on weekends.
Zhang Han is a great friend. We help each other and have fun together. I think friendship is important!
(五)
【答案】例文
A Wonderful Invention: The Artificial Arm
In our world, there are many amazing inventions that change people’s lives, and Easton LaChappella’s artificial arm is definitely one of them. Motivated by seeing people struggle with expensive artificial limbs, he began his research. Using plastic blocks and fishing lines, and later a 3D printer he received on his 16th birthday, he succeeded in creating a lightweight arm (only 0.5kg) that costs just $500 and can move via brain signals. He selflessly shared the designs online for free, helping many. His story truly shows the power of perseverance.
(六)
【答案】
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to tell you about my best friend Wang Fei. We have some differences. He is more outgoing than me, but I am more hardworking. But we also have a lot in common. We both enjoy doing sports and are good at English.
We became best friends not only because of our shared interests, but also because he is always kind and helpful. When I feel shy, he encourages me. When he needs help with homework, I explain things to him. We support each other. That’s why we get along so well.
I hope you can meet him one day. He is really a great friend!
Yours,
Li Hua
(一)
【答案】例文
An Amazing Plant—Bamboo
The plant that interests me most is bamboo. It looks tall and green with hollow stems. What amazes me is that it grows incredibly fast and stays green all year round.
Bamboo is very important in daily life. Its stems are used to build houses and make furniture. People also eat its young shoots. Moreover, it helps protect the environment by preventing soil erosion.
In short, bamboo is not only amazing but also incredibly useful. We should learn from its spirit of staying strong in all seasons.
(二)
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I’m glad to hear about your class meeting.
My best friend is Li Ming. He is very friendly and patient, always ready to listen when I feel down. We both enjoy playing basketball and watching sci-fi movies, which brings us a lot of joy. However, I like reading while he prefers drawing. Although we have differences, we respect each other.
In my opinion, friends with similarities can have fun together, while differences help us learn new things. True friendship is about understanding and supporting each other.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m happy to hear that you won the first prize in the math competition!
I’ve changed a lot recently. I’ve become stronger and more outgoing than before. I often help my parents with chores like sweeping the floor and cooking meals. Besides, I made a new friend who loves drawing as well. We often share ideas together. Sometimes, I go to parks to see beautiful plants and lovely animals. It helps me relax.
I hope everything goes well with you. Please write back soon!
Yours,
Li Ping
(四)
【答案】参考范文
Last week, I visited Xi’an with my parents.
It is a city in the center of Shaanxi Province, covering 9,983 square kilometers. With a long history of over 6,000 years, Xi’an has many famous places of interest, such as the Terracotta Army and the Bell Tower. The city has four different seasons, and the climate is comfortable. We also enjoyed delicious local food like noodles and dumplings.
I really enjoyed the trip!
(五)
【答案】例文
Computer
The computer is one of the greatest inventions. The first computer was invented in America in 1946. It was very big and the price was very high. It was only used in banks and government organisations. Now, the computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower. It is widely used in people’s daily life. It is used for helping us to work and study. People can use it to chat online, search for information, watch movies, shop online and so on. It has become one of the most necessary things in our life.
Thank you for listening.
(六)
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China. I will tell you how I spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month of the Chinese lunar calendar. On this day, I spend time with my family at home. As always, my mom and I make mooncakes together. I like to make mooncakes of different shapes, such as round and fish-shaped. At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. My grandma usually tells us the story of Chang’e. It is really a wonderful day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day.
Yours,
Li Hua
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I learned a lot from doing housework
Doing housework is important to students because it teaches us living skills and can make us better.
First, housework helps me understand how hard my parents work for our family. When I wash clothes or mop the floor, I realize it takes time and energy. Next, housework helps me become more independent. For example, I can cook simple meals and clean my room. Finally, I learn many useful skills, such as organizing things well. In this way, I can help my parents and feel proud.
That’s all. Thank you!
(八)
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My Plans for the Winter Holiday
This term comes to an end and the winter holiday is coming. I’m making plans for it.
I plan to finish my homework first. I’ll spend an hour reading every night. I think I can learn a lot from books. Second, I’ll do sports every day to keep healthy. I’ll run with my brother every morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. Third, I plan to try a new hobby, such as playing the guitar. And I’ll help my parents do the dishes. I’m happy to do something for them.
I believe I will have a meaningful winter holiday.
(九)
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Dear Ella,
I’m happy to tell you about my family. There are five people in my family: my parents, my sister Helen, my brother Matt and me.
I study harder than Helen, and I clean my room every day. My mother Mary is the most beautiful in our family. She does housework every day. My father Bob loves plants and animals. He always helps my mother cook. Helen is much taller and more outgoing than me. She makes her bed every day. Matt is as friendly to classmates as I am. He walks the dog twice a day.
We are a happy family. I hope you can visit us one day!
Yours,
Nancy
(一)
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Hello everyone!
I’m Li Hua. I am glad to join in the English Club activity. Today, I want to share something about my friends Tom, Lisa and myself.
Tom is straightforward and loves traveling. We often plan trips to new places during our free time. Lisa is quiet and enjoys reading books about animals and plants, which makes her very knowledgeable. As for me, I’m outgoing and like playing sports. Though we have different personalities and hobbies, we get along really well.
I think true friends should help each other and share both happiness and sadness. It’s always wonderful to have good friends in our lives.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
(二)
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Last weekend, I cleaned my own room thoroughly. It was quite dusty! I spent an hour dusting the shelves, sweeping the floor, and organizing my books and clothes.
From this experience, I learned two important benefits of doing housework. First, it helps me learn responsibility. Taking care of my own space is my duty. Second, it makes me more independent. I can manage these tasks by myself now, without always asking my parents for help.
Doing housework is not just cleaning; it teaches me valuable skills for life.
(三)
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I have two wonderful friends, Lucy and Lily. They are twins, but they are different in many ways. Lucy is more outgoing than Lily. She has curly hair and loves playing basketball. Lily has straight hair and enjoys reading. She is the quieter one and is the best student in my class. Lucy is taller and stronger, but Lily is more careful and patient. In my opinion, friends should be different because they can learn from each other’s strengths and weaknesses. This makes friendship deeper and more exciting. After all, having friends with different personalities is really fun.
(四)
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Hello, everybody!
I’d like to recommend Linda as the most popular person around me. She is a tall girl with long black hair and always wears a bright smile.
Linda is not only hard-working but also kind to everyone. She is good at English and often helps classmates with their studies. For example, she patiently explains difficult grammar rules to us after class.
She plays an important role in my growth. When I failed an exam last term, she encouraged me and shared her learning methods. Now I have made great progress because of her help. She is a true role model for me.
Thanks for listening!
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