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XB1U1《The person I admire most》人物传记写作导学案
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学习目标:
1.掌握传记类文章三段式结构:开头(基本信息)—主体(经历 & 成就)— 结尾(评价感悟)
2.学会区分时态:外貌性格用一般现在时;生平、经历、事迹用一般过去时
3.会使用非限制性定语从句、独立主格、分词作状语;会使用明喻 / 暗喻修辞美化句子
4.积累传记高频话题词汇,完成写作、自查修改
Part 1 课前预习:
Biography 传记:第三人称,介绍真人的生平、教育、经历、成就、性格。
autobiography:自传,第一人称
传记文章通常包含要素: □ birth time & place(出生时间地点) □ identity /job(身份职业) □ education background(教育背景) □ work experience(工作经历) □ main achievements(主要成就) □ personality & appearance(性格外貌) □ influence & comments(影响与评价)
时态提醒: 描述外貌、性格、称号:一般现在时
描述出生、求学、奋斗、过去事迹:一般过去时
Part 2 写作框架拆解
Task1 开头段 Introduction(引出人物,基础信息,23 句)
功能:介绍人物是谁,出生、身份、研究 / 事业方向;常用非限制性定语从句。 模板句:
The person I admire most is ________. Born in _______(place) in _______(year), _______, who is one of the greatest ________(jobs), showed a passion for ________.
Task2 主体段 Body(核心,经历 + 困难 + 成就 + 贡献,45 句)
功能:教育背景→工作经历→克服困难→取得成就→带来的影响;常用 which 非限定定语从句写贡献。 模板句:
After graduating from ________, he spent most of his time on ________. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved great success in ________, which ________. He is known as ________.
Task3 结尾段 Conclusion(评价 + 个人感悟,12 句)
功能:人物榜样作用,表达敬佩;现在分词完成式 Having done… 作状语。 模板句:
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
仿写练习(翻译):他为我们树立了榜样,值得我们尊敬。
Part3 话题词汇积累(必背)
人物品质类:
strong will 顽强的意志;great determination 坚定的决心;persistent 坚持不懈的;creative 有创造力的;passionate 满怀热忱的;courageous 勇敢的
教育 & 工作:
graduate from 毕业于;spend time on … 致力于;agricultural teaching and research 农业教学与研究
成就贡献:
breed hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻;boost/improve rice production 提高水稻产量;rid the world of hunger 消除世界饥饿;be known as 被誉为;set an example for sb 为某人树立榜样;deserve admiration and respect 值得敬佩与尊重
Part4 实战演练:仿写介绍隆平
姓名
Yuan Longping
出生
1930, Beijing
毕业院校
Southwest Agricultural College
职业
scientist
经历
devoted himself to agricultural teaching & research
成就
bred hybrid rice; known as “father of hybrid rice”; helped to get rid of hunger
(The person I admire most is _______.) Born in _______(地点/时间), _______(名字),who is one of the greatest _______(职业), showed a passion for___________(研究方向)
After graduating from __________(学校), he spent most of his time on___________(从事工作). Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in__________(成就), which__________________________(主要贡献). He is known as____________.(荣誉称号)
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
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仿写练习翻译答案
仿写(翻译):他为我们树立了榜样,值得我们尊敬。
He has set an example for us and deserves our respect.
实战演练・袁隆平完整范文(按照导学案模板填空成文)
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan Longping, who is one of the greatest scientists, showed a passion for agricultural teaching and research.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved great success in breeding hybrid rice, which helped rid the world of hunger. He is known as "father of hybrid rice".
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
范文:
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan Longping,who is one of the greatest scientists, showed a passion for agricultural teaching and research.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved great success in breeding hybrid rice, which helped rid the world of hunger. He is known as "father of hybrid rice".
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
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