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专题10 读后续写
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(25-26高一上·江西宜春丰城市第九中学·期中)读后续写
I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place.
Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where your only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.
I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large and expensive shops, I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.
I then requested the shop assistant selling me the luggage, which was not cheap at all, if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied, still all smiles, “I’m sorry Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.”
As I was wondering what kind of policy that was, I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me. Remember my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble, I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word, he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn’t see me.
I waited in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by, looking at their faces to see if they will show kindness to me. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.
注意:1. 续写的短文词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids.
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Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.
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【答案】参考范文:
That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was talking on the phone, and her voice told me she was a gentle and patient lady. The two kids were neatly dressed and waited quietly beside her. This must be a nice family, I thought to myself. Therefore, I approached to make a request. But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. Did I look like someone trying to hurt people? I felt my heart sinking horribly.
Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I didn’t know why but I just stopped him and made my request. I was expecting him to rush past but he immediately called the number of my driver and waited till my car came to be sure I was picked up, turned around before I could thank him adequately and was gone. Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者试图在繁华的街道上向人求助,看人们会有什么反应。结果女店员、少年以及一位年轻的母亲和她的两个孩子都先后拒绝了作者的求助,但是一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人注意到了作者,帮作者拨打了电话,作者还没来得及好好感谢他,他就转身走了。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“就在那时,我看到一位年轻的母亲和她的两个孩子”和第二段首句“最后,一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人似乎注意到了我”可知,第一段可描写作者向这位母亲求助结果被拒绝,该段段尾可衔接第二段内容。
②由第二段首句内容“最后,一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人似乎注意到了我。”可知,第二段可描写穿着简陋的男人帮助了作者,而作者还没来得及好好感谢他,他就转身走了,而作者也想把这样的善意继续传递下去。
2.续写线索:发现母子三人——想要求助——被拒绝——被男人注意到——男人提供帮助——司机来接作者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
走近:approach/come near
走开:go away/walk away
提出请求:make a request /ask for a favor
情绪类
感谢:thank /express gratitude to
惊讶:surprised /astonished
【点睛】
[高分句型1] But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. (运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help. (运用了who引导定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江西鹰潭贵溪市第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Thursday, Mr. Burke announced there would be a unit test the next day and anyone who didn’t pass would have to come to school on Saturday, most particularly me, since I didn’t pass the last unit test.
I did plan to study just to prove to him that I was plenty smart—which I was mostly except in math, which I’d be okay in if I’d memorize my times tables(乘法表). Just when I was ready to work, Nicho, my 5-year-old brother, came into my room with our new rabbit and it jumped on my desk and knocked the flashcards all over the floor.
I asked my mother to help me pick them up, but she said I was old enough to help myself. Anyway, Nicho and I took the rabbit outside and before long it was dinner. After dinner my father said I could watch a special on television if I’d done all my homework.
Of course I said I had.
That was the beginning. I felt terrible telling my father a lie about the homework so I couldn’t even enjoy the special.
Not much is important in our family. My friend Plummer had to do well in school and he was smart in math. And Andy had so many family rules to follow. My parents didn’t bother making up a lot of rules. But we do have to tell the truth—even if it’s bad. You can imagine how I didn’t really enjoy the special and felt uneasy.
I was nine o'clock when I got up to my room and that was too late to study for the test so I lay in my bed with the light off and decided what I would do the next day. But when I thought about Mr. Burke, it seemed perfectly sensible to cheat. Not passing the test was such a terrible thing that I just forgot my parents’ big thing about telling the truth.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual.
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Paragraph 2:
“Mommy says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked.
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【答案】范文:
In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual. When the test began, I just sat down next to Plummer and from time to time, I'd glance over at his paper to copy the answers. It would be an easy thing, because our desks were practically on top of each other. After the test, I couldn’t believe what I’d done in cold blood. I began to wonder about myself. All of a sudden I felt that I had turned into a criminal. Then my stomach was upside down. I went back home and told my mother I was sick. She didn’t believe me, but put me to bed anyhow. I lay in the bed in the early winter darkness when my father came in and sat down on my bed.
“Mommy says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked. “My stomach is feeling sort of upset.” I hedged. Luckily, it was too dark to see his face. “Well. Take a rest,” my father got up to leave. I could tell he didn’t believe me. Just as he shut the door I called out to him in a voice I didn’t even recognize as my own. I told him I cheated on the math test. He asked me to call Mr. Burke and told him exactly what happened. And I did. He said I should come on Saturday to take another test. He was not friendly but was not absolutely mean either. “Today I thought I was turning into a criminal,” in relief and not feeling sick any more I told my father when he turned out my light. Sometimes he kissed me good night and sometimes he didn’t. But tonight he did.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在考试之前没有好好的准备考试,而在考试中作弊,作者的心里很难过并和父母坦白,并在父母的帮助下向老师承认错误。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
由第一段首句内容“早上,我像往常一样高高兴兴地走进教室”可知,第一段可描写“我”如何作弊的细节,作弊后的感受以及感觉生病的描述。
由第二段首句内容““妈妈说你病了,从学校回来就一直待在房间里,”爸爸问到”可知,第二段可描写“我”与父亲之间的对话,要写出“我”如何对父亲坦诚自己考试作弊以及父亲的反应,并讲明最后如何解决作弊的后果。
2.续写线索:考试——未认真准备——作弊——难过——坦白——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始:begin /start/go ahead
②.回家:go back home/return home/arrive home
情绪类
①.不安:upset/uneasy/disturbed
②.友好的:friendly /kind
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He said I should come on Saturday to take another test.(省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] When the test began, I just sat down next to Plummer and from time to time(When引导的时间状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江西吉安第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I like running, and for me, success was winning every race I participated in. My classmates called me“Mr. Champion(冠军)”. One day, there was a sports meeting at my school. Well-prepared for the running competition, I took part in all the races: the 400m, 200m, and 100m. A large number of people gathered to watch. The crowd was eager to see the running races because they were the most exciting events. When the 400m race started, all the boys ran fast. Unsurprisingly, I finished first and received a big round of applause(掌声). Although it was tiring, I felt proud and was on top of the world.
In the 200m race, I ran at full speed and finished first once again. The crowd gave me thunderous applause. I jumped all over the place and even didn’t think it was necessary to shake hands with other racers.
Then came the 100m race. Discouraged by the previous races, most boys gave up except one: a boy named Matt, who looked a little clumsy(笨拙的) but was a determined racer. The judge came to Matt and explained the situation, asking if he would like to give up too. Wild with joy, I thought I would win the championship without effort. However, to everyone’s surprise, Matt decided to finish the race. I sniffed(嗤之以鼻), “It’s a waste of time. I’m sure he doesn’t even know where the finish line is.”
The race between the two of us began. On hearing the starting gun, both Matt and I ran toward the finish line. Soon I sped up and left Matt behind. Just 30 meters before reaching the finish line, I was expecting to receive applause for the third time when I suffered a leg spasm(抽筋).
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I fell hard to the ground.
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With his help, I slowly stood up.
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【答案】 I fell hard to the ground. I tried to stand up, but there was a sharp pain in my leg. My dream of winning for the third time was over. The crowd’s cheers changed into shocked gasps. I felt my face burn with shame and frustration. Just moments ago, I was about to win; now I was lying helpless on the track, unable to move. To my surprise, Matt didn’t rush past. Instead, he stopped beside me with concern. “Are you okay? Let me help you.” He said as he reached out his hand.
With his help, I slowly stood up. Leaning on his shoulder, I hopped painfully toward the finish line. My heart was filled with a mixture of gratitude and regret. The audience began to clap—not for a winner, but for two boys who supported each other and crossed the finish line together. That day, I realized that the heart of a true champion doesn’t lie in winning, but in kindness and sportsmanship.
【导语】
本文以时间为线索展开。作者是一名短跑选手,几乎可以赢得所参加过的每一次比赛,在同学中享受盛名,但是在一次比赛中,其他同学因为作者的实力感到气馁,都退出了比赛,只剩下一名叫马特的同学和作者比赛,作者一开始很是轻视,但是在比赛中作者的腿突然抽筋,在马特的帮助下走到了终点线,作者也终于明白什么才是真正的冠军。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我重重地摔倒在地。”可知,第一段可描写作者感到很难堪,这时马特伸出援手。
②由第二段首句内容“在他的帮助下,我站了起来。”可知,第二段可描写作者和马特一起走向终点,作者非常羞愧又感激,也明白了什么才是真正的冠军。
2.续写线索:摔倒在地——羞愧难堪——伸出援手——一起走——鼓掌——道谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①站起来:stand up/get to one’s feet/rise to one’s feet
②冲过去:rush past/dash past/hurry past
③越过终点线:cross the finish line/get across the finish line
情绪类
①令某人吃惊的是:to one’s surprise/to one’s astonishment
②沮丧:frustration/discouragement/dismay
【点睛】
【高分句型1】He said as he reached out his hand. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】That day, I realized that the heart of a true champion doesn’t lie in winning, but in kindness and sportsmanship. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·江西省部分学校·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was an old shoebox in Meredith’s room. It was full of things other people might find “useless” — empty water bottles, paper-towel tubes that had no paper left, and even pieces of cardboard from her mom’s mail boxes. Every day after school, her favorite thing to do was look through this “treasure box” for materials. She cut and stuck until those thrown-away things became all kinds of funny little creations.
One day, she had just finished her new creation when Mom walked into her bedroom. “We won’t see that in a zoo,” Mom joked, looking over Meredith’s shoulder. Meredith laughed, “I call it a hippo (河马). A water bottle for the body, a paper-towel tube for the neck, and pieces of a plastic bag for the wings.”
“Will it stay with you on your first day tomorrow?” Mom asked. Meredith’s stomach hurt a bit. Making crafts (手工) had helped her forget that she would start third grade at a new school the next day. That summer, her family moved to a new town to be closer to Mom’s work. Mom saw the worry on her face. “You’re nervous about the new school, right? I’m sure you’ll make lots of friends just by being yourself.” She kissed Meredith’s hair and then left the room.
The next morning, Meredith decided to take Springy, her handmade paper snake, to school. The hippo was too big to fit in her schoolbag, so she couldn’t take it. During the first part of the day, knowing Springy was near made Meredith feel better — until she checked her schoolbag for Springy after a break. It was gone! Her courage went away fast.
And now it was time for lunch. She felt so helpless. While her class stood in line outside the lunchroom, Meredith kept busy reading the notes on the wall. That’s when she saw a poster on the board. It said: Want to Join an After-School Club? Sign up by Friday! Chess, Math, Cooking, Drama, Kickball, and Crafts. Talk to Mrs. Miller in 3B if you have questions or ideas.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Meredith looked at the poster for a long time.
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Meredith walked into the room for the first Crafts Club activity.
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【答案】One possible version:
Meredith looked at the poster for a long time. The word “Crafts” on the poster attracted her. She thought about her “treasure box” at home and all the funny creations she had made. After lunch, she took a deep breath and walked to 3B to find Mrs. Miller. “I want to join the Crafts Club,” she said softly. Mrs. Miller smiled and handed her a sign-up form. “Great choice! We’ll start making paper animals this week. Maybe you can show us your skills.” Meredith left with a smile, already wondering if anyone else in the club liked using “useless” things to make art. At the same time, she was looking forward to the first club activity the next week.
Meredith walked into the room for the first Crafts Club activity. As soon as she entered, she found everyone in the room was busy making crafts with recycled things. One kid held up a paper bird made of a shoebox, while another was gluing bottles into a large flower. “Want to share supplies?” a boy next to her asked, pushing a pile of colorful wrapping paper her way. Meredith nodded, taking out the materials she had prepared. Together, they figured out how to make a perfect shiny paper fish. In the end, everyone held up their creations to show the group — no two were the same, but all were made from “useless” stuff. Meredith realized she didn’t just find a place to make crafts, but a group that understood why those old things felt like treasures.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了喜欢用废旧物品制作手工的女孩Meredith随家人搬到新城镇,即将进入新学校三年级时因紧张带手工蛇上学却丢失,后发现学校手工俱乐部海报,最终在俱乐部找到归属感的故事。
【解析】
①由第一段首句内容“Meredith盯着海报看了很久。”可知,第一段可描写Meredith决定加入手工俱乐部,她去找Miller老师报名,老师对她表示欢迎,并告诉她本周将开始制作纸动物,Meredith充满期待。
②由第二段首句内容“Meredith第一次走进手工俱乐部的活动室。”可知,第二段可描写Meredith在手工俱乐部活动室里的所见所闻,她发现大家都用回收物品制作手工艺品,她和一个男孩一起制作了一条纸鱼,最后大家都展示了自己的作品,Meredith最终在俱乐部找到归属感。
2.续写线索:决定加入手工俱乐部——找老师报名——老师欢迎并告知活动内容——充满期待——第一次参加活动——看到大家用回收物品制作手工艺品——和男孩一起制作纸鱼——大家展示作品——找到归属感
3.词汇激活
行为类
①吸引:attract/appeal to
②忙于做某事:be busy doing/be occupied with
③弄清楚:figured out/work out/make out
情绪类
①温柔地:softly/gently
②微笑:smile/beam
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】 She thought about her “treasure box” at home and all the funny creations she had made. (运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】 Meredith realized she didn’t just find a place to make crafts, but a group that understood why those old things felt like treasures. (运用了省略that的宾语从句;that引导的定语从句以及why引导的宾语从句)
(一)
(25-26高一上·江西丰城第九中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a girl named Emily. Although her singing was pleasant to hear, lacking (缺乏) of courage, she never sang in front of strangers.
One summer, the neighborhood would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to join in the competition, but Emily said, “I’m afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said, “It’s okay; just do it bravely.” Emily followed her mom’s advice and decided to have a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went to the competition site. But she was too timid (胆小的) to walk onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. What’s worse, she was so nervous that she forgot the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few words. Being laughed at by others, embarrassed (尴尬的) and shy, she ran away from the stage.
Some boys ran after her and said, “Emily, coward (胆小鬼)! Emily, coward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged (拥抱) her mom and cried sadly.
“Well, my poor girl, don’t cry. Tell me what happened to you,” asked her mom. Emily told her mother what she had experienced.
Listening to her, her mom cupped (用手捧着) her face and said, “It doesn’t matter, girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become braver little by little. So, my girl, don’t be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest (收获) for you.”
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion.
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A few weeks later, there was another singing competition in her community.
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【答案】One possible version:
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion. Every afternoon, she stood in the neighborhood park, singing softly at first, then gradually raising her voice as passersby paused to listen. Some children mimicked her at first, but she remembered her mother’s words and kept going. One day, an elderly woman clapped and said, “Your voice is like sunshine!” Encouraged, Emily began singing at local gatherings. With each performance, her hands trembled less, and her lyrics flowed more smoothly. Lucy cheered her on, and even the boys who once teased her nodded in quiet respect when she sang a folk song perfectly at the school picnic.
A few weeks later, there was another singing competition in her community. This time, Emily signed up without hesitation. Backstage, she clasped Lucy’s hand, not from fear but excitement. When her name was called, she walked onto the stage, took a deep breath, and began. Her voice, clear and steady, filled the hall. She noticed the same boys in the front row, but now they were tapping their feet to the rhythm. As she hit the final note, the audience erupted in applause. Emily bowed, cheeks flushed with pride. Afterward, her mother hugged her tightly, whispering, “See? Courage is just practice in disguise.”
【导语】
本文以Emily克服当众唱歌的恐惧为线索展开,讲述了Emily歌声动听却胆小,她在母亲鼓励下参加歌唱比赛,因紧张忘词遭嘲笑而逃跑。母亲告诉她勇气需要练习,从此她每天练习公开演唱,从怯场到渐获路人掌声。几周后,她再次参赛,自信登台,歌声征服观众,连曾嘲笑她的男孩也为之打拍子。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Emily认真地听了妈妈的话,并按照妈妈的建议去做。”可知,第一段可描写Emily开始在有人的地方练习唱歌,扩大表演场景,逐渐得到他人的积极反馈,变得自信。
②由第二段首句内容“几周后,她所在的社区又举行了一场歌唱比赛。”可知,第二段可描写Emily从容登台,表现沉稳,得到观众的一致认可。
2. 续写线索:Emily听取妈妈的建议——Emily当众唱歌——Emily得到积极反馈,逐渐自信——社区又举行比赛——Emily从容表演——观众热烈的反应
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①停下:pause/stop
②紧握:clasp/clutch/grasp
③注意到:notice/spot/catch sight of
④拥抱:hug/embrace
情绪类
①恐惧:fear/fright
②兴奋:excitement/thrill/exhilaration
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Lucy cheered her on, and even the boys who once teased her nodded in quiet respect when she sang a folk song perfectly at the school picnic. (who引导限制性定语从句、when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As she hit the final note, the audience erupted in applause. (as引导时间状语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江西莲花中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Paula was fifteen, she found out something that surprised her a lot: She was adopted (收养的). This news was like a sudden lightning in the sky, showing her a new path she had never thought about before. It made her very curious about her real family and where she came from.
At first, the idea of being adopted was very hard for Paula to understand, like trying to climb a big mountain all by herself. But it also made her want to learn more about who she was. Each step she took was like going on a new adventure, sometimes making her feel scared but also excited. She was looking for her family’s stories, and her wish to find her roots (根) was like a bright flashlight, helping her see the way.
Paula decided to take a DNA test, which felt like using a special key to open a secret door to her family’s past. When the test showed that she was connected to a distant cousin, it made her very happy, like finding a treasure on a treasure hunt. But when there were no more clues (线索) to follow, Paula felt very sad, as if a big cloud had covered the sun and made everything dark. She felt like crying because she didn’t know what to do next.
But even when things looked bad, Paula didn't give up. She became stronger and more determined, like a superhero who keeps going even when it's hard. She thought that if she kept trying, she would find the answers she wanted.
Paula had a best friend named Heather, and they had a very strong friendship, like two trees that grow close together and support each other. They had been friends for a long time and had shared many happy and difficult moments. As they grew older, people noticed that they looked a lot alike and sometimes joked that they could be sisters. They always laughed at this, but they didn’t know that there might be some truth in what people were saying.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The biggest surprise in Paula’s life happened.
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This big news changed everything for Paula and Heather.
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【答案】参考范文:
The biggest surprise in Paula’s life happened. It turned out that her best friend Heather was actually her half- sister. This amazing discovery was made by comparing their DNA and getting help from a cousin who knew how to understand the test results. It was like a joke they used to laugh at turned into the truth. It felt like a movie, but it was really happening to them. They made sure it was true by looking deeply into their family's past. With the help of family members and the important DNA proof, they knew for sure that Heather and Paula were sisters and not just friends.
This big news changed everything for Paula and Heather. Knowing they were sisters made their friendship even more special. They were so happy to find out they were family and celebrated how their lives had come together in such an amazing way. Paula’s story, from being shocked by learning she was adopted to being happy about finding a sister, shows that life can be full of surprises. Their story also shows us that sometimes the people we choose to love can become just as important as our family by blood.
【导语】
文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了Paula在得知自己是被收养的孩子后,经历了一系列情感起伏和探索自我身份的过程。她对这个消息感到震惊,但同时也激发了她对自己亲生家庭和根源的好奇心。Paula通过DNA测试寻找线索,虽然过程中有喜有忧,但她没有放弃,变得更加坚强和坚定。同时,她与好友Heather之间深厚的友情也贯穿了整个故事,两人不仅在外貌上相似,而且在彼此的生活中相互支持。
【解析】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“Paula的生活中发生了最大的惊喜。”可知,第一段可描写惊喜的具体内容。
②由第二段首句内容“这一重大消息彻底改变了Paula和Heather的生活。”可知,第二段可描写这一重大消息对姐妹俩的影响以及感悟。
2.续写线索:Paul和Heather是姐妹——证实消息——加深友谊——惊喜——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
发生:happen/take place
发现:find out/discover
充满:be full of/be filled with
选择:choose/select
情绪类
令人惊讶的:amazing/astonishing
高兴的:happy/delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This amazing discovery was made by comparing their DNA and getting help from a cousin who knew how to understand the test results.(运用了who引导定语从句,“疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语)
[高分句型2]Their story also shows us that sometimes the people we choose to love can become just as important as our family by blood.(运用了that引导宾语从句,省略了that的定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江西师范大学附属中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my middle school days, I was never quite good at sports. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t seem to find my footing on the field. This constant struggle left me feeling disheartened and filled with self-doubt.
One day, we had a soccer match in gym class, and it turned out to be a disaster for me. My mistakes led to our team's defeat, and I felt a strong sense of disappointment and embarrassment. To make matters worse, some of my teammates expressed their dissatisfaction, intensifying myself-doubt.
But out of the darkness, a ray of light emerged in the form of Gina, a warm-hearted and caring classmate, who noticed my struggle and understood the significance of supporting each other, She approached me after the match with a sweet smile on her face, comforting me in an encouraging voice and offering to give me a hand.
From that moment on, Gina became more than just a friend; she became my coach. She often went out of her way to spend extra time guiding me during our gym classes. I vividly remember the day when she taught me how to catch a ball. She patiently demonstrated the technique, showing me the right way to position my hands and how to predict the ball’s trajectory(轨迹).
With each attempt, she provided constructive feedback along with encouragement. “Yes, you’ve got this!” she would often say. “Well done. Keep pushing forward!” Her sincere belief in my abilities and her words of encouragement created a safe space for me to make mistakes and learn from them without fear of judgment, Gradually, I started to overcome my fear of the ball and developed the confidence to catch it instead of ducking away.
As our interactions increased, so did our bond of friendship. Gina would share stories of her own struggles and victories, saying that challenges were a natural part of the learning process. We laughed, we supported each other, and we grew together.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:
The day finally arrived when we had another soccer match in gym class.
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Para 2:
We all cheered, celebrating the victory.
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【答案】One possible version:
The day finally arrived when we had another soccer match in gym class. To tell the truth, at the very beginning, I was quite nervous and worried, though I had made great progress. I kept turning my head and looking straight at Gina. When our eyes locked, I saw trust, belief and inspiration. All of a sudden, my stressed mind was relaxed. I stepped onto the field with new-found determination. Gina’s belief in me fueled my performance, and to everyone’s surprise, I made crucial catches that contributed to our team’s success.
We all cheered, celebrating the victory. I hugged Gina tightly, exclaiming “I made it!” Gina smiled sweetly, “Yes, you’ve got this. Well done.” I couldn’t help but feel a deep sense of gratitude toward Gina. It is through Gina’s guidance and support that I have learned how to overcome my sense of insecurity, meet challenges, and succeed. Through this experience, I have realized the power of friendship and the importance of facing up to failure. My initial failure in the soccer match has opened the door to self-discovery and growth.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在中学时期参加足球比赛的经历,展现了作者从对运动不自信、害怕失败,到在同学Gina的鼓励和帮助下逐渐克服困难、建立自信,并最终在比赛中取得成功的过程。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“终于,又一次体育课上的足球比赛来临了。”以及第二段首句内容“我们都欢呼起来,庆祝这场胜利。”可知,第一段可描写作者一开始的忐忑不安,然后在Gina的鼓励下,逐渐放松并帮助球队获胜。
②由第二段首句内容“我们都欢呼起来,庆祝这场胜利。”可知,第二段可描写作者非常感激Gina的指导,也体会到了友谊的力量。
2.续写线索:又一次体育课上的足球比赛来临了——一开始,作者内心还是很紧张——但是,当作者看到Gina眼中的信任和鼓励后,作者放松了下来——令人惊讶的是,作者甚至帮助球队完成了几次接球,帮助球队最终获胜——当比赛结束时,作者紧紧抱着Gina,内心非常激动——作者对Gina充满感激,因为作者明白自己的成功离不开Gina的鼓励——通过这次经历,作者体会到了友谊的力量3.词汇激活
行为类
①对……做出贡献:contribute to/ make contributions to
②拥抱:hug/embrace
③克服:overcome/get over
情绪类
①担忧的:worried/ concerned
②感激:gratitude/ thankfulness
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When our eyes locked, I saw trust, belief and inspiration.(运用了when 引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Gina’s belief in me fueled my performance, and to everyone’s surprise, I made crucial catches that contributed to our team’s success.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高一上·江西景德镇·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I planned a small early-summer gathering at our new home to share it with family and friends. She prepared lots of snacks, while I tidied up the backyard—mowing the lawn, cleaning cobwebs, and wiping the patio furniture. It was perfect for kids to run around, except for one surprise: my brother brought his lively Irish Setter, Max.
Max was friendly but super energetic. Weighing in at just over fifty pounds, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys, let alone my six-month-old granddaughter. So when my brother arrived, I asked him to keep Max outside in the backyard. I didn’t want the dog running inside and bumping into the little ones.
At first, things went well. Max ran around the backyard, leaving the kids space to play. But after dinner, the weather turned bad—clouds rolled in, and a light drizzle started. Everyone came inside, and we had a problem: what to do with Max? I didn’t want him indoors, but my brother hated the idea of driving home with a wet dog. It was awkward. Finally, my brother left instead of arguing.
Later, I felt regretful. A few days passed, and I didn’t hear from my brother. I texted him to meet again, but his reply shocked me: “Not a chance.” I thought he’d get over it, but weeks went by with no contact. My wife noticed and told me to reach out, but I was stubborn.
Then I remembered: my brother had health issues, and his wife of 35 years had just passed away a few months before. Max was his only companion. I realized I was wrong—cleaning up a mess would’ve been easy, and my brother wouldn’t have left upset.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
I swallowed my pride, picked up a pizza and headed over to his house.
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Paragraph 2:
Several months later, we had another family gathering at our house.
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【答案】I swallowed my pride, picked up a pizza and headed over to his house. When I arrived, Max greeted me with wagging tail and wet kisses, as if nothing had happened. My brother stood in the doorway, his eyes tired but softening when he saw the pizza box. “I’m sorry,” I said sincerely. “I should have been more understanding.” He sighed, letting out months of unspoken pain. “You didn’t know how much Max means to me now,” he admitted quietly. We sat down, sharing stories and memories over warm slices, while Max curled up at our feet. The tension melted away, replaced by laughter and reconnection.
Several months later, we had another family gathering at our house. This time, Max was not only invited but welcomed with open arms. My granddaughter giggled as she petted him gently, and even my niece’s boys learned to play safely around him. Watching them run together under the sunny sky, I realized how foolish I’d been. Family isn’t about perfection—it’s about forgiveness, patience, and loving each other through stormy days. From that day on, Max became a regular visitor, his joyful energy filling every room he entered.
【导语】
本文以一条狗Max为线索,主要讲述了作者因担心狗Max影响孩子而要求其待在户外,导致兄弟关系疏远,最终主动道歉并修复亲情的故事。
【解析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我咽下我的骄傲,拿起一块披萨朝他家走去。”可知,本段可以写作者跟弟弟主动道歉,弟弟告诉作者Max对他的重要性,最后两人冰释前嫌。
②由第二段首句内容“几个月后,我们又在我家举行了一次家庭聚会。”可知,本段可以写这次家庭聚会的和谐,作者对Max的接纳,以及孩子与Max玩耍的快乐,以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:拿着披萨向他家走去→道歉→弟弟接受→弟弟讲述Max的重要性→两人坐下畅谈→再次举行家庭聚会→氛围一片祥和→作者的感悟。
3.词类激活:
行为类:
迎接: greet/welcome
叹气:sigh/let out a sigh
倾诉:let out/pour out/talk about
情绪类:
真诚地:sincerely/genuinely/from the bottom of one’s heart
愚蠢的:foolish/stupid/silly
安静地:quietly/calmly/in peace
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The tension melted away, replaced by laughter and reconnection.(运用了过去分词作后置定语。)
【高分句型2】Watching them run together under the sunny sky, I realized how foolish I’d been.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
(五)
(25-26高一上·江西南昌东湖区南昌中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jane started high school full of excitement. Eager to help her new class, teachers and classmates, she decided to run for (竞选) monitor. She was very happy when their head teacher, Mr. Johnson, announced she won. She dreamed of leading her class to be the best in the whole school.
However, problems came one by one. During self-study time, some classmates talked loudly; some even played music. Jane would stand up and tell everyone angrily, “Be quiet! It’s study time!” But her loud orders didn’t work. Tom, who was supposed to clean the blackboard, often “forgot”. Jane shouted to remind him of his duty, which only made Tom quite embarrassed and unhappy. Jane also announced her plans for group study after school, expecting everyone to join in it. But obviously most students weren’t interested and complained about the extra “work”.
Jane felt more and more disappointed and helpless. Her direct orders seemed to push people away instead of bringing them together. Her dream of a top united class seemed to be broken by the daily problems.
Standing alone after another rule failed, she felt deeply disappointed. Her methods weren’t working at all. Maybe she wasn’t suitable for being monitor. She couldn’t stand it like this any more.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右。(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. Johnson noticed Jane was in low spirits.
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With a clear mind, Jane returned to her duties in a new way.
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【答案】 Mr. Johnson noticed Jane was in low spirits. He gently asked her to stay after class. Sensing her disappointment, he shared his own early struggles as a teacher. “True leadership,” he said softly, “isn’t about shouting orders. It’s about respect and teamwork. Try listening more and talking with your classmates.” Jane felt a little hope as Mr. Johnson encouraged her to find wiser ways to win their trust. His words were like a ray of light, brightening her confusion. She realized she needed to change her methods to bring everyone together.
With a clear mind, Jane returned to her duties in a new way. Instead of shouting out commands, she arranged time to chat gently with her classmates and listen to their ideas and suggestions. She also grouped the whole class for cleaning duties to ensure fairness. To encourage a quiet environment for self-study, she herself kept learning quietly, setting a good example. Feeling their voices heard and understood, more students joined the study groups willingly. Gradually, the noisy classroom became quieter. Hopefully, Jane came to realize it was respect and cooperation that could build up the strong team in her dream.
【导语】
本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了女孩Jane兴奋地进入高中,因为想要帮助班级,建立顶级团结地班级而竞选班长,并取得成功。但在管理初期,没有合适地措施,指定地规则不被同学们接受,备受打击,开始怀疑自己无法胜任。老师Mr. Johnson注意到了此事,开导并指导她。之后,Jane重回岗位,以一种新的方式与同学沟通,并倾听他们的意见,最终成为了一名好班长。她也懂得了道理:尊重和合作才能建立优秀的班级。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“约翰逊先生注意到简情绪低落。”可知,第一段可描写Mr. Johnson 找到Jane,开导她,并指导她该怎么当好一个班长。Jane从老师的话语中受到启发。
②由第二段首句内容“简头脑清醒,以一种新的方式回到了工作岗位。”可知,第二段可描写Jane从老师那里获得了灵感,开始以全新的方式处理班级事务,并且真的取得了成效,建立起了她梦想中地优秀班级。
2. 续写线索:老师开导安慰Jane——老师提供方法指导——Jane情绪好转,重回岗位——Jane采取新的办法管班——新办法奏效——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①大声指挥:shout orders/shout out commands
②与…谈论:talk with/chat with
情绪类
①温柔地:softly/gently
②有希望的:feel a little hope/hopefully
【点睛】
[高分句型1]She realized she needed to change her methods to bring everyone together. (由that引导宾语从句,that省略)
[高分句型2]Hopefully, Jane came to realize it was respect and cooperation that could build up the strong team in her dream. (运用了强调句结构it was+被强调部分+that+其他成分)
(六)
(25-26高一上·江西崇仁县第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day my grandfather gave me a gift — a piggy bank (小猪存钱罐). It had an opening through which one could put money in, but the opening was not big enough to reach in and get the money out. The only way to get at the money was to break the piggy bank open.
My grandfather explained that was the whole idea: the piggy bank would help save my money so that, at the end of the year, I might have enough for that bike I dreamt about. I promised that I wouldn’t break it open until I could afford my dream bike.
Whenever he gave me a little bit of money, he would say, “This is for spending. But you can save some and put it in the piggy bank.” This worked fine. I loved shaking the piggy bank and hearing the sound of the coins. As it became heavier, I grew more excited, dreaming about buying my new bike, and all the adventures I could have on it.
Each time I wanted to take some money from the piggy bank to buy delicious ice-creams or something else, I would imagine riding my bike on the street. So for almost six months, I only put money into the piggy bank without taking any out. I thought I wouldn’t break my piggy bank for anything.
But one day something unexpected happened. I saw a piece of news on the Internet that a serious earthquake had happened in a nearby province. As many houses were destroyed, a lot of children lost their parents and became homeless. Seeing their shabby (破旧的) clothes and crying faces, I was sleepless that night.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
I knew I should do something.
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Paragraph 2:
My grandfather was surprised by my behavior.
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【答案】 I knew I should do something. Staring at the piggy bank on my desk, I hesitated. I remembered how excited I felt each time I dropped a coin inside, dreaming of the bicycle I wanted so much. But the images of those homeless children kept flashing in my mind. Their shabby clothes and tearful faces were far more urgent than my dream bike. Taking a deep breath, I held the piggy bank and gently broke it open. Coins spilled across my desk, shining like tiny stars of hope.
My grandfather was surprised by my behavior. When he saw the broken pieces of the piggy bank, he asked, “What happened, my boy?” I told him the news and explained the earthquake and the children’s suffering. To my surprise, his worried expression softened into the warmest smile I had ever seen. He hugged me tightly, and said, “You have taught me something beautiful today.” Actually, this kindness is worth more than a thousand bicycles. I knew what I did was right. And I will continue to save money to get my dream bike.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了爷爷送给作者一个存钱罐,作者努力存钱,想要买自己心仪的自行车。当看到临近省份发生了地震的电视新闻后,作者决定把钱捐给地震灾区的孩子们。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我知道我应该做点什么。”可知,接下来需描写作者在梦想自行车与救助儿童之间的内心挣扎,最终下定决心打破存钱罐的过程,体现从个人愿望到善意奉献的心理转变。
②由第二段首句内容“爷爷对我的行为感到惊讶。”可知,接下来应描写作者向祖父说明打破存钱罐的原因,以及祖父的反应,突出祖父的认可和对作者的正向引导。
2. 续写线索:目睹灾情心生善念 —— 犹豫于梦想与救助之间 —— 下定决心打破存钱罐 —— 向祖父说明捐赠缘由 —— 获得祖父赞许与拥抱 —— 坚定行善初心并继续追梦
3. 词汇激活:
行为类
① 凝视:stare at/gaze at
② 打破:break/smash
③ 拥抱:hug/embrace closely
情绪类
① 担忧的:worried/concerned/anxious
② 温暖的:warm/heartwarming
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]I remembered how excited I felt each time I dropped a coin inside, dreaming of the bicycle I wanted so much. (运用了how引导的宾语从句、each time引导状语从句和省略关系词的定语从句)
[高分句型 2]Coins spilled across my desk, shining like tiny stars of hope. (运用了现在分词作状语)
(一)
(25-26高一上·江西多校联考·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, when I was in line for the cafe at a shopping center, I noticed a mother in front of me with her daughter. The daughter kept asking for a pretzel(椒盐卷饼) and the mom patiently told her it would be their turn soon.
But when it was their turn, the employee said they had no pretzels ready and didn’t know when they would. I could see the mom’s shoulders drop in defeat. They ordered something else and went to their table.
When they reached their table, the little girl’s disappointment quickly turned into frustration(沮丧). She began to cry. The mother tried to calm her down, saying some gentle words of comfort, but the girl’s tears only seemed to fall faster. Other customers in the cafe started to look over, and their expressions were a mix of sympathy(同情) and discomfort.
When I saw the scene, my heart ached for the mother and daughter. I knew I had to do something to help. I quickly walked to their table and knelt down at the girl’s level. “Hey, there,” I said softly, trying to catch her eye. “I know you really want a pretzel. Would you stop crying and calm down if I can find you one?”
The girl looked at me through her tears. Her mother gave me a grateful smile, clearly feeling much better that someone was trying to help. I hurried back to the counter and explained the situation to the employee. She looked sorry but said they were out of pretzels and wouldn’t have any for at least another hour.
Determined to find a solution, I asked if there was any other snack they could offer that might be similar. The employee suggested they have some breadsticks that might be a good substitute(代替物). I agreed and paid for the breadsticks quickly.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I returned to the table and took out the breadsticks to the girl.
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Seeing her daughter eating the breadsticks happily, the mother smiled at me.
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【答案】 I returned to the table and took out the breadsticks to the girl. “Look, these are ‘super pretzel sticks’—they’re crisp and tasty, just like pretzels but more fun to hold!” I said in a playful tone. The girl blinked, reaching out a small hand to take one. A tiny bite later, her eyes lit up instantly. “Mmm, it’s good!” she mumbled, her tears drying up. She nibbled happily, swinging her legs under the table.
Seeing her daughter eating the breadsticks happily, the mother smiled at me. “Thank you so much—you have no idea how much this means,” she said, her voice warm with gratitude. I replied, “It’s just a little thing, but I’m glad she’s feeling better.” As I turned to leave, the girl called, “Wait! Share one?” I took a bite, and we both grinned. It felt like a tiny, sweet moment that turned a frustrating day into something warm.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了“我”在咖啡馆帮助因买不到椒盐卷饼而哭泣的小女孩,用面包棒化解其沮丧的温暖故事。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我回到桌旁,把面包棒拿给了小女孩。”可知,第一段可描写“我”用趣味说法介绍面包棒,女孩尝试后破涕为笑、开心进食的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“看到女儿开心地吃着面包棒,这位妈妈对我露出了笑容。”可知,第二段可描写母亲向“我”道谢,女孩分享面包棒,“我”收获温暖的互动。
2. 续写线索:送面包棒—— 趣味介绍—— 女孩尝食—— 破涕为笑—— 母亲道谢—— 女孩分享—— 暖心收尾
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 拿出:take out/pull out
② 尝试:take a bite/have a taste
③ 分享:share/pass on to
情绪类
① 沮丧:frustration/disappointment
② 感激:gratitude/thanks
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The girl blinked, reaching out a small hand to take one.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】It felt like a tiny, sweet moment that turned a frustrating day into something warm.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高一上·江西省部分学校·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The forest took me right in. One moment, I was running after fireflies as the sky got dark. The next, everything turned black. The trees seemed to grow taller than before. Their branches were like thin fingers, blocking out the stars.
I held my small lantern tight. Its weak light was the only thing keeping the dark away. I heard the sound made by an owl in the tree. I stopped still, my heart beating fast. I was afraid of that sound. I turned around quickly, trying to see through the dark trees. “Mom? Dad?” I called.
Only the leaves made a soft noise. I knew I had walked too far. The laughter of my parents and sister was gone. I couldn’t see the warm light of the campfire, either. Now, all I could smell was the wet forest. I turned around slowly, but every direction looked the same. I was lost. “Stay calm,” I whispered to myself. I remembered my dad saying those words.
But when the wind blew again, I felt like a thousand eyes were watching me. I looked around again. All I saw was the dark night. Tears filled my eyes, but I wiped them away. “You’re 10 years old, not a baby,” I told myself. I thought about my last fight with my sister. Her bike had a flat tire, so she rode mine to her friend’s house. Now I felt bad about it.
Suddenly, something moved. I jumped up from the log I’d been sitting on. A raccoon (浣熊) ran into the lantern’s light. I held my breath. The raccoon stopped, looked at me, and ran away. I sat there and cried. Then I heard a sound and froze. The crunch (碎裂声) of dry leaves got closer. It sounded bigger than the raccoon. “A bear,” I thought. “It will kill me.” I wished I was safe at home. I wanted to run, but I knew bears were faster than people.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I put the lantern on my belt and climbed a small tree.
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A voice surprised me: “Daniel, come down.”
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【答案】I put the lantern on my belt and climbed a small tree. My hands trembled as I grabbed the thin branches. The crunching sounds got louder — so close that I could almost feel the bear’s presence below. I held my breath, afraid even a small noise would draw its attention. Then, my lantern went out. The dark wrapped around me, and I closed my eyes, thinking of my parents and sister in the camp. Just when I felt tears coming again, a faint light lit up the trees.
A voice surprised me: “Daniel, come down.” It was Dad. I opened my eyes and saw his searchlight cutting through the dark. I almost fell off the branch as I climbed down. Dad pulled me into a tight hug. “We’ve been looking everywhere for you,” he said softly. Mom and my sister ran over too. As we walked back, I told Dad about the bear and my fight with my sister. He patted my shoulder and said, “Mistakes happen, but staying calm is how we get through them.” That night, I knew I’d never run off alone again.
【导语】
本文以Daniel在森林中的迷路经历及获救过程为线索展开,讲述了Daniel因追逐萤火虫在森林中迷路,遭遇疑似熊的危机后爬上树,最终被父母找到并领悟到遇事要冷静的故事。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我把灯笼挂在腰带上,爬上了一棵小树”可知,第一段可描写Daniel爬上树后的恐惧心理、灯笼熄灭后的绝望,以及看到微弱光线前的挣扎。
②由第二段首句内容“一个声音让我大吃一惊:“Daniel,下来。””可知,第二段可描写Daniel被父亲找到后的激动,与家人团聚的温暖,以及从这次经历中得到的感悟。
2. 续写线索: 爬树避险——灯笼熄灭陷绝望——被父亲找到获救——领悟冷静的重要性
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 攀爬:climb/ scramble
② 拥抱:hug/ embrace
③ 寻找:look for/ search for
情绪类
① 恐惧:afraid/ terrified/ scared
② 镇静,安心:calm/ relieved/ reassured
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The crunching sounds got louder — so close that I could almost feel the bear’s presence below. (运用了 so...that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】The dark wrapped around me, and I closed my eyes, thinking of my parents and sister in the camp. (运用了现在分词作状语)
(三)
(25-26高一上·江西鹰潭余江区第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A long time ago, I was travelling around Australia with two friends when I decided to go my own way and take a sailing trip around the Whitsunday Islands. It wasn’t that we didn’t get along any more, but one had to work in Sydney and the other had a flight to catch, and I decided not to let their plans stop me from seeing everything the Gold Coast had to offer.
I joined a catamaran cruise (双体船巡游), armed with a full bag of snacks. I figured this would be the best way to make friends. Everyone on the ship, except me, was with a group of friends, so I focused on taking photos of the beauty of the water and beyond with my camera, trying not to appear like a lonely bystander.
As we sailed, I found an island and moved to the back of the ship for the perfect shot. I needed something to lean on (倚靠), and there it was — a metal box with a lid (盖子). I placed my arms on it, only to realize it was a hot barbecue, heating up for lunch.
Suddenly, I screamed in pain as my arms touched the hot box. I pulled away quickly, but at first, no one took my cries seriously when I said I was in a huge pain. The captain of the ship was hesitant (犹豫的) to use the limited water supply on my injury, and I had no friends to comfort me.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gradually, my arms turned purple, and a girl finally believed my pain was real.
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After introducing myself to her friends, I pulled out the snacks I had brought along.
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【答案】 Gradually, my arms turned purple, and a girl finally believed my pain was real. She rushed over, her eyes filled with concern. “We need to cool down those burns,” she said urgently. Then, she told the severe situation to the captain. The captain also realized the need for immediate action, and used some of the water supply to help. After that, the girl offered me burn cream she borrowed from her friends. As we chatted, I was surprised to know that she was from my hometown. We quickly became friends, and with her as my guide, I was welcomed into her circle of friends.
After introducing myself to her friends, I pulled out the snacks I had brought along. We all sat around, munching on the snacks, sharing stories and laughter as we took in the stunning views of the Whitsundays. The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the Gold Coast, and I knew this was a moment to capture. I grabbed my camera and suggested we take a group photo. Everyone, including the captain, gathered around. The camera clicked, freezing a memory that brought us all closer together — a memory of friendship, adventure, and the beauty of the Australian coast.
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了“我”在澳大利亚独自参加双体船巡游,在拍照时因误靠热烧烤箱烫伤手臂,起初无人相信“我”很疼的经历,后来幸得一位女孩的帮助与关心,不仅缓解了伤痛,还收获了友谊。
【解析】
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“渐渐地,我的手臂变成了紫红色,终于有一个女孩相信我真的很疼。”可知,第一段可描写女孩采取的行动,如向船长说明情况,用船上的水帮“我”降温,拿出烫伤膏等,还可能会提及女孩与“我”交流并将“我”带入她的朋友圈。
②由第二段首句内容“在向她的朋友们做了自我介绍后,我拿出了随身带来的零食”可知,第二段可描写“我”向她的朋友们介绍自己后拿出零食,大家一起分享零食、欣赏美景、拍照等增进友谊的场景。
2. 续写线索:女孩关心、告知船长——处理烫伤——拉近距离,成为朋友——分享零食,增进友谊——欣赏美景,拍照留念
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①冲过来:rush over /dash over
②意识到:realize /be aware of
③把光照到(或洒在)……上:cast a golden glow over/shed a golden glow over
情绪类
①担心:her eyes filled with concern/her eyes glowing with heartfelt worry
②惊讶的:surprised/astonished
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】She rushed over, her eyes filled with concern. (运用了独立主格结构)
【高分句型 2】The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the Gold Coast, and I knew this was a moment to capture. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语以及省略that的宾语从句)
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江西宜春丰城市第九中学·期中)读后续写
I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place.
Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where your only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.
I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large and expensive shops, I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.
I then requested the shop assistant selling me the luggage, which was not cheap at all, if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied, still all smiles, “I’m sorry Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.”
As I was wondering what kind of policy that was, I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me. Remember my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble, I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word, he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn’t see me.
I waited in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by, looking at their faces to see if they will show kindness to me. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.
注意:1. 续写的短文词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids.
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Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江西鹰潭贵溪市第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Thursday, Mr. Burke announced there would be a unit test the next day and anyone who didn’t pass would have to come to school on Saturday, most particularly me, since I didn’t pass the last unit test.
I did plan to study just to prove to him that I was plenty smart—which I was mostly except in math, which I’d be okay in if I’d memorize my times tables(乘法表). Just when I was ready to work, Nicho, my 5-year-old brother, came into my room with our new rabbit and it jumped on my desk and knocked the flashcards all over the floor.
I asked my mother to help me pick them up, but she said I was old enough to help myself. Anyway, Nicho and I took the rabbit outside and before long it was dinner. After dinner my father said I could watch a special on television if I’d done all my homework.
Of course I said I had.
That was the beginning. I felt terrible telling my father a lie about the homework so I couldn’t even enjoy the special.
Not much is important in our family. My friend Plummer had to do well in school and he was smart in math. And Andy had so many family rules to follow. My parents didn’t bother making up a lot of rules. But we do have to tell the truth—even if it’s bad. You can imagine how I didn’t really enjoy the special and felt uneasy.
I was nine o'clock when I got up to my room and that was too late to study for the test so I lay in my bed with the light off and decided what I would do the next day. But when I thought about Mr. Burke, it seemed perfectly sensible to cheat. Not passing the test was such a terrible thing that I just forgot my parents’ big thing about telling the truth.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual.
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Paragraph 2:
“Mommy says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked.
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(三)
(25-26高一上·江西吉安第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I like running, and for me, success was winning every race I participated in. My classmates called me“Mr. Champion(冠军)”. One day, there was a sports meeting at my school. Well-prepared for the running competition, I took part in all the races: the 400m, 200m, and 100m. A large number of people gathered to watch. The crowd was eager to see the running races because they were the most exciting events. When the 400m race started, all the boys ran fast. Unsurprisingly, I finished first and received a big round of applause(掌声). Although it was tiring, I felt proud and was on top of the world.
In the 200m race, I ran at full speed and finished first once again. The crowd gave me thunderous applause. I jumped all over the place and even didn’t think it was necessary to shake hands with other racers.
Then came the 100m race. Discouraged by the previous races, most boys gave up except one: a boy named Matt, who looked a little clumsy(笨拙的) but was a determined racer. The judge came to Matt and explained the situation, asking if he would like to give up too. Wild with joy, I thought I would win the championship without effort. However, to everyone’s surprise, Matt decided to finish the race. I sniffed(嗤之以鼻), “It’s a waste of time. I’m sure he doesn’t even know where the finish line is.”
The race between the two of us began. On hearing the starting gun, both Matt and I ran toward the finish line. Soon I sped up and left Matt behind. Just 30 meters before reaching the finish line, I was expecting to receive applause for the third time when I suffered a leg spasm(抽筋).
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I fell hard to the ground.
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With his help, I slowly stood up.
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(四)
(25-26高一上·江西省部分学校·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was an old shoebox in Meredith’s room. It was full of things other people might find “useless” — empty water bottles, paper-towel tubes that had no paper left, and even pieces of cardboard from her mom’s mail boxes. Every day after school, her favorite thing to do was look through this “treasure box” for materials. She cut and stuck until those thrown-away things became all kinds of funny little creations.
One day, she had just finished her new creation when Mom walked into her bedroom. “We won’t see that in a zoo,” Mom joked, looking over Meredith’s shoulder. Meredith laughed, “I call it a hippo (河马). A water bottle for the body, a paper-towel tube for the neck, and pieces of a plastic bag for the wings.”
“Will it stay with you on your first day tomorrow?” Mom asked. Meredith’s stomach hurt a bit. Making crafts (手工) had helped her forget that she would start third grade at a new school the next day. That summer, her family moved to a new town to be closer to Mom’s work. Mom saw the worry on her face. “You’re nervous about the new school, right? I’m sure you’ll make lots of friends just by being yourself.” She kissed Meredith’s hair and then left the room.
The next morning, Meredith decided to take Springy, her handmade paper snake, to school. The hippo was too big to fit in her schoolbag, so she couldn’t take it. During the first part of the day, knowing Springy was near made Meredith feel better — until she checked her schoolbag for Springy after a break. It was gone! Her courage went away fast.
And now it was time for lunch. She felt so helpless. While her class stood in line outside the lunchroom, Meredith kept busy reading the notes on the wall. That’s when she saw a poster on the board. It said: Want to Join an After-School Club? Sign up by Friday! Chess, Math, Cooking, Drama, Kickball, and Crafts. Talk to Mrs. Miller in 3B if you have questions or ideas.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Meredith looked at the poster for a long time.
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Meredith walked into the room for the first Crafts Club activity.
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江西丰城第九中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a girl named Emily. Although her singing was pleasant to hear, lacking (缺乏) of courage, she never sang in front of strangers.
One summer, the neighborhood would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to join in the competition, but Emily said, “I’m afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said, “It’s okay; just do it bravely.” Emily followed her mom’s advice and decided to have a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went to the competition site. But she was too timid (胆小的) to walk onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. What’s worse, she was so nervous that she forgot the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few words. Being laughed at by others, embarrassed (尴尬的) and shy, she ran away from the stage.
Some boys ran after her and said, “Emily, coward (胆小鬼)! Emily, coward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged (拥抱) her mom and cried sadly.
“Well, my poor girl, don’t cry. Tell me what happened to you,” asked her mom. Emily told her mother what she had experienced.
Listening to her, her mom cupped (用手捧着) her face and said, “It doesn’t matter, girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become braver little by little. So, my girl, don’t be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest (收获) for you.”
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion.
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A few weeks later, there was another singing competition in her community.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江西莲花中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Paula was fifteen, she found out something that surprised her a lot: She was adopted (收养的). This news was like a sudden lightning in the sky, showing her a new path she had never thought about before. It made her very curious about her real family and where she came from.
At first, the idea of being adopted was very hard for Paula to understand, like trying to climb a big mountain all by herself. But it also made her want to learn more about who she was. Each step she took was like going on a new adventure, sometimes making her feel scared but also excited. She was looking for her family’s stories, and her wish to find her roots (根) was like a bright flashlight, helping her see the way.
Paula decided to take a DNA test, which felt like using a special key to open a secret door to her family’s past. When the test showed that she was connected to a distant cousin, it made her very happy, like finding a treasure on a treasure hunt. But when there were no more clues (线索) to follow, Paula felt very sad, as if a big cloud had covered the sun and made everything dark. She felt like crying because she didn’t know what to do next.
But even when things looked bad, Paula didn't give up. She became stronger and more determined, like a superhero who keeps going even when it's hard. She thought that if she kept trying, she would find the answers she wanted.
Paula had a best friend named Heather, and they had a very strong friendship, like two trees that grow close together and support each other. They had been friends for a long time and had shared many happy and difficult moments. As they grew older, people noticed that they looked a lot alike and sometimes joked that they could be sisters. They always laughed at this, but they didn’t know that there might be some truth in what people were saying.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The biggest surprise in Paula’s life happened.
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This big news changed everything for Paula and Heather.
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(三)
(25-26高一上·江西师范大学附属中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my middle school days, I was never quite good at sports. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t seem to find my footing on the field. This constant struggle left me feeling disheartened and filled with self-doubt.
One day, we had a soccer match in gym class, and it turned out to be a disaster for me. My mistakes led to our team's defeat, and I felt a strong sense of disappointment and embarrassment. To make matters worse, some of my teammates expressed their dissatisfaction, intensifying myself-doubt.
But out of the darkness, a ray of light emerged in the form of Gina, a warm-hearted and caring classmate, who noticed my struggle and understood the significance of supporting each other, She approached me after the match with a sweet smile on her face, comforting me in an encouraging voice and offering to give me a hand.
From that moment on, Gina became more than just a friend; she became my coach. She often went out of her way to spend extra time guiding me during our gym classes. I vividly remember the day when she taught me how to catch a ball. She patiently demonstrated the technique, showing me the right way to position my hands and how to predict the ball’s trajectory(轨迹).
With each attempt, she provided constructive feedback along with encouragement. “Yes, you’ve got this!” she would often say. “Well done. Keep pushing forward!” Her sincere belief in my abilities and her words of encouragement created a safe space for me to make mistakes and learn from them without fear of judgment, Gradually, I started to overcome my fear of the ball and developed the confidence to catch it instead of ducking away.
As our interactions increased, so did our bond of friendship. Gina would share stories of her own struggles and victories, saying that challenges were a natural part of the learning process. We laughed, we supported each other, and we grew together.
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1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The day finally arrived when we had another soccer match in gym class.
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We all cheered, celebrating the victory.
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(四)
(25-26高一上·江西景德镇·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I planned a small early-summer gathering at our new home to share it with family and friends. She prepared lots of snacks, while I tidied up the backyard—mowing the lawn, cleaning cobwebs, and wiping the patio furniture. It was perfect for kids to run around, except for one surprise: my brother brought his lively Irish Setter, Max.
Max was friendly but super energetic. Weighing in at just over fifty pounds, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys, let alone my six-month-old granddaughter. So when my brother arrived, I asked him to keep Max outside in the backyard. I didn’t want the dog running inside and bumping into the little ones.
At first, things went well. Max ran around the backyard, leaving the kids space to play. But after dinner, the weather turned bad—clouds rolled in, and a light drizzle started. Everyone came inside, and we had a problem: what to do with Max? I didn’t want him indoors, but my brother hated the idea of driving home with a wet dog. It was awkward. Finally, my brother left instead of arguing.
Later, I felt regretful. A few days passed, and I didn’t hear from my brother. I texted him to meet again, but his reply shocked me: “Not a chance.” I thought he’d get over it, but weeks went by with no contact. My wife noticed and told me to reach out, but I was stubborn.
Then I remembered: my brother had health issues, and his wife of 35 years had just passed away a few months before. Max was his only companion. I realized I was wrong—cleaning up a mess would’ve been easy, and my brother wouldn’t have left upset.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
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I swallowed my pride, picked up a pizza and headed over to his house.
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Several months later, we had another family gathering at our house.
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(25-26高一上·江西南昌东湖区南昌中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jane started high school full of excitement. Eager to help her new class, teachers and classmates, she decided to run for (竞选) monitor. She was very happy when their head teacher, Mr. Johnson, announced she won. She dreamed of leading her class to be the best in the whole school.
However, problems came one by one. During self-study time, some classmates talked loudly; some even played music. Jane would stand up and tell everyone angrily, “Be quiet! It’s study time!” But her loud orders didn’t work. Tom, who was supposed to clean the blackboard, often “forgot”. Jane shouted to remind him of his duty, which only made Tom quite embarrassed and unhappy. Jane also announced her plans for group study after school, expecting everyone to join in it. But obviously most students weren’t interested and complained about the extra “work”.
Jane felt more and more disappointed and helpless. Her direct orders seemed to push people away instead of bringing them together. Her dream of a top united class seemed to be broken by the daily problems.
Standing alone after another rule failed, she felt deeply disappointed. Her methods weren’t working at all. Maybe she wasn’t suitable for being monitor. She couldn’t stand it like this any more.
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Mr. Johnson noticed Jane was in low spirits.
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With a clear mind, Jane returned to her duties in a new way.
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(25-26高一上·江西崇仁县第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day my grandfather gave me a gift — a piggy bank (小猪存钱罐). It had an opening through which one could put money in, but the opening was not big enough to reach in and get the money out. The only way to get at the money was to break the piggy bank open.
My grandfather explained that was the whole idea: the piggy bank would help save my money so that, at the end of the year, I might have enough for that bike I dreamt about. I promised that I wouldn’t break it open until I could afford my dream bike.
Whenever he gave me a little bit of money, he would say, “This is for spending. But you can save some and put it in the piggy bank.” This worked fine. I loved shaking the piggy bank and hearing the sound of the coins. As it became heavier, I grew more excited, dreaming about buying my new bike, and all the adventures I could have on it.
Each time I wanted to take some money from the piggy bank to buy delicious ice-creams or something else, I would imagine riding my bike on the street. So for almost six months, I only put money into the piggy bank without taking any out. I thought I wouldn’t break my piggy bank for anything.
But one day something unexpected happened. I saw a piece of news on the Internet that a serious earthquake had happened in a nearby province. As many houses were destroyed, a lot of children lost their parents and became homeless. Seeing their shabby (破旧的) clothes and crying faces, I was sleepless that night.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
I knew I should do something.
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Paragraph 2:
My grandfather was surprised by my behavior.
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(一)
(25-26高一上·江西多校联考·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, when I was in line for the cafe at a shopping center, I noticed a mother in front of me with her daughter. The daughter kept asking for a pretzel(椒盐卷饼) and the mom patiently told her it would be their turn soon.
But when it was their turn, the employee said they had no pretzels ready and didn’t know when they would. I could see the mom’s shoulders drop in defeat. They ordered something else and went to their table.
When they reached their table, the little girl’s disappointment quickly turned into frustration(沮丧). She began to cry. The mother tried to calm her down, saying some gentle words of comfort, but the girl’s tears only seemed to fall faster. Other customers in the cafe started to look over, and their expressions were a mix of sympathy(同情) and discomfort.
When I saw the scene, my heart ached for the mother and daughter. I knew I had to do something to help. I quickly walked to their table and knelt down at the girl’s level. “Hey, there,” I said softly, trying to catch her eye. “I know you really want a pretzel. Would you stop crying and calm down if I can find you one?”
The girl looked at me through her tears. Her mother gave me a grateful smile, clearly feeling much better that someone was trying to help. I hurried back to the counter and explained the situation to the employee. She looked sorry but said they were out of pretzels and wouldn’t have any for at least another hour.
Determined to find a solution, I asked if there was any other snack they could offer that might be similar. The employee suggested they have some breadsticks that might be a good substitute(代替物). I agreed and paid for the breadsticks quickly.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I returned to the table and took out the breadsticks to the girl.
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Seeing her daughter eating the breadsticks happily, the mother smiled at me.
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(二)
(25-26高一上·江西省部分学校·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The forest took me right in. One moment, I was running after fireflies as the sky got dark. The next, everything turned black. The trees seemed to grow taller than before. Their branches were like thin fingers, blocking out the stars.
I held my small lantern tight. Its weak light was the only thing keeping the dark away. I heard the sound made by an owl in the tree. I stopped still, my heart beating fast. I was afraid of that sound. I turned around quickly, trying to see through the dark trees. “Mom? Dad?” I called.
Only the leaves made a soft noise. I knew I had walked too far. The laughter of my parents and sister was gone. I couldn’t see the warm light of the campfire, either. Now, all I could smell was the wet forest. I turned around slowly, but every direction looked the same. I was lost. “Stay calm,” I whispered to myself. I remembered my dad saying those words.
But when the wind blew again, I felt like a thousand eyes were watching me. I looked around again. All I saw was the dark night. Tears filled my eyes, but I wiped them away. “You’re 10 years old, not a baby,” I told myself. I thought about my last fight with my sister. Her bike had a flat tire, so she rode mine to her friend’s house. Now I felt bad about it.
Suddenly, something moved. I jumped up from the log I’d been sitting on. A raccoon (浣熊) ran into the lantern’s light. I held my breath. The raccoon stopped, looked at me, and ran away. I sat there and cried. Then I heard a sound and froze. The crunch (碎裂声) of dry leaves got closer. It sounded bigger than the raccoon. “A bear,” I thought. “It will kill me.” I wished I was safe at home. I wanted to run, but I knew bears were faster than people.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I put the lantern on my belt and climbed a small tree.
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A voice surprised me: “Daniel, come down.”
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(三)
(25-26高一上·江西鹰潭余江区第一中学·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A long time ago, I was travelling around Australia with two friends when I decided to go my own way and take a sailing trip around the Whitsunday Islands. It wasn’t that we didn’t get along any more, but one had to work in Sydney and the other had a flight to catch, and I decided not to let their plans stop me from seeing everything the Gold Coast had to offer.
I joined a catamaran cruise (双体船巡游), armed with a full bag of snacks. I figured this would be the best way to make friends. Everyone on the ship, except me, was with a group of friends, so I focused on taking photos of the beauty of the water and beyond with my camera, trying not to appear like a lonely bystander.
As we sailed, I found an island and moved to the back of the ship for the perfect shot. I needed something to lean on (倚靠), and there it was — a metal box with a lid (盖子). I placed my arms on it, only to realize it was a hot barbecue, heating up for lunch.
Suddenly, I screamed in pain as my arms touched the hot box. I pulled away quickly, but at first, no one took my cries seriously when I said I was in a huge pain. The captain of the ship was hesitant (犹豫的) to use the limited water supply on my injury, and I had no friends to comfort me.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gradually, my arms turned purple, and a girl finally believed my pain was real.
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After introducing myself to her friends, I pulled out the snacks I had brought along.
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(一)
【答案】参考范文:
That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was talking on the phone, and her voice told me she was a gentle and patient lady. The two kids were neatly dressed and waited quietly beside her. This must be a nice family, I thought to myself. Therefore, I approached to make a request. But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. Did I look like someone trying to hurt people? I felt my heart sinking horribly.
Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I didn’t know why but I just stopped him and made my request. I was expecting him to rush past but he immediately called the number of my driver and waited till my car came to be sure I was picked up, turned around before I could thank him adequately and was gone. Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help.
(二)
【答案】范文:
In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual. When the test began, I just sat down next to Plummer and from time to time, I'd glance over at his paper to copy the answers. It would be an easy thing, because our desks were practically on top of each other. After the test, I couldn’t believe what I’d done in cold blood. I began to wonder about myself. All of a sudden I felt that I had turned into a criminal. Then my stomach was upside down. I went back home and told my mother I was sick. She didn’t believe me, but put me to bed anyhow. I lay in the bed in the early winter darkness when my father came in and sat down on my bed.
“Mommy says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked. “My stomach is feeling sort of upset.” I hedged. Luckily, it was too dark to see his face. “Well. Take a rest,” my father got up to leave. I could tell he didn’t believe me. Just as he shut the door I called out to him in a voice I didn’t even recognize as my own. I told him I cheated on the math test. He asked me to call Mr. Burke and told him exactly what happened. And I did. He said I should come on Saturday to take another test. He was not friendly but was not absolutely mean either. “Today I thought I was turning into a criminal,” in relief and not feeling sick any more I told my father when he turned out my light. Sometimes he kissed me good night and sometimes he didn’t. But tonight he did.
(三)
【答案】 I fell hard to the ground. I tried to stand up, but there was a sharp pain in my leg. My dream of winning for the third time was over. The crowd’s cheers changed into shocked gasps. I felt my face burn with shame and frustration. Just moments ago, I was about to win; now I was lying helpless on the track, unable to move. To my surprise, Matt didn’t rush past. Instead, he stopped beside me with concern. “Are you okay? Let me help you.” He said as he reached out his hand.
With his help, I slowly stood up. Leaning on his shoulder, I hopped painfully toward the finish line. My heart was filled with a mixture of gratitude and regret. The audience began to clap—not for a winner, but for two boys who supported each other and crossed the finish line together. That day, I realized that the heart of a true champion doesn’t lie in winning, but in kindness and sportsmanship.
(四)
【答案】One possible version:
Meredith looked at the poster for a long time. The word “Crafts” on the poster attracted her. She thought about her “treasure box” at home and all the funny creations she had made. After lunch, she took a deep breath and walked to 3B to find Mrs. Miller. “I want to join the Crafts Club,” she said softly. Mrs. Miller smiled and handed her a sign-up form. “Great choice! We’ll start making paper animals this week. Maybe you can show us your skills.” Meredith left with a smile, already wondering if anyone else in the club liked using “useless” things to make art. At the same time, she was looking forward to the first club activity the next week.
Meredith walked into the room for the first Crafts Club activity. As soon as she entered, she found everyone in the room was busy making crafts with recycled things. One kid held up a paper bird made of a shoebox, while another was gluing bottles into a large flower. “Want to share supplies?” a boy next to her asked, pushing a pile of colorful wrapping paper her way. Meredith nodded, taking out the materials she had prepared. Together, they figured out how to make a perfect shiny paper fish. In the end, everyone held up their creations to show the group — no two were the same, but all were made from “useless” stuff. Meredith realized she didn’t just find a place to make crafts, but a group that understood why those old things felt like treasures.
(一)
【答案】One possible version:
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion. Every afternoon, she stood in the neighborhood park, singing softly at first, then gradually raising her voice as passersby paused to listen. Some children mimicked her at first, but she remembered her mother’s words and kept going. One day, an elderly woman clapped and said, “Your voice is like sunshine!” Encouraged, Emily began singing at local gatherings. With each performance, her hands trembled less, and her lyrics flowed more smoothly. Lucy cheered her on, and even the boys who once teased her nodded in quiet respect when she sang a folk song perfectly at the school picnic.
A few weeks later, there was another singing competition in her community. This time, Emily signed up without hesitation. Backstage, she clasped Lucy’s hand, not from fear but excitement. When her name was called, she walked onto the stage, took a deep breath, and began. Her voice, clear and steady, filled the hall. She noticed the same boys in the front row, but now they were tapping their feet to the rhythm. As she hit the final note, the audience erupted in applause. Emily bowed, cheeks flushed with pride. Afterward, her mother hugged her tightly, whispering, “See? Courage is just practice in disguise.”
(二)
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The biggest surprise in Paula’s life happened. It turned out that her best friend Heather was actually her half- sister. This amazing discovery was made by comparing their DNA and getting help from a cousin who knew how to understand the test results. It was like a joke they used to laugh at turned into the truth. It felt like a movie, but it was really happening to them. They made sure it was true by looking deeply into their family's past. With the help of family members and the important DNA proof, they knew for sure that Heather and Paula were sisters and not just friends.
This big news changed everything for Paula and Heather. Knowing they were sisters made their friendship even more special. They were so happy to find out they were family and celebrated how their lives had come together in such an amazing way. Paula’s story, from being shocked by learning she was adopted to being happy about finding a sister, shows that life can be full of surprises. Their story also shows us that sometimes the people we choose to love can become just as important as our family by blood.
(三)
【答案】One possible version:
The day finally arrived when we had another soccer match in gym class. To tell the truth, at the very beginning, I was quite nervous and worried, though I had made great progress. I kept turning my head and looking straight at Gina. When our eyes locked, I saw trust, belief and inspiration. All of a sudden, my stressed mind was relaxed. I stepped onto the field with new-found determination. Gina’s belief in me fueled my performance, and to everyone’s surprise, I made crucial catches that contributed to our team’s success.
We all cheered, celebrating the victory. I hugged Gina tightly, exclaiming “I made it!” Gina smiled sweetly, “Yes, you’ve got this. Well done.” I couldn’t help but feel a deep sense of gratitude toward Gina. It is through Gina’s guidance and support that I have learned how to overcome my sense of insecurity, meet challenges, and succeed. Through this experience, I have realized the power of friendship and the importance of facing up to failure. My initial failure in the soccer match has opened the door to self-discovery and growth.
(四)
【答案】I swallowed my pride, picked up a pizza and headed over to his house. When I arrived, Max greeted me with wagging tail and wet kisses, as if nothing had happened. My brother stood in the doorway, his eyes tired but softening when he saw the pizza box. “I’m sorry,” I said sincerely. “I should have been more understanding.” He sighed, letting out months of unspoken pain. “You didn’t know how much Max means to me now,” he admitted quietly. We sat down, sharing stories and memories over warm slices, while Max curled up at our feet. The tension melted away, replaced by laughter and reconnection.
Several months later, we had another family gathering at our house. This time, Max was not only invited but welcomed with open arms. My granddaughter giggled as she petted him gently, and even my niece’s boys learned to play safely around him. Watching them run together under the sunny sky, I realized how foolish I’d been. Family isn’t about perfection—it’s about forgiveness, patience, and loving each other through stormy days. From that day on, Max became a regular visitor, his joyful energy filling every room he entered.
(五)
【答案】 Mr. Johnson noticed Jane was in low spirits. He gently asked her to stay after class. Sensing her disappointment, he shared his own early struggles as a teacher. “True leadership,” he said softly, “isn’t about shouting orders. It’s about respect and teamwork. Try listening more and talking with your classmates.” Jane felt a little hope as Mr. Johnson encouraged her to find wiser ways to win their trust. His words were like a ray of light, brightening her confusion. She realized she needed to change her methods to bring everyone together.
With a clear mind, Jane returned to her duties in a new way. Instead of shouting out commands, she arranged time to chat gently with her classmates and listen to their ideas and suggestions. She also grouped the whole class for cleaning duties to ensure fairness. To encourage a quiet environment for self-study, she herself kept learning quietly, setting a good example. Feeling their voices heard and understood, more students joined the study groups willingly. Gradually, the noisy classroom became quieter. Hopefully, Jane came to realize it was respect and cooperation that could build up the strong team in her dream.
(六)
【答案】 I knew I should do something. Staring at the piggy bank on my desk, I hesitated. I remembered how excited I felt each time I dropped a coin inside, dreaming of the bicycle I wanted so much. But the images of those homeless children kept flashing in my mind. Their shabby clothes and tearful faces were far more urgent than my dream bike. Taking a deep breath, I held the piggy bank and gently broke it open. Coins spilled across my desk, shining like tiny stars of hope.
My grandfather was surprised by my behavior. When he saw the broken pieces of the piggy bank, he asked, “What happened, my boy?” I told him the news and explained the earthquake and the children’s suffering. To my surprise, his worried expression softened into the warmest smile I had ever seen. He hugged me tightly, and said, “You have taught me something beautiful today.” Actually, this kindness is worth more than a thousand bicycles. I knew what I did was right. And I will continue to save money to get my dream bike.
(一)
【答案】 I returned to the table and took out the breadsticks to the girl. “Look, these are ‘super pretzel sticks’—they’re crisp and tasty, just like pretzels but more fun to hold!” I said in a playful tone. The girl blinked, reaching out a small hand to take one. A tiny bite later, her eyes lit up instantly. “Mmm, it’s good!” she mumbled, her tears drying up. She nibbled happily, swinging her legs under the table.
Seeing her daughter eating the breadsticks happily, the mother smiled at me. “Thank you so much—you have no idea how much this means,” she said, her voice warm with gratitude. I replied, “It’s just a little thing, but I’m glad she’s feeling better.” As I turned to leave, the girl called, “Wait! Share one?” I took a bite, and we both grinned. It felt like a tiny, sweet moment that turned a frustrating day into something warm.
(二)
【答案】I put the lantern on my belt and climbed a small tree. My hands trembled as I grabbed the thin branches. The crunching sounds got louder — so close that I could almost feel the bear’s presence below. I held my breath, afraid even a small noise would draw its attention. Then, my lantern went out. The dark wrapped around me, and I closed my eyes, thinking of my parents and sister in the camp. Just when I felt tears coming again, a faint light lit up the trees.
A voice surprised me: “Daniel, come down.” It was Dad. I opened my eyes and saw his searchlight cutting through the dark. I almost fell off the branch as I climbed down. Dad pulled me into a tight hug. “We’ve been looking everywhere for you,” he said softly. Mom and my sister ran over too. As we walked back, I told Dad about the bear and my fight with my sister. He patted my shoulder and said, “Mistakes happen, but staying calm is how we get through them.” That night, I knew I’d never run off alone again.
(三)
【答案】 Gradually, my arms turned purple, and a girl finally believed my pain was real. She rushed over, her eyes filled with concern. “We need to cool down those burns,” she said urgently. Then, she told the severe situation to the captain. The captain also realized the need for immediate action, and used some of the water supply to help. After that, the girl offered me burn cream she borrowed from her friends. As we chatted, I was surprised to know that she was from my hometown. We quickly became friends, and with her as my guide, I was welcomed into her circle of friends.
After introducing myself to her friends, I pulled out the snacks I had brought along. We all sat around, munching on the snacks, sharing stories and laughter as we took in the stunning views of the Whitsundays. The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the Gold Coast, and I knew this was a moment to capture. I grabbed my camera and suggested we take a group photo. Everyone, including the captain, gathered around. The camera clicked, freezing a memory that brought us all closer together — a memory of friendship, adventure, and the beauty of the Australian coast.
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