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人教版 · 七年级上册 · Unit 2
We're Family!
话题作文指导 · 写作课
介绍家庭成员,表达对家人的爱与感激
CONTENTS
本课导航
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01
写作框架
开头 · 主体 · 结尾
02
核心词汇
名词 · 动词 · 形容词
03
建议句型
6 个实用表达模板
04
范文解析
全文 · 结构 · 亮点
再加一节:写作小贴士 + 实战训练
OBJECTIVES
本课学习目标
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能介绍
说出家庭成员的称呼与职业
能描述
描述家人的外貌、性格与日常活动
能表达
写一篇“我的家庭”并表达对家人的爱
能赏析
读懂范文,积累家庭话题的高频表达
WARMING UP
话题导入
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看看这温馨的一家,试着回答:
1. How many people are there in your family?
2. What does your father do?
3. What do you often do together?
4. What do you love about your family?
Tip: 可用 There are ... people in my family 开头。
WRITING FRAMEWORK
写作框架:三段式
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开头 Opening
家庭概况
· There are ... people in my family.
· I have a happy family.
· This is my family photo.
主体 Body
逐一介绍成员
· My father is a doctor.
· My mother likes cooking.
· My sister is ...
结尾 Ending
家庭感受与爱
· I love my family.
· We are a happy family.
· My family is my everything.
OPENING
框架 · 开头:介绍家庭概况
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怎么写 / What to include
· 用 There are ... people in my family 说明人数
· 点出家庭的整体感觉
· 可介绍这是一张全家福
参考例句 / Examples
There are four people in my family.
I have a happy family.
This is a photo of my family.
My family is not big but very warm.
BODY
框架 · 主体:逐一介绍家庭成员
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怎么写 / What to include
· 称呼 + 职业:My father is a doctor
· 外貌与性格:He is tall and kind
· 爱好与日常:My mother likes cooking
· 用 and / but / also 连接
参考例句 / Examples
My father is a doctor. He is tall and kind.
My mother is a teacher. She likes cooking.
My sister is a student. She is clever and funny.
We often have dinner together.
My grandparents live with us.
ENDING
框架 · 结尾:表达对家人的爱与感激
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怎么写 / What to include
· 直接表达我爱我的家
· 点出家庭让自己幸福/温暖
· 可感谢家人付出
参考例句 / Examples
I love my family very much.
We are a happy family.
My family makes me warm and happy.
I'm thankful to my parents.
02 CORE VOCABULARY
核心词汇
按“家庭成员 / 职业活动 / 形容词”分类,记熟就能写
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CORE VOCABULARY
词汇 · 家庭成员 & 职业
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家庭成员称呼
father / dad 爸爸
mother / mum 妈妈
brother 兄弟
sister 姐妹
grandfather 爷爷
grandmother 奶奶
uncle 叔叔
aunt 姑姑
cousin 表兄弟姐妹
parents 父母
职业与日常活动
doctor 医生
teacher 教师
worker 工人
farmer 农民
driver 司机
nurse 护士
work 工作
cook 做饭
look after 照顾
help 帮助
CORE VOCABULARY
词汇 · 形容词 & 常用短语
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描述家人的形容词
kind 和蔼的
tall 高的
busy 忙碌的
funny 有趣的
clever 聪明的
warm 温暖的
patient 耐心的
young 年轻的
hard-working 勤劳的
caring 体贴的
家庭话题常用短语
have dinner together 一起吃晚饭
live with 和……住在一起
a photo of 一张……的照片
at the weekend 在周末
take care of 照顾
be busy with 忙于
get together 团聚
family time 家庭时光
03 USEFUL SENTENCES
建议句型
6 个可直接套用的模板,配例句与中文
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USEFUL SENTENCES
建议句型 · 直接套用
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句型 1
There are ... people in my family.
There are four people in my family.
我家有四口人。
句型 2
My father is a ...
My father is a doctor.
我爸爸是医生。
句型 3
He / She is ... and ...
My mother is kind and busy.
我妈妈既和蔼又忙碌。
USEFUL SENTENCES
建议句型 · 直接套用
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句型 1
He / She likes ...
My sister likes drawing pictures.
我姐姐喜欢画画。
句型 2
We often ... together.
We often have dinner together.
我们常一起吃晚饭。
句型 3
I love my family ...
I love my family very much.
我非常爱我的家人。
04 MODEL ESSAY
范文解析
一篇 100+ 词范文:全文 → 结构 → 亮点
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MODEL ESSAY
范文全文 · My Family
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My Family
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and me.
My father is a doctor. He is tall and very kind. He is busy with his work, but he often plays basketball with me at the weekend. My mother is a teacher. She is warm and patient. She likes cooking, and she always makes delicious food for us. My sister is a primary school student. She is clever and funny, and she likes drawing pictures.
We often have dinner together. I love my family very much.
约 105 词 · 概况—成员—感受,条理清晰
STRUCTURE
范文结构分析
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开头 · Opening
There are four people in my family: ...
用 There be 交代人数并列举,总起全篇。
主体 · Body
father (doctor, kind) → mother (teacher, warm) → sister (clever, funny)
按家庭成员逐一介绍职业、性格与爱好,顺序清楚。
结尾 · Ending
have dinner together / I love my family very much
用共同活动收束,直抒对家人的爱,情感真挚。
HIGHLIGHTS
范文亮点:词汇 & 句型
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亮点词汇
★ be busy with 忙于
★ at the weekend 在周末
★ patient 耐心的
★ make ... for 为……做
★ primary school 小学
★ have dinner together 一起吃晚饭
★ very much 非常
亮点句型
✓ There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and me.
✓ He is busy with his work, but he often plays basketball with me at the weekend.
✓ She always makes delicious food for us.
✓ She is clever and funny, and she likes drawing pictures.
✓ I love my family very much.
WRITING TIPS
写作小贴士
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时态 Tense
介绍家人的常态用一般现在时;注意三单,如 he plays / she likes。
连接词 Connectors
用 but 表转折、and 表并列、always / often 表频率,如 busy but often plays。
句式 Sentences
介绍成员时句式可微调,避免每句都是 He is ... / She is ...。
真情实感 Feelings
写真实家人的职业与爱好,结尾表达爱意,最打动人。
现在,轮到你了!
写一写你的家庭成员,并告诉他们你有多爱这个家吧。
We're Family! 🏠
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