14.第一部分 教材知识整合-八年级下册-话题写作 志愿服务【加速度中考】2026年青海中考备考加速度英语课堂精讲

话题写作·志愿服务 典例剖析[2025青海·“奉献担当”要点] 校园英语报刊正在进行以“在成长中塑造小我，在奉献中展现大我”为主题的征文活动，请你围 绕如何使空闲时间更有意义，从“个人成长”和“奉献担当”中任选其一，以“How to make free time meaningful'”为题，结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。 “奉献担当”要点： ·help your classmates help homeless animals volunteer in an old people's home protect the environment of your hometown 写作要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范 2.可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯， 3.词数80左右。作文开头已给出，不计人总词数； 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 How to make free time meaningful As a middle school student,I love my free time and usually do something meaningful. 第一步：申题立意定基调 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 4.主题：利用空闲时间奉献社会 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 开篇：引出利用空闲时间的方法一—奉献社会 正文：介绍自己能做的事情(Activities) 利用空闲 (1)帮助同学(How:solve problems) 时间奉献 (2)帮助流浪动物(How:offer food) 社会 (3)去养老院做志愿者(What:volunteer in an old people's home) (4)保护家乡环境(How:plant trees) 结尾：简述在空闲时间奉献社会的意义 48 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 第一遍 How to make free time meaningful As a middle school student,I love my free time and usually do something meaningful.I'd like to spend my free time helping others. I want to help my classmates.We can solve problems together.I plan to do something to help homeless animals.I can offer food and find homes for them.I'm going to volunteer in an old people's home.Finally,protecting the environment of my hometown is necessary.We can plant trees and clean the streets. If I do these meaningful activities in my free time,I believe I will become a good person one day. 一第二遍 How to make free time meaningful As a middle school student,I love my free time and usually do something meaningful.As for me,I'd like to spend my free time helping others and doing good for society. (加序列副词：第一)，I want to help my classmates.If they meet some problems,we can solve them together. (加序s列副词：第二)，I plan to do something to help homeless animals, (用such as表列举：比如为它们提供食物和寻找住 所). (加序列副词：此外)，m going to volunteer in an old people's home.Last but not least, (用t作形式主语改写句子：保护我 们家乡的环境是必要的).I suggest that we plant trees and clean the streets, If I do these meaningful activities as much as I can in my free time,I believe I will become a good person one day. 实战演练 青春不以山海为远，志愿只为国家未来。假如你是陈帆，你校计划于下个月举办一次图书义卖 的志愿活动，现需招募一批志愿者。请你阅读下面的招募启事，用英语向本次活动负责人张老师写 一封邮件推荐自己。 Volunteers Wanted for a Book Sale! What are you like? What volunteer work did you do before? What can you do for the book sale? Please e-mail us at Mr.Zhang@163.com and tell us the information about yourself if you want to join us.We are looking forward to your e-mail! 49 写作要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范； 2.可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 第一遍 Dear Mr.Zhang, I'm Chen Fan from Class 2,Grade 9.I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position in the upcoming book sale. I'm sure I could be the right one for this position.Looking forward to your reply! Best regards, Chen Fan 第二遍 Dear Mr.Zhang, I'm Chen Fan from Class 2,Grade 9.I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position in the upcoming book sale. I'm sure I could be the right one for this position.Looking forward to your reply! Best regards, Chen Fan -50使度考 话题写作·志愿服务 典例剖析 Firstly Secondly such as offering food and finding homes for them】 Moreover it's necessary to protect the environment of our hometown 55 实战演练 第一遍（第三档标准7~9分）》 Dear Mr.Zhang, I'm Chen Fan from Class 2,Grade 9.I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position in the upcoming book sale. I have several advantages.I'm an outgoing and responsible person.I enjoy making friends and helping others.I have much volunteer experience.Last year,I volunteered in an old people's home.I sang songs and chatted with the elderly.I can communicate well with people.So I can attract more customers.For the book sale,I can organize books,introduce them to buyers, and help with managing the event smoothly. I want to share good books and make friends during this meaningful activity. I'm sure I could be the right one for this position. Looking forward to your reply! Best regards, Chen Fan 第二遍（第五档标准13~15分） Dear Mr.Zhang, I'm Chen Fan from Class 2,Grade 9.I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position in the upcoming book sale. I have several advantages.Firstly,I'm an outgoing and responsible person who enjoys making friends and helping others.Secondly,I have much volunteer experience.Last year,I volunteered in an old people's home.I sang songs and chatted with the elderly,bringing them joy.Moreover,I am good at communicating with people.It will be useful to attract more customers.For the book sale,I can do many things,such as organizing books,introducing them to buyers,and helping with managing the event smoothly. It would be a great opportunity for me to share good books and make friends during this meaningful activity. I'm sure I could be the right one for this position. Looking forward to your reply! Best regards, Chen Fan 6