摘要:
本初中英语讲义聚焦“相互比较”主题写作,属于“人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通”主题群,围绕个人特质、交友观念及异同比较展开。通过词汇积累(如compare, similarity等12个核心词汇)、提分佳句(12句实用表达)、名言警句(5句经典谚语)构建学习支架,结合应用文(电子邮件)和议论文(发言稿)的审题指导、谋篇布局及范文示范,帮助学生掌握比较级运用与观点阐述方法。
该资料特色在于任务驱动与核心素养融合,以具体写作任务(如给笔友写邮件比较与朋友的异同)培养语言能力(灵活运用比较级,如“more outgoing than”“better at English than”),融入名言警句(如“A friend in need is a friend indeed”)提升文化意识,范文提供清晰结构助力学习能力发展。课中辅助教师引导学生掌握写作技巧,课后帮助学生模仿练习,有效查漏补缺,提升主题写作水平。
内容正文:
主题写作专项
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本单元的主题是“相互比较”,属于“人与社会——社会服务与人际沟通”主题群,内容涉及个人特质、交友观念与异同比较,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达介绍自己与他人的特点、比较人物间的异同,并阐述对“朋友应该相似还是不同”的观点与理由。
此类主题常见的写作角度涉及:①谈论自己及他人的变化;②对这些变化的认识。在中考书面表达中,与该主题相关的命题形式较为多样,通常以议论文或应用文的形式出现。
[词汇积累]
1.compare 比较
2.appearance 外貌
3.similarity 相似之处
4.hard-working 勤奋的
5.have straight hair 留着直发
6.be of medium height 中等身高
7.in terms of 就……而言
8.be different from与……不同
9.more outgoing than 比……更外向
10.be talented in 在……方面有天赋
11.have a lot in common 有许多共同之处
12.learn from each other 互相学习
[提分佳句]
1.A good friend is like a mirror.
2.Today I'd like to introduce one of my friends to you all.
3.My best friend is Jack, an honest and hard-working boy.
4.He strengthened our friendship by helping me with English.
5.I am so happy that I had someone like him to help me with my subjects.
6.Thanks to my friend's help, I solved the problem at last.
7.We have similar interests and hobbies.
8.We are different from each other in many ways.
9.We are always ready to help each other.
10.I'm lucky to have Jack as my best friend.
11.I hope our friendship can last forever.
12.In a word, I can't imagine my life without friends.
[名言警句]
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2.Friendship is the wine of life. 友谊是人生的醇酒。
3.One loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives. 人生得一知己足矣。
4.A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海内存知己,天涯若比邻。
5.A friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you. 朋友就是了解你的一切却依然爱你的人。
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Kelly想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况,请你根据下面的表格,给Kelly回一封电子邮件,告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处。
你和你最好的朋友的异同
外貌
性格
爱好
学习
要求:
1.灵活运用所学的形容词、副词的原级和比较级(至少6句);
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
How's it going? I'm writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题立意]
审体裁:应用文
审时态:以一般现在时为主
审人称:第一人称和第三人称
审要点:介绍自己与朋友在外貌、性格、爱好、学习方面的异同
[谋篇布局]
[范文欣赏]
Dear Kelly,
How's it going? I'm writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
Li Sisi is my best friend. She's as tall as me, but she's thinner than I am. We both have long straight hair, but mine is longer than hers. We both like dancing, but I dance better than her. She's more outgoing than I am. That's why she has more friends than me. She's talented in language, so she's better at English than me. She often helps me with English.
A friend is easier lost than found. I will value our friendship.
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李平,本期英语社团的沙龙活动需要你围绕以下三句交友名言展开讨论,请结合内容提示写一篇发言稿。
●A good friend is like a mirror.
●True friends are always there for you.
●A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
提示:
1.你最喜欢以上哪一条交友名言?这条名言让你想起了哪一个朋友?
2.简单介绍你和你朋友的相同之处和不同之处(至少两处使用比较级),并用过去的一次具体经历叙述他/她给你的帮助。
3.对朋友的评价和祝愿。
要求:
1.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Hello, everyone! My favourite saying is “True friends are always there for you.” This saying reminds me of my best friend, Li Hua.
Li Hua and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and playing basketball. However, we are also different. I am more outgoing than Li Hua, and I like to talk to people. Li Hua is quieter but more thoughtful. Last year, I had a hard time with my maths homework. Li Hua helped me a lot. She explained the problems to me and encouraged me not to give up. Her help made me feel better and more confident.
I think Li Hua is a true friend. She is always there when I need her. I hope we can be friends forever!
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