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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
Section B (1a-3c) 教学设计(第四课时·读写课)
2026—2027学年 人教版(2024)英语八年级上册
依据《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》编制
课 题
How do you feel at home?(Section B 1a-3c)
课 型
读写课(Reading & Writing)
课 时
第4课时(45分钟)
授课年级
八年级上册
单元主题
Home Sweet Home——家是充满爱的地方,家人共同的付出让家更温馨(单元问题:What can you do for your home? / How do you feel at home?)
一、语篇研读
【What】本课时围绕 Section B 主题问题 How do you feel at home? 展开,含三个语篇群:①记叙文 Going Home for the Spring Festival(1b):按时间顺序讲述“我”(Wenwen)一家春节放弃去海南度假、回妈妈家乡外公外婆的村庄过年的经历——早起赶火车、转乘汽车;外公和表弟在寒风中等候;外公帮忙拉沉重的行李;外婆、姨妈和舅舅在厨房忙着做晚饭;外婆让外公给“我”拿最爱的零食;“我”与表弟分享零食、讲学校的事、饭后摆餐桌;全家品尝“熟悉的家味”;舅舅讲笑话逗得大家开怀大笑;离别时外婆拉着“我”的手问“Will you come home more often?”,妈妈含泪点头。1c以六个句子梳理“每个家人为家做了什么让家充满爱”;1d讨论为什么去村庄过年、如何评价这家人;1e呈现诗歌 Home 与四条观点(Home is also called family. / No matter how long I’m away, home is always glad to see me again. / Home is a place of love. / Home is not a place… It’s a kind of feeling.)。②应用文范文(3a):Zhang Peng 给 John 的电子邮件,请求朋友帮忙装饰房间——描述墙面现状→说明粉刷计划→约定周日在油漆店见面→请带刷子→请帮忙选照片;3b 通过给六件事排序揭示其组织逻辑;3c 要求仿写求助邮件并提供事项清单(buy some flowers, make a poster, go shopping, bring a pair of scissors, buy glue, bring a brush, make paper-cuts, bring a painting…)。③词汇运用板块(2a-2c):单元新词字谜(竖行暗藏 HOME IS BEST)、动词短语配对选词填句、用方框词补全社区欢迎信。
【Why】记叙文以“春节返乡团圆”承载中国家庭文化——孝亲敬老、家人互助、代际温情,落实立德树人;1c引导学生在梳理“家人为家所做之事”中发现“家的温暖来自每个家人的付出”,回应单元主题意义;诗歌与观点推动学生由具体事例走向抽象感悟,直接回答 Section B 核心问题 How do you feel at home?;范文邮件示范求助类应用文的语篇结构与礼貌策略(Can/Could you…?),为 3c 独立写作提供内容与结构双支架,实现“以读促写、读写结合”。
【How】记叙文以时间线推进,人物多、动作链清晰,宜用“时间线+人物—行动”表格梳理信息;情感词(with a smile, happy, glad, laugh, joy, tears)贯穿全文,是主题意义的语言标记;重点语言 share sth with sb、no matter 引导的让步句均在真实语境中复现。邮件范文结构典型:称呼—点明请求—描述现状—计划安排—逐项请求—征询—署名,大量复现本单元语法 can/could 礼貌句式;3b 排序与 3c 提示清单为学生搭建由范文到独立成文的递减式支架。
二、学情分析
授课对象为八年级学生。经过前三课时学习,学生已掌握本单元家务类词汇(pack up things, sweep the floor, clean the bathroom, hang up photos 等)与 can/could 礼貌请求、请求许可的功能句式,并在 Section A 中经历过“为爷爷奶奶的到来准备房间”的情境(grandma clean、hang up the clock、buy flowers),具备完成求助邮件的语言与经验基础。阅读方面,学生能提取表层信息,但对多人物记叙文“人物—行动—情感”的关联梳理、以及由事例到观点的概括能力尚待提升;写作方面,学生易出现格式不完整、请求笼统不具体、语气生硬等问题。学生对春节团圆、装扮房间话题有真实生活体验,情感共鸣强,可借任务链与同伴互评激发表达意愿。原教案教学反思指出:学生表达对家的理解时存在“不清晰、不深入”的问题,本课以句型支架(Home is not a place… It’s… / No matter how long…)与教师追问予以突破。
三、教学目标(核心素养导向)
通过本课时学习,学生能够:
素养维度
目标描述
语言能力
读懂记叙文,提取时间线与“家人为家所做之事”等关键信息;在语境中理解并运用 almost, journey, pull, familiar, joke, nod, smell, joy, wherever 等词汇及短语 share sth with sb, no matter;仿照 3a 范文写出格式完整、请求礼貌具体的求助邮件(约60词)。
学习能力
借助“时间线+人物—行动”表格梳理多人物记叙文;通过 3b 排序自主归纳求助邮件写作框架并迁移运用于 3c 写作;依据写作检查单开展自评互评,并按修改建议完善成文。
思维品质
分析故事中“人物行为—家庭之爱”的因果关联,概括“home 是爱、是感觉,而非只是地点”的主题意义;评价自己邮件的逻辑与请求具体性并进行优化。
文化意识
体会中国春节“阖家团圆、孝亲敬老”的文化内涵与家人间含蓄而深厚的关爱表达;理解 East or west, home is best 的共通情感,增强家庭责任感与主动助人、礼貌求助的意识。
【迁移落点】课后向朋友发出一次真实求助(帮忙装扮自己的房间/布置家庭图书角),并将“家人为家做的事”转化为“我能为家做的一件事”行动卡,在班级“Home Sweet Home”展示墙交流,实现读写成果向真实生活的迁移。
四、教学重难点
教学重点:①理解故事内容,提取时间线与关键信息(1b三问、1c家人之爱);②运用本课时词汇句型描述家人为家所做的事情及自己对家的感受(I shared the snacks with my cousin. / No matter how long I’m away, home is always glad to see me again.);③掌握求助邮件的结构(点明请求—描述现状—计划安排—逐项请求)与礼貌请求表达(Can/Could you…?)。
教学难点:①依据 3b 框架与 3c 清单,写出请求具体(做什么、何时、何地、带何物)、语气得体的求助邮件;②由具体事例抽象概括“家”的意义并清晰、深入地表达个人感受(原教案反思显示的表达短板)。
五、教学方法与资源
教学方法:任务型阅读(读前预测—略读寻读—深层讨论的任务链)与过程性写作教学(范文分析—框架搭建—起草—互评—修改—展示)相结合;依据英语学习活动观组织“感知与注意—概括与整合—描述与阐释—分析与判断—迁移与创造”活动链;坚持目标—活动—评价一致,落实教-学-评一体化。
教学资源:多媒体课件(春节团圆视频、家庭生活图片)、时间线与“人物—行动”表格学案、3a 范文纸、3c 提示清单图、写作检查单、邮件写作纸、词汇字谜卡。
六、教学过程
教学环节
师生活动
活动观层次
评价要点
Step 1
情境导入
明确任务
(4’)
①播放春节阖家返乡团圆短视频/家庭生活图片,提问:What are the people doing? How do you feel at home?
②完成1a:同伴分享 How does home make you feel?(warm, happy, loved, relaxed…),教师板书情感词;
③发布本课任务链:读故事寻“爱”→悟“家”之义→研读范文→写求助邮件,参加班级“Home Sweet Home”展示周。
学习理解
感知与注意
情感词输出与任务理解意愿(诊断性评价)
Step 2
初读故事
梳理情节
(6’)
①依据标题 Going Home for the Spring Festival 预测:Where? Who? What?
②快速阅读,回答1b三问:Where did the writer go for the Spring Festival?(To her mum’s hometown—her grandparents’ village.)/What is the name of the writer?(Wenwen)/What words are used to describe people’s feelings?(smile, happy, glad, laugh, joy…);
③师生共建时间线:got up early→caught the train→changed to a bus→arrived at the village→dinner→leaving。
学习理解
概括与整合
1b答案正确率;时间线关键节点是否完整
Step 3
细品“爱”行
语言内化
(7’)
①细读课文完成1c:Grandpa and my cousin waited in the cold wind./Grandpa helped us pull our luggage into the house./Grandma, my aunt and my uncle were busy cooking dinner in the kitchen./My parents went to the kitchen to help./Grandpa brought my favourite snacks./I shared the snacks with my cousin.;并从文中找出更多“爱的例子”(set the table, told Grandpa about school, told us some jokes, held my hands…);
②用“人物—行动—传递的爱”表格归纳;
③讲解语言点:almost, journey, pull, the familiar taste of home, share sth with sb, no matter;仿说 No matter how long I’m away, home is always glad to see me again.。
应用实践
描述与阐释
1c完成与例子补充情况;重点句仿说的准确性
Step 4
深读讨论
感悟“家”义
(5’)
①小组讨论1d:Why do you think the family spent the Spring Festival at the village?/What do you think about the writer’s family members?(团圆、孝亲、家人互助、朴实温暖);
②朗读1e诗歌 Home 与四条观点,教师提供句型支架引导输出:To me, home is not a place… It’s… /Home is a place of love because…。
应用实践
分析与判断
观点表达是否有事例支撑、语言是否清晰深入(观察句型支架对原教案反思难点的突破效果)
Step 5
词汇运用
巩固内化
(6’)
①完成2a字谜,发现竖行暗语 HOME IS BEST,呼应 East or west, home is best;
②2b短语配对(pack up / clean up / hang up / take out + the luggage / the rubbish / the photo / the bathroom)并选词完成句子;
③2c用方框词(soon, arrival, invite, community, ready, free)补全 Sunshine Community 欢迎信,体会邀请/求助信的格式与 feel free to ask, be ready to give a hand 等表达。
应用实践
内化与运用
字谜与配对填空的即时核对正确率
Step 6
范文研读
搭建框架
(8’)
①读3a邮件回答:What does Zhang Peng ask his friend to do?(help decorate the room;meet at the paint shop near the shopping centre on Sunday;bring the brushes;help choose some photos to hang on the walls);
②完成3b排序(1 ask John to help decorate the room→2 describe how the room looks now→3 tell John about the plan for the walls→4 ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop→5 ask John to bring the brushes→6 ask John to help choose some photos to hang on the walls),归纳写作框架(板书):Greeting→点明请求→描述现状→说明计划与安排→逐项礼貌请求→征询与署名;
③圈出 Can you help us? / Can you bring them? / Could you help choose…?,比较 can/could 的礼貌程度。
应用实践
分析与判断
信息定位与排序正确性;框架复述的完整性
Step 7
仿写展评
总结作业
(9’)
①从3c清单(buy some flowers / make a poster / go shopping / bring a pair of scissors / buy glue / bring a brush / make paper-cuts / bring a painting…)中选3—4项,按框架起草求助邮件(约60词),教师巡视指导;
②同伴依据写作检查单互评,修改润色;
③2—3名学生投影展示,师生用检查单共评,教师归纳常见问题(格式缺失、请求笼统、语气生硬)并给修改建议;
④回扣主题 East or west, home is best,布置分层作业。
迁移创新
想象与创造
检查单互评记录与修改情况;展示作品的格式、礼貌与具体性(表现性评价,对应语言能力与学习能力目标)
七、板书设计
Unit 2 Home Sweet Home — Section B (1a-3c)
【读】Going Home for the Spring Festival —— 家人之爱
时间线:got up early → caught the train → changed to a bus → arrived at the village → dinner → leaving
Grandpa & cousin: waited in the cold wind Grandpa: pulled the heavy luggage / brought my snacks
Grandma, aunt & uncle: cooked dinner in the kitchen I: shared the snacks with my cousin / set the table
Uncle: told jokes → good laugh ⇒ Home is not a place… It’s a kind of feeling. It’s love.
【写】How to write an email asking for help(求助邮件写作框架)
① Greeting: Hi John, / Dear…, ② Ask for help: Can you help me (decorate my room)?
③ Describe now: Right now, the walls are… ④ Plan & meet: On Sunday, we can meet at…
⑤ Polite requests: Could you bring…? / Could you help me…? ⑥ Closing: Let me know what you think. / Best,
写作检查单:□格式完整 □点明求助 □现状清楚 □安排具体 □请求礼貌 □大小写标点正确
八、作业设计(分层)
【基础·必做】①朗读故事 Going Home for the Spring Festival 两遍,背诵重点句 I shared the snacks with my cousin and told Grandpa about school. 与 No matter how long I’m away, home is always glad to see me again.;②完成基础巩固小题(一)(二)(三)。
【提升·选做】将课堂 3c 求助邮件按写作检查单修改后誊写工整;仿照 1c 句式写 4—5 句话,描述“家人为家做过的一件充满爱的事”。
【拓展·挑战】以 “Home is…” 为题,仿照 1e 诗歌写 4 行小诗或 3 句感悟;周末为家人做一件事,配图配句记录后参加班级“Home Sweet Home”展示墙;预习 Project “Find out who does the most chores at home” 的调查任务。
基础巩固小题(一)短语运用(依据教材 2b 活动改编,附答案)
选用框中短语的适当形式补全句子:pack up / clean up / hang up / take out
1. Could you please ______________? It’s starting to smell.(答案:take out the rubbish)
2. Can you help me ______________ the photo on the wall? Grandma looks really young in it.(答案:hang up)
3. Let’s ______________ and get ready to go home.(答案:pack up)
4. We should ______________ after taking a shower to keep it clean.(答案:clean up the bathroom)
基础巩固小题(二)词汇填空(依据教材 2c 活动改编,附答案)
从方框中选词补全邀请信:arrival / invite / ready / free / soon / community
Dear friends, Welcome! We’re excited to have you in our community. We hope you’ll feel at home here ___1___. Your ___2___ brings joy to us. We would like to ___3___ you to the community party at 2 p.m. on Sunday. In our ___4___, everyone is friendly and always ___5___ to give a hand. If you have any questions or need help, feel ___6___ to ask.
(答案:1. soon 2. arrival 3. invite 4. community 5. ready 6. free)
基础巩固小题(三)写作逻辑排序(依据教材 3b 活动改编,附答案)
将下列句子按 Zhang Peng 求助邮件的行文顺序重新排列:
a. tell John about the plan for the walls b. ask John to help decorate the room c. ask John to help choose some photos to hang on the walls d. describe how the room looks now e. ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop f. ask John to bring the brushes
(答案:b→d→a→e→f→c,即点明请求→描述现状→说明计划→约定时间→请求带物→补充请求)
3c 参考范文(供批阅参考)
Hi Lisa, Can you help me decorate my room this weekend? Right now, the walls are white and look a little plain. I want to hang up some paper-cuts and a poster. On Saturday morning, we can meet at my home at 9 o’clock. Could you bring a pair of scissors and some glue? You draw well, so could you also help me make the poster? Let me know what you think. Best, Li Hua
九、教学评价与反思
1. 目标—评价对应(教-学-评一体化):
素养目标
课堂评价任务与证据
语言能力目标
1b/1c 信息提取与句子完成正确率;2a-2c 词汇运用即时核对;3c 邮件成文的格式、礼貌句式与请求具体性(写作检查单+师生共评)
学习能力目标
时间线与写作框架的搭建质量;检查单互评记录与修改痕迹(过程性评价)
思维品质目标
1d 讨论中观点的概括与论证深度;3b 排序归纳逻辑的准确率
文化意识目标
“家之义”表达中的情感投入与事例支撑;“我能为家做的一件事”行动卡的落实意愿
2. 写作检查单(3c 邮件自评互评用):
□格式完整(称呼 Hi/Dear…、正文、结尾 Best, +署名) □开头点明求助(Can you help me…?) □现状描述清楚(Right now, the walls are…) □时间地点安排具体(On Saturday, we can meet at…) □请求礼貌且具体(Could you bring a pair of scissors…? / Could you help me make a poster?) □结尾征询回复(Let me know what you think.) □大小写、标点正确,60词左右
3. 预设反思点:①时间线与“人物—行动”表格是否帮助学生高效梳理多人物记叙文;②针对原教案反思指出的“表达不清晰、不深入”,本课提供的句型支架(Home is not a place… It’s… / No matter how long… / Home is a place of love.)是否见效,是否需要更多追问与相关词汇支持;③3b 框架向 3c 写作的迁移达成度:请求是否具体、语气是否礼貌,格式缺失、请求笼统等常见问题是否在讲评中得到纠正;④2a 字谜等词汇活动的时间控制是否合理,避免挤占写作与展评时间;⑤写作基础薄弱学生的词库卡(scissors, glue, poster, paper-cuts…)与句型卡(Could you…?)支持是否到位,检查单互评是否真实发生。
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