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专题11 书面表达(一)·书信与邮件(5年汇编)(浙江专用)(答案版)
Writing 1(2024·浙江·中考真题)
【答案】例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)
【答案】例文:
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend? Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3(2023·浙江台州·中考真题)
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come? If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
Writing 4(2023·浙江杭州·中考真题)
【答案】
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
Writing 5(2023·浙江金华·中考真题)
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 6(2023·浙江·中考真题)
【答案】Possible versions:
Version 1
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Lantern Festival. We’ve collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It’s a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That’s all. Thank you!
Version 2
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Dragon Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.
We’ve learned a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2,000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. People usually celebrate it by watching boat races. Zongzi is the most traditional food that is eaten to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make the festival known by more people around the world.
That’s all. Thank you!
Writing 7(2022·浙江金华·中考真题)
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 8(2022·浙江杭州·中考真题)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m pleased to know that you’re coming for the exchange visit.
We have many interesting school activities. Among them, the singing competition is the most popular. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there.
Hope this helps. And tell me if there is anything else you need to know.
Li Ping
Writing 9(2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题)
【答案】例文
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.
I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
Writing 10(2022·浙江温州·中考真题)
【答案】
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.
Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
Writing 11(2022·浙江丽水·中考真题)
【答案】
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
Writing 1(2026·浙江·二模)
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my sports habits with you.
I often do morning exercises to stay energetic. I sometimes walk or ride to school to stay active in daily life. But I hardly play ball games with friends because of heavy schoolwork.
Sports are really important. They not only make us strong and reduce study stress, but also help us learn teamwork and patience.
I promise to exercise at least one hour a day and join more after-school sports. A healthy body is necessary for better study.
Writing 2(2026·浙江舟山·三模)
【答案】
Dear Bruce,
I’m happy that you are going to have dinner in a Chinese family. Let me tell you some manners.
First, you should shake hands when you meet for the first time. Second, you’d better bring a small gift before the meal. During the dinner, wait for the elders to start eating first. Remember to use serving chopsticks and don’t point at others with your chopsticks. After dinner, remember to thank the host.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. Hope you enjoy yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3(2026·浙江嘉兴·二模)
【答案】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like to share my idea for our “Cultural Exchange Day”. I recommend Daily Life Experience.
First, students can live with a Chinese family to feel the warmth. Second, they are able to make traditional Chinese food like dumplings together. Third, they can chat with locals in community parks. This activity helps them understand Chinese culture better in daily life. Also, it is a wonderful chance to make new friends. In addition, they can get a better understanding of Chinese people. I believe everyone will enjoy it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4(2026·浙江金华·一模)
【答案】
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you want to learn about ancient Chinese sports. Let me introduce Cuju—the earliest form of football in ancient China, with a history of over 2,000 years. It was very popular among both common people and soldiers. Playing Cuju needed great skill and teamwork, much like today’s football.
As for me, jogging is my cup of tea. It clears my mind and keeps me fit. Every morning, I jog for 30 minutes in the park with my dad. The fresh air, the rising sun, and the quiet paths make each step a true pleasure.
What about you? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Writing 5(2026·浙江宁波·一模)
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our “Energy Corners”. Among the three corners, I like the AI Corner best, which is located on the first floor.
In this corner, we can do many interesting things, such as playing chess with AI robots or having conversations with AI. These activities are very popular among us students.
There are many advantages to having such a corner. First, it helps us feel relaxed and refreshed after a long class. Second, it allows us to learn more about modern technology and improves our thinking skills. It truly makes our school life more colorful.
I hope you find it interesting. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 6(2026·浙江温州·三模)
【答案】
Getting along well with others is important in our daily life. In my opinion, honesty is the most important quality.
Here is my experience. Once, I lost a book that I borrowed from my best friend. I was afraid he would be angry, but I decided to tell him the truth. To my surprise, he forgave me and our friendship became stronger. This experience taught me that honesty helps us build trust.
If we are honest, others will believe us and like to make friends with us. Therefore, we should always be honest to get along well with others.
Writing 7(2026·浙江温州·模拟预测)
【答案】
Recently, the phrase “Love you, Laoji” is very popular.
For me, I love myself by taking good care of my body and mood. I keep a balanced diet, avoid junk food, sleep early and run 20 minutes every day to stay fit. When schoolwork and exams stress me out, I listen to soft music or take walks in the park to relax.
This self-care brings me many benefits. It keeps me healthy, reduces my anxiety, builds my confidence and helps me face troubles bravely. It makes my daily life warmer and more positive all the time.
Writing 8(2026·浙江温州·三模)
【答案】
My Future Job
Different students have different dream jobs. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her. Though Mum is very busy, she always tries to look after patients. She says she’s happy when she helps patients.
To achieve my goal, I’ve made plans. First, I’ll make an effort to enter a medical university. Second, I’ll learn more medical knowledge by reading. Besides, I decide to do volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills.
As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future.
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专题11 书面表达(一)·书信与邮件(5年汇编)(浙江专用)
考点分类
浙江考情(2022—2026)
命题规律
一、书信/邮件
10 篇(48%)。2022年5篇:丽水·暑假实践计划;杭州·回应邀请;温州·中国音乐社活动意见;绍兴·游客不文明行为与建议;金华·初中学习生活建议;
2023年4篇:台州·邀请外教参加项目化学习;杭州·回复英国朋友邮件;金华·解释中国诗句(回Alex);丽水·"写给自己的一封信"(校报投稿形式);2024年1篇:省统·向Candy推荐游学学校。
以“回复/邀请/推荐/回应求助”为主,收信人多为外国朋友、外教或报刊编辑。行文需先点明写信目的,再逐条回应要点,结尾礼貌收束。重点考查信息覆盖完整度与人际沟通语气(建议、邀请、致谢、说明理由)。
二、投稿/征文
8 篇(38%)。2022年3篇:台州·My dream job(征文比赛)、宁波·劳动实践活动收获、衢州·To Learn, To Grow;
2023年4篇:宁波·弘扬传统文化(宁波元素)、温州·最喜欢的英语作业(征文海报)、湖州·"幸福是什么"、衢州·Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork;
2025年1篇:省统·A good way to relax(校报征稿)。
校园报刊征稿是浙江最稳定的书面表达情境。多为"结合自身一次经历谈感悟",需按给定标题或自拟标题写作,结构为“叙事+感悟升华”,突出个人体验与观点表达。
三、发言稿/课堂介绍
3 篇(14%)。2022年1篇:湖州·环保作品展课堂介绍;2023年2篇:省统·传统节日小课题(元宵节/端午节)拓展课小组发言、绍兴·Sharing My Hometown 短视频创作历程发言稿。
结构为“介绍经历+分享收获”,常配表格信息。考查口语化表达的书面呈现、层次清晰度与面向听众的得体性。
词数与格式要求
80~100词 10篇;80词 6篇;110词 2篇(温州2022、2023);90~110词 1篇(衢州2022);90词 1篇(衢州2023);2025省统题干未标注。
词数已趋稳于 80~100 词;一律要求“包含所给要点、可适当发挥”,且“不得出现真实姓名与学校”。
命题趋势
2024年起浙江全省统一命题,2024、2025连续两年均为 1 篇。
①情境更真实(游学、校报征稿、课堂分享);②“邮件书信+报刊投稿”两大主流稳定,共占 86%。
Writing 1(2024·浙江·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右:邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)
初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.____________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3(2023·浙江台州·中考真题)
假设你叫李辉,你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括如下:
内容要点
参考词汇
Where will we go?
·Hehe Ancient Street
·take the bus
How will we go there?
·interview…
What will we do?
·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there?
·learn more about……
·…
When and where will we meet?
·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意:(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数 80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
Writing 4(2023·浙江杭州·中考真题)
假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@mail.com
SUBJECT C U soon!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you?
I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
Hi Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 5(2023·浙江金华·中考真题)
假设你叫李华,你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining),来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息,并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
内容要点
写作参考
About the sentence
written by Lu You
in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example
Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out?
Your understanding
never give up, find a way out, ...
注意:
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80~100;
4.正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 6(2023·浙江·中考真题)
在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中,你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究,经过探究与实践,你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表),假设你是李华,请选择其中一个节日,用英语写一篇短文,在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject
the Lantern Festival
the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods(How we did it)
•watch a lantern show
•…
•visit a local museum
•…
Information(What we’ve learned)
History
•about 2,000 years
•about 2,000 years
Time
•the 15th day of the first lunar month
•the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations
•riddle(谜语) games
•…
•boat races
•…
Food
•tangyuan
•zongzi
…
…
…
A New Plan(What we’ll do)
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3) 词数:80~100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
Writing 7(2022·浙江金华·中考真题)
假如你是Li Hua,你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容,结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历,回一封邮件,供他参考。
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出,不计入总词数;正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句: I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude(态度)to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…
Dear Frank,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 8(2022·浙江杭州·中考真题)
假定你是李平,请阅读以下邮件,接受邀请并回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: LiPing@mail.com
Subject: Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Ping!
My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it!
Well, why am I writing right now? for one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school?
Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Jack
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 9(2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题)
假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …
注意:
(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的建议至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
Writing 10(2022·浙江温州·中考真题)
假如你是陈华,你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社,她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动,写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见下表)回复邮件,提出你对这些活动的看法和理由,并为她补充至少一项活动。
Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.
•Share stories of Chinese singers.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Writing 11(2022·浙江丽水·中考真题)
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划,请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What to do
Why to do so
●volunteer to do...
●make a survey about...
●have a graduation trip to...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn more about...
●open one’s eyes...
●…
注意:
1)文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80~ 100;邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
Writing 1(2026·浙江·二模)
为响应“每天运动一小时,幸福生活一辈子”的号召,学校英语俱乐部发起了“Sports Go with Me”主题活动。假如你是李华,请结合以下调查表,谈谈自己的运动习惯、反思以及对运动的看法。
Sports Go with Me
Reflection
Always
Sometimes
Seldom
Do morning exercises carefully
√
Ride a bike to school
√
…
Opinions
Why are sports important to us?
How do sports help our study and life?
Promises
What small change will you make to keep exercising?
注意:(1)文中需包含至少两个与运动相关的活动,以上内容仅供参考;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my sports habits with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 2(2026·浙江舟山·三模)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Bruce第一次去一位中国留学生家中用餐,发电子邮件向你咨询有关初次见面、礼物及餐桌礼仪的问题,请根据邮件内容,给Bruce回一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
1. 问候方式:初次见面时握手
2. 就餐前:带礼物
3. 就餐中:具体介绍中国餐桌礼仪(比如等长辈先动筷/使用公筷/不要用筷子指着别人……)
4. 就餐后:对主人表达感谢
要求:
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;文中不得出现真实的人名、校名
词数:80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Bruce,
I’m happy that you are going to have dinner in a Chinese family.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3(2026·浙江嘉兴·二模)
假如你是李华,你校即将迎来一批英国交换生,学校计划开展“文化交流体验日”活动。请你给项目负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件,从以下两项体验活动中任选其一,介绍活动具体内容并说明推荐理由。
Local Culture Tour1. visit traditional buildings
2. learn about history
3. ...
Daily Life Experience1. live with a Chinese family
2. make Chinese food
3. ...
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选体验活动至少三点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like to share my idea for our “Cultural Exchange Day”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4(2026·浙江金华·一模)
假如你是张华,你收到外国朋友Tony的来信,他想了解一项中国古代运动以及你最喜欢的一种运动,请根据以下提示写一封回信。
● the earliest football
● over 2,000 years ago
● a water sport
● remember Qu Yuan
…
What sport do you like best? badminton/jogging/...
Why do you like it? relaxing/keep fit/...
How do you enjoy it? how often/how long/with whom/...
注意:
(1)回信须包含以上要点,内容可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100左右:首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you want to learn about ancient Chinese sports.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Writing 5(2026·浙江宁波·一模)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom听说你们学校在教学楼里设置了几个“课间能量补给站(Energy Corners)”,他对这些补给站很好奇。请你选择其中一个补给站,给他写一封邮件进行介绍,并说明它给同学们带来的至少两点好处。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 邮件需符合要求,包含所提内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our “Energy Corners”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you find it interesting. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 6(2026·浙江温州·三模)
人际交往是一门艺术。校英语社团正在举办以“Getting Along Well with Others”为题的征文活动。请选取一项你认为人际交往中最为重要的品质,结合自身的一次经历,阐述该品质的重要意义,撰写一篇征文。
Getting Along Well with Others
Qualityhonesty
respect
kindness
…
Experience
Meaningbuild trust
accept differences
spread warmth
…
told the truth / listened quietly / offered to help / ...
注意:
(1)图中提供的信息仅供参考使用;
(2)词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Getting along well with others is important in our daily life. In my opinion, ________ is the most important quality.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 7(2026·浙江温州·模拟预测)
近段时间以来,“爱你老己(Love you, Laoji)”这句话走红网络,成为年轻人缓解压力,关爱自我的新方式。现在学校公众号举行主题为“Love you, old self”的征文活动。请你结合自身体验,选择或自定其中一项,说说爱自己的方式,并谈谈理由,向公众号投稿。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, the phrase “Love you, Laoji” is very popular. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 8(2026·浙江温州·三模)
假设你是李华,你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的征文活动,现向全体同学征集职业规划文稿。请你根据调查问卷的内容写一篇短文进行投稿,介绍自己的未来职业及理由,并阐述职业规划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Your Future Job
1. What do you want to be in the future?
□ A doctor □ A teacher □ A scientist
□ An artist □ An IT engineer □ Others ________
2. Why do you choose that?
3. What’s your plan for the future job?
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专题11 书面表达(一)·书信与邮件(5年汇编)(浙江专用)
考点分类
浙江考情(2022—2026)
命题规律
一、书信/邮件
10 篇(48%)。2022年5篇:丽水·暑假实践计划;杭州·回应邀请;温州·中国音乐社活动意见;绍兴·游客不文明行为与建议;金华·初中学习生活建议;
2023年4篇:台州·邀请外教参加项目化学习;杭州·回复英国朋友邮件;金华·解释中国诗句(回Alex);丽水·"写给自己的一封信"(校报投稿形式);2024年1篇:省统·向Candy推荐游学学校。
以“回复/邀请/推荐/回应求助”为主,收信人多为外国朋友、外教或报刊编辑。行文需先点明写信目的,再逐条回应要点,结尾礼貌收束。重点考查信息覆盖完整度与人际沟通语气(建议、邀请、致谢、说明理由)。
二、投稿/征文
8 篇(38%)。2022年3篇:台州·My dream job(征文比赛)、宁波·劳动实践活动收获、衢州·To Learn, To Grow;
2023年4篇:宁波·弘扬传统文化(宁波元素)、温州·最喜欢的英语作业(征文海报)、湖州·"幸福是什么"、衢州·Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork;
2025年1篇:省统·A good way to relax(校报征稿)。
校园报刊征稿是浙江最稳定的书面表达情境。多为"结合自身一次经历谈感悟",需按给定标题或自拟标题写作,结构为“叙事+感悟升华”,突出个人体验与观点表达。
三、发言稿/课堂介绍
3 篇(14%)。2022年1篇:湖州·环保作品展课堂介绍;2023年2篇:省统·传统节日小课题(元宵节/端午节)拓展课小组发言、绍兴·Sharing My Hometown 短视频创作历程发言稿。
结构为“介绍经历+分享收获”,常配表格信息。考查口语化表达的书面呈现、层次清晰度与面向听众的得体性。
词数与格式要求
80~100词 10篇;80词 6篇;110词 2篇(温州2022、2023);90~110词 1篇(衢州2022);90词 1篇(衢州2023);2025省统题干未标注。
词数已趋稳于 80~100 词;一律要求“包含所给要点、可适当发挥”,且“不得出现真实姓名与学校”。
命题趋势
2024年起浙江全省统一命题,2024、2025连续两年均为 1 篇。
①情境更真实(游学、校报征稿、课堂分享);②“邮件书信+报刊投稿”两大主流稳定,共占 86%。
Writing 1(2024·浙江·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右:邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析] (以例文①为例)
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,向她推荐一个学校;
第二步,根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句)
Writing 2(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)
初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.____________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend? Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
Writing 3(2023·浙江台州·中考真题)
假设你叫李辉,你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括如下:
内容要点
参考词汇
Where will we go?
·Hehe Ancient Street
·take the bus
How will we go there?
·interview…
What will we do?
·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there?
·learn more about……
·…
When and where will we meet?
·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意:(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数 80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come? If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义;
第三步,期盼对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②plan to do计划做某事
③the beauty of……的美丽
④offer sb sth提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past.(非谓语作状语)
②Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists.(动词不定式表目的)
Writing 4(2023·浙江杭州·中考真题)
假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@mail.com
SUBJECT C U soon!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you?
I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
Hi Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
【解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件;
第二步,具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心;
第三步,最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do迫不及待做
②as well as和,以及
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. (so引导并列句)
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 5(2023·浙江金华·中考真题)
假设你叫李华,你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining),来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息,并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
内容要点
写作参考
About the sentence
written by Lu You
in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example
Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out?
Your understanding
never give up, find a way out, ...
注意:
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80~100;
4.正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍关于“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”的基本信息;
第二步,结合自身例子说明这个诗句的含义;
第三步,最后说明自己的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth一直做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 6(2023·浙江·中考真题)
在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中,你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究,经过探究与实践,你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表),假设你是李华,请选择其中一个节日,用英语写一篇短文,在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject
the Lantern Festival
the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods(How we did it)
•watch a lantern show
•…
•visit a local museum
•…
Information(What we’ve learned)
History
•about 2,000 years
•about 2,000 years
Time
•the 15th day of the first lunar month
•the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations
•riddle(谜语) games
•…
•boat races
•…
Food
•tangyuan
•zongzi
…
…
…
A New Plan(What we’ll do)
…
…
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3) 词数:80~100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Possible versions:
Version 1
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Lantern Festival. We’ve collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It’s a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That’s all. Thank you!
Version 2
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Dragon Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.
We’ve learned a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2,000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. People usually celebrate it by watching boat races. Zongzi is the most traditional food that is eaten to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make the festival known by more people around the world.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从“元宵节”和“端午节”中选择一个节日叙述;
第二步,根据表格提示具体阐述你们的研究成果。
第三步,介绍下阶段计划。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②focus on专注于
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. (when引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 7(2022·浙江金华·中考真题)
假如你是Li Hua,你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容,结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历,回一封邮件,供他参考。
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出,不计入总词数;正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句: I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude(态度)to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…
Dear Frank,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件,告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题;第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项;第四段表达自己的希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 8(2022·浙江杭州·中考真题)
假定你是李平,请阅读以下邮件,接受邀请并回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: LiPing@mail.com
Subject: Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Ping!
My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it!
Well, why am I writing right now? for one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school?
Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Jack
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m pleased to know that you’re coming for the exchange visit.
We have many interesting school activities. Among them, the singing competition is the most popular. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there.
Hope this helps. And tell me if there is anything else you need to know.
Li Ping
【解析】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据邮件内容进行回复,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的一些有趣的活动,以及介绍关于中国文化的活动。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
Writing 9(2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题)
假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …
注意:
(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的建议至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
【答案】例文
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.
I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为;第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 10(2022·浙江温州·中考真题)
假如你是陈华,你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社,她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动,写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见下表)回复邮件,提出你对这些活动的看法和理由,并为她补充至少一项活动。
Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.
•Share stories of Chinese singers.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【答案】
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.
Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计的活动来回复邮件,要提出你对这些活动的看法及理由,并补充一项适合该社团的活动。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可采用四段式:第一段用已给出开头引出话题;第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由;第三段补充合适的社团活动;第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 11(2022·浙江丽水·中考真题)
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划,请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What to do
Why to do so
●volunteer to do...
●make a survey about...
●have a graduation trip to...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn more about...
●open one’s eyes...
●…
注意:
1)文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80~ 100;邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划;最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing 1(2026·浙江·二模)
为响应“每天运动一小时,幸福生活一辈子”的号召,学校英语俱乐部发起了“Sports Go with Me”主题活动。假如你是李华,请结合以下调查表,谈谈自己的运动习惯、反思以及对运动的看法。
Sports Go with Me
Reflection
Always
Sometimes
Seldom
Do morning exercises carefully
√
Ride a bike to school
√
…
Opinions
Why are sports important to us?
How do sports help our study and life?
Promises
What small change will you make to keep exercising?
注意:(1)文中需包含至少两个与运动相关的活动,以上内容仅供参考;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my sports habits with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my sports habits with you.
I often do morning exercises to stay energetic. I sometimes walk or ride to school to stay active in daily life. But I hardly play ball games with friends because of heavy schoolwork.
Sports are really important. They not only make us strong and reduce study stress, but also help us learn teamwork and patience.
I promise to exercise at least one hour a day and join more after-school sports. A healthy body is necessary for better study.
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:材料作文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:个人日常运动习惯、运动的重要意义、个人运动承诺与感悟
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we/us)
注意事项:贴合学生身份,语句简洁流畅,逻辑清晰,积极传递运动的重要性
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
开头段:自我介绍,点明主题,引出分享个人运动习惯
主体第一段:详细介绍自身日常运动方式、运动频率及不常球类运动的原因
主体第二段:阐述运动对身体、学习和成长的重要意义
结尾段:许下运动承诺,点明健康身体对学习的重要性,升华主旨
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人运动习惯
运动方式:do morning exercises/walk/ride to school/play ball games等
运动频率:often/sometimes/hardly等
影响因素:heavy schoolwork/busy study/limited time等
状态效果:stay energetic/stay active/keep healthy等
要点二:运动的重要性
身体益处:make us strong/reduce stress/keep fit/improve physical health等
成长益处:learn teamwork/learn patience/improve ourselves等
要点三:个人运动规划与感悟
运动计划:exercise one hour a day/join after-school sports/keep exercising等
核心感悟:a healthy body/help study/benefit growth/necessary for learning等
Writing 2(2026·浙江舟山·三模)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Bruce第一次去一位中国留学生家中用餐,发电子邮件向你咨询有关初次见面、礼物及餐桌礼仪的问题,请根据邮件内容,给Bruce回一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
1. 问候方式:初次见面时握手
2. 就餐前:带礼物
3. 就餐中:具体介绍中国餐桌礼仪(比如等长辈先动筷/使用公筷/不要用筷子指着别人……)
4. 就餐后:对主人表达感谢
要求:
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;文中不得出现真实的人名、校名
词数:80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Bruce,
I’m happy that you are going to have dinner in a Chinese family.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bruce,
I’m happy that you are going to have dinner in a Chinese family. Let me tell you some manners.
First, you should shake hands when you meet for the first time. Second, you’d better bring a small gift before the meal. During the dinner, wait for the elders to start eating first. Remember to use serving chopsticks and don’t point at others with your chopsticks. After dinner, remember to thank the host.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. Hope you enjoy yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,给朋友回复的电子邮件,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:必须覆盖题干要求的全部4项内容:①初次见面的问候方式为握手;②赴宴前需要带礼物;③具体说明中国餐桌礼仪(等长辈先动筷、使用公筷、不用筷子指人等);④就餐后向主人表达感谢
确定人称:以第一人称I(李华)行文,针对第二人称you(Bruce)给出建议
注意事项:文中不得出现真实人名、校名;需保证逻辑通顺,要点无遗漏
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接题干给定的开头,直接点明写作目的,说明你将介绍中国做客的注意事项,自然过渡到下文;
主体段:按照“初次见面→赴宴前→就餐中→就餐后”的时间顺序,逐一展开题干要求的各个要点,逻辑清晰不混乱;
结尾段:送上祝福,礼貌收尾。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:问候及餐前礼仪
问候:shake hands when you meet for the first time/a friendly handshake is perfectly proper等
餐前礼仪:bring a small gift/a box of chocolate or some beautiful flowers等
要点二:就餐中
餐桌礼仪:wait for the elders to start eating first/use serving chopsticks/don’t point at others with your chopsticks/use public chopsticks to pick food等
要点三:就餐后
表达感谢:thank the host (for the nice meal)/express your thanks to the host等
Writing 3(2026·浙江嘉兴·二模)
假如你是李华,你校即将迎来一批英国交换生,学校计划开展“文化交流体验日”活动。请你给项目负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件,从以下两项体验活动中任选其一,介绍活动具体内容并说明推荐理由。
Local Culture Tour1. visit traditional buildings
2. learn about history
3. ...
Daily Life Experience1. live with a Chinese family
2. make Chinese food
3. ...
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选体验活动至少三点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like to share my idea for our “Cultural Exchange Day”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like to share my idea for our “Cultural Exchange Day”. I recommend Daily Life Experience.
First, students can live with a Chinese family to feel the warmth. Second, they are able to make traditional Chinese food like dumplings together. Third, they can chat with locals in community parks. This activity helps them understand Chinese culture better in daily life. Also, it is a wonderful chance to make new friends. In addition, they can get a better understanding of Chinese people. I believe everyone will enjoy it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:建议类邮件应用文,时态以一般现在时为主,客观介绍活动内容
明确要点:从两项活动中任选其一,介绍活动具体内容、说明推荐理由
确定人称:第一人称(I/my),面向项目负责人的正式建议语境
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、学校等信息,词数严格控制在80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,直接点明推荐的活动选项
主体段:用逻辑连接词分层介绍活动的三点具体内容,同步补充推荐理由
结尾段:礼貌收尾,表达对建议的期待,收束全文
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动内容介绍
活动选择:Daily Life Experience
具体内容:live with a Chinese family/make traditional Chinese food/chat with locals in community parks/visit traditional buildings/learn about local history/watch a folk art performance等
要点二:推荐理由说明
核心理由:help them understand Chinese culture better/provide a chance to make new friends/get a better understanding of Chinese people/feel the warmth of Chinese families/learn about local history/experience daily Chinese life/create a memorable experience/promote cultural exchange等
要点三:衔接表达
衔接表达:First/Second/Third/Also/Besides/In addition/I believe/I hope等
Writing 4(2026·浙江金华·一模)
假如你是张华,你收到外国朋友Tony的来信,他想了解一项中国古代运动以及你最喜欢的一种运动,请根据以下提示写一封回信。
● the earliest football
● over 2,000 years ago
● a water sport
● remember Qu Yuan
…
What sport do you like best? badminton/jogging/...
Why do you like it? relaxing/keep fit/...
How do you enjoy it? how often/how long/with whom/...
注意:
(1)回信须包含以上要点,内容可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100左右:首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you want to learn about ancient Chinese sports.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you want to learn about ancient Chinese sports. Let me introduce Cuju—the earliest form of football in ancient China, with a history of over 2,000 years. It was very popular among both common people and soldiers. Playing Cuju needed great skill and teamwork, much like today’s football.
As for me, jogging is my cup of tea. It clears my mind and keeps me fit. Every morning, I jog for 30 minutes in the park with my dad. The fresh air, the rising sun, and the quiet paths make each step a true pleasure.
What about you? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性应用文,用一般现在时为主,结合一般过去时
明确要点:介绍一种中国古代运动、我最喜欢的运动(种类、原因、频率)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)、第二人称(you)
注意事项:不要透露学校名称和真实姓名
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
第一段:总起句,介绍一种中国古代运动
第二段:介绍我最喜欢的运动,并说明原因和频率
第三段:询问对方的喜好,盼回信
第四段:表达祝福
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍一种古代运动
运动名称:Cuju/dragon boat race/Touhu
悠久历史:the earliest form of football/with a history of over 2,000 years/remember Qu Yuan/originated during the Spring and Autumn period等
流行程度:It was very popular among both common people and soldiers/became a popular pastime at banquets等
要点二:我最喜欢的运动
运动名称:jogging is my cup of tea/playing basketball is a way to relax/my favorite sport is badminton等
喜爱原因:clears my mind and keeps me fit/help me relax/want to become a successful athlete like Lin Dan/The fresh air, the rising sun, and the quiet paths make each step a true pleasure等
运动频率:Every morning, I jog for 30 minutes/twice a week with my friends/I play badminton in class等
Writing 5(2026·浙江宁波·一模)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom听说你们学校在教学楼里设置了几个“课间能量补给站(Energy Corners)”,他对这些补给站很好奇。请你选择其中一个补给站,给他写一封邮件进行介绍,并说明它给同学们带来的至少两点好处。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 邮件需符合要求,包含所提内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our “Energy Corners”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you find it interesting. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in our “Energy Corners”. Among the three corners, I like the AI Corner best, which is located on the first floor.
In this corner, we can do many interesting things, such as playing chess with AI robots or having conversations with AI. These activities are very popular among us students.
There are many advantages to having such a corner. First, it helps us feel relaxed and refreshed after a long class. Second, it allows us to learn more about modern technology and improves our thinking skills. It truly makes our school life more colorful.
I hope you find it interesting. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件(书信类应用文)。
时态语态:以一般现在时为主(描述现状、功能及客观好处)。
明确要点:选点定位:从图中三处任选其一(本范文选定 AI Corner)。
内容交代:描述位置(1st floor)及具体活动(play chess/talk with AI)。
好处说明:给出至少两点好处(缓解疲劳、增长科技知识)。
确定人称:第一人称(I, we)为主。
注意事项:词数控制在80词左右;紧扣“能量补给”主题,突出对学习生活的积极影响;注意邮件格式的规范性。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段(开篇点题):回应Tom的好奇心,明确表达自己最喜欢的补给站是“AI Corner”。
主体段(细节描述+好处说明):
细节:交代AI角的位置(一楼)及核心活动(下棋、对话)。
好处:从“心理放松”和“知识技能”两个维度展开论述,体现“能量补给”的深层含义。
结尾段(总结收束):总结AI角对学校生活的意义,自然衔接给出的结尾句。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:开篇点明主题
主旨引入:Among the three corners, I like the AI Corner best, which is located on the first floor.
要点二:介绍补给站与带来的好处
内容交代:We can do many interesting things, such as playing chess with AI robots or having conversations with AI.
好处1(心理/生理):It helps us feel relaxed and refreshed after a long class.
好处2(认知/成长):It allows us to learn more about modern technology and improves our thinking skills.
要点三:升华感悟与分享
个人感悟:It truly makes our school life more colorful.
呼应结尾:I hope you find it interesting.
Writing 6
(2026·浙江温州·三模)
人际交往是一门艺术。校英语社团正在举办以“Getting Along Well with Others”为题的征文活动。请选取一项你认为人际交往中最为重要的品质,结合自身的一次经历,阐述该品质的重要意义,撰写一篇征文。
Getting Along Well with Others
Qualityhonesty
respect
kindness
…
Experience
Meaningbuild trust
accept differences
spread warmth
…
told the truth / listened quietly / offered to help / ...
注意:
(1)图中提供的信息仅供参考使用;
(2)词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Getting along well with others is important in our daily life. In my opinion, ________ is the most important quality.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Getting along well with others is important in our daily life. In my opinion, honesty is the most important quality.
Here is my experience. Once, I lost a book that I borrowed from my best friend. I was afraid he would be angry, but I decided to tell him the truth. To my surprise, he forgave me and our friendship became stronger. This experience taught me that honesty helps us build trust.
If we are honest, others will believe us and like to make friends with us. Therefore, we should always be honest to get along well with others.
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:话题记叙文,一般现在时(观点)、一般过去时(叙事)为主
明确要点:人际交往最重要品质(诚实)、自身相关经历、该品质的重要意义
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,点明人际交往重要,提出honesty是最重要品质
主体段:完整讲述自身经历,交代事件起因、心理、结果
结尾段:总结经历带来的感悟,升华主题,呼吁保持诚实与人相处
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:人际交往最重要品质
核心观点句:honesty is the most important quality/I hold the belief that nothing matters more than honesty in interpersonal communication等
开篇总起句:Getting along well with others is important in our daily life/Getting on with people around us plays a key role in our whole life等
核心短语:build trust/form close relationships/clear up misunderstandings/create warm connections等
要点二:自身相关经历
事件背景:lost a book that I borrowed from my best friend/Once I shared a group task with my classmate for our English club competition等
心理活动:afraid he would be angry/I felt extremely uneasy and dared not talk face to face with my friend等
个人选择:decided to tell him the truth/decided to put aside my embarrassment and communicate with my partner calmly等
事件结果:he forgave me and our friendship became stronger/This small conflict faded away, and we built a more trusting friendship afterward等
要点三:诚实品质的重要意义
道理总结句:taught me that honesty helps us build trust/Being truthful helps us build genuine connections with everyone around us等
条件阐述句:If we are honest, others will believe us and like to make friends with us/If we stay honest in daily communication, fewer misunderstandings will appear between us等
收尾升华句:we should always be honest to get along well with others/Therefore, we should stick to honesty whenever we communicate with people等
Writing 7(2026·浙江温州·模拟预测)
近段时间以来,“爱你老己(Love you, Laoji)”这句话走红网络,成为年轻人缓解压力,关爱自我的新方式。现在学校公众号举行主题为“Love you, old self”的征文活动。请你结合自身体验,选择或自定其中一项,说说爱自己的方式,并谈谈理由,向公众号投稿。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, the phrase “Love you, Laoji” is very popular. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Recently, the phrase “Love you, Laoji” is very popular.
For me, I love myself by taking good care of my body and mood. I keep a balanced diet, avoid junk food, sleep early and run 20 minutes every day to stay fit. When schoolwork and exams stress me out, I listen to soft music or take walks in the park to relax.
This self-care brings me many benefits. It keeps me healthy, reduces my anxiety, builds my confidence and helps me face troubles bravely. It makes my daily life warmer and more positive all the time.
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文
明确要点:围绕主题“Love you, old self”,选择一种爱自己的方式,说明具体做法并阐述理由
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:词数80左右,开头已给出,不出现真实姓名和学校信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接题目给出的开头,引入“爱自己”的话题
主体段:说明自己爱自己的具体方式,描述日常做法
结尾段:阐述这种方式带来的影响与自己的看法,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
爱自己的方式:take good care of my body and mood / accept yourself等
具体做法:stick to balanced diets instead of junk food / sleep early / run 20 minutes daily to stay fit / listen to gentle music or walk in the park when stressed / face my strengths and weaknesses calmly /stop blaming myself for tiny mistakes等
理由与影响:keeps me physically healthy / eases my anxiety / builds up my confidence / encourages me to meet difficulties bravely / makes my daily life happier and more positive/improve my learning persistence /create warmer interpersonal relationships等
Writing 8(2026·浙江温州·三模)
假设你是李华,你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的征文活动,现向全体同学征集职业规划文稿。请你根据调查问卷的内容写一篇短文进行投稿,介绍自己的未来职业及理由,并阐述职业规划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Your Future Job
1. What do you want to be in the future?
□ A doctor □ A teacher □ A scientist
□ An artist □ An IT engineer □ Others ________
2. Why do you choose that?
3. What’s your plan for the future job?
My Future Job
【答案】
My Future Job
Different students have different dream jobs. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her. Though Mum is very busy, she always tries to look after patients. She says she’s happy when she helps patients.
To achieve my goal, I’ve made plans. First, I’ll make an effort to enter a medical university. Second, I’ll learn more medical knowledge by reading. Besides, I decide to do volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills.
As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future.
【解析】
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:征文记叙文,以一般将来时、一般现在时为主
明确要点: ① 未来想从事的职业;② 选择该职业的理由;③ 实现目标的职业规划
确定人称:第一人称 (I)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、学校;全文80词左右,给定开头不计入词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接题目给出的开头句,点明自己未来理想职业
主体段:分两层,第一层阐述选择这份职业的理由;第二层写职业规划
结尾段:升华主旨,表达为梦想坚持、努力的决心
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:未来职业
职业选择:a doctor/a teacher/a scientist/an artist/an IT engineer/a nurse/a dancer/a singer/a worker/a cleaner/a driver/a writer/a cook/a pilot等
要点二:选择该职业的理由
榜样影响:Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her./My mother is a great doctor, so I hope to follow in her footsteps./Watching my mother help patients every day makes me want to be a doctor.等
职业价值:look after patients/she’s happy when she helps patients/she feels happy when patients get better/bring hope to patients等
要点三:未来职业规划
升学目标:make an effort to enter a medical university/study hard at all subjects/listen to teachers carefully/go to a top university等
知识积累: learn more medical knowledge by reading/improve my skills/read related books/learn professional knowledge/watch learning videos/collect useful information等
实践锻炼:do volunteer work in hospitals/take part in practice activities/get working experience/help people in need/take part in after-school activities等
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