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人教版八年级上册 Unit 2
Home Sweet Home 写作指导清单
教材任务 · 重难点突破 · 范文赏析 · 迁移训练
这份清单紧扣新版教材八上 Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 的语篇和写作任务编写。本单元的语言核心是 can / could 表示礼貌请求和请求许可,话题围绕家务、布置新家、家人团聚。写作指导就围绕"用 could 礼貌地提出请求和建议,把家务和家的温暖写具体"展开。建议先看教材任务,再练句型,最后对照范文和迁移训练自查。
一、教材写作任务再现
课本 Section B 围绕"家的意义"展开,Project / 书面表达要求学生给搬了新家的朋友写一封邮件,就"怎样打造温馨的家"提出建议:
任务:假设你是 Li Ming,你的外国朋友 Jack 搬了新家,请你写一封英文邮件给他提建议。
要点:1. 分担家务(扫地、浇花、倒垃圾等);2. 布置房间(贴全家福、阳台养花);3. 邀请亲友、一起做饭;4. 家不在于大小,有爱才温馨。
体裁:电子邮件;人称:第一人称 I;词数:80—100词。
教材语料:Section A 的 could 请求句型、Section B 阅读 The True Meaning of Home(春节回家、分担家务、家是一种感觉)。
二、本单元重难点突破
(一)核心语法:can / could 表礼貌请求与许可
本单元写作的灵魂是礼貌地请人做事或征求许可:Could you please + 动词原形? 是请对方帮忙;Can / Could I + 动词原形? 是征求许可。回答时统一用 can,不用 could。
课文原句迁移表
功能
课文原句
写作中怎么用
请人帮忙
Could you please water the plants? / Could you please sweep the floor?
邮件里请朋友/家人做事
征求许可
Can I invite my friends to our new house? / Could I hang out with friends?
向父母征求意见
礼貌拒绝
Sorry, I have to... / I’m afraid I can’t.
委婉拒绝
写家务
pack up his bedroom, take out the rubbish, do the laundry, fold the clothes, feed the fish, water the plants
写分担家务
写家的意义
Home is not a place. It’s a kind of feeling. / East or west, home is best.
结尾升华
写宾至如归
make grandparents feel at home / with open arms
写家人相聚
(二)易错点提醒
1. 用 Could I...? 征求许可时,肯定回答用 Yes, you can(不说 Yes, you could)。
2. Could you please 后接动词原形:Could you please help me?(不说 to help)。
3. 提建议要落到具体家务,别只写"do some chores";把扫地、浇花、倒垃圾写出来才像真的家。
三、课文语料迁移(可直接搬进作文)
分类
课文短语
日常家务
sweep the floor, take out the rubbish, do the laundry, fold the clothes, make the bed, set the table, walk the dog
照顾家里
water the plants, feed the fish, grow flowers on the balcony, hang up family photos, clean up
待人与相聚
invite friends over, cook a meal together, feel at home, with open arms, give a hand
家的感受
warm and comfortable, a warm feeling, East or west home is best, no place like home
四、范文与亮点解析
范文一:给 Jack 的建议邮件(教材任务)
A Letter to Jack
Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’ve moved into a new house. Let me tell you how to make it a warm home.
First, share chores with your family. Could you please sweep the floor, water the plants and take out the rubbish every day? Working together makes housework easy. Second, put up family photos and grow some flowers on the balcony. You can also invite your friends over and cook a meal.
Remember: home is not a place, but a warm feeling. East or west, home is best. I hope you’ll feel at home soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
亮点解析
文中句子
用到的本单元知识
Could you please sweep the floor, water the plants and take out the rubbish every day?
Could you please + 动词原形,礼貌请求;家务短语具体
home is not a place, but a warm feeling
迁移课文原句,点出家的意义
East or west, home is best. / feel at home
课文谚语与短语,结尾收束
范文二:My Sweet Home(介绍自己的家)
My Sweet Home
My home is not big, but it is warm and comfortable.
Every morning, I help my mum make the bed and set the table. After dinner, I take out the rubbish and feed the fish. At weekends, my family often grows flowers on the balcony and hangs up family photos on the wall. When my friends come, we always cook a meal together.
Home is not a place. It’s a kind of feeling. No matter how busy I am, I feel relaxed as soon as I walk through the door.
亮点解析
文中句子
用到的本单元知识
make the bed, set the table, take out the rubbish, feed the fish, grow flowers on the balcony, hang up family photos
一组家务短语,把家写具体
Home is not a place. It’s a kind of feeling.
课文原句点题
feel relaxed as soon as I walk through the door
细节写家的温暖
五、迁移运用(用本单元句型写句子)
1. 请你帮我浇一下花好吗?(用 Could you please...)
2. 妈妈,我可以邀请朋友来新家吗?(用 Can / Could I...)
3. ——我能用一下你的字典吗?——当然可以,给你。(问答要用 can)
参考答案
1. Could you please water the plants for me?
2. Mum, can / could I invite my friends to our new house?
3. —Could I use your dictionary? —Sure. Here you are.
六、写作要点速记
项目
要点
话题
家务劳动 / 布置新家 / 家的意义
结构
邮件:问候 + 说明来意 + 分点提建议 + 祝愿收尾
时态
一般现在时为主
要素
具体家务 + 布置建议 + 邀请亲友 + 家的意义
语法
Could you please + V?(请人帮忙);Can / Could I + V?(征求许可);回答用 can
细节
家务至少写三件,别只写 do chores
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