摘要:
本初中英语讲义聚焦人教版八年级上册Unit 3“Same or Different?”写作任务,核心围绕形容词和副词比较级,构建从教材任务(介绍朋友异同或表达友谊看法)到课文原句迁移(如“-er than”“as...as”)、易错点提醒(比较级后接than等)、语料积累(性格能力短语)、范文赏析(具体比较级运用)及迁移训练的完整学习支架。
该资料以“论点+例证”结构为框架,通过课文金句(如“A good friend is like a mirror”)迁移和比较级句型(如“gets up earlier than me”)应用提升语言能力,范文解析与要点速记表格培养思维品质(逻辑分析异同),迁移训练与自查环节助力学习能力(自主练习)。课中辅助教师突破语法重难点,课后帮助学生巩固比较级表达,弥补细节不足。
内容正文:
人教版八年级上册 Unit 3
Same or Different? 写作指导清单
教材任务 · 重难点突破 · 范文赏析 · 迁移训练
这份清单紧扣新版教材八上 Unit 3 Same or Different? 的语篇和写作任务编写。本单元语言核心是形容词和副词的比较级,话题围绕"我和朋友/同学的相同与不同"。Section B 课文讨论"朋友该相似还是不同",写作上采用"论点+例证"的跷跷板结构。写作指导就围绕"用比较级把两个人的相同点和不同点写清楚"展开。建议先看教材任务,再练句型,最后对照范文和迁移训练自查。
一、教材写作任务再现
课本 Section B 的 Reading & Writing 围绕"好朋友就像一面镜子"展开,Project / 写作要求学生写一写自己和朋友的相同与不同:
任务:以 My Best Friend and I 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你和好朋友的相同点和不同点;也可写 Should Friends Be the Same or Different? 表达你的看法。
要点:1. 你们的相同之处;2. 你们的不同之处;3. 朋友在你成长中的作用。
体裁:说明文/观点类短文;人称:第一人称;词数:80—100词。
教材语料:Section A 的 Emma / Ella 比较(sing louder, dance better, get up earlier);Section B 的 A good friend is like a mirror / A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart。
二、本单元重难点突破
(一)核心语法:形容词、副词比较级
本单元写作的灵魂是用比较级把两个人放在一起比:A 比 B 更……(…-er than / more… than);A 和 B 一样……(as + 原级 + as)。写作时先说相同,再说不同,结构就清楚了。
课文原句迁移表
功能
课文原句
写作中怎么用
比身高/速度
I’m a little shorter than you, but I can run faster than you.
写外貌或能力对比
用 as…as
I’m as hard-working as you, but you read more than me.
写两人相同之处
写习惯差异
Emma always gets up earlier than me. / Ella dances better than Emma, but Emma sings louder.
写作息/特长差异
写变化
Because of that, I try harder and I’m getting better at badminton. / Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.
写朋友带来的改变
写观点
I don’t really care if my friends are similar to or different from me.
表达对友谊的看法
课文金句
A good friend is like a mirror. / A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
结尾升华
(二)易错点提醒
1. 比较级后有 than:I am taller than her(不说 taller as her);比较级前可用 a little / much 修饰。
2. as…as 中间用原级:as hard-working as you(不说 as harder as)。
3. 别只写"we are different",要写出哪里不同、怎么不同——用比较级落到具体事上。
三、课文语料迁移(可直接搬进作文)
分类
课文短语
比性格
outgoing, hard-working, serious, shy, lazy, have a great sense of humour
比能力
sing louder, dance better, run faster, get up earlier, read more books
相同与不同
have something in common, be similar to, be different from, in many ways
友谊与影响
thanks to her, be always there to listen, reach for your hand, touch your heart, care about, make a great team
四、范文与亮点解析
范文一:My Best Friend and I
My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend called Emma. In some ways, we are the same, but in other ways we are different.
We both work hard and are good at all the subjects. Emma always gets up earlier than me, so she reads more books in the morning. But I run faster than her, and I am more outgoing than she is. We both enjoy playing sports in our spare time.
A good friend is like a mirror. We have a lot in common, and we don’t care if we are different. I hope we will be good friends forever.
亮点解析
文中句子
用到的本单元知识
gets up earlier than me, reads more books, run faster than her, more outgoing than she is
一组比较级,把两人差异写具体
A good friend is like a mirror.
课文原句,开头/结尾点题
have a lot in common
课文短语,写两人相同
范文二:Should Friends Be the Same or Different?
Should Friends Be the Same or Different?
Should friends be the same or different? I don’t really care.
I have two good friends. Lily is similar to me. We are both quiet and read more history books than others. We study harder together. Anna is quite different from me. She is more outgoing and speaks more loudly, but she often helps me when I make mistakes. Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It is not important to be the same. What matters is that you care about each other.
亮点解析
文中句子
用到的本单元知识
read more history books than others
课文迁移,比较级
Thanks to her, I am becoming more outgoing.
课文原句,写朋友带来的改变
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
课文金句,结尾升华
五、迁移运用(用比较级写句子)
1. 我比我姐姐矮一点,但我跑得比她快。(用 a little shorter than / faster than)
2. 我和他一样勤奋,但他读的书比我多。(用 as hard-working as / more than)
3. 多亏了我的英语老师,我现在更外向了。(用 Thanks to...)
参考答案
1. I’m a little shorter than my sister, but I run faster than her.
2. I’m as hard-working as him, but he reads more books than I do.
3. Thanks to my English teacher, I am becoming more outgoing.
六、写作要点速记
项目
要点
话题
我和朋友的相同与不同 / 朋友该相似还是不同
结构
总起 → 相同之处 → 不同之处(比较级)→ 朋友的作用与看法
时态
一般现在时为主;写变化可用现在进行时(be becoming)
要素
相同点 + 不同点 + 你的看法
语法
比较级 -er / more…than;as + 原级 + as;a little / much 修饰比较级
细节
用具体事(起床、读书、运动)代替空泛的"we are different"
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