第一次月考复习之书面表达10篇（Units1-2单元话题）-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册（人教版）

### 基本信息 聚焦初中英语Units1-2单元话题，通过10篇书面表达训练构建"社会变化-人物榜样"双主题写作体系，强化语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 ### 专项设计 |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |社会变化|5篇（家乡变化/休闲活动/科技影响等）|对比类（过去vs现在）、书信/议论文|从个人家乡变化到社会现象再到科技影响，由具体到宏观，构建"现象描述-感受表达-展望"逻辑链| |著名人物|5篇（袁隆平/王亚平/科学家等）|人物介绍、议论文|从榜样重要性到具体人物品质与事迹，由抽象到具象，形成"品质提炼-事迹阐述-影响分析"思维路径|

第一次月考复习之书面表达10篇 （Units1-2单元话题） 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 The Changing World 社会变化 Unit 2 Inspiring people 著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下每单元依次对应5篇单元话题专题训练 1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信想了解你家乡近十年的变化。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封信。 提示： 1. 家乡发生了巨大的变化； 2. 具体变化：交通更加便利、住房条件改善、教育和医疗水平提高、休闲活动更加丰富； 3. 你对这些变化的感受。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右； 3. 语句通顺，书写规范； 4. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to tell you about the great changes in my hometown. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you about the great changes in my hometown. In the past ten years, it has changed a lot. First, the transportation has become more convenient. New roads and bridges have been built, so people can travel around easily. Second, people’s living conditions have improved. Many families have moved into bright and modern apartments. Third, education and medical treatment have also developed quickly. We have a new school and a modern hospital now. What’s more, people have more choices for leisure activities, such as doing sports, watching movies and traveling. I feel proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will become better and better. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（书信），以现在完成时为主，结合一般现在时 明确要点：家乡发生巨大变化；交通更加便利、住房条件改善、教育和医疗水平提高、休闲活动更加丰富；写出个人感受 确定人称：第一人称 I/my 注意事项：不得透露真实人名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出家乡的巨大变化 主体段：分述交通、住房、教育医疗、休闲活动的具体变化 结尾段：表达个人感受，展望家乡未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总述家乡变化 核心词汇：the great changes in my hometown/it has changed a lot/take place/great等 要点二：具体变化 交通方面：the transportation has become more convenient/new roads and bridges have been built/people can travel around easily/convenient/build roads/travel around等 住房方面：people’s living conditions have improved/many families have moved into bright and modern apartments/living conditions/modern/apartment等 教育医疗方面：education and medical treatment have also developed quickly/a new school/a modern hospital/develop quickly/medical treatment等 休闲方面：people have more choices for leisure activities/doing sports/watching movies/traveling/leisure activities/such as等 要点三：个人感受 核心词汇：feel proud of these changes/better and better/in the future等 2．随着社会的发展，人们的生活发生了很大的变化：生活方式不同了、交流方式多样了、出行选择更多了，请以“Changes in Leisure Activities”为题写一篇英语短文，去参加学校英语周的征文比赛，对比过去和现在休闲活动的不同。 写作要求： 1. 文中必须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数80-100词。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Changes in Leisure Activities As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ People can enjoy different ways to relax and spend their free time happily. 【答案】例文 Changes in Leisure Activities As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. In the past, watching TV was a popular and exciting leisure activity. Many people enjoyed watching shows together happily. Sometimes, they played Chinese chess with neighbours. However, leisure activities have changed a lot in our daily life today. Now, people have more different choices, such as playing video games, traveling, or doing sports. They can share their hobbies with friends online or have a good chance to try new interesting things like dancing or painting. The internet makes leisure time more fun and colorful. In short, leisure activities are much richer than before. People can enjoy different ways to relax and spend their free time happily. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般过去时与一般现在时结合 明确要点：过去休闲活动(watch TV, play Chinese chess)，现在休闲活动特点(more choices, share...online, try new things) 确定人称：第三人称(people/they) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数控制80-100词（开头结尾不计入） [第二步：构思布局] 三部分结构： 开头部分：已给出总起句，总述人们休闲活动发生巨大变化 主体部分：对比过去和现在的休闲活动，包含思维导图全部要点 结尾部分：已给出句子，总结人们可以用不同方式放松、愉快度过空闲时间 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的休闲活动 活动选择：watch TV/play Chinese chess with neighbours/listen to the radio/fly kites等 场景描述：together/with family members/indoors等 活动感受：popular/exciting/simple/relaxing等 要点二：现在的休闲活动 活动特点：more different choices/share their hobbies with friends online/have a chance to try new things/different kinds of activities/communicate with friends on the Internet等 活动举例：play video games/travel/do sports/dance/paint/go hiking/take photos等 作用效果：make leisure time more fun and colorful/much richer/help people relax/bring new experiences等 3．这个暑假你回自己家乡了吗？与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢？请以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，围绕“家乡变化”展开一篇英语写作。内容包括：1.介绍家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面的变化；2.表达你对这些变化的感受；3.谈谈你对家乡未来的期待。 注意：1.文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；2.写作字数为80以上。 The Amazing Changes in My Hometown ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： The Amazing Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, roads were narrow and dirty, and people lived in low houses. Now, everything has changed. Modern high buildings have replaced the old ones. The traffic is much more convenient with wide roads and new buses. What’s more, the environment is much better with green trees and clean rivers everywhere. Seeing these amazing changes, I feel extremely happy and proud. I truly hope that my hometown will become even more beautiful and prosperous in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，叙述过去的状况使用一般过去时，说明当前的变化及感受使用现在完成时与一般现在时，表达对未来的期待使用一般将来时 明确要点：开篇点明家乡巨变、从建筑、交通、环境等方面详细对比今昔变化、抒发自豪感与欣喜感受、表达对家乡未来发展的期盼 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）与第三人称相结合 注意事项：不得出现真实人名与校名；紧扣要点展开且对比鲜明；词数80以上 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起开篇，点题说明近年来家乡发生了巨大的令人惊叹的变化 主体段：运用对比手法，分别从房屋建筑、交通出行和自然环境三个方面阐述家乡的新面貌 结尾段：总结个人强烈的自豪与喜悦之情，展望并祝福家乡拥有更加美好繁荣的明天 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点题与总体变化 总起开篇：Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years/My hometown has changed a lot over the years/There have been amazing changes in my hometown/My hometown has taken on a new look等 要点二：具体维度的今昔变化 建筑居住：In the past, people lived in low houses/Modern high buildings have replaced the old ones/tall buildings have been built/new modern apartments appear everywhere/people moved into big and bright flats等 交通出行：The traffic is much more convenient with wide roads and new buses/roads were narrow and dirty/it is much easier to travel around/take shared bikes/convenient transportation brings great comfort等 生态环境：the environment is much better with green trees and clean rivers everywhere/the air becomes much fresher/the water is clear/plant lots of trees and grass/clean parks for citizens to relax等 要点三：感受与未来期待 个人感受：Seeing these amazing changes, I feel extremely happy and proud/I am deeply impressed by these changes/I feel lucky to witness the development/take great pride in my hometown等 未来期待：I truly hope that my hometown will become even more beautiful and prosperous in the future/I believe my hometown will have a brighter future/wish it to be a greener and more modern place to live等 4．科技极大地改变了我们的生活。许多发明使我们现在的生活与过去不一样了。与过去的生活相比，今天的生活更有趣更多彩。 根据以下提示，写一篇短文，描述我们的生活发生的变化。 出行 联系 教育 过去 1. 不容易 2. 花费很长时间 3. 可能很危险 1. 依靠写信 2. 很难与遥远的朋友联系 3. 等待很长时间 1. 不关心教育 2. 没有机会上学 现在 1. 方便，快捷 2. 乘火车、飞机、轮船等多种选择 1. 电话、网络等发明帮忙解决这个难题。 2. 无论朋友在哪里，都能与之保持联系。 1. 非常关注教育 2. 既可以在教室学习，也可以在网上学习。 要求： 1. 内容须包括所有的要点提示，可适当增加细节； 2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：保持联系 keep in touch with...，无论哪里 no matter where，多彩的colorful 开头已给出： Technology has changed our life greatly. Lots of inventions have made our life different from that in the past. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Technology has changed our life greatly. Lots of inventions have made our life different from that in the past. In the past, traveling wasn’t easy. It took a long time and was dangerous. However, today it is convenient and fast. We have many choices like trains, planes and ships. Communication also changed. People relied on letters and waited for a long time. It was hard to contact distant friends. Now, phones and the Internet help solve this problem. We can keep in touch with friends no matter where they are. As for education, people didn’t care much about it before. Many had no chance to go to school. But now we pay much attention to it. We can study not only in classrooms but also online. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：变化对比说明类短文，综合运用一般过去时（描述过去的情况）和一般现在时（描述现在的情况） 明确要点：包含三个方面——出行变化、联系变化、教育变化 确定人称：第一人称复数（we/our）和第三人称（people/they） 注意事项：开头已给出；词数100左右；要点要齐全；可适当使用参考词汇 [第二步：构思布局] 两段式结构： 第一段：承接已给开头，引出话题 第二段：分述出行、联系、教育三个方面的变化 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：出行变化 过去：wasn’t easy/took a long time/was dangerous/was hard to travel/Trips took much time and might be dangerous等 现在：convenient and fast/many choices like trains, planes and ships/can take trains, planes or ships/can travel quickly by train, plane or ship等 要点二：联系变化 过去：relied on letters/waited for a long time/hard to contact distant friends/was difficult to keep in touch with faraway friends and they waited for a long time等 现在：phones and the Internet help solve this problem/keep in touch with friends no matter where they are/Phones and the Internet help us keep in touch with friends等 要点三：教育变化 过去：didn’t care much about education/many had no chance to go to school/people paid little attention to education and many couldn’t go to school等 现在：pay much attention to it/study not only in classrooms but also online/can study both in classrooms and online等 5．假定你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏”举行以“Great Changes around Me”为题的征文比赛，描述你周围事物发生的巨大变化。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿应征。 写作要点： 1. 过去：道路狭窄（narrow），房屋老旧，空气……河水……人们…… 2. 现在：路面洁净、宽阔，交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云，绿树鲜花，小鸟歌唱；人们…… 3. 感受：国家富强，人民幸福，未来更美好…… 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，省略号处可作适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译； 2. 语句连贯，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4. 80—120词，短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty. People lived in small old houses. The air was not fresh enough, and the river was full of rubbish. People hardly had easy ways to travel. But now, roads are wide and clean, making traffic very convenient. Tall buildings rise everywhere. We can see blue sky and white clouds, with green trees and colorful flowers around. Birds sing happily here and there. People now live a comfortable life and are always ready to try new activities. Our country is getting stronger, and people are living a happy life. I believe we will have a much better future. 【详解】[写作步骤] 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：本文是一篇征文，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主； 明确要点：过去的情况（道路、房屋、空气、河水、人们）、现在的情况（路面、交通、建筑、环境、人们）、感受（国家富强、人民幸福、未来更美好）； 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）和第三人称（they）为主； 注意事项：注意不要遗漏要点，省略号处可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译，词数80—120词（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数），不能出现任何真实信息（地名、校名和人名等）。 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构 开头段，借用已给开头，引出主题，概括描述过去的情况； 主体段，描述现在的巨大变化，从道路、交通、建筑、自然环境等方面展开； 结尾段，表达自己的感受，展望未来，升华主题。 第三步：要点展开 要点一：过去的情况：In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty/People lived in small old houses/The air was not fresh enough/The river was full of rubbish/People hardly had easy ways to travel/Life was hard for many people 要点二：现在的情况（道路与交通）：But now, roads are wide and clean/making traffic very convenient/buses and cars run on the broad roads/people can go anywhere easily 要点三：现在的情况（建筑）：Tall buildings rise everywhere/modern apartments and shopping malls appear/our city looks more beautiful 要点四：现在的情况（自然环境）：We can see blue sky and white clouds/with green trees and colorful flowers around/Birds sing happily here and there/The river is clean again/The air is fresh and pleasant 要点五：现在的情况（人们的生活）：People now live a comfortable life/are always ready to try new activities/enjoy a better life/have more chances to learn and have fun 要点六：感受与展望：Our country is getting stronger/people are living a happy life/I believe we will have a much better future/I am proud of these great changes/We should treasure today’s happy life 6．榜样的力量是无穷的。在我们的成长路上，总有一些励志人物给予我们力量与勇气。请你以The Power of Role Models为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容提示： 1. 简述榜样的重要性； 2. 介绍一位你敬佩的榜样人物及其优秀品质、事迹； 3. 谈谈榜样对你的影响以及你未来的行动。 注意事项： 1. 词数100-120； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Power of Role Models Role models play an important role in our growth. Their positive spirits can guide us, encourage us and help us become better people. The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. He devoted his whole life to hybrid rice research and helped solve the food problem for millions around the world. Though he faced countless failures, he never gave up. He was hard-working, simple and responsible. His story deeply inspires me. When I meet difficulties in study, I think of him and keep going. I will learn from his spirit, study hard and try my best to make contributions to our society. 【详解】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍人物记叙文；用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时 明确要点：榜样的重要性、所介绍榜样的优秀品质和事迹、 榜样对自己的激励 确定人称： 第三人称单数和第一人称 注意事项：根据提示内容写清楚所有要点；词数100-120；文章需条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；不得出现真实校名、人名 [第二步：构思布局] 开头部分：简述榜样的重要性，引出要介绍的榜样话题 主体部分： 具体介绍一位榜样的优秀品质和事迹 结尾部分：总结这位榜样对自己的激励，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 榜样重要性 play an important role in our growth/have a great influence on/set a good example for sb./guide and encourage sb./push sb. to become better等 要点二： 介绍榜样优秀品质和事迹 描述性格品质形容词：hard-working/simple/responsible/patient/brave/strong-willed/modest/devoted等 常用表达：He devoted his whole life to.../He spent all his time doing sth./He kept working.../He tried his best to.../He made great achievements in...等 要点三：榜样的激励作用 His story inspires me greatly/I will learn from his good qualities/When I have trouble, I will think of him and keep going等 7．英雄是榜样，能够给予我们力量和勇气，让我们相信自己能够成为更好的自己。请根据以下内容提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——袁隆平。 内容提示： 1. 他是世界上最伟大的科学家之一，他在2019年获得了共和国勋章。 2.  年轻时，他看到许多中国人挨饿，所以梦想培育更好的水稻。1953年获得学位，然后开始工作。起初3000多次实验失败了。但他意志坚强，无论发生什么，他都不放弃。最后他培育出新型水稻，包括一种比普通水稻增产30%的水稻。 3. 你对他的评价。 提示词：共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic 注意：1. 词数：80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实的学生姓名及班级。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Yuan Longping is my hero. He is one of the greatest scientists in the world. He received the Medal of the Republic in 2019.     When he was young, he saw many Chinese people go hungry, so he dreamed of developing better rice. He got his degree in 1953 and began to work. At first, over 3,000 experiments failed. However, he was strong-minded and never gave up. Finally, he developed new rice, including one type with 30% higher production.     In my opinion, he is a great man. We should learn from him. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：记叙文，用 一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点： 身份与荣誉；成长与奋斗经历；个人对英雄的评价 确定人称： 第三人称 注意事项： 80词左右，不能出现真实的学生姓名及班级 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构 开头段：点明袁隆平是“我”心目中的英雄，并概括其杰出身份和所获荣誉 主体段：按照时间顺序讲述他从立志、求学到最终成功的艰难过程   结尾段：对袁隆平的评价         【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：身份与荣誉 具体表达：one of the greatest scientists/received the Medal of the Republic/be known as a great scientist/be considered the “Father of Hybrid Rice”等 要点二：成长与奋斗经历 具体表达：see many Chinese people go hungry/dream of developing better rice/get his degree/fail many times at first/be strong-minded and never give up/develop new rice等 要点三：对袁隆平的评价 观点描述：in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/from my point of view等 具体表达：be a great man/should learn from him/be a true hero/admire him a lot/ be a real role model等 8．榜样的精神引领我们成长。古人云“高山仰止，景行行止”，优秀人物的品质与成就总能给我们带来深刻的启迪。在我们的生活中，许多科学家用他们的智慧与坚持改变了世界，他们的故事值得我们铭记与学习。假如你校英语俱乐部正在开展以“Role Model’s Power”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文介绍你所崇敬的科学家。 提示： 1. 你崇敬的科学家是谁？他/她主要做出了什么贡献？ 2. 他/她的事迹对你有怎样的启发？ 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不得出现考生姓名和学校名称； 3. 100词左右。 Role Model’s Power ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Role Model’s Power My role model is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He spent his life researching how to grow more rice to help feed people. Because of his hard work, millions of people have enough food to eat. His story teaches me two important things. First, we should work hard for our dreams. Second, it is a great thing to help others. I will study hard like him and try my best to help people in need. I truly believe that his spirit will live on in all of us forever. Yuan Longping’s power encourages me to be a better person every day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：人物介绍类记叙文，以一般现在时为主，介绍人物事迹可用一般过去时 明确要点：崇敬的科学家及主要贡献、人物事迹带来的启发 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)，第三人称 (he/his) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明自己崇敬的科学家，介绍人物身份与主要贡献 主体段：阐述人物事迹带给自己的两点启发，表达个人行动决心 结尾段：升华主题，写榜样力量对自己的长久激励 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：崇敬的科学家及其贡献 人物身份：Yuan Longping/Father of Hybrid Rice/scientist/national hero等 科研付出：spend his life researching/devote himself to research/work hard on science等 贡献成果：grow more rice/help feed people/millions of people have enough food to eat/save many people/solve the problem of food shortage等 要点二：事迹带来的启发 道理感悟：work hard for our dreams/it is a great thing to help others/never give up/keep trying等 个人行动：study hard/try my best to help people in need/learn from him/follow his example/take him as an example等 主题升华：his spirit will live on/encourage me to be a better person/influence me deeply/keep moving forward等        9．作为中学生，在日常学习和生活中，有许多榜样值得我们学习，他们可以是古今中外的名人，为人类发展做出了卓越贡献；也可以是我们身边的亲人、朋友、老师，他们身上同样有着诸多闪光的品质。假设你是李华，某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈一谈你的榜样。 参考人物：司马迁、袁隆平、张骞、詹天佑…… Isaac Newton, Marie Curie, Alan Turing … 写作提示：1.Who is he/she? 2.What made him/her admirable? 3.What can you learn from him/her? 写作要求：  1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数) My Role Model __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Role Model My role model is Yuan Longping, who is known as “the Father of Hybrid Rice”. He was a great scientist who spent most of his life studying rice. Because of his hard work, millions of people have enough food to eat. Yuan Longping was hardworking and never gave up. Although he met many difficulties, he continued his research and made great achievements. His love for science and people’s lives made him admirable. From him, I learn that we should work hard and be responsible. When we face problems, we should keep trying and never give up. I hope to become a useful person like him in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（人物介绍），一般现在时与一般过去时相结合 明确要点：介绍自己的榜样是谁；说明他/她令人敬佩的原因；表达自己从榜样身上学到的品质和启示 确定人称：第三人称介绍榜样，第一人称表达自己的感受 注意事项：词数100左右；包含写作提示中的全部信息；可适当拓展细节；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；突出榜样人物的优秀品质 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：介绍榜样是谁及基本身份 主体段：介绍榜样的优秀品质和令人敬佩的经历或成就 结尾段：说明自己从榜样身上学到的东西以及未来努力方向 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍榜样人物（Who is he/she?） 人物介绍：my role model is Yuan Longping/Isaac Newton/Marie Curie/Alan Turing/Sima Qian等 身份职业：a great scientist/a famous inventor/a writer/a teacher/a person who made great contributions to the world等 其他表达：be known as/be famous for/have a great influence on people等 要点二：介绍令人敬佩的原因（What made him/her admirable?） 优秀品质：hardworking/creative/brave/responsible/patient/kind/persistent/determined/selfless等 具体事例：spend most of his life studying/work hard for many years/face difficulties/never give up/solve problems/help others/achieve his dream等 精神品质：love for science/love people/have a strong will/keep trying/be devoted to his work等 要点三：表达自己的学习和启示（What can you learn from him/her?） 学习品质：work hard/be responsible/keep learning/think creatively/be brave to face difficulties等 成长目标：become a useful person/improve myself/make contributions to society/try my best to achieve my dream等 感悟表达：Never give up/I believe hard work pays off/Nothing is impossible if we keep trying等 10．学校即将举办以“传承英雄文化，弘扬爱国精神”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My Hero—Wang Yaping”为题,根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Great achievements 2013, China’s first teacher in space; 2021, the first Chinese woman to walk in space Good qualities brave, hard-working Inspiring lessons never give up Influence study harder 注意：1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100。 My Hero—Wang Yaping Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My Hero— Wang Yaping Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. In 2013, she became China’s first teacher in space and brought vivid space lessons to students across the whole country. In 2021, she achieved another milestone as the first Chinese woman to walk in space. Wang is not only brave but also hard-working. Her story teaches me to never give up on my dreams. She inspires me to study harder and devote myself to our great country in the future. Wang Yaping is a true hero who encourages me to become better every single day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：人物介绍类记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：王亚平的重大成就、美好品质、带给我们的启发、对我的影响 确定人称：第三人称（介绍王亚平）+第一人称（抒发自身感悟） 注意事项：短文必须包含表格全部关键词，行文补充细节保证通顺，文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，词数控制在80-100词 [第二步：构思布局] 采用四段式结构： 开头段：点明王亚平是我的英雄，总起介绍她是创造多项历史的中国宇航员 第二段：介绍王亚平2013、2021年两项标志性航天成就，补充太空授课相关细节 第三段：介绍王亚平勇敢、勤奋的优秀品质，说明她带给我的人生启发与行动激励 结尾段：总结王亚平是时刻激励我不断成长的英雄，收束全文主旨 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：重大成就 时间一：2013/2021/in the year of 2013等 事迹一：China’s first teacher in space/the first Chinese woman to walk in space/the first female Chinese space walker等 事迹描述：became.../made history/achieved amazing things等 要点二：美好品质 品质词一：brave/courageous/fearless等 品质词二：hard-working/diligent/hard-working and persistent等 人物描写：not only...but also.../show the spirit of...等 要点三：人生启示 精神核心：never give up/never lose heart/keep trying for dreams等 主旨表达： inspires me to.../show us the spirit of...等 要点四：对我的影响 行动指引：study harder/work harder/put more effort into study等 未来目标：devote myself to our great country/make contributions to China等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第一次月考复习之书面表达10篇 （Units1-2单元话题） 单元 单元话题 Unit 1 The Changing World 社会变化 Unit 2 Inspiring people 著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下每单元依次对应5篇单元话题专题训练 1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信想了解你家乡近十年的变化。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他回一封信。 提示： 1. 家乡发生了巨大的变化； 2. 具体变化：交通更加便利、住房条件改善、教育和医疗水平提高、休闲活动更加丰富； 3. 你对这些变化的感受。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右； 3. 语句通顺，书写规范； 4. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to tell you about the great changes in my hometown. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．随着社会的发展，人们的生活发生了很大的变化：生活方式不同了、交流方式多样了、出行选择更多了，请以“Changes in Leisure Activities”为题写一篇英语短文，去参加学校英语周的征文比赛，对比过去和现在休闲活动的不同。 写作要求： 1. 文中必须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 词数80-100词。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Changes in Leisure Activities As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ People can enjoy different ways to relax and spend their free time happily. 3．这个暑假你回自己家乡了吗？与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢？请以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，围绕“家乡变化”展开一篇英语写作。内容包括：1.介绍家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面的变化；2.表达你对这些变化的感受；3.谈谈你对家乡未来的期待。 注意：1.文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；2.写作字数为80以上。 The Amazing Changes in My Hometown ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．科技极大地改变了我们的生活。许多发明使我们现在的生活与过去不一样了。与过去的生活相比，今天的生活更有趣更多彩。 根据以下提示，写一篇短文，描述我们的生活发生的变化。 出行 联系 教育 过去 1. 不容易 2. 花费很长时间 3. 可能很危险 1. 依靠写信 2. 很难与遥远的朋友联系 3. 等待很长时间 1. 不关心教育 2. 没有机会上学 现在 1. 方便，快捷 2. 乘火车、飞机、轮船等多种选择 1. 电话、网络等发明帮忙解决这个难题。 2. 无论朋友在哪里，都能与之保持联系。 1. 非常关注教育 2. 既可以在教室学习，也可以在网上学习。 要求： 1. 内容须包括所有的要点提示，可适当增加细节； 2. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：保持联系 keep in touch with...，无论哪里 no matter where，多彩的colorful 开头已给出： Technology has changed our life greatly. Lots of inventions have made our life different from that in the past. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏”举行以“Great Changes around Me”为题的征文比赛，描述你周围事物发生的巨大变化。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿应征。 写作要点： 1. 过去：道路狭窄（narrow），房屋老旧，空气……河水……人们…… 2. 现在：路面洁净、宽阔，交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云，绿树鲜花，小鸟歌唱；人们…… 3. 感受：国家富强，人民幸福，未来更美好…… 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，省略号处可作适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译； 2. 语句连贯，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4. 80—120词，短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．榜样的力量是无穷的。在我们的成长路上，总有一些励志人物给予我们力量与勇气。请你以The Power of Role Models为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容提示： 1. 简述榜样的重要性； 2. 介绍一位你敬佩的榜样人物及其优秀品质、事迹； 3. 谈谈榜样对你的影响以及你未来的行动。 注意事项： 1. 词数100-120； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．英雄是榜样，能够给予我们力量和勇气，让我们相信自己能够成为更好的自己。请根据以下内容提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——袁隆平。 内容提示： 1. 他是世界上最伟大的科学家之一，他在2019年获得了共和国勋章。 2.  年轻时，他看到许多中国人挨饿，所以梦想培育更好的水稻。1953年获得学位，然后开始工作。起初3000多次实验失败了。但他意志坚强，无论发生什么，他都不放弃。最后他培育出新型水稻，包括一种比普通水稻增产30%的水稻。 3. 你对他的评价。 提示词：共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic 注意：1. 词数：80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实的学生姓名及班级。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．榜样的精神引领我们成长。古人云“高山仰止，景行行止”，优秀人物的品质与成就总能给我们带来深刻的启迪。在我们的生活中，许多科学家用他们的智慧与坚持改变了世界，他们的故事值得我们铭记与学习。假如你校英语俱乐部正在开展以“Role Model’s Power”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文介绍你所崇敬的科学家。 提示： 1. 你崇敬的科学家是谁？他/她主要做出了什么贡献？ 2. 他/她的事迹对你有怎样的启发？ 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不得出现考生姓名和学校名称； 3. 100词左右。 Role Model’s Power ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．作为中学生，在日常学习和生活中，有许多榜样值得我们学习，他们可以是古今中外的名人，为人类发展做出了卓越贡献；也可以是我们身边的亲人、朋友、老师，他们身上同样有着诸多闪光的品质。假设你是李华，某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈一谈你的榜样。 参考人物：司马迁、袁隆平、张骞、詹天佑…… Isaac Newton, Marie Curie, Alan Turing … 写作提示：1.Who is he/she? 2.What made him/her admirable? 3.What can you learn from him/her? 写作要求：  1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数) My Role Model __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．学校即将举办以“传承英雄文化，弘扬爱国精神”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My Hero—Wang Yaping”为题,根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Great achievements 2013, China’s first teacher in space; 2021, the first Chinese woman to walk in space Good qualities brave, hard-working Inspiring lessons never give up Influence study harder 注意：1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100。 My Hero—Wang Yaping Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $