专题16 书面表达（话题+材料+书信+看图）（期中真题汇编，吉林专用）八年级英语上学期

**基本信息** 初中英语期中书面表达试题汇编，含21道不同情境题，涵盖书信、人物介绍、动物保护等话题，注重真实语境中的语言运用与能力梯度。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|21题/40-100词|书信写作（求助信、邀请信）、人物介绍（朋友、双胞胎）、动物说明（东北虎、中华鲟）、观点论述（朋友异同、保护野生动物）|情境真实（国庆假期、学校征文），梯度分明（40词基础到100词拓展），融合文化意识（中国家常菜）与思维品质（观点阐述）|

学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 专题16书面表达（话题+材料+书信+看图） 基础必练 （一) (25-26八上·吉林长春朝阳·期中)假设你是李华，你的笔友Matt想了解你刚刚过去的国庆假期个National Day holiday)。请根据以下要点，用英文给他写一封信。不少于40词。 要点： 1.你去了哪里或做了什么？ 2.你和谁一起？感觉如何？ 要求： 1.内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥： 2注意使用一般过去时。 Dear Matt, Yours, Li Hua (二) (25-26八上·吉林松花江中学·期中)在英语课堂上，老师让大家用英语介绍一下自己的好朋友。请根据以 下导图和要求，以“My Best Friend'为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最好的朋友。 tall and thin,glasses Appearance Personality outgoing,helpful run fast Sally Speciality Habits go to bed early 要求：1.参考导图提示信息，可适当发挥： 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）： 3.词数：70一80。 1/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 My Best Friend (三) (25-26八上·吉林长春九台期中)埃玛Emma)和埃拉Ela)是双胞胎，然而她们在很多方面存在差异。 请根据以下要点提示，描述一下她们的不同之处。要点提示： 1.埃玛比埃拉高； 2.埃玛比埃拉外向； 3.埃拉比埃玛更擅长运动： 4.埃拉的成绩比埃玛好。 要求：要点齐全，语句通顺，不少于40词。 (四) (25-26八上·吉林长春九台期中)旅游让我们的生活多姿多彩。学校英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip''为 题征文。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向该英文报投稿。 内容提示： 1.Where did you go? 2.Who did you go with? 3.What did you do there? 4.What do you think of the trip? 要求：1.包含所有提示的内容，可适当发挥： 2.80词左右。 An Enjoyable Trip 2/11 可学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (五) (25-26八上·吉林长春南关·期中)Jim想举办一场生日派对，想要好朋友来帮忙装饰屋子。假如你是 Jim,请给你的好友Simon写一封求助信。 要点：周六早晨9点到我家：带一副剪刀和一个刷子；做一张海报：做一些剪纸。 要求：字迹工整，语法正确，要点齐全，简练得体，不少于40词。 Dear Simon, Jim (六) (25-26八上·吉林蛟河期中)根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，向外国人介绍东北虎。 数量：70只左右 外貌：大部分是棕色，带有黑色的花纹(stripes) 居住地：中国东北的 食物：其他小动物 森林里 行为：喜欢独居 寿命：野外一般能活15年左右 现状：由于森林被砍 你的看法… 伐，东北虎被 捕杀，数量越来越少 写作要求： 1.层次清晰，语言流畅，包含全部要点，不逐字翻译，可适当发挥。 2.词数80一90词左右。书写规范，卷面整洁。开头己给出，不计入总词数。 Today I want to tell you something about Amur tigers. 3/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 进阶提升) (一) (25-26八上·吉林长春朝阳·期中)真正的朋友是我们一生的财富。某英文杂志社正举办以“A True Friend in My Eyes'”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，分享你对于“真正朋友”的理解，并讲述一个你与朋 友之间体现“真正友谊”的小故事。不少于80词。 要点：1)观点明确，事例具体： (②)结构清晰，语句通顺： (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 (二) (25-26八上·吉林松原前郭·期中)某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李 华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿。介绍一种植物，并说说你为什么要选择这种植物。 提示： 1.What is its name? 2.Where does it grow? 3.Why did you choose it? 4.What are some interesting facts about it? 要求： 1.70一80词。已给出部分不计入总词数： 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 The Power of Plants Plants are very imp ortant to us. 4/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (三) (25-26八上·吉林长春第八十七中学·期中)学校微信公众号正在征文，以下是极危动物中华鲟(Chinese sturgeon)的信息，请你作为学生代表根据以下信息介绍中华鲟的现状，呼吁大家保护濒危动物，用英语写 一封倡议书。向学校投稿。 要点：1.中华鲟生活在中国的扬子江(the Yangtze River)里，能活到40岁，体长可达5米。 2.现在它们正处于濒危/危险的状态，它们的数量变得越来越少。 3.请提出1-2条保护中华鲟的建议。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺：简洁得体；40词左右。 Dear schoolmates, Li Hua (四) (25-26八上·吉林昌邑·期中)朋友是每个人生活中不可或缺的人。请以My friend为题，介绍你的一位好朋 友。 内容提示： 1.说明朋友对你的重要性： 2.比较你与一位好朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处： 3.通过你们之间发生过的一件事说明你为什么喜欢和他（她）做朋友。 写作要求： 1.必须包括所有内容提示要点，需适当发挥。 2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 3.条理清晰，语句流畅，前后连贯。 4.书写工整、规范，90-100个词。 5/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 My friend (五) (25-26八上，吉林白山·期中)英文中有句谚语“There's no place like home..”。假如你是Sandy,请你以 “Hone,Sweet Home'”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。 写作要点：(1)你家的环境： (2)你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的： (3)为了让你的家更加美好，你打算… 要求：1)词数60一70之间： (②)短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺： (3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。 Home,Sweet Home (六) (25-26八上·吉林长春外国语学校·期中)每个人都有自己梦想的职业。请以“My Dream Job''为题，写一篇 短文，描述你理想的工作、说明理由以及打算如何实现梦想。 要求：书写工整，卷面整洁，不少于80词，不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 (七) 6/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (25-26八上·吉林长春外国语学校·期中)假如你是李明，你受邀在线与海外友好学校的师生就“中国家常 菜”这一主题进行交流分享。请你选择一道你拿手的菜肴，并加以介绍。 要求：1说明制作这道菜所需的食材； 2.简述制作这道菜的步骤： 3.至少5句话，不少于40词。 (八) (25-26八上·吉林长春东北师范大学附属中学·期中)假如你是李华，你想邀请班里的交换生Jim来参加班 级的聚会。请根据下面的要点和要求，用英语给他写一封不少于40词的邀请信。 要点：1.时间地点：周日上午8：00在学校集合： 2.活动：徒步，享受美食，玩游戏： 3.周六之前回复。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。 (九) (25-26八上·吉林长春南关·期中)学校英语报社开展以“Should Friends Be Similar or Different??'为题的征文 活动。请结合你的实际情况，谈谈你的观点。 7/11 西学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 要点：1.Show your opinion. 2.Talk about your friends. 要求：1.语言通顺、语法准确、内容完整、不少于80词： 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Should Friends Be Similar or Different? (十) (25-26八上·吉林松原长岭三校·期中)请以“My Favourite Animal'为题写一篇英语作文，介绍一下你最喜 欢的动物。 要求： 1.书写规范，卷面整洁： 2.语言流畅，层次清晰，至少使用一次最高级的表达方式，内容可以适当发挥： 3.文中不能出现真实姓名； 4.词数不少于80。 My Favourite Animal 拓展培优》 (一) (25-26八上·吉林松原前郭尔罗斯蒙古自治县三校·期中)动物是人类的朋友，也是人类的助手。请结合下 面的问题，用英文写一篇名为“An Amazing Animal''的小短文。 8/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (1)What is its name? (2)Where does it live? (3)Why did you choose it? (4)What are some interesting facts about it? 要求： 1包含以上所有的信息，可适当发挥： 2.不少于80词。 (二) (25-26八上·吉林长春净月·期中)度假是一种很好的放松方式，它可以让人远离压力，沉浸在美丽的自然 风景中，或者体验新的文化和活动，拉近家人、朋友之间的距离。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈 谈你的一段度假经历和感受。 要求：1.字迹清晰美观，语句连贯，语法准确。 2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 (三) (25-26八上·吉林长春汽车经济技术开发区·期中)成长是一场美丽的蜕变。我们在经历中比较，在观察中 感悟。某英语报社正在举办以“Growth in My Eyes”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历，写一篇不少于80 词的英语短文进行投稿。 要求： (1)讲述一次让你感受到“变化”或“不同”的经历； 9/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (2)表达你的感悟或感想； (3)文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。 (四) (25-26八上·吉林长春第二实验学校南湖校区·期中)学习是多维的，读书可以启智明理，旅游亦可以增闻 识趣，用脚步丈量世界，每一处风景都是生动的课堂，在实践中探索和收获成长。请你结合自己的实际经 历，谈谈你在一次旅游中的收获或感受。 写作要求： 1.内容可适当发挥，行文连贯： 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.不少于80词。 (五) (25-26八上·吉林延边自治州四校期中)书面表达 你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以Why should we protect wildlife animals??为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明 为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80词左右。 写作提示：1.为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中； 2.为什么保护野生动物很重要； 3.我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。 提示词语：wildlife((野生的)，endangered,.tiger,panda,destroy(破坏)，fur,take measures(采取措施)， 10/11 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 plant,tree,build a birdhouse 11/11 专题16 书面表达（话题+材料+书信+看图） （一） 【答案】范文： Dear Matt, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you about my National Day holiday. I went to Hangzhou with my family. We visited the West Lake—its scenery was really beautiful! We walked around the lake, took lots of photos, and tried local snacks. They were so delicious! I had a great time with my parents. The holiday was relaxing and fun, and I felt really happy to spend time with them. What about your recent days? Write to me soon! Yours, Li Hua （二） 【答案】例文 My Best Friend My best friend is Sally. She is tall and thin, and she wears glasses. She is outgoing and always ready to help others. Sally can run very fast, and she often wins races at school. She goes to bed early each night, so she always feels energetic in the morning. She is kind to everyone and makes people around her feel happy. I enjoy spending time with her, and I feel lucky to have such a friend. （三） 【答案】例文： Emma and Ela are twins, but they are different in many ways. Emma is taller and more outgoing than Ela. However, Ela is better at sports than Emma. Also, Ela gets better grades in school. Although they are twins, they both have their own strengths. （四） 【答案】例文： An Enjoyable Trip Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was a fantastic trip! We visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the long history and beautiful buildings. We also tried some traditional snacks like Beijing roast duck and tanghulu, which tasted delicious. I enjoyed the trip very much because it was not only fun but also educational. I learned a lot about Chinese culture. I hope to go there again someday. （五） 【答案】One possible version: Dear Simon, I want to have a birthday party. Can you help me to decorate my house? Please come at 9 this Saturday morning. Could you bring a pair of scissors and a brush? We can make a poster and some paper-cuts. Thank you for your help! Jim （六） 【答案】例文 Today I want to tell you something about Amur tigers. There are about 70 Amur tigers. Most of them are brown with black stripes. They live in the forests in the northeast of China. They like to live alone. Their food is other small animals. They can live about 15 years in the wild. But now, because the forests are cut down, Amur tigers are hunted, and their number is getting smaller and smaller. I think we should protect the forests and not hunt them. Let’s do something to help Amur tigers. （一） 【答案】例文 A True Friend in My Eyes A true friend is someone who is always loyal and supportive. In my eyes, a true friend not only shares happiness but also helps in difficult times. Last year, I failed an important exam and felt very upset. My friend Li Hua noticed this and spent the whole weekend helping me review the lessons. She explained the problems patiently and encouraged me. With her help, I improved a lot in the next exam. I think a true friend is like a shining star in the dark night. I’m lucky to have such a friend. （二） 【答案】例文 The Power of Plants Plants are very important to us. They provide food, medicine, and beauty. Today, I want to introduce bamboo to you. Bamboo is truly a surprise of nature. It grows in many parts of Asia, particularly in mountainous areas. I choose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. Some bamboo can grow over 90 cm in just a single day! Moreover, it can be used to make furniture, paper, and even clothing. An interesting fact is that bamboo can also clean the air. Let’s protect plants like bamboo. （三） 【答案】例文： Dear schoolmates, The Chinese sturgeon lives in the Yangtze River. It can live up to 40 years and grow to 5 meters long. Now they are in great danger, and the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller. We should protect them by keeping the river clean. Let’s take action together! Li Hua （四） 【答案】例文： My friend Friends are important in our lives because they bring us joy and support. My best friend is Li Hua, who is as outgoing as I am. We both love playing basketball and watching movies. However, I am better at math while he is better at English. Last month, I failed an exam and felt very sad. Li Hua noticed this and spent two hours helping me review the lessons. With his help, I passed the next exam. This made me realize that a true friend is always there when you need help. I cherish our friendship very much. （五） 【答案】例文 Home, Sweet Home I’m Sandy. I live in a house in the countryside. There are some trees and flowers around my house. There are four people in my family. They’re my parents, my sister and me. We always help and get on well with each other. I’m happy I have a good family. I will try my best to do more housework and farm work. I’m sure my home will be better and better. （六） 【答案】范文： My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job. My dream is to become an English teacher in the future. I think teaching is a meaningful job. As an English teacher, I could not only help students learn a useful language but also share different cultures with them. When I see my students make progress, I will feel very proud and happy. To achieve my dream, I will study harder, especially in English. I will read more English books and practice speaking every day. I believe that with great efforts, my dream will come true one day. （七） 【答案】例文： Hello everyone! I’d like to share how to cook Tomato and Egg Stir-fry, a popular Chinese home-style dish. You need two tomatoes, two eggs, some oil, salt, and sugar. First, crack the eggs into a bowl and beat them. Next, stir-fry the eggs until they are cooked and set them aside. Then, cut the tomatoes into small pieces and cook them in the pan until soft. After that, add the eggs back to the pan, mix everything together, and season with salt and sugar. Finally, serve it hot with rice. It is delicious and easy to make! （八） 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, We are having a class party this Sunday. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and then go hiking together. During the trip, we’ll enjoy delicious food and play some fun games. It would be great if you could join us! Please let me know before Saturday if you can come. Yours, Li Hua （九） 【答案】范文 Should Friends Be Similar or Different? There’s a saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” I think friends can be both similar and different. My friend Tom and I are similar. We both enjoy sports, especially basketball, and often play together. This makes our friendship stronger. But my friend Lucy is different. She’s very outgoing and loves new things. Her being different has encouraged me to try new stuff too. In my view, whether friends are alike or not, the key is that they support each other. With such friends, we can grow together. （十） 【答案】例文 The panda is my favourite animal. It is also one of the most popular animals in China. Pandas are black and white animals with round bodies. They look really cute. They like to eat bamboo and live in bamboo forests. They spend most of their time eating and resting. Pandas are loved by people all over the world. However, they are in danger. We should protect their living environment and plant more bamboo to help them. I hope more and more people can come to China and see this interesting animal. （一） 【答案】 An Amazing Animal My favorite animal is the panda. Its name is "Bamboo". It lives in the mountains of Sichuan, China. I chose it because it looks very cute and is a national treasure of China. There are many interesting facts about pandas. They eat bamboo for about 12 hours a day. Although they are big, they can climb trees very well. Their black and white fur helps them hide in the forests. Sadly, there are not many pandas left in the world, so we must protect them. I think pandas are amazing animals and our good friends. （二） 【答案】例文 Last summer, I went to a beautiful beach with my family. The weather was perfect, with blue skies and warm sunshine. We built sandcastles, swam in the clear water, and took many photos. At night, we sat on the beach and watched the twinkling stars that made us feel so peaceful. This trip not only helped me forget about school stress but also brought my family closer. It made me feel relaxed and happy. I hope to visit the beach again next year. （三） 【答案】范文： I used to be afraid of speaking in front of the class. Last term, our English teacher asked everyone to give a short speech. I was very nervous but prepared carefully. When I finished my speech, my classmates gave me warm applause. At that moment, I realized I had overcome my fear. This experience taught me that growth often happens when we step out of our comfort zone. Now I understand that courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to face it. （四） 【答案】例文 Last summer, I visited the Great Wall with my family. It was an impressive trip. The wall was long and scenic. I learned a lot from it. I saw how strong and smart ancient Chinese people were. They built the wall without modern machines. I also met some friendly foreigners there. We talked in simple English. I felt proud to share Chinese culture with them. This trip taught me that traveling is a good way to learn history and practice English. I will never forget this experience. （五） 【答案】 Why should we protect wildlife animals? Do you know any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live. We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题16 书面表达（话题+材料+书信+看图） （一） （25-26八上·吉林长春朝阳·期中） 假设你是李华，你的笔友Matt想了解你刚刚过去的国庆假期(National Day holiday)。请根据以下要点，用英文给他写一封信。不少于40词。 要点： 1.你去了哪里或做了什么？ 2.你和谁一起？感觉如何？ 要求： 1.内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.注意使用一般过去时。 Dear Matt, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Matt, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you about my National Day holiday. I went to Hangzhou with my family. We visited the West Lake—its scenery was really beautiful! We walked around the lake, took lots of photos, and tried local snacks. They were so delicious! I had a great time with my parents. The holiday was relaxing and fun, and I felt really happy to spend time with them. What about your recent days? Write to me soon! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作内容需包含地点、活动内容、参与人员及感受；语句通顺、无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表达问候并切入主题——介绍国庆假期； 第二步：具体介绍去了哪里、做了什么、和谁一起去的、感觉如何； 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of许多 ②have a great time玩得开心 ③spend time with sb和某人共度时光 [高分句型] ①I’m writing to tell you about my National Day holiday.（动词不定式表目的） （二） （25-26八上·吉林松花江中学·期中）在英语课堂上，老师让大家用英语介绍一下自己的好朋友。请根据以下导图和要求，以“My Best Friend”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最好的朋友。 要求：1. 参考导图提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数：70—80。 My Best Friend ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Best Friend My best friend is Sally. She is tall and thin, and she wears glasses. She is outgoing and always ready to help others. Sally can run very fast, and she often wins races at school. She goes to bed early each night, so she always feels energetic in the morning. She is kind to everyone and makes people around her feel happy. I enjoy spending time with her, and I feel lucky to have such a friend. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍好朋友，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍好朋友的外貌和性格； 第二步，介绍其特长及习惯； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①energetic精力充沛的 ②go to bed early早睡 ③be kind to善待 [高分句型] ①She goes to bed early each night, so she always feels energetic in the morning. (so连接的并列句) ②I enjoy spending time with her, and I feel lucky to have such a friend. (and连接的并列句) （三） （25-26八上·吉林长春九台·期中）埃玛 (Emma) 和埃拉 (Ela) 是双胞胎，然而她们在很多方面存在差异。请根据以下要点提示，描述一下她们的不同之处。要点提示： 1. 埃玛比埃拉高； 2. 埃玛比埃拉外向； 3. 埃拉比埃玛更擅长运动； 4. 埃拉的成绩比埃玛好。 要求：要点齐全，语句通顺，不少于40词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Emma and Ela are twins, but they are different in many ways. Emma is taller and more outgoing than Ela. However, Ela is better at sports than Emma. Also, Ela gets better grades in school. Although they are twins, they both have their own strengths. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据要点描述双胞胎的不同之处，注意使用比较级。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山点明她们是双胞胎但存在差异。 第二步：依次对比她们的身高、性格、运动能力和成绩。 第三步：总结她们各有长处，使内容更完整。 [亮点词汇] ①in many ways在许多方面 ②be better at更擅长 ③get better grades取得更好的成绩 [高分句型] ①Although they are twins, they both have their own strengths. (although引导让步状语从句) ②Emma is taller and more outgoing than Ela. (比较级结构) （四） （25-26八上·吉林长春九台·期中）旅游让我们的生活多姿多彩。学校英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为题征文。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向该英文报投稿。 内容提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. What do you think of the trip? 要求：1. 包含所有提示的内容，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右。 An Enjoyable Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Enjoyable Trip Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was a fantastic trip! We visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the long history and beautiful buildings. We also tried some traditional snacks like Beijing roast duck and tanghulu, which tasted delicious. I enjoyed the trip very much because it was not only fun but also educational. I learned a lot about Chinese culture. I hope to go there again someday. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅行的目的地和同行的人； 第二步，介绍旅行中的活动； 第三步， 表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②be amazed by惊叹于 ③educational有教育意义的 [高分句型] ①I enjoyed the trip very much because it was not only fun but also educational. (“not only...but also...”并列结构) ②We also tried some traditional snacks like Beijing roast duck and tanghulu, which tasted delicious. (定语从句) （五） （25-26八上·吉林长春南关·期中）Jim想举办一场生日派对，想要好朋友来帮忙装饰屋子。假如你是Jim，请给你的好友Simon写一封求助信。 要点：周六早晨9点到我家：带一副剪刀和一个刷子；做一张海报：做一些剪纸。 要求：字迹工整，语法正确，要点齐全，简练得体，不少于 40词。 Dear Simon, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jim 【答案】One possible version: Dear Simon, I want to have a birthday party. Can you help me to decorate my house? Please come at 9 this Saturday morning. Could you bring a pair of scissors and a brush? We can make a poster and some paper-cuts. Thank you for your help! Jim 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为求助信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，即请求Simon帮忙装饰屋子，并明确时间、地点和需要带的工具，同时适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出想要举办生日派对，并请求Simon帮忙装饰屋子； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。明确告诉Simon到达的时间、地点以及需要带的工具，同时提出具体要做的事情； 第三步，书写结语。对Simon的帮助表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①have a birthday party举办生日派对 ②decorate my house装饰我的屋子 ③a pair of scissors一副剪刀 ④make a poster做一张海报 ⑤paper-cuts剪纸 [高分句型] ①Could you bring a pair of scissors and a brush?（Could you do sth.?句型，用于礼貌地提出请求） ②Thank you for your help!（Thank you for sth.句型，用于表示感谢） （六） （25-26八上·吉林蛟河·期中）根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，向外国人介绍东北虎。 数量：70 只左右 外貌：大部分是棕色，带有黑色的花纹(stripes) 居住地：中国东北的森林里 食物：其他小动物 行为：喜欢独居 寿命：野外一般能活15年左右 现状：由于森林被砍伐，东北虎被 捕杀，数量越来越少 你的看法…… 写作要求： 1. 层次清晰，语言流畅，包含全部要点，不逐字翻译，可适当发挥。 2. 词数 80—90 词左右。书写规范，卷面整洁。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Today I want to tell you something about Amur tigers. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Today I want to tell you something about Amur tigers. There are about 70 Amur tigers. Most of them are brown with black stripes. They live in the forests in the northeast of China. They like to live alone. Their food is other small animals. They can live about 15 years in the wild. But now, because the forests are cut down, Amur tigers are hunted, and their number is getting smaller and smaller. I think we should protect the forests and not hunt them. Let’s do something to help Amur tigers. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，如东北虎的现状描述及个人看法，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，即介绍东北虎； 第二步：分别从数量、外貌、居住地、食物、行为、寿命等角度，列举东北虎的相关信息，并适当阐述现状和原因； 第三步：书写结语，发出保护东北虎的号召。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍伐 ②get smaller and smaller变得越来越少 [高分句型] ①But now, because the forests are cut down, Amur tigers are hunted, and their number is getting smaller and smaller.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I think we should protect the forests and not hunt them.（宾语从句） （一） （25-26八上·吉林长春朝阳·期中）真正的朋友是我们一生的财富。某英文杂志社正举办以“A True Friend in My Eyes”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，分享你对于“真正朋友”的理解，并讲述一个你与朋友之间体现“真正友谊”的小故事。不少于80词。 要点：(1) 观点明确，事例具体； (2) 结构清晰，语句通顺； (3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A True Friend in My Eyes A true friend is someone who is always loyal and supportive. In my eyes, a true friend not only shares happiness but also helps in difficult times. Last year, I failed an important exam and felt very upset. My friend Li Hua noticed this and spent the whole weekend helping me review the lessons. She explained the problems patiently and encouraged me. With her help, I improved a lot in the next exam. I think a true friend is like a shining star in the dark night. I’m lucky to have such a friend. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确观点——真正朋友是忠诚、支持你的人； 第二步，用具体事例体现友谊（考试失败后朋友帮助复习）； 第三步，总结感受，强调朋友的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③shining star闪耀的星星 [高分句型] A true friend is someone who is always loyal and supportive.（who引导的定语从句） （二） （25-26八上·吉林松原前郭·期中）某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿。介绍一种植物，并说说你为什么要选择这种植物。 提示： 1. What is its name? 2. Where does it grow? 3. Why did you choose it? 4. What are some interesting facts about it? 要求： 1. 70—80词。已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 The Power of Plants Plants are very important to us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Power of Plants Plants are very important to us. They provide food, medicine, and beauty. Today, I want to introduce bamboo to you. Bamboo is truly a surprise of nature. It grows in many parts of Asia, particularly in mountainous areas. I choose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. Some bamboo can grow over 90 cm in just a single day! Moreover, it can be used to make furniture, paper, and even clothing. An interesting fact is that bamboo can also clean the air. Let’s protect plants like bamboo. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖植物名称、生长地、选择原因和有趣事实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确介绍植物名称； 第二步，介绍这种植物的生长环境、选择这种植物的原因及一些关于这种植物的事实； 第三步，呼吁保护植物。 [亮点词汇] ①provide提供 ②particularly特别地 ③be used to被用来…… [高分句型] I chose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. (because引导的原因状语从句) （三） （25-26八上·吉林长春第八十七中学·期中）学校微信公众号正在征文，以下是极危动物中华鲟 (Chinese sturgeon) 的信息，请你作为学生代表根据以下信息介绍中华鲟的现状，呼吁大家保护濒危动物，用英语写一封倡议书。向学校投稿。 要点：1. 中华鲟生活在中国的扬子江 (the Yangtze River) 里，能活到40岁，体长可达5米。 2. 现在它们正处于濒危/危险的状态，它们的数量变得越来越少。 3. 请提出1-2条保护中华鲟的建议。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体；40词左右。 Dear schoolmates, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear schoolmates, The Chinese sturgeon lives in the Yangtze River. It can live up to 40 years and grow to 5 meters long. Now they are in great danger, and the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller. We should protect them by keeping the river clean. Let’s take action together! Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已明确突出“保护中华鲟”的核心倡议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍中华鲟的生存环境、寿命及体型等基本特征； 第二步，再说明中华鲟面临的濒危现状，进而提出具体保护措施，并发出共同行动的倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①live in生活在 ②live up to寿命长达 [高分句型] ①It can live up to 40 years and grow to 5 meters long. (and并列两个谓语动词) ②We should protect them by keeping the river clean. (by + 动名词短语作方式状语) （四） （25-26八上·吉林昌邑·期中）朋友是每个人生活中不可或缺的人。请以My friend为题，介绍你的一位好朋友。 内容提示： 1. 说明朋友对你的重要性； 2. 比较你与一位好朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处； 3. 通过你们之间发生过的一件事说明你为什么喜欢和他（她）做朋友。 写作要求： 1. 必须包括所有内容提示要点，需适当发挥。 2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 3. 条理清晰，语句流畅，前后连贯。 4. 书写工整、规范，90-100个词。 My friend __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My friend Friends are important in our lives because they bring us joy and support. My best friend is Li Hua, who is as outgoing as I am. We both love playing basketball and watching movies. However, I am better at math while he is better at English. Last month, I failed an exam and felt very sad. Li Hua noticed this and spent two hours helping me review the lessons. With his help, I passed the next exam. This made me realize that a true friend is always there when you need help. I cherish our friendship very much. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“朋友的重要”来引出重点介绍的对象； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“性格、爱好、擅长科目”几个方面比较“我”与好朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处，并通过一件事情说明为什么喜欢和他做朋友； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我”对友谊的珍视。 [亮点词汇] ①be important to 对……重要 ②be good at 擅长 ③notice 注意到 ④cherish 珍视 [高分句型] ①Friends are important in our lives because they bring us joy and support.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②This made me realize that a true friend is always there when you need help.（that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句） （五） （25-26八上·吉林白山·期中）英文中有句谚语“There’s no place like home.”。假如你是Sandy，请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。 写作要点：(1)你家的环境； (2)你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的； (3)为了让你的家更加美好，你打算…… 要求：(1)词数60—70之间； (2)短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； (3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。 Home, Sweet Home ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Home, Sweet Home I’m Sandy. I live in a house in the countryside. There are some trees and flowers around my house. There are four people in my family. They’re my parents, my sister and me. We always help and get on well with each other. I’m happy I have a good family. I will try my best to do more housework and farm work. I’m sure my home will be better and better. 【解析】 [总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：本文写作需要围绕“温馨的家”展开，涵盖居住环境、家庭成员、家庭氛围及个人决心，考生应注意突出“家庭和睦、家园美好”的核心，适当补充环境细节，确保不遗漏任何要点。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。以自我介绍“我是Sandy”开篇，点明居住环境，呼应文章标题“温馨的家”，引出对家庭的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述家庭情况。先说明家庭成员；再描述家庭氛围，体现家庭的“温馨”； 第三步，书写结语。表达“拥有美好家庭很幸福”的感受，立下“努力多做家务和农活”的决心，展望“家园会越来越好”，升华对家的情感。 [亮点词汇］ ①in the countryside在乡下 ②around the house房子周围 ③get on well with与……相处融洽 ④try one’s best尽某人最大努力 ⑤do housework做家务 ⑥farm work农活 ⑦better and better越来越好 [高分句型］ ①There are some trees and flowers around my house.（there be句型） ②I’m sure my home will be better and better.（宾语从句） （六） （25-26八上·吉林长春外国语学校·期中）每个人都有自己梦想的职业。请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇短文，描述你理想的工作、说明理由以及打算如何实现梦想。 要求：书写工整，卷面整洁，不少于 80词，不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job. My dream is to become an English teacher in the future. I think teaching is a meaningful job. As an English teacher, I could not only help students learn a useful language but also share different cultures with them. When I see my students make progress, I will feel very proud and happy. To achieve my dream, I will study harder, especially in English. I will read more English books and practice speaking every day. I believe that with great efforts, my dream will come true one day. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：需描述理想职业、说明理由并阐述实现途径。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山提出理想职业； 第二步，阐述选择该职业的理由； 第三步，说明实现梦想的具体计划。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future将来 ②not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ③make progress取得进步 ④come true实现 [高分句型] ①I think teaching is a meaningful job. (动名词作主语) ②I believe that with great efforts, my dream will come true one day. (宾语从句) （七） （25-26八上·吉林长春外国语学校·期中）假如你是李明，你受邀在线与海外友好学校的师生就“中国家常菜”这一主题进行交流分享。请你选择一道你拿手的菜肴，并加以介绍。 要求：1.说明制作这道菜所需的食材； 2.简述制作这道菜的步骤； 3.至少5句话，不少于40词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello everyone! I’d like to share how to cook Tomato and Egg Stir-fry, a popular Chinese home-style dish. You need two tomatoes, two eggs, some oil, salt, and sugar. First, crack the eggs into a bowl and beat them. Next, stir-fry the eggs until they are cooked and set them aside. Then, cut the tomatoes into small pieces and cook them in the pan until soft. After that, add the eggs back to the pan, mix everything together, and season with salt and sugar. Finally, serve it hot with rice. It is delicious and easy to make! 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头问候并引入主题； 第二步：分步说明食材和制作过程； 第三步：结尾强调特点并邀请尝试。 [亮点词汇] ①crack敲开 ②stir-fry翻炒 ③serve端上，呈上 [高分句型] It is delicious and easy to make!（运用了and连接的并列形容词作表语） （八） （25-26八上·吉林长春东北师范大学附属中学·期中）假如你是李华，你想邀请班里的交换生Jim来参加班级的聚会。请根据下面的要点和要求，用英语给他写一封不少于40词的邀请信。 要点：1. 时间地点：周日上午8:00在学校集合； 2. 活动：徒步，享受美食，玩游戏； 3. 周六之前回复。 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, We are having a class party this Sunday. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and then go hiking together. During the trip, we’ll enjoy delicious food and play some fun games. It would be great if you could join us! Please let me know before Saturday if you can come. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需包含所有要点，语言简洁得体。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接说明写信目的； 第二步，清晰交代活动时间地点； 第三步，简要介绍活动内容； 第四步，礼貌提出回复要求。 [亮点词汇] ①school gate校门口 ②go hiking徒步旅行 ③delicious food美食 [高分句型] ①It would be great if you could join us! (虚拟语气表示委婉邀请) ②Please let me know before Saturday if you can come. (条件状语从句) （九） （25-26八上·吉林长春南关·期中）学校英语报社开展以“Should Friends Be Similar or Different?”为题的征文活动。请结合你的实际情况，谈谈你的观点。 要点：1. Show your opinion. 2. Talk about your friends. 要求：1.语言通顺、语法准确、内容完整、不少于80词； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Should Friends Be Similar or Different? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Should Friends Be Similar or Different? There’s a saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” I think friends can be both similar and different. My friend Tom and I are similar. We both enjoy sports, especially basketball, and often play together. This makes our friendship stronger. But my friend Lucy is different. She’s very outgoing and loves new things. Her being different has encouraged me to try new stuff too. In my view, whether friends are alike or not, the key is that they support each other. With such friends, we can grow together. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：明确表达观点，结合朋友相似与不同举例，最后总结看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明观点，朋友既可以有相似也可以有不同； 第二步，举例说明相似朋友（都爱运动）和不同朋友（性格外向爱尝试新事物）； 第三步，总结观点，朋友间相互支持是关键，能共同成长。 [亮点词汇] ①in need需要 ②be similar相似 ③encourage鼓励 [高分句型] Her being different has encouraged me to try new stuff too.（动名词作主语） （十） （25-26八上·吉林松原长岭三校·期中）请以“My Favourite Animal”为题写一篇英语作文，介绍一下你最喜欢的动物。 要求： 1. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 2. 语言流畅，层次清晰，至少使用一次最高级的表达方式，内容可以适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名； 4. 词数不少于80。 My Favourite Animal _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The panda is my favourite animal. It is also one of the most popular animals in China. Pandas are black and white animals with round bodies. They look really cute. They like to eat bamboo and live in bamboo forests. They spend most of their time eating and resting. Pandas are loved by people all over the world. However, they are in danger. We should protect their living environment and plant more bamboo to help them. I hope more and more people can come to China and see this interesting animal. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：根据题目要求描述最喜欢的动物，语言简洁流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图，介绍自己最喜欢的动物； 第二步：描述动物外貌特征和习性； 第三步：总结全文，并发出呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①popular受欢迎的 ②in danger处于危险之中 ③living environment生存环境 [高分句型] I hope more and more people can come to China and see this interesting animal. (省略that的宾语从句) （一） （25-26八上·吉林松原前郭尔罗斯蒙古自治县三校·期中）动物是人类的朋友，也是人类的助手。请结合下面的问题，用英文写一篇名为“An Amazing Animal”的小短文。 (1)What is its name? (2) Where does it live? (3) Why did you choose it? (4) What are some interesting facts about it? 要求： 1.包含以上所有的信息， 可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Amazing Animal My favorite animal is the panda. Its name is "Bamboo". It lives in the mountains of Sichuan, China. I chose it because it looks very cute and is a national treasure of China. There are many interesting facts about pandas. They eat bamboo for about 12 hours a day. Although they are big, they can climb trees very well. Their black and white fur helps them hide in the forests. Sadly, there are not many pandas left in the world, so we must protect them. I think pandas are amazing animals and our good friends. 【解析】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：喜爱的动物及原因，有趣的事实/特点，保护意识 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，具体日期或地名 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：引出最喜欢的动物是熊猫，说明选择它的原因 中间段一：介绍有趣事实 中间段二：表达保护意识 结尾段：表达对熊猫的正面评价 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜爱的动物及原因because it looks very cute/ round face, black eye patches… 要点二：有趣的事实/特点eat bamboo for about 12 hours/ have a digestive system not well suited for bamboo… 要点三：保护意识we must protect them/ nature reserves and breeding programs… （二） （25-26八上·吉林长春净月·期中）度假是一种很好的放松方式，它可以让人远离压力，沉浸在美丽的自然风景中，或者体验新的文化和活动，拉近家人、朋友之间的距离。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈谈你的一段度假经历和感受。 要求：1. 字迹清晰美观，语句连贯，语法准确。 2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last summer, I went to a beautiful beach with my family. The weather was perfect, with blue skies and warm sunshine. We built sandcastles, swam in the clear water, and took many photos. At night, we sat on the beach and watched the twinkling stars that made us feel so peaceful. This trip not only helped me forget about school stress but also brought my family closer. It made me feel relaxed and happy. I hope to visit the beach again next year. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时描述经历，一般现在时表达感受； ③提示：需包含具体活动、感受及意义。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山交代度假时间、地点和人物； 第二步：详细描述度假活动； 第三步：总结度假的放松效果和情感意义。 [亮点词汇] ①peaceful宁静的 ②brought…closer拉近与……之间的距离 ③relaxed放松的 [高分句型] ①At night, we sat on the beach and watched the twinkling stars that made us feel so peaceful. (that引导的定语从句) ②This trip not only helped me forget about school stress but also brought my family closer. (not only…but also…并列结构) （三） （25-26八上·吉林长春汽车经济技术开发区·期中）成长是一场美丽的蜕变。我们在经历中比较，在观察中感悟。某英语报社正在举办以“Growth in My Eyes”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文进行投稿。 要求： （1）讲述一次让你感受到“变化”或“不同”的经历； （2）表达你的感悟或感想； （3）文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： I used to be afraid of speaking in front of the class. Last term, our English teacher asked everyone to give a short speech. I was very nervous but prepared carefully. When I finished my speech, my classmates gave me warm applause. At that moment, I realized I had overcome my fear. This experience taught me that growth often happens when we step out of our comfort zone. Now I understand that courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to face it. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：写作需包含一次带来变化的经历及个人感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述过去的经历和挑战； 第二步，叙述经历的关键过程和结果； 第三步，阐述从中获得的成长感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常 ②in front of在……面前 ③step out of走出 ④comfort zone舒适区 [高分句型] ①I realized I had overcome my fear. (宾语从句，过去完成时) ②Now I understand that courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to face it. (宾语从句，not...but...结构) （四） （25-26八上·吉林长春第二实验学校南湖校区·期中）学习是多维的，读书可以启智明理，旅游亦可以增闻识趣，用脚步丈量世界，每一处风景都是生动的课堂，在实践中探索和收获成长。请你结合自己的实际经历，谈谈你在一次旅游中的收获或感受。 写作要求： 1. 内容可适当发挥，行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3. 不少于80词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last summer, I visited the Great Wall with my family. It was an impressive trip. The wall was long and scenic. I learned a lot from it. I saw how strong and smart ancient Chinese people were. They built the wall without modern machines. I also met some friendly foreigners there. We talked in simple English. I felt proud to share Chinese culture with them. This trip taught me that traveling is a good way to learn history and practice English. I will never forget this experience. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干进行写作，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、引入经历（明确时间、地点、人物）； 第二步、描述所见所感； 第三步、总结收获。 [亮点词汇] ①impressive令人印象深刻的 ②felt proud感到自豪 ③share…with…和……分享…… [高分句型] I saw how strong and smart ancient Chinese people were. (how引导的宾语从句) （五） （25-26八上·吉林延边自治州四校·期中）书面表达 你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗? 请以Why should we protect wildlife animals?为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80 词左右。 写作提示: 1.为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中; 2.为什么保护野生动物很重要; 3.我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。 提示词语: wildlife(野生的) ,endangered, tiger, panda, destroy(破坏),fur, take measures(采取措施), plant, tree, build a birdhouse ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Why should we protect wildlife animals? Do you know any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live. We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful. 【解析】这是一篇话题作文，以Why should we protect wildlife animals?为题,写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。 【解析】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，Many tigers are killed by……，And there are……，We must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了世界上有很多野生动物处于危险之中，接下来介绍为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中以及为什么保护野生动物很重要，最后介绍我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。此处such as, cut down, want to do sth, take measures to do sth, keep…from…,stop…from…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $