专题12 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）六年级英语上学期

专题12 书面表达 （一） 【参考范文】 I have a happy family I have a happy family. It’s not a big family but a happy one. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my little sister and I. My parents both work hard. At weekends, we often go on a picnic in the park. My mother and my sister sometimes go shopping in the supermarket. My father and I usually go cycling together if it’s fine. We are always happy because we love each other. （二） 【参考范文】： In my family, we all share chores to keep our home tidy. My father is responsible for mowing the lawn and fixing things around the house. My mother takes care of cooking and cleaning the kitchen. As for me, I do the dishes and take out the trash. Sharing chores makes me feel like I’m contributing to our family and learning important life skills. It also brings us closer together as we work as a team. （三） 【参考范文】 A special photo Let me introduce a special photo. We took it last summer on the school playground. In the photo, my class was standing in a circle, with big smiles on our faces. We were in the middle of a team-building game. That day, the sun was shining brightly, and we were all hot but having a great time. I chose this photo because it shows friendship in our class. This photo reminds me of those happy memories, and it makes me feel warm. （四） 【参考范文】 My School club I am in the Art Club. We have the club class every Friday afternoon in the art room. Right now, our teacher is teaching us how to draw flowers. My classmates and I are drawing beautiful pictures with colorful pencils. I feel very happy because I love drawing. It helps me relax after a busy week. I really enjoy my time in the Art Club. （一） 【参考范文】 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. We have 7 classes each school day. Classes start at 8:00 in the morning and finish at 4:30 in the afternoon. My favorite subject is science. We do fun experiments in class—last week we grew bean sprouts, which made me curious about how plants grow. My new school life is busy but wonderful. I’ve made friendly classmates, and the interesting lessons make every day full of joy. I really enjoy being here! I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua （二） 【参考范文】 My Family Celebration Right now, my family and I are celebrating the Spring Festival at home. We are having a big dinner together. My grandparents, parents and I are sitting around the table. We are eating dumplings and fish. They are delicious! After dinner, we will watch TV and set off fireworks. I feel very happy because we are together. I love my family. （三） 【参考范文】 My family will have a special dinner today. In the afternoon, my parents start to prepare the meal in the kitchen. My dad is cutting vegetables. My mom is cooking. When everything is ready, we sit around the table and enjoy the delicious food together. After dinner, I help my dad clean the dishes. I feel so warm and happy with my family. （四） 【参考范文1】 A special breakfast for my first day of school Today is my first day of school. The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. My dad is busy cooking delicious food in the kitchen. My little sister is sitting at the table, looking at the food with anticipation. My grandpa is smiling and saying “You can do it!” My mum is standing beside me, giving me a warm hug. I am standing there, feeling the love from the whole family. We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life. 【参考范文2】 My first day singing with the music club Today is my first day joining the music club. The photo shows our first practice. In the picture, Ross is playing the piano. Kate and Peter are playing the guitars. I am singing with a smile. Our teacher, Mr. Hu, is standing there, listening to us carefully. We are all enjoying the music moment. I feel excited and a bit nervous, but also very happy and welcomed. Being part of this club makes me feel joyful, and it’s a fantastic beginning. （五） 【参考范文】 Hi, I’m Panda053. I live near my school, so I can walk there easily. My school day starts at 8:00 am and ends at 4:30 pm. This term, I have subjects like Chinese, Math, English, and Art. We have various club activities, such as the music club and the science club. What I like most about my school is friendly teachers and classmates who make every day enjoyable. （六） 【参考范文】： The festival I like best is the Spring Festival. During this festival, people get together with their families, eat delicious food, and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Children also get lucky money from elders. I like it most because it makes me feel warm and happy. It is a special time for family love and joy. （一） 【参考范文】 My school day Hi, everyone. I’ll tell you about my school day. My school day starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. My favourite subject is English because it helps me talk with people from different countries. I often take part in basketball practice after class. It can help me make many friends. Though busy, my school day is always full of energy and happiness. （二） 【参考范文】 One day, my sister and I decided to make a special dinner for our parents. We went to the kitchen and washed the vegetables carefully. Then my sister cut them into small pieces, and I cooked them in a pan. After that, we put all the dishes on the table and waited for our parents. When they came home, they were very surprised and happy to see what we did. （三） 【参考范文】 I’m Wang Yiming. I’m from Shanghai, China. Our English class is very interesting. We learn new words by making word cards, like the one with “family”, “house”, and “home” on it. We also practice speaking English by talking with classmates in class. Sometimes we watch English cartoons and sing English songs. Hope these ways help me learn English well. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题12 书面表达 （一） （25-26六上·上海崇明·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I have a happy family”.（以“我有一个幸福的家庭”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions: 1. Who are in your family? 2. What jobs do your family members do? 3. How do you spend your weekend together? 4. Why do you think it is a happy family? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26六上·上海位育中学-11月·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Sharing chores in my family”. In our daily lives, every family member plays a role in keeping the home running smoothly. In Unit 2 we learn how to take family duties. Now please write about how your family share chores. Use vivid details to make your story interesting! 日常生活中，每个家庭成员都为家庭的运转贡献一份力。在第二单元中我们学习如何分担家庭责任。请写一写你家是如何分配家务的。用生动的细节让你的故事更有趣吧！ Suggested questions (提示问题): What chore(s) does each family member do? (Write about at least 3 members.) Do you share chores in your family? How do you feel about sharing chores in your family? What can you learn from sharing chores? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （25-26六上·上海黄浦民办立达中学·期中）Write at least forty words about the topic “A special photo”. 你所在的班级正在举行照片分享会，请向大家描述一张你的照片，并说明这张照片对你而言很特别的原因，将介绍词写下来。(要求：字数不少于40个单词，紧扣主题，语法正确、意思连贯，注意：短文中不得出现考生的信息） 以下问题供参考： 1) What is the photo about? 2) Why do you think it is a special photo? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （25-26六上·上海进才中学北校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My School club” according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇关于“My School club”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 初中生活已拉开帷幕，学校有各种丰富多彩的社团活动，你有参与其中吗？ 假设此时此刻，你正在参加社团课。请你写一写：你参加的是什么社团？你在什么时候、在哪里上社团课？在这节社团课上，你或者你的同学们正在做什么？你有什么感受？ 以下问题供参考： 1. What club do you join? 2. When and where do you attend the club? 3. What are you/ your club members doing? 4. How do you feel? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （一） （25-26六上·上海西延安中学·期中）假设你是六年级学生李华，写一封邮件给你的笔友David，介绍你在新学校的学校生活。邮件开头和结尾已给，但还必须包含以下内容： 1. 介绍学校的课程 (每天几节课、开始结束时间等)； 2. 你最喜欢的科目并说明原因； 3. 你对学校生活的感受。 (注意：照抄本卷语篇不得分) 要求： 1. 词数：不少于60词，标点符号不占格。可适当发挥，书写工整。 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校班级的名称。 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua （二） （25-26六上·上海浦东川沙·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My family celebration” according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇关于“我的家庭庆祝活动”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)(共10分) 同学，你经常有家庭庆祝活动吗？例如，庆祝生日、欢度春节(the Spring Festival)、中秋节(the Mid-Autumn Festival)等。假设此时此刻，你和家人正在进行一次家庭庆祝活动。你和谁在一起聚会？在哪聚会？正在庆祝什么？有哪些庆祝活动?你有什么样的感受？ 以下问题供参考： What are you celebrating? Who are you celebrating it with? Where are you? What are you doing? How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （25-26六上·上海交大二附中·期中）李明同学想做一个名为“A special dinner”的视频博客（Vlog）来记录他当天的生活。根据这些照片，帮他写个微视频故事，不少于6句话，开头已给。 My family will have a special dinner today... （注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （25-26六上·上海普陀·期中）假设你是Lisa，请从以下两张照片中挑选一张，分享至“Our Moments”共享博客，并详细介绍这张照片。介绍内容需涵盖：照片的主题、照片中所有人物的具体活动以及当时的心情。 My first day singing with the music club A special breakfast for my first day of school 根据所给情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文 (标点符号不占格) (注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Today is my first day... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （25-26六上·上海南闵行·期中）假设你是来自上海Sunshine Middle School的学生，网名为Panda053，你在TEEN-LAND论坛上看见有人发布关于校园生活的帖子，请你根据帖子的要求写一份回帖，字数不少于60字。（注意：短文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分） Topic: What is your school day like? Where do you live? What time does your school day start and end? What subjects do you have this term? Do you have club activities? What do you like most about your school? 5 answers                                                           Panda021          28 October _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （25-26六上·上海进才北校预初·期中）Write at least 50 words about the topic “The festival I like best” (以“我最喜欢的节日”为主题写一篇不少于50个词的短文) Suggested questions： 1. Which festival do you like best? 2. What do people do at that festival? 3. Why do you like that festival most? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （一） （25-26六上·上海建平中学西校·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school day”(以 “我学校生活中的一天” 为题目，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。 建议问题： 1. When does your school day start and end? 2. What is your favourite subject? Why? 3. What activity do you take part in? 4. How is your school day? 写作区域： My school day ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26六上·上海杨浦·期中）根据所给图片，写一篇至少五句话的短文，标点符号不占格。 You can begin like this: One day, my sister and I____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （25-26六上·上海虹口·期中）Write at least 50 words according to the given situation and pictures. (根据所给情境和图片，写一篇不少于50个词的回帖，标点符号不占格) 假如你是王一鸣，请根据所给照片，补充适当信息，完成回帖。(开头已给) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题12 书面表达 （一） （25-26六上·上海崇明·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I have a happy family”.（以“我有一个幸福的家庭”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions: 1. Who are in your family? 2. What jobs do your family members do? 3. How do you spend your weekend together? 4. Why do you think it is a happy family? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I have a happy family I have a happy family. It’s not a big family but a happy one. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my little sister and I. My parents both work hard. At weekends, we often go on a picnic in the park. My mother and my sister sometimes go shopping in the supermarket. My father and I usually go cycling together if it’s fine. We are always happy because we love each other. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，要介绍自己幸福的家庭； 第二步，介绍家庭成员信息、周末活动等； 第三步，表达对幸福家庭的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①go on a picnic去野餐 ②go cycling骑自行车 ③each other互相 [高分句型] ①There are four people in my family. (there be句型) ②We are always happy because we love each other. (原因状语从句) （二） （25-26六上·上海位育中学-11月·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Sharing chores in my family”. In our daily lives, every family member plays a role in keeping the home running smoothly. In Unit 2 we learn how to take family duties. Now please write about how your family share chores. Use vivid details to make your story interesting! 日常生活中，每个家庭成员都为家庭的运转贡献一份力。在第二单元中我们学习如何分担家庭责任。请写一写你家是如何分配家务的。用生动的细节让你的故事更有趣吧！ Suggested questions (提示问题): What chore(s) does each family member do? (Write about at least 3 members.) Do you share chores in your family? How do you feel about sharing chores in your family? What can you learn from sharing chores? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In my family, we all share chores to keep our home tidy. My father is responsible for mowing the lawn and fixing things around the house. My mother takes care of cooking and cleaning the kitchen. As for me, I do the dishes and take out the trash. Sharing chores makes me feel like I’m contributing to our family and learning important life skills. It also brings us closer together as we work as a team. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：需回答家庭成员的分工（至少3人）、是否分担家务、感受及学到的道理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。说明家庭分担家务的核心目的（保持家的整洁）； 第二步，具体分工。依次介绍父亲、母亲及自己的家务内容； 第三步，总结收获。阐述分担家务带来的个人感受与家庭影响。 [亮点词汇] ①share chores分担家务 ②be responsible for对……负责 ③take care of照顾；照料 ④as for至于 ⑤contribute to为……做贡献 [高分句型] ①In my family, we all share chores to keep our home tidy.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Sharing chores makes me feel like I’m contributing to our family and learning important life skills. （动名词短语作主语） ③It also brings us closer together as we work as a team.（as 引导时间状语从句） （三） （25-26六上·上海黄浦民办立达中学·期中）Write at least forty words about the topic “A special photo”. 你所在的班级正在举行照片分享会，请向大家描述一张你的照片，并说明这张照片对你而言很特别的原因，将介绍词写下来。(要求：字数不少于40个单词，紧扣主题，语法正确、意思连贯，注意：短文中不得出现考生的信息） 以下问题供参考： 1) What is the photo about? 2) Why do you think it is a special photo? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A special photo Let me introduce a special photo. We took it last summer on the school playground. In the photo, my class was standing in a circle, with big smiles on our faces. We were in the middle of a team-building game. That day, the sun was shining brightly, and we were all hot but having a great time. I chose this photo because it shows friendship in our class. This photo reminds me of those happy memories, and it makes me feel warm. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍这张特别照片的情况； 第二步，介绍认为它是一张特别的照片的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①in the middle of在……中间 ②have a great time玩得高兴 ③remind sb of sth提醒某人某事 [高分句型] I chose this photo because it shows friendship in our class.（because引导原因状语从句） （四） （25-26六上·上海进才中学北校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My School club” according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇关于“My School club”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 初中生活已拉开帷幕，学校有各种丰富多彩的社团活动，你有参与其中吗？ 假设此时此刻，你正在参加社团课。请你写一写：你参加的是什么社团？你在什么时候、在哪里上社团课？在这节社团课上，你或者你的同学们正在做什么？你有什么感受？ 以下问题供参考： 1. What club do you join? 2. When and where do you attend the club? 3. What are you/ your club members doing? 4. How do you feel? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My School club I am in the Art Club. We have the club class every Friday afternoon in the art room. Right now, our teacher is teaching us how to draw flowers. My classmates and I are drawing beautiful pictures with colorful pencils. I feel very happy because I love drawing. It helps me relax after a busy week. I really enjoy my time in the Art Club. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、确定社团类型； 第二步、介绍参加社团的时间、地点以及活动内容； 第三步、介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①Right now此刻；现在 ②draw pictures画画 ③love doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] I feel very happy because I love drawing.（because引导的原因状语从句） （一） （25-26六上·上海西延安中学·期中）假设你是六年级学生李华，写一封邮件给你的笔友David，介绍你在新学校的学校生活。邮件开头和结尾已给，但还必须包含以下内容： 1. 介绍学校的课程 (每天几节课、开始结束时间等)； 2. 你最喜欢的科目并说明原因； 3. 你对学校生活的感受。 (注意：照抄本卷语篇不得分) 要求： 1. 词数：不少于60词，标点符号不占格。可适当发挥，书写工整。 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校班级的名称。 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. We have 7 classes each school day. Classes start at 8:00 in the morning and finish at 4:30 in the afternoon. My favorite subject is science. We do fun experiments in class—last week we grew bean sprouts, which made me curious about how plants grow. My new school life is busy but wonderful. I’ve made friendly classmates, and the interesting lessons make every day full of joy. I really enjoy being here! I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”（介绍日常学校生活），辅以“一般过去时”（描述上周的实验）； ③提示：向笔友介绍新学校的课程安排、喜爱的科目及对校园生活的感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候笔友并点明写信目的（介绍学校生活）； 第二步，中间分三部分展开：介绍每日课程的节数与时间、说明最喜欢的科目及原因、分享对新学校生活的感受； 第三步，结尾表达期待对方回复的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①each school day每个上学日 ②experiment实验 ③curious好奇的 ④full of joy充满乐趣 [高分句型] ①We do fun experiments in class—last week we grew bean sprouts, which made me curious about how plants grow.（运用破折号补充具体事例，“which”引导的非限定性定语从句，丰富了句子层次，说明实验带来的影响）； ②My new school life is busy but wonderful.（用“but”体现转折关系，简洁点明校园生活的特点，使表达更生动） （二） （25-26六上·上海浦东川沙·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My family celebration” according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇关于“我的家庭庆祝活动”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)(共10分) 同学，你经常有家庭庆祝活动吗？例如，庆祝生日、欢度春节(the Spring Festival)、中秋节(the Mid-Autumn Festival)等。假设此时此刻，你和家人正在进行一次家庭庆祝活动。你和谁在一起聚会？在哪聚会？正在庆祝什么？有哪些庆祝活动?你有什么样的感受？ 以下问题供参考： What are you celebrating? Who are you celebrating it with? Where are you? What are you doing? How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Family Celebration Right now, my family and I are celebrating the Spring Festival at home. We are having a big dinner together. My grandparents, parents and I are sitting around the table. We are eating dumplings and fish. They are delicious! After dinner, we will watch TV and set off fireworks. I feel very happy because we are together. I love my family. 【解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，记录家人共度春节的场景，内容温馨具体，语气真挚，传递亲情温暖； ② 时态：以现在进行时为主，描述当下庆祝场景；用一般将来时提及后续活动，时态区分清晰，符合逻辑； ③ 提示：文章涵盖庆祝场景、家庭成员、饮食、后续计划、个人感受，信息完整，逻辑连贯，无真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明核心场景——全家在家庆祝春节，快速切入主题，营造温馨氛围； 第二步，分述当下庆祝细节：家庭成员围坐、享用的美食，再说明饭后计划，内容充实且有画面感； 第三步，表达团聚的幸福感与对家人的爱意，收束自然，升华情感。 [亮点词汇] ①eat dumplings吃饺子 ②watch TV看电视 ③set off fireworks放烟花 ④feel very happy感到很开心 [高分句型] ①Right now, my family and I are celebrating the Spring Festival at home.（使用现在进行时态） ②I feel very happy because we are together.（“because”引导原因状语从句） （三） （25-26六上·上海交大二附中·期中）李明同学想做一个名为“A special dinner”的视频博客（Vlog）来记录他当天的生活。根据这些照片，帮他写个微视频故事，不少于6句话，开头已给。 My family will have a special dinner today... （注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My family will have a special dinner today. In the afternoon, my parents start to prepare the meal in the kitchen. My dad is cutting vegetables. My mom is cooking. When everything is ready, we sit around the table and enjoy the delicious food together. After dinner, I help my dad clean the dishes. I feel so warm and happy with my family. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据照片顺序记叙事情的经过；语句通顺，无语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，具体介绍这顿特别的晚饭，包括饭前、饭中、饭后； 第二步，表达自己的感受——感觉温暖，且很开心。 [亮点词汇] ①start to do sth开始做某事 ②delicious food美味的食物 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①When everything is ready, we sit around the table and enjoy the delicious food together.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I feel so warm and happy with my family.（and连接并列的两个部分） （四） （25-26六上·上海普陀·期中）假设你是Lisa，请从以下两张照片中挑选一张，分享至“Our Moments”共享博客，并详细介绍这张照片。介绍内容需涵盖：照片的主题、照片中所有人物的具体活动以及当时的心情。 My first day singing with the music club A special breakfast for my first day of school 根据所给情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文 (标点符号不占格) (注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Today is my first day... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文1 A special breakfast for my first day of school Today is my first day of school. The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. My dad is busy cooking delicious food in the kitchen. My little sister is sitting at the table, looking at the food with anticipation. My grandpa is smiling and saying “You can do it!” My mum is standing beside me, giving me a warm hug. I am standing there, feeling the love from the whole family. We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life. 范文2 My first day singing with the music club Today is my first day joining the music club. The photo shows our first practice. In the picture, Ross is playing the piano. Kate and Peter are playing the guitars. I am singing with a smile. Our teacher, Mr. Hu, is standing there, listening to us carefully. We are all enjoying the music moment. I feel excited and a bit nervous, but also very happy and welcomed. Being part of this club makes me feel joyful, and it’s a fantastic beginning. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，可适当发挥，应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，点明时间与事件，引出照片内容； 第二步：描写细节，丰富画面，描述静态事物陈列和人物动作神态； 第三步：总结经历，表达当时的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①a special breakfast scene一个特别的早餐场景 ②cooking delicious food做美味的食物 ③is full of充满…… [高分句型] ①The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. (with作伴随状语) ②We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life. (as 引导的原因状语从句) （五） （25-26六上·上海南闵行·期中）假设你是来自上海Sunshine Middle School的学生，网名为Panda053，你在TEEN-LAND论坛上看见有人发布关于校园生活的帖子，请你根据帖子的要求写一份回帖，字数不少于60字。（注意：短文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分） Topic: What is your school day like? Where do you live? What time does your school day start and end? What subjects do you have this term? Do you have club activities? What do you like most about your school? 5 answers                                                           Panda021          28 October _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, I’m Panda053. I live near my school, so I can walk there easily. My school day starts at 8:00 am and ends at 4:30 pm. This term, I have subjects like Chinese, Math, English, and Art. We have various club activities, such as the music club and the science club. What I like most about my school is friendly teachers and classmates who make every day enjoyable. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的学校生活； 第二步，介绍自己住在哪里，学校的上课时间和下课时间，学习科目以及社团活动； 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢学校的老师和同学。 [亮点词汇] ①various 各种各样的 ②such as 例如 ③friendly 友好的 [高分句型] What I like most about my school is friendly teachers and classmates who make every day enjoyable. (what引导的主语从句和who引导的定语从句) （六） （25-26六上·上海进才北校预初·期中）Write at least 50 words about the topic “The festival I like best” (以“我最喜欢的节日”为主题写一篇不少于50个词的短文) Suggested questions： 1. Which festival do you like best? 2. What do people do at that festival? 3. Why do you like that festival most? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The festival I like best is the Spring Festival. During this festival, people get together with their families, eat delicious food, and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Children also get lucky money from elders. I like it most because it makes me feel warm and happy. It is a special time for family love and joy. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，主题为“我最喜欢的节日”； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的节日、人们在节日中的活动以及喜欢该节日的原因。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“我最喜欢的节日是春节”； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人们在春节中的活动，如与家人团聚、吃美食、看春晚、孩子们收压岁钱等”几个方面介绍春节的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。说明喜欢春节的原因，即它让自己感到温暖和快乐，是家庭爱和欢乐的特殊时刻。 [亮点词汇] ①get together with与……团聚 ②delicious food美食 ③lucky money压岁钱 ④family love and joy家庭爱和欢乐 [高分句型] ①I like it most because it makes me feel warm and happy.（because引导原因状语从句） （一） （25-26六上·上海建平中学西校·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school day”(以 “我学校生活中的一天” 为题目，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。 建议问题： 1. When does your school day start and end? 2. What is your favourite subject? Why? 3. What activity do you take part in? 4. How is your school day? 写作区域： My school day ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My school day Hi, everyone. I’ll tell you about my school day. My school day starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. My favourite subject is English because it helps me talk with people from different countries. I often take part in basketball practice after class. It can help me make many friends. Though busy, my school day is always full of energy and happiness. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据提示围绕四个问题展开描述，行文连贯，注意词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，引出文章主题。 第二步：用连接词衔接，依次说明上学和放学时间，最喜欢的科目及原因，参与的活动。 第三步：总结全文，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①always full of energy总是充满能量 ②different不同的 ③after class课后 [高分句型] ①My favourite subject is English because it helps me...(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) ②Though busy, my school day is always full of energy and happiness.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句) （二） （25-26六上·上海杨浦·期中）根据所给图片，写一篇至少五句话的短文，标点符号不占格。 You can begin like this: One day, my sister and I____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One day, my sister and I decided to make a special dinner for our parents. We went to the kitchen and washed the vegetables carefully. Then my sister cut them into small pieces, and I cooked them in a pan. After that, we put all the dishes on the table and waited for our parents. When they came home, they were very surprised and happy to see what we did. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据图片，描述事件经过和结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do决定做某事 ②wait for等待 [高分句型] ①Then my sister cut them into small pieces, and I cooked them in a pan.（and连接的并列句） ②When they came home, they were very surprised and happy to see what we did.（时间状语从句） （三） （25-26六上·上海虹口·期中）Write at least 50 words according to the given situation and pictures. (根据所给情境和图片，写一篇不少于50个词的回帖，标点符号不占格) 假如你是王一鸣，请根据所给照片，补充适当信息，完成回帖。(开头已给) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Wang Yiming. I’m from Shanghai, China. Our English class is very interesting. We learn new words by making word cards, like the one with “family”, “house”, and “home” on it. We also practice speaking English by talking with classmates in class. Sometimes we watch English cartoons and sing English songs. Hope these ways help me learn English well. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇回帖，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏学习英语的方法等要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己来自哪里； 第二步：具体介绍英语课的情况，包括学习新单词的方法、练习口语的方法以及观看英语动画片和唱英文歌等活动； 第三步：总结全文，希望这些方法能帮助自己学好英语。 [亮点词汇] ①learn new words学新单词 ②by making word cards通过制作单词卡片 ③practice speaking English练习说英语 ④talk with classmates与同学交谈 ⑤watch English cartoons看英语动画片 [高分句型] ①We learn new words by making word cards, like the one with “family”, “house”, and “home” on it. (by+动名词短语，表示学习新单词的方式，like...on it作举例说明，明确制作单词卡片的具体内容) ②Sometimes we watch English cartoons and sing English songs to practice our English. (and连接同一主语的两个动作，to practice our English作目的状语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $