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专题09 应用文写作
(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南常德汉寿县第一中学-11月·期中)假定你是李华,给你开网店的英国朋友Peter寄去了一包自家产的有机(organic)绿茶,并附有一份该茶的说明。请你给Peter发封邮件,要点如下:
1)请他品茶;
2)说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等);
3)请他帮忙代卖该茶。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.
Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside which is a description for it. Our family plant tea and we make the tea product by ourselves. Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins. You can taste it and will find how nice it is. Meanwhile, I'd like to ask you a favor. I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop. Thank you for your help!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给开网店的英国朋友Peter,告诉他你寄去了一包自家产的有机绿茶,请他品尝,告知他该茶的特点并帮忙代卖该茶。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 请他品茶;
2. 说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等);
3. 请他帮忙代卖该茶。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
post sth. to sb.;be rich in sth.;ask sb. a favor;look forward to sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you,
2. Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins.
3. I'd like to ask you a favor.
4. Looking forward to your reply.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如inside which is a description for it这句话中用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句,如I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop这句话中用了if引导的宾语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如post sth. to sb.,be rich in sth.,ask sb. a favor等,为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南长沙部分学校·期中)假定你是李华,你发现汉语爱好者Tony在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问(adviser)。请你给Tony写一封应征邮件,要点如下:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势(性格、语言等)。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’ve learned from your post that you are looking for an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. First of all, as an outgoing, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies. Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently. More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs.
I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生响应Tony招募汉语学习顾问的需求,推荐自己并阐述个人优势。
【解析】
1.词汇积累:
帮助:help → assist
外向的:outgoing → extroverted
流利地:fluently → smoothly
重要地:importantly → significantly
2.句式拓展:
原句:I’ve learned from your post that you are looking for an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself.
拓展句:Having learned from your post that you are seeking an adviser to assist you in learning Chinese, I’m writing to introduce myself.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】I’ve learned from your post that you are looking for an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句)
(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南衡阳·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校计划在校园文化墙上设置诗歌专栏,特向同学们征集他们最喜爱的诗歌,此事由学生会负责。请给你校交换生 Alex 写一封邮件邀请他参加该活动,内容包括:
(1)介绍该活动;
(2)邀请他参加。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:专栏 column
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to inform you that our school is planning to set up a poetry column on the campus culture wall to share beautiful poems and inspire a love for literature among students. We are now collecting everyone’s favorite poems—whether original or classic, Chinese or English—along with a few sentences explaining why they are meaningful.
As an exchange student with diverse cultural experiences, you must have unique insights or favorite poems to share. We would be delighted if you could take part in this activity. Your contribution will surely enrich our column and help students appreciate poetry from different perspectives.
We would be thrilled to have you join us! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Alex 写一封邮件邀请,邀请他参加学校计划设立的诗歌专栏活动,并说明活动的目的和参与方式。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
计划:plan→intend
建立:set up→establish
收集:collect→gather
独特的:unique→distinctive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As an exchange student with diverse cultural experiences, you must have unique insights or favorite poems to share.
拓展句:Since you are an exchange student with diverse cultural experiences, you must have unique insights or favorite poems to share.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We are now collecting everyone’s favorite poems—whether original or classic, Chinese or English—along with a few sentences explaining why they are meaningful.(运用了现在进行时,介词短语作状语以及 why引导宾语从句的结构 )
【高分句型2】 We would be delighted if you could take part in this activity. (运用了if引导状语从句的结构)
(四)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘一名校·期中)假定你是李华,你校上周举办了“中国传统文化体验日”活动。请你写篇文章向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Event about Traditional Chinese Culture
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【答案】参考范文
An Event about Traditional Chinese Culture
An event about traditional Chinese culture was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in the future.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为上周学校举办的“中国传统文化体验日”活动写一篇报道。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
增加:enhance→boost
参加:participate in→get involved in
许多的:numerous→a large quantity of
获得:gain→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:An event about traditional Chinese culture was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture.
拓展句:An event about traditional Chinese culture was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] An event about traditional Chinese culture was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南多校联考·期中)假设你是李华,下月将赴意大利友好学校进行为期两周的交流活动。你的结对学生Luca来信询问你对于饮食方面的要求。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 你对饮食的要求;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Luca,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Luca,
It is so considerate of you to keep my dietary needs in mind. I’m not a picky eater, but I do have a couple of wishes.
I’ve heard that authentic Italian pizza has a crispy crust and unique seasonings, and I dream of trying it at a local restaurant. I also ask you to kindly guide me on the local dining etiquette so I can really dive into experiencing Italian culture. As someone with a sweet tooth, I’m crazy about tiramisu, so getting to try some would make my day.
Once again, thank you for your thoughtfulness. I’m thrilled about the upcoming trip and can’t wait to experience Italy’s fascinating culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生作为将赴意大利友好校进行交流活动的李华,给结对学生Luca回复信件,告知自己对于饮食方面的要求,并说明理由。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
贴心的:considerate→thoughtful
记得:keep… in mind→bear… in mind
即将到来的:upcoming→forthcoming
亲自:in person→personally
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As someone with a sweet tooth, I’m crazy about tiramisu, so getting to try some would make my day.
拓展句:As someone who has a sweet tooth, I’m crazy about tiramisu, so getting to try some would make my day.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It is so considerate of you to keep my dietary needs in mind. (运用了it作形式主语、不定式作真正的主语)
[高分句型2] I’ve heard that authentic Italian pizza has a crispy crust and unique seasonings, and I dream of trying it at a local restaurant. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南衡阳一中·期中)假定你是李华,最近收到好友Ben来信,信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表达你的心情;2.对使用人工智能完成作业的看法;3.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ben,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Ben,
I’m sorry to hear about your current situation. Using AI for homework is a complex issue. While it can be a helpful learning tool, over-reliance on it prevents you from developing critical thinking skills.
Teachers expect us to complete assignments independently to demonstrate our understanding. Perhaps you could use AI as a reference, but always try to solve problems yourself first.
Next time, try doing the work on your own, then use AI to check your answers or get hints. This way, you’ll learn more while still benefiting from technology. Hope this helps!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Ben写一封回信,就他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评一事,说明自己的看法和建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
当前的:current→present
复杂的:complex→complicated
有益的:helpful→beneficial
完成:complete→accomplish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Using AI for homework is a complex issue.
拓展句:Whether students can use AI for homework is a complex issue.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】While it can be a helpful learning tool, over-reliance on it prevents you from developing critical thinking skills. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Teachers expect us to complete assignments independently to demonstrate our understanding.(运用了不定式作宾语补足语和不定式作目的状语)
(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南省长沙市天心区长沙市明德中学·期中)假定你是李华,你校最近举办了首届校园诗歌节(Campus Poetry Festival),你的美国网友Chris对此很感兴趣,请写封邮件与他分享这次活动,内容包括:
(1)活动目的、时间、地点;
(2)活动的具体内容;
(3)个人感受。
注意: (1) 词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled you’re interested in our school’s first Campus Poetry Festival. Held last Saturday in the school hall, it aimed to let us enjoy poetry and show our creativity.
During the festival, students recited classic poems with deep feeling. Some shared their original works, and there was even a poetry-writing competition. Teachers also gave a short talk on how to appreciate poetry.
I had a great time! It not only made me love poetry more but also helped me make new friends who share the same interest.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给美国网友Chris写一封邮件,分享学校首届校园诗歌节的活动目的、时间地点、具体内容及个人感受。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited
旨在:aim to → be designed to
比赛:competition → contest
兴趣相投:share the same interest → have a common passion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I had a great time! It not only made me love poetry more but also helped me make new friends who share the same interest.
拓展句:I had a wonderful time, for it not only deepened my love for poetry but also helped me make new friends sharing the same interest.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Held last Saturday in the school hall, it aimed to let us enjoy poetry and show our creativity. (运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】It not only made me love poetry more but also helped me make new friends who share the same interest. (运用了not only... but also...并列结构和关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
(四)
(25-26高二上·湖南多校联盟·期中)假定你是校英文报记者李华,你校于11月1日下午在学校礼堂成功举办了“品味唐诗之美”(Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry)主题朗诵比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)活动过程;
(3)活动的意义。
提示:朗诵 recital
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry
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【答案】Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry
Intended to help students appreciate the charm of Tang Poetry, a Tang Poetry recital contest was held successfully in our school hall on the afternoon of November 1st.
Fourteen teams from different classes participated. Some participants recited works like Meng Haoran’s “A Spring Morning”. Others presented Li Bai’s “A Night Stay at a Mountain Temple”. Judges carefully graded each performance on pronunciation, emotion and creativity. Finally, the team from Senior 2, Class 4 won the top prize.
This contest not only enriched students’ after-school life but also aroused their enthusiasm for Chinese traditional culture.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英文报记者的身份,报道学校举办的“品味唐诗之美”主题朗诵比赛。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
举办:hold → organize
欣赏:appreciate → admire
参与:participate → take part
激发:arouse → stir up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Intended to help students appreciate the charm of Tang Poetry, a Tang Poetry recital contest was held successfully in our school hall on the afternoon of November 1st.
拓展句:With the intention of helping students appreciate the charm of Tang Poetry, a Tang Poetry recital contest was held successfully in our school hall on the afternoon of November 1st.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Intended to help students appreciate the charm of Tang Poetry, a Tang Poetry recital contest was held successfully in our school hall on the afternoon of November 1st.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】This contest not only enriched students’ after-school life but also aroused their enthusiasm for Chinese traditional culture.(运用了not only…but also…连接的并列结构)
(五)
(25-26高二上·湖南名校联考联合体·期中)假定你是某国际学校学生李华,你校英语报计划增设“Family Harmony”专栏,外教 Jenny提供了两个子栏目方向供选择:“Heart-to-Heart Talks”和“Quality Time Ideas”。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to know our English newspaper will add a “Family Harmony” column.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to know our English newspaper will add a “Family Harmony” column. After careful consideration, I strongly recommend “Heart-to-Heart Talks” for the following reasons.
First, effective communication is the foundation of harmonious parent-child relationships. This column can teach us to express thoughts openly and listen respectfully, helping bridge generation gaps. Second, it provides practical tips like choosing relaxed moments to talk, which is more actionable than just sharing activity ideas. Finally, it encourages us to learn to understand parents’ concerns while letting them know our needs.
I believe this column will guide us to build warmer family bonds. Thank you for your consideration!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jenny写一封邮件,说明对于“Heart-to-Heart Talks”和“Quality Time Ideas”两个栏目的选择以及理由。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴:glad→delighted
表达:express→convey
指导:guide→instruct
相信:believe→hold the belief
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:I believe this column will guide us to build warmer family bonds.
拓展句:I hold the belief that this column will guide us to build warmer family bonds.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Second, it provides practical tips like choosing relaxed moments to talk, which is more actionable than just sharing activity ideas.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this column will guide us to build warmer family bonds.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(六)
(25-26高二上·湖南平高教育集团·期中)你校英文报正在举办以“Green Living: Start with Me”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文参与此活动,内容包括:
(1)你对绿色生活的理解;
(2)你将如何践行绿色生活方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Living: Start with Me
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【答案】参考范文:
Green Living: Start with Me
Green living means living in a way that is environmentally friendly and sustainable. It involves saving resources, reducing waste, and protecting our planet. I believe green living benefits the environment, health, and economy.
To practice green living in my daily life, I will start with small steps. For example, I will use reusable bags instead of plastic ones when shopping. I will also turn off the lights and water taps when they aren’t in use to save energy and water. Moreover, I will try to walk or bike more often instead of driving, which can reduce air pollution and save money.
I hope more people will join me in practicing green living and protecting our planet.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Green Living: Start with Me”为主题写一篇短文参与征文活动,阐述对绿色生活的理解以及如何践行绿色生活方式。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
涉及:involve → be related to
好处:benefit → advantage
减少:reduce → decrease
保护:protect → conserve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To practice green living in my daily life, I will start with small steps.
拓展句:In order that I can practice green living in my daily life, I will start with small steps.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Green living means living in a way that is environmentally friendly and sustainable.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, I will use reusable bags instead of plastic ones when shopping.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)
(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南长沙雅礼中学-11月·期中)假定你是李华,你目前在给你的英国朋友Jordan上中文诗词课。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划,内容包括:
1.上课时间和地点
2.上课内容
3.课前准备。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jordan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jordan,
How is everything going? I’m writing to inform you about our arrangement of the next class. The related matters are as follows.
We’ll start at 10 a m. this Saturday in our school library lounge. The class is concerning the poetry of Tang Dynasty, so you are expected to go through the materials that I have already emailed you. Also, please remember to read about the history of Tang Dynasty, which would be of great benefit to understand the background of the poems.
I am looking forward to our next class.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你目前在给你的英国朋友Jordan上中文诗词课。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
告知:inform→notify
浏览:go through→read through
并且:also→besides
有益的:be of great benefit→be very beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句表复合句
原句:I’m writing to inform you about our arrangement of the next class.
拓展句:I’m writing to inform you something about how we arrange the next class.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 The class is concerning the poetry of Tang Dynasty, so you are expected to go through the materials that I have already emailed you.(运用了so连接并列句,that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, please remember to read about the history of Tang Dynasty, which would be of great benefit to understand the background of the poems.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘潭县第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,你校音乐厅下周末将举行一场中国传统音乐会,你打算邀请来自英国的好友Linda一起领略中国传统音乐之美。请你给她写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 音乐会时间、地点;
3. 期待回复。
注意:1)可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2)写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Linda,
I’m writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese music concert to be held next Saturday in the music hall of our school.
The concert will start at 7 p.m. and last for about two hours. As far as I know, you’ve been quite interested in Chinese traditional music since you came to China two years ago. Thus it will be a good chance for you to have a taste of the beauty of Chinese traditional music.
Let me know if you can come with me
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生邀请来自英国的好友Linda一起去学校音乐厅参加一场中国传统音乐会。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:attend → take part in/participate in
传统的:traditional → conventional
机会:chance → opportunity
了解:have a taste of → get to know/understand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese music concert to be held next Saturday in the music hall of our school.
拓展句:I’m writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese music concert which will be held next Saturday in the music hall of our school.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As far as I know, you’ve been quite interested in Chinese traditional music since you came to China two years ago. (运用了从属连词since引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Let me know if you can come with me. (运用了从属连词if引导的条件状语从句)
(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘潭湘钢一中·期中)假定你是李华,你校“校园艺术角”的Logo设计初稿已完成,将用于与英国友好学校的交流。负责老师Mr. Smith希望征集意见。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简要描述Logo;
2. 表明你的评价,并阐述理由(如:主题、元素、布局等)。
(五线谱stave 调色盘palette)
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to share my thoughts on the preliminary design of the “Campus Art Corner” logo.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to share my thoughts on the preliminary design of the “Campus Art Corner” logo. The circular logo, adorned with twinkling musical notes alongside a vibrant palette and a curved stave, clearly reflects our focus on both music and visual arts.
In my view, the main theme perfectly highlights creativity and collaboration — key spirits of our Art Corner. The neat arrangement of these art elements blends harmoniously, allowing viewers to quickly understand the corner’s essence at first glance. I also think keeping the design’s current simplicity and visual appeal would be great — it stays true to the art-focused vibe.
I sincerely appreciate any further improvements and feedback from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给老师Mr. Smith写一封邮件,阐述自己对“校园艺术角”的Logo设计初稿的理解以及评价。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
装饰:adorn → decorate
强调:highlight → emphasize
创新:creativity → innovation
理解:understand → comprehend
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The circular logo, adorned with twinkling musical notes alongside a vibrant palette and a curved stave, clearly reflects our focus on both music and visual arts.
拓展句:The logo, which is circular and adorned with twinkling musical notes alongside a vibrant palette and a curved stave, clearly reflects our focus on both music and visual arts.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The neat arrangement of these art elements blends harmoniously, allowing viewers to quickly understand the corner’s essence at first glance. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I also think keeping the design’s current simplicity and visual appeal would be great — it stays true to the art-focused vibe.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南常德汉寿县第一中学-l1月·期中)假定你是李华,给你开网店的英国朋友Pter寄去了
一包自家产的有机(organic)绿茶,并附有一份该茶的说明。请你给Peter发封邮件,要点如下:
1)请他品茶:
2)说明该茶的特点(有机、绿色等);
3)请他帮忙代卖该茶。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you?I hope you and your family are quite well.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南长沙部分学校·期中)假定你是李华,你发现汉语爱好者Toy在网上招募一名汉语学
习顾问(adviser)。请你给Tony写一封应征邮件,要点如下:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势(性格、语言等)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南衡阳·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校计划在校园文化墙上设置诗歌专栏,特向
同学们征集他们最喜爱的诗歌,此事由学生会负责。请给你校交换生A1x写一封邮件邀请他参加该活动,
内容包括:
(1)介绍该活动:
(2)邀请他参加。
注意:
1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:专栏column
Dear Alex,
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘一名校期中)假定你是李华,你校上周举办了“中国传统文化体验日”活动。请你
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1.活动介绍:
2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Event about Traditional Chinese Culture
进阶提升
(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南多校联考·期中)假设你是李华,下月将赴意大利友好学校进行为期两周的交流活动。
你的结对学生Luca来信询问你对于饮食方面的要求。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.你对饮食的要求:
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南衡阳一中·期中)假定你是李华,最近收到好友Bn来信,信中说他因为使用人工智能
完成作业而受到老师批评。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表达你的心情;2.对使用人工智能完成作业的看法;3.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ben,
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南省长沙市天心区长沙市明德中学·期中)假定你是李华,你校最近举办了首届校园诗歌
节(Campus Poetry Festival),你的美国网友Chris对此很感兴趣,请写封邮件与他分享这次活动,内容包括:
()活动目的、时间、地点:
(2)活动的具体内容:
3)个人感受。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(四)
(25-26高二上·湖南多校联盟·期中)假定你是校英文报记者李华,你校于11月1日下午在学校礼堂成功
举办了“品味唐诗之美”(Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry)主题朗诵比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,
内容包括:
1)活动目的:
(2)活动过程:
3)活动的意义。
提示:朗诵recital
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry
(五)
(25-26高二上·湖南名校联考联合体·期中)假定你是某国际学校学生李华,你校英语报计划增设
“Family Harmony''专栏,外教Jeny提供了两个子栏目方向供选择:“Heat-to-Heart Talks'和“Quality Time
Ideas'”。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由。
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to know our English newspaper will add a"Family Harmony"column.
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(25-26高二上·湖南平高教育集团·期中)你校英文报正在举办以“Green Living:Start with Me''为主题的征
文活动。请你写一篇短文参与此活动,内容包括:
(1)你对绿色生活的理解:
(2)你将如何践行绿色生活方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Green Living:Start with Me
》
拓展培优
(一)
(25-26高二上·湖南长沙雅礼中学-11月·期中)假定你是李华,你目前在给你的英国朋友Jordan上中文诗
词课。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划,内容包括:
1.上课时间和地点
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3.课前准备。
注意:
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jordan,
Yours,
LiHua
(二)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘潭县第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,你校音乐厅下周末将举行一场中国传统音乐会,
你打算邀请来自英国的好友Lida一起领略中国传统音乐之美。请你给她写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1.写信日目的:
2.音乐会时间、地点:
3.期待回复。
注意:1)可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2)写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Linda,
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(25-26高二上·湖南湘潭湘钢一中·期中)假定你是李华,你校“校园艺术角”的L0g0设计初稿已完成,
将用于与英国友好学校的交流。负责老师Mr.Sith希望征集意见。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括
1.简要描述Logo:
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(五线谱stave
调色盘palette)
N月.
Campits
corner
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith
I'm writing to share my thoughts on the preliminary design of the"Campus Art Corner"logo.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题09 应用文写作
(一)
【答案】Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope you and your family are quite well.
Yesterday I posted a package of tea to you, inside which is a description for it. Our family plant tea and we make the tea product by ourselves. Green and organic, the tea is rich in nutrition like vitamins. You can taste it and will find how nice it is. Meanwhile, I'd like to ask you a favor. I wonder if you could sell the tea for me in your shop. Thank you for your help!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’ve learned from your post that you are looking for an adviser to help you learn Chinese, so I’m writing to recommend myself.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. First of all, as an outgoing, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies. Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently. More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs.
I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to inform you that our school is planning to set up a poetry column on the campus culture wall to share beautiful poems and inspire a love for literature among students. We are now collecting everyone’s favorite poems—whether original or classic, Chinese or English—along with a few sentences explaining why they are meaningful.
As an exchange student with diverse cultural experiences, you must have unique insights or favorite poems to share. We would be delighted if you could take part in this activity. Your contribution will surely enrich our column and help students appreciate poetry from different perspectives.
We would be thrilled to have you join us! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】参考范文
An Event about Traditional Chinese Culture
An event about traditional Chinese culture was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in the future.
(一)
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Luca,
It is so considerate of you to keep my dietary needs in mind. I’m not a picky eater, but I do have a couple of wishes.
I’ve heard that authentic Italian pizza has a crispy crust and unique seasonings, and I dream of trying it at a local restaurant. I also ask you to kindly guide me on the local dining etiquette so I can really dive into experiencing Italian culture. As someone with a sweet tooth, I’m crazy about tiramisu, so getting to try some would make my day.
Once again, thank you for your thoughtfulness. I’m thrilled about the upcoming trip and can’t wait to experience Italy’s fascinating culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】参考范文
Dear Ben,
I’m sorry to hear about your current situation. Using AI for homework is a complex issue. While it can be a helpful learning tool, over-reliance on it prevents you from developing critical thinking skills.
Teachers expect us to complete assignments independently to demonstrate our understanding. Perhaps you could use AI as a reference, but always try to solve problems yourself first.
Next time, try doing the work on your own, then use AI to check your answers or get hints. This way, you’ll learn more while still benefiting from technology. Hope this helps!
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled you’re interested in our school’s first Campus Poetry Festival. Held last Saturday in the school hall, it aimed to let us enjoy poetry and show our creativity.
During the festival, students recited classic poems with deep feeling. Some shared their original works, and there was even a poetry-writing competition. Teachers also gave a short talk on how to appreciate poetry.
I had a great time! It not only made me love poetry more but also helped me make new friends who share the same interest.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
【答案】Taste the Beauty of Tang Poetry
Intended to help students appreciate the charm of Tang Poetry, a Tang Poetry recital contest was held successfully in our school hall on the afternoon of November 1st.
Fourteen teams from different classes participated. Some participants recited works like Meng Haoran’s “A Spring Morning”. Others presented Li Bai’s “A Night Stay at a Mountain Temple”. Judges carefully graded each performance on pronunciation, emotion and creativity. Finally, the team from Senior 2, Class 4 won the top prize.
This contest not only enriched students’ after-school life but also aroused their enthusiasm for Chinese traditional culture.
(五)
【答案】范文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to know our English newspaper will add a “Family Harmony” column. After careful consideration, I strongly recommend “Heart-to-Heart Talks” for the following reasons.
First, effective communication is the foundation of harmonious parent-child relationships. This column can teach us to express thoughts openly and listen respectfully, helping bridge generation gaps. Second, it provides practical tips like choosing relaxed moments to talk, which is more actionable than just sharing activity ideas. Finally, it encourages us to learn to understand parents’ concerns while letting them know our needs.
I believe this column will guide us to build warmer family bonds. Thank you for your consideration!
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
【答案】参考范文:
Green Living: Start with Me
Green living means living in a way that is environmentally friendly and sustainable. It involves saving resources, reducing waste, and protecting our planet. I believe green living benefits the environment, health, and economy.
To practice green living in my daily life, I will start with small steps. For example, I will use reusable bags instead of plastic ones when shopping. I will also turn off the lights and water taps when they aren’t in use to save energy and water. Moreover, I will try to walk or bike more often instead of driving, which can reduce air pollution and save money.
I hope more people will join me in practicing green living and protecting our planet.
(一)
【答案】Dear Jordan,
How is everything going? I’m writing to inform you about our arrangement of the next class. The related matters are as follows.
We’ll start at 10 a m. this Saturday in our school library lounge. The class is concerning the poetry of Tang Dynasty, so you are expected to go through the materials that I have already emailed you. Also, please remember to read about the history of Tang Dynasty, which would be of great benefit to understand the background of the poems.
I am looking forward to our next class.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
【答案】Dear Linda,
I’m writing to invite you to attend a traditional Chinese music concert to be held next Saturday in the music hall of our school.
The concert will start at 7 p.m. and last for about two hours. As far as I know, you’ve been quite interested in Chinese traditional music since you came to China two years ago. Thus it will be a good chance for you to have a taste of the beauty of Chinese traditional music.
Let me know if you can come with me
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to share my thoughts on the preliminary design of the “Campus Art Corner” logo. The circular logo, adorned with twinkling musical notes alongside a vibrant palette and a curved stave, clearly reflects our focus on both music and visual arts.
In my view, the main theme perfectly highlights creativity and collaboration — key spirits of our Art Corner. The neat arrangement of these art elements blends harmoniously, allowing viewers to quickly understand the corner’s essence at first glance. I also think keeping the design’s current simplicity and visual appeal would be great — it stays true to the art-focused vibe.
I sincerely appreciate any further improvements and feedback from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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