Unit 1 Food Matters 美食分享感谢信（含学习地图）（单元同步写作讲义）高中英语译林版选择性必修第一册

本高中英语讲义聚焦“美食分享感谢信”写作，构建从明确主题（对象、任务、语气）到搭建框架（开头点明事由、主体描述细节、结尾表达回请）的学习支架。通过核心词汇（如flavour、creamy）、实用句型（感谢开头句、细节描写句）及标准版与提升版模板，结合典例精练和5类拓展练习（传统美食学习、健康饮食方案等），辅以评价表实现自查修改，形成完整写作闭环。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，提供可迁移的主题词汇与句型（如“out of this world”形容美食），助力准确表达。文化意识方面，拓展练习涵盖饮食习俗与跨文化交流（如寄宿家庭西餐体验），涵养跨文化认知。思维品质通过细节描写（食材、氛围）提升逻辑组织能力，学习能力上分层练习与评价表促进自主查漏补缺。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生巩固提升，有效培养写作核心素养。

Unit 1 Food Matters｜美食分享感谢信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 美食分享感谢信（Food Matters） 左右感谢朋友宴请，描述美食体验与帮助，表达再次感谢和回请意愿 80词 感谢信 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 称呼、致谢缘由、具体感受、结尾、落款 掌握完整感谢信结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 表达感谢、回顾经历的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整感谢信 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜传统美食学习 人与自我-饮食习俗 回忆学习过程+表达收获 练习2｜饮食改善方案 人与自我-健康饮食 汇报效果+表达敬意 练习3｜备考三餐陪伴 人与社会-家庭关系 细节回忆+感恩承诺 练习4｜寄宿家庭西餐 人与社会-文化交流 经历叙述+文化收获 练习5｜美食节义卖相助 人与社会-合作与交流 过程回顾+总结收获 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 学习路径：先读单元导入与词汇框架，再学典例四步法，最后按练1至练5依次训练 Unit 1 Food Matters 美食分享感谢信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Food Matters；美食文化、味觉记忆与日常交际 应用文体裁： 感谢信 写作任务： 就朋友的宴请或美食分享写信致谢，具体描述对方的帮助或难忘的美食体验，并表达再次感谢和回请意愿。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明致谢事由，说明写信目的，引出对方的帮助或款待。 主体（3—4句） 具体回忆美食体验或帮助细节，表达感受与收获，适当使用动词不定式句式。 结尾（1—2句） 再次致谢并表达回请意愿，自然收束全信。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 flavour 味道；特色 描写美食风味 creamy 光滑细腻的，像奶油的 描写细腻口感 dessert (饭后)甜点，甜食 描述宴请菜品 ingredient 材料，成分 说明烹饪材料 atmosphere 气氛，氛围 描写用餐氛围 impress 给……留下深刻印象 表达美食体验 bond 纽带，联系 表达情谊加深 combination 结合体，组合 描写风味搭配 bake 烘烤，烤 描述烹饪方式 emotion 情感，情绪 表达内心感受 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 do the trick 奏效，起作用，达到目的 说明技巧或方法有效 out of this world 好得不得了，非凡 形容美食绝佳 hit the spot 使人满意，正合需要 形容菜品正合口味 throw oneself into 投身于，热衷于 描写投入烹饪或活动 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. The warm ________(氛围) at the dinner table made everyone relaxed. 2. The ________(结合体，组合) of sweet filling and soft wrapper is my favourite. 3. To thank my host family, I plan to ________(烘烤) them a Chinese-style cake. 4. The mushroom soup ________(奏效) — it warmed us up at once. 5. Every ________(材料) in this dish is fresh and local. 句子翻译 1. 再次见到你并一起下厨真是一件乐事。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我下个月的目标是为你做一顿地道的中餐。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 你分享的烹饪技巧在昨晚的聚餐中奏效了。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for the wonderful dinner you prepared for me. 2. It is a great pleasure to write this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality. 3. Thank you so much for teaching me how to make the traditional dishes of my hometown. 中间句 1. To taste your home-made dishes is one of the happiest moments of my stay here. 2. What impressed me most was the creamy dessert with its sweet flavour. 3. The combination of fresh ingredients did the trick and made every dish out of this world. 4. Cooking together brought us closer and strengthened the bond between us. 结尾句 1. My plan is to invite you to a real Chinese dinner next month. 2. It would be my honour to be your guide to Chinese food culture. 3. Thanks again for your kindness, and I look forward to seeing you soon. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for _______. It was really kind of you to _______. The _______ you made tasted _______, and I especially enjoyed _______, which made me feel at home. To learn _______ from you was a wonderful experience. My plan is to _______, and I hope you can come. Thanks again for everything. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, Knowing how much effort you devoted to _______, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your kindness. To taste _______ at your home was a real treat, and the warm atmosphere made every dish taste better. What impressed me most was _______, which showed your thoughtfulness. More importantly, I learned _______, which will benefit me for a long time. My plan is to _______, so that I can return your kindness in my own way. Thanks again, and I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 假如你是李华，上周你的外国朋友 Jack 邀请你到家中宴请。请你给他写一封英文感谢信，感谢他的宴请，具体描述让你印象深刻的美食分享或他给予的帮助，并表达再次感谢和回请意愿。 写作要点： 1. 点明致谢事由并表达谢意。 2. 具体回忆宴请中的美食体验或对方的帮助。 3. 再次致谢并发出回请邀请。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：感谢朋友教自己制作家乡传统美食（人与自我-饮食习俗） 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Emma 上周末教你制作家乡传统美食。请你给她写一封英文感谢信，感谢她的耐心传授，回忆学习过程并表达收获与再次感谢。 写作要点： 1. 说明致谢事由，点明学习的美食内容。 2. 回忆制作过程与对方指导的细节。 3. 表达收获并再次致谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Emma, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：感谢营养师为自己制定饮食改善方案（人与自我-健康饮食） 假如你是李华，学校营养师 Green 女士上个月为你制定了饮食改善方案。请你给她写一封英文感谢信，感谢她的专业指导，汇报饮食改善效果并表达敬意。 写作要点： 1. 说明感谢缘由，点明饮食改善方案。 2. 汇报坚持执行后的具体改善效果。 3. 表达敬意与再次感谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：感谢父母在备考期间为自己准备的每一餐（人与社会-家庭关系） 假如你是李华，最近备考期间父母每天为你准备三餐。请你给他们写一封英文感谢信，感谢他们的默默付出，回忆餐食细节并表达感恩与承诺。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，说明备考期间的日常餐食。 2. 回忆具体细节，写出餐食带来的温暖与力量。 3. 表达感恩并作出学习上的承诺。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mum and Dad, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：感谢寄宿家庭让自己体验地道西餐文化（人与社会-文化交流） 假如你是李华，上个月在英国寄宿家庭 Smith 夫妇家生活。请你给他们写一封英文感谢信，感谢他们的款待，回忆地道的西餐体验并总结文化收获。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，回顾寄宿生活。 2. 描述印象深刻的西餐体验和餐桌文化。 3. 总结文化收获并再次致谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：感谢同学在美食节义卖中的鼎力相助（人与社会-合作与交流） 假如你是李华，上周五班级美食节义卖中同学 Wang Ping 主动帮你打理摊位。请你给他写一封英文感谢信，感谢他的相助，回顾活动过程并总结收获。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，交代美食节义卖背景。 2. 回顾对方提供的具体帮助和活动成果。 3. 表达感谢并总结活动收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Ping, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 三段结构清楚，称呼、开头、主体、结尾和落款安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 致谢事由明确，细节具体，感受真挚并表达回请意愿。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和致谢句型，表达准确连贯。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Food Matters｜美食分享感谢信写作学习地图 主题 体裁 建议词数 核心任务 美食分享感谢信（Food Matters） 左右感谢朋友宴请，描述美食体验与帮助，表达再次感谢和回请意愿 80词 感谢信 一、本讲义内容导航 模块 学什么 帮你解决什么问题 01 写作主题 明确对象、任务、重点与语气 知道写什么、写给谁 02 写作框架 称呼、致谢缘由、具体感受、结尾、落款 掌握完整感谢信结构 03 写作词汇 主题词汇与实用表达 积累可直接使用的表达 04 写作句型 表达感谢、回顾经历的常用句式 把人和事写得具体、连贯 05 写作模板 标准版与提升版结构 快速组织完整感谢信 06 典例精练 结合真实情境练习方法 把方法落实到任务中 07 写作指导 审题、谋篇与表达方法 解决写什么、怎么写 08 参考范文 学习结构、语言与表达逻辑 借鉴完整成篇表达 09 拓展练习 不同情境下的迁移写作 形成独立写作能力 10 写作评价表 对照标准自查、修改、提升 发现问题并完成改进 二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么？ 练习主题 写作任务 重点训练 练习1｜传统美食学习 人与自我-饮食习俗 回忆学习过程+表达收获 练习2｜饮食改善方案 人与自我-健康饮食 汇报效果+表达敬意 练习3｜备考三餐陪伴 人与社会-家庭关系 细节回忆+感恩承诺 练习4｜寄宿家庭西餐 人与社会-文化交流 经历叙述+文化收获 练习5｜美食节义卖相助 人与社会-合作与交流 过程回顾+总结收获 三、系列训练亮点与学习路径 教材同步 结构完整 表达可用 练习分层 评价促改 紧扣单元主题与体裁 从审题到修改形成闭环 词汇句型模板可迁移 五类情境训练不重复 对照标准自查修改 学习路径 学习路径：先读单元导入与词汇框架，再学典例四步法，最后按练1至练5依次训练 Unit 1 Food Matters 美食分享感谢信（单元同步写作讲义） 一、写作主题 单元主题： Food Matters；美食文化、味觉记忆与日常交际 应用文体裁： 感谢信 写作任务： 就朋友的宴请或美食分享写信致谢，具体描述对方的帮助或难忘的美食体验，并表达再次感谢和回请意愿。 二、写作框架 部分 内容要点 开头（1—2句） 点明致谢事由，说明写信目的，引出对方的帮助或款待。 主体（3—4句） 具体回忆美食体验或帮助细节，表达感受与收获，适当使用动词不定式句式。 结尾（1—2句） 再次致谢并表达回请意愿，自然收束全信。 三、写作词汇 核心单词 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 flavour 味道；特色 描写美食风味 creamy 光滑细腻的，像奶油的 描写细腻口感 dessert (饭后)甜点，甜食 描述宴请菜品 ingredient 材料，成分 说明烹饪材料 atmosphere 气氛，氛围 描写用餐氛围 impress 给……留下深刻印象 表达美食体验 bond 纽带，联系 表达情谊加深 combination 结合体，组合 描写风味搭配 bake 烘烤，烤 描述烹饪方式 emotion 情感，情绪 表达内心感受 主题短语 英文表达 中文释义 写作用途 do the trick 奏效，起作用，达到目的 说明技巧或方法有效 out of this world 好得不得了，非凡 形容美食绝佳 hit the spot 使人满意，正合需要 形容菜品正合口味 throw oneself into 投身于，热衷于 描写投入烹饪或活动 核心词汇写作运用 词汇填空 1. The warm ________(氛围) at the dinner table made everyone relaxed. 2. The ________(结合体，组合) of sweet filling and soft wrapper is my favourite. 3. To thank my host family, I plan to ________(烘烤) them a Chinese-style cake. 4. The mushroom soup ________(奏效) — it warmed us up at once. 5. Every ________(材料) in this dish is fresh and local. 【答案】 1. atmosphere 【解析】warm 修饰名词，atmosphere 表示"气氛，氛围"。 2. combination 【解析】The 后接名词，combination of 表示"……的结合/搭配"。 3. bake 【解析】plan to 后接动词原形，bake 表示"烘烤"。 4. did the trick 【解析】did the trick 表示"奏效，达到目的"，描述过去的事情用一般过去时。 5. ingredient 【解析】Every 后接可数名词单数，ingredient 表示"材料，成分"。 句子翻译 1. 再次见到你并一起下厨真是一件乐事。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我下个月的目标是为你做一顿地道的中餐。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 你分享的烹饪技巧在昨晚的聚餐中奏效了。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. To see you again and cook together is a real pleasure. 【解析】动词不定式短语 To see you again and cook together 作主语。 2. My goal for next month is to cook an authentic Chinese meal for you. 【解析】动词不定式 to cook an authentic Chinese meal 作表语，说明目标内容。 3. The cooking skills you shared did the trick at last night's dinner party. 【解析】did the trick 表示"奏效，达到目的"；you shared 为定语从句修饰 skills。 四、写作句型 开头句 1. I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for the wonderful dinner you prepared for me. 2. It is a great pleasure to write this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality. 3. Thank you so much for teaching me how to make the traditional dishes of my hometown. 中间句 1. To taste your home-made dishes is one of the happiest moments of my stay here. 2. What impressed me most was the creamy dessert with its sweet flavour. 3. The combination of fresh ingredients did the trick and made every dish out of this world. 4. Cooking together brought us closer and strengthened the bond between us. 结尾句 1. My plan is to invite you to a real Chinese dinner next month. 2. It would be my honour to be your guide to Chinese food culture. 3. Thanks again for your kindness, and I look forward to seeing you soon. 五、写作模板 模板1：简洁标准版 Dear _______, I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for _______. It was really kind of you to _______. The _______ you made tasted _______, and I especially enjoyed _______, which made me feel at home. To learn _______ from you was a wonderful experience. My plan is to _______, and I hope you can come. Thanks again for everything. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 模板2：分层高分版 Dear _______, Knowing how much effort you devoted to _______, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your kindness. To taste _______ at your home was a real treat, and the warm atmosphere made every dish taste better. What impressed me most was _______, which showed your thoughtfulness. More importantly, I learned _______, which will benefit me for a long time. My plan is to _______, so that I can return your kindness in my own way. Thanks again, and I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 六、典例精练 假如你是李华，上周你的外国朋友 Jack 邀请你到家中宴请。请你给他写一封英文感谢信，感谢他的宴请，具体描述让你印象深刻的美食分享或他给予的帮助，并表达再次感谢和回请意愿。 写作要点： 1. 点明致谢事由并表达谢意。 2. 具体回忆宴请中的美食体验或对方的帮助。 3. 再次致谢并发出回请邀请。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作指导 第一步 审题谋篇 体裁是感谢信，正式成品不设文章标题，对象是外国朋友 Jack，目的在于感谢他的宴请并表达回请意愿。回忆宴请时以一般过去时为主，表达感受和意愿可用一般现在时；语气真挚、自然。布局为称呼、点明致谢事由、回忆美食体验与帮助、再次致谢并回请、落款。 第二步 要点拆解与表达 中文要点 英文表达 句式说明 点明致谢事由 I'm writing to express my sincere thanks for the wonderful dinner. express thanks for 表示"为……致谢"。 描写美食体验 The roast beef was delicious, and the creamy dessert impressed me most. 一般过去时回忆宴请细节。 说明帮助与感受 It was kind of you to prepare so many dishes and make me feel at home. It is/was + adj. + to do，动词不定式作真正主语。 表达回请意愿 My plan is to cook a Chinese meal for you next month. 动词不定式作表语，说明计划内容。 第三步 句式升级 原句 升级句 仿写句 说明 The dinner was great. The dinner you prepared was out of this world. The party you organised was out of this world. 用夸张式评价增强感染力。 I want to thank you. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to your family. 用完整句式郑重致谢。 I will invite you to dinner. My plan is to invite you to a real Chinese dinner. My wish is to show you around my hometown. 用动词不定式作表语表达意愿。 第四步 同义替换 基础表达 升级表达 使用场景 thank express my sincere gratitude to 开头郑重致谢 delicious out of this world 描写美食难忘口感 satisfy hit the spot 表达菜品正合胃口 kind warm-hearted 称赞对方热心品质 invite extend an invitation to 结尾发出回请邀请 参考范文 基础版范文 Dear Jack, I'm writing to thank you for the wonderful dinner last Saturday. It was very kind of you to prepare so many dishes for me. The roast beef was delicious, and the creamy dessert was my favourite. I also enjoyed the warm atmosphere at your home. To learn about western food culture from you was a pleasure, and your cooking tips will help me a lot. My plan is to cook a Chinese meal for you next month. Thanks again for your kindness. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 提高版范文 Dear Jack, I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for the amazing dinner last Saturday. Preparing so many dishes for a guest like me shows how warm-hearted and thoughtful you are. The roast beef hit the spot, and the creamy dessert tasted out of this world. What impressed me more was the relaxed atmosphere of your home, which made a stranger feel completely at ease. To share your kitchen with me was a gift, because I not only picked up recipes but also felt the warmth of your family. I would like to extend an invitation to you for a real Chinese dinner next month, when I can show you the charm of Sichuan cuisine. Thanks again, and I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、拓展练习 练习1：感谢朋友教自己制作家乡传统美食（人与自我-饮食习俗） 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Emma 上周末教你制作家乡传统美食。请你给她写一封英文感谢信，感谢她的耐心传授，回忆学习过程并表达收获与再次感谢。 写作要点： 1. 说明致谢事由，点明学习的美食内容。 2. 回忆制作过程与对方指导的细节。 3. 表达收获并再次致谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Emma, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给外国朋友 Emma，目的是感谢她教自己制作家乡传统美食。 2. 要点：点明学习内容；回忆指导过程和失败到成功的细节；表达收获与再谢。 3. 结构：致谢缘由；过程回忆；收获与感谢。 4. 表达：使用 ingredient、bake、do the trick、out of this world 和 look back on。 基础版范文 Dear Emma, I'm writing to thank you for teaching me to make dumplings last weekend. It was very kind of you to spend the whole afternoon with me in the kitchen. You showed me how to mix the filling and fold the wrappers. At first my dumplings fell apart, but your tips did the trick. Now I can cook this traditional food for my family, and each try reminds me of your patience. Thank you again for your help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 teach me to cook guide me through 突出传授过程的耐心细致 delicious out of this world 强调美食令人难忘 remember look back on 自然引出美好回忆 learn a lot gain a deeper understanding of 提升收获表达层次 thank you again my heartfelt thanks go to you again 结尾致谢更真挚 提高版范文 Dear Emma, I'm writing to thank you for your patience in guiding me through the making of traditional dumplings last weekend. Spending the whole afternoon in the kitchen with you was a joy in itself. You showed me how to mix the filling and fold the wrappers. Although my first attempts fell apart, your tips soon worked, and the dumplings we finally cooked tasted out of this world. Whenever I look back on that afternoon, I feel lucky to have such a patient friend. More importantly, I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese food culture through hands-on practice. My heartfelt thanks go to you again for your time and patience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习2：感谢营养师为自己制定饮食改善方案（人与自我-健康饮食） 假如你是李华，学校营养师 Green 女士上个月为你制定了饮食改善方案。请你给她写一封英文感谢信，感谢她的专业指导，汇报饮食改善效果并表达敬意。 写作要点： 1. 说明感谢缘由，点明饮食改善方案。 2. 汇报坚持执行后的具体改善效果。 3. 表达敬意与再次感谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms Green, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给学校营养师 Ms Green，目的是感谢她制定饮食改善方案并汇报效果。 2. 要点：说明方案内容；对比执行前后的变化；表达感谢与坚持的决心。 3. 结构：致谢缘由；效果呈现；敬意表达。 4. 表达：使用 flavour、calorie、digest、hit the spot 和 nutritious。 基础版范文 Dear Ms Green, I'm writing to thank you for the diet plan you made for me last month. It was thoughtful of you to design it according to my needs. In the past weeks I have followed your advice every day. I eat more vegetables and less fried food, and I drink milk instead of cola. Now I feel much better during morning classes and sleep well at night. I will keep following your plan. Thank you again for your help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 thank you express my sincere gratitude to you 开头致谢更郑重 help professional guidance 突出指导的专业性 feel much better regain my energy and confidence 具体呈现改善效果 follow your advice stick to the balanced diet you designed 强调坚持执行方案 healthy food nutritious meals 准确描述饮食价值 提高版范文 Dear Ms Green, I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for the eating plan you designed last month. To prepare such a detailed plan for a student shows your sense of duty. Over the past weeks, I made up my mind to stick to the balanced diet you designed. Fried food has given way to vegetables and fruit, and cola has been replaced by milk. These nutritious meals enable me to regain my energy and confidence: I can now focus fully in class and sleep well at night. Your professional guidance has changed not only my menu but also my lifestyle. Thank you again. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习3：感谢父母在备考期间为自己准备的每一餐（人与社会-家庭关系） 假如你是李华，最近备考期间父母每天为你准备三餐。请你给他们写一封英文感谢信，感谢他们的默默付出，回忆餐食细节并表达感恩与承诺。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，说明备考期间的日常餐食。 2. 回忆具体细节，写出餐食带来的温暖与力量。 3. 表达感恩并作出学习上的承诺。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mum and Dad, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给父母，目的是感谢备考期间他们准备的每一餐。 2. 要点：点明感谢事由；回忆餐食细节与感受；表达感恩与承诺。 3. 结构：致谢缘由；细节回忆；情感表达与承诺。 4. 表达：使用 emotion、bond、flavour、hit the spot 和 atmosphere。 基础版范文 Dear Mum and Dad, I'm writing to thank you for the meals you prepared for me during my exam weeks. You cooked my favourite dishes again and again, though your own days were busy. Every dinner was warm and delicious. When I was tired or worried, your food always calmed me down. I know each meal took you time and love, and your support meant a lot to me. I will study hard to make you proud. Thank you again for everything. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 cook every meal for me prepare every single meal for me 强调每一餐的用心付出 thank you words can hardly express my gratitude 情感表达更浓烈 support stand behind me 形象表达默默支持 delicious full of the taste of home 突出家常味道的温暖 love selfless love 升华父母之爱 提高版范文 Dear Mum and Dad, Words can hardly express my gratitude for what you did during my exam weeks. While I was burying myself in books, you took turns to prepare every single meal for me, although your own days were fully packed. Every dish you cooked was full of the taste of home, and it calmed my nerves whenever pressure grew. Knowing that you always stand behind me gives me strength for any challenge. Behind each meal is your selfless love, which is the warmest thing I know. I will keep working hard and live up to your expectations. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习4：感谢寄宿家庭让自己体验地道西餐文化（人与社会-文化交流） 假如你是李华，上个月在英国寄宿家庭 Smith 夫妇家生活。请你给他们写一封英文感谢信，感谢他们的款待，回忆地道的西餐体验并总结文化收获。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，回顾寄宿生活。 2. 描述印象深刻的西餐体验和餐桌文化。 3. 总结文化收获并再次致谢。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给寄宿家庭 Smith 夫妇，目的是感谢他们让自己体验地道西餐文化。 2. 要点：回顾寄宿生活；描述西餐体验与餐桌文化；总结收获并致谢。 3. 结构：经历回忆；文化感受；诚挚感谢。 4. 表达：使用 flavour、dessert、bake、out of this world 和 impress。 基础版范文 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, I'm writing to thank you for the wonderful month in your home. You prepared different western dishes every week and told me the stories behind them. I still remember the creamy pasta and the home-baked apple pie you made for my birthday. They were truly delicious. More importantly, I learned about table manners and food culture that books can hardly teach. To live with you was a great pleasure. Thank you again for your kindness. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 thank you for I'm truly grateful for 开头致谢更真挚 let me experience offer me a real taste of 突出地道文化体验 delicious out of this world 强调西餐美味难忘 learn about gain an insight into 提升文化理解层次 kindness warm hospitality 抽象名词升华款待 提高版范文 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, I'm truly grateful for the wonderful month in your home. Every week you went out of your way to offer me a real taste of western food culture, from creamy pasta to home-baked apple pie. The Sunday roast was out of this world, and the dinner conversations taught me how food brings a family together. More importantly, I gained an insight into table manners and the stories behind each dish, which no textbook could offer. Your open kitchen made me feel at home from the first evening. Please accept my thanks for your warm hospitality. I hope to welcome you to Beijing one day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 练习5：感谢同学在美食节义卖中的鼎力相助（人与社会-合作与交流） 假如你是李华，上周五班级美食节义卖中同学 Wang Ping 主动帮你打理摊位。请你给他写一封英文感谢信，感谢他的相助，回顾活动过程并总结收获。 写作要点： 1. 点明感谢事由，交代美食节义卖背景。 2. 回顾对方提供的具体帮助和活动成果。 3. 表达感谢并总结活动收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右。 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Ping, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 写作思路 1. 审题：写给同学 Wang Ping，目的是感谢他在美食节义卖中的相助。 2. 要点：交代义卖背景与困难；回顾对方帮助与活动成果；致谢并总结收获。 3. 结构：活动回顾；帮助梳理；致谢表达。 4. 表达：使用 atmosphere、throw oneself into、hit the spot 和 combination。 基础版范文 Dear Wang Ping, I'm writing to thank you for your help at the charity food sale last Friday. When I was worried about the long queue, you came up and offered to help at once. You helped me pack the cookies, greet the customers and count the money. With your help, our stall raised more money than expected. Working with you made the busy day easy and fun. It was one of the best memories of this term. Thank you again for your kindness. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 词汇升级 基础表达 升级表达 升级作用 help me offer me a helping hand 形象表达主动相助 work together join forces 强调团队协作 successful a great success 名词化总结活动成果 thank you express my sincere appreciation 正式表达谢意 remember cherish the memory of 升华共同回忆 提高版范文 Dear Wang Ping, I'm writing to express my sincere appreciation for your help at the charity food sale last Friday. When the queue grew long and I began to panic, you came up at once to offer me a helping hand. We joined forces to pack the cookies, greet the customers and count the money. Thanks to our teamwork, our stall became a great success and raised more money than any other class. I will always cherish the memory of that busy and joyful afternoon. I hope we can join forces again in the coming food festival. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 八、写作评价表 评价维度 分值 自评 同伴评 评价说明 结构 Structure 3分 ____ / 3 ____ / 3 三段结构清楚，称呼、开头、主体、结尾和落款安排合理。 内容 Content 6分 ____ / 6 ____ / 6 致谢事由明确，细节具体，感受真挚并表达回请意愿。 语言 Language 4分 ____ / 4 ____ / 4 能使用本单元核心词汇和致谢句型，表达准确连贯。 书写 Handwriting 2分 ____ / 2 ____ / 2 格式规范，段落清楚，拼写、大小写和标点正确。 总分 Total 15分 ____ / 15 ____ / 15 综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。 自我反思与改进 我最需要改进的一项：□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写 具体改进计划：________________________ 评分参考 满分15分；13—15优秀；10—12达标；7—9需修改；6分及以下建议重写。 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $