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Unit 3 The Art of Painting|艺术操作指南写作学习地图
主题
体裁
建议词数
核心任务
艺术操作指南(The Art of Painting)
分步骤介绍一项艺术活动的操作方法
80词左右
艺术操作指南
一、本讲义内容导航
模块
学什么
帮你解决什么问题
01 写作主题
明确对象、任务、重点与语气
知道写什么、写给谁
02 写作框架
目的、材料或步骤、注意事项
搭出完整指南结构
03 写作词汇
主题词汇与实用表达
积累可直接使用的表达
04 写作句型
分步说明、提示注意的常用句式
把人和事写得具体、连贯
05 写作模板
标准版与提升版结构
快速组织完整操作指南
06 典例精练
结合真实情境练习方法
把方法落实到任务中
07 写作指导
审题、谋篇与表达方法
解决写什么、怎么写
08 参考范文
学习结构、语言与表达逻辑
借鉴完整成篇表达
09 拓展练习
不同情境下的迁移写作
形成独立写作能力
10 写作评价表
对照标准自查、修改、提升
发现问题并完成改进
二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么?
练习主题
写作任务
重点训练
练习1|水彩画入门
人与社会-美术与摄影
材料列举、步骤说明、鼓励表达
练习2|中国剪纸
人与社会-剪纸
工具介绍、步骤讲解、文化阐释
练习3|国画墨竹
人与社会-国画
工具说明、要领分解、意境引导
练习4|手机摄影构图
人与社会-信息技术
技巧分类、实例说明、练习建议
练习5|毛笔书法入门
人与社会-书法
工具选择、练习步骤、坚持鼓励
三、系列训练亮点与学习路径
教材同步
结构完整
表达可用
练习分层
评价促改
紧扣单元主题与体裁
从审题到修改形成闭环
词汇句型模板可迁移
五类情境训练不重复
对照标准自查修改
学习路径
学习路径:先读单元导入与词汇框架,再学典例四步法,最后按练1至练5依次训练
Unit 3 The Art of Painting 艺术操作指南(单元同步写作讲义)
一、写作主题
单元主题: The Art of Painting;绘画艺术、传统工艺与审美情趣
应用文体裁: 艺术操作指南(说明文)
写作任务: 面向初学者编写某一艺术活动的操作指南,写清所需材料、操作步骤与注意事项,并鼓励读者动手尝试。
二、写作框架
部分
内容要点
开头(1—2句)
点明指南主题与适用对象,说明该艺术活动的魅力。
主体(3—4句)
按顺序列举所需材料,分步说明操作方法,使用祈使句与序数词。
结尾(1—2句)
提示注意事项,鼓励读者坚持练习并享受创作乐趣。
三、写作词汇
核心单词
英文表达
中文释义
写作用途
guide
指南,手册
点明文章体裁
material
材料,原料
列举所需物品
step
步骤
组织操作顺序
stroke
一笔,一笔的笔画
描述绘画运笔
delicate
精致的,细腻的
评价工艺作品
vivid
生动的,逼真的
评价画面效果
elegant
优雅的,雅致的
评价艺术风格
patience
耐心,忍耐
说明学习品质
creation
作品,创作
指称完成的作品
technique
技巧,技艺
介绍操作方法
主题短语
英文表达
中文释义
写作用途
prepare for
准备,预备
引出材料准备
dip... into
把……浸入
描述蘸墨蘸色动作
slowly and gently
缓慢而轻柔地
描述操作要领
keep practicing
坚持练习
表达鼓励
give it a try
试一试
结尾发出邀请
核心词汇写作运用
词汇填空
1. First, ________(准备) all the materials you need, such as paper, brushes and paints.
2. ________(把笔浸入) the ink, and then start to draw the bamboo leaves.
3. Move the brush ________(缓慢而轻柔地),or the lines will look rough.
4. Paper cutting looks easy, but it requires great ________(耐心).
5. Don't give up. ________(坚持练习),and you will make progress.
句子翻译
1. 按照这些简单的步骤,你就能完成自己的第一幅水彩画。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 剪纸是中国最受欢迎的传统艺术之一。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 只要你坚持练习,你的作品就会越来越生动。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
四、写作句型
开头句
1. Would you like to learn _______? Here is a simple guide for beginners.
2. _______ is a traditional Chinese art full of beauty and wisdom.
3. With just a few simple tools, you can create your own _______ at home.
中间句
1. First, prepare everything you need, such as _______ and _______.
2. Next, dip the brush into the ink and begin to draw _______ slowly and gently.
3. Then, cut along the lines carefully, and a delicate pattern will appear.
4. Remember that patience is the key to a satisfying creation.
结尾句
1. Don't worry about mistakes; keep practicing and you will improve day by day.
2. Now it is your turn to give it a try and enjoy the joy of creation.
3. Why not start today and let this elegant art bring color to your life?
五、写作模板
模板1:简洁标准版
_______(标题)
Would you like to learn _______? Here is a simple guide for beginners.
First, prepare everything you need, such as _______. Next, _______ slowly and gently. Then, _______ and be patient with every step.
Keep practicing, and you will create your own works soon.
模板2:分层高分版
_______(标题)
_______ is a traditional art full of beauty and wisdom, and it is easier to learn than you think.
To begin with, prepare all the materials, including _______ and _______. After that, dip the brush into the ink and move it slowly and gently, letting each stroke flow naturally. When the outline is ready, add colors or details step by step. Remember, patience is the key to a delicate creation.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Keep practicing, and one day your works will surprise everyone. Why not give it a try now?
六、典例精练
你校英文报正在开展"轻松学艺术"专栏。请你以 "A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学剪纸的同学介绍剪纸的基本工具与操作步骤,并鼓励大家尝试。
写作要点:
1. 点明剪纸艺术的魅力与指南对象。
2. 介绍所需工具与操作步骤。
3. 给出注意事项并鼓励尝试。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners
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七、拓展练习
练习1:编写水彩画入门操作指南(人与社会-美术与摄影)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学绘画的同学介绍水彩画的材料与基本步骤,并鼓励大家尝试。
写作要点:
1. 点明水彩画的乐趣与指南对象。
2. 介绍所需材料与绘画步骤。
3. 给出练习建议并鼓励尝试。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
练习2:编写中国剪纸制作的操作指南(人与社会-剪纸)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings" 为题写一篇操作指南,向外国交换生介绍中国剪纸的工具与制作步骤,并阐释其中蕴含的文化。
写作要点:
1. 点明剪纸的文化地位与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具与制作步骤。
3. 阐释剪纸的文化寓意并发出邀请。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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练习3:编写国画墨竹的基本画法指南(人与社会-国画)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide" 为题写一篇操作指南,向对国画感兴趣的同学介绍画墨竹的工具与基本要领,并引导大家体会笔墨意境。
写作要点:
1. 点明墨竹的意境之美与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具与基本画法要领。
3. 引导体会意境并鼓励练习。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
练习4:编写手机摄影构图技巧指南(人与社会-信息技术)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Tips for Better Phone Photography" 为题写一篇操作指南,向校摄影爱好者介绍手机摄影的构图技巧,并结合实例说明练习方法。
写作要点:
1. 点明手机摄影的便利与指南对象。
2. 分类介绍构图技巧并结合实例。
3. 给出练习建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Tips for Better Phone Photography
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练习5:编写毛笔书法入门练习指南(人与社会-书法)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学书法的同学介绍工具选择与练习步骤,并鼓励大家坚持练习。
写作要点:
1. 点明书法的魅力与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具选择与练习步骤。
3. 强调坚持并表达鼓励。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy
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八、写作评价表
评价维度
分值
自评
同伴评
评价说明
结构 Structure
3分
____ / 3
____ / 3
标题、开头、主体、结尾安排合理,步骤层次清楚。
内容 Content
6分
____ / 6
____ / 6
材料明确,步骤完整有序,提示与鼓励充分。
语言 Language
4分
____ / 4
____ / 4
能使用本单元核心词汇与祈使句、序数衔接,表达准确连贯。
书写 Handwriting
2分
____ / 2
____ / 2
格式规范,标题居中,拼写、大小写和标点正确。
总分 Total
15分
____ / 15
____ / 15
综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。
自我反思与改进
我最需要改进的一项:□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写
具体改进计划:________________________
评分参考
满分15分;13—15优秀;10—12达标;7—9需修改;6分及以下建议重写。
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Unit 3 The Art of Painting|艺术操作指南写作学习地图
主题
体裁
建议词数
核心任务
艺术操作指南(The Art of Painting)
分步骤介绍一项艺术活动的操作方法
80词左右
艺术操作指南
一、本讲义内容导航
模块
学什么
帮你解决什么问题
01 写作主题
明确对象、任务、重点与语气
知道写什么、写给谁
02 写作框架
目的、材料或步骤、注意事项
搭出完整指南结构
03 写作词汇
主题词汇与实用表达
积累可直接使用的表达
04 写作句型
分步说明、提示注意的常用句式
把人和事写得具体、连贯
05 写作模板
标准版与提升版结构
快速组织完整操作指南
06 典例精练
结合真实情境练习方法
把方法落实到任务中
07 写作指导
审题、谋篇与表达方法
解决写什么、怎么写
08 参考范文
学习结构、语言与表达逻辑
借鉴完整成篇表达
09 拓展练习
不同情境下的迁移写作
形成独立写作能力
10 写作评价表
对照标准自查、修改、提升
发现问题并完成改进
二、本单元5个拓展练习练什么?
练习主题
写作任务
重点训练
练习1|水彩画入门
人与社会-美术与摄影
材料列举、步骤说明、鼓励表达
练习2|中国剪纸
人与社会-剪纸
工具介绍、步骤讲解、文化阐释
练习3|国画墨竹
人与社会-国画
工具说明、要领分解、意境引导
练习4|手机摄影构图
人与社会-信息技术
技巧分类、实例说明、练习建议
练习5|毛笔书法入门
人与社会-书法
工具选择、练习步骤、坚持鼓励
三、系列训练亮点与学习路径
教材同步
结构完整
表达可用
练习分层
评价促改
紧扣单元主题与体裁
从审题到修改形成闭环
词汇句型模板可迁移
五类情境训练不重复
对照标准自查修改
学习路径
学习路径:先读单元导入与词汇框架,再学典例四步法,最后按练1至练5依次训练
Unit 3 The Art of Painting 艺术操作指南(单元同步写作讲义)
一、写作主题
单元主题: The Art of Painting;绘画艺术、传统工艺与审美情趣
应用文体裁: 艺术操作指南(说明文)
写作任务: 面向初学者编写某一艺术活动的操作指南,写清所需材料、操作步骤与注意事项,并鼓励读者动手尝试。
二、写作框架
部分
内容要点
开头(1—2句)
点明指南主题与适用对象,说明该艺术活动的魅力。
主体(3—4句)
按顺序列举所需材料,分步说明操作方法,使用祈使句与序数词。
结尾(1—2句)
提示注意事项,鼓励读者坚持练习并享受创作乐趣。
三、写作词汇
核心单词
英文表达
中文释义
写作用途
guide
指南,手册
点明文章体裁
material
材料,原料
列举所需物品
step
步骤
组织操作顺序
stroke
一笔,一笔的笔画
描述绘画运笔
delicate
精致的,细腻的
评价工艺作品
vivid
生动的,逼真的
评价画面效果
elegant
优雅的,雅致的
评价艺术风格
patience
耐心,忍耐
说明学习品质
creation
作品,创作
指称完成的作品
technique
技巧,技艺
介绍操作方法
主题短语
英文表达
中文释义
写作用途
prepare for
准备,预备
引出材料准备
dip... into
把……浸入
描述蘸墨蘸色动作
slowly and gently
缓慢而轻柔地
描述操作要领
keep practicing
坚持练习
表达鼓励
give it a try
试一试
结尾发出邀请
核心词汇写作运用
词汇填空
1. First, ________(准备) all the materials you need, such as paper, brushes and paints.
2. ________(把笔浸入) the ink, and then start to draw the bamboo leaves.
3. Move the brush ________(缓慢而轻柔地),or the lines will look rough.
4. Paper cutting looks easy, but it requires great ________(耐心).
5. Don't give up. ________(坚持练习),and you will make progress.
【答案】
1. prepare
【解析】prepare for 表示"准备",祈使句用动词原形开头。
2. Dip the brush into(或 Dip it into)
【解析】dip... into 表示"把……浸入",描述蘸墨动作。
3. slowly and gently
【解析】副词短语修饰动词 move,说明操作要领。
4. patience
【解析】great patience 表示"极大的耐心",requires 后接名词。
5. Keep practicing
【解析】keep doing 表示"坚持做某事",用于鼓励表达。
句子翻译
1. 按照这些简单的步骤,你就能完成自己的第一幅水彩画。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 剪纸是中国最受欢迎的传统艺术之一。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 只要你坚持练习,你的作品就会越来越生动。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1. Follow these simple steps, and you will finish your first watercolor painting.
【解析】"祈使句 + and + 陈述句"结构,表示"只要……就……"。
2. Paper cutting is one of the most popular traditional arts in China.
【解析】one of the + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词,表示"最……之一"。
3. As long as you keep practicing, your creations will become more and more vivid.
【解析】as long as 引导条件状语从句;比较级 + and + 比较级表示"越来越……"。
四、写作句型
开头句
1. Would you like to learn _______? Here is a simple guide for beginners.
2. _______ is a traditional Chinese art full of beauty and wisdom.
3. With just a few simple tools, you can create your own _______ at home.
中间句
1. First, prepare everything you need, such as _______ and _______.
2. Next, dip the brush into the ink and begin to draw _______ slowly and gently.
3. Then, cut along the lines carefully, and a delicate pattern will appear.
4. Remember that patience is the key to a satisfying creation.
结尾句
1. Don't worry about mistakes; keep practicing and you will improve day by day.
2. Now it is your turn to give it a try and enjoy the joy of creation.
3. Why not start today and let this elegant art bring color to your life?
五、写作模板
模板1:简洁标准版
_______(标题)
Would you like to learn _______? Here is a simple guide for beginners.
First, prepare everything you need, such as _______. Next, _______ slowly and gently. Then, _______ and be patient with every step.
Keep practicing, and you will create your own works soon.
模板2:分层高分版
_______(标题)
_______ is a traditional art full of beauty and wisdom, and it is easier to learn than you think.
To begin with, prepare all the materials, including _______ and _______. After that, dip the brush into the ink and move it slowly and gently, letting each stroke flow naturally. When the outline is ready, add colors or details step by step. Remember, patience is the key to a delicate creation.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Keep practicing, and one day your works will surprise everyone. Why not give it a try now?
六、典例精练
你校英文报正在开展"轻松学艺术"专栏。请你以 "A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学剪纸的同学介绍剪纸的基本工具与操作步骤,并鼓励大家尝试。
写作要点:
1. 点明剪纸艺术的魅力与指南对象。
2. 介绍所需工具与操作步骤。
3. 给出注意事项并鼓励尝试。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners
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写作指导
第一步 审题谋篇
体裁是操作指南(说明文),题干已给标题,读者是初学剪纸的同学,目的在于讲清工具、步骤并鼓励尝试。介绍步骤以祈使句和一般现在时为主;使用 first、next、then、finally 等序数衔接词使条理清晰;语气亲切、有鼓励性。布局为标题、引出主题、工具与步骤、注意事项、鼓励尝试。
第二步 要点拆解与表达
中文要点
英文表达
句式说明
引出主题
Paper cutting is a traditional art full of beauty.
判断句点明体裁与魅力。
介绍工具
First, prepare a pair of scissors and some red paper.
祈使句 + first 引出工具。
说明步骤
Next, fold the paper and cut along the lines carefully.
并列祈使句交代步骤。
鼓励表达
Keep practicing, and you will create delicate works.
"祈使句 + and"表示鼓励。
第三步 句式升级
原句
升级句
仿写句
说明
Paper cutting is interesting.
Paper cutting is a traditional art full of beauty and wisdom.
Paper cutting is a folk art rich in history and charm.
用形容词短语评价更具体。
You need scissors and paper.
With just a pair of scissors and some red paper, you can start your creation.
With only a brush and some ink, you can begin your painting.
用 with 独立结构使开头更轻快。
Cut the paper carefully.
Cut slowly and gently along the lines, and a delicate pattern will appear.
Move slowly and gently with the brush, and vivid shapes will come out.
副词强调 + and 结果句更生动。
第四步 同义替换
基础表达
升级表达
使用场景
interesting
full of beauty and wisdom
评价艺术魅力
need
with just a pair of scissors and some red paper
引出工具更轻快
cut carefully
cut slowly and gently
描述操作要领
easy
easier to learn than you think
降低心理门槛
try it
give it a try
结尾发出邀请
参考范文
基础版范文
A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners
Paper cutting is an interesting traditional art. It is easy to learn, and you only need simple tools.
First, prepare a pair of scissors and some red paper. Next, fold the paper in half. Then, cut along the lines carefully, and a beautiful pattern will appear. Finally, unfold the paper slowly.
Don't worry about mistakes. Keep practicing, and you will do better.
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A Guide to Paper Cutting for Beginners
Paper cutting is a traditional art full of beauty and wisdom, and it is easier to learn than you think.
With just a pair of scissors and some red paper, you can start your creation. First, fold the paper in half and draw a simple pattern on it. Then, cut slowly and gently along the lines, and a delicate design will appear before your eyes. Finally, unfold the paper carefully and enjoy your own artwork.
Remember, patience makes perfect. Give it a try, and let this charming art bring red joy to your life.
七、拓展练习
练习1:编写水彩画入门操作指南(人与社会-美术与摄影)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学绘画的同学介绍水彩画的材料与基本步骤,并鼓励大家尝试。
写作要点:
1. 点明水彩画的乐趣与指南对象。
2. 介绍所需材料与绘画步骤。
3. 给出练习建议并鼓励尝试。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting
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写作思路
1. 审题:写水彩画入门指南,读者为初学绘画的同学。
2. 要点:点明乐趣;列举材料;说明步骤;鼓励尝试。
3. 结构:引出主题;材料列举;步骤说明;鼓励表达。
4. 表达:使用 watercolor、brush、stroke、vivid 和 keep practicing。
基础版范文
A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting
Watercolor painting is a wonderful hobby. It is not hard to start, and the materials are cheap.
First, buy some watercolor paints, brushes and paper. Next, dip the brush into water and then into the paint. Then, draw light strokes on the paper step by step. Finally, let the painting dry.
Practice often, and your paintings will look more beautiful.
词汇升级
基础表达
升级表达
升级作用
wonderful hobby
delightful way to express yourself
评价活动更具体
not hard to start
easier to start than you imagine
降低心理门槛
dip... into
dip the brush gently into
描述动作更细腻
draw light strokes
let each stroke flow naturally
描述运笔更生动
practice often
keep practicing with patience
表达坚持更有力量
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A Beginner's Guide to Watercolor Painting
Watercolor painting is a delightful way to express yourself, and it is easier to start than you imagine.
Prepare some paints, brushes and soft paper first. Then, dip the brush gently into the water and the color, and let each stroke flow naturally on the paper. Start with simple shapes like flowers and mountains, and add layers of color step by step.
Keep practicing with patience, and soon your paintings will shine with life.
练习2:编写中国剪纸制作的操作指南(人与社会-剪纸)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings" 为题写一篇操作指南,向外国交换生介绍中国剪纸的工具与制作步骤,并阐释其中蕴含的文化。
写作要点:
1. 点明剪纸的文化地位与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具与制作步骤。
3. 阐释剪纸的文化寓意并发出邀请。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings
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写作思路
1. 审题:写剪纸制作指南,读者为外国交换生。
2. 要点:点明文化地位;介绍工具;说明步骤;阐释寓意。
3. 结构:引出主题;工具介绍;步骤讲解;文化阐释。
4. 表达:使用 delicate、pattern、symbolize 和 give it a try。
基础版范文
How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings
Paper cutting is one of China's oldest folk arts. People often put paper cuttings on windows during festivals.
To make one, you need red paper and scissors. First, fold the paper. Next, draw a pattern on it. Then, cut along the lines and unfold it slowly. A lovely design is done!
The patterns often carry good luck, so come and try this lovely art.
词汇升级
基础表达
升级表达
升级作用
oldest folk arts
time-honored folk art handed down for centuries
突出历史厚重感
need red paper and scissors
with nothing more than red paper and scissors
强调工具之简
draw a pattern
sketch your favorite pattern
描述动作更专业
mean good luck
carry wishes for good fortune
阐释寓意更地道
try it
give it a try and feel its charm
发出邀请更有感染力
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How to Make Chinese Paper Cuttings
Paper cutting is a time-honored folk art handed down for centuries, loved by young and old alike.
With nothing more than red paper and scissors, you can begin. First, fold the paper in half. Next, sketch your favorite pattern, perhaps the character xi or a lucky flower. Then, cut along the lines carefully and unfold your work slowly.
These delicate designs carry wishes for good fortune and joy. Give it a try and feel its charm for yourself!
练习3:编写国画墨竹的基本画法指南(人与社会-国画)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide" 为题写一篇操作指南,向对国画感兴趣的同学介绍画墨竹的工具与基本要领,并引导大家体会笔墨意境。
写作要点:
1. 点明墨竹的意境之美与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具与基本画法要领。
3. 引导体会意境并鼓励练习。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide
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写作思路
1. 审题:写墨竹画法指南,读者为对国画感兴趣的同学。
2. 要点:点明意境;说明工具;分解要领;引导体会。
3. 结构:引出主题;工具说明;要领分解;意境引导。
4. 表达:使用 ink、stroke、elegant 和 slowly and gently。
基础版范文
Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide
Ink bamboo is a classic subject in Chinese painting. It looks simple but full of spirit.
You need a brush, ink and rice paper. First, dip the brush in ink. Next, draw the stalk with strong strokes. Then, paint the leaves quickly, each in one stroke. Take your time and watch how the ink spreads.
Practice more, and you will feel the beauty of Chinese painting.
词汇升级
基础表达
升级表达
升级作用
classic subject
timeless subject loved by painters
评价题材更庄重
looks simple but full of spirit
simple in form yet rich in spirit
对比句式更凝练
dip the brush in ink
dip the tip of the brush into fresh ink
描述动作更精确
paint the leaves quickly
finish each leaf with one confident stroke
描述运笔更有力
feel the beauty
sense the quiet elegance within
引导意境更含蓄
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Painting Ink Bamboo: A Simple Guide
Ink bamboo is a timeless subject loved by painters, and it is simple in form yet rich in spirit.
Prepare a brush, ink and rice paper. Dip the tip of the brush into fresh ink, then draw the stalk with steady pressure. When it comes to the leaves, finish each leaf with one confident stroke, moving quickly from dark to light.
As you practice, pause and sense the quiet elegance within every line. That is where the soul of Chinese painting lies.
练习4:编写手机摄影构图技巧指南(人与社会-信息技术)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Tips for Better Phone Photography" 为题写一篇操作指南,向校摄影爱好者介绍手机摄影的构图技巧,并结合实例说明练习方法。
写作要点:
1. 点明手机摄影的便利与指南对象。
2. 分类介绍构图技巧并结合实例。
3. 给出练习建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Tips for Better Phone Photography
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写作思路
1. 审题:写手机摄影构图指南,读者为校摄影爱好者。
2. 要点:点明便利;分类讲技巧;结合实例;建议练习。
3. 结构:引出主题;技巧分类;实例说明;练习建议。
4. 表达:使用 composition、focus、vivid 和角度表达。
基础版范文
Tips for Better Phone Photography
Phone photography is easy and fun. With a few tips, your photos will look much better.
First, use the rule of thirds: place the subject off the center. Second, keep the background simple, so the subject stands out. Third, try shooting from a low angle to make things look tall and strong.
Practice these tips every day, and you will take vivid photos.
词汇升级
基础表达
升级表达
升级作用
easy and fun
both accessible and rewarding
评价活动更立体
look much better
gain a professional touch
评价效果更高级
place the subject off the center
position your subject slightly off center
表述更专业
make things look tall and strong
lend the subject power and depth
描述效果更有画面感
practice every day
make photography part of your daily life
表达坚持更自然
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Tips for Better Phone Photography
Phone photography is both accessible and rewarding—your best camera is the one in your pocket.
Start with the rule of thirds: position your subject slightly off center to create balance. Next, keep the background clean so the subject shines. For buildings and trees, shoot from a low angle, which will lend the subject power and depth.
Make photography part of your daily life, and ordinary scenes will soon gain a professional touch.
练习5:编写毛笔书法入门练习指南(人与社会-书法)
你校英文报正在征稿。请你以 "Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy" 为题写一篇操作指南,向初学书法的同学介绍工具选择与练习步骤,并鼓励大家坚持练习。
写作要点:
1. 点明书法的魅力与指南对象。
2. 介绍工具选择与练习步骤。
3. 强调坚持并表达鼓励。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy
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写作思路
1. 审题:写书法入门指南,读者为初学书法的同学。
2. 要点:点明魅力;介绍工具;说明步骤;鼓励坚持。
3. 结构:引出主题;工具选择;练习步骤;坚持鼓励。
4. 表达:使用 elegant、patience、stroke 和 keep practicing。
基础版范文
Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy
Chinese calligraphy is an elegant art with a long history. Starting it is easier than you think.
First, choose a brush, some ink and rice paper. Next, sit straight and hold the brush upright. Then, copy simple characters slowly, paying attention to each stroke. Fifteen minutes a day is enough at the beginning.
Keep practicing, and your handwriting will become more and more beautiful.
词汇升级
基础表达
升级表达
升级作用
elegant art
elegant art that quiets the mind
评价魅力更深入
easier than you think
well within your reach
表达门槛更低
hold the brush upright
hold the brush firmly and upright
描述要领更完整
pay attention to each stroke
give every stroke your full attention
表达专注更有力
keep practicing
practice with patience and joy
表达坚持更积极
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Getting Started with Chinese Calligraphy
Chinese calligraphy is an elegant art that quiets the mind, and mastering its basics is well within your reach.
Choose a brush, an inkstone and some rice paper to begin. Then, sit upright and hold the brush firmly and upright, letting your wrist move freely. Copy simple characters line by line, and give every stroke your full attention.
Practice with patience and joy, and each character you write will carry both beauty and calm.
八、写作评价表
评价维度
分值
自评
同伴评
评价说明
结构 Structure
3分
____ / 3
____ / 3
标题、开头、主体、结尾安排合理,步骤层次清楚。
内容 Content
6分
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材料明确,步骤完整有序,提示与鼓励充分。
语言 Language
4分
____ / 4
____ / 4
能使用本单元核心词汇与祈使句、序数衔接,表达准确连贯。
书写 Handwriting
2分
____ / 2
____ / 2
格式规范,标题居中,拼写、大小写和标点正确。
总分 Total
15分
____ / 15
____ / 15
综合评价结构、内容、语言和书写整体表现。
自我反思与改进
我最需要改进的一项:□结构 □内容 □语言 □书写
具体改进计划:________________________
评分参考
满分15分;13—15优秀;10—12达标;7—9需修改;6分及以下建议重写。
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