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高三英语作文专题课教学设计 —— 乡村振兴主题应用文
一、基本信息
授课年级:高三
课时:1 课时(45 分钟)
课型:高考英语应用文写作专题课
主题:Rural Revitalization(乡村振兴)
教材依据:依据 2020 版英语课程标准,“人与社会” 主题语境下新增农业发展、乡村振兴子主题,对接高考新情境应用文考查方向,选用演讲稿、邮件两大高频应用文题型。
二、教学分析
(一)学情分析
高三学生已掌握演讲稿、电子邮件等应用文基本格式,但存在如下问题:
1. 面对国家热点话题,主题相关高级词汇、句型储备不足,表达口语化、句式单一;
2. 审题容易遗漏要点,不会结合主题给出合理建议并补充理由;
3. 缺少主题语境下的语料积累,输出时只会简单翻译,缺少逻辑衔接;
4. 对演讲稿、邮件的语篇逻辑、开头结尾范式掌握不够熟练。
(二)教学目标
语言能力: ①识记乡村振兴主题高频词汇、短语;掌握演讲稿、邮件的篇章结构; ②能够完成两类应用文写作:80词左右演讲稿、分享经历的邮件; ③学会使用倒装句、强调句、非谓语等高级句式进行表达。
文化意识:理解乡村振兴国家战略,体会青年学生在乡村建设中的责任,树立青年担当意识。
思维品质:训练审题能力,学会拆解写作任务,梳理 “观点 — 理由” 逻辑链条,提升谋篇布局能力。
学习能力:学会分类积累主题语料,能够迁移同类话题表达到新写作情境。
(三)教学重难点
教学重点:掌握乡村振兴主题高频核心词汇、固定表达与功能性句型;把握演讲稿、电子邮件两类高考应用文的格式与篇章结构;强化审题训练,精准抓取写作任务全部要点,保证内容不遗漏。
教学难点:演讲稿写作中落实“建议 + 理由”的逻辑闭环,做到每条建议配套对应理由,避免只提建议不作阐释;热点主题下地道英语表达输出,灵活运用非谓语、倒装、强调等高级句式,避免句式单调堆砌;实现主题语料跨体裁迁移,把同一套乡村振兴素材灵活运用于演讲稿、邮件等不同写作场景。
(四)教学准备
多媒体 PPT、学案(包含两道写作模拟题、词汇表、句子素材)、课堂练习单
三、教学过程(45 分钟)
Step1 导入与课标解读(5min)
1. 情境导入:展示乡村风光、农民丰收图片,抛出问题:What can we students do for rural revitalization? 引发学生思考,请 23 名学生口头简单回答。
2. 课标解读:向学生点明,新课标 “人与社会” 主题新增农业发展、乡村振兴,是高考应用文热门命题角度,常以演讲稿、邮件、倡议书等形式考查。
3. 展示本节课学习目标:学会审题、积累主题语料、完成两篇范文的研读、完成仿写输出。
设计意图:激活背景知识,让学生明白该主题的高考备考价值,明确课堂任务。
Step2 真题审题训练 —— 演讲稿题型(10min)
呈现高考模拟原题:
你校英语协会将举办主题为 “乡村振兴 (Rural Revitalization), 学生能做什么贡献?” 的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿:(1)你的建议;(2)建议理由。注意:词数 80 左右,适当增加细节。
1. 学生独立审题,完成学案审题填空: ①体裁;②人称;③写作要点还要加上演讲的开头问候、结尾呼吁。
2. 教师梳理审题要点:
· 体裁:演讲稿,要有开场白、正文(建议 + 理由)、结尾呼吁、致谢;
· 核心逻辑:每一条建议,必须配套对应的理由,不能只提建议不解释;
· 词数控制在100词左右,建议设置 23 条简短建议。
3.头脑风暴:组织学生小组讨论,学生可以提出学生可以做的贡献:运用学科知识、新媒体帮助售卖农产品、志愿环保服务等。教师板书对应的英文短语。
设计意图:落实高三审题训练,规避学生写作文漏要点的通病,搭建写作内容框架。
Step3 主题语料积累 + 范文赏析(12min)
1. 词汇激活(5min) 分类呈现学案上的主题词汇,分为:核心名词短语、措施类动词短语、高级句型。
· 推进乡村全面振兴 allaround rural revitalization
· 科学农业技术 scientific farming techniques
· 特色农产品 local specialty products
· 宜居宜业和美乡村 a beautiful and harmonious countryside that is desirable to live and work in
教师点拨记忆方法:按 “问题措施目标” 分类记忆,方便写作快速调取。
范文研读(7min) 展示演讲稿参考范文,学生齐读,教师带领拆解篇章结构:
The structure of the composition
部分
功能
原句范例
开头
问候 + 点明演讲主题
Today, I’d like to talk about what we students can do for allaround rural revitalization.
正文
建议 1 + 理由;建议 2 + 理由;建议 3 + 理由
First and foremost, we can contribute through knowledge. By applying what we learn…Secondly, we can use our digital skills…
结尾
呼吁行动 + 致谢
Let's take action now… Thank you!
重点分析逻辑衔接词:First and foremost, Secondly, Lastly, In conclusion。 同时点拨句式:非谓语作状语的用法 By applying what we learn…, we can…,让学生理解如何写 “理由”,以此突破本节课难点。
设计意图:搭建语言支架,从词汇到篇章,让学生感知高分作文的谋篇与句式。
Step4 迁移训练:邮件应用文(10min)
1. 呈现第二道写作任务(李华给笔友 Chris 写邮件,分享去乡镇拍乡村振兴短视频的经历)
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学们前往附近乡镇,拍摄并制作以乡村振兴为主题的短视频。请你给英国笔友 Chris 写一封邮件进行分享。内容包括:(1) 拍摄内容;(2) 你的收获。
1. 引导学生审题,梳理邮件结构:
· 邮件开头:写信目的;
· 主体第一段:拍摄内容(农田、新农房、返乡创业青年);
· 主体第二段:个人收获(看到乡村变化,感悟青年责任);
· 结尾:附件照片,期待回复。
1. 研读参考邮件,重点赏析高分句型:倒装句 Not only has rural infrastructure been improved, but people’s living standards have also risen greatly.,带领学生朗读,要求做好笔记。
2. 即时小练习:让学生仿写 1 个倒装句或者非谓语句子,写在学案上,随机抽学生展示点评,训练语料迁移运用。
设计意图:同一主题迁移不同体裁,训练学生语料迁移能力,落实高级句式的运用。
Step5 课堂小结 + 课后作业(8min)
1. 课堂小结(3min) 师生共同回顾本节课: ①审题三要素:体裁、人称、全部写作要点; ②乡村振兴写作的两大逻辑:演讲稿 ——建议 + 理由 + 呼吁;邮件 ——叙事经历 + 个人感悟; ③积累的高级句式:非谓语作状语、倒装句、强调句。
2. 分层课后作业(5min)
· 基础任务:背诵本节课主题核心短语,完成学案两道作文的提纲;
· 必做任务:二选一完成全文写作: 任务 A:演讲稿(80 词左右); 任务 B:邮件写作;
· 提升任务:运用本节课学到的语料,写一个 100 词左右短文:谈谈青年在乡村振兴中的角色。
四、板书设计
Rural Revitalization 乡村振兴
1. 审题要点:体裁|人称|要点(建议 + 理由)
2. 高频短语 allaround rural revitalization scientific farming techniques local specialty products
3. 篇章结构 ✅演讲稿:问候→主题→建议 + 理由→呼吁→致谢 ✅邮件:写信目的→经历内容→收获感悟→结尾
4. 高分句型 By doing…, we can… Not only has …, but …
五、教学反思
1. 90%的学生做到审题时抓住 “建议配套理由”,都做到要点完整呈现;
2. 学生对主题词汇的调用情况,在自己的文章中能有效使用相关话题词汇;
3. 高级句式(倒装、非谓语)学生的掌握比较好,有比较强的语言能力表现;
4. 后续训练:可以拓展同主题题型,比如倡议书、新闻报道,继续强化主题语境输出。
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试题回顾
第一节(满分15分)
你校英语协会将举办主题为“乡村振兴(Rural Revitalization),学生能做什么贡献?”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿:
(1)你的建议;
(2)建议理由。
注意:1.词数80字;2.可适当增加细节以使行文流畅。
Analysis:
1. 体裁:演讲稿
2. 人称:第一人称
3. 要点:①your suggestions ②reasons ③advocacy
Agricultural modernization & Rural revitalization
主题范畴 2020 版子主题数量 2025 版新增子主题(子主题数量)
人与自我 9 项 新增 “劳动实践、劳动价值与工匠精神”“生命安全” 。
人与社会 16 项 新增 “农业发展、乡村振兴”“国家安全”“信息安全、网络安全”(共 19 项);“信息安全” 扩展为 “信息安全、网络安全”。
人与自然 - 新增 “国土安全”“生态环境”;补充 “人类生存、社会发展与环境的关系” 表述。
1、主题语境:新增多个子主题,覆盖国家战略与民生需求
备考依据·《课标》课程内容
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Smart expressions
一、 挑战 (Challenges)
返贫
带来新挑战
农产品价格低迷
农民工就业压力
发展差距
二、 措施 (Measures)
1. 防止返贫类措施:
实施常态化与精准化帮扶
提供开发式帮扶
建立自我发展能力
slip back into poverty
pose new challenges
low agricultural product prices
employment pressures on migrant workers
development gaps
implement routine and targeted assistance
provide development-oriented support
build self-reliance
2. 促进增收类措施:
发展壮大惠农富农县域产业
boost county-level industries that benefit farmers
依托资源禀赋发展特色产品
develop unique products based on local resources
推动农村产业与加工、服务、电商融合发展
integrate rural industries with processing, services and e-commerce
稳定农民工就业
加强劳动服务保障
3. 其他通用措施:
提高农业综合生产能力和质量
improve overall agricultural productivity and quality
建设宜居宜业乡村
stabilize migrant worker employment
strengthen labor services
promote livable and industry-friendly rural communities
词汇激活
1. 推进乡村全面振兴
promote all-around rural revitalization
2. 加快进展
promote/ secure faster progress
3 建设农业强国
build up China’s strength in agriculture
4.科学农业技术
scientific farming techniques
5. 提升农业科技创新效能
enhance the efficacy of agricultural sci-tech innovation
6. 农产品产销衔接
promote better coordination between the trade and production of agricultural products
7.促进农民持续增收
promote steady income growth for farmers
8. 建设宜居宜业和美乡村
build a beautiful and harmonious countryside that is desirable to live and work in
9. 因地制宜
10. 深化乡风文明建设
11. 建设平安法治乡村
12.让农民生活更富裕、更美好
enable farmers to enjoy more prosperous and better lives
13.基本实现农村现代生活条件
basically ensure modern living conditions in rural areas
based on local conditions
deepen the campaign to foster civilized rural customs
build safe and law-based villages
开头部分:
今天,我想谈谈我们学生能为全面推进乡村振兴做些什么。
Today, I’d like to talk about what we students can do for all-around rural revitalization.
结尾部分:
让我们携手努力,共同建设一个美丽和谐、宜居宜业的乡村。
Let’s work together to build a beautiful and harmonious countryside that is
desirable to live and work in.
通过共同努力,我们能够借助创新和科技手段将农业转变为一个现代化的支柱产业。With joint efforts, we can help turn agriculture into a modern pillar sector through innovation and technology.
你校英语协会将举办主题为“乡村振兴(Rural Revitalization),学生能做什么贡献?”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿:
(1)你的建议;
(2)建议理由。
One possible version:
Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students! Today, I want to share what we students can do for all-around rural revitalization.
First and foremost, we can contribute through knowledge. By applying what we learn in biology class, we can help farmers with scientific farming techniques, thus enhancing the efficacy of agricultural sci-tech innovation.
Secondly, we can use our digital skills to help farmers sell their products. By promoting local specialty products through social media platforms such as Xiaohongshu, and Douyin, we are expanding rural consumption and helping boost farmers' incomes.
Lastly, we can join environmental efforts. Organizing volunteer teams to clean up villages contributes to holistic ecological conservation and restoration, making the countryside desirable to live and work in.
In conclusion, rural revitalization needs our youth power. Let's take action now to enable farmers to enjoy more prosperous and better lives! Thank you!
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学们前往附近乡镇,拍摄并制作以乡村振兴为主题的短视频。请你给英国笔友Chris写一封邮件进行分享。
内容包括:(1)拍摄内容;(2)你的收获。
Consolidation
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you my experience of shooting a short video on rural revitalization.
We arrived early in the morning and were amazed at the rural revitalization strategy in depth. We filmed farmers sowing seeds in the spring and took many photos and videos of the clean village roads, beautiful farmlands and new houses.We also interviewed a young man who had returned to his hometown to start smart farming. He has applied advanced agricultural technology and the land yields abundant crops.
This experience taught me more than I expected. I realized that rural infrastructure (facility) has not only been improved, but people’s living standards have also risen greatly. I've attached a photo from the shoot. Hope you like it!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Sentence structure
1. 乡村振兴旨在建设美丽、富裕、和谐的新农村。
2. 乡村基础设施不仅得到改善,人民生活水平也大幅提高。
3. 发展特色产业与乡村旅游是振兴乡村经济的有效途径。
4. 城乡融合助力社会均衡发展。
5. 传承乡村文化在乡村振兴进程中意义重大。
Rural revitalization aims to build a beautiful, prosperous and harmonious new countryside.
Not only has rural infrastructure been improved, but people’s living standards have also risen greatly.
Developing characteristic industries and rural tourism is an effective way to boost the rural economy.
The integration of urban and rural areas contributes to the balanced development of society.
Preserving rural culture is of great importance in the process of rural revitalization.
6. It is agricultural technology that greatly promotes the development of modern agriculture and ensures food security.
正是农业科技极大推动了现代农业发展,保障了粮食安全。
7. Only by developing green and ecological agriculture can we achieve sustainable agricultural development.
只有发展绿色生态农业,才能实现农业可持续发展。
8. Modern agriculture is characterized by high efficiency, mechanization and scientific management.
现代农业以高效、机械化、科学管理为特征。
9. Protecting farmland and improving crop yields are essential to national food security.
保护耕地、提高粮食产量对国家粮食安全至关重要。
10. The combination of technology and agriculture has brought new vitality to traditional farming.
科技与农业结合,为传统农耕注入了新活力。
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乡村振兴专题
试题一
你校英语协会将举办主题为“乡村振兴(Rural Revitalization),学生能做什么贡献?”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿:
(1)你的建议;
(2)建议理由。
Step 1 Analysis
1. 体裁:__________________________________
2. 人称:__________________________________
3. 要点: ____________________________________________________________________________________
Step 2 Smart expressions
一、 挑战 (Challenges)
返贫 slip back into poverty 带来新挑战pose new challenges
农产品价格低迷 low agricultural product prices
农民工就业压力employment pressures on migrant workers 发展差距 development gaps
二、 措施 (Measures)
1. 防止返贫类措施:
实施常态化与精准化帮扶implement routine and targeted assistance
提供开发式帮扶provide development-oriented support
建立自我发展能力build self-reliance
2. 促进增收类措施:
发展壮大惠农富农县域产业 boost county-level industries that benefit farmers
依托资源禀赋发展特色产品 develop unique products based on local resources
推动农村产业与加工、服务、电商融合发展 integrate rural industries with processing, services and e-commerce
稳定农民工就业 stabilize migrant worker employment
加强劳动服务保障strengthen labor services
3. 其他通用措施:
提高农业综合生产能力和质量
improve overall agricultural productivity and quality
建设宜居宜业乡村promote livable and industry-friendly rural communities
Step3 词汇激活
1. 推进乡村全面振兴
2. 加快进展
3 建设农业强国
4.科学农业技术
5. 提升农业科技创新效能
6. 农产品产销衔接
7.促进农民持续增收
8. 建设宜居宜业和美乡村
9. 因地制宜
10. 深化乡风文明建设
11. 建设平安法治乡村
12. 让农民生活更富裕、更美好
13. 基本实现农村现代生活条件
14. 今天,我想谈谈我们学生能为全面推进乡村振兴做些什么。
15. 让我们携手努力,共同建设一个美丽和谐、宜居宜业的乡村。
16. 通过共同努力,我们能够借助创新和科技手段将农业转变为一个现代化的支柱产业。
One possible version
Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students! Today, I want to share what we students can do for all-around rural revitalization.
First and foremost, we can contribute through knowledge. By applying what we learn in biology class, we can help farmers with scientific farming techniques, thus enhancing the efficacy of agricultural sci-tech innovation.
Secondly, we can use our digital skills to help farmers sell their products. By promoting local specialty products through social media platforms, we are expanding rural consumption and helping boost farmers' incomes.
Lastly, we can join environmental efforts. Organizing volunteer teams to clean up villages contributes to holistic ecological conservation and restoration, making the countryside desirable to live and work in.
In conclusion, rural revitalization needs our youth power. Let's take action now to enable farmers to enjoy more prosperous and better lives! Thank you!
试题二
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学们前往附近乡镇,拍摄并制作以乡村振兴为主题的短视频。请你给英国笔友Chris写一封邮件进行分享。
内容包括:(1)拍摄内容;(2)你的收获。
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1. 乡村振兴旨在建设美丽、富裕、和谐的新农村。
Rural revitalization aims to build a beautiful, prosperous and harmonious new countryside.
2. 乡村基础设施不仅得到改善,人民生活水平也大幅提高。
Not only has rural infrastructure been improved, but people’s living standards have also risen greatly.
3. 发展特色产业与乡村旅游是振兴乡村经济的有效途径。
Developing characteristic industries and rural tourism is an effective way to boost the rural economy.
4. 城乡融合助力社会均衡发展。
The integration of urban and rural areas contributes to the balanced development of society.
5. 传承乡村文化在乡村振兴进程中意义重大。
Preserving rural culture is of great importance in the process of rural revitalization.
6. It is agricultural technology that greatly promotes the development of modern agriculture and ensures food security.
正是农业科技极大推动了现代农业发展,保障了粮食安全。
7. Only by developing green and ecological agriculture can we achieve sustainable agricultural development.
只有发展绿色生态农业,才能实现农业可持续发展。
8. Modern agriculture is characterized by high efficiency, mechanization and scientific management.
现代农业以高效、机械化、科学管理为特征。
9. Protecting farmland and improving crop yields are essential to national food security.
保护耕地、提高粮食产量对国家粮食安全至关重要。
10. The combination of technology and agriculture has brought new vitality to traditional farming.
科技与农业结合,为传统农耕注入了新活力。
试题二
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you my experience of shooting a short video on rural revitalization.
We arrived early in the morning and were amazed at the rural revitalization strategy in depth. We filmed farmers sowing seeds in the spring and took many photos and videos of the clean village roads, beautiful farmlands and new houses.We also interviewed a young man who had returned to his hometown to start smart farming. He has applied advanced agricultural technology and the land yields abundant crops.
This experience taught me more than I expected. I realized that rural infrastructure (facility) has not only been improved, but people’s living standards have also risen greatly. I've attached a photo from the shoot. Hope you like it!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu
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