读后续写专项复习-生活里的天籁之音-导学案-2027届高三英语二轮专题复习

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写题型的核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、情感线把握及续写框架设计，按“理解-分析-构建-表达”逻辑组织知识点，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向任务，引导学生自主构建续写思维模型，形成从文本解读到创意表达的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性细节问答和个性化续写框架设计，如开篇设置6个文本细节问题帮助学生自主诊断理解短板，情节构造环节提供衔接句与段落框架模板培养思维品质。每个模块配有情感线分析表和参考答案对比，助力学生自主提升语言表达能力，教师可依据学生续写框架完成度精准指导，有效支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 You never know how much talent someone has. Take Kayleigh’s family, for instance. One day, Kayleigh shared a video of her grandma singing karaoke online. Though the venue and context of Grandma’s performance remained unclear, her voice was so appealing that such details became insignificant! Seriously, even seasoned singers often struggle with karaoke, yet this grandma’s performance was a pleasant surprise. She selected Where the Boys Are by Connie Francis, a timeless 1961 classic, and enhanced it with new brilliance through her remarkable voice. “Sounding so amazing in a regular room with a basic microphone is crazy. Her singing is truly professionallevel!” one user commented on Kayleigh’s popular video. Another added, “It’s inspiring to see talented people finding joy in everyday life.” While Grandma may never pursue a professional singing career, the video’s millions of views and thousands of heartfelt comments have established her as a beloved figure online. Though the attention is pleasing, what truly touches her is her family’s constant supportthey have been her most devoted admirers from the start. “Every time I listen to my grandma sing, her beautiful voice makes me feel so happy,” Kayleigh wrote. Grandma’s video has been replayed countless times across the Internet. Her voice, filled with emotion and power, impresses all who hear it. It serves as a reminder that talent can emerge from any corner of life — sometimes the most extraordinary voices are found in the most unexpected places. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右； 2.  请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Soon, invitations began to pour in for Grandma to give public performances. Paragraph 2: When asked about her secret to such wonderful singing, Grandma smiled softly. 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Kayleigh posted a video of her grandma singing karaoke online--- _________________ --- Grandma sang a classic song perfectly with an amazing and professional voice--- _________________ --- netizens praised her highly and the video became extremely popular--- _________________ --- Grandma became a beloved online figure with millions of views--- _________________ --- she valued family support more than online fame--- _________________ --- the story teaches people that talent hides in ordinary life 4. 细节问答 　　What did Kayleigh post online? ：___________________________________ 　　What was special about Grandma’s singing?：_________________________________ 　　What kind of song did Grandma sing in the video?：________________________________________________ 　　How did netizens respond to Grandma’s singing video?：__________________________________________ 　　What does Grandma value more besides public attention?：_____________________________________________ 　　What life lesson does Grandma’s story convey?：_________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　凯莉在网上发布奶奶居家唱卡拉OK的短视频→没有专业场地与设备，奶奶却凭借极具感染力的惊艳歌声完美演绎经典老歌→视频爆火，收获百万播放与无数网友好评，被赞专业水准、治愈人心→奶奶意外走红网络，成为备受喜爱的普通人网红→比起外界的关注与名气，奶奶更珍视家人长久的陪伴与支持→平凡生活藏着不凡天赋，普通人也能绽放独特光彩→___________（续写）→___________（续写） 6．情感线 　　Amazed and joyful→___________→popular and admired→___________→grateful and peaceful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　定语从句；状语从句；宾语从句；非谓语动词；让步状语从句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　生活感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: Soon, invitations began to pour in for Grandma to give public performances. 衔接句1——How did Grandma respond to numerous performance invitations? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: When asked about her secret to such wonderful singing, Grandma smiled softly. 衔接句2——What was Grandma’s simple and sincere explanation? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：很快，各类公开演出的邀请纷纷向奶奶涌来。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：被问及歌唱的秘诀时，奶奶温柔地笑了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Soon, invitations began to pour in for Grandma to give public performances. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When asked about her secret to such wonderful singing, Grandma smiled softly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Grandma（热爱歌唱、天赋出众、心态平和、质朴纯粹、不慕名利的普通老人）；Kayleigh（细心记录、乐于分享、支持奶奶的晚辈）；Netizens（被歌声打动、点赞称赞、喜爱奶奶的网友群体） 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　Kayleigh posted a video of her grandma singing karaoke online--- recording the ordinary yet amazing moment --- Grandma sang a classic song perfectly with an amazing and professional voice--- shocking many experienced singers and listeners --- netizens praised her highly and the video became extremely popular--- gaining millions of views and countless warm comments --- Grandma became a beloved online figure with millions of views--- winning wide public recognition overnight --- she valued family support more than online fame--- remaining simple and sincere despite popularity --- the story teaches people that talent hides in ordinary life 4. 细节问答 　　What did Kayleigh post online? ：She shared an online video recording her grandma singing karaoke at home. 　　What was special about Grandma’s singing?：She had an appealing, emotional and powerful voice, singing professionally without professional equipment. 　　What kind of song did Grandma sing in the video?：She sang Where the Boys Are, a timeless classic released in 1961. 　　How did netizens respond to Grandma’s singing video?：They spoke highly of her professional-level singing and were inspired by her positive attitude towards life. 　　What does Grandma value more besides public attention?：She treasures her family’s long-term company and constant support most. 　　What life lesson does Grandma’s story convey?：Extraordinary talent and beauty can be found in ordinary and unexpected corners of life. 5．情节线 　　凯莉在网上发布奶奶居家唱卡拉OK的短视频→没有专业场地与设备，奶奶却凭借极具感染力的惊艳歌声完美演绎经典老歌→视频爆火，收获百万播放与无数网友好评，被赞专业水准、治愈人心→奶奶意外走红网络，成为备受喜爱的普通人网红→比起外界的关注与名气，奶奶更珍视家人长久的陪伴与支持→平凡生活藏着不凡天赋，普通人也能绽放独特光彩→海量演出邀请接踵而至，奶奶淡然面对名利，只选择性参与少量公益演出→奶奶坦言自己并无天赋秘诀，只因热爱与纯粹之心歌唱，用平常心诠释生活之美 6．情感线 　　Amazed and joyful→surprised and inspired→popular and admired→calm and modest→grateful and peaceful→sincere and positive（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一位平凡老人的居家唱歌视频意外走红，出众的歌声打动无数网友，面对接踵而至的名气与机遇，她始终保持纯粹本心，诠释了平凡生活中的不凡热爱与天赋。 　　英文：An ordinary grandma won widespread popularity for her amazing singing voice online. Faced with sudden fame and numerous invitations, she remained modest and sincere, showing that ordinary life is full of unexpected talent and beauty. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：One day, Kayleigh shared a video of her grandma singing karaoke online. 让步状语从句：Though the venue and context remained unclear, her voice was extremely appealing. 宾语从句：It serves as a reminder that talent can emerge from any corner of life. 结果状语从句：Her voice was so appealing that such details became insignificant. 9. 本文主题 　　生活感悟类：平凡众生亦藏不凡天赋，热爱可抵岁月漫长，纯粹本心与生活热爱最是动人。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: Soon, invitations began to pour in for Grandma to give public performances. 衔接句1——How did Grandma respond to numerous performance invitations? Grandma stayed modest and calm, refusing most commercial shows but accepting a few warm public performances to share joy. 　　Paragraph 2: When asked about her secret to such wonderful singing, Grandma smiled softly. 衔接句2——What was Grandma’s simple and sincere explanation? She stated that she had no special talent, singing just out of pure love for music and happy ordinary life. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：很快，各类公开演出的邀请纷纷向奶奶涌来。 →①爆红之后，节目组、演出活动纷纷发来邀约→②奶奶始终保持谦逊从容，不贪恋名利→③婉拒商业演出，只偶尔登台传递快乐与温暖； 　　第二段：被问及歌唱的秘诀时，奶奶温柔地笑了。 →①坦言自己并无过人天赋与特殊技巧→②歌唱只为热爱生活、取悦自己、治愈生活→③真诚的生活态度与纯粹热爱，才是最动人的力量。 四.段落续写（满分范文） 　　Soon, invitations began to pour in for Grandma to give public performances. Numerous TV shows and local activities hoped to invite her to sing on stage. However, Grandma remained modest and calm in the face of sudden fame. She politely refused most commercial performances, unwilling to let popularity disturb her peaceful ordinary life. Occasionally, she accepted some public welfare performances, hoping to bring joy and positive energy to more people with her voice. 　　When asked about her secret to such wonderful singing, Grandma smiled softly. She said she had never received professional training or mastered special skills. She sang simply because she loved music and enjoyed the peaceful happiness of daily life. It was her pure love for life and sincere emotion in every note that touched countless listeners. For her, singing was never a way to gain fame, but the simplest joy in ordinary days. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $