Unit 1 Teenage Life应用文写作 建议信 练习 2026-2027学年高中英语人教版必修第一册

**基本信息** 分层递进式设计，通过句型翻译-模板填空-真题演练三阶路径，夯实建议信写作基础并提升语用能力，培养语言运用与逻辑思维。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |基础层|首段/中间段/尾段核心句型|汉译英练习设基础/高分双版本，如“很高兴收到你的邮件”提供基础与高分表达对比| |进阶层|建议信结构框架|通用模板填空+示例引导，如“面临的困难”“建议原因”等关键要素填空| |应用层|真实情境语篇写作|改编真题（外教课堂建议）配基础/培优范文，实现从单句到语篇的综合输出|

高中应用文写作句型+模板 — 建议信 写作框架 首段：写作背景 + 写作目的 中间段：建议的具体内容 尾段：期望建议可行 + 期盼回复 一、句型汉译英练习（学生翻译写在第一行，订正写在第二行） 首段（背景+目的） 1. 很高兴收到你的邮件，向我请教提升书法的方法，现给出几条可行建议。 ____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. 得知你在适应高中生活方面遇到麻烦，我写信来给你一些实用建议。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3. 了解到你对中国传统绘画很感兴趣，我推荐你参加下周张老师的讲座，她是我校最优秀的美术教师之一。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 中间段（具体建议） 1. 首先，坚持阅读是很好的选择，它可以扩充你的词汇，开阔你的思路。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. 更为重要的是，参加社会实践十分有益，它能帮助你明白年轻人的实际需求。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3. 此外，了解一些当地风俗是明智之举，可以保证你和本地居民交流更加顺畅。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4. 同时，社区应当完善制度，提高居民的环境保护意识。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5. 最后，微小行动意义重大。只有所有人一起行动、节约每一滴水，我们才能缓解水资源短缺。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 尾段（期望+盼复） 1. 希望你觉得我的建议有用，并祝你在绘画上取得明显进步，期待你的回信。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. 但愿我的建议能够给你很大启发，期待你的早日回复。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3. 希望以上建议对你有用。倘若你有任何困惑，随时可以向我求助。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 二、建议信通用模板（填空练习） Dear ________, I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in ________________________(面临的困难). I’m writing to give you some practical suggestions. Initially, you’d better ________________________(建议一). Besides, it would be a great idea to ________________________(建议二), because ________________________(建议的原因). In addition, if I were you, I would ________________________(建议三). I firmly believe that ________________________(相信能够克服困难). I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Yours, XX 三、真题变式演练（改编原题） 假定你是李华，是班级英语课代表，不少同学反馈跟不上外教Smith的全英文课堂，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明存在的问题； 2. 提出你的建议。 注意： 3. 词数80左右； 4. 格式规范。 Dear Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 高中应用文写作句型+模板 — 建议信（教师参考版） 写作框架 首段：写作背景 + 写作目的 中间段：建议的具体内容 尾段：期望建议可行 + 期盼回复 一、句型汉译英练习（基础译文 + 高分升级句） 首段（背景+目的） 1. 中文：很高兴收到你的邮件，向我请教提升书法的方法，现给出几条可行建议。 基础：Glad to receive your email asking for advice on improving handwriting. Here are some practical suggestions. 高分：Delighted to get your email where you ask how to improve your handwriting. I’d like to offer several workable tips. 2. 中文：得知你在适应高中生活方面遇到麻烦，我写信来给你一些实用建议。 基础：Knowing you have trouble adapting to high‑school life, I’m writing to offer you some practical advice. 高分：Hearing that you are struggling to get used to senior high life, I’m writing to share some useful suggestions with you. 3. 中文：了解到你对中国传统绘画很感兴趣，我推荐你参加下周张老师的讲座，她是我校最优秀的美术教师之一。 基础：Knowing you are interested in traditional Chinese painting, I suggest you attend Ms Zhang’s lecture next week, who is one of the best art teachers in our school. 高分：Since you take great interest in traditional Chinese painting, it is recommended that you go to Ms Zhang’s lecture next week, one of the most outstanding art teachers in our school. 中间段（具体建议） 1. 中文：首先，坚持阅读是很好的选择，它可以扩充你的词汇，开阔你的思路。 基础：First of all, keeping reading is a good choice, which can enlarge your vocabulary and broaden your mind. 高分：To begin with, consistent reading is highly recommended, for it can expand your vocabulary and open up your mind. 2. 中文：更为重要的是，参加社会实践十分有益，它能帮助你明白年轻人的实际需求。 基础：More importantly, taking part in social practice is quite helpful, which can help you understand young people’s real needs. 高分：What matters more is that social practice is of great benefit, enabling you to figure out the actual demands of teenagers. 3. 中文：此外，了解一些当地风俗是明智之举，可以保证你和本地居民交流更加顺畅。 基础：Besides, learning some local customs is a wise choice, which can make your communication with local people smoother. 高分：In addition, getting familiar with local customs is sensible, which ensures you communicate well with local residents. 4. 中文：同时，社区应当完善制度，提高居民的环境保护意识。 基础：Meanwhile, communities should improve rules and raise residents’ awareness of environmental protection. 高分：At the same time, communities ought to perfect relevant systems and increase residents’ awareness of environmental protection. 5. 中文：最后，微小行动意义重大。只有所有人一起行动、节约每一滴水，我们才能缓解水资源短缺。 基础：Lastly, small actions matter a lot. Only if we all act together and save every drop of water can we ease water shortage. 高分：Last but not least, tiny deeds count greatly. Only with joint efforts to save every drop of water can we relieve the problem of water shortage. 尾段（期望+盼复） 1. 中文：希望你觉得我的建议有用，并祝你在绘画上取得明显进步，期待你的回信。 基础：I hope you will find my suggestions useful and wish you obvious progress in painting. Looking forward to your reply. 高分：I hope my tips will be of value to you and wish you remarkable progress in painting. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2. 中文：但愿我的建议能够给你很大启发，期待你的早日回复。 基础：I hope my suggestions can inspire you greatly. Looking forward to your early reply. 高分：Hopefully my advice can bring you much inspiration. Your early reply will be highly appreciated. 3. 中文：希望以上建议对你有用。倘若你有任何困惑，随时可以向我求助。 基础：I hope the above suggestions work for you. If you have any puzzles, turn to me anytime. 高分：I hope the suggestions above are helpful. Don’t hesitate to reach out to me should you meet any confusion. 二、建议信通用模板（填空参考示例） Dear ________, I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along with new classmates. I’m writing to give you some practical suggestions. Initially, you’d better take an active part in group activities. Besides, it would be a great idea to talk with your deskmate more often, because it helps you build a closer relationship with others. In addition, if I were you, I would be ready to offer help to others. I firmly believe that you will fit in with the class soon. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Yours, XX 三、真题变式演练参考范文（80词） 基础版 Dear Smith, I’m writing on behalf of my classmates to tell you that some of us can’t follow your all‑English classes well. We suggest you slow down your speaking speed a little. Besides, you can repeat key points now and then. What’s more, some simple background information will help us understand your lessons better. We hope you can consider our advice. Yours, Li Hua 培优高分版 Dear Smith, Some classmates find it hard to keep up with your all‑English lessons, so I’m writing to offer some suggestions. We would appreciate it if you could speak a bit slower in class. It is also better for you to repeat key points occasionally. Besides, brief background information will greatly improve our understanding. We’d be grateful if you could take our ideas into account. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $